Unit 1 Past and present.
单元话题满分范文必背
1.《苏州日报》正在举行“疫情带来了什么”主题征文比赛,请根据以下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文来描述疫情给我们的城市和个人带来的变化。
以前 现在
城市 著名园林 旅游胜地 避免扎堆 线上游园...
个人 (自拟1-2点) 习惯排队 阅读拓展...
感受 变化巨大...
1. 词数:90左右;
2. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名, 校名等信息;照抄阅读语篇不得分。
参考生词: 疫情 epidemicThe epidemic broke out suddenly and everything seemed to stop.
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【答案】例文
The epidemic broke out suddenly and everything seemed to stop.
Suzhou has been world-famous for its gardens for long and it used to welcome many visitors. But now, the government has asked people to aviod getting together. As a result, many people try to take an online tour of the beautiful gardens instead. Isn’t that wonderful
I didn’t obey rules at school in the past. However, After learning about good manners, I realized my problems. Recently, I have been used to queuing for my turn and reading to relax. Books really open up a whole new world to me.
Both our city and I have changed a lot, but I believe everything will change for the best soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文,为一篇征文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时、一般现在时以及现在完成时”;
③ 提示:写作提示内容已经给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“以前的个人情况”,需要自拟补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表面写作的意图,借用开头所给内容来引出本写作话题;
第二部,具体阐述写作内容,从城市、个人等方面介绍以前和现在的对比;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受并给予新的希望。
[亮点词汇]
① be world-famous for 因……而世界著名
② avoid doing 避免做某事
③ be used to doing 习惯于……
④ in the past 过去
⑤ as a result 因此
[高分句型]
① Suzhou has been world-famous for its gardens for long and it used to welcome many visitors. (现在完成时表示影响,“and”引导的并列句)
② Isn’t that wonderful (反义疑问句)
2.2022年,我国已全面建成小康社会,你的家乡也一定发生了翻天覆地的变化吧。请以“Changes in My Hometown”为题,根据以下提示和要求,用英语写一篇短文,描述一下你家乡发生的变化。
提示:1) 居住环境的变化;2) 娱乐方式的变化;3) 出行方式的变化。
要求∶1) 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;2) 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3) 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名等);4) 词数∶不少于70词。
Changes in My Hometown
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【答案】例文
Changes in My Hometown
With the help of the government, my hometown has changed a lot. At first, the buildings used to be so small and broken. There was always a lot of rubbish here and there. But now, the government has built many tall buildings. Cleaners clean the streets every day to keep them tidy. Secondly, people almost had nothing to do in their free time several years ago. Nowadays, there are different kinds of ways for people to spend their free time, such as going shopping, watching movies and so on. What’s more, people went out on foot before. However, there are more ways to choose than before. I hope my hometown will become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一点内容提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山提出在政府的帮助下,家乡发生了巨大的变化;
第二步,具体对比过去和现在,描述产生的变化;
第三步,书写结语,祝福家乡越来越好。
[亮点词汇]
① with the help of在……的帮助下
② used to过去常常
③in their free time在他们的空闲时间
④better and better越来越好
[高分句型]
①Cleaners clean the streets every day to keep them tidy. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②Nowadays, there are different kinds of ways for people to spend their free time. (动词不定式作后置定语)
3.假设某中学生英文报开展关于生活变化的征文活动,请你根据下表所提示的要点,以”Changes in our life “为题,用英语为该报写一篇稿件,简述社会、家庭、学校及个人生活中的若干变化,展望未来生活及如何为此努力。
变化 家乡 小路→大路(或自拟一点内容)
生活 步行、骑车→乘车、开车(或自拟一点内容)
学校 旧校区→新教学楼(或自拟一点内容)
个人 仅通过书本学习→通过网络等学习(或自拟一点内容)
愿望 更加美好的生活(或自拟一点内容,说明自己的理想生活)
打算 自拟一至两点内容,说明将如何为实现自己的愿望而努力
注意:
1. 作文中必须包含所给的要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译;
2. 词数90左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:path n. (小路)Changes in our lifeWith the rapid development of China’s economy(经济), great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Changes in our life
With the rapid development of China’s economy (经济), great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years. In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they not only learn from books but also through computers.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder from now on so that I can realize my dream.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据表格提示内容,以”Changes in our life “为题,简述社会、家庭、学校及个人生活中的若干变化,展望未来生活及如何为此努力。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般过去时和一般将来时;人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作需包含家乡、生活、学校和个人的变化;自己的愿望以及打算。行文确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
4. 随着国家“双减”政策的落实,中小学生的生活发生了很大的变化。学生作业量减少了,空闲时间增多了,有更多的业余时间做自己喜欢做的事,同时在课后服务课中,学校还增加了丰富多彩的社团活动课,请以My school life has changed为题,写一篇短文。
Morning School day After school weekends
Past 6:50 have ten classes do homework have lessons
Now 7:30 or 8:00 have seven classes Exercise, draw, sing… free time
要求:
1. 包含上述内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和学校名称。
3. 语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯。
4. 70词左右(不包括所给的开头);My school life has changed
My school life has changed a lot. In the past, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My school life has changed
My school life has changed a lot. In the past, students had to have 10 classes and do lots of homework every day. We had little time for after-school activities and had to have lessons on weekends.
However, things have changed greatly now. We don’t need to get to school before 6:50, because our classes start at 7:30 or 8:00. We can get enough sleep. Besides, We only have 7 classes every school day.
In the afternoon, we can do different kinds of sports and other things we like. Some play basketball, some play football, and others may sing or draw. We also have free time on weekends now. I often go to the park with my friends.
Now we have a good time at school every day.
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文属于材料作文写作,以My school life has changed为题,根据所提供的内容说明自从国家“双减”政策的落实后,中小学生的生活发生哪些变化。
2. 写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称来写,时态以一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时承接短文开头,说明“双减”政策前的中小学生的生活情况,时态以一般过去时为主,作为第一段;第二段说明“双减”政策后学生们生活的主要变化,时态以一般现在时为主;第三段则具体说明课后的活动内容;第四段则说明改变后的感受并结尾。全文无标点和语法错误。
5.李强是你班上的一名同学,这学期他变化很多,学习进步很大,请你根据下表中的要点提示,完成一篇英文作文,不要逐字翻译。
过去:
1.花很多时间打电脑游戏;
2.讨厌看书。
现在:
1.每天看一小时书;
2.喜欢看科学类书籍,觉得有趣;
3.从图书馆借书或在线阅读。
原因:
1.从书中获得乐趣;
2.获得知识;
3.打开新世界。
注意:
1.短文须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.词数80左右, 短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Li Qiang is one of my classmates. He has changed a lot this term.
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【答案】例文
Li Qiang is one of my classmates. He has changed a lot this term. He used to spend much time playing computer games. He didn’t like reading books. But now he finds reading is fun. He reads for an hour every day. Science books are his favourite because he thinks they are interesting. Usually he borrows books from the library or download science stories in ipad. Why is he interested in reading books Because he gets fun from reading and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to him. It is helpful to us to have good reading habits.
【详解】题干解读:该题目属于材料文写作,叙述李强班上的一名同学这学期的发生的变化。根据材料,对现在和过去进行对比描述。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第三人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时,用一般过去时描述过去的情况,要使用句型used to do sth.,描述现在情况,要使用一般现在时。所给要点提示要包括在内,可适当补充细节。叙述要条理清晰,语言通顺,内容完整,句式要富有变化,适当运用固定句型和短语,保证语法、单词拼写和标点使用正确。
6.八(9)班将举行一次主题班会,畅谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请为Tom 准备一份演讲稿,具体内容如下表:
过去 现在
学习 读书少,花时间在…… 喜欢读书,原因……
礼仪 插队、喧哗 举止文明……
爱心 不知道关心他人 参加慈善活动
展望未来
要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯
2)必须包括提示中所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Hello, everyone. I’m Tom from Class 9, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.
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Thanks for listening!
【答案】例文:
Hello, everyone. I’m Tom from Class 9, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.
First, in the past, I seldom read books. I used to spend most of time playing computer games. Now I find it interesting to read because good books help me relax after a busy day. Second, I was impolite before. I sometimes shouted loudly or pushed in before others. Now I behave politely in public. I always queue and keep my voice down. Finally, I used to care little about others. But now I take part in charity activities and help more people in need. I often work as a volunteer and donate money to the children in poor areas.
I am sure I will do much better in the future.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇演讲稿。针对一年来自己的变化进行写作,包括自己过去和现在的对比,从学习、礼仪、爱心三方面进行叙述。具体的内容要包含所给的提示。
2. 写作指导:本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时,人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出;第二段介绍自己过去和现在的变化情况;第三段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
7.在八年级即将结束之际,八(1)班将举行一次主题班会,要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请为Simon准备一份英语演讲稿,具体内容如下:
过去 现在
学习 做作业粗心,…… ……
业余生活 …… 阅读……
行为习惯 乱扔垃圾…… ……
展望未来 ……
要求:
1.参考表格提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文章不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
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Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
I used to do my homework carelessly, but now I get used to doing it carefully. I didn’t use to read, but now I get used to reading very much. I used to throw rubbish everywhere, but now I throw it in the dustbin to keep our environment clean.
In the future, I will overcome my bad habits to be a good student. I will study harder to get better grades, I will do more exercises to keep my body healthy.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】1.题干解读:本题为讲稿写作,要求根据题目所给要点提示,写一篇关于一年来自己的收获与变化的演讲稿。
2.写作指导:写作时人称应用第一人称,时态根据具体语境使用过去时、现在时或将来时。题目所给要点必须全部包含,且应将其余要点自行补全。文章应做到思路清晰,层次分明,不要出现单词拼写及语法时态方面的错误。
8.在八年级即将结束之际, 八(1)班将举行一次主题班会,要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请根据下表信息提示,为David准备一份演讲稿,具体内容如下:
过去 现在
学习 很少阅读…… 勤读书放松自己……
环保 浪费水电…… 意识到环保的重要性……
礼仪 大声喧哗…… 举止礼貌……
爱心 不会关心他人…… 为贫困地区……
展望未来
注意:
1、词数90词左右。(文章首尾已给,不计入总词数。)
2、省略号部分适当发挥,增加细节,以使行文连贯。Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and have made great progress in many ways.
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Thanks for listening!
【答案】例文:
Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and I have made great progress in many ways.
First, in the past I seldom read books. I used to spend most of my time playing computers games. Now I find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to me.
Second, I always forgot to turn off the tap and the power when they were not in use. Sometimes I left the tap running after I washed my hands. I always dropped litter carelessly in the park. But now I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I always throw the litter into the rubbish bins.
Third, I was impolite before. I sometimes shouted loudly or pushed in before others in public places. But now, I can behave politely in public and I often give my seat to someone in need on the bus.
Fourth, I cared little about others. But now I offer to help my blind neighbors and donate all my pocket money to Project Hope.
I’m sure I will do better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求为David准备一份演讲稿,介绍其一年来的收获与变化,需从学习、环保、礼仪、爱心以及展望未来六方面介绍过去与现在的表现。
2.写作指导:写作时注意演讲稿的基本形式,按照要点分段叙述,可使用First、Second等词汇增加文章的条理性;介绍过去事情,采用一般过去时,介绍现在的事情,主要用一般现在时,注意人称和数的变化,保持主谓一致性。
9.在八年级即将结束之际,八(1)班将举行一次主题班会,要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请为Simon准备一份100字左右的英语演讲稿,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。具体内容如下:
过去 现在
学习 做作业粗心,功课不好 认真听讲,对课程越来越喜欢了
业余生活 大部分业余时间听音乐,玩游戏 现在用来阅读,因为……
礼仪 乱扔垃圾,在公共场所大声喧哗 通过做……来保护环境,有礼貌……
展望未来 ……
Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and achieved much in some ways.
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Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文:
Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and achieved much in some ways. First, I used to be careless with my study and was bad at my lessons. But now I listen carefully in class. I am more and more interested in all my lessons.
Second, I spent most of my free time listening to music and playing computer games. But now I try to spend my free time reading because it can open up my eyes and make me relaxed.
Third, in the past I often dropped litter everywhere and shouted loudly in public places. Now, I can behave politely. I always recycle the waste to protect the environment.
I believe I will be better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇演讲稿,谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。根据表格提示,要求要点覆盖全面,可适当扩充;注意写作时要点齐全,同时也要紧扣主题。
2.写作指导:本文用到的一般过去时态和一般现在时态,人称用第一人称。分别从学习;生活;礼仪方面介绍了自己过去和现在的不同,并展望未来,写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式,注意连词的使用。全文要点明确,结构严谨,语法运用准确,上下文注意连接的流畅度。