四川高考英语写作分类训练：推荐信10篇（含解析）
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推荐信
1．假设你是李华，请你给喜欢中国诗歌的朋友Peter写信推荐一档节目。
1. 节目名称：《经典咏流传》（Everlasting Classics）；
2. 推荐理由：诗歌和歌曲相结合、专家讲解等；
注意：1. 词数100词左右，信的格式已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假如你是李华，你和父母暑假去台湾旅游，报名参加了当地旅行社Green River Travel Agency的一日团。请你写下对当日旅游服务的意见。要点如下：
(1)对导游John的服务表示感谢；
(2)一日游的景点安排合理，玩得开心；
(3)会将旅行社推荐给自己的好友；
注意：1. 词数不少于100；
2. 开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
To whom it may concern,
I have been thoroughly impressed with the service I have received. __________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Peter七月份要带父母来成都市旅游，发邮件向你咨询相关信息。请按下列要点给他回信。
1. 介绍成都及景点如都江堰；
2. 体验成都人文文化；
3. 推荐交通工具。
注意：1. 词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to learn that
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4．假如你是王林，你的朋友李华想要加入健身俱乐部。请根据下面一则广告提供的信息给他写一封电子邮件，向他推荐。信的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
注意：行文连贯，涵盖要点，适当发挥。词数100左右。
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5．假定你是李华，你的英国网友Leslie不久要来中国留学，他想了解一些日常生活中和他人保持联系的方法。请你写信向他推荐微信（WeChat）软件，并期待他早日到来。
内容包括：
1.使用广泛；
2.方便快捷；
3.节省费用。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出不计入字数。
Dear Leslie,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假如你是一名高三学生李华，你在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子。澳大利亚中学生Julia想来中国旅游，你向
她推荐了四川，请根据以下提示用英语写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：1.自我介绍；
2.推荐理由（至少两条）；
注意：
1.文中不能出现真实的学校名称及个人姓名；
2. 可以适当增加细节，词数100左右；（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
3.参考词汇：英文论坛the English forum 帖子post
Hi there, Julia.____________________________________________________________________________
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Best Wishes!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
7．你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣，并请你向他推荐一部优秀的中国文学作品。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 书的题目和作者；
2. 书的主要内容；
3. 你的推荐理由。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假如你是四川省双流中学高三（4）班的班长李华，你班上的同学张明将要留学去澳大利亚的学校学习。请你根据以下要点提示用英文写一封推荐信。
要点提示：
1.你的身份；
2.你对张明的印象，如在校期间的学习情况，表现等；
3.说明张明适合去该校留学学习。
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.词数不少于100。
3.信得开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9．你是高一年级的张洋，你的外教Anne打算暑假期间在四川旅游，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐两个旅游目的地，并分别阐述理由；
2.感谢他一年来的教学；
3.期待下期的学习。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Anne,
Glad to know that you are planning to trip around Sichuan this summer vacation. ___________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Yang
10．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Paul对《三字经》The Three Character Primer 很感兴趣，希望得到你的帮助，给他邮寄一本。请你给他回复一封邮件，要点如下：
1. 书已买并寄出；
2. 推荐学习《三字经》的方法；
3. 愿意解答疑难。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Paul,
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Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
1．Dear Peter,
Learning that you are interested in Chinese poetry and want to know more about it, I am writing to recommend a program called Everlasting Classics to you, which will be of great help.
Everlasting Classics has gained in popularity in China. In the program, the classic poems have been adapted for pleasant songs, making it easier for the audience to feel the rhythm of the Chinese poetry. Also, professors are invited to give explanations about the poems and their backgrounds. Thus, the audience will surely understand these poems better.
You can watch the program either on TV or on the Internet. I hope you will find it useful. Best wishes to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向喜欢中国诗歌的朋友写信推荐一档节目。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
流行：popularity→prevalence
改编：adapt→restructure
想必：surely→definitely
推荐：recommend→propose
2. 句式拓展
简单句变定语从句
原句：Everlasting Classics has gained in popularity in China. In the program, the classic poems have been adapted for pleasant songs, making it easier for the audience to feel the rhythm of the Chinese poetry.
拓展句：Everlasting Classics has gained in popularity in China, in which the classic poems have been adapted for pleasant songs, making it easier for the audience to feel the rhythm of the Chinese poetry.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to recommend a program called Everlasting Classics to you, which will be of great help.(使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In the program, the classic poems have been adapted for pleasant songs, making it easier for the audience to feel the rhythm of the Chinese poetry. (使用了现在分词作伴随状语)
2．To whom it may concern,
I have been thoroughly impressed with the service I have received. Firstly, I would like to express my sincere thanks to John, the tour guide from Green River Travel Agency, for his warm service along the journey. John is good at explaining things on the timetable, as well as some related information about the places that we went to.
Secondly, the schedule for our one-day journey was thoughtfully arranged so that both my parents and I had a really wonderful time. We arrived at the destinations and saw the sights at a reasonable amount of time with great comfort. Besides, some annoying parts like forced-shopping was avoided, which has saved much of our time.
Last but not least, I would like to recommend Green River Travel Agency to my friends. It is with your great efforts that my parents and I can enjoy such a great day! Thanks again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
第一步：根据提示可知，本文是写旅游服务意见：李华和父母暑假去台湾旅游，报名参加了当地旅行社Green River Travel Agency的一日团。要求写下对当日旅游服务的意见。要点如下：对导游John的服务表示感谢；一日游的景点安排合理，玩得开心；会将旅行社推荐给自己的好友。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：sincere thanks, thoughtfully arranged, one-day journey, recommend。
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【亮点说明】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定语从句that we went to，定语从句which has saved much of our time。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Peter,
I’m glad to learn that you are planning to visit Chengdu with your parents in July. I’m writing to offer some information to you.
Chengdu, a capital city of Sichuan, is loaded with so much history and splendid cultures. In Chengdu there are many tourist attractions, such as WuHou Temple and DuFu Cottage. You’d better go to The Dujiangyan Dam, dating from more than 2000 years ago. It is used for irrigating farming land and benefits all the people around Chengdu.
While travelling, you can experience various Chengdu cultures, learning about the relaxing life of people here and the history of ancient Chengdu.
Besides, if you want to explore Chengdu, sharing bikes are worth using, which is convenient for you to get around in Chengdu. If you want to visit The Dujiangyan Dam, the high-speed railway network is the top choice, which will make your journey comfortable and pleasant.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Peter七月份要带父母来成都市旅游，发邮件向你咨询相关信息。请按下列要点给他回信。1. 介绍成都及景点如都江堰；2. 体验成都人文文化；3. 推荐交通工具。其次选用正确的人称和时态，用一般现在时、第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了定语从句Besides, if you want to explore Chengdu, sharing bikes are worth using, which is convenient for you to get around in Chengdu.和定语从句If you want to visit The Dujiangyan Dam, the high-speed railway network is the top choice, which will make your journey comfortable and pleasant.
4．Dear Li Hua
You’ve been looking for a gym to build your body, haven’t you I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just read an ad about such a gym and recommend it to you.
The gym is called BETTER BODY GYM. It has two branches in the city—one downtown and the other by the freeway. It opens from 10 a.m. to midnight, 365 days a year! It gives you 35 classes every week, including tennis and swimming. In this way, it will help you build the body you’ve always wanted.
If you join BETTER BODY GYM this week, you will get a special offer, which includes a free T-shirt, two personal training hours and one month free membership.
If you are interested, please call 5555 6789 for more information. To get fit and get healthy, I think this gym is a good choice for you.
Best wishes
Wang Lin
【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件，内容齐全，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。You’ve been looking for a gym to build your body, haven’t you 句子开头使用反意疑问句；I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just read an ad about such a gym and recommend it to you.句中使用宾语从句；it will help you build the body you’ve always wanted.句中使用定语从句；If you join BETTER BODY GYM this week, you will get a special offer, which includes a free T-shirt, two personal training hours and one month free membership.句中if条件句和which非限制性定语从句完美结合；To get fit and get healthy, I think this gym is a good choice for you.动词不定式做目的状语。
5．Dear Leslie,
I’m more than delighted to hear that you will come to China for your further study and I hope you can enjoy your stay here.
There are a variety of ways to communicate with others in our daily life, of which WeChat is the most popular one. Nowadays, a good number of Chinese, especially young people, are using WeChat to keep in touch with each other. The reason why I like it best is that it is very fast and convenient to send word files, messages, pictures, or even video programmes. More importantly, it is free to communicate with others on WeChat, which will surely save you a lot of money.
Hopeful my advice will be of some help to you and I’m looking forward to your early arrival.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，你的英国网友Leslie不久要来中国留学，他想了解一些日常生活中和他人保持联系的方法。请考生写信向他推荐微信（WeChat）软件，并期待他早日到来。
【详解】词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→ happy→ glad
各种各样的：a variety of→ all kinds of
日常的：daily→ everyday
和…保持联系：keep in touch with = stay in touch with
句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The reason why I like it best is that it is very fast and convenient to send word files, messages, pictures, or even video programmes.
拓展句：I like it best because it is very fast and convenient to send word files, messages, pictures, or even video programmes.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m more than delighted to hear that you will come to China for your further study and I hope you can enjoy your stay here. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] More importantly, it is free to communicate with others on WeChat, which will surely save you a lot of money. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．Hi there, Julia. I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum. I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Sichuan Province.
I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 boy student, good at Chinese geography and history. When it comes to traveling in China, Sichuan is sure to be a popular tourist destination. It is not only the birthplace of Ba-Shu culture, but also has many places of interest, where you can enjoy yourself to the full degree. Besides, people in Sichuan are friendly and willing to help others in need, which can really help make your visit comfortable and pleasant. Particularly, you can take a chance to experience different cultures and enjoy a variety of typical Sichuan foods. By the way, I’d like to serve as your guide if you come.
I do hope that you will have a good time in China.
Best Wishes!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【详解】高三学生李华在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子，澳大利亚中学生Julia想来中国旅游，你向她推荐了四川，要求根据提示写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.推荐理由（至少两条）；因为文章主要是介绍推荐理由，描写四川吸引人的地方及特点，用一般现在时和第三人称来写。
写作时要注意要点全面，表达准确，观点明确，条理清晰。还要注意高级词汇和句型的运用来提高文章档次，如定语从句that you put on the English Forum. where you can enjoy yourself to the full degree.和which can really help make your visit comfortable and pleasant.宾语从句that you pay a visit to Sichuan Province.和that you will have a good time in China.词语not only…but also…, places of interest, be willing to, a variety of等。
7．Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese literature, I am more than excited because I am fairly a literature lover myself.
I recommend a well-known Chinese book titled The Ordinary World to you. The book was written by a famous Chinese writer, Lu Yao. It centers on the life and destinies of three families of Sun, Tian and Jin in a village. It pictures the tough process of building up a better and wealthier life during the very beginning of reform and openness in China. Reading the book, you will be greatly moved by the courage and spirit of the main characters. That’s why I make this recommendation.
I am looking forward to your view of this book.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣，并请你向他推荐一部优秀的中国文学作品。请考生按要求给他回信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
感兴趣：be interested in→ take interest in
感动的：moved→ touched
推荐：recommend→ nominate
期盼：look forward to→ expect
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I recommend a well-known Chinese book titled The Ordinary World to you.
拓展句：I recommend a well-known Chinese book to you, whose title is The Ordinary World.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are interested in Chinese literature, I am more than excited because I am fairly a literature lover myself.（运用了that连接的宾语从句和现在分词做状语）
【高分句型2】That’s why I make this recommendation.（运用了why连接的表语从句）
8．Dear Sir / Madam,
I am honored to recommend Zhang Ming to you, as he wants to apply to your school.
As the monitor in our class, I am quite familiar with Zhang Ming. We have been classmates for more than two years. He has given me a good impression. Firstly, not only is he intelligent, but also he is hard-working. He does well in most subjects and is one of the best students in our school. Our teachers all like him and encourage us to follow his example. Secondly, having talents in other things, such as singing and debating, he has helped to organize several class activities. Besides, he is also caring and lively. He is always ready to help classmates, and he spreads happiness wherever he goes.
I know he will meet your school’s requirements. If he is admitted into your school, I am sure he will perform even better in your school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】本文属于提纲类作文，要求写一封推荐信。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用用一般现在时来写。要点：1.你的身份；2.你对张明的印象，如在校期间的学习情况，表现等；3.说明张明适合去该校留学学习。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: be familiar with对……熟悉，do well in在……某方面干得好。还使用了倒装，Firstly, not only is he intelligent, but also he is hard-working.和宾语从句I know he will meet your school’s requirements.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。
9．Dear Anne,
Glad to know that you are planning a trip around Sichuan this summer vacation. It’s my pleasure to offer you my suggestions. Among the numerous scenic spots, the first choice is Qingcheng Mountain, which is always on the top of the must-go destinations. It is the gorgeous natural scenery that attracts visitors from home and abroad. Another recommendation is Jinsha Relics Museum in Chengdu, where you can pick up a great deal of knowledge about our history. Good luck to your trip.
By the way, many thanks for teaching us during the past months. Through your international understanding courses, we not only develop our English abilities, but also have a better view of our world. Look forward to attending your classes next term and enjoying greater progress. (112 words)
Beast wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Yang
【详解】试题分析：本次作文要求给外教Anne写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.推荐两个旅游目的地，并分别阐述理由；2.感谢他一年来的教学；3.期待下期的学习。注意写作时信中内容要点要全面，层次要清晰，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。
写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了定语从句which is always on the top of the must-go destinations.和where you can pick up a great deal of knowledge about our history.等。
10．Dear Paul,
How are you recently I am happy to know you are interested in the Three Character Primer and want a copy of it. I am writing to tell you something about it.
I have bought a copy and have posted it to you. You will receive it in a few days. Here I’d like to recommend some good ways to learn it well. You need to read it aloud in the morning and try to recite it. It can help you better understand it if you can learn about the stories behind the phrases. If you have any problems learning it, don’t hesitate to ask me for help.
Best wishes!
Sincerely
Lihua
【详解】本题要求写一篇书信类作文，书信的开头以及结尾已经给出，所以格式方面不会出错。这类文章要注意以下几点：
第一、信息点的覆盖和内容的组织；题目当中涉及到的相关的点一个都不能少，必须要含盖所有的信息。A. 书已买并寄出；B. 推荐学习《三字经》的方法；C. 愿意解答疑难。第二、语言的准确性；不要有以下的五种错误：语法错误，用词错误，句子结构混乱，标点符号的错误和拼写错误。第三、格式和语域的恰当；语域：根据不同的写作对象，有三种不同的语域，分别是正式语域，一般语域和非正式语域。语域的选择取决于写信的对象不同。本篇作文是笔友间的书信来往，故使用非正式语域。
【范文亮点】
重点短语与句型：
How are you recently 最近怎么样？
Would like to+动词原形，想要做某事；
ask sb. for help，向某人寻求帮助；
It can …if you，如果你…，将会；
Best wishes （to you）! 常见祝福语。
1．假设你是李华，请你给喜欢中国诗歌的朋友Peter写信推荐一档节目。
1. 节目名称：《经典咏流传》（Everlasting Classics）；
2. 推荐理由：诗歌和歌曲相结合、专家讲解等；
注意：1. 词数100词左右，信的格式已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假如你是李华，你和父母暑假去台湾旅游，报名参加了当地旅行社Green River Travel Agency的一日团。请你写下对当日旅游服务的意见。要点如下：
(1)对导游John的服务表示感谢；
(2)一日游的景点安排合理，玩得开心；
(3)会将旅行社推荐给自己的好友；
注意：1. 词数不少于100；
2. 开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
To whom it may concern,
I have been thoroughly impressed with the service I have received. __________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Peter七月份要带父母来成都市旅游，发邮件向你咨询相关信息。请按下列要点给他回信。
1. 介绍成都及景点如都江堰；
2. 体验成都人文文化；
3. 推荐交通工具。
注意：1. 词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to learn that
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4．假如你是王林，你的朋友李华想要加入健身俱乐部。请根据下面一则广告提供的信息给他写一封电子邮件，向他推荐。信的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
注意：行文连贯，涵盖要点，适当发挥。词数100左右。
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5．假定你是李华，你的英国网友Leslie不久要来中国留学，他想了解一些日常生活中和他人保持联系的方法。请你写信向他推荐微信（WeChat）软件，并期待他早日到来。
内容包括：
1.使用广泛；
2.方便快捷；
3.节省费用。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出不计入字数。
Dear Leslie,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假如你是一名高三学生李华，你在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子。澳大利亚中学生Julia想来中国旅游，你向
她推荐了四川，请根据以下提示用英语写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：1.自我介绍；
2.推荐理由（至少两条）；
注意：
1.文中不能出现真实的学校名称及个人姓名；
2. 可以适当增加细节，词数100左右；（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
3.参考词汇：英文论坛the English forum 帖子post
Hi there, Julia.____________________________________________________________________________
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Best Wishes!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
7．你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣，并请你向他推荐一部优秀的中国文学作品。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 书的题目和作者；
2. 书的主要内容；
3. 你的推荐理由。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假如你是四川省双流中学高三（4）班的班长李华，你班上的同学张明将要留学去澳大利亚的学校学习。请你根据以下要点提示用英文写一封推荐信。
要点提示：
1.你的身份；
2.你对张明的印象，如在校期间的学习情况，表现等；
3.说明张明适合去该校留学学习。
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.词数不少于100。
3.信得开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9．你是高一年级的张洋，你的外教Anne打算暑假期间在四川旅游，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐两个旅游目的地，并分别阐述理由；
2.感谢他一年来的教学；
3.期待下期的学习。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Anne,
Glad to know that you are planning to trip around Sichuan this summer vacation. ___________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Yang
10．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Paul对《三字经》The Three Character Primer 很感兴趣，希望得到你的帮助，给他邮寄一本。请你给他回复一封邮件，要点如下：
1. 书已买并寄出；
2. 推荐学习《三字经》的方法；
3. 愿意解答疑难。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Paul,
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Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
1．Dear Peter,
Learning that you are interested in Chinese poetry and want to know more about it, I am writing to recommend a program called Everlasting Classics to you, which will be of great help.
Everlasting Classics has gained in popularity in China. In the program, the classic poems have been adapted for pleasant songs, making it easier for the audience to feel the rhythm of the Chinese poetry. Also, professors are invited to give explanations about the poems and their backgrounds. Thus, the audience will surely understand these poems better.
You can watch the program either on TV or on the Internet. I hope you will find it useful. Best wishes to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向喜欢中国诗歌的朋友写信推荐一档节目。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
流行：popularity→prevalence
改编：adapt→restructure
想必：surely→definitely
推荐：recommend→propose
2. 句式拓展
简单句变定语从句
原句：Everlasting Classics has gained in popularity in China. In the program, the classic poems have been adapted for pleasant songs, making it easier for the audience to feel the rhythm of the Chinese poetry.
拓展句：Everlasting Classics has gained in popularity in China, in which the classic poems have been adapted for pleasant songs, making it easier for the audience to feel the rhythm of the Chinese poetry.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to recommend a program called Everlasting Classics to you, which will be of great help.(使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In the program, the classic poems have been adapted for pleasant songs, making it easier for the audience to feel the rhythm of the Chinese poetry. (使用了现在分词作伴随状语)
2．To whom it may concern,
I have been thoroughly impressed with the service I have received. Firstly, I would like to express my sincere thanks to John, the tour guide from Green River Travel Agency, for his warm service along the journey. John is good at explaining things on the timetable, as well as some related information about the places that we went to.
Secondly, the schedule for our one-day journey was thoughtfully arranged so that both my parents and I had a really wonderful time. We arrived at the destinations and saw the sights at a reasonable amount of time with great comfort. Besides, some annoying parts like forced-shopping was avoided, which has saved much of our time.
Last but not least, I would like to recommend Green River Travel Agency to my friends. It is with your great efforts that my parents and I can enjoy such a great day! Thanks again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
第一步：根据提示可知，本文是写旅游服务意见：李华和父母暑假去台湾旅游，报名参加了当地旅行社Green River Travel Agency的一日团。要求写下对当日旅游服务的意见。要点如下：对导游John的服务表示感谢；一日游的景点安排合理，玩得开心；会将旅行社推荐给自己的好友。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：sincere thanks, thoughtfully arranged, one-day journey, recommend。
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【亮点说明】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定语从句that we went to，定语从句which has saved much of our time。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Peter,
I’m glad to learn that you are planning to visit Chengdu with your parents in July. I’m writing to offer some information to you.
Chengdu, a capital city of Sichuan, is loaded with so much history and splendid cultures. In Chengdu there are many tourist attractions, such as WuHou Temple and DuFu Cottage. You’d better go to The Dujiangyan Dam, dating from more than 2000 years ago. It is used for irrigating farming land and benefits all the people around Chengdu.
While travelling, you can experience various Chengdu cultures, learning about the relaxing life of people here and the history of ancient Chengdu.
Besides, if you want to explore Chengdu, sharing bikes are worth using, which is convenient for you to get around in Chengdu. If you want to visit The Dujiangyan Dam, the high-speed railway network is the top choice, which will make your journey comfortable and pleasant.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Peter七月份要带父母来成都市旅游，发邮件向你咨询相关信息。请按下列要点给他回信。1. 介绍成都及景点如都江堰；2. 体验成都人文文化；3. 推荐交通工具。其次选用正确的人称和时态，用一般现在时、第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了定语从句Besides, if you want to explore Chengdu, sharing bikes are worth using, which is convenient for you to get around in Chengdu.和定语从句If you want to visit The Dujiangyan Dam, the high-speed railway network is the top choice, which will make your journey comfortable and pleasant.
4．Dear Li Hua
You’ve been looking for a gym to build your body, haven’t you I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just read an ad about such a gym and recommend it to you.
The gym is called BETTER BODY GYM. It has two branches in the city—one downtown and the other by the freeway. It opens from 10 a.m. to midnight, 365 days a year! It gives you 35 classes every week, including tennis and swimming. In this way, it will help you build the body you’ve always wanted.
If you join BETTER BODY GYM this week, you will get a special offer, which includes a free T-shirt, two personal training hours and one month free membership.
If you are interested, please call 5555 6789 for more information. To get fit and get healthy, I think this gym is a good choice for you.
Best wishes
Wang Lin
【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件，内容齐全，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。You’ve been looking for a gym to build your body, haven’t you 句子开头使用反意疑问句；I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just read an ad about such a gym and recommend it to you.句中使用宾语从句；it will help you build the body you’ve always wanted.句中使用定语从句；If you join BETTER BODY GYM this week, you will get a special offer, which includes a free T-shirt, two personal training hours and one month free membership.句中if条件句和which非限制性定语从句完美结合；To get fit and get healthy, I think this gym is a good choice for you.动词不定式做目的状语。
5．Dear Leslie,
I’m more than delighted to hear that you will come to China for your further study and I hope you can enjoy your stay here.
There are a variety of ways to communicate with others in our daily life, of which WeChat is the most popular one. Nowadays, a good number of Chinese, especially young people, are using WeChat to keep in touch with each other. The reason why I like it best is that it is very fast and convenient to send word files, messages, pictures, or even video programmes. More importantly, it is free to communicate with others on WeChat, which will surely save you a lot of money.
Hopeful my advice will be of some help to you and I’m looking forward to your early arrival.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，你的英国网友Leslie不久要来中国留学，他想了解一些日常生活中和他人保持联系的方法。请考生写信向他推荐微信（WeChat）软件，并期待他早日到来。
【详解】词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→ happy→ glad
各种各样的：a variety of→ all kinds of
日常的：daily→ everyday
和…保持联系：keep in touch with = stay in touch with
句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The reason why I like it best is that it is very fast and convenient to send word files, messages, pictures, or even video programmes.
拓展句：I like it best because it is very fast and convenient to send word files, messages, pictures, or even video programmes.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m more than delighted to hear that you will come to China for your further study and I hope you can enjoy your stay here. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] More importantly, it is free to communicate with others on WeChat, which will surely save you a lot of money. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．Hi there, Julia. I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum. I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Sichuan Province.
I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 boy student, good at Chinese geography and history. When it comes to traveling in China, Sichuan is sure to be a popular tourist destination. It is not only the birthplace of Ba-Shu culture, but also has many places of interest, where you can enjoy yourself to the full degree. Besides, people in Sichuan are friendly and willing to help others in need, which can really help make your visit comfortable and pleasant. Particularly, you can take a chance to experience different cultures and enjoy a variety of typical Sichuan foods. By the way, I’d like to serve as your guide if you come.
I do hope that you will have a good time in China.
Best Wishes!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【详解】高三学生李华在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子，澳大利亚中学生Julia想来中国旅游，你向她推荐了四川，要求根据提示写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.推荐理由（至少两条）；因为文章主要是介绍推荐理由，描写四川吸引人的地方及特点，用一般现在时和第三人称来写。
写作时要注意要点全面，表达准确，观点明确，条理清晰。还要注意高级词汇和句型的运用来提高文章档次，如定语从句that you put on the English Forum. where you can enjoy yourself to the full degree.和which can really help make your visit comfortable and pleasant.宾语从句that you pay a visit to Sichuan Province.和that you will have a good time in China.词语not only…but also…, places of interest, be willing to, a variety of等。
7．Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese literature, I am more than excited because I am fairly a literature lover myself.
I recommend a well-known Chinese book titled The Ordinary World to you. The book was written by a famous Chinese writer, Lu Yao. It centers on the life and destinies of three families of Sun, Tian and Jin in a village. It pictures the tough process of building up a better and wealthier life during the very beginning of reform and openness in China. Reading the book, you will be greatly moved by the courage and spirit of the main characters. That’s why I make this recommendation.
I am looking forward to your view of this book.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣，并请你向他推荐一部优秀的中国文学作品。请考生按要求给他回信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
感兴趣：be interested in→ take interest in
感动的：moved→ touched
推荐：recommend→ nominate
期盼：look forward to→ expect
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I recommend a well-known Chinese book titled The Ordinary World to you.
拓展句：I recommend a well-known Chinese book to you, whose title is The Ordinary World.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are interested in Chinese literature, I am more than excited because I am fairly a literature lover myself.（运用了that连接的宾语从句和现在分词做状语）
【高分句型2】That’s why I make this recommendation.（运用了why连接的表语从句）
8．Dear Sir / Madam,
I am honored to recommend Zhang Ming to you, as he wants to apply to your school.
As the monitor in our class, I am quite familiar with Zhang Ming. We have been classmates for more than two years. He has given me a good impression. Firstly, not only is he intelligent, but also he is hard-working. He does well in most subjects and is one of the best students in our school. Our teachers all like him and encourage us to follow his example. Secondly, having talents in other things, such as singing and debating, he has helped to organize several class activities. Besides, he is also caring and lively. He is always ready to help classmates, and he spreads happiness wherever he goes.
I know he will meet your school’s requirements. If he is admitted into your school, I am sure he will perform even better in your school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】本文属于提纲类作文，要求写一封推荐信。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用用一般现在时来写。要点：1.你的身份；2.你对张明的印象，如在校期间的学习情况，表现等；3.说明张明适合去该校留学学习。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: be familiar with对……熟悉，do well in在……某方面干得好。还使用了倒装，Firstly, not only is he intelligent, but also he is hard-working.和宾语从句I know he will meet your school’s requirements.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。
9．Dear Anne,
Glad to know that you are planning a trip around Sichuan this summer vacation. It’s my pleasure to offer you my suggestions. Among the numerous scenic spots, the first choice is Qingcheng Mountain, which is always on the top of the must-go destinations. It is the gorgeous natural scenery that attracts visitors from home and abroad. Another recommendation is Jinsha Relics Museum in Chengdu, where you can pick up a great deal of knowledge about our history. Good luck to your trip.
By the way, many thanks for teaching us during the past months. Through your international understanding courses, we not only develop our English abilities, but also have a better view of our world. Look forward to attending your classes next term and enjoying greater progress. (112 words)
Beast wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Yang
【详解】试题分析：本次作文要求给外教Anne写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.推荐两个旅游目的地，并分别阐述理由；2.感谢他一年来的教学；3.期待下期的学习。注意写作时信中内容要点要全面，层次要清晰，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。
写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了定语从句which is always on the top of the must-go destinations.和where you can pick up a great deal of knowledge about our history.等。
10．Dear Paul,
How are you recently I am happy to know you are interested in the Three Character Primer and want a copy of it. I am writing to tell you something about it.
I have bought a copy and have posted it to you. You will receive it in a few days. Here I’d like to recommend some good ways to learn it well. You need to read it aloud in the morning and try to recite it. It can help you better understand it if you can learn about the stories behind the phrases. If you have any problems learning it, don’t hesitate to ask me for help.
Best wishes!
Sincerely
Lihua
【详解】本题要求写一篇书信类作文，书信的开头以及结尾已经给出，所以格式方面不会出错。这类文章要注意以下几点：
第一、信息点的覆盖和内容的组织；题目当中涉及到的相关的点一个都不能少，必须要含盖所有的信息。A. 书已买并寄出；B. 推荐学习《三字经》的方法；C. 愿意解答疑难。第二、语言的准确性；不要有以下的五种错误：语法错误，用词错误，句子结构混乱，标点符号的错误和拼写错误。第三、格式和语域的恰当；语域：根据不同的写作对象，有三种不同的语域，分别是正式语域，一般语域和非正式语域。语域的选择取决于写信的对象不同。本篇作文是笔友间的书信来往，故使用非正式语域。
【范文亮点】
重点短语与句型：
How are you recently 最近怎么样？
Would like to+动词原形，想要做某事；
ask sb. for help，向某人寻求帮助；
It can …if you，如果你…，将会；
Best wishes （to you）! 常见祝福语。