四川高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信10篇（含解析）
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感谢信/祝贺信
1．假如你是光明高中的学生会主席李华。上周加拿大威斯菲尔德中学(Westfield Secondary School)学生会向你校图书馆捐赠了一批图书，请你给WSS 中学的学生会主席Peter 写一封
信，要点如下：
1.感谢对方捐赠图书。
2.通过EMS国际快递寄去由同学们亲手制作的传统礼物，请对方注意查收。
3.再次表示感谢并希望今后更多地开展两校之间的交流活动。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，得知你的朋友Frank被牛津大学(University of Oxford)录取，请给他写一封英文邮件，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺;
2.赞扬他的努力及对你的鼓舞;
3.美好祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假定你是李华，高一上学期的学习已经结束了，请给你的英语老师写封邮件。
内容包括：
1. 英语方面最大的收获；
2. 致谢和愿望。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear teacher,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter给你发来一封邮件，告诉你他在世界教育机器人大赛（Word Educational Robot Contest）中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 对他表示祝贺；
2. 肯定他付出的努力；
3. 请教参赛经验。
注意： 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．假设你是李华，要参加学校的英语征文活动。这次征文要求大家给一位历史人物写感谢信，感谢他(她)为人类的进步所做出的贡献。内容请包括：
1. 历史人物的名字(称呼里体现)及其贡献；2. 该人物对你的影响和启发；
3. 你对他(她)表达感谢。
注意：词数100词左右。
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6．假如你是小华，上个月刚刚过了18岁生日，觉得自己已经是大人了，于是你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算，以书信形式同父母谈谈。信的主要内容如下：
1. 对父母的关心和照顾表达感激之情；
2. 取得高考好成绩，进入理想的大学。
注意：
1. 词数120左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Xiao Hua
7．自 8 月中旬起，受到持续高温的影响，重庆山火频发。据央视新闻报道称，今年是重庆自 1961 年来遭遇的最严重的极端连晴高温天气。起火点均分布在山势陡峭处，由于风向不定形成乱流，给灭火工作增加了难度。
8 月 24 日，重庆市应急管理局通报，重庆涪陵、开州、万州山火已基本扑灭，大足、铜梁山火总体可控，巴南界石火场东、西线已基本控制。其中北碚歇马火场共投入重庆市区两级应急局专业救援队、武警、消防及其他救援力量 1152 人；巴南界石火场投入各级救援力量 3940 人；大足、铜梁共投入各类救援力量 2589 人。
“重庆摩托大军支援山火”“救援队进山灭火”“市民自报身份争当志愿者”……面对凶猛的山火，除了专业救援力量之外，不少民间救援力量挺身而出，迎着 40 多度的高温，踩着滚烫的土地，逆行冲向火场。
阅读上述材料，请以你的身份，向火灾救援中的工作者写一封感谢信。
内容包括：
1.对工作者感谢;
2.给你带来的启示;
要求：100 词左右。
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8．假设你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办了英语演讲比赛，得到了外教David的大力帮助。活动圆满结束后，请你代表学生会用英语给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1. 感谢； 2. 外教的帮助； 3. 同学们的收获。
注意：
1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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9．假如你是李华。最近收到笔友John的电子邮件，得知他在学校的英语竞赛（English competition）中获得一等奖。请跟据以下内容给他写封电子邮件。
1.祝贺他取得的优异成绩；
2.告诉他你在学习中的苦与乐；
3.请他介绍他的学习方法。
注意：
1.词数100词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．假定你是李华，上周末你受本校交换生David邀请一起外出骑行，请你给David发一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.感谢邀请；
2.骑行感想；
3.下周末安排。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
1．Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, president of the student union of Guangming high school. On behalf of my school, I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for donating books to us last week.
Our schools have maintained good relationship with each other, and we have benefited a lot. It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which are informative and helpful to our students. In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots made by us students by EMS. Please note to check.
I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation in the future. Thank you again for the books you generally donated. Looking forward to your next visit.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇说明文。文章要求考生给WSS中学的学生会主席Peter写信感谢他们捐赠的图书并告知他已经通过EMS国际快递寄去由同学们亲手制作的传统礼物，并希望今后更多地开展两校之间的交流活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere→genuine
表达：express→ convey
希望：hope→ wish
代表：on behalf of→ represent
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots made by us students by EMS.
拓展句：In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots which were made by us students by EMS.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which are informative and helpful to our students.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation in the future. （运用了省略从属连词that的宾语从句，作动词hope的宾语）
2．Dear Frank,
Good news travels fast! Please accept my hearty congratulation on your graduation from senior school and admission to University of Oxford.
I know how hard you have been working these years and I am very proud of you for your success. I am firmly convinced that it is your hard work that contributes to your success today. Just as the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” It is a reward for your diligence and persistence. Your success is also a great encouragement to me to study harder and I hope that one day I will enter a famous university just like you.
I believe it will be a new beginning and a chance for you to embrace a fuller life and pave the way for a brilliant future. All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以李华的身份就朋友Frank被牛津大学录取一事，表达自己的祝贺，赞扬他的努力和对自己的鼓舞，以及表达自己美好的祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
真挚的：hearty→sincere/genuine
坚决地：firmly→steadily
鼓励：encouragement→motivation
希望：hope→wish
2. 句式拓展
同义句
原句：I know how hard you have been working these years and I am very proud of you for your success.
复合句：Knowing how hard you have been working these years，I am very proud of you for your success.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I am firmly convinced that it is your hard work that contributes to your success today.(that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 I hope that one day I will enter a famous university just like you.（that引导的宾语从句）
3．Dear teacher,
I am writing to express my gratitude as the first semester of my first year of high school comes to a close. Over the past few months, I have learned so much from you, especially in English class.
In particular, my biggest takeaway from your class is how to properly organize my ideas and express them effectively in writing. This skill has been helpful in all of my classes, not just in English.
Thank you again for all of your hard work and dedication. I hope that we can continue to work together in the coming semesters.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考试给自己高一的英语老师写信，汇报自己英语方面的收获并对老师表示感谢和祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude → appreciation/thankfulness
尤其：in particular → particularly
有帮助的：helpful → be of help
付出：dedication → devotion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In particular, my biggest takeaway from your class is how to properly organize my ideas and express them effectively in writing.
拓展句：In particular, my biggest takeaway from your class is how I can properly organize my ideas and express them effectively in writing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to express my gratitude as the first semester of my first year of high school comes to a close.（运用了as引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope that we can continue to work together in the coming semesters.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
4．Dear Peter,
Having received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the World Educational Robot Contest, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations.
Your success comes as no surprise to me, considering the time and efforts you have devoted to. Your superb programming skill and excellent ability to make immediate response must have left the judges a deep impression. It is a reward you totally deserve! Since I am also considering engaging in such a competition, I’d appreciate it if you could offer me some advice on how to make preparations.
Congratulations to you again and wish you still further success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给在世界教育机器人大赛中获得一等奖的美国朋友Peter回一封邮件。内容包括：对他表示祝贺；肯定他付出的努力；请教参赛经验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
给予：offer→give
极好的：super→brilliant
参加：engage in→take part in
建议：advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句：Having received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the World Educational Robot Contest, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations.
拓展句：After I have received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the World Educational Robot Contest, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Having received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the World Educational Robot Contest, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations.(运用了现在分词作状语，that引导的同位语从句)
[高分句型2] Since I am also considering engaging in such a competition, I’d appreciate it if you could offer me some advice on how to make preparations. (运用了since引导的状语从句，固定句型I’d appreciate it if以及疑问词+不定式作宾语)
5．Dear Li Shizhen,
I am Li Hua, a high school student. I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion.
You are a scholar and doctor of the Ming dynasty. You are also one of the most important figures in China’s medical community. Your famous book, Compendium of Materia Medica, which cost you years of effort, has been regarded as the most complete and comprehensive medical work in the history of Chinese medicine. What impressed me most is your perseverance shown in your career. Encouraged by you, I’m determined to work harder for my dream.
I can never express my thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution.
Thank you again, and best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生要求大家给一位历史人物写感谢信，感谢他(她)为人类的进步所做出的贡献。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere →heartfelt
著名的：famous→ well-known
被认为是：regarded as→ considered as
受到鼓舞：encouraged→ inspired
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Encouraged by you, I’m determined to work harder for my dream.
拓展句：Because I am encouraged by you, I’m determined to work harder for my dream.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What impressed me most is your perseverance shown in your career.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】Encouraged by you, I’m determined to work harder for my dream.(运用了过去分词短语Encouraged by you做原因状语)
6．Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.
I celebrated my 18th birthday last month, which means that I have been already an adult. I am so grateful to you that I don’t know how to express it. First, thank you for providing me with good living environment. Second, when I meet with difficulties, you always give me encouragement and good advice.
Now, I am a senior three student. The most important thing that I am facing is the national college entrance examinations. I am determined to try my best to pass the competitive exams. I believe I can enter my ideal key university through my efforts.
On the other hand, I want to be an independent man. With the development of this society, I will face a more competitive society in the future, so I will develop myself and make good preparations for it.
Yours sincerely,
Xiao Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给父母写一封信，对父母表达感激之情并告诉父母你今后的打算。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激的：grateful→thankful
首先：first→first of all
建议：advice→suggestion
决定做某事：be determined to do sth.→decide to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the development of this society, I will face a more competitive society in the future, so I will develop myself and make good preparations for it.
拓展句：As this society develops, I will face a more competitive society in the future, so I will develop myself and make good preparations for it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, when I meet with difficulties, you always give me encouragement and good advice. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】The most important thing that I am facing is the national college entrance examinations. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
7．Dear officer,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude to you. Since the middle of August, there are frequent mountain fires in Chongqing, causing great damage. However, the rescue work is not easy due to the uncertainty of the wind.
Fortunately, you came to our rescue immediately. Professional rescue teams, armed police, fire fighting and other rescue forces spared no efforts to put out the fire. It especially touched me when the volunteers joined in the rescue work regardless of the hot weather and burning ground.It occurred to me that but for your help, Chongqing could not have returned to normal so soon.
Your commitment really means a lot to us, and I really hope to have the opportunity to repay your unselfish devotion.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给重庆山火救援中的工作者写一封感谢信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：extend→express
由于：due to→because of
幸运地：fortunately→luckily
努力做某事：spare no efforts to do sth.→make an effort to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Since the middle of August, there are frequent mountain fires in Chongqing, causing great damage.
拓展句：Since the middle of August, there are frequent mountain fires in Chongqing, which caused great damage.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It especially touched me when the volunteers joined in the rescue work regardless of the hot weather and burning ground.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】It occurred to me that but for your help, Chongqing could not have returned to normal so soon.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导了主语从句）
8．One possible version:
Dear David,
On behalf of the Student Council, I’m writing to express my gratitude for your selfless assistance in the English Speech Contest, without which the contest couldn’t have been a success.
Under your instructive guidance, we performed very well. Not only did you help the contestants polish their words, but also you guided us on the way to exploring the essence of language, which will undoubtedly broaden our horizons in Chinese and western culture.
Your professional help is of great benefit to us. For one thing, it is you that have built up our confidence in language learning, for another, we have caught a glimpse of the differences between eastern and western languages.
Thanks again for your generous assistance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对外教David在举办英语演讲比赛期间提供的帮助表示感谢。同时也要介绍同学们在活动中的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：on behalf of→in the name of
感激：gratitude→appreciation
比赛：contest→competition
帮助：help sb. do sth.→assist sb. to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your professional help is of great benefit to us.
拓展句：There is no denying that your professional help is of great benefit to us.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On behalf of the Student Council, I’m writing to express my gratitude for your selfless assistance in the English Speech Contest, without which the contest couldn’t have been a success. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 Not only did you help the contestants polish their words, but also you guided us on the way to exploring the essence of language, which will undoubtedly broaden our horizons in Chinese and western culture. (运用了部分倒装句，同时运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
9．Dear John,
I am glad to know that you got the first prize in the English competition in your school. Congratulations! I strongly believe that your hard work and determination contribute to your success.
It's been two years since I entered the senior high school. Sometimes when I meet with some difficulties, I feel depressed. But I feel content more often because study occupies most of my time, for I know success lies in hard work. Only by making every effort can I realize my dream of going to college.
You are so good at studying, so would you please introduce some of your learning methods to me
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生向笔友John写一封信，祝贺John在英语竞赛中获得一等奖，并分享自己在学习中的苦与乐，向他求教学习方法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴：glad→ happy
导致、带来：contribute to → result in/lead to
沮丧的：depressed → dejected/disheartened
源自于：lie in→ result from
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Only by making every effort can I realize my dream of going to college.
拓展句：Only if I can make every effort, I can realize my dream of going to college.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I strongly believe that your hard work and determination contribute to your success.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Sometimes when I meet with some difficulties, I feel depressed.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
10．Dear David,
What an unforgettable ride it was! Now I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for inviting me and propose a plan for next week.
To be frank, what’s really remarkable was people’s active involvement in bicycle riding, from the young pedaling with playmates to well-equipped cyclists racing on paved lanes. Besides, it was your encouraging words that inspired me to hold on to the last, without which I would have surrendered halfway up the slopes. As to our next trip, how about camping at the nearby lake next Saturday if weather permits
Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生David写邮件，感谢对方上周末邀请外出骑行，告知这次骑行的感想，以及下周末的安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere → genuine
表达：express → convey
坦白地说：To be frank → Frankly speaking
鼓舞：inspire → stimulate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：As to our next trip, how about camping at the nearby lake next Saturday if weather permits
拓展句：As to our next trip, shall we camp at the nearby lake next Saturday if weather permits
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, it was your encouraging words that inspired me to hold on to the last, without which I would have surrendered halfway up the slopes.（运用了强调句，动词不定式作补语，非限制性定语从句和虚拟语气）
【高分句型2】As to our next trip, how about camping at the nearby lake next Saturday if weather permits （运用了动名词作宾语，if引导的条件状语从句）
1．假如你是光明高中的学生会主席李华。上周加拿大威斯菲尔德中学(Westfield Secondary School)学生会向你校图书馆捐赠了一批图书，请你给WSS 中学的学生会主席Peter 写一封
信，要点如下：
1.感谢对方捐赠图书。
2.通过EMS国际快递寄去由同学们亲手制作的传统礼物，请对方注意查收。
3.再次表示感谢并希望今后更多地开展两校之间的交流活动。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，得知你的朋友Frank被牛津大学(University of Oxford)录取，请给他写一封英文邮件，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺;
2.赞扬他的努力及对你的鼓舞;
3.美好祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假定你是李华，高一上学期的学习已经结束了，请给你的英语老师写封邮件。
内容包括：
1. 英语方面最大的收获；
2. 致谢和愿望。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear teacher,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter给你发来一封邮件，告诉你他在世界教育机器人大赛（Word Educational Robot Contest）中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 对他表示祝贺；
2. 肯定他付出的努力；
3. 请教参赛经验。
注意： 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．假设你是李华，要参加学校的英语征文活动。这次征文要求大家给一位历史人物写感谢信，感谢他(她)为人类的进步所做出的贡献。内容请包括：
1. 历史人物的名字(称呼里体现)及其贡献；2. 该人物对你的影响和启发；
3. 你对他(她)表达感谢。
注意：词数100词左右。
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6．假如你是小华，上个月刚刚过了18岁生日，觉得自己已经是大人了，于是你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算，以书信形式同父母谈谈。信的主要内容如下：
1. 对父母的关心和照顾表达感激之情；
2. 取得高考好成绩，进入理想的大学。
注意：
1. 词数120左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.
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Yours sincerely,
Xiao Hua
7．自 8 月中旬起，受到持续高温的影响，重庆山火频发。据央视新闻报道称，今年是重庆自 1961 年来遭遇的最严重的极端连晴高温天气。起火点均分布在山势陡峭处，由于风向不定形成乱流，给灭火工作增加了难度。
8 月 24 日，重庆市应急管理局通报，重庆涪陵、开州、万州山火已基本扑灭，大足、铜梁山火总体可控，巴南界石火场东、西线已基本控制。其中北碚歇马火场共投入重庆市区两级应急局专业救援队、武警、消防及其他救援力量 1152 人；巴南界石火场投入各级救援力量 3940 人；大足、铜梁共投入各类救援力量 2589 人。
“重庆摩托大军支援山火”“救援队进山灭火”“市民自报身份争当志愿者”……面对凶猛的山火，除了专业救援力量之外，不少民间救援力量挺身而出，迎着 40 多度的高温，踩着滚烫的土地，逆行冲向火场。
阅读上述材料，请以你的身份，向火灾救援中的工作者写一封感谢信。
内容包括：
1.对工作者感谢;
2.给你带来的启示;
要求：100 词左右。
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8．假设你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办了英语演讲比赛，得到了外教David的大力帮助。活动圆满结束后，请你代表学生会用英语给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1. 感谢； 2. 外教的帮助； 3. 同学们的收获。
注意：
1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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9．假如你是李华。最近收到笔友John的电子邮件，得知他在学校的英语竞赛（English competition）中获得一等奖。请跟据以下内容给他写封电子邮件。
1.祝贺他取得的优异成绩；
2.告诉他你在学习中的苦与乐；
3.请他介绍他的学习方法。
注意：
1.词数100词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．假定你是李华，上周末你受本校交换生David邀请一起外出骑行，请你给David发一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.感谢邀请；
2.骑行感想；
3.下周末安排。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
1．Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, president of the student union of Guangming high school. On behalf of my school, I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for donating books to us last week.
Our schools have maintained good relationship with each other, and we have benefited a lot. It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which are informative and helpful to our students. In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots made by us students by EMS. Please note to check.
I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation in the future. Thank you again for the books you generally donated. Looking forward to your next visit.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇说明文。文章要求考生给WSS中学的学生会主席Peter写信感谢他们捐赠的图书并告知他已经通过EMS国际快递寄去由同学们亲手制作的传统礼物，并希望今后更多地开展两校之间的交流活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere→genuine
表达：express→ convey
希望：hope→ wish
代表：on behalf of→ represent
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots made by us students by EMS.
拓展句：In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots which were made by us students by EMS.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which are informative and helpful to our students.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation in the future. （运用了省略从属连词that的宾语从句，作动词hope的宾语）
2．Dear Frank,
Good news travels fast! Please accept my hearty congratulation on your graduation from senior school and admission to University of Oxford.
I know how hard you have been working these years and I am very proud of you for your success. I am firmly convinced that it is your hard work that contributes to your success today. Just as the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” It is a reward for your diligence and persistence. Your success is also a great encouragement to me to study harder and I hope that one day I will enter a famous university just like you.
I believe it will be a new beginning and a chance for you to embrace a fuller life and pave the way for a brilliant future. All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以李华的身份就朋友Frank被牛津大学录取一事，表达自己的祝贺，赞扬他的努力和对自己的鼓舞，以及表达自己美好的祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
真挚的：hearty→sincere/genuine
坚决地：firmly→steadily
鼓励：encouragement→motivation
希望：hope→wish
2. 句式拓展
同义句
原句：I know how hard you have been working these years and I am very proud of you for your success.
复合句：Knowing how hard you have been working these years，I am very proud of you for your success.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I am firmly convinced that it is your hard work that contributes to your success today.(that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 I hope that one day I will enter a famous university just like you.（that引导的宾语从句）
3．Dear teacher,
I am writing to express my gratitude as the first semester of my first year of high school comes to a close. Over the past few months, I have learned so much from you, especially in English class.
In particular, my biggest takeaway from your class is how to properly organize my ideas and express them effectively in writing. This skill has been helpful in all of my classes, not just in English.
Thank you again for all of your hard work and dedication. I hope that we can continue to work together in the coming semesters.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考试给自己高一的英语老师写信，汇报自己英语方面的收获并对老师表示感谢和祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude → appreciation/thankfulness
尤其：in particular → particularly
有帮助的：helpful → be of help
付出：dedication → devotion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In particular, my biggest takeaway from your class is how to properly organize my ideas and express them effectively in writing.
拓展句：In particular, my biggest takeaway from your class is how I can properly organize my ideas and express them effectively in writing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to express my gratitude as the first semester of my first year of high school comes to a close.（运用了as引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope that we can continue to work together in the coming semesters.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
4．Dear Peter,
Having received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the World Educational Robot Contest, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations.
Your success comes as no surprise to me, considering the time and efforts you have devoted to. Your superb programming skill and excellent ability to make immediate response must have left the judges a deep impression. It is a reward you totally deserve! Since I am also considering engaging in such a competition, I’d appreciate it if you could offer me some advice on how to make preparations.
Congratulations to you again and wish you still further success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给在世界教育机器人大赛中获得一等奖的美国朋友Peter回一封邮件。内容包括：对他表示祝贺；肯定他付出的努力；请教参赛经验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
给予：offer→give
极好的：super→brilliant
参加：engage in→take part in
建议：advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句：Having received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the World Educational Robot Contest, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations.
拓展句：After I have received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the World Educational Robot Contest, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Having received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the World Educational Robot Contest, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations.(运用了现在分词作状语，that引导的同位语从句)
[高分句型2] Since I am also considering engaging in such a competition, I’d appreciate it if you could offer me some advice on how to make preparations. (运用了since引导的状语从句，固定句型I’d appreciate it if以及疑问词+不定式作宾语)
5．Dear Li Shizhen,
I am Li Hua, a high school student. I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion.
You are a scholar and doctor of the Ming dynasty. You are also one of the most important figures in China’s medical community. Your famous book, Compendium of Materia Medica, which cost you years of effort, has been regarded as the most complete and comprehensive medical work in the history of Chinese medicine. What impressed me most is your perseverance shown in your career. Encouraged by you, I’m determined to work harder for my dream.
I can never express my thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution.
Thank you again, and best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生要求大家给一位历史人物写感谢信，感谢他(她)为人类的进步所做出的贡献。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere →heartfelt
著名的：famous→ well-known
被认为是：regarded as→ considered as
受到鼓舞：encouraged→ inspired
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Encouraged by you, I’m determined to work harder for my dream.
拓展句：Because I am encouraged by you, I’m determined to work harder for my dream.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What impressed me most is your perseverance shown in your career.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】Encouraged by you, I’m determined to work harder for my dream.(运用了过去分词短语Encouraged by you做原因状语)
6．Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.
I celebrated my 18th birthday last month, which means that I have been already an adult. I am so grateful to you that I don’t know how to express it. First, thank you for providing me with good living environment. Second, when I meet with difficulties, you always give me encouragement and good advice.
Now, I am a senior three student. The most important thing that I am facing is the national college entrance examinations. I am determined to try my best to pass the competitive exams. I believe I can enter my ideal key university through my efforts.
On the other hand, I want to be an independent man. With the development of this society, I will face a more competitive society in the future, so I will develop myself and make good preparations for it.
Yours sincerely,
Xiao Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给父母写一封信，对父母表达感激之情并告诉父母你今后的打算。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激的：grateful→thankful
首先：first→first of all
建议：advice→suggestion
决定做某事：be determined to do sth.→decide to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the development of this society, I will face a more competitive society in the future, so I will develop myself and make good preparations for it.
拓展句：As this society develops, I will face a more competitive society in the future, so I will develop myself and make good preparations for it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, when I meet with difficulties, you always give me encouragement and good advice. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】The most important thing that I am facing is the national college entrance examinations. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
7．Dear officer,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude to you. Since the middle of August, there are frequent mountain fires in Chongqing, causing great damage. However, the rescue work is not easy due to the uncertainty of the wind.
Fortunately, you came to our rescue immediately. Professional rescue teams, armed police, fire fighting and other rescue forces spared no efforts to put out the fire. It especially touched me when the volunteers joined in the rescue work regardless of the hot weather and burning ground.It occurred to me that but for your help, Chongqing could not have returned to normal so soon.
Your commitment really means a lot to us, and I really hope to have the opportunity to repay your unselfish devotion.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给重庆山火救援中的工作者写一封感谢信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：extend→express
由于：due to→because of
幸运地：fortunately→luckily
努力做某事：spare no efforts to do sth.→make an effort to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Since the middle of August, there are frequent mountain fires in Chongqing, causing great damage.
拓展句：Since the middle of August, there are frequent mountain fires in Chongqing, which caused great damage.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It especially touched me when the volunteers joined in the rescue work regardless of the hot weather and burning ground.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】It occurred to me that but for your help, Chongqing could not have returned to normal so soon.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导了主语从句）
8．One possible version:
Dear David,
On behalf of the Student Council, I’m writing to express my gratitude for your selfless assistance in the English Speech Contest, without which the contest couldn’t have been a success.
Under your instructive guidance, we performed very well. Not only did you help the contestants polish their words, but also you guided us on the way to exploring the essence of language, which will undoubtedly broaden our horizons in Chinese and western culture.
Your professional help is of great benefit to us. For one thing, it is you that have built up our confidence in language learning, for another, we have caught a glimpse of the differences between eastern and western languages.
Thanks again for your generous assistance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对外教David在举办英语演讲比赛期间提供的帮助表示感谢。同时也要介绍同学们在活动中的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：on behalf of→in the name of
感激：gratitude→appreciation
比赛：contest→competition
帮助：help sb. do sth.→assist sb. to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your professional help is of great benefit to us.
拓展句：There is no denying that your professional help is of great benefit to us.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On behalf of the Student Council, I’m writing to express my gratitude for your selfless assistance in the English Speech Contest, without which the contest couldn’t have been a success. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 Not only did you help the contestants polish their words, but also you guided us on the way to exploring the essence of language, which will undoubtedly broaden our horizons in Chinese and western culture. (运用了部分倒装句，同时运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
9．Dear John,
I am glad to know that you got the first prize in the English competition in your school. Congratulations! I strongly believe that your hard work and determination contribute to your success.
It's been two years since I entered the senior high school. Sometimes when I meet with some difficulties, I feel depressed. But I feel content more often because study occupies most of my time, for I know success lies in hard work. Only by making every effort can I realize my dream of going to college.
You are so good at studying, so would you please introduce some of your learning methods to me
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生向笔友John写一封信，祝贺John在英语竞赛中获得一等奖，并分享自己在学习中的苦与乐，向他求教学习方法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴：glad→ happy
导致、带来：contribute to → result in/lead to
沮丧的：depressed → dejected/disheartened
源自于：lie in→ result from
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Only by making every effort can I realize my dream of going to college.
拓展句：Only if I can make every effort, I can realize my dream of going to college.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I strongly believe that your hard work and determination contribute to your success.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Sometimes when I meet with some difficulties, I feel depressed.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
10．Dear David,
What an unforgettable ride it was! Now I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for inviting me and propose a plan for next week.
To be frank, what’s really remarkable was people’s active involvement in bicycle riding, from the young pedaling with playmates to well-equipped cyclists racing on paved lanes. Besides, it was your encouraging words that inspired me to hold on to the last, without which I would have surrendered halfway up the slopes. As to our next trip, how about camping at the nearby lake next Saturday if weather permits
Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生David写邮件，感谢对方上周末邀请外出骑行，告知这次骑行的感想，以及下周末的安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere → genuine
表达：express → convey
坦白地说：To be frank → Frankly speaking
鼓舞：inspire → stimulate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：As to our next trip, how about camping at the nearby lake next Saturday if weather permits
拓展句：As to our next trip, shall we camp at the nearby lake next Saturday if weather permits
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, it was your encouraging words that inspired me to hold on to the last, without which I would have surrendered halfway up the slopes.（运用了强调句，动词不定式作补语，非限制性定语从句和虚拟语气）
【高分句型2】As to our next trip, how about camping at the nearby lake next Saturday if weather permits （运用了动名词作宾语，if引导的条件状语从句）