浙江高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信（含解析）
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感谢信/祝贺信
1．假定你是李华，上周日你不慎在操场丢失一个书包，里面有学生证、钱包等物品。你校外教 Mr. Smith 捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 描述事情经过；
3. 再次表达感谢。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．假如你是李华，上周在英国参加了你校组织的“文化交流周”，并住在Kelly家里。你给在英国期间认识的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信，内容包括：
1.活动中的收获；
2.难忘在Kelly家的美好日子；
3.感谢她送你的英文词典。
提示词：文化交流周Cultural Exchange Week
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3．假如你是李华，最近刚到美国一所高中求学，在学习生活上遇到了问题，想请问该校的学习顾问Mr.Brown求助。请你写封邮件，内容包括：
1.描述问题。
2.请求帮助
3.表示感谢
注意：
1.字数80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．假如你是李华，因为家庭经济困难影响到学业，幸好Mr.Green资助了你并提供了一些阅读资料，对此请你写一封感谢信。
内容包括：
1.表达感谢并说明你的现状；
2.对考上大学充满信心；
3.无法亲自表达感谢，希望Mr.Green邮寄几张照片。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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5．假如你叫李华，得知自己在浙江省英语大赛中获全国一等奖之后，要给外教White先生写一封英文信，内容包括：
1.分享喜讯；
2.感谢帮助；
3.谈谈今后的打算。
注意：1.词数80左右
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假定你是李华，你班正在为即将举行的校英语戏剧节（English Play Festival）排练节目The Million Pound Bank Note，请你给外教Mr. Brown写一封求助邮件，要点如下：
1. 排练时间、地点；
2. 请他指导台词；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：台词lines n.；排练rehearsal n.
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7．你是李华，就读于杭州某高中，熟悉中国历史，喜欢传统音乐。请你写信给《英文早报》的编辑Bob，希望结识一位来自英语国家的笔友(pen pal)，以便相互学习对方的语言和文化。
内容要点：1. 写信目的；2. 自我介绍；3. 表示感谢。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．假定你是李华，你所在的红星中学要征集一封英文感谢信，以致敬奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒第一线的医护人员。请你写一封感谢信参与投稿，内容包括：
1. 表达谢意；2. 个人感受；3. 表达信心。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：新型冠状病毒novel coronavirus
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9．假设你是李华，此时的你已经高中毕业考取大学，今天是感恩节，回顾高中三年的学习生活令你感慨万千，同学情，师生情，这些都弥足珍贵，请你给你最喜欢的同学或是老师写一封信，要点如下：
1. 写信目的；
2. 你们之间难忘的事情；
3. 再次表示感谢与表达良好的祝愿。
注意：词数100左右。可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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10．假定你叫李华，了解到在海水稻研发成功后，袁隆平又成功种植出全球首例沙漠水稻，为解决沙漠地区粮食短缺的问题和改善沙漠的生态环境做出巨大贡献。请你用英文写一封信，向他表示祝贺。内容包括:
1. 表达你的愉悦心情；
2. 向他表示祝贺；
3. 决心向他学习。
注意:1. 词数100左右(开头已经给出，不计入总词数)。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:海水稻sea rice；粮食短缺food shortage；生态环境ecological environment
Dear Dr Yuan,
It’s my great honor to write to you.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1．Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 2. I’m writing to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss. I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
Please accept my cordial thanks for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封感谢信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 写信目的；
2. 描述事情经过；
3. 再次表达感谢。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
thank sb. for，leave sth. on the playground，owing to，worried，at a loss，inform that…，beyond description
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing Io thank you for returning my schoolbag.
2. Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness.
3. I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me.
4. Just as I was at a loss.
5. I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag.
6. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition （供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but （供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]
What worried me most was that I left my schoolbag with my student's ID card, wallet and some documents in it.使用了what主语从句和that引导的表语从句。
[高分句型2]
Someone told me that you have found my schoolbag which was at the school's Lost and Found 使用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的定语从句。
2．Dear Kelly,
I've been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in England.
Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends.What's more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I'll never forget the days we spent together.
Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offered me as a gift. It's a great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.
Welcome to China when it's convenient for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是感谢信。
【详解】第1步：本文是一篇感谢信。文章给出了提纲式汉语提示。成文时应注意以下几点：(1) 交流活动中的收获；(2)难忘在Kelly家的美好日子；(3)感谢她送你的英文词典。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：thank you for doing sth; enjoyed oneself ;make new friends; make full use of等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型一】I am writing to tell you how greatly I appreciate all you have done for me我写信是想告诉你我是多么感激你为我所做的一切。运用how引导的宾语从句。
【高分句型二】Thank you very much for your kind hospitality you showed me during my visit. 非常感谢您在我访问期间对我的盛情款待。运用了省略that或者which的定语从句。
3．Dear Mr. Brown,
With the approaching of the English Play Festival, I'm writing to ask a favor of you. All my classmates are currently devoted to the rehearsal of The Million Pound Bank Note and our next rehearsal is scheduled in Room101 at 7o'clok this Sunday. As nonnative speakers,we are in desperate need of the guidance on lines from someone like you, who has impressed us with profound knowledge and deep insight into the English literature.
We would appreciate it if you could be present and offer some suggestions. Looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours，
LiHua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，最近刚到美国一所高中求学，在学习生活上遇到了问题，想请问该校的学习顾问Mr.Brown求助。请你写封邮件，内容包括：1.描述问题。2.请求帮助3.表示感谢
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）： the approaching of（临近）；ask a favor of（寻求帮助）；be in need of （需要）；be present（出席）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题，此处文章主要应用一般现在时和现在完成时。
第4步：造句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】[高分句型一]
With the coming of the English Play Festival, I'm writing to turn to you for help.随着英语话剧节的到来，我现在写信向您寻求帮助。运用了介宾短语作原因状语。
[高分句型二]
As nonnative speakers,we urgently need the guidance on lines from someone like you ,who has made a deep impression on us for profound knowledge and deep insight into the English literature.作为非母语者，我们迫切需要一个像您一样的在线指导员，您在英语文学方面的渊博知识和深入了解给我们留下了深刻印象。运用了who引导非限制性定语从句。
4．Dear Mr. Green,
How is everything going I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you. You helped me when I was in great trouble. Thanks to your reading materials, I not only catch up with my classmates but also learn more knowledge. These days, I have been busy preparing for College Entrance Examination, and I have confidence that I will be admitted into my dream school. However, to my regret, I can’t show you my gratitude in person, so would you mind sending me some of your photos Thus I can know who you are. I believe that I will pay a visit to you someday in the future. Thanks again for your help. Wish you happy every day.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，因为家庭经济困难影响到学业，幸好Mr.Green资助了你并提供了一些阅读资料，对此请你写一封感谢信。内容包括：1.)表达感谢并说明你的现状；2.)对考上大学充满信心；3.)无法亲自表达感谢，希望Mr.Green邮寄几张照片。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：thanks to（多亏）; catch up with（赶上）; in trouble（处于麻烦中）; express（表达）; sincere（衷心的）; be busy doing sth.（忙于做某事）; be admitted into（被……录取）; pay a visit to（拜访）; to one’s regret（令某人遗憾的是）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】[高分句型一]
It was you who gave me timely help when I was in great trouble.就是您在我艰难的时候给了我及时的帮助。句中使用了强调句It was+被强调部分+ who。
[高分句型一]
Thanks to your reading materials, not only do I catch up with my classmates but also learn more knowledge.多亏了您的阅读材料，我不仅赶上了我的同学，还学到了更多的知识。句中把not only置于句首，所以进行了部分倒装。
5．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua. I’m delighted to tell you that I got the first prize of English competition in Zhejiang Province.
I’m grateful to you for your beneficial assistance. You greatly arouse my passion for English and spark my way of thinking. What you did contributes a lot to my glory. Words can’t convey my appreciation.
Looking into the future, my plan is as follows. I will possess strong determination to take steps towards learning pronunciation and devote myself to writing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：假如你叫李华，得知自己在浙江省英语大赛中获全国一等奖之后，要给外教White先生写一封英文信，内容包括：1.分享喜讯；2.感谢帮助；3.谈谈今后的打算。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be delighted to (感到高兴)；beneficial assistance (有益的帮助)；contribute…to (贡献…)；
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型一】I’m grateful to your beneficial assistance, which greatly arouses my passion for English and sparks my way of thinking. 非常感谢您对我的帮助，极大地激发了我对英语的热情，激发了我的思维方式。运用which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【高分句型二】I will possess such a strong determination that I can learn pronunciation and devote myself to writing. 我会有这样一个坚定的决心，学习发音，努力写作。运用such…that引导的结果状语从句。
6．
Dear Mr. Brown,
With the approaching of the English Play Festival, I’m writing to ask a favor of you.All my classmates are currently devoted to the rehearsal of The Million Pound Bank Note
and our next rehearsal is scheduled in Room 101 at 7 o'clock this Sunday. As nonnative speakers, we are in desperate need of the guidance on lines from someone like you, who
has impressed us with profound knowledge and deep insight into the English literature.
We would appreciate it if you could be present and offer some suggestions. Looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是求助信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你班正在为即将举行的校英语戏剧节（English Play Festival）排练节目The Million Pound Bank Note，你给外教Mr. Brown写一封求助邮件，要点如下：内容包括：1)排练时间、地点；2)请他指导台词；3) 表示感谢。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：with the approaching of (随着…...的接近)；ask a favor (请求一个帮助)；devoted to (献身于，专心于)；deep insight into (对…...有深刻理解)；look forward to( 盼望)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型一】 As the English Play Festival is comming, I’m writing to ask you for a help.随着英语戏剧节的临近，我正在信想请你帮个忙。这是一个As引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】we are in desperate need of people who can help us with English lines. You have a profound knowledge of English literature, and we hope you can do us a favor.我们急需英语台词方面帮助我们的人。你对英国文学有很深的了解，我们希望你能帮我们一个忙。第一句是一个关系代词who引导的定语从句。第二句中用到了固定词组have a knowledge of…。
7．Dear Bob,
My name is Li Hua, an international school student. I’m writing the letter to you to help me to find a pen pal. I’m outgoing and easy-going boy, so I am fond of making friends. Now I want to make a pen pal form English-speaking country, from whom I can make a good command of English language and culture. At the same time, I would like to share my favorite history and Chinese traditional music with him.
I would appreciate it if you could recommend a pen pal to me. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是书信类作文。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
要求：1. 写信目的；2. 自我介绍；3. 表示感谢。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be fond of; English-speaking country; make a good command of; share…with; appreciate; recommend
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m outgoing and easy-going boy, so I am fond of making friends.
2. Now I want to make a pen pal form English-speaking country, from whom I can make a good command of English language and culture.
3. I would like to share my favorite history and Chinese traditional music with him.
4. I would appreciate it if you could recommend a pen pal to me.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成文
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】【高分句型1】
I’m writing the letter to you so that you can help me to find a pen pal. 我写信给你，为了是你能帮我找一个笔友。运用so that引导的目的状语从句。
【高分句型2】
I would like one pen pal who I can share my favorite history and Chinese traditional music with. 我想要一个笔友，我可以和他分享我最爱的历史和中国传统音乐。运用who引导的定语从句。
8．Dear medical workers,
I am Li Hua from a senior High School. On behalf of my school, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you all for your devotion in the battle against the novel coronavirus.
During this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection, desperately rescue those infected. It is also you who make us build up our confidence to defeat the terrible virus.
Such few words can't fully convey our thankfulness for your great contributions. I'm definitely convinced that with our joint efforts, China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，准备向奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒第一线的医护人员致敬，请你用英语写一封英文感谢信向学校投稿，内容包括：1) 表达谢意；2) 个人感受；3) 表达信心。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：on behalf of (代表……)；devotion(贡献)；regardless of (不顾……)；infect(感染)；build up one’s confidence(建立信心)；convey (表达)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型1】On behalf of my school, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you who have made contributions to defending against the novel coronavirus. 我谨代表我校向你们表示衷心的感谢，感谢你们为抗击新型冠状病毒做出了贡献。who引导定语从句。
【高分句型2】My words are so shallow that I can't convey our thankfulness for your great contributions. 我的话太肤浅了，以至于无法表达我们对你们的巨大贡献的感激之情。so…that…（如此/太……以至于……）引导结果状语从句。
9．Dear Mrs Zhang,
I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you. You are the one who is willing to help me when I am in need.
One thing that happened in the second year of high school is still fresh in my mind.With the Midterm Examination around the corner, I was nervous and in low spirits. When I was at a loss and on the point of giving up, you asked me to go to your office. You comforted me and helped me analyze the reasons for my failure in the exam. Gradually, I learned how to adjust myself and keep calm in the examination room.
Mrs Zhang, I’m more than grateful for what you have done for me. Wish you happiness and good health.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是感谢信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，此时的你已经高中毕业考取大学，今天是感恩节，回顾高中三年的学习生活令你感慨万千，同学情，师生情，这些都弥足珍贵，请你给你最喜欢的同学或是老师写一封信，要点如下：1. 写信目的；2. 你们之间难忘的事情；3. 再次表示感谢与表达良好的祝愿。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：express my sincere gratitude (表达诚挚的感谢)；Midterm Examination (期中考试)；in low spirits (情绪低落)；at a loss (茫然)；on the point of(正要……的时候)；give up(放弃))等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型1】
You are the one who is willing to help me when I am in need.你是那个在我需要的时候愿意帮助我的人。运用who引导的定语从句。
【高分句型2】
One thing that happened in the second year of high school is still fresh in my mind. 高中二年级发生的一件事，我至今仍记忆犹新。运用that引导的定语从句。
10．Dear Dr Yuan,
It’s my great honor to write to you. I’m very excited to have got the news that after the success of the sea rice, your research on the desert rice has also enjoyed a brilliant success, ranking the first in the world. The desert rice will contribute to solving the problem of food shortage in the desert regions and improving the ecological environment.
Therefore, I’d like to send you my sincere congratulations. I know it’s all because of your years’ hard work and devotion to agriculture. And now your efforts have paid off at last.
You have set a good example to us. At present, I’m a student of high school and I hope I will achieve my dream of devoting myself to the rise of our country like you in the future. Thank you! Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，向袁隆平又成功种植出全球首例沙漠水稻表示祝贺。
【详解】这是一篇书信类作文。信中要求在了解到在海水稻研发成功后，袁隆平又成功种植出全球首例沙漠水稻，为解决沙漠地区粮食短缺的问题和改善沙漠的生态环境做出巨大贡献，请你就此向他表示祝贺。考生在写这封祝贺信时，要注意以下几点：
1.书信一般要开门见山，交代下写信件原因，便于读信人了解书信重点，点明这篇书信话题是关于“your research on the desert rice has also enjoyed a brilliant success.”。
2.要点要齐全。内容包括:1. 表达你的愉悦心情(I’m very excited to…)；2. 向他表示祝贺(I’d like to send you my sincere congratulations.)；3. 决心向他学习(I hope I will achieve my dream of devoting myself to the rise of our country like you in the future.)。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然。
3.注意文章要以一定的逻辑顺序进行叙述，一定要把要点叙述清楚，特别是祝贺的主题内容不能少。注意细节的处理，否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。
【点睛】本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，又体现了作者的写作能力。例如：enjoyed a brilliant success，contribute to和your efforts have paid off这样的短语简洁而有感召力。而ranking the first in the world.现在分词短语作状语和solving the problem of food shortage in the desert regions and improving the ecological environment.并列的动名词短语作宾语，它们的恰当运用，更彰显了作者驾驭语言的能力。
1．假定你是李华，上周日你不慎在操场丢失一个书包，里面有学生证、钱包等物品。你校外教 Mr. Smith 捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 描述事情经过；
3. 再次表达感谢。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．假如你是李华，上周在英国参加了你校组织的“文化交流周”，并住在Kelly家里。你给在英国期间认识的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信，内容包括：
1.活动中的收获；
2.难忘在Kelly家的美好日子；
3.感谢她送你的英文词典。
提示词：文化交流周Cultural Exchange Week
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3．假如你是李华，最近刚到美国一所高中求学，在学习生活上遇到了问题，想请问该校的学习顾问Mr.Brown求助。请你写封邮件，内容包括：
1.描述问题。
2.请求帮助
3.表示感谢
注意：
1.字数80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．假如你是李华，因为家庭经济困难影响到学业，幸好Mr.Green资助了你并提供了一些阅读资料，对此请你写一封感谢信。
内容包括：
1.表达感谢并说明你的现状；
2.对考上大学充满信心；
3.无法亲自表达感谢，希望Mr.Green邮寄几张照片。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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5．假如你叫李华，得知自己在浙江省英语大赛中获全国一等奖之后，要给外教White先生写一封英文信，内容包括：
1.分享喜讯；
2.感谢帮助；
3.谈谈今后的打算。
注意：1.词数80左右
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假定你是李华，你班正在为即将举行的校英语戏剧节（English Play Festival）排练节目The Million Pound Bank Note，请你给外教Mr. Brown写一封求助邮件，要点如下：
1. 排练时间、地点；
2. 请他指导台词；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：台词lines n.；排练rehearsal n.
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7．你是李华，就读于杭州某高中，熟悉中国历史，喜欢传统音乐。请你写信给《英文早报》的编辑Bob，希望结识一位来自英语国家的笔友(pen pal)，以便相互学习对方的语言和文化。
内容要点：1. 写信目的；2. 自我介绍；3. 表示感谢。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．假定你是李华，你所在的红星中学要征集一封英文感谢信，以致敬奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒第一线的医护人员。请你写一封感谢信参与投稿，内容包括：
1. 表达谢意；2. 个人感受；3. 表达信心。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：新型冠状病毒novel coronavirus
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9．假设你是李华，此时的你已经高中毕业考取大学，今天是感恩节，回顾高中三年的学习生活令你感慨万千，同学情，师生情，这些都弥足珍贵，请你给你最喜欢的同学或是老师写一封信，要点如下：
1. 写信目的；
2. 你们之间难忘的事情；
3. 再次表示感谢与表达良好的祝愿。
注意：词数100左右。可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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10．假定你叫李华，了解到在海水稻研发成功后，袁隆平又成功种植出全球首例沙漠水稻，为解决沙漠地区粮食短缺的问题和改善沙漠的生态环境做出巨大贡献。请你用英文写一封信，向他表示祝贺。内容包括:
1. 表达你的愉悦心情；
2. 向他表示祝贺；
3. 决心向他学习。
注意:1. 词数100左右(开头已经给出，不计入总词数)。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:海水稻sea rice；粮食短缺food shortage；生态环境ecological environment
Dear Dr Yuan,
It’s my great honor to write to you.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1．Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 2. I’m writing to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss. I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
Please accept my cordial thanks for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封感谢信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 写信目的；
2. 描述事情经过；
3. 再次表达感谢。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
thank sb. for，leave sth. on the playground，owing to，worried，at a loss，inform that…，beyond description
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing Io thank you for returning my schoolbag.
2. Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness.
3. I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me.
4. Just as I was at a loss.
5. I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag.
6. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition （供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but （供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]
What worried me most was that I left my schoolbag with my student's ID card, wallet and some documents in it.使用了what主语从句和that引导的表语从句。
[高分句型2]
Someone told me that you have found my schoolbag which was at the school's Lost and Found 使用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的定语从句。
2．Dear Kelly,
I've been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in England.
Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends.What's more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I'll never forget the days we spent together.
Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offered me as a gift. It's a great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.
Welcome to China when it's convenient for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是感谢信。
【详解】第1步：本文是一篇感谢信。文章给出了提纲式汉语提示。成文时应注意以下几点：(1) 交流活动中的收获；(2)难忘在Kelly家的美好日子；(3)感谢她送你的英文词典。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：thank you for doing sth; enjoyed oneself ;make new friends; make full use of等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型一】I am writing to tell you how greatly I appreciate all you have done for me我写信是想告诉你我是多么感激你为我所做的一切。运用how引导的宾语从句。
【高分句型二】Thank you very much for your kind hospitality you showed me during my visit. 非常感谢您在我访问期间对我的盛情款待。运用了省略that或者which的定语从句。
3．Dear Mr. Brown,
With the approaching of the English Play Festival, I'm writing to ask a favor of you. All my classmates are currently devoted to the rehearsal of The Million Pound Bank Note and our next rehearsal is scheduled in Room101 at 7o'clok this Sunday. As nonnative speakers,we are in desperate need of the guidance on lines from someone like you, who has impressed us with profound knowledge and deep insight into the English literature.
We would appreciate it if you could be present and offer some suggestions. Looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours，
LiHua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，最近刚到美国一所高中求学，在学习生活上遇到了问题，想请问该校的学习顾问Mr.Brown求助。请你写封邮件，内容包括：1.描述问题。2.请求帮助3.表示感谢
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）： the approaching of（临近）；ask a favor of（寻求帮助）；be in need of （需要）；be present（出席）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题，此处文章主要应用一般现在时和现在完成时。
第4步：造句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】[高分句型一]
With the coming of the English Play Festival, I'm writing to turn to you for help.随着英语话剧节的到来，我现在写信向您寻求帮助。运用了介宾短语作原因状语。
[高分句型二]
As nonnative speakers,we urgently need the guidance on lines from someone like you ,who has made a deep impression on us for profound knowledge and deep insight into the English literature.作为非母语者，我们迫切需要一个像您一样的在线指导员，您在英语文学方面的渊博知识和深入了解给我们留下了深刻印象。运用了who引导非限制性定语从句。
4．Dear Mr. Green,
How is everything going I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you. You helped me when I was in great trouble. Thanks to your reading materials, I not only catch up with my classmates but also learn more knowledge. These days, I have been busy preparing for College Entrance Examination, and I have confidence that I will be admitted into my dream school. However, to my regret, I can’t show you my gratitude in person, so would you mind sending me some of your photos Thus I can know who you are. I believe that I will pay a visit to you someday in the future. Thanks again for your help. Wish you happy every day.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，因为家庭经济困难影响到学业，幸好Mr.Green资助了你并提供了一些阅读资料，对此请你写一封感谢信。内容包括：1.)表达感谢并说明你的现状；2.)对考上大学充满信心；3.)无法亲自表达感谢，希望Mr.Green邮寄几张照片。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：thanks to（多亏）; catch up with（赶上）; in trouble（处于麻烦中）; express（表达）; sincere（衷心的）; be busy doing sth.（忙于做某事）; be admitted into（被……录取）; pay a visit to（拜访）; to one’s regret（令某人遗憾的是）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】[高分句型一]
It was you who gave me timely help when I was in great trouble.就是您在我艰难的时候给了我及时的帮助。句中使用了强调句It was+被强调部分+ who。
[高分句型一]
Thanks to your reading materials, not only do I catch up with my classmates but also learn more knowledge.多亏了您的阅读材料，我不仅赶上了我的同学，还学到了更多的知识。句中把not only置于句首，所以进行了部分倒装。
5．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua. I’m delighted to tell you that I got the first prize of English competition in Zhejiang Province.
I’m grateful to you for your beneficial assistance. You greatly arouse my passion for English and spark my way of thinking. What you did contributes a lot to my glory. Words can’t convey my appreciation.
Looking into the future, my plan is as follows. I will possess strong determination to take steps towards learning pronunciation and devote myself to writing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：假如你叫李华，得知自己在浙江省英语大赛中获全国一等奖之后，要给外教White先生写一封英文信，内容包括：1.分享喜讯；2.感谢帮助；3.谈谈今后的打算。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be delighted to (感到高兴)；beneficial assistance (有益的帮助)；contribute…to (贡献…)；
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型一】I’m grateful to your beneficial assistance, which greatly arouses my passion for English and sparks my way of thinking. 非常感谢您对我的帮助，极大地激发了我对英语的热情，激发了我的思维方式。运用which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【高分句型二】I will possess such a strong determination that I can learn pronunciation and devote myself to writing. 我会有这样一个坚定的决心，学习发音，努力写作。运用such…that引导的结果状语从句。
6．
Dear Mr. Brown,
With the approaching of the English Play Festival, I’m writing to ask a favor of you.All my classmates are currently devoted to the rehearsal of The Million Pound Bank Note
and our next rehearsal is scheduled in Room 101 at 7 o'clock this Sunday. As nonnative speakers, we are in desperate need of the guidance on lines from someone like you, who
has impressed us with profound knowledge and deep insight into the English literature.
We would appreciate it if you could be present and offer some suggestions. Looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是求助信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你班正在为即将举行的校英语戏剧节（English Play Festival）排练节目The Million Pound Bank Note，你给外教Mr. Brown写一封求助邮件，要点如下：内容包括：1)排练时间、地点；2)请他指导台词；3) 表示感谢。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：with the approaching of (随着…...的接近)；ask a favor (请求一个帮助)；devoted to (献身于，专心于)；deep insight into (对…...有深刻理解)；look forward to( 盼望)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型一】 As the English Play Festival is comming, I’m writing to ask you for a help.随着英语戏剧节的临近，我正在信想请你帮个忙。这是一个As引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】we are in desperate need of people who can help us with English lines. You have a profound knowledge of English literature, and we hope you can do us a favor.我们急需英语台词方面帮助我们的人。你对英国文学有很深的了解，我们希望你能帮我们一个忙。第一句是一个关系代词who引导的定语从句。第二句中用到了固定词组have a knowledge of…。
7．Dear Bob,
My name is Li Hua, an international school student. I’m writing the letter to you to help me to find a pen pal. I’m outgoing and easy-going boy, so I am fond of making friends. Now I want to make a pen pal form English-speaking country, from whom I can make a good command of English language and culture. At the same time, I would like to share my favorite history and Chinese traditional music with him.
I would appreciate it if you could recommend a pen pal to me. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是书信类作文。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
要求：1. 写信目的；2. 自我介绍；3. 表示感谢。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be fond of; English-speaking country; make a good command of; share…with; appreciate; recommend
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m outgoing and easy-going boy, so I am fond of making friends.
2. Now I want to make a pen pal form English-speaking country, from whom I can make a good command of English language and culture.
3. I would like to share my favorite history and Chinese traditional music with him.
4. I would appreciate it if you could recommend a pen pal to me.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成文
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】【高分句型1】
I’m writing the letter to you so that you can help me to find a pen pal. 我写信给你，为了是你能帮我找一个笔友。运用so that引导的目的状语从句。
【高分句型2】
I would like one pen pal who I can share my favorite history and Chinese traditional music with. 我想要一个笔友，我可以和他分享我最爱的历史和中国传统音乐。运用who引导的定语从句。
8．Dear medical workers,
I am Li Hua from a senior High School. On behalf of my school, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you all for your devotion in the battle against the novel coronavirus.
During this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection, desperately rescue those infected. It is also you who make us build up our confidence to defeat the terrible virus.
Such few words can't fully convey our thankfulness for your great contributions. I'm definitely convinced that with our joint efforts, China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，准备向奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒第一线的医护人员致敬，请你用英语写一封英文感谢信向学校投稿，内容包括：1) 表达谢意；2) 个人感受；3) 表达信心。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：on behalf of (代表……)；devotion(贡献)；regardless of (不顾……)；infect(感染)；build up one’s confidence(建立信心)；convey (表达)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型1】On behalf of my school, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you who have made contributions to defending against the novel coronavirus. 我谨代表我校向你们表示衷心的感谢，感谢你们为抗击新型冠状病毒做出了贡献。who引导定语从句。
【高分句型2】My words are so shallow that I can't convey our thankfulness for your great contributions. 我的话太肤浅了，以至于无法表达我们对你们的巨大贡献的感激之情。so…that…（如此/太……以至于……）引导结果状语从句。
9．Dear Mrs Zhang,
I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you. You are the one who is willing to help me when I am in need.
One thing that happened in the second year of high school is still fresh in my mind.With the Midterm Examination around the corner, I was nervous and in low spirits. When I was at a loss and on the point of giving up, you asked me to go to your office. You comforted me and helped me analyze the reasons for my failure in the exam. Gradually, I learned how to adjust myself and keep calm in the examination room.
Mrs Zhang, I’m more than grateful for what you have done for me. Wish you happiness and good health.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是感谢信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，此时的你已经高中毕业考取大学，今天是感恩节，回顾高中三年的学习生活令你感慨万千，同学情，师生情，这些都弥足珍贵，请你给你最喜欢的同学或是老师写一封信，要点如下：1. 写信目的；2. 你们之间难忘的事情；3. 再次表示感谢与表达良好的祝愿。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：express my sincere gratitude (表达诚挚的感谢)；Midterm Examination (期中考试)；in low spirits (情绪低落)；at a loss (茫然)；on the point of(正要……的时候)；give up(放弃))等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型1】
You are the one who is willing to help me when I am in need.你是那个在我需要的时候愿意帮助我的人。运用who引导的定语从句。
【高分句型2】
One thing that happened in the second year of high school is still fresh in my mind. 高中二年级发生的一件事，我至今仍记忆犹新。运用that引导的定语从句。
10．Dear Dr Yuan,
It’s my great honor to write to you. I’m very excited to have got the news that after the success of the sea rice, your research on the desert rice has also enjoyed a brilliant success, ranking the first in the world. The desert rice will contribute to solving the problem of food shortage in the desert regions and improving the ecological environment.
Therefore, I’d like to send you my sincere congratulations. I know it’s all because of your years’ hard work and devotion to agriculture. And now your efforts have paid off at last.
You have set a good example to us. At present, I’m a student of high school and I hope I will achieve my dream of devoting myself to the rise of our country like you in the future. Thank you! Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，向袁隆平又成功种植出全球首例沙漠水稻表示祝贺。
【详解】这是一篇书信类作文。信中要求在了解到在海水稻研发成功后，袁隆平又成功种植出全球首例沙漠水稻，为解决沙漠地区粮食短缺的问题和改善沙漠的生态环境做出巨大贡献，请你就此向他表示祝贺。考生在写这封祝贺信时，要注意以下几点：
1.书信一般要开门见山，交代下写信件原因，便于读信人了解书信重点，点明这篇书信话题是关于“your research on the desert rice has also enjoyed a brilliant success.”。
2.要点要齐全。内容包括:1. 表达你的愉悦心情(I’m very excited to…)；2. 向他表示祝贺(I’d like to send you my sincere congratulations.)；3. 决心向他学习(I hope I will achieve my dream of devoting myself to the rise of our country like you in the future.)。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然。
3.注意文章要以一定的逻辑顺序进行叙述，一定要把要点叙述清楚，特别是祝贺的主题内容不能少。注意细节的处理，否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。
【点睛】本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，又体现了作者的写作能力。例如：enjoyed a brilliant success，contribute to和your efforts have paid off这样的短语简洁而有感召力。而ranking the first in the world.现在分词短语作状语和solving the problem of food shortage in the desert regions and improving the ecological environment.并列的动名词短语作宾语，它们的恰当运用，更彰显了作者驾驭语言的能力。