邀请信
1.假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友peter想通过了解中国传统的娱乐活动学习汉语。请你写封邀请信,邀请 Peter一起逛庙会,同时了解中国文化。内容包括:
(1)逛庙会的时间,地点;
(2)介绍庙会的传统文化形式。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:庙会 temple fair;泥塑 clay figurines。
Dear Peter,
In your letter, you mentioned that you wanted to learn Chinese by learning Chinese traditional entertainment activities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Linda很喜欢中国丝绸。正巧你市于4月20日至26日举行“中国丝绸文化节”,你想邀请她同去,请你给她写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)写信目的;
(2)介绍文化节(主题、展览品、意义等);
(3)约定见面时间、地点。
注意:(1)词数80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Linda,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3.假如你是李华,假期在英国旅游时得到导游Peter的帮助,回来后给他写一封邮件表达谢意。
主要内容:1.回忆旅行中的难忘经历;
2.表示感谢并邀请他来你的家乡。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.假定你是李华,为了资助学校的贫困学生,你校将举行一次爱心义卖活动(charity sale),请你给外教Mr.Smith写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
1、义卖的时间和地点
2、义卖内容(捐赠物品或者购买物品)
3、期待回复
注意:1、词数100左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
5.假定你是李华,学生会主席。你校和英国某中学是友好学校。对方学校将举办“中国文化周”,邀请你校派学生参加。请你给负责该项目的老师Jason写一封电子邮件表示感谢邀请并询问相关事宜。内容如下:
1. 活动开始时间;
2. 活动内容;
3. 学生住宿安排。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jason,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.假定你是李华,你校上周刚举办了“汉服节”(the Hanfu Festival)活动,你的外国朋友Peter对此非常感兴趣,请你给他写封信。信的内容包括:
1. 活动的目的:了解汉服,传承传统文化;
2. 活动内容安排:主题讲座,汉服舞蹈表演等;
3. 活动在同学中引起的反响。
注意:1. 词数120左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7.假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Alex要到你家乡的城市来玩耍,你先要写封邮件向他介绍你家乡的城市。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 内容要点:
① 邀请并欢迎Alex到你家乡的城市来;
② 这个城市的地理位置,面积,人口, 历史, 名胜, 名小吃, 风土人情;
③ 希望他早日到来并祝愿旅途愉快。
3. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
8.假定你是中华中学学生会主席李华,你校将于6月28日在和谐湖举行龙舟赛,请给友好学校复兴中学 (Fuxing High School) 写一封邀请信。
信的内容包括:(1)写信目的;(2)活动时间、地点和意义;(3)回复时间:2021年6月25日前。
注意:(1)词数120字左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9.假定你是李华,你市图书馆将播放关于中国茶文化的纪录片。你的外教Mr.Smith是中国茶文化的爱好者,请给他写一封邮件,邀请他一起观看。内容包括:
1.播放时间、地点;
2.纪录片的主要内容。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:纪录片documentary
Dear Mr.Smith,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10.假定你是李华,你校即将举办"我和我的祖国"英语演讲比赛。请给你校外籍教师James 写一封电子邮件,告知他演讲比赛的有关内容,并邀请他当评委。要点包括:
1.比赛的时间和地点;
2.举办此活动的目的和意义;
3.诚挚邀请他担任评委。
注意: 1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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1.Dear Peter,
In your letter, you mentioned that you wanted to learn Chinese by learning Chinese traditional entertainment activities. I take great pleasure in recommending you to visit the Chinese temple fair. I invite you to go with me to temple fair in Shanghai next Saturday.
For Chinese, attending a temple fair comes second only to the family reunion dinner when it comes to Chinese New Year observances. On the temple fair, you can get to know paper-cuts and clay figurines. What's more, folk performances including lion dances, crosstalk and kung fu performances, and so on, may be performed. You can enjoy yourself as well as learn Chinese.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邀请信,邀请 Peter一起逛庙会,同时了解中国文化。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
要求:
1. 逛庙会的时间,地点;
2. 介绍庙会的传统文化形式。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
take great pleasure; recommend; reunion dinner; observance; paper-cut; clay figurine; enjoy oneself; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I take great pleasure in recommending you to visit the Chinese temple fair.
2. attending a temple fair comes second only to the family reunion dinner when it comes to Chinese New Year observances
3. On the temple fair, you can get to know paper-cuts and clay figurines.
4.What's more, folk performances including lion dances, crosstalk and kung fu performances, and so on, may be performed.
5.You can enjoy yourself as well as learn Chinese.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表并列补充关系:What is more, including
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] . I take great pleasure in recommending you to visit the Chinese temple fair. . 我很高兴推荐你参观中国庙会。(运用动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2]For Chinese, attending a temple fair comes second only to the family reunion dinner when it comes to Chinese New Year observances. 对中国人来说,在春节庆祝活动中,参加庙会仅次于吃团圆饭。(运用动名词短语作主语和固定句式when it comes to)
2.Dear Linda,
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese silk, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese Silk Culture Festival to be held from April 20th to 26th in the City Hall.
Its theme is "China surprises the world with splendid silk". At the festival, besides the knowledge of silk history, various delicate silk products will be shown, among which are some elegant silk dresses.Not only can we broaden our horizons at the festival but also we are more likely to make a quantity of friends from diverse backgrounds.
Would it be convenient for you to come if we meet at 9 a.m. on April 20th at the entrance of the City Hall I'd appreciate it if you could confirm your coming at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Linda写封邮件,因她喜欢中国丝绸,邀请她同去参观市里于4月20日至26日举办的 “中国丝绸文化节”。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时,少量现在进行时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 写信目的;
2. 介绍文化节;
1)主题
2)展览品
3)意义
3. 约定见面时间、地点。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be interested in Chinese silk; a Chinese Silk Culture Festival; from April 20th to 26th; its theme; "China surprises the world with splendid silk"; the knowledge of silk history; various delicate silk products; some elegant silk dresses; broaden our horizons; make a quantity of friends; meet at 9 a.m. on April 20th at the entrance of the City Hall
第三步:连词成句
1. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese silk, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese Silk Culture Festival to be held from April 20th to 26th in the City Hall.
2. Its theme is "China surprises the world with splendid silk".
3. At the festival, besides the knowledge of silk history, various delicate silk products will be shown, among which are some elegant silk dresses.
4. Not only can we broaden our horizons at the festival but also we are more likely to make a quantity of friends from diverse backgrounds.
5. Would it be convenient for you to come if we meet at 9 a.m. on April 20th at the entrance of the City Hall
6. I'd appreciate it if you could confirm your coming at your earliest convenience.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are interested in Chinese silk, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese Silk Culture Festival to be held from April 20th to 26th in the City Hall.(现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] At the festival, besides the knowledge of silk history, various delicate silk products will be shown, among which are some elegant silk dresses.(介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Not only can we broaden our horizons at the festival but also we are more likely to make a quantity of friends from diverse backgrounds.(半倒装句)
3.Dear Peter,
I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help while I was travelling in England during my vacation.
It is your detailed and humorous introduction that enables me to have a deeper insight into British culture and have a wonderful time there. I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help to get some medicine when I caught a cold and your perfect advice in choosing gifts for my family.
Thanks again for all your efforts! I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给导游Peter写封邮件,表达对于在英国旅游期间Peter给与帮助的谢意,并邀请他来家乡。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时,少量使用一般将来时。
结构:三段式结构。第一段表达感谢;第二段描述旅途回忆;第三段提出邀请。
要求:
1. 表达感谢;
2. 回忆旅行中的难忘经历;
3. 表示感谢并邀请他来你的家乡。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
express my heartfelt gratitude; during summer vacation; enable sb. to do; have a deeper insight into; have a wonderful time; be deeply impressed by; catch a cold; let sb. do; show sb. around
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help while I was traveling in England during summer vacation.
2. It is your detailed and humorous introduction that enables me to have a deeper insight into British culture and have a wonderful time there.
3. I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help to get some medicine when I caught a cold and your perfect advice in choosing gifts for my family.
4. I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:What is more; Besides; Moreover; Furthermore; In addition; As well as; not only…but (also); including(供参考)
2.表因果关系:Because; As; So; Thus; Therefore; As a result (供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help while I was traveling in England during my vacation.(我写这封信是为了表达我衷心的感谢,感谢你在我暑假在英国旅游时对我的帮助。)
这句中使用了“while”引导时间状语从句“while I was traveling in England during my vacation”。
[高分句型2]
It is your detailed and humorous introduction that enables me to have a deeper insight into British culture and have a wonderful time there.(正是你细致幽默的介绍,让我对英国文化有了更深入的了解,并在英国度过了一段美好的时光。)
这句中使用了“it is +被强调部分+that+其他”强调句式,本句强调主语“your detailed and humorous introduction”。
[高分句型3]
I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.( 我非常希望有一天你能来中国,让我带你参观我的家乡。)
这句中“someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown”为省略that的宾语从句,且使用“do”强调谓语“hope”。
4.Dear Paul
How are things going I am writing to invite you to take part in a charity activity.
The Students Union of our school is going to hold a used book sale on the afternoon of October 6 on the school playground which is aimed to collect money to buy books for children in poor areas. Anyone who is interested is welcome to donate some used books. If you would like to come, please bring several used books to donate and sell books with us. It is a very meaningful activity. We are really expecting your participation.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加爱心义卖活动。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1、义卖的时间和地点
2、义卖内容(捐赠物品或者购买物品)
3、期待回复
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be writing to invite you;take part in;hold a used book sale;aiming to collect money; in poor areas; welcome to donate some used books; If you would like to come; a meaningful activity; expecting your participation; looking forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I am writing to invite you to take part in a charity activity.
2. The Students Union of our school is going to hold a used book sale on the afternoon of October 6 on the school playground which is aimed to collect money to buy books for children in poor areas. 3. Anyone who is interested is welcome to donate some used books.
4. If you would like to come, please bring several used books to donate and sell books with us.
5. It is a very meaningful activity.
6. We are really expecting your participation.
7. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… (供参考)
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1]The Students Union of our school is going to hold a used book sale on the afternoon of October 6 on the school playground which is aimed to collect money to buy books for children in poor areas.运用了由which引导的定语从句,修饰a used book sale,说明了活动举行的目的,表达形式高级。
[高分句型2] Anyone who is interested is welcome to donate some used books.运用一个由who引导的定语从句修饰Anyone,意为“任何感兴趣的人”,表达高级。
[高分句型3] If you would like to come, please bring several used books to donate and sell books with us.运用If引导条件状语从句,would like to do短语,礼貌地提出请求,表达高级。
5.One possible verion:
Dear Jason,
I'm Li Hua, Chairman of the Students' Union. On behalf of the students, I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for inviting us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week. To get further information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event.
Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance. Also, I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week, because the information can help us make better preparations and promote our participation. Lastly, could you please tell us what type of accommodation(s) will be provided If possible, we hope to stay in the school dormitory, which will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.
Thanks again for your kind invitation. It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给负责“中国文化周”项目的老师Jason写一封电子邮件表示感谢邀请并询问相关事宜。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和现在进行时,少量一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.对邀请表示感谢;
2.询问活动开始时间;
3.询问活动内容;
4.询问学生住宿安排。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
On behalf of; express our heartfelt gratitude for; make some inquiries; is scheduled to start; apply for visas and book air tickets in advance; the specific activities; what type of accommodation(s)
第三步:连词成句
1. On behalf of the students, I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for inviting us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week.
2. To get further information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event.
3. Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance.
4. Also, I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week, because the information can help us make better preparations and promote our participation.
5. Lastly, could you please tell us what type of accommodation(s) will be provided
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:Firstly/First, Lastly
4.表因果关系:Because
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1].Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance.(so that引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2].If possible, we hope to stay in the school dormitory, which will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.(which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型3].It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience.(it作形式主语)
6.Dear Peter:
How are you these days Last week, the Hanfu Festival was held in our school successfully. Aware that you are interested in it, I’d like to share with you a brief introduction.
To enrich us students’ knowledge of the traditional Hanfu style costumes and promote traditional Chinese culture, several activities were conducted. We attended a theme lecture, which introduced us to the different styles and features of Hanfu. In addition, and exhibition of fantastic Hanfu from different dynasties amazed us as a feast for the eyes.
The festival has won good comments. Moved by the beauty of Hanfu, we take pride in our ancestors’ intelligence and the charm of traditional Chinese culture. I am certain you will be struck by it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Jim写封邮件,邀请他下周为大家做一次关于如何加强英语听说的专题讲座。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时和少量现在完成时和一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 活动的目的:了解汉服,传承传统文化;
2. 活动内容安排:主题讲座,汉服舞蹈表演等;
3. 活动在同学中引起的反响。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
the Hanfu Festival,be interested in,share with,enrich sb’s knowledge,promote,conduct,attend lecture,in addition,a feast for the eye,good comment,take pride in,intelligence,be struck by等等。
第三步:连词成句
1. Last week, the Hanfu Festival was held in our school successfully.
2. Aware that you are interested in it, I’d like to share with you a brief introduction.
3. To enrich us students’ knowledge of the traditional Hanfu style costumes and promote traditional Chinese culture, several activities were conducted.
4. We attended a theme lecture, which introduced us to the different styles and features of Hanfu.
5. In addition, and exhibition of fantastic Hanfu from different dynasties amazed us as a feast for the eyes.
6. Moved by the beauty of Hanfu, we take pride in our ancestors’ intelligence and the charm of traditional Chinese culture.
7. I am certain you will be struck by it.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表并列补充关系:In addition
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1]
To enrich us students’ knowledge of the traditional Hanfu style costumes and promote traditional Chinese culture, several activities were conducted.使用了不定式作目的状语;
[高分句型2]
We attended a theme lecture, which introduced us to the different styles and features of Hanfu.使用了which引导非限制定语从句;
[高分句型3]
Moved by the beauty of Hanfu, we take pride in our ancestors’ intelligence and the charm of traditional Chinese culture.使用了形容词短语作伴随状语。
7.Dear Alex,
I'm glad to learn that you are coming to my hometown Chongqing. I would like to introduce it to you .
The city of Chongqing is located by the Yangtze River with a long history of about 3000 years. It has a population of 30 million, covering an area of 82,400 ㎞ . It is also a mountainous city. There are many scenic spots in my home town, such as Jiefangbei, a symbol building in Chongqing , and WulongTiankeng. You will be amazed at their special scenery. In Chongqing, you are sure to have a good taste of Chongqing hotpot. Just as the spicy dishes in Chongqing , people here are also warm-hearted and friendly.
Looking forward to your coming! I will be your guide to travel around. Wish you a safe journey!
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求写一封邮件。
【详解】第一步:
审题:邮件 向美国朋友Alex介绍你家乡的城市重庆
人称:第三人称
时态:一般现在时
结构:总分法,分三部分,第一部分说明写信的目的,第二部分介绍重庆的具体情况,
第三部分希望Alex早日来重庆,并祝旅途愉快。
要点:
1. 说明写信的目的:向Alex介绍你的家乡重庆
2.介绍重庆的具体情况
①位于长江之滨,有3000年历史,3千万人口,面积8,2400平方公里,多山城市
②旅游景点很多,如解放碑、武隆天坑
③美食:重庆火锅
④风土人情:人们热情、友好
3.希望Alex早日到来并祝愿旅途愉快。
第二步:列提纲(重点词汇、短语)
introduce sth. to sb.;be located by;have a long history of;have a population of;cover an area of;scenic spot;be amazed at;have a good taste of;warm-hearted;friendly;a safe journey
第三步:连词成句
(1)I'm glad to learn that you are coming to my hometown Chongqing.
(2)I would like to introduce it to you.
(3)The city of Chongqing is located by the Yangtze River .
(4) It has a long history of about 3000 years.
(5)It has a population of 30 million.
(6) It covers an area of 82,400 ㎞ .
(7) It is also a mountainous city.
(8)There are many scenic spots in my home town.
(9)You will be amazed at their special scenery.
(10)You are sure to have a good taste of Chongqing hotpot.
(11) People here are also warm-hearted and friendly.
(12) I will be your guide to travel around.
(13)Wish you a safe journey!
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型,注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
将第二个句子改写,用短语with a history of表达,连接下面两个句子
(3)The city of Chongqing is located by the Yangtze River.
(4) It has a long history of about 3000 years.
→The city of Chongqing is located by the Yangtze River with a long history of about 3000 years.
将第二个句子用现在分词作状语,连接下面两个句子
(5)It has a population of 30 million.
(6) It covers an area of 82,400 ㎞ .
→It has a population of 30 million, covering an area of 82,400 ㎞ .
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次,增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】
范文要点全面,结构清晰,层次分明,上下文连贯,在表达时用到了很多高级词汇,如 introduce sth. to sb.;be located by;have a long history of;have a population of;cover an area of;scenic spot;be amazed at;have a good taste of等;复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次,如
现在分词作状语的运用It has a population of 30 million, covering an area of 82,400 ㎞ ;there be 句型的运用There are many historical spots in my home town,;祈使句的运用,使句子简洁Welcome to Chongqing ! … Wish you a safe journey!等。
8.Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. On behalf of our school, I'm sincerely inviting your school to take part in the upcoming Dragon Boat Race to be held on the Huangshan Lake on June 30th.
The event is scheduled to start at 2:00 p.m. and last for about three hours. To begin with, we will watch a short documentary of the ancient poet Qu Yuan, who drowned himself after being falsely accused of corruption. Knowing that Cambridge High School has an outstanding boating team, I'm sure we won't miss the wonderful Dragon Boat Race. It is a fantastic opportunity for our schools to develop close ties and to promote cultural exchange.
We'd appreciate hearing from your reply before June 27th.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。假定你是中华中学学生会主席李华,你校将于6月28日在和谐湖举行龙舟赛,请给友好学校复兴中学 (Fuxing High School) 写一封邀请信。
【详解】第一步:审题。
体裁:应用文。
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时为主。
要点:信的内容包括:
(1)写信目的;
(2)活动时间、地点和意义;
(3)回复时间:2021年6月25日前。
第二步:列重点词语,词组(注意好词的使用)
如on behalf of;take part in;be begin with;be accused of;hear from等等。
第三步:连词成句(注意好句型的使用,如非谓语动词,复合句,注意拼写和时态问题)
第四步:连句成篇(注意衔接词的使用)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);
3.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第五步:润色修改。
【点睛】本文内容完整,要点齐全,语言规范,词数适当,段落分布合理。作者在文中较多使用主从复合句,如On behalf of our school, I'm sincerely inviting your school to take part in the upcoming Dragon Boat Race to be held on the Huangshan Lake on June 30th.使用了不定式的被动式;To begin with, we will watch a short documentary of the ancient poet Qu Yuan, who drowned himself after being falsely accused of corruption.使用了定语从句。主从复合句的使用,使得文章的句式灵活多变,为文章增加了色彩。
9.I'm writing to invite you to watch a documentary about Chinese tea culture, which will be shown in the City Library from 9 a.m. to 11 a.m. this Sunday.
It's said that this documentary is in Chinese, with English subtitles. Moreover, the history of tea as a drink in China will be talked about in the documentary, as well as the important role tea plays in foreign trade as a commercial product. I'm sure this documentary will contribute a lot to your understanding of Chinese tea culture.
Looking forward to your reply.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写信,邀请他来你市图书馆观看中国茶文化的纪录片。
【详解】体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时为主
结构:分总
要求:
1. 播放时间、地点;
2.纪录片的主要内容。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
invite sb. to do sth./ be interested in/ talk about/ theme/ be focused on/ contribute to/ look forward to/ play a role in/ have a better understanding of
第三步:连词成句
1. I'm writing to invite you to watch a documentary about Chinese tea culture, which will be shown in the City Library from 9 a.m. to 11 a.m. this Sunday.
2. It's said that this documentary is in Chinese, with English subtitles.
3.Moreover, the history of tea as a drink in China will be talked about in the documentary, as well as the important role tea plays in foreign trade as a commercial product.
4. I'm sure this documentary will make you have a better understanding of Chinese tea culture.
5. Looking forward to your reply.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句,例如:I'm writing to invite you to watch a documentary about Chinese tea culture, which will be shown in the City Library from 9 a.m. to 11 a.m. this Sunday.中which引导非限制性定语从句。
10.Dear Mr. James,
I'm writing to tell you that an English speech contest will be held in the lecture hall on September 30 and we would like to invite you to be one of the judges of the contest.
The speech contest with the theme "My Motherland and Me" is intended to arouse students' patriotic enthusiasm. Inspired by the activity, contestants will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland.
Hopefully, you will accept the invitation and make necessary comments for the contest.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,告知外籍教师 James 演讲比赛的有关内容,并邀请他当评委。。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
要求:
1.告知比赛时间和地点
2.举办活动的目的和意义
3.邀请他担任评委
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
hold; invite; judge; be intended to; arouse; enthusiasm; inspire; be motivated to; express; determination; make contribution to; invitation; comment; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I'm writing to tell you that an English speech contest will be held in the lecture hall on September 30.
2. We would like to invite you to be one of the judges of the contest.
3. The speech contest with the theme "My Motherland and Me" is intended to arouse students’ patriotic enthusiasm.
4. Inspired by the activity, contestants will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland.
5. Hopefully, you will accept the invitation and make necessary comments for the contest.
6. Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, Not only…but (also)…, Including
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, But, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,on the other hand…, Some…,while others…,As for, So…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些地道的表达,如:arouse students' patriotic enthusiasm, make contributions to the motherland。还使用了分词结构如 Inspired by the activity, contestants will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。