2023英语中考十五大热点作文范文—全国通用版（含解析）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
热点06节约粮食
一、材料作文
1．“谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦。” 节约粮食是中华民族的传统美德，即使如今人们生活富足，我们也应当提倡节俭，避免浪费食物。
某英文网站正在开展以 “拒绝食物浪费”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇90词左右的短文投稿，谈谈为什么要节约食物，你平常是怎么做的，有什么收获。
提示：
1. Why should we avoid wasting food
2. What do you usually do in order to save food
3. How have you benefited from doing so
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【参考范文】
Food waste has become a big problem these days. It not only causes environmental pollution, but also destroys (毁掉) the fruit of farmers’ hard work. And there are still many people around the world who don’t have enough food to eat.
Knowing the importance of avoiding wasting food, I always try my best to do it. For example, I order just enough food when I’m eating at a restaurant and I often take the leftovers home if I can’t finish the dishes. I always clear my plate every time I eat at home and school as well.
By doing my part to save food, I get a sense of achievement and satisfaction. I also realize that we can all make a difference as long as we take action.
【详解】1.题干解读：题干要求写一篇主题为“拒绝食物浪费”的短文，给出了三点提示，分别是节约食物的原因、做法和收获，写作时注意包含全部要点，可适当添加细节。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时，可分为三段：第一段陈述为什么不能浪费食物，也就是节约食物的重要性；第二段描述自己做了什么来节约食物；第三段谈论自己这么做的收获。注意主谓一致等语法问题，做到无拼写和标点错误。
2．袁隆平爷爷一生致力于让世界远离饥饿，我们对他最好的缅怀方式之一就是珍惜粮食。“一粥一饭当思来之不易, 半丝半缕恒念物力维艰”，勤俭节约是中华民族的优良传统，即使我们现在的生活条件有了极大的提高，我们也不应该浪费粮食。请根据以下写作要点和要求，以“Save Food”为题写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：1. What should we save
2. Why should we save it
3. What do we usually do to save it
写作要求：①短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
②短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
③词数不少于80。
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【参考范文】
Save Food
Our life is becoming better and better. However, the problem of wasting food is also becoming more and more serious.
We all know that it’s not easy for farmers to provide food for us. There are still too many poor people in the poor areas in China. They don’t have enough food to eat. Meanwhile, the environment will be polluted by the wasted food. So, we should try our best to save food, including rice, vegetables and meat. Then what should we do in our daily life to save food First, we should eat up all the food in our dishes and plates. Second, we should order less or smaller dishes in the restaurant.
In a word, I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food. Let’s take action to save food now.
【详解】1.题干解读：题干要求以“节约食物”为题写作文，举例节约什么食物，解释节约食物的原因，并阐明具体做法。写作时，应按照提示内容进行陈述，可适当添加细节。
2.写作指导：本文时态应采用一般现在时，以第一人称为主。可分为三段：第一段引出节约食物的主题；第二段说明需要节约的具体食物，解释原因并阐明如何节约食物；第三段总结并收尾。写作时，注意主谓一致，无语法和标点错误。
3．据联合国《2020年全国粮食危机报告》中数据显示,全世界每天有8.21亿人在挨饿，受疫情影响，2021年粮食危机问题更糟糕！而联合国另一份报道显示每年大约有三分之一的食物被浪费掉。节约粮食是中华民族的传统美德，即使如今人们生活富足，我们也应当提倡节俭，避免浪费食物。
某英文网站正在开展以“拒绝食物浪费”主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请以“Don’t waste what’s on your plate”为题，用英语写一份倡议书，谈谈为什么要节约食物，以及大家可以怎么做。
写作要点：
1.吃饭时，不点过量的食物，让“餐饮不浪费”成为习惯。
2.尽量“光盘”，吃不掉的打包带回家。
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【参考范文】
Don’t waste what’s on your plate
Today about 821 million people around the world go hungry every day. The food crisis in 2021 will be even worse due to the impact of COVID-19. Saving food is a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. Even though people are living a rich life today, we should also advocate frugality and avoid wasting food.
What should we do to save food Here are some suggestions. Firstly, don’t order more than what you want to eat in a restaurant. Make it a habit not to waste food. Secondly, if you can’t eat all the food you have ordered, take the rest of it home.
I believe if everyone tries their best, more and more food can be saved. Let’s get started!
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“Don’t waste what’s on your plate”为题写倡议书，谈谈为什么要节约食物及大家可以怎样做。要包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称和第二人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。文章可分为三段式：第一段介绍为什么要节约食物；第二段给出节约食物的建议；第三段发出倡议。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
4．“谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦。”有数据显示，中国餐饮业人均食物浪费量为每餐93克，浪费率为11.7%。减少餐饮浪费，是践行绿色发展理念的必然要求。倡导餐桌上的文明新风，需要我们共同努力。请你依据下列三个要点提示，用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点提示：
（1）你和身边的人平时就餐是否节约；
（2）叙述一次你经历过的与节约或者浪费有关的就餐过程；
（3）简单表述你对这次就餐的看法。
2. 注意事项：
（1）用词在90个左右：
（2）行文应连贯流畅；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名或校名。
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【参考范文】
Food waste is a big problem. There are still a lot of people who are hungry. It is also harmful to the environment. My family don’t like to waste food. When we go out for dinner, we always order no more food than we need, and we will take the left food home.
One day, my friend Lucy and I went out for lunch. She ordered a lot of food to celebrate passing the exam. In the end, much food was left. I told her that we should take it home, because wasting food is not right. She felt ashamed and promised not to waste food next time.
I think when you throw away food, you are not just wasting the food itself. Resources are also wanted while growing, transporting and cooking the food. These things all take energy, time and water. So let’s avoid wasting food from now on.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“食物浪费”这一现象写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段描述曾经历过的与浪费有关的就餐过程；第三段发表自己的看法。写作时保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
5．食为政首，粮安天下，粮食安全始终是习近平总书记高度重视、时刻关心的问题。习近平总书记一直提倡“厉行节约、反对浪费”的社会风尚，多次强调要制止餐饮浪费行为是的，“一粥一饭当思来之不易，一丝一缕恒念物力维艰”勤俭节约是中华民族的优良传统，即使现在我们的生活条件有了极大的提高，我们也不应该浪费粮食，请以“Saving food”为话题，写一篇英语短文。
提示：
(1) the importance of saving food;
(2) some phenomena (现象) of wasting food;
(3) what to do to save food.
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【参考范文】
We all know that without food, we can’t live. Yes, we now have enough food to eat. But we shouldn’t waste food. Nowadays, a great many people don’t have enough food to eat around the world. But some of us don’t value food. A lot of food is thrown into the bin. In the restaurant, you can see some customers leave, leaving lots of food on the table.
We should develop good habits to avoid wasting food. When you order food at a restaurant, don’t order too much. Remember to finish your food. If you can’t finish all of it, you should take home what is left. You can also make posters to call on others to save food.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“Saving food”为话题，根据所给提示写一篇英语短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。分为两段式：第一段说明节约粮食的重要性，并列举两个生活中浪费食物的现象；第二段介绍应该如何节约粮食。写作时要保持主谓一致性，无语法和标点错误。
二、讲稿
6．据统计，2018年全球超过8.216亿人(即9人中有1人挨饿)没有充足的食物，可是中国人每年倒掉的食物相当于2亿多人一年的口粮。这种“舌尖上的浪费”不仅令人痛心，也对环境造成严重污染。为了增强同学们节约粮食、杜绝浪费的意识，学校将开展一次“Do not waste food”为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是参赛者，请你写一篇英语演讲稿。词数为80左右。
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【参考范文】
Hello everyone, food waste happens not only at home, but also in restaurants. Recently, “Did you empty the dishes today ” has become one of the most popular questions in China. Food waste has caused environmental pollution.
In my opinion, we should all work together to reduce food waste. Reducing food waste can help us save a lot of money. So, boys and girls, from now on, let’s stop throwing away food that we can still eat. When eating out, let’s order only what we need. And set’s get into the habit of packing food.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目是一篇演讲稿。要求“Do not waste food”为主题，谈谈“舌尖上的浪费”，来增强同学们节约粮食、杜绝浪费的意识。可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、三人称来写，时态以一般现在时和现在完成时为主。应包括所提到的信息，注意主谓一致问题。首先谈谈食物浪费问题，然后说一下自己的看法并呼吁同学们要节约粮食避免浪费。本文叙述完整且条理清晰，语句通顺。
热点07中华优秀传统文化
一、材料作文
1．中国结是中国特有的民间手工编结艺术，具有独特的东方特色。假如你是一名来自中国的交换生，现就读于英国一所学校。请你根据下面所给的提示，写一篇介绍中国结的短文。
历史 出现在古代；在唐、宋朝发展成为一种艺术形式；明、清朝开始流行。
颜色 使用各种颜色的线(thread)进行编结(tie the knot)，红色使用最多，因为红色代表好运和繁荣(prosperity)。
用途 用作装饰品(decoration)，可挂于房屋、汽车、手机等不同的地方。
现状 中国各地可见，备受人们欢迎。
要求：1.包含所给出的要点；2．80词以上。
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【参考范文】
A special form of traditional art—Chinese knots
Chinese knots are a form of Chinese traditional art.The history of Chinese knots dates back to ancient times.It is said that they were developed into an art form in the Tang and Song Dynasties and later became popular in the Ming and Qing Dynasties.
Colorful thread is used for tying the knots.However，the most commonly used color is red because it symbolizes good luck and prosperity.The knots can be used as car or mobile phone decorations.Also，people hang the knots in rooms.
Chinese knots can be seen in different parts of China，which are popular among the young and the old.
【详解】这是一篇给提纲的图表类提纲作文。根据短文要求，要写一篇介绍中国结的短文。按提纲，本文要介绍中国结的历史、颜色、用途及现状等等。介绍其历史，用一般过去时态，介绍其颜色、用途及现状，主要用一般现在时态。为了便于表示，短文可以用一些被动语态的句子。短文要包含提纲提示的所有要点，要注意句型结构的选择。以突出中心，表达完整正确。
点睛：本范文介绍了中国结的历史、颜色、用途及现状等等，包含了提纲提示的所有要点。内容完整、要点清楚，层次清楚明白，主旨分明，中心突出。特别是文中用到的短语：be used for ; be used as; be popular among等等及像it is said等等复杂句式的运用，使短文生动具体。总之，这是一篇较好的习作范文。
二、书信作文
2．年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭，传统的年夜饭是除夕祭祖后才能食用。假如你是李华，请给你以Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve为题，向你的外国笔友Jack介绍你家的年夜饭—包括菜式(至少三种)、寓意以及相关的文化习俗，描述吃年夜饭的场景以及家人的感受等，并邀请他明年除夕来你家共聚。
要求：1.文章应涵盖所有要点。内容简洁明了，衔接过渡自然。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
3.词数：100词左右。
参考词汇：团圆饭reunion dinner 祭祖worship the ancestor
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【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I am glad to know that you are interested in the family dinner on the Spring Festival Eve.
It is the most important reunion dinner in Chinese traditional culture. On Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the dinner after worshipping the ancestors. There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks. Many of them usually have great meanings. For example, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means “having good luck and becoming better” in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish, which means “every year has enough thing to spend”. One of the most important food is dumpling, which means “attracting wealth”. To me, the family dinner on the Spring Festival Eve means happiness. Because at that time, all my families get together and I can get a lot of lucky money.
I hope you can come to China next year and celebrate the Spring Festival with my family.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏参考词汇和“提示信息”中年夜饭的重要性，（至少）三种重要菜式以及它们的寓意，相关文化习俗，自己及家人的感受，以及邀请对方明年来共聚除夕，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“亲爱的杰克，我很高兴知道你对春节前夕的家庭晚餐感兴趣。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“年夜饭的重要性；年夜饭中的代表菜式及它们的寓意；我和家人对年夜饭的感受及一些文化习俗”几方面重点介绍年夜饭的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我希望你明年能来中国，和我的家人一起庆祝春节。”的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① on the Spring Festival Eve在除夕夜
② all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
① There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks.（There be句型）
② One of the most important food is dumpling, which means “attracting wealth”. （which引导的定语从句；one of the+最高级+名词复数表示“其中最……之一”）
3．Write a letter of at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。信的开头和署名已给，不计入总字数。)
“汉语桥“中文能力大赛的成功举办说明越来越多的外国学生对中华优秀文化很感兴趣。假设你是李华，你的外国网友Peter对中华文化很感兴趣，想了解并学习。请从以下中华文化的六种表现中，选择你最喜欢的一种推荐给他，并说明理由。
中华武术 (Chinese martial arts）京剧 (Peking Opera）中华书法 (Chinese calligraphy)
中文歌曲 (Chinese songs）中华美食 (Chinese food）中华剪纸 (Chinese paper-cutting)
(注意：1. 信中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture. Now let me introduce one of the most important culture—Chinese paper-cutting.
It has a history of more than 5,000 years. It is easily made. You only need some paper and a pair of scissors. You can change the paper into some different shapes, such as animals, flowers and so on. When Spring Festival comes, you can see people stick them on the windows and walls. It is a symbol of good luck. You can learn how to make Chinese paper-cutting by watching videos.
We also have other traditional culture. If you want to learn more, please tell me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Peter
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍剪纸是中国传统文化之一；
第二步，介绍剪纸的相关情况，包括它的历史，制作以及代表的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①more than多于
②change into把……变成……
③a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
①Now let me introduce one of the most important culture—Chinese paper-cutting（“one of the+形容词最高级”的结构）
②When Spring Festival comes, you can see people stick them on the windows and walls.（when引导的时间状语从句）
四、讲稿
4．为弘扬中华优秀传统文化，加深对传统文化的理解，连云港电视台举办题为“My favourite festival”的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下结构图用英语写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。
要求：
（1）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（2）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
My favourite festival
Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to share my topic with you.
My favourite festival is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【参考范文】
My favourite festival
Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to share my topic with you.
My favourite festival is Spring Festival. It is in January or February. In the evening before the Spring Festival, families get together and have a big meal. In many places, people like to set off firecrackers. Jiao zi is the most traditional food. Children always like the festival very much, because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes. They can also get some money from their parents. People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune. At night, the whole family usually watches TV and talks with each other together.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据文章开头提示，直奔主题，告诉大家自己最喜欢的节日——春节。
第二步，介绍春节的时间。
第三步，介绍春节的饮食和庆祝活动。
[亮点词汇]
①get together 聚在一起
②each other 相互
[高分句型]
Children always like the festival very much, because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes. (because引导的原因状语从句)
5．随着电脑的普及，许多中国学生逐渐忽视汉字书写。针对该现象，学校要举办一场演讲比赛，请你以“传递书写文明，领略汉字之美”为主题，根据以下表格内容写一篇演讲稿。
汉字书写 存在问题 书写能力下降，例如书写不美观、书写错误；
重要性 1. 通过汉字，传承中国文化；2. 书写汉字，感受汉字之美；3. ……（请补充一点）
提高书写能力的方法有哪些？ 1. 端正书写态度；2. ……（请补充一点）
参考词汇：汉字Chinese characters 传承pass on
要求：
1. 中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，可以进行适当的发挥；
2. 词数不少于80（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Boys and girls,Nowadays many students no longer pay much attention to the handwriting of Chinese characters. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, it’s everyone’s duty to write Chinese characters well and take action to be good at handwriting.
【参考范文】
Boys and girls,
Nowadays many students no longer pay much attention to the handwriting of Chinese characters. Have you ever experienced a moment like this You pick up a pen and start to write something down, but you can’t remember what the characters look like.
It seems that Chinese characters are in danger. Our ability to write has declined. Such as bad handwriting and handwriting mistakes.
Chinese people must understand the importance of Chinese characters, and it’s our duty to pass on Chinese culture. What’s more, we can feel the beauty of them. When we do homework, we must try to write carefully. More writing competitions can be held to help us write correctly.
All in all, it’s everyone’s duty to write Chinese characters well and take action to be good at handwriting.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍汉字书写的存在问题；
第二步，具体阐述汉字书写的重要性；
第三步，介绍提高书写能力的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①in danger陷入危险
②such as比如
③what’s more此外
[高分句型]
When we do homework, we must try to write carefully.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．坚定文化自信，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，做中华文明的传播者是新时代中国青少年的责任与使命。假如你是李华，近期，一批外国朋友要到你所在的学校参观访问，你将作为学生代表向他们介绍中华优秀传统文化。请根据下面表格中的要点提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。
总体介绍 中华传统文化种类多、历史悠久，影响很多人。
京剧 国粹之一，来自“Huiban”，包含singing, dancing, speaking；讲述了很多故事，受各个年龄段人的喜欢。
茶文化 茶的种类多，对健康有益。
瓷器 中国是瓷器之乡，技术世界最早，闻名于世。
要求：1.字迹工整，书写规范，不逐字翻译，包含全部要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；
3.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。
参考词汇：traditional Chinese culture中华传统文化 influence影响
china瓷器 Beijing Opera京剧 national treasure国粹 technology技术
Dear friends,Welcome to our school. Today, I want to share something about traditional Chinese culture with you.
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Thanks for your listening.
【参考范文】:
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school. Today. I want to share something about traditional Chinese culture with you.
There are many kinds of traditional Chinese culture. Some of them have a long history. They have influenced many people.
Beijing Opera comes first. As one of Chinese national treasures, Beijing Opera comes from “Huiban” and it has three parts, including singing, dancing, and speaking. It’s full of famous stories, and it is loved by Chinese people of all ages.
Next, let’s talk about tea. In China there are many different kinds of tea in different areas, such as green tea and black tea. It is good for our health.
The last one is about china. China is the hometown of china. Our china technology is the earliest in the world, and it’s famous all over the world.
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述中国传统文化，讲述京剧、茶文化和瓷器。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主，根据提示内容，讲述中国的京剧、茶文化和瓷器，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
热点08 民族复兴路
一、话题作文
1．近几年，在党和国家的惠民政策帮助下，全国都在落实精准扶贫。铜仁发生了翻天覆地的变化。请以“Great changes in Tongren”为题，写一篇80词左右的文章，应包括以下要点，可适当发挥。
1.人们的生活条件有了很大提高，高楼随处可见。农村的孩子也有了更好的教育。
2.生活条件也得到了改善，天更蓝，水更清，路更宽，树更绿。
3.交通变得更方便，铜仁有了飞机场、高速公路、高铁站、火车站。
4.每年都有许多中外游客来铜仁参观。
参考词汇：
living condition生活条件；improve改善；here and there到处；countryside农村；receive得到；education教育；environment环境；traffic交通；convenient方便的；super highway高速公路；high-speed rail station高铁站；home and abroad国内外的
Great changes in Tongren
In recent years, with the help of the favorable policies of our country,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Great changes in Tongren
In recent years, with the help of the favorable policies of our country, great changes have taken place in Tongren.
The people’s living condition have improved a lot. We can see tall buildings here and there. The children in the countryside can also receive good education. The living environment has also improved. The sky is bluer and the water is clearer. The roads are wider and the trees turn greener. What’s more, the traffic in Tongren becomes more convenient because there is an airport, a high-speed rail station, super highways, railway stations and so on. It attracts many tourists from home and abroad every year.
I believe that Tongren will become more and more beautiful in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求介绍铜仁的一些变化，人们的生活条件、教育、环境、交通等方面的变化。
2.写作指导：本文用第三人称来写作，时态采用一般现在时为主，介绍铜仁的一些变化叙述完整，条理清晰。
二、材料作文
2．随着我国经济的飞速发展,世界与中国的联系越来越紧密,中国在世界舞台上扮演着越来越重要的角色。几位外国友人正在谈论对中国的看法,同学们更需要全方面了解自己的祖国,才能为世界介绍好中国。请根据提示信息,写一篇英语短文。
提示信息:
1.来自美国的Bruce曾经在中国学习过,喜欢中国的校园,和中国的朋友交朋友。
2.来自英国的Carol来中国几次,喜欢中国的名胜（places of interest）和美食。
3.来自加拿大的David喜欢中国产品,喜欢在中国购物和移动支付（mobile payment)方式。
4. …
要求∶
1.短文必须包含提示的所有内容,可以适当发挥;
2. 90词左右,文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
With the rapid development of China's economy, more and more foreigners have a better understanding of China.
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【参考范文】
With the rapid development of China's economy, more and more foreigners have a better understanding of our country. Three foreign friends are expressing their opinions on China.
Bruce comes from America. He once studied in China. He thinks there are lots of beautiful schools in China and most students are smart and friendly.
Carol is an English woman. She has visited China many times. She thinks China is a great country with lots of places of interest. What's more, people can taste all kinds of delicious food in China.
As for David, a Canadian, he enjoys shopping in China. He thinks products made in China don't cost so much but are of very high quality. And mobile payment in China is quick and convenient.
As a Chinese, I love my beautiful country with a long history. I hope my motherland will be stronger and more beautiful.
【详解】1.题干解读：文章是一篇材料作文。主要是以“外国友人对中国的看法”为文章的主线展开描写。要根据文中题目给出的几个不同的外国友人的看法具体的描写，最后可以加入自己的看法，要注意语言的逻辑性和词语要恰当。
2.点评：文章分五段描写。第一段总的指出外国友人对中国有不同的看法；第二段至第四段主要是分别描写三位外国友人对中国的不同的看法；第五段主要写作为一个中国人的一些期望。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言流畅，用词恰当，语句通顺意思易懂。
3.高分亮点：
短语：come from；lots of；places of interest；What’s more；all kinds of；enjoy doing。
句型：She thinks+宾语从句；There be句型；and引导的并列句。
3．飞天梦，强国梦！2022年4月16日，神舟十三号载人飞行任务取得圆满成功。航天任务取得成功离不开航天人的坚守与努力。习总书记深情寄语航天人：“在航天事业发展的征程上勇攀高峰、不断前行”，“你们是新时代中国航天事业无数奋斗者、攀登者的代表”……
假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在做“我最崇拜的航天英雄”系列推送，请你用英语给公众号留言，推荐一位你最崇拜的航天英雄，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。
提示词语：work hard, stick to, dream, difficulty, overcome
提示问题：● Which space hero do you admire most
● Why do you admire him/her
I am Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
I am Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. All Chinese people are proud of the three astronauts, Nie Haisheng, Wang Yaping and Ye Guangfu. Among them, I admire Wang Yaping most.
Wang Yaping is not only an astronaut but also a teacher in space. Born in 1980, Wang Yaping loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school. Her space dream started in 2003. She trained really hard and never gave up. After ten years’ effort, she joined the Shenzhou X mission and gave wonderful and lively lessons in space. Moreover, she is the first female astronaut who walked in space successfully in China.
As a student, I truly admire Wang Yaping for her great spirit of devoting herself to her space dream. Whenever I meet difficulties, I should also learn from her to keep on trying and never lose heart.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题介绍自己最崇拜的航天英雄。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍王亚平；第三段介绍自己钦佩王亚平什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
4．从嫦娥奔月到中国神舟系列宇宙飞船成功发射，我们正一步步将梦想变成现实。随着科技的发展，未来，人们生活会发生很大变化。某英文网站正开展以“未来的生活”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下图文提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对未来生活的设想。
要求：
1. 文中必须包括图文提示的所有内容，可展开思路，适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
3. 词数：80 词左右，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
提示词：environment(环境) ；planet(行星)
Life in the Future
With the development of science and technology. Life in the future will be quite different.
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【参考范文】
Life in the Future
With the development of science and technology. Life in the future will be quite different. The environment will be nicer. The trees will be greener and rivers will be clearer. There is no heavy traffic any more on the earth. Buildings like houses, hospitals will be built in other planets or under the sea. So there is enough space for people on the earth.
Robots will do dangerous and hard work instead of human beings. They make people have more time to relax and enjoy their lives. The clothes that we wear will change their colors and styles according to the weather and our moods. We’ll have easier and more convenient lives in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据图示内容，以“未来的生活”为主题写一篇作文谈谈你对未来生活的设想。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般将来时为主；人称以第三人称为主。写作时需涵盖图文提示的所有内容，不要遗漏，可适当发挥，对于细节部分可适当发挥。最后力求语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
5．近年来，国家对边远地区的扶贫计划深入民心，家乡发生了巨大变化。请你写一篇介绍家乡变化的宣传稿。
要点包括：
国家扶贫工作带来的好处 1. 许多贫困家庭得到了当地政府的有效帮助，提高了他们的生活水平。2. 通过支持和鼓励村民大力发展农业，让人们富了起来，住上了宽敞明亮的新房。3. 免费让山区孩子上学，并每月给予贫困补助。4. 环境得到了较大的改善，比如以前被严重污染的河水变得越来越清澈。……
感谢政府，感谢党 ……
我的感悟和决心 ……
要求：1. 行文流畅，句子结构合理，可适当进行补充。
2. 字数在100词左右。
参考词汇：生活水平living stardard、农业agriculture、山区 a mountainous area、贫困补助poverty assitance
In recent years, anti-poverty project that held by our country for the romote areas has won the support of the people.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
In recent years, anti-poverty project that held by our country for the romote areas has won the support of the people. It has brought great benefits. My hometown has changed a lot.
First of all, many poor families have received efffective help from the local government. Their living standards have improved a lot. Besides, people have become rich and live in spacious and bright houses by supporting and encouraging villagers to develop agriculture. Additionally, children living in the mountainous areas can go to school for free and they get monthly poverty assitance. Finally, the environment has improved a lot. For example, the polluted river is getting cleaner and cleaner.
I think my hometown will become better and better with the help of the government and the Communist Party of China. I should study hard and make a contribution to socialist modernization.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇宣传稿；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”“现在完成时”；
③ 提示：大部分要点已给出，对于感悟和决心要补充完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述扶贫计划使得家乡发生了改变；
第二步，具体描述变化体现在哪些方面；
第三步，表达感谢，并表明决心。
[亮点词汇]
①spacious 宽敞
②efffective help有效的帮助
③with the help of在……帮助下
[高分句型]
I think my hometown will become better and better with the help of the government and the Communist Party of China.（宾语从句）
三、讲稿
6．习近平主席向全世界庄严昭告了中华民族伟大复兴的“中国梦”。作为一名即将毕业的初中生，你对“中国梦”有何感想？请你按照所提示的要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点：作为中国人而自豪
1.过去，“四大发明”等优秀的传统文化影响世界
2.如今，……（列举两个中国成就，例如高铁)
为实现中国梦而奋斗
1.刻苦学习，勇于实践
2.……《补充至少一点)
要求:
1.词数80左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）﹔
2．要点齐全，可适当发挥：
3．条理清晰，语句通颍，意思连贯，书写规范；
4．文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
Dear friends,
President Xi Jinping describes the Chinese Dream as a big dream for the Chinese nation.
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That’s all. Thank you.
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
President Xi Jinping describes the Chinese Dream as a big dream for the Chinese nation. Now I’d like to share my opinions with you.
Firstly, I am proud to see the prosperity of our motherland. Our excellent traditional culture, such as the four great inventions, had a great impact on the world. Today, China has grown into a powerful country with various kinds of achievements. For instance, the high-speed rail has greatly reduced travelling time around the country. Besides, from AI to 5G robots, Chinese technology companies are in the world’s leading position.
In order to fulfill the Chinese Dream, we are supposed to work hard and take action to realize our own values. More importantly, it is significant for us to seize every possible opportunity to make our country more competitive. With dreams, hard work and opportunities, beautiful things can be created.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。就“中国梦”这个题材来发表自己的感想。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时为主。分为四段式：第一段引出主题；第二段根据提示材料描述让自己引以为傲的事情；第三段描述如何为了中国梦而奋斗；最后一段表示感谢。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
热点09 总书记寄语
一、材料作文
1．习近平总书记同北大师生代表座谈时提出：“人才培养是育人和育才相统一的过程，育人是本，人无德不立，育人的根本在于立德，这是人才培养的辨证法。”为落实立德树人根本任务，各学校围绕德育教育举办了一系列的活动，根据下面思维导图内容提示以“Moral（德育）Education”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍如何践行德育教育。
要求：
1. 书写认真规范，词数不少于80词，开头已给出不计入总词数；
2. 短文必须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Moral Education
As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to improve our moral education.
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【参考范文】
Moral Education
As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to improve our moral education.
At home, we should do some housework. We also should save electricity and water when using them. As for the relationship with our parents, we should have a good communication with them. At school, we should obey the school rules. The harder we study, the better we will be in the future. What’s more, we can take part in some volunteer activities in our free time. We can plant more trees to protect the environment. Last but not least, we should love our country. We should try our best to spread our culture.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出“如何提高德育教育”的话题；
第二步，根据提示内容分别从家里，学校，社会，感受等方面提出自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②have a good communication with与……有良好的沟通
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to improve our moral education.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②The harder we study, the better we will be in the future. （the+比较级，the+比较级）
2．习总书记说，实现中国梦是一场历史接力赛，当代青年要在实现民族复兴的赛道上奋勇争先。作为新时代的中国青年，实现中国梦的接力棒即将传递到你们手里，你应该从哪些方面做好准备？请你根据以下提示，以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
How to Make Myself Better
Every Chinese should play a part in realizing the Chinese Dream. As a teenager, I will prepare for that from the followings.
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【参考范文】：
How to Make Myself Better
Every Chinese should play a part in realizing the Chinese Dream. As a teenager, I will prepare for that from the followings.
First, I’m going to do better at school. I’m not good at English. So I am going to read it aloud every morning and keep diaries in English every day. I’m going to listen to teachers more carefully and take notes. I believe I will get good grades. Second, I plan to take up a new hobby. I am a little heavy and I never exercise. So I make a plan to run to school every day. To keep it, I will ask my good friends to run with me. I think he can help me. Third, I decide to clean my room myself, even the whole house. My parents are busy. I should do my part as a member of my family.
I will do my best to keep them. I believe I can be better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据图片中的三个提示介绍如何成为更好的自己，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍应如何做才能成为更好的自己；
第三步，书写结语，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②keep diaries记日记
③take up a hobby培养一个爱好
[高分句型]
①I believe I will get good grades.(省略that的宾语从句)
②To keep it, I will ask my good friends to run with me.(动词不定式作目的状语)
3．习近平主席在全国教育大会上强调，中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。请你以“How to be a good student”为题，简单谈谈如何做一个新时代合格的学生。
要求：1. 爱国爱家，诚实守信，善良感恩；
2. 努力学习，做个有创造力的人；
3. 多参加体育锻炼，保持身心健康；
4. 善于发现生活中的美，热爱大自然，守护家园；
5. 积极参加校内外的各种活动。
注意：1. 书写工整、语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于80。
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名及其他相关信息。
参考词汇：honest 诚实的，thankful 感恩的，pay attention to 关注，all in all 总之
How to be a good student
Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.
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【参考范文】
How to be a good student
Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students. First of all, we must love our country and home. And we should also be honest and thankful to the people who help us. Secondly, we should work hard and be creative in study. Next, exercise can make us strong and confident. We should do more exercise and keep healthy. After that, we are expected to enjoy the beauty in our life. If we pay attention to nature, we will find the beauty everywhere. So we must protect the environment. Finally, in our free time, we should take an active part in different activities like planting trees.
All in all, if we show our love in our daily life, we can be anyone we want.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中善于发现生活中的美的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍如何成为一名好学生；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“爱国、学习、健康、发现美、参加活动”等几个方面重点介绍成为好学生的具体内容；
第三步，书写结语。表达出“呼吁大家成为好学生”的倡议。
[亮点词汇]
① be expected to 被期待做……
② pay attention to 注意……
③ in our free time 在我们空闲的时候
④ take an active part in 积极参与做……
[亮点句型]
① And we should also be honest and thankful to the people who help us.（定语从句修饰people）
② If we pay attention to nature, we will find the beauty everywhere. （if引导的条件状语从句）
4．习主席在 2022 年新年贺词中有这样的话：“民之所忧，我必念之；民之所盼，我必行之。”这体现了国家领导人为人民尽责的态度。作为中学生的我们，现行最重要的是当好学生。请你以“How to Be a Good Student”为题写一篇 90—120 词的英语短文，从学习习惯、生活习惯、行为品质等方面谈谈我们应该怎样做，才能不负自己，不负时代赋予我们的责任。
注意：开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Be a Good Student
It’s my responsibility to be a good student. But how to be a good student
As a good student,
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【参考范文】
How to Be a Good Student
It’s my responsibility to be a good student. But how to be a good student
As a good student, we should form good studying habits. In class, we need to listen to teachers carfully and be active. After school, we should finish our homework on time and do some reading. What’s more, a good student needs to live a healthy life. It’s good for us to play some sports in our spare time. Fresh fruit and vegetables are some of the healthiest foods we can eat to improve our health. Last but not least, a good student must be the one who cares about his manners. For example, we should respect the old. We should be kind to others. We should follow the school rules.
In general, to be a good student does not only mean he can get high marks in exams, but he also has a healthy body and mind. Then we’ll be able to make a contribution to making our country better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍从学习习惯上我们应该怎么做；
第二步，具体阐述从生活习惯、行为品质等方面怎么做才能当一个好学生；
第三步，最后表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①what’s more此外
②last but not least最后也是最重要的
③in general总的来说
[高分句型]
①good student must be the one who cares about his manners.（who引导的定语从句）
②to be a good student does not only mean he can get high marks in exams（动词不定式作主语）
二、讲稿
5．习主席说过“有梦想，有机会，有奋斗，一切美好的东西都能够创造出来。”袁隆平院士有两个梦想：“禾下乘凉梦”、“杂交稻覆盖全球梦”，带着梦想他创造了一个又一个奇迹。女宇航员王亚平发奋努力20年，终于实现了飞天之梦。人人都有自己的梦想，你的梦想是什么？
请以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点提示：
你的梦想是什么；
你为什么有这样的梦想；
你打算如何实现自己的梦想。
写作要求：
演讲稿内容应包含所提示的要点，围绕提示要点适当增加情节，以使意思连贯；
文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；
演讲稿词数在90词左右。（开始和结束语已经给出）
My Dream
Dear teachers and friends,
I’m happy to be here to share my dream with you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening.
【参考范文】：
My dream
Dear teachers and friends,
I’m happy to be here to share my dream with you. Everyone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher.
Teachers can not only teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how we should learn something. Thanks to our teachers, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes. I want to be a teacher when I grow up because I admire teachers.
I know it is easier to said than done. But I have made a decision to study harder. I am sure my dream will come true one day.
That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点以“My Dream”为题写演讲稿介绍自己的梦想，要求包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。演讲稿可分为三段式，第一段引出自己的梦想；第二段讲为何有此梦想；第三段讲打算如何实现自己的梦想；最后一段收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
6．习主席时刻关心青少年的成长，强调要培养德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。为此，学校开展了系列主题活动。请你根据下面的思维导图，围绕“如何成为全面发展的中学生”这个话题，结合实际，以“To Be Good Students”为标题，写一篇演讲稿参加演讲比赛。
要求：1.语言表达准确，语意连贯、通顺；
2.文章应包括所给思维导图中所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3.词数：80左右。文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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Boys and girls,
President Xi cares about teenagers. He says that teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be such a good student. How can we make it
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Let’s take action to be good students.
【参考范文】：
To Be Good Students
Boys and girls,
President Xi cares about teenagers. He says that teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be such a good student. How can we make it
First, show love and duty to our country, people and home. We must keep them in mind, work for them and serve them. Next, learn more to be wise, able and creative. We must live and learn. Then, build strong bodies and minds. Exercise every day and be brave to face difficulties in our life. Fourth, develop hobbies and interests to be able to find and enjoy the beauty in life. Last, respect labor, love labor. Learn basic living skills by sharing housework at home and taking part in labor at school.
Let’s take action to be good students.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“To Be Good Students”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从提示的几个方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
热点10 保护大熊猫
1．
《功夫熊猫》、《狮子王》··那些陪伴我们成长的卡通片，你还记得吗？以上的经典台词是否仍在你耳畔回响？初三的你对这些台词是否有更深的体会？请选择其中一句台词，结合自己初三的一次成长经历，谈谈你的感想。
要点：
1.最触动你的一句台词：
2.你的一次经历：
3. ……
要求：
1. 80—120词：
2.文章中不得出现学生本人、班级、老师、朋友和学校的真实姓名及个人信息：
3.卷面整洁，书写工整．
Growth is to understand many things from a book, an experience, or even some words from a cartoon movie.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Growth is to understand many things from a book, an experience, or even some words from a cartoon movie. The words that touched me the most is: Look inside yourself and realize that change starts with you.
When I entered Junior Three, I was confused at first. I couldn’t adapt to more and more schoolwork and began to feel anxious about my poor English. One day, I was watching Zootopia to relax myself. The sentence “Look inside yourself and realize that change starts with you.” touched my heart. I began to realize that I must face up to my problems and make a change to improve myself. From then on, I began to manage my life and do my best to improve my English. My efforts certainly paid off.
If something is difficult for you, look inside yourself and make a change.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求选择给出的经典台词中的一句，结合自己的成长经历来谈谈你的感想，要求要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时。文章可分为三段式：第一段引出最触动自己的一句台词；第二段结合自己在初三的经历说明这句台词如何触动自己；最后一段谈自己的感想，做出总结。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
2．熊猫是我们国家的国宝，它们濒临灭绝，所以我们应采取措施保护他们。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。其主要内容包括：
1.基本情况；居住在中国西南部森林和山区；现存1600只野生熊猫；喜爱吃竹子。
2.严峻形势：熊猫繁殖能力低而且熊猫宝宝存活率低；竹林面积正变小。
3.解决措施：政府设立自然公园；科学家帮助熊猫繁殖后代。
注意：
1.词数为80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Pandas live in the forests and the mountains of Southwest China. There are only 1600 pandas in the wild now.
They like eating bamboo. They are in danger and the situation is getting very difficult. Because pandas do not have many babies, and baby pandas often die. The bamboo forests are getting smaller.
So the government is setting up nature parks with a lot of bamboo to help protect pandas. Scientists are doing a lot of research to help pandas produce more babies and help baby pandas live.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕频临灭绝的熊猫写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段介绍熊猫的基本情况；第二段介绍它们所面临的严峻形势；最后一段介绍解决措施。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
3．假设你是李华。你的网友Simon观看了北京的冬奥会开幕式，感到特别的震撼。尤其喜爱冬奥会的吉祥物冰墩墩和雪容融。他想多了解一些关于冰墩墩的寓意，请你给他写一封回信。要点如下：
1. 冰墩墩是一个穿着宇航服的大熊猫的卡通形象。它是一位来自未来的冰雪运动员。
2. “冰”的意思是汉字的冰，代表了纯洁和力量，是冬季运动会的象征。
3. “墩墩”象征着大熊猫憨态可掬的形象，意味着强壮和活泼的，也代表孩子。
4. 冰墩墩整体则体现了运动员强壮有力的身体、坚忍不拔的意志和鼓舞人心的奥林匹克精神，
5. 现在是一墩难求。
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
4. 提示词汇：a cartoon image 卡通形象 purity and strength 纯洁和力量
a winter sports athlete 冰雪运动员 robust and lively 强壮和活泼的
top selling product 热销产品
Dear Simon,
Thanks for your letter. I’m glad that you like Bing DwenDwen and Shuey RhonRhon, the official mascot of Olympic Winter Games Beijing 2022. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Simon,
Thanks for your letter. I’m glad that you like Bing DwenDwen and Shuey RhonRhon, the official mascots of Olympic Winter Games Beijing 2022. I am also crazy about them, especially Bing DwenDwen. It’s a cartoon image of a panda wearing a spacesuit. It looks like a winter sports athlete from the future.
“Bing” means “ice” in Chinese, which is a symbol of winter sports. It also stands for purity and strength. “Dwen” suggests health. “Dwen Dwen” gives the image a more friendly feel. It means robust and lively. Moreover, it also represents childr中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
热点11 手机进校园
一、材料作文
1．现在智能手机运用越来越普遍，上周你们班举行了一次以“初中生使用微信的利与弊”为主题的班会，同学们各抒已见。你针对同学们的不同意见， 做了以下记录。请根据表格内容以“The Opinions of Using WeChat”为题写一篇短文。
利 弊
1. 提供交流的平台，可以上网课 1. 过度使用、影响学习
2. 能认识更多的朋友， 方便联系 2. 交友不慎、容易受骗
3. 能学习更多的东西，增加兴趣 3. 长时间看手机对眼睛有害
…… ……
注意： 1. 词数80字以上。
2. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
提示： platform平台；rick欺骗； be convenient for对……方便； 网课online classThe Opinions of Using WeChat
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【参考范文】
The Opinions of Using WeChat
More and more middle school students use WeChat. Different students have different opinions about using it.
Some students think WeChat is a very useful tool. It can provide a platform to communicate with their friends. And they can make more friends and learn more knowledge by WeChat. They also attend online classes by WeChat. WeChat is convenient for them to connect.
However, some students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend too much time using it. And they may be tricked by strange net friends. Last but not least, it will also affect their vision if they use WeChat for a long time. In my opinion, we should use WeChat properly by not using it more than two hours a day, and make sure that we don’t use it when we are studying.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态是一般现在时；
③提示：微信利与弊的大部分要点已给出，适当地补充一些自己的观点。人称以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述不同的人对使用微信有着不同的观点；
第二步，具体阐述同学们利与弊的观点；
第三步，以自己的观点做个总结。
[亮点词汇]
provide a platform提供一个平台
attend online classes上网课
affect their study影响他们的学习
[高分句型]
However, some students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend too much time using it. （if引导的条件状语从句）
2．英语校刊TEENS 正在进行 “手机是否可以带入校园”的问卷调查。请根据下列调查表的内容做出自己的选择，并依据你的选择用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
A survey on mobile phonesShould we bring mobile phones to school
Choice YES NO
Reasons 1.contact with parents2.… 1.use in a wrong way2....
Advice Though mobile phones can be used in school, I think … Though mobile phones can’t be used in school, I hope ..
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出文章开头不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Should we bring mobile phones to school
A survey on teenage mobile phone use at school is carried out by TEENS. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Should we bring mobile phones to school
A survey on teenage mobile phone use at school is carried out by TEENS. Are middle school students allowed to bring them to school
Some students think we can bring mobile phones to school because it’s convenient for parents to contact us. When we have difficulty in study, mobile phones can be our teacher and help us with our problems.
Every coin has two sides. Some students use mobile phones in a wrong way. They spend a lot of time chatting online, as a result, they can’t focus on study. And too much time on screens does harm to our eyes. More and more students have poor eyesight.
In my opinion, I agree to bring smart phones to school. Though mobile phones can be used in school, I think I won’t turn it on until class is over. Since there are lots of useful websites for English learning, I will go there to practice my English.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇议论文。根据表格介绍支持和反对人的原因和建议。客观介绍人们对学生带手机这一现象的看法，并表达自己的观点。
2.写作指导：本文以第三人称和第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时为主。分成四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍支持者的看法；第三段介绍反对者的看法；第四段介绍自己的观点。不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观、注意行文的连贯性。
3．某学校英语月刊第4月期刊，将以“禁止中小学生带手机进校园”为主题进行英文征稿，请你就相关话题，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
（1）谈谈限制中学生带手机进校园的必要性（至少两点）；
（2）对中学生在家里如何合理使用手机提出一些建议（至少两点）；
（3）号召同学们合理使用手机。
作文要求：
1.作文中不得出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As for limiting students’ mobile phone use on campus, I have something to share. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
As for limiting students’ mobile phone use on campus, I have something to share. It’s important to stop students from bringing cellphones into school. Here are the reasons. We students will focus more on the study without cellphones. Besides, we can make more true friends at school by exercising or sharing instead of playing cellphone games.
Limiting the cellphones at school doesn’t mean we cannot use them at all at home, as long as we make proper use of them. First, we had better use the cellphones less than 1 hour a day, or we may harm our eyes and back. Second, we are supposed to keep away from the information which does harm to us.
Let’s make proper use of cellphones.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意围绕主题进行写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍限制中学生带手机进校园的必要性，介绍2点；
第二步，介绍学生如何在家使用手机，介绍2点；
第三步，书写结束语，号召同学们合理使用手机。
[亮点词汇]
①bring...into...把……带入
②be supposed to应该
[高分句型]
①Second, we are supposed to keep away from the information which does harm to us.（which引导的定语从句）
②Let’s make proper use of cellphones.（祈使句）
4．2021年1月15日，教育部印发了《关于加强中小学生手机管理工作的通知》，原则上禁止中小学生带手机进校园，该通知引发了强烈的社会反响。作为一名中学生，请你写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法。
要点：
1. 你对该通知的态度及理由；
2. 举例说明手机进校园的危害；
3. 呼吁所有中小学生积极响应。
要求：
1. 思路清晰，语句通顺，根据要点提示可以适当发挥，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关校名和姓名等真实信息；
3. 词数：80词左右的短文（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
According to a notice from the Ministry of Education, all primary and secondary school students in China, in principle, will not be allowed to bring mobile phones to school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
According to a notice from the Ministry of Education, all primary and secondary school students in China, in principle, will not be allowed to bring mobile phones to school. I think it is necessary to limit students’ mobile phone use at school.
Bringing mobile phones to school will not only distract the students’ attention from their studies, but also do harm to their eyesight. For those students who are addicted to mobile phones, I suggest that they can spend more time doing something more interesting, such as doing sports or reading an interesting book.
As the saying goes, no rules no standards. I call on all the schools limit students’ mobile phone use at school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点中已给出的关键信息，写短文谈谈你对禁止中小学生带手机进校园这一通知的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这则通知；
第二步，介绍手机的危害，表明自己的态度及理由；
第三步，呼吁大家积极相应则一通知。
[亮点词汇]
①not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
②do harm to 对……有害
③be addicted to sth. 对某事上瘾
④as the saying goes 俗话说
[高分句型]
For those students who are addicted to mobile phones, I suggest that they can spend more time doing something more interesting, such as doing sports or reading an interesting book.（who引导定语从句；that引导宾语从句）
5．随着手机在日常生活中的广泛使用，中学生也越来越多的接触到了手机。但由于自控力较差，用手机打游戏、上网聊天的情况时有发生，严重影响了他们学习的积极性；有的学生熬夜看手机，导致视力下降，影响身体健康。因此，教育部办公厅印发《关于加强中小学生手机管理工作的通知》，规定中小学生原则上不得将个人手机带入校园。请根据要求写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对学生使用手机的看法。
要求：
1.80 — 120 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考提示：
1.中学生在校滥用手机的危害(妨碍学业、影响课堂、有害健康……)
2.在家适度使用手机的建议(控制使用时间，避免使用手机搜索作业……)
Mobile phones were invented to make our life convenient, but nowadays they may do the opposite. For the middle school students, mobile phones are the last things they should put in their schoolbags. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】：
Mobile phones were invented to make our life convenient, but nowadays they may do the opposite. For the middle school students, mobile phones are the last things they should put in their schoolbags.
Today, more and more students are using the APPs on their mobile phones to help with their homework. When students bring mobile phones to school, mobile phones will hinder their studies. When students are having classes, their mobile phones ring, which will affect the class. Long time use of mobile phones is harmful to their health.
I don’t think we should take mobile phones to school. We should use mobile phones at home. When we use mobile phones, we should control the time. We should avoid using mobile phones to search for homework, and we should think independently to complete homework.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是一篇议论文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括现在使用手机的现状与自己的建议等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体指出中学生不应该把手机带进学校；
第二步，具体阐述学生使用手机的一些弊端；
第三步，最后阐述自己的观点和看法。
[亮点词汇]
① help with帮忙
② be harmful to对……有害
③ avoid doing sth避免做某事
[高分句型]
① When we use mobile phones, we should control the time.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② I don’t think we should take mobile phones to school.（宾语从句的否定转移）
二、看图作文
7．学校禁止中小学生将个人手机带入校园，你班学生就“学生是否应该将个人手机带入校园”展开激烈的讨论。请你根据提示写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈你的观点。
要求：
（1）语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
（2）补充至少一条你自己的观点；
（3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
（4）100词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. And the Ministry of Education requires primary and secondary school students not to bring personal mobile phones into the school. Students in our class have different ideas about this.
Some students agree to the request. They think
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【参考范文】：
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. And the Ministry of Education requires primary and secondary school students not to bring personal mobile phones into the school. Students in our class have different ideas about this.
Some students agree to the request. They think it’s bad for their eyes and they won’t study carefully in class if students spend much time playing games on the mobile phone. Sometimes some garbage websites appear, and they are harmful to the students. What’s worse, it is common for students to get addicted to mobile phone games.
But others don’t agree to this request. They think it’s not so bad to take the mobile phones to school because they can keep in touch with their parents or classmates, search for some useful information. When they are free, they can also listen to music to relax themselves.
In my opinion, it’s very important for us to use the mobile phones in a right way. We should use the mobile phone to help and improve our study. And at school, we have teachers and other students to help us with our study, so we needn’t take the mobiles phone to school.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文，为议论文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要求已给出，考生应注意根据图片的提示，表明赞同方和反对方的观点，此时应采用第三人称。并根据要求补充一点自己的观点，此时注意采用第一人称。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明话题的背景信息，引出“学生是否应该将个人手机带入校园”的话题；
第二步，阐述针对该话题产生的两种不同的意见，根据图片的提示有理有据地说明赞同以及反对的理由；
第三步，表明自己的态度以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
① more and more popular越来越受欢迎
② bring.....into把……带进……
③ keep in touch with与……保持联系
[高分句型]
① Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. (more and more popular形容词比较级的用法）
② They think it’s bad for their eyes and they won’t study carefully in class if students spend much time playing games on the mobile phone. （if引导的条件状语从句）
③ They think it’s not so bad to take the mobile phones to school because they can keep in touch with their parents or classmates, search for some useful information. （宾语从句；it is+形容词+(for sb)to do sth句型；because引导的原因状语从句）
三、书信作文
8．为了促进中小学生健康成长，近日教育部印发了《中小学生减负措施》（减负三十条）。假如你是李华，请你从以下几个方面向你的笔友Bob简单介绍减负的相关情况，并谈谈你自己的看法。
要点：
1.作业方面：过去每天都有很多家庭作业，每个学科都有不同的作业，需要几个小时才能完成。现在每天的家庭作业不超过90分钟；有更多时间参加课外活动（跳舞、画画、下棋等）和锻炼身体；有更充足的睡眠……
2.电子产品方面：养成良好的用眼卫生习惯；严禁学生将手机带入课堂（过去花大量时间玩电脑游戏和看电视，对眼睛有害；现在不得不控制玩电脑、看电视的时间，花更多时间读书）。
3.习惯方面：上课专心听讲，课后主动复习；鼓励同学间互帮互助、共同成长。
4.你的看法……
要求：
1. 包含以上要点；
2. 词数：80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear Bob,
In order to improve students’ health, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce（减少） students’ pressure（压力）. Let me tell you something about them. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】：
Dear Bob,
In order to improve students’ health, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce（减少） students’ pressure（压力）. Let me tell you something about them.
Generally, it falls into four parts. And I will introduce to you three of them which are close to us students.
Firstly, homework for middle school students should be taken no more than 90 minutes so that we will have more time to relax.
Secondly, mobile phones shouldn’t be allowed to appear in class because we are easily absent-minded from the lesson.
Thirdly, students are expected to listen carefully and go over lessons in time so that they can master the right method of learning.
In my opinion, these rules are helpful to us students. If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.
Do you have such rules Hope for your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的介绍要点谈谈减负的相关情况，以及自己的看法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，文章开头已给出，引出要介绍的具体内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“作业方面、电子产品方面、习惯方面”重点介绍有关减负的具体情况；
第三步，反问对方，并期望对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out实行
②fall into分成
③be close to接近
④absent-minded心不在焉的
⑤go over lessons in time及时复习功课
⑥be helpful to对……有用
[高分句型]
①And I will introduce to you three of them which are close to us students.（which引导的定语从句）
②homework for middle school students should be taken no more than 90 minutes so that we will have more time to relax.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
③mobile phones shouldn’t be allowed to appear in class because we are easily absent-minded from the lesson.（被动语态；because引导的原因状语从句）
④If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.（if引导的条件状语从句）
热点12 疫情彰显中国力量
一、电子邮件
1．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Linda听说上学期由于新冠疫情的影响，你们学校开展了线上教学，并过了一个较长的寒假，为此她发来邮件询问情况。请阅读以下来自Linda的邮件并回复。内容包括回复相应问题并谈谈你的感受。词数80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
From: Linda
Hi Li Hua,How’s it going recently I hear you took online lessons for about 2 weeks at the end of last term because of the COVID-19. What do you think of online lessons I also want to know how you spent your longer winter holiday Did you help your parents do chores What do you do for your family as a helper Will you please share your ideas with me Look forward to your reply!Linda
To: Linda
Hi Linda,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua
【参考范文】
Hi Linda,
I’m very glad to hear from you. Everything is OK with me. In your mail, you asked about how I studied online because of the COVID-19. I do have something to share with you.
Most of the subjects I’m learning were included in the online lessons, even P.E. I spent about four hours a day online. My teachers helped me a lot. They not only gave us classes but also answered our questions. It was really a long winter holiday. I spent most of my time on online learning. Also, I sometimes helped my parents do some chores in my free time, such as washing clothes, do some cooking and washing the dishes. In my opinion, as a student, it was good to have classes at home during this special time, but I don’t think I learned as well as I do in school. However, as a member in my family, it was necessary for me to help my parents to do chores when I was free.
I hope my reply will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一份邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要点要齐全，回复相应问题，可适当增加细节，内容要连贯，无语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题；
第二步，介绍新冠疫情期间线上教学的情况；
第三步，讲述我如何度过一个较长的暑假及我的感受；
第四步，最后书写结语，期望回信可以有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①share with分享
②be included in被包含在内
③spend most of one’s time on sth.花费大部分时间在某事上
④do some chores做家务
⑤in my opinion依我之见
[高分句型]
①They not only gave us classes but also answered our questions.（not only…but also…不仅……而且……，连接两个并列结构）
②However, as a member in my family, it was necessary for me to help my parents to do chores when I was free.（句型“it is+adj.+ for sb. to do sth.”做某事是……，it作形式主语，不定式作真正的主语）
二、讲稿
2．距离新型冠状病毒感染疫情（COVID-19）爆发已经过去三年多时间。有人说，这三年，自己的健康码没有黄，青春却黄了；也有人说，这三年，让我们懂得了生命的无常，金钱的无能和健康的无价。关于疫情这三年，你有什么难忘的经历和感受呢？这三年疫情让你产生了什么变化呢？假如你是李华，请为班级主题班会“疫情这三年”准备一篇演讲稿，向同学们分享你在疫情期间的见闻、感受和改变。
参考要点：
1. 关于疫情的难忘见闻和感受（隔离，网课，抗疫……）
2. 疫情给你带来的改变（更健康，更自律，更珍惜……）
3. ……
要求：
1. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear classmates,
It has been three years since the outbreak of COVID-19.
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【参考范文】
Dear classmates,
It has been three years since the outbreak of COVID-19. We experienced unforgettable life. During the pandemic, people began to stay at home every day. Meanwhile, we had to have online classes. Some people had to separate from others. Some people even lost their lives unluckily. A lot of doctors and nurses fought against the COVID-19 bravely.
Certainly, every coin has two sides. In my opinion, although we got hurt from the pandemic, we also gained a lot. First, we have more self-discipline. I always get up and go to bed on time, which makes me healthier. Second, after the pandemic, I cherish my family more.
The pandemic tells us that we should cherish the current life. What do you think of it
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍疫情期间的见闻和感受；
第二步，讲述疫情给自己带来的改变；
第三步，呼吁大家珍惜现在的一切。
[亮点词汇]
①meanwhile 同时
②in my opinion 在我看来
[高分句型]
In my opinion, although we got hurt from the pandemic, we also gained a lot. (although引导的让步状语从句)
热点13 人口与生育
一、话题作文
1．上个世纪八十年代，我国开始实施独生子女政策，随着国情的变化，我国国策也发生了变化。继2016年全面放开二胎政策后，我国于2021年开始依法实施三胎生育政策．符合条件的夫妻可以生育三个孩子。作为一个中学生，你对三胎政策有什么看法呢？你是否期待拥有弟弟妹妹呢？请你以 Do You Want to Have Brothers or Sisters 为题目写一篇英语短文向《学英语》杂志社投稿。
要点提示：
表明自己的观点，阐述支持自己观点的理由和对未来生活的愿景等。
注意事项：
（1）120词左右，包含上述要点提示，可适当发挥，行文连贯；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和学校名。
Do You Want to Have Brothers or Sisters
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【参考范文】
Do You Want to Have Brothers or Sisters
I hope to have a brother or sister. I am the only child in my family. When my father and mother are busy working, I have to stay at home alone and often feel very lonely. So having a younger brother or sister is my dream.
Thanks to the two—child policy, each family can have two children now. I think maybe my dream can come true.
I have talked with my parents about my dream and I’ ve also promised that I will take good care of the new family member. My parents have agreed to consider it carefully. I will also spend more time with my brother or sister. I also take him / her to the park on weekends. If I have something delicious, I will give it to him / her. Now I’ m looking forward to their good news.
【详解】1.题干解读：阅读题干可知，要求以“Do You Want to Have Brothers or Sisters ”为题，针对三胎政策，提出自己的看法，是否期待拥有弟弟妹妹，以及阐述支持自己观点的理由和对未来生活的愿景。写作前可以提前列举出可能使用的到的单词、短语及句型；写作时注意写作手法要符合英语的表达习惯；写作后注意检查。
2.写作指导：这是一篇看法类作文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。采取三段式的写作手法：第一段表明自己的想法，想有弟弟妹妹及其原因；第二段提出自己的看法——赞同三胎政策；第三段写对有弟弟妹妹的未来生活的憧憬。
二、材料作文
2．中共十八届五中全会提出一对夫妇可生育两个孩子政策后，2021年5月31日中共中央政治局会议，国家现在放开三胎，全社会展开了热烈的讨论。我校也就“是否想要个弟弟或妹妹”对部分学生进行了一次问卷调查。请你根据调查报告结果，结合自身情况阐述你的观点。问卷调查结果如下：
Do you want a little brother or sister
For (40%) Against (60%)
1. not feel lonely any more2. help each other, share happiness and sadness3. … 1. worry about parents’ love2. Bother（打扰）his/her studying3. …
要求：
1. 80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 条理清楚，书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Recently, a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. The opinions are different.
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【参考范文】
Recently, a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. The opinions are different.
About forty percent students think it’s good to have a brother or a sister. They can help each other and share the happiness and sadness together. And they won’t feel lonely anymore. What’s more, they think they’ll get more freedom. But others disagree. They think they won’t get used to the change. They also worry that their parents won’t love them as much as before. Besides, they’re afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study. In my opinion, it’s hard to say whether it’s good or bad to have a brother or sister. But we should respect our parents choices. After all, they’re the persons who will make the final decision.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：要求根据表格的调查报告结果，结合自身情况阐述自己的观点。不要遗漏表格中的内容，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先通过介绍“学校做了一项关于你想要一个小弟弟还是妹妹的调查”来引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述调查报告的结果；
第三步，谈谈自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①each other互相
②get used to习惯于
③In one’s opinion在某人看来
[高分句型]
①About forty percent students think it’s good to have a brother or a sister.（宾语从句）
②They think they won’t get used to the change.（宾语从句）
③ In my opinion, it’s hard to say whether it’s good or bad to have a brother or sister.（It的固定句型）
④After all, they’re the persons who will make the final decision.（定语从句）
3．请根据下列内容提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈中国人口数量，以及政府在改善人们生活水平方面取得的成就。
内容提示：
1.中国有很大的人口，超过14亿人口。
2.中国做了巨大的努力来满足人们的日常需求。中国政府制定了很多合理的政策促进发展。中国变得越来越强大，人们生活水平正快速改善。
3.人们相信中国的未来会更加光明。
参考词汇：合理的政策 rational policies；工作机会 job opportunities；接受好的教育 get a good education
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【参考范文】
China is now developing faster and faster, and its population is also growing. China has a large population, more than 1.4 billion people.
China has made great efforts to meet people’s daily needs. The Chinese government has made many rational policies to promote development. It also provides more and more job opportunities for people because of the good education people get.
China is becoming stronger and stronger, and people’s living standards are improving rapidly. People believe that China’s future will be brighter.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”为主；
③提示：题干要求根据材料提示，谈谈中国人口数量，以及政府在改善人们生活水平方面取得的成就。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从总体上介绍中国的发展情况以及人口数量；
第二步，具体阐述政府在改善人们生活水平方面取得的成就；
第三步，总结全文，祝愿中国的未来会更好。
[亮点词汇]
①make great efforts to do努力做某事
②provide sth for sb为某人提供某物
③because of+名词（短语）因为
④faster and faster越来越快
[高分句型]
①The Chinese government has made many rational policies to promote development.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②It also provides more and more job opportunities for people because of the good education people get.(定语从句)
4．请根据提示写一篇题为The Population Problem的短文。（80词左右）
提示:
1.人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；
2.中国是世界上人口最多的国家；
3.如果人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重问题（请举例说明）；
4.我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。
The Population Problem
【参考范文】
The Population Problem
The population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with 1.3 billion. It has become a serious problem. A large population causes many difficulties, not only for every family, but also for the whole nation. For example, there is less living space. It’s difficult for many people to find jobs. We are short of energy and water. Most cities are more crowded than before, and the traffic is much heavier.
As far as I am concerned, we should do something to control the population. One answer is known as the one-child policy. It has worked well in controlling China’s population.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文，主要讲述当今世界上最大的问题——人口问题，并讲述人口过快增长的问题以及解决方法。注意时态的运用，并不能遗漏要点。
2.点评：这是一篇优秀的文章，涉及到题目中所给的要点，第一段讲述人口问题、中国是世界上人口最多的国家以及带来的问题，第二段讲述采取的措施。本文时态运用准确，并运用了许多高级短语以及句型，符合英语国家的语言习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数, not only...but also..., for example, be short of, much+比较级，as far as I am concerned等。
句型：It’s difficult for many people to find jobs中it作形式主语，真正的主语为to find jobs。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数, be short of, much+比较级，It’s difficult for many people to find jobs中it作形式主语，真正的主语为to find jobs。等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如not only...but also..., for example, as far as I am concerned等；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
三、书信作文
5．国家修改生育政策后，很多同学面临着即将做哥哥或姐姐的情况。假如你是学生李华，在家是独生之女，国家放开生育政策后，你的父母想再生一个孩子，征求你的意见。恰好你的美国笔友Peter来信询问我国的三孩政策。你给他回一封信，内容要点如下：
1.简单介绍国家的三孩政策；
2.得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法；
3.征求Peter的看法。
注意：
1.60—80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
Childbearing policy生育政策；three-child policy三孩政策；two-child policy二胎政策；introduce介绍；explain解释；government政府；allow允许；decision决定；though尽管
Dear Peter,
I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you about the childbearing policy in China. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you about the childbearing policy in China.
The Chinese government recently plans to change the two-child policy into three-child policy, meaning that every family in China is allowed to have three children. Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child, which worries me a great deal. Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I have to share everything with him or her. Most importantly, what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the new child As you have a younger sister, did you have similar problems What’s your opinion about this
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给要点提示，写一封信给Peter介绍我国的三胎政策、父母要生二胎后你的想法以及征求Peter的想法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍国家的三孩政策；
第二步，介绍得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法；
第三步，征求Peter的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth计划做某事
②make a decision决定
③share...with和……分享
[高分句型]
①Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child, which worries me a great deal.（which引导的非限制定语从句）
②Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I have to share everything with him or her.（though引导的让步状语从句）
热点14 网购
一、材料作文
1．随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。
优点：
1. 足不出户；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累。
2. 价格通常比较便宜。
3. 可供选择的范围广，品种多。
缺点：
1. 只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。
2. 容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。
注意：
1. 所表述的内容必须包含以上所有方面；
2. 词数80—100，开头文章已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
网购 shopping online；避免做某事 avoid doing sth；商品 goods；导致 cause
With the development of the Internet, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping online.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给中文提示，写一篇作文介绍网上购物的优点和缺点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍网购的优点；
第二步，介绍网购的缺点。
第三步，最后介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be used to doing sth习惯做某事
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③on the one hand...on the other hand一方面……另一方面……
[高分句型]
①you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors.（what引导的宾语从句）
②When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.（when引导的时间状语从句以及whose引导的定语从句）
2．随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格所给的提示信息，以 “Shopping online” 为题写一篇关于网上购物的文章。
优点 1、足不出户；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累。2、价格通常比较便宜。3、可供选择的范围广，品种多。
缺点 1、只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。2、容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。
要求: 1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可以适当自由发挥。
2.条理清楚，表达得当，字迹工整，书写规范。
3.文中不得出现本人真实的学校、班级和姓名。
4.词数在100左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数，但要抄写到答题卡上。Shopping online
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
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【参考范文】：
Shopping online
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping online.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照表格内要点提示介绍网络购物的优缺点，写作时需要涵盖表格中的全部要点，切忌遗漏。
2.写作指导：文章以一般现在时，第三人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意按照要点分段叙述，第一段点明主题；第二段介绍网络购物的优点；第三段介绍网络购物的缺点；最后一段总结全文或发表个人感悟。
理清晰。做到无语法和标点错误。
3．随着社会的发展，网上购物在我们的日常生活中成为一种流行的购物方式。请你根据下表提示，谈谈网上购物的利与弊。
提示：
Advantages Disadvantages
方便 看不见物品
24小时营业 容易受到欺骗（be cheated）
不用出家门 不能享受到和朋友一起购物的乐趣
要求：
1.参考提示信息，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词。
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【参考范文】：
With the development of society, shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It’s a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choice. It’s convenient for us to shop online. You can buy anything you like. You don’t have to wait in line with other shoppers. Besides, it’s often open for 24 hours a day.
However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can’t actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best chance to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.
In a word, we should make proper use of the Internet shopping.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，题目要求我们根据所给表格的内容提示，谈谈网上购物的优缺点。
2.写作指导：时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第二人称。本文分为三部分，首段介绍网上购物的优点，第二段介绍了网上购物的缺点，第三段点明了对待网上购物的看法。写作过程注意分层次，条理要清晰，把观点阐述清楚。要保证表达准确，语法正确。
4．随着网络的发展,人们消费观念转变,购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购” Online Shopping成为一种时尚与便捷,越来越多的学生也正加入网购群体中。请你根据以下提示,写一篇以网购Online Shopping的短文。
优点:
1. 生活便利；2.有更多时间和精力专注于学习和工作。
2.价格通常比较便宜。
3.避免劳累,越来越受欢迎。
缺点:
1.只能看到图片,看不到商品本身也检查不到质量。
2.容易购买大量不太需要的东西,造成浪费。
参考词汇:网购 shopping online；避免做某事 avoid doing sth； 商品 goods； 导致 cause
写作要求:
1. 短文应包括所提供的所有内容,尽可能使用所给的参考词汇,可以适当发挥,行文连贯；
2. 不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露你个人身份的信息；
3. 词数:80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Online Shopping
With the development of the Internet,many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Online Shopping
With the development of the Internet，many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Shopping online has made our daily life more convenient and comfortable . You can concentrate more time and energy on study and work .You can avoid getting tired. So it is becoming more and more popular.Every coin has two sides. It also has disadvantages. On the one hand， you only can see the pictures ,you can’t see the goods or check their qualities . On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not needed. That’s a waste of money.
All in all， I love shopping online .
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，写作时要按议论文格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段叙述网购的利与弊；第三段表达我对网购的观点。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第二、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，描述网购成为时尚时，人们使用网购的情况应描写细致；并且网购的优点、缺点以及我的看法等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
二、电子邮件
5．近年来，科技的进步正在逐步影响着人们的日常生活。 中国的“新四大发明”：高铁、支付宝、共享单车和网购使得人们的出行与生活更加便捷。假如你是李华，你的朋友Lisa是英国的一名初中生，她对我们的“新四大发明”很感兴趣。请你给她写一封电子邮件，具体内容如下：
1.介绍共享单车和网购的基本情况并谈谈你的看法和评价；
2.邀请她下个月参加你校科技节，将展出学生制作的各类材质的小模型。
注意：
1.词数80词左右,
2.可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。
参考词汇：共享单车：shared bikes
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【参考范文】
Dear Lisa,
I'm glad to hear that you're so interested in our “Four New Inventions”. Let me tell you about them. They are high-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping. We travel by high-speed railways. They are very quick. We use electronic payments when we use online shopping. When we want to go somewhere by bike, we use shared bicycles. We use our mobile phone to unlock the shared bicycle. It is convenient and cheap. There is no pollution and oil cost. We can also keep healthy when we ride it. There will be a Science Festival in our school. It will show all kinds of models that students make. I hope you will come to visit them.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据所给出的材料提示，向你的英国朋友Lisa介绍我们的“新四大发明”；介绍共享单车和网购的基本情况并谈谈你的看法和评价；邀请她下个月参加你校的科技节。首先我们要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，辅以第三人称。时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时，在介绍共享单车和网购的基本情况和看法时用一般现在时，邀请她下个月参加你校科技节时用一般将来时；文章要紧扣题目要点，围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
三、书信作文
6．假如你是李华，你两个星期前在网上订购的手机质量有问题，电池只能用半天，屏幕也有问题，时不时地不能看到显示内容。请你根据以下提示写一封信给网店的售后客服反映问题。
When and where did you buy the mobile phone
What’s wrong with the mobile phone
How would you like to solve the problem
注意事项：
1．信件必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
2．词数90左右。信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
提示词汇： 质量 quality 电池 battery
Dear Sir/Madam,
Order number 8043197725
Thanks for your attention. I’m writing to complain about your product.
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Order number 8043197725
Thanks for your attention. I’m writing to complain about your product.
Two weeks ago, I ordered a mobile phone from your online shop. However, the quality of this mobile phone is not up to standard.
First of all, its battery can last for half a day at most. I think it should last at least a whole day. Also, there is something wrong with its screen. From time to time, I can’t see what is on the screen.
I’m not satisfied with this mobile phone at all. I regret buying a mobile phone like this. I would like to get my money back.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏三个问题提示中涉及的内容，写信反映自己遇到的问题并希望得到解决。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信目的；
第二步，介绍具体有什么不满的；
第二步，期望得到回复。
[亮点词汇]
①complain about 抱怨
②first of all 首先
③at most 至多
④be satisfied with 对……很满意
⑤regret doing sth. 后悔做了某事
[高分句型]
①I think it should last at least a whole day.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Also, there is something wrong with its screen. （There be句型）
热点15 民族希望与未来
一、话题作文
1．每个人都有自己引以为傲的东西，那么让你感到骄傲的是什么呢？是我们伟大的祖国，是努力拼搏的自己还是可亲可敬的家人呢？请以“I'm so proud of____________”为题写一篇英语短文。
要点：1. 让你引以为傲的是什么；
2. 你为什么以此为傲；
3. 你有什么期望。
要求：1. 请补全标题，如myself或my father或our country等；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数100左右。
【参考范文】 ：
I'm so proud of our country
I'm so proud of our country. China has such a long-standing history. It has so many resources. We Chinese people are clever and hard-working. China has made much progress in many fields in recent years. We successfully hosted the 2008 Olympic Games. Athletes have won many gold medals in international competitions. Scientists have launched many kinds of man-made satellites. Great changes have taken place in people's lives. We can get a good education. Now all of us can get free medical care. Till now China has successfully controlled the new coronavirus and has made remarkable achievements.
We are sure to take the lead in the world in the future, for our problems are big but our dream is even bigger.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文为话题作文，要求以“I'm so proud of…”为题写一篇英语短文。内容包括：陈述是什么让你引以为豪；为什么以此为傲；有什么期望。
2.写作指导：本文叙述发生过的事情用一般过去时，讲述已取得的成就用现在完成时。书写时要依据提示，分层次有条理地从 “什么让你引以为豪；为什么以此为傲；有什么期望” 三个方面阐述。
二、电子邮件
2．书面表达
随着中国国际地位的日益提高，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国。假定你是李明，你
最近认识的澳大利亚笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想更多地了解中国。请认真阅读下
面的邮件，并根据信中的内容及你的了解用英语回复。
To: Li Ming@
From: David@
Dear Li Ming,How are you Is everything going smoothly It's February. It's very hot in Australia nowand I'm having a long summer vacation. I'm making a trip plan to China these days. Would youplease tell me more about China ●What's the season in China now ●What's the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during thefestival ●Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there ●What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives I look forward to hearing from you soon.Best wishesDavid
注意事项:
1.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.词数在90个左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear David,
I'm really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with a long history.
I'm sure you'll have a wonderful time here.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【参考范文】
Dear Thomas,
I’m really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with along history.
It is winter now and Spring Festival is the most popular at this time of year. Family members get together and then have a big dinner, After that, they watch lion dances and fireworks.
“East or west, Gulin landscape is best.” Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. You can take a boat trip along the Lijiang Rive or ride around the countryside. It is great fun.
Guilin is a special city with strong local colour. You can choose many excellent gifts there, such as Chinese paintings, paper fans and colorful clothes.
I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here.
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
【详解】这是一篇书信作文，根据电子邮件中的相关信息向澳大利亚笔友David介绍一下中国。所提供的材料中问到了关于中国的几个问题：●What's the season in China now ●What's the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during the festival ●Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there ●What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives 主要从这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第三人称。注意作文中必须包含电子邮件上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. 如果你喜欢自然风光，桂林值得一游。
句子if you like natural views.是由if引导的条件状语从句。
【高分句型二】I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here. 我相信你会在这里过得很愉快。
you’ll have a wonderful time here. 是宾语从句。
三、讲稿
3．实现中华民族伟大复兴，是中华民族近代以来最伟大的梦想。作为一名即将毕业的中学生，为此，你有什么人生规划？你们学校将围绕这个主题举行一次英语演讲比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。写作提示：
(1)中华民族历史悠久，文化灿烂，今天，祖国在全国人民的努力下越来越强大，许多科学技术处在世界领先地位，身为一名中国人倍感自豪！
splendid culture 灿烂的文化 motherland 祖国 with…efforts在……的努力下 technology 科技 Lead in the world 领先世界
(2)为实现中国梦而奋斗。学会做一个感恩、守规矩、善良并诚信的人，不怕困难，努力学习更多的知识，提高自己的能力，将来成为……(写出自己理想的职业及理由) make…come true, grateful (感恩的) , well-behaved (守规矩的)
写作要求：
(1)不得使用真实的姓名和校名：
(2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
(3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；
(4)词数80 左右 (短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 。
Hello, everyone! Firstly, I want to tell you that _____________________________________
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That’s all. Thank you!
【参考范文】：
Hello, everyone! Firstly, I want to tell you that the Chinese nation has a long history and splendid culture. Today, our motherland is becoming stronger and stronger with all Chinese people’s efforts. Many technologies are Leading in the world. I’m very proud of being a Chinese.
Secondly, I want to tell you that I’ll work hard to make our Chinese Dream come true. I’ll learn to be a grateful, well-behaved, kind and honest person. I’m not afraid of the difficulties. I’ll try to learn more knowledge and improve my own abilities. I’ll become a scientist and make contributions to our country in the future.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先表达中华民族通过自身的努力变得更加强大；
第二步，具体阐述通过怎么做来实现中国梦；
第三步，最后是表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
① stronger and stronger 越来越强大
② be proud of 为……感到骄傲
③ come true实现
④ be afraid of 害怕
[高分句型]
① Secondly, I want to tell you that I’ll work hard to make our Chinese Dream come true.（that引导宾语从句，句尾动词不定式作目的状语）
② I’ll try to learn more knowledge and improve my own abilities.（and并列两个动词短语）
4．习主席在全国教育大会上强调，中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿，简单谈谈如何做一个新时代合格的中学生。
要点提示：
(1)爱国爱家，诚实守信；
(2)努力学习，做个有创造力的人；
(3)参加体育锻炼，保持健康；
(4)其他方面等等。
写作要求：
(1)词数80左右(开头已经给出，不计入总词数)；
(2)根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
Boys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. Today I`m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Boys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students. First, we should love our country as well as our family. We must keep our promise and be thankful to people who helped us. Second, we should study hard and be creative. Third, we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy. Fourth, we should be good at discovering the beauty in life and learn to love nature. We must take good care of our home. Fifth, we should also take an active part in all kinds of labor in and out of school. As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。根据要点提示，简单谈谈如何做一个新时代合格的中学生。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称行文。写作时除了叙述所给的三点外，围绕主题可适当发挥，添加几点其他内容。文章力求语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
5．假如你是李华，你所在的学校将举行一次英语演讲比赛。请你结合以下思维导图，以“I am proud of our country”为题写一篇演讲稿，简要阐述中国这些年在环境、传播中国文化以及太空工业等方面的发展与变化，并谈谈你的感受。词数90左右。
注意事项：
(1)必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)意思清楚，表达通畅，行文连贯，书写规范；
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名，校名和地名。
I am proud of our country
Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【参考范文】
I am proud of our country
Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here.
Obviously, great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures. Clear rivers and blue sky return to our life. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. What’s more, China has made great progress in its space industry. Many spaceships have been successfully launched, making China’s space dream a reality.
I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“I am proud of our country”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己很高兴可以做演讲；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“环境、文化、航天工业等”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，表达自己的感受；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②For example例如
③At the same time同时
[高分句型]
①At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it.（which引导的定语从句）
②I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future.（and连接的并列句和省略that的宾语从句）
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热点16未来与梦想
一、话题作文
1．中国的高速发展离不开每个人的努力，科技的飞跃，社会的进步和文化的传播都离不开一个个优秀的个体。假如你是李华，请用“My dream job”为题，写一篇英语文章向校报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 阐述你将来想做什么样的工作。
2. 能为我们祖国做哪些贡献。
注意事项：
1.90字左右。
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
My dream job
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【参考范文】
My dream job
As the saying goes, “Great dreams make a bright future.” My dream is to be a doctor in the future.
I think it’s great to be a doctor. When I see sick people in the hospital or on TV, I can’t help worrying about them and want to give them a hand. If I become a doctor, I can help many patients get well. What’s more, being a doctor isn’t only about treating patients. Doctors also do research and experiments so that they can make a contribution to medical service of our country.
I’ll make an effort to become a doctor.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一篇写梦想中的工作的记叙文。
②时态：本文应用一般现在时和一般将来时两种时态。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出文章的主题：我梦想中的工作是什么。
第二步，介绍喜欢这份工作的理由，以及这份工作能为祖国做出什么贡献。
第三步，总结全文，表达原望。
[亮点词汇]
①as the saying goes 俗话说
②can’t help doing sth. 忍不住做某事
③make a contribution to… 为……做出贡献
[高分句型]
①When I see sick people in the hospital or on TV, I can’t help worrying about them and want to give them a hand. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②If I become a doctor, I can help many patients get well. (if引导的条件状语从句)
2．三年的初中生活就要结束了，崭新的高中学习即将到来，回顾过去，你一定有许多成功的喜悦与失利的遗憾，展望未来，你肯定有美好的憧憬和实实在在的打算。请你以“Unforgettable Memories”为题，给英文报纸《21st Century》“青春校园”栏目写一篇80词左右的征文。
1. 内容要包含对过去的回忆和对未来的憧憬；
2. 文中不要出现你的真实姓名，班级和学校名称；
3. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Unforgettable Memories
How time flies! I’m going to finish my junior middle school soon.
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【参考范文】
Unforgettable Memories
How time flies! I’m going to finish my junior middle school soon. Lots of memories left in my mind. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in my mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much.
With their help I’ve made great progress. But I’m a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided.
Senior high school is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings. As it is said, “It is not our abilities that show what we truly are, but our choice.” The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。内容是以“Unforgettable Memories”为题，给英文报纸21st Century“青春校园”栏目写一篇征文，介绍一下你对过去的回忆和对未来的憧憬。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先承接短文开头，从学业有成、师生情谊以及最大的遗憾和对未来的憧憬几个方面详细地叙述。
第三步：书写结语。表示“我相信我能做到。”
[亮点词汇]
①lots of许多
②stay in my mind留在我的脑海里
③go through通过
④be friendly to对……友好
⑤be strict with对某人要求严格
⑥think over仔细考虑
[高分句型]
①How time flies!（how引起的感叹句）
② Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. （and连接的并列句）
③And I always make mistakes which can be avoided.（which引导的定语从句）
④As it is said, “It is not our abilities that show what we truly are, but our choice.”（谚语的应用）
⑤The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. （and连接的并列句）
二、材料作文
3．学校英语报举行“未来之城”征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你心目中的未来城市，并分享你在未来之城生活的想法。短文需包括下图所以提示内容。
注意：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名词。
Our City of the Future
What will our city be like in 2050
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【参考范文】
Our City of the Future
What will our city be like in 2050 I think it will be quite different from now. The living environment will be greatly improved in the following ways.
The houses will be both green and smart. Everything will be made by environmental-friendly materials. What’s more, the house will be connected to the shops and hospitals so that you can order all kinds of services without going out. Most of the time people will work at home and they will have fewer working hours because of new technologies. If you want to go travelling, there will be no traffic jam at all. You can take different kinds of transportations, such as the flying buses: and the driverless cars. The most exciting thing for students will be the widely use of E-books and VR technology at school. As a result, there will be paperless exams and more fun in learning.
Our city in 2050 will be full of hope and we should work hard to realize it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示介绍你心目中的未来城市，并分享你在未来之城生活的想法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍未来城市的房子；
第二步，介绍未来城市的工作和交通情况；
第三步，最后介绍未来的学校。
[亮点词汇]
①What’s more而且
②such as比如
③As a result结果
④be full of 充满
[高分句型]
①the house will be connected to the shops and hospitals so that you can order all kinds of services without going out.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
②If you want to go travelling, there will be no traffic jam at all.（if引导的条件状语从句）
4．假如你是李华，马上面临初中毕业，迎接你的将是充满挑战却又让你满怀期待的高中生活。请根据以下图表信息规划一下你的高中学习和生活。
要求：
(1)参考提示语，可适当发挥；
(2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
(3)文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
(4)词数：不少于90词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数。)
My Life in Senior High School
My name is Li Hua._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
My Life in Senior High School
My name is Li Hua. In three months, I’ll finish my junior school years and go to senior school for another new start in life.
First of all, I must study hard. Because only by going to a good university can I have better job opportunities in the future. At the same time, I also want to exercise hard. I like playing basketball very much. As long as I have time, I will spend time reading every day to enrich my knowledge. I will also use the weekend to do volunteer activities outside to help those in need.
As far as I am concerned, my life in senior high school will be much more colorful than before.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，主要从学习计划、运动以及爱好等方面来介绍高中的生活。具体内容要包含所给提示，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称为主，主体时态为一般将来时，描述现在的情况可以使用一般现在时。文章采用三段式，第一段介绍即将要开始高中生活；第二段从学习、运动以及爱好等方面逐一介绍自己的计划；最后一段总结，展望自己的高中生活。
5．随着我国航天技术的发展和进步，实行太空移民不再是梦。请根据以下提示，写一篇文章介绍未来太空生活。
1.衣服可以检测身体健康
2.住在智能房子，有机器人做家务
3.驾驶飞船，用太阳能行驶
4.自由发挥两点内容
5.你的感受
注意：1词数：80字左右（文章开头己给出，不计入词数）
2短文必须包含所有要点，并适当发挥；
3文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Space life in the future
Space migration is coming soon. I would like to introduce the space life in the future.
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【参考范文】
Space life in the future
Space migration is coming soon. I would like to introduce the space life in the future.
In the future, the clothes we wear can detect our physical health so that we can know our health at any time. And we will live in a smart house with robots doing housework. We will have more time to do what we are interested in. What’s more, we will fly a spaceship running on solar power. At last, there will be no pollution in the space and there will be much better living environment.
I think this kind of life is very wonderful. I’m looking forward to it.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是以“Space life in the future”为题，并结合所提示内容，介绍未来的太空生活，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段重点介绍未来的太空生活；第三段介绍自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
6．今年三月份，中国国家宇航员王亚平及她的伙伴们又一次给全国的孩子们带来了别开生面的天宫课堂，一个个有趣的物理实验激发了大家探索太空的兴趣。假设你是李雷，请你以“My Space Dream”为题写一篇英文短文谈谈你的观后感，并使用以下提示问题，词数80左右。
1. Do you want to explore space
2. What will you do if you are in space
3. How will you achieve your space dream
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
My Space Dream
It’s reported that millions of students and teachers watched the space lecture hosted by Wang Yaping and her partners in the space station lately.
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【参考范文】：
My Space Dream
It’s reported that millions of students and teachers watched the space lecture hosted by Wang Yaping and her partners in the space station lately.
I have a dream. I want to become an astronaut when I grow up. I am eager to explore space in the future. One day, I will take a space walk like Wang Yaping. I will observe many unknown planets carefully. I will have a view of China from our mysterious space.
As for now, I plan to study science knowledge well, strengthen my body and make preparations for realizing my space dream.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“My Space Dream”为题，根据提示问题写短文谈谈自己的太空梦。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。可分为三段式写作：第一段用已给出开头；第二段介绍自己的太空梦及将会在太空中做什么；第三段介绍将如何实现自己的太空梦。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
7．“If the youth are wise, the country will be wise. If the youth are strong, the country will be strong.” “少年智则国智，少年强则国强。”出自梁启超的《少年中国说》。
作为当代青少年，应该努力学习，不断进取，做一个坚强、自信、独立的少年，以期不久的将来报效祖国。那么，在成长过程中青少年应该做什么？怎么做？请你根据下表提示以 “The Strong Youth Make a Strong Country” 为题，写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法。除了提示中的内容，请你至少再补充一条。
build up our bodies by ...keep strong and healthy develop some interests, for examples ...;make ourselves fully developed
do housework, such as ...learn to be independent(独立的) （自拟1个观点）
参考词汇：
confident自信的，successful成功的, failure失败，make progress进步
注意：
①主题突出，要点齐全，条理清晰，语言规范；
②可适当发挥，80词左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
③文中不得出现真实的学校、姓名等信息。The Strong Youth Make a Strong Country
As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how Here is my opinion._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
The Strong Youth Make a Strong Country
As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how Here is my opinion.
Basically, we should build up our bodies by taking some exercise, such as running, swimming and so on. In this way, we can keep ourselves strong and healthy.
What’s more, developing some interests is also a good way. We can learn to play the piano, sing songs and so on.
In addition, I think it’s our duty to do some housework at home. Then our parents can live an easier life. Also, by doing this, we can learn to be independent.
Lastly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. The more books we read, the more powerful we’ll be. Thus, we can help build our country and enjoy a better life.
If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up a fully developed person.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以以“The Strong Youth Make a Strong Country”为题，根据要点提示写一篇短文介绍青少年如何做才可以成为一个坚强、自信、独立的少年。
2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时；人称主要以第一人称为主；在写作时要根据要点，从锻炼、培养兴趣、做家务以及学习四个方面进行叙述，注意要内容完整，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，无标点和语法错误。
9．一家英语杂志社向中学生征文，主题是“二十年后的我”。请根据以下要点和你的畅想完成短文。
（1）工作；（2）家庭；（3）业余生活。
注意：（1）词数80～ 100；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；（4）短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I often imagine what my life will be like in 20 years. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】：
I often imagine what my life will be like in 20 years. With no doubt, my life will be very different.
I’ll be thirty-five years old by then. I hope I’ll work in a computer company as a program designer, enjoying my work and getting along well with my fellow workers. At that time, probably with two lovely children. Believe it or not, I’ll continue to take exercise, I’ll travel around the world.
In a word, my life will be much more colorful.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于想象类作文。本文以“二十年后的我”展开，根据提示完成文章，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文应使用第一人称来书写；时态应选用一般将来时描述20年后的生活；文章的三个段落构成“总—分—总”结构，进行首尾呼应；文章第二段在具体描述20年后生活的时候，需要适当添加细节，注意词汇和句式的多样性，且条理清晰，合乎逻辑。
10．广州是一座历史文化名城。自古流传的“食在广州”和近年兴起的“广州过年，花城看花”，我们不难看出广州以她的美食和风景而闻名于世。广州以她特有的水土，孕育了开放包容的文化观念，滋养着一代又一代既尊重传统、心怀祖国，又敢于突破创新、具有国际视野的广州人。他们用汗水和智慧让这座城市发展成如今无论是社会、文化还是环保、科技等方面都有所成就的一个国际都市。那么，在广州学习与成长的你，是否也想为广州的未来做一些贡献呢？
下周的英语课上，你们班将组织一场以“广州·一起向未来（Together for a shared future of Guangzhou）”为主题的演讲比赛，请你以未来广州主人翁的身份，按提示且结合自身经历准备一份演讲稿。
1. 你对广州的印象；
2. 你对未来广州的构想（选取一个方面展开描述）
3. 你的做法（请补充1~2点）
注意：1. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 不得透露自己学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Together for a shared future of Guangzhou
Guangzhou is a city with a long history.
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【参考范文】
Together for a shared future of Guangzhou
Guangzhou is a city with a long history. It’s very famous for its food. Having morning tea is a tradition in Guangzhou. Moreover, it has got many achievements in technology and economy.
I think it will be better in the future. For example, it will attract many visitors from all over the world because of its rich culture and delicious food. In the future, more and more restaurants will be built in order to satisfy all people’s needs. All kinds of traditional food will be improved greatly to cater to different people.
In my opinion, I will study harder to make myself better. And then I will exercise more to keep healthy. In this way can I make contributions to the city better.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求以“Together for a shared future of Guangzhou”为主题写一篇演讲稿；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般将来时为主；采用第一人称和第三人称口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：阐述对广州的印象；第二段：阐述对未来广州的构想；第三段：阐述自己的做法。
热点17 方法与策略
一、话题作文
1．某英语网站开展关于“How to Improve Myself”的征稿活动，倡导同学们提升自我，努力成为“终生运动者，责任担当者，问题解决者，优雅生活者”，请根据以下图示内容积极投稿。
要求：
1.词数80~100；
2.请根据以上提示信息，结合实际情况叙述，可适当发挥；
3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
How to Improve Myself
Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself.
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【参考范文】
How to Improve Myself
Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself.
First, I need to exercise one hour every day. It is bad to stay at home and play games for a long time. Second, I should be responsible for myself and my family. I should be independent instead of depending on my parents too often. Third, in face of the problems, I have to take up the challenges and work them out rather than run away from them. Next, I will develop my interest in many things, such as playing basketball, and knitting, instead of being interested in nothing. Last but not least, I will communicate with others and be a good team player.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述运动，责任担当，问题解决和兴趣爱好方面提升自己的方法。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述提升自己的方法，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
二、材料作文
2．2022年4月21日，国家发布《义务教育课程方案（2022年版）》，将劳动课程列入国家课程，让学生要学会家务劳动，参与社会实践劳动，志愿服务劳动等。作为一名中学生，请你结合实际，以“How Can We Develop Working Spirit ”为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。
参考词汇：working class living skill social activity
要求：1. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校等个人信息。
2. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How Can We Develop Working Spirit
It’s pretty important for teenagers to develop working spirit. As a middle school student,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
How Can We Develop Working Spirit
It’s pretty important for teenagers to develop working spirit. As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly.
First, we should have working classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting tress or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or doing some dishes. Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.
In a word, the hardworking spirit educations is necessary and it helps to build us up.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：以“How Can We Develop Working Spirit”为题介绍如何培养劳动精神的方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，并表达自己的看法。
第二步，介绍培养劳动精神的方法。
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in 参加
② such as 例如
③ in a word 总之
[高分句型]
① It’s pretty important for teenagers to develop working spirit（“it’s+形容词+for sb+to do sth”的句型）
② Also, we need try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or doing some dishes.（动词不定式作宾语）
English is a bridge which connects the world and us. It’s interesting to learn it. I hope I can make greater progress in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“学会学习”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段先介绍自己学习英语的方法；第二段表达学习英语的感受或期望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误 。
3．中国共产主义青年团已经走过了百年历程。作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。
要求：1.字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；
2.思维导图中的提示词仅供参考，可适当发挥；
3.词数：80-100词。
How to Make Myself Better
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【参考范文】
How to Make Myself Better
As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better.
First of all, it is important to live healthily. I will eat more fruit and vegetables. I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep. What’s more, I should work hard at all my subjects. I’ll not be afraid to face challenges any more and try my best to solve the problems. Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends. Last but not least, it’s our responsibility to take care of our parents. I’ll also do what I can to help other people.
By doing these, I will make myself better and better.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“How to Make Myself Better”并结合思维导图中的提示词写一篇文章，介绍如何成为更好的自己。
2.写作指导：本文以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段从不同的方面介绍如何成为更好的自己；第三段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
4．随着“双减”政策的实施，同学们有更多的课余时间来培养自己的兴趣爱好，把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。亲爱的同学，你想做一个快乐的人吗？
请你以“How to Be a Happy Student”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：(1)根据右边的图文信息，选择至少两个方面的内容行文，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等个人信息；
(3)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚；
(4)词数不少于80。
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【参考范文】
How to Be a Happy Student
Everyone wants to be happy. As a student, what can we do to be happy Here is my advice.
It’s necessary for us to have learning goals. The goals can make us be clear about what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life. To be healthy is to be happy. So remember to have good life habits and do more exercise. We can do some sports, such as running or playing basketball. Also, we should be ready to help others. When we help those in trouble, we can get much happiness. Besides, the most important for us is to stay in a good mood. If we are in good spirits, we can study better. We should have a positive attitude and be ready to help others.
I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“How to Be a Happy Student”为题，结合图文信息进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从健康，爱好，情绪和习惯几方面进行阐述；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
三、讲稿
5．假定你是李华，来自光明学校，将代表你校参加全市中学生“学会学习”主题分享会。请以 “Learning to Learn” 为题，根据提示问题和写作要求，写一篇英语发言稿。
提示问题：1. What subject are you interested in
2. How do you deal with the difficulties in learning
3. Do you often make any plans for your study
4. What methods do you usually use to learn
5. Do you use other good learning materials
写作要求：1.请作简要的自我介绍；
2.至少选择三个提示问题展开写作；
3.词数不少于80词；
4.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Learning to Learn
Dear teachers and students,
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【参考范文】
Learning to Learn
Dear teachers and students,
My name is Li Hua. I come from Guangming School. Today my topic is “Learn to learn”.
First of all, my favorite subject is English. In fact, at the beginning, my English was not good, but I was still very interested in it. In order to improve my English, I often ask my teacher for help and recite words at home by myself every day. Slowly, my English improved. Besides, I also make plans for my study. For example, I have to memorize English words when I have breakfast in the morning. And I review what I learn every day before I go to bed at night.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给英文提示以 “Learning to Learn” 为题写一篇作文，介绍“学会学习”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，可以从所给提示问题选出两个来叙述；
第二步，再从剩下的问题中选择一个展开描述。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②in order to 为了
③for example比如
[高分句型]
①I have to memorize English words when I have breakfast in the morning.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②And I review what I learn every day before I go to bed at night.（what引导的宾语从句）
6．今年6月6日是第27个全国爱眼日，爱护眼睛很重要，请用英语写一篇关于保护眼睛的演讲稿，在班会上发言。
提示：1. 爱护眼睛的重要性；
2. 保护视力的方法：保持饮食均衡、勤做眼保健操、控制屏幕使用时间、养成良好的生活习惯；
3. ……
注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3. 80词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：eyesight(视力)
have/keep a balanced diet (保持饮食均衡)
control the screen time (控制屏幕使用时间)
Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Protecting Our Eyes”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【参考范文】
Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Protecting Our Eyes”.
Nowadays more and more students are nearsighted. As we all know, the eyes are the windows to the soul. If there is a problem with the eyes, there will be a lot of trouble in life and study. So we should try our best to protect our eyes. Here are some suggestions.
First, we should keep a balanced diet. Second, we should do eye exercises frequently. Third, we should control screen time. Finally, we also need to form good living habits.
In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求写一篇演讲稿。根据内容提示，写一篇作文关于保护眼睛。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。除去所给的开头和结尾，文章可再分为三段，第一段介绍爱护眼睛的重要性；第二段给出保护视力的方法；最后一段做总结。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
热点18 急救方法与技巧
一、材料作文
1．你班要举办题为“My hero (英雄)”的英文手抄报比赛，你打算写你的朋友李华勇救落水儿童的感人事迹。上周六你们在去博物馆的路上，他不顾个人安危，勇敢地跳入河里救落出了一名落水儿童，同行的你目击了这一切，深受感动。请根据提示写一篇短文，为手抄报比赛做准备。
提示：
1.介绍事情发生的大致经过；
2.描述李华的英勇行为；
3.就此事写出你的感受。
要求：
1.使用一般过去时和过去进行时；
2.内容应包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥；词数不少于80。
参考词汇：勇敢的brave
My Hero
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【参考范文】
My Hero
At 3 o’clock last Saturday, my friend Li Hua and I were making our way to the museum. While we were walking past a park, we saw three boys playing football. They were playing happily when a boy played the ball so hard that the ball flew into the river. He ran quickly after it and fell into the water, too. While I was calling for help, Li Hua jumped into the water without thinking to save the boy. Although it was a little difficult, Li Hua tried his best to get the boy out of the water. He told those boys not to play by the river anymore. Li Hua was brave enough to help others out of danger. He set a good example to us. He is my hero and I’m proud of him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“过去进行时”；
③提示：题干已给出故事背景，应根据提示内容，紧扣主题展开写作，可适当添加细节，突出重点内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍事情发生的大致经过；
第二步：描述李华勇于救人的英勇行为；
第三步：表达作者的内心感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make one’s way to向……进发、前往某处
②so...that...如此……以致……
③without thinking不假思索
④set a good example to sb.给某人树立好榜样
[高分句型]
①While we were walking past a park, we saw three boys playing football. （含有while引导的时间状语从句）
②They were playing happily when a boy played the ball so hard that the ball flew into the river. （含有when引导的时间状语从句）
③Although it was a little difficult, Li Hua tried his best to get the boy out of the water. （含有although引导的让步状语从句）
2．近些年在我国高层建筑火灾时有发生。如果遇到了类似的灾情，知道怎样逃生就显得尤为重要。请结合上面的文章和以下的提示，写一篇短文向大家介绍高层火灾的逃生方法。
高层火灾逃生要诀：
1. 保持冷静，尽力自救；
2. 简易防护，蒙鼻匍匐；
3. 不入险地，勿贪财物；
4. 善用通道，莫入电梯。
要求：
1. 不照抄原文；
2. 语句连贯，80 词左右（文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
These years high-rise building fires take place at times. If you live in a high-rise building and happen to meet such a fire disaster, what should you do to save yourself _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】：
These years high-rise building fires take place at times. If you live in a high-rise building and happen to meet such a fire disaster, what should you do to save yourself
No one knows for sure when a fire will happen, so it’s extremely necessary to make preparations before a fire starts. Check the fire escape in advance and make sure that you can find it in the dark when lights have failed. Find out where the nearest fire extinguisher is and read the instructions to learn how to use it.
What’s more, don’t lose your head if unfortunately a fire breaks out. First, telephone the fire department immediately when the fire just gets started. Take care not to be overcome by smoke, which containing monoxide gas, can kill you quickly. Cover your mouth with a wet towel or a wet cloth, and avoiding getting into the smoke. Don’t get in an elevator, as you may get trapped if the electricity fails. If you can’t get away by yourself, it is of great importance to hang something out of the window to attract attention as assign of asking for help.
In short, if you make preparations before and take precautions during the fire, chances are that you will survive in case of a fire if it really breaks out some day.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据材料中提示的要点写一篇关于“高层火灾逃生方法”的文章。写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，点明文章主题；中间段落介绍火灾发生时的自救方法；最后一段总结概括，升华主题。
2.写作指导：本文主题为“高层火灾逃生方法”；写作时应以提建议、说方法的口吻叙述，故应以第二人称、一般现在时进行介绍；写作时可以使用祈使句、状语从句等句式结构，使文章更加丰富，同时还要注意条理通顺，使读者一目了然。
3．如果家里突发火灾时，我们正好在室内，这时我们应该做什么，不应该做什么？请你根据下面的提示，以How to Protect Ourselves in the Fire为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
How to Protect Ourselves in the Fire
If a fire happens when we are in the room,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
How to Protect Ourselves in the Fire
If a fire happens when we are in the room, first, we should keep calm. Don’t be afraid. Call 119 or open the windows to cry for help. Second, we should find water to make our clothes wet. Cover our mouth and nose with them. We shouldn’t let fire burn our clothes. Third, if the light goes out, we should try to feel the door and open it. Take the stairs instead of the lift and run downstairs. Finally, we shouldn’t jump down from the high windows. Luck will be always with us.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于思维导图写作。写作时要注意图片上的信息，写全信息火灾发生时应该做什么，不应该做什么。
2.点评：采用一段式，主要说明了：第一，要冷静；第二，找水把衣服弄湿；第三，走楼梯逃生，不应该跳窗或者乘电梯。结构清晰，段落分明。用第一人称来进行论点分析；时态采用一般现在时为主。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be afraid，go out，jump down，Cover with，try to do sth.，instead of。
句型：if引导的条件状语从句，祈使句。
二、看图作文
4．假设你是李明，今天红十字会到你们学校开展心肺复苏（CPR）急救知识的普及教育。请根据下列图示写一封e-mail，把你所学到的CPR急救知识与意义和好友Michael分享。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
参考词汇：
first aid 急救 press 按压 breathe 呼吸 mouth-to-mouth breath 人工呼吸 AED除颤仪
Dear Michael,
I took part in the CPR training in our school today. I can't wait to share some first aid knowledge with you. First, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【参考范文】
Dear Michael,
I took part in the CPR training in our school today. I can't wait to share some first aid knowledge with you.
First, ask the person if he is OK. Second, if he 'stops breathing, you should call 120 for help at once and take out AED. Third, press the patient's chest for thirty times. Then open his mouth to check if there is something in his mouth or nose. After that, use mouth-to-mouth way to start his breathing for twice. Finally, use AED to give first aid. Remember to tell the other people to keep away from the patient.
If we know about the CPR, we can save people's lives. It's necessary for us to master it.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍你所学到的心肺复苏急救知识与意义。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍心肺复苏的步骤以及掌握心肺复苏急救知识的意义；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
三、讲稿
5．假如你是阳光中学八年级学生王华，几天前你目睹了一场火灾。请你以“Away From Fire” 为题做一次演讲。你草拟了演讲思维导图，请根据下图写一份80词左右的英文演讲稿。
注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须根据思维导图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 思维导图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在80个左右，演讲稿的首尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【参考范文】：
Good afternoon, everyone. I’m Wang Hua. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
A few days ago, I witnessed a big fire. A building caught a big fire. There was heavy smoke from the windows. People screamed in fear and ran in all directions. If we are in a big fire, we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet towel and stay low to the ground. Then try to get out as soon as possible. As students, we should learn to prevent fire in our daily life. Don’t put anything hot into the rubbish bin. Moreover, never play with fire.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿，根据几天前目睹了一场火灾。以“Away From Fire” 为题做一次演讲，描述火灾的场景，并介绍关于如何远离火灾及火中如何保护自己，根据下表中的记录，结合你自己对此事的看法。要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充。
2. 写作指导：本文用到的一般现在时态和一般过去时态，人称用第一人称。写作中注意一些连词的用法等。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
6．假如你是李华，是天津益中学校九年级的学生。十一月是你校的安全教育月，学校将在''全国消防日''举办消防疏散演练。请你在''国旗下的讲话''中进行演讲， 介绍拨打火警 电话''119''的注意事项并倡议同学们要认真对待消防演习，积极参与，听从指挥。
要点：
拨打火警电话''119''注意事项：
1 要记清火警电话''119''。
2 电话接通以后，要准确报出失火的地址，在说不清楚具体地址时，要说出地理位置，周 围明显建筑物或道路标志。
3 将自己的姓名、电话告诉对方，以便联系。
4 打完电话后，立即派人到路口等候消防车，引导消防车迅速赶到火灾地点。
倡议：
请同学们要认真对待消防演习，积极参与，听从指挥。
参考词汇：地理位置：locationn.明显的：distinct adj.道路标志：landmark n.消防车: fire enginen.消防演习：fire drills指挥，指令： instructions n. 消防安全：fire control
要求：（1）词数：80-120 个。（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear fellow schoolmates,
I'm so honored to be here to give a speech.As we know, fire control plays an important part on campus.How do we call 119 if there is a fire ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening.
【参考范文】
I'm so honored to be here to give a speech. As we know, fire control plays an important part on campus. How do we call 119 if there is a fire First of all, remember the fire alarm number "119" . Second, After the phone is connected, report the address of the fire accurately. When you are not clear about the specific address, you should say the location, surrounding distinct buildings or landmark. Third, tell your name and telephone number to the other party so that you can get in touch. Finally, after the call, immediately send someone to the intersection to wait for fire engine, and guide the fire truck to the fire site quickly.
Please take the fire drill seriously, actively participate in it and obey the instructions. It is necessary to master fire control.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇倡议书，假如你是李华，请你在''国旗下的讲话''中进行演讲，介绍拨打火警电话“119”的注意事项并倡议同学们要认真对待消防演习，积极参与，听从指挥。文中从四个方面介绍了拨打火警电话“119”注意事项。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第二人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时态，写作时注意承接开头，可以适当用一些连词，短语或句型；使文章看起来层次分明。同时语言的表达也符合语法结构，内容包括每一个要点提示，可适当发挥注意语言的逻辑性。
热点19 自我保护
一、话题作文
1．
学会自我保护（self-protection）是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据学校安全教育周收集的自我保护小贴士，并结合自身看法，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves”为题写一篇100词左右的短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护。
要求：句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯。
How Can We Protect Ourselves
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
How Can We Protect Ourselves
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we should eat healthily and safely. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.
In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于话题作文；
②时态：本文采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求结合自身阐述青少年如何自我保护，注意句子语法正确，结构连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，提出建议；
第二步：阐述如何自我保护；
第三步：总结全文，强调自我保护的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①one of...……之一
②be in danger在危险中
③Last but not least最后但同样重要的
④in short总之
[高分句型]
①Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.（if条件从句）
②Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school.（when引导时间状语从句）
2．全世界每年因安全事故导致有数以万计的生命死于非命！面对每一次残酷的事故，面对每一个鲜活的生命的逝去，我们难道就只有感叹、哀伤？其实，只要我们行动起来，做到心中有安全意识，遵守安全规则，就能消除潜在危险。我校即将举行“珍爱生命，心系安全”的征文比赛，特此向你征稿。请你围绕生活中经常存在的安全问题，如：运动安全，交通安全……结合实际就如何减少安全事故的发生谈至少三点建议，并呼吁大家一起携手，珍惜生命，健康成长。
要求：
1.不逐字翻译；
2.文章总词数为80—100；
3.文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名。
It is reported that there are thousands of accidents around the world every year.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】：
It is reported that there are thousands of accidents around the world every year. For example, many people die from car accidents every day. The unsafe food in the market can be seen everywhere. It is harmful to the our health. What’s more, improper exercise can also lead to safety problems.
In order to protect ourselves, we should obey the traffic rules. Don’t allow anyone to produce any unsafe food. We mustn’t sell or buy such unsafe food. When we play sports, we must pay more attention. We are supposed to stop as soon as we feel uncomfortable.
If we do so, every one will be safer.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求围绕常见的安全问题提出至少三点减少安全事故发生的建议，开头已给出，联系实际情况进行写作。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时，以第一、三人称为主，提建议时多用情态动词；写作时承接开头，先描述常见的安全问题，在提出具体建议，最后总结收尾。注意主谓一致，做到无语法和标点错误。
二、材料作文
3．生命只有一次，学生的安全非常重要。请你根据以下要点提示，以How to Keep Safe为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1.校园安全：和同学友好相处；遇到麻烦向老师求助；
2.交友安全：谨慎交友，特别是网上交友；不独自会见网友；
3.食品安全：吃健康食物；拒绝垃圾食品等；
4.交通安全：守规则；不闯红绿灯等；
5.个人观点：……（补充至少一条其他安全注意事项）。
要求：
1.词数110词左右（已给出的词句不计入总词数）；
2.要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；
3.不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语：careful; net-friend; traffic.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：
How to Keep Safe
Life is only once, so safety is important for us teenagers. But how can we keep safe Here are some suggestions.
First, we should get on well with our classmates at school. Don’t fight with them. If we really have trouble in communicating with them, we can ask our teachers for help. Second, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. We shouldn’t meet net-friends alone. Third, we’d better buy and eat food carefully. We should eat healthy food such as vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat junk food. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Fourth, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Besides, summer is coming and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.
In a word, safety must come first!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据要点提示写作，可适当增添内容，注意不要遗漏“补充至少一条其他安全注意事项”的写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，通过写“生命只有一次”引出话题；
第二步，从“校园、交友、食品、交通”等方面讲述安全注意事项；
第三步，书写结语，阐述个人观点。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with和……相处得好
②do harm to对……有害
③besides此外
[高分句型]
①If we really have trouble in communicating with them, we can ask our teachers for help.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red.（祈使句的否定形式，when引导的时间状语从句）
4．为增强安全意识，学校英语俱乐部将开展“How to protect ourselves”的讨论，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。以下信息非限定性内容，仅供参考。
How to protect ourselves At school get along with our classmates;…
In public never run after each other;…
On the Internet protect our personal information;…
… …
注意事项：
1. 短文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在100个左右，短文标题、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。How to protect ourselves
There is lots of possible danger around us. It’s important for us to learn how to protect ourselves. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!
【参考范文】
How to protect ourselves
There is lots of possible danger around us. It’s important for us to learn how to protect ourselves.
First of all, it’s necessary for us to get along well with our classmates. Never forget your teachers. Ask them for help while meeting any danger at school. Second, not doing something dangerous in public is also important. Remember not to run after or crowd with each other, especially not push past others. Third, be careful to make friends online. Don’t give any personal information to others. Never meet e-friends alone. Let your parents go with you if you have to. Last but not least, we must follow the traffic rules outside and don’t carry too much money with us.
Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇提纲类作文，以“How to protect ourselves”为题参照表格中要点信息进行分析。写作时需包括表格中所有要点，并适当拓展。
2.写作指导：本文以第一、二人称为主，时态为一般现在时；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，引入话题；第二段介绍如何从三个方面保护自己，可以多采用祈使句句式；第三段原文已给出；保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。
三、讲稿
5．青少年安全一直是人们关注的焦点。假如你校英语角将开展以“如何提升青少年自我保护能力”为主题的演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，以“How to Protect Ourselves”为题写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点提示:
1.提高自我保护意识；
2.不在网上泄露个人隐私；
3.遇到危险时要保持冷静。
写作要求：
1.包含提示中的所有要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 词数100左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数 )。
参考词汇：awareness 意识
How to Protect Ourselves
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves Here are some of my ideas.
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Danger is never as far away as we think. Safety must be put first whatever happens.
【参考范文】
How to Protect Ourselves
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves Here are some of my ideas.
First of all, it’s important for us to raise our awareness of self-protection. It can be dangerous to go outside alone at night. If we have to stay outdoors, make sure there is an adult around. Besides, we should guard against any possible danger around us and always stay away from places with warning signs. Secondly, don’t let out our personal information on the Internet. Sharing information such as addresses, phone numbers, birth dates and school names is one of the biggest risks online. Last but not least, we’re supposed to keep our cool when facing danger. Remember to call the police for help as soon as possible.
Danger is never as far away as we think. Safety must be put first whatever happens.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，根据提示要点介绍自我保护的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①make sure 确保
②guard against 提防
③let out 泄露
④be supposed to do sth 应该做某事
[高分句型]
①Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers（“one of the+形容词+最高级”的结构）
②it’s important for us to raise our awareness of self-protection（动词不定式作主语）
6．为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，学校举办了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
(1)交通安全：遵守交通规则，不闯红灯，走人行横道；
(2)食品安全：吃水果蔬菜等健康食品，远离垃圾食品；
(3)出行安全：晚上不要单独外出，遇到困难向他人求助；
(4)网络安全：不要在网上透露个人信息……（请你补充一条建议）。感想1—2点。
注意：1.参考词汇：人行横道（sidewalk）；
2.词数80词左右（开头已给出，不记入词数）；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分
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【参考范文】
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we do Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, we must follow the traffic rules. When we cross the road, we should choose the zebra crossing. What’s more, don’t go until the light turns green. Secondly, pay attention to the food we eat. We’d better eat more healthy food such as fruit, vegetables and so on. Please keep away from junk food. Thirdly, don’t go out alone at night. If necessary, remember to ask for help when you are in trouble. Finally, when we surf on the internet, be careful with personal information. And don’t meet your net friends easily because you never know what kind of person you may meet.
Be safe and live a healthy life!
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于讲稿类写作。写作时认真阅读题干要求和内容要点，不要遗漏要点，而且最后一条要自己补充建议和感想。
写作指导：本文属于演讲稿，大部分内容在提建议，使用第一人称“we”可以拉近与读者的距离；注意建议句型的灵活使用，除了“should”，可以用到“had better”，祈使句等，避免句型过于单一；建议不止一条，因此加逻辑词可以使文章连贯，逻辑清晰。
7．每个人的生命只有一次，一定要珍爱自己的生命。该怎样安全自救？请根据以下提示，以How to Protect Ourselves为标题写一篇发言稿。
安全对每个人都很重要 交通：外出时遵守交通规则
食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品
活动：体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己 不私自下河游泳
自救是重要的技能之一 交友需谨慎 远离危险之人
遇到危险保持冷静 然后要及时报警或向老师、家长求助 尽可能避免受伤害 保证自己的安全
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。 2. 短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。
3. 词数80左右。文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Everyone has only one life, we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves
Here are some suggestions.
In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.
That’s all. Thank you!
【参考范文】：
How to Protect Ourselves
Dear friends，
Everyone has only one life, we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves
Here are some suggestions. On the one hand, we should realize the importantce of safety and know what to do. First, when we go out, we must follow traffic rules. If we walk, we must use sidewalks and mustn’t run a red light; If we ride bikes, we must ride along the right side and shouldn’t carry others. Second, we should develop a healthy eating habits. Eat regular meals every day and try not to eat junk food or eat less. When food smells bad, don’t eat it. Third, when we play sports or games, be careful not to hurt ourselves. Fourth, we mustn’t swim in rivers without our parents or other adults around.
On the other hand, we should learn to protect ourselves, which is one of the most important living skills. We must be careful when making friends, especially online. Some person online are not honest. They are dangerous, so we must keep away from them. If we happen to have trouble, we should keep calm and remember to ask our pa