江苏高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信10篇（含解析）
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感谢信/祝贺信
1．假定你是李华，春节期间你和朋友Mike一起出游，你刚收到他发给你的照片。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 收到照片表示感谢；
2. 回顾一起度过的时光；
3. 邀请他周末来家作客。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下各式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假定你是红星高中学生会主席李华，你校交换生 David 上周五面向全体师生作了题为“学英语，讲中国故事”的演讲，反响十分热烈，请你用英语给他写一封邮件表示祝贺和感谢，内容包括：
1. 祝贺演讲成功；
2. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony在你因病住院期间经常在网上辅导你学英语，并鼓励你积极面对病情。请写封邮件表示感谢，内容包括：
1.说明写信目的；
2.回顾Tony对你的帮助；
3.再次表达谢意。
注意：
1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2.词数80左右。
Dear Tony,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Philip送给你一本英语读物 Mama’s Bank Account，你读后收获颇多。请你给他写一封email，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.分享阅读收获。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．假定你是李华，在美国孔子学院（Confucius Institute）任教三年后即将回国，请用英文给同事们、同学们写一篇感谢信。要点如下：
1. 对任教生活的怀念；2. 对同事们、同学们的感谢；3. 对同事们、同学们的祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we’ll have to say goodbye. How time flies!
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，得知你的英国好友Eric在他所在城市举办的主题为“保护世界野生动植物”的海报设计大赛中荣获一等奖。请给Eric写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.祝贺他获奖；
2.肯定他付出的努力；
3.美好祝愿。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Eric,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack在“汉语桥”（Chinese Bridge Competition）中文比赛中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 肯定Jack付出的努力；
3. 赠送中国四大名著小说。
注意：
1. 词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的英国好友Kate正在中国交换学习。近日Kate发来邮件说她在学校举办的剪纸比赛中获得了一等奖，请你给她写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 向她表示祝贺；
2. 分析获奖原因。
注意：1. 参考词汇：剪纸比赛 paper-cutting contest
2. 写作词数应为80左右。
9．假定你是新华中学的学生李华，上周日下午不慎把书包遗失在操场上，里面有学生证、手机、钱包等物品，你校外教Mr.Smith捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假定你是李华，高中毕业了，你打算给自己的中学英语老师Mary写封信，向她表示感谢。内容包括：
1.她给你带来的变化；
2.带来变化的原因和例子；
3.希望成为终身朋友。
注意：1.书面整洁，词数80左右。
2.要点完整，没有遗漏。
3.层次分明，行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
1．One possible version:
Dear Mike,
How are you Thank you for sending me the photos that bring back those wonderful memories.
The time we spent together during the Spring Festival was just incredible. We woke up early to see the sunrise over the sea. On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was impressive indeed. And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home. I really had a great time.
I’d like to invite you over this weekend. It will be a chance for you to meet my family. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mike回一封邮件，内容包括：收到照片表示感谢、回顾一起度过的时光、邀请他周末来家作客。
【详解】1.词汇积累
难以置信的：incredible →unbelievable
真正地：truly→authentically
玩得愉快：have a great time → have fun
机会：chance →opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It will be a chance for you to meet my family.
拓展句：It will be a chance that you will meet my family.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was impressive indeed.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home.（运用what引导的主语从句，省略了关系代词的定语从句）
2．Dear David,
I’m just writing to say congratulations on your fantastic speech last Friday. It was not an easy task and I’m glad it turned out to be a great success.
You were well prepared and the content was easy to follow. What’s more, you also thought about the questions we Chinese students would have. All of us were really impressed. Thanks to your instructions and encouragement, I’m sure everyone in our school is more enthusiastic about learning English and promoting Chinese culture now.
Thank you again for sharing wonderful ideas with us. We look forward to your next presentation.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给校交换生David写一封邮件，对他上周五面向全体师生作的题为“学英语，讲中国故事”的演讲表示祝贺和感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→happy
理解：follow→understand
而且：What’s more→Besides
多亏了：Thanks to→Owing to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m just writing to say congratulations on your fantastic speech last Friday.
拓展句：I’m just writing to say congratulations on the fantastic speech that you made last Friday.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What’s more, you also thought about the questions we Chinese students would have.（由省略连词that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】Thanks to your instructions and encouragement, I’m sure everyone in our school is more enthusiastic about learning English and promoting Chinese culture now.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）
3．Dear Tony,
I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your help and encouragement during my stay in hospital.
Undoubtedly, if it were not for the fact that you helped me learn English online every day, I couldn’t have made my English study go smoothly as usual. It’s your constant encouragement and positive attitude towards life that guide me out of low spirits and help me deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound way.
Many thanks to you again. Wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony在你因病住院期间经常在网上辅导你学英语，并鼓励你积极面对病情。请写封邮件表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude→appreciation
无疑地：undoubtedly→doubtlessly
进展顺利：go smoothly→get along well
应对：deal with→do with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your help and encouragement during my stay in hospital.
拓展句：I’m writing to express my gratitude to you because you helped and encouraged me during my stay in hospital.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Undoubtedly, if it were not for the fact that you helped me learn English online every day, I couldn’t have made my English study go smoothly as usual. （运用了虚拟语气，that引导同位语从句）
【高分句型2】 It’s your constant encouragement and positive attitude towards life that guide me out of low spirits and help me deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound way.（运用了强调句型）
4．Dear Philip,
I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for the English original novel you mailed to me.
I benefited a lot from Mama’s Bank Account, which is a story for both children and adults. I was deeply moved by the mother’s love for her family, which brought my inner sincerity and pure innocence back. Moreover, this book made me well acquainted with a splendid culture of English, which laid a solid foundation for my English learning.
Thank you again for your generous present.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给朋友Philip写封邮件，对他给自己英语读物表示感谢，并介绍自己的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：convey→express
感动：touch→move
此外：what’s more→moreover
由衷的：sincere→heartfelt
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank you again for your generous present.
拓展句：Thank you again for the generous present that you sent to me.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for the English original novel you mailed to me.（运用了省略关系代词which/that的定语从句）
[高分句型2] I benefited a lot from Mama’s Bank Account, which is a story for both children and adults.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．Dear teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we’ll have to say goodbye. How time flies! Now It’s really hard for me to put my feelings into words. The past three years has been really a wonderful journey, full of laughter and tears.
To make Confucius Institute more powerful and fruitful, our great teachers and dear students contributed the time, energy, love and the whole heart. It’s time to recall those beautiful days which we spent together. You are the very person that gives me a hand when necessary. Here, I’m extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers and students, have done for me. It’ll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe!
That’s all. Thank you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生向美国孔子学院的同事们、同学们写一篇感谢信，写下对任教生活的怀念，以及对同事们、同学们的感谢与祝福。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
充满：be full of→be filled with
给予某人帮助：give sb. a hand→lend sb. a hand
非常：extremely→exceedingly
感激的：grateful→thankful
2. 句式拓展
简单句变拓展句
原句：The past three years has been really a wonderful journey, full of laughter and tears.
拓展句：The past three years has been really a wonderful journey, which is full of laughter and tears.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Now It’s really hard for me to put my feelings into words.（运用了it作形式主语，不定式作真正的主语）
【高分句型2】It’s time to recall those beautiful days which we spent together.（运用了which引导的定语从句）
【高分句型3】You are the very person that gives me a hand when necessary.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
6．Dear Eric,
Learning that you were awarded first prize in the poster design competition held in your city, with the theme “Protecting the World’s Wildlife”, I’m writing to offer my congratulations to you.
I think it is a prize that you deserve. First of all, you have a talent for art. Secondly, your rich imagination is one of the advantages over other competitors. Furthermore, you have been interested in wildlife from an early age, which makes your work stand out among the posters.
Please accept my congratulations again. I wish you every success in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“英国好友Eric在他所在城市举办的主题为‘保护世界野生动植物’的海报设计大赛中荣获一等奖”一事，给Eric写一封电子邮件，肯定他付出的努力，向他表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
对……有天赋：have a talent for→have a gift for
此外：furthermore→what’s more
对……感兴趣：be interested in→take interest in
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：I wish you every success in the future.
拓展句：May you succeed in the future.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you were awarded first prize in the poster design competition held in your city, with the theme “Protecting the World’s Wildlife”, I’m writing to offer my congratulations to you. (运用了现在分词作状语，that引导的宾语从句和过去分词短语做后置定语)
【高分句型2】Furthermore, you have been interested in wildlife from an early age, which makes your work stand out among the posters. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．Dear Jack,
Knowing that you won first prize in the Chinese Bridge Competition, I feel very delighted. Congratulations to you.
As is known to all, Chinese is one of the most difficult languages to learn. It’s really amazing for a foreigner to learn and speak Chinese so well. Since skill comes only with practice, patience, and persistence, you must have made great efforts to make it. How great you are! I have already delivered a set of China’s four great classic novels to you. I hope it can be of some help to you in learning Chinese.
I’m looking forward to your greater progress in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Jack写一封邮件，祝贺他在“汉语桥”（Chinese Bridge Competition）中文比赛中获得一等奖，同时肯定他付出的努力并赠送中国四大名著小说。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted →happy
寄、送：delivered → sent
努力做：make great efforts to do → do your best to do
有帮助的：be of some help → be helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Knowing that you won first prize in the Chinese Bridge Competition, I feel very delighted.
拓展句：Because I know you won first prize in the Chinese Bridge Competition, I feel very delighted.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s really amazing for a foreigner to learn and speak Chinese so well.（运用了it 做形式主语）
【高分句型2】Since skill comes only with practice, patience, and persistence, you must have made great efforts to make it.（运用了since引导状语从句）
8．Good news travels fast. Really delighted to know that you won first prize in the paper cutting contest for exchange students in your school, I am writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news. As your best friend, I am proud of you! I think one of the reasons you get the prize is your love and talent for Chinese folk arts， which left me with deep impression. Another is that you practice constantly，which makes your paper-cutting lifelike.
I hope you can teach me how to make paper-cutting. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求写一篇应用文。要求考生写一封回信，对你英国好友Kate在学校举办的剪纸比赛中获得了一等奖表示祝贺并分析获奖原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
表达：express→show
真诚的：sincere→earnest
天赋：talent→gift
希望：hope→look forward to
2.句式拓展
原句： Really delighted to know that you won first prize in the paper cutting contest for exchange students in your school, I am writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
拓展句：As I am delighted to know that you won first prize in the paper cutting contest for exchange students in your school, I am writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1.]You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news.（how引导的宾语从句以及when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2.] I think one of the reasons you get the prize is your love and talent for Chinese folk arts， which left me with deep impression.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
9．Dear Mr.Smith，
I’m Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I’m writing this letter to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday afternoon, after I played basketball with my friends on the playground, I left my schoolbag there owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student’s ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found, where I knew it was you who had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in.
It’s such a great kindness that I’m extremely grateful to you. You did set a good example to us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生外教Mr.Smith写一封感谢信，感谢他把你的书包捡到后上交给学校。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→vital
告知：inform→notify
感激的：grateful→thankful
因为：owing to→due to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School.
拓展句：I’m Li Hua, who is a student from Xinhua Middle School.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was worried because my student’s ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found, where I knew it was you who had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in.(运用了that引导的宾语从句，where引导的非限制性定语从句和强调句)
10．Dear Mary,
I am writing just to express my sincere gratitude to you, a best teacher in my heart. Had I met you in my senior two term, I wouldn’t have achieved so much in my English leaning.
Before senior two, English was just a nightmare to me. However hard I tried, I just couldn’t conquer this mountain. Then, that year, there came you, with your awesome English ability and advanced teaching notion. Your learning by doing style saved me, and many students like me as well.
Meeting you is like meeting a confidant. I hope to keep in touch with you throughout my life. Can I have the honor
Yours,
Li Hua.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给自己的中学英语老师Mary写封信，向她表示感谢，感谢老师给你带来的变化，阐述带来变化的原因和例子，并希望与老师成为终身朋友。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere→genuine
让人惊叹的：awesome→amazing
想法、观念：notion→belief
与……保持联系：keep in touch with→keep in contact with
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Had I met you in my senior two term, I wouldn’t have achieved so much in my English leaning.
拓展句：If I hadn’t met you in my senior two term, I wouldn’t have achieved so much in my English leaning.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Had I met you in my senior two term I wouldn’t have achieved so much in my English leaning.（运用了虚拟语气的倒装句）
【高分句型2】However hard I tried, I just couldn’t conquer this mountain. （运用了让步状语从句）
1．假定你是李华，春节期间你和朋友Mike一起出游，你刚收到他发给你的照片。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 收到照片表示感谢；
2. 回顾一起度过的时光；
3. 邀请他周末来家作客。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下各式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假定你是红星高中学生会主席李华，你校交换生 David 上周五面向全体师生作了题为“学英语，讲中国故事”的演讲，反响十分热烈，请你用英语给他写一封邮件表示祝贺和感谢，内容包括：
1. 祝贺演讲成功；
2. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony在你因病住院期间经常在网上辅导你学英语，并鼓励你积极面对病情。请写封邮件表示感谢，内容包括：
1.说明写信目的；
2.回顾Tony对你的帮助；
3.再次表达谢意。
注意：
1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2.词数80左右。
Dear Tony,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Philip送给你一本英语读物 Mama’s Bank Account，你读后收获颇多。请你给他写一封email，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.分享阅读收获。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．假定你是李华，在美国孔子学院（Confucius Institute）任教三年后即将回国，请用英文给同事们、同学们写一篇感谢信。要点如下：
1. 对任教生活的怀念；2. 对同事们、同学们的感谢；3. 对同事们、同学们的祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we’ll have to say goodbye. How time flies!
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，得知你的英国好友Eric在他所在城市举办的主题为“保护世界野生动植物”的海报设计大赛中荣获一等奖。请给Eric写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.祝贺他获奖；
2.肯定他付出的努力；
3.美好祝愿。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Eric,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack在“汉语桥”（Chinese Bridge Competition）中文比赛中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 肯定Jack付出的努力；
3. 赠送中国四大名著小说。
注意：
1. 词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的英国好友Kate正在中国交换学习。近日Kate发来邮件说她在学校举办的剪纸比赛中获得了一等奖，请你给她写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 向她表示祝贺；
2. 分析获奖原因。
注意：1. 参考词汇：剪纸比赛 paper-cutting contest
2. 写作词数应为80左右。
9．假定你是新华中学的学生李华，上周日下午不慎把书包遗失在操场上，里面有学生证、手机、钱包等物品，你校外教Mr.Smith捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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10．假定你是李华，高中毕业了，你打算给自己的中学英语老师Mary写封信，向她表示感谢。内容包括：
1.她给你带来的变化；
2.带来变化的原因和例子；
3.希望成为终身朋友。
注意：1.书面整洁，词数80左右。
2.要点完整，没有遗漏。
3.层次分明，行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
1．One possible version:
Dear Mike,
How are you Thank you for sending me the photos that bring back those wonderful memories.
The time we spent together during the Spring Festival was just incredible. We woke up early to see the sunrise over the sea. On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was impressive indeed. And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home. I really had a great time.
I’d like to invite you over this weekend. It will be a chance for you to meet my family. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mike回一封邮件，内容包括：收到照片表示感谢、回顾一起度过的时光、邀请他周末来家作客。
【详解】1.词汇积累
难以置信的：incredible →unbelievable
真正地：truly→authentically
玩得愉快：have a great time → have fun
机会：chance →opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It will be a chance for you to meet my family.
拓展句：It will be a chance that you will meet my family.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was impressive indeed.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home.（运用what引导的主语从句，省略了关系代词的定语从句）
2．Dear David,
I’m just writing to say congratulations on your fantastic speech last Friday. It was not an easy task and I’m glad it turned out to be a great success.
You were well prepared and the content was easy to follow. What’s more, you also thought about the questions we Chinese students would have. All of us were really impressed. Thanks to your instructions and encouragement, I’m sure everyone in our school is more enthusiastic about learning English and promoting Chinese culture now.
Thank you again for sharing wonderful ideas with us. We look forward to your next presentation.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给校交换生David写一封邮件，对他上周五面向全体师生作的题为“学英语，讲中国故事”的演讲表示祝贺和感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→happy
理解：follow→understand
而且：What’s more→Besides
多亏了：Thanks to→Owing to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m just writing to say congratulations on your fantastic speech last Friday.
拓展句：I’m just writing to say congratulations on the fantastic speech that you made last Friday.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What’s more, you also thought about the questions we Chinese students would have.（由省略连词that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】Thanks to your instructions and encouragement, I’m sure everyone in our school is more enthusiastic about learning English and promoting Chinese culture now.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）
3．Dear Tony,
I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your help and encouragement during my stay in hospital.
Undoubtedly, if it were not for the fact that you helped me learn English online every day, I couldn’t have made my English study go smoothly as usual. It’s your constant encouragement and positive attitude towards life that guide me out of low spirits and help me deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound way.
Many thanks to you again. Wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony在你因病住院期间经常在网上辅导你学英语，并鼓励你积极面对病情。请写封邮件表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude→appreciation
无疑地：undoubtedly→doubtlessly
进展顺利：go smoothly→get along well
应对：deal with→do with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your help and encouragement during my stay in hospital.
拓展句：I’m writing to express my gratitude to you because you helped and encouraged me during my stay in hospital.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Undoubtedly, if it were not for the fact that you helped me learn English online every day, I couldn’t have made my English study go smoothly as usual. （运用了虚拟语气，that引导同位语从句）
【高分句型2】 It’s your constant encouragement and positive attitude towards life that guide me out of low spirits and help me deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound way.（运用了强调句型）
4．Dear Philip,
I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for the English original novel you mailed to me.
I benefited a lot from Mama’s Bank Account, which is a story for both children and adults. I was deeply moved by the mother’s love for her family, which brought my inner sincerity and pure innocence back. Moreover, this book made me well acquainted with a splendid culture of English, which laid a solid foundation for my English learning.
Thank you again for your generous present.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给朋友Philip写封邮件，对他给自己英语读物表示感谢，并介绍自己的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：convey→express
感动：touch→move
此外：what’s more→moreover
由衷的：sincere→heartfelt
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank you again for your generous present.
拓展句：Thank you again for the generous present that you sent to me.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for the English original novel you mailed to me.（运用了省略关系代词which/that的定语从句）
[高分句型2] I benefited a lot from Mama’s Bank Account, which is a story for both children and adults.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．Dear teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we’ll have to say goodbye. How time flies! Now It’s really hard for me to put my feelings into words. The past three years has been really a wonderful journey, full of laughter and tears.
To make Confucius Institute more powerful and fruitful, our great teachers and dear students contributed the time, energy, love and the whole heart. It’s time to recall those beautiful days which we spent together. You are the very person that gives me a hand when necessary. Here, I’m extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers and students, have done for me. It’ll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe!
That’s all. Thank you.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生向美国孔子学院的同事们、同学们写一篇感谢信，写下对任教生活的怀念，以及对同事们、同学们的感谢与祝福。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
充满：be full of→be filled with
给予某人帮助：give sb. a hand→lend sb. a hand
非常：extremely→exceedingly
感激的：grateful→thankful
2. 句式拓展
简单句变拓展句
原句：The past three years has been really a wonderful journey, full of laughter and tears.
拓展句：The past three years has been really a wonderful journey, which is full of laughter and tears.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Now It’s really hard for me to put my feelings into words.（运用了it作形式主语，不定式作真正的主语）
【高分句型2】It’s time to recall those beautiful days which we spent together.（运用了which引导的定语从句）
【高分句型3】You are the very person that gives me a hand when necessary.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
6．Dear Eric,
Learning that you were awarded first prize in the poster design competition held in your city, with the theme “Protecting the World’s Wildlife”, I’m writing to offer my congratulations to you.
I think it is a prize that you deserve. First of all, you have a talent for art. Secondly, your rich imagination is one of the advantages over other competitors. Furthermore, you have been interested in wildlife from an early age, which makes your work stand out among the posters.
Please accept my congratulations again. I wish you every success in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“英国好友Eric在他所在城市举办的主题为‘保护世界野生动植物’的海报设计大赛中荣获一等奖”一事，给Eric写一封电子邮件，肯定他付出的努力，向他表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
对……有天赋：have a talent for→have a gift for
此外：furthermore→what’s more
对……感兴趣：be interested in→take interest in
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：I wish you every success in the future.
拓展句：May you succeed in the future.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you were awarded first prize in the poster design competition held in your city, with the theme “Protecting the World’s Wildlife”, I’m writing to offer my congratulations to you. (运用了现在分词作状语，that引导的宾语从句和过去分词短语做后置定语)
【高分句型2】Furthermore, you have been interested in wildlife from an early age, which makes your work stand out among the posters. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．Dear Jack,
Knowing that you won first prize in the Chinese Bridge Competition, I feel very delighted. Congratulations to you.
As is known to all, Chinese is one of the most difficult languages to learn. It’s really amazing for a foreigner to learn and speak Chinese so well. Since skill comes only with practice, patience, and persistence, you must have made great efforts to make it. How great you are! I have already delivered a set of China’s four great classic novels to you. I hope it can be of some help to you in learning Chinese.
I’m looking forward to your greater progress in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Jack写一封邮件，祝贺他在“汉语桥”（Chinese Bridge Competition）中文比赛中获得一等奖，同时肯定他付出的努力并赠送中国四大名著小说。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted →happy
寄、送：delivered → sent
努力做：make great efforts to do → do your best to do
有帮助的：be of some help → be helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Knowing that you won first prize in the Chinese Bridge Competition, I feel very delighted.
拓展句：Because I know you won first prize in the Chinese Bridge Competition, I feel very delighted.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s really amazing for a foreigner to learn and speak Chinese so well.（运用了it 做形式主语）
【高分句型2】Since skill comes only with practice, patience, and persistence, you must have made great efforts to make it.（运用了since引导状语从句）
8．Good news travels fast. Really delighted to know that you won first prize in the paper cutting contest for exchange students in your school, I am writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news. As your best friend, I am proud of you! I think one of the reasons you get the prize is your love and talent for Chinese folk arts， which left me with deep impression. Another is that you practice constantly，which makes your paper-cutting lifelike.
I hope you can teach me how to make paper-cutting. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求写一篇应用文。要求考生写一封回信，对你英国好友Kate在学校举办的剪纸比赛中获得了一等奖表示祝贺并分析获奖原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
表达：express→show
真诚的：sincere→earnest
天赋：talent→gift
希望：hope→look forward to
2.句式拓展
原句： Really delighted to know that you won first prize in the paper cutting contest for exchange students in your school, I am writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
拓展句：As I am delighted to know that you won first prize in the paper cutting contest for exchange students in your school, I am writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1.]You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news.（how引导的宾语从句以及when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2.] I think one of the reasons you get the prize is your love and talent for Chinese folk arts， which left me with deep impression.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
9．Dear Mr.Smith，
I’m Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I’m writing this letter to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday afternoon, after I played basketball with my friends on the playground, I left my schoolbag there owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student’s ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found, where I knew it was you who had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in.
It’s such a great kindness that I’m extremely grateful to you. You did set a good example to us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生外教Mr.Smith写一封感谢信，感谢他把你的书包捡到后上交给学校。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→vital
告知：inform→notify
感激的：grateful→thankful
因为：owing to→due to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School.
拓展句：I’m Li Hua, who is a student from Xinhua Middle School.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was worried because my student’s ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found, where I knew it was you who had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in.(运用了that引导的宾语从句，where引导的非限制性定语从句和强调句)
10．Dear Mary,
I am writing just to express my sincere gratitude to you, a best teacher in my heart. Had I met you in my senior two term, I wouldn’t have achieved so much in my English leaning.
Before senior two, English was just a nightmare to me. However hard I tried, I just couldn’t conquer this mountain. Then, that year, there came you, with your awesome English ability and advanced teaching notion. Your learning by doing style saved me, and many students like me as well.
Meeting you is like meeting a confidant. I hope to keep in touch with you throughout my life. Can I have the honor
Yours,
Li Hua.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给自己的中学英语老师Mary写封信，向她表示感谢，感谢老师给你带来的变化，阐述带来变化的原因和例子，并希望与老师成为终身朋友。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere→genuine
让人惊叹的：awesome→amazing
想法、观念：notion→belief
与……保持联系：keep in touch with→keep in contact with
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Had I met you in my senior two term, I wouldn’t have achieved so much in my English leaning.
拓展句：If I hadn’t met you in my senior two term, I wouldn’t have achieved so much in my English leaning.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Had I met you in my senior two term I wouldn’t have achieved so much in my English leaning.（运用了虚拟语气的倒装句）
【高分句型2】However hard I tried, I just couldn’t conquer this mountain. （运用了让步状语从句）