Unit 2 Travelling.
单元话题满分范文必背
1.现在人们的生活条件越来越好,生活品质也越来越高,很多人在假期选择出游,带上家人,享受大自然的美。请以“A day out”为题,写一篇不少于80字的短文,介绍你和家人最近一次出游的情况,必须包含以下要点:
1. 出行的时间,地点,交通方式等
2. 活动
3. 感受
A day out
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【答案】例文:
A day out
Last summer holiday, my parents took me to Hangzhou for a holiday. We went there by train on July 25. People often say that Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in China. When we arrived there, I saw it with my own eyes. I believed it. There are a lot of places of interest in Hangzhou. We took a boat trip on the West Lake and climbed the hill there. We had a good time. After I came back home, I was very tired but very happy.
I will never forget the trip to Hangzhou.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,写出自己和家人最近一次出游的情况,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容;时态主要采用一般过去时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
2.假如去年5月1日你和父母到南通旅游,这次旅游让你收获颇丰。请你根据下图提示,以”The Trip to Nantong”为题,用英语写一篇短文,并就这次旅游的所见所闻谈谈你的收获。
The Trip to Nantong
活动
上午
1.游览狼山风景:遇到外国人,与其交谈 (自拟一点收获)
2.参观园艺博览园:观赏花木,自拍照片 (自拟一点收获)
下午
1.观赏海底世界: (自拟一点收获)
2.畅游美丽濠河: (自拟一点收获)
感受
(自拟旅游感受)
【要求】
1.短文必须包含所给的要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2.词数90左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3.短文中请勿提及真实校名及本人姓名。
参考词汇:the Wolf Hill 狼山;the Horticultural Exposition 园艺博览园;the Undersea World 海底世界;the Haohe River 濠河
The Trip to Nantong
Last May Day holiday, my parents and I went to Nantong. This experience impressed me deeply.
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【答案】例文:
The Trip to Nantong
Last May Day holiday, my parents and I went to Nantong. This experience impressed me deeply. In the morning, we went sightseeing on the Wolf Hill. I met a foreigner and talked with him in English when we climbed the hill. I was very happy that I found it useful to learn English. Then we went to the Horticultural Exposition. We enjoyed many kinds of flowers and took lots of photos. We learned a lot about the flowers. We felt so close to nature and had a lot of fun there.
In the afternoon, I learned a lot about the names of fish when we enjoyed the Undersea World. We felt so excited when we watched the dolphin show. Later that day, we took a boat trip on the Haohe River. I enjoyed the beautiful sights and sang happily all the way.
We had such an exciting trip that we will never forget it. We hope to visit Nantong again some day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已部分给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“活动”中的行程信息,并补充收获和感想。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,总体介绍“去年5月1日”的旅游;
第二步,具体介绍“上午”和“下午”的活动,并分别谈论收获;
第三步,收尾,表达“旅游的感受”。
[亮点词汇]
①have a lot of fun玩得愉快
②take a boat trip乘船旅行
③many kinds of许多种类的
④feel close to nature感觉亲近自然
[高分句型]
①I found it useful to learn English.(形式宾语的使用,句式是:find it+形容词+to do)
②We had such an exciting trip that we will never forget it.(such…that…引导的结果状语从句)
3.每个人在旅行中都有很多的收获和不同的体会。某英文网站正在开展主题为“My Favourite Place”的征文活动。请用英语为该网站写一篇短文,谈谈你旅游过的一个你最喜欢的地方,你在那里做了什么,以及最喜欢它的原因。
提示词语:enjoy, taste, beauty, culture, special, unforgettable(难忘的)
提示问题:● What is the favourite place you have been to
● What did you do there
●Why is it unforgettable
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【答案】例文
My Favourite Place
I have been to many famous places. My favourite place is Guangzhou.
Last year, I went to Guangzhou in the summer vacation. When we got there, we started to hangout on the street. The first thing was to find something to eat. There were so many delicious snacks. It is hard for us to choose what to eat, so we planned to eat as much as we can. After we finishing eating, we went to go shopping. Guangzhou is famous trade and its clothes are fashionable and cheap.
This trip is so unforgettable to me because Guangzhou is the paradise of food and shopping. I hope to go there again.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据问题提示以“My Favourite Place”为题写一篇短文,谈谈你最喜欢的地方,以及原因。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段介绍自己去广州的经历;最后一段介绍自己喜欢广州的原因。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
4.请根据下列要点提示写一篇短文。提示
1.秋天是去香港的最佳时节。上周六,你和你的父母亲乘坐直飞航班去了香港;
2.近几年香港已经发生了很大变化。过去,有一些工厂把废弃物倒进河流。现在政府已经把这些工厂改成了一个著名的主题公园——迪士尼乐园;
3.你们去参观了迪土尼乐园。第一天,遇到了一些可爱的卡通人物,情不自禁拍了许多照片;
4.第二天,你们去了一家海鲜馆吃了美味的一餐,还……(自拟一点内容);
5.你的感受是……(自拟两点内容)。
要求:
1.内容表达完成,条理清晰,意思连贯,可适当发挥。
2.书写规范,词数在80词左右。
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【答案】例文:
Autumn is the best season to go to Hong Kong. Last Saturday, my parents and I took a direct flight to Hong Kong.
During these years, great changes have taken place in Hong Kong. In the past, many factories dumped waste into rivers, which made the living environment very dirty. Therefore, the government decided to change some factories into a famous theme park — Disneyland.
We went to the famous theme parks Disneyland the first day. We met some cartoon characters. They were so cute that we couldn’t help taking lots of photos. We also bought some interesting things for my relatives. Next day we went to a seafood restaurant to have a delicious meal.
I enjoyed the trip very much. I hope I can visit it again someday.
【详解】题干解读:这是一篇材料作文。根据要点提示,描述一家人去香港旅行的情况及感受。
写作指导:根据写作内容是描述去香港的旅行,所以短文主要运用一般过去时态;人称用第一人称。短文可分成四部分来写,第一段介绍去香港旅行的时间及出行方式;第二段介绍香港的变化;第三段介绍在香港旅行的景点;最后一段写自己旅行感受。写作时要注意语言的准确性及句式的变化。
5.来自英国的交换生Tom马上要回国了,作为班长的你准备邀请同学们带他一起游览淮安,请结合以上信息及下面的要点,给全班同学写一份邀请函。
1.集合的时间,地点;
2.游览的景点(2个)以及游玩每个景点的时间安排和所进行的活动;
3.出行的方式及费用;
注意:1. 要点齐全,可适当拓展。
2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear classmates,
Tom will be back soon. We’re planning a day out to show him around Huai’an.
Here is the plan.
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【答案】例文:
Dear classmates,
Tom will be back soon. We’re planning a day out to show him around Huai’an.
Here is the plan.
We will meet at Tieshansi National Park at 8 a.m. We will spend two hours in the park. We can take photos and row boats there. Then we will go to Hexia Ancient Town by bus. It takes about half an hour. We can go shopping, have lunch and eat local snacks there. We will leave at about 2:00 p.m. Then we go back to school by bus.
The cost is about 50 yuan one person.
It will be a great day. We hope you can join us.
Yours,
monitor
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一封邀请函,要求以班长的名义给同学写一封邀请函,邀请同学们带领即将回国的交换生游览淮安。内容包括:集合的时间、地点;游览的景点及时间安排、活动安排;出行方式及费用。
2.写作指导:文章以一般将来时,第一人称为主,注意主谓一致问题;写作时注意按照要点分段叙述,开篇点明主题,中间部分叙述游览计划安排,最后点明出行费用。
6.根据以下提示,用英语写一篇70词左右的短文。
1. 今天我在网站上进行了一次在旅行,去了悉尼。
2. 悉尼在澳大利亚的东北海岸,是澳大利亚最大的城市。
3. 在网站上,我看了许多悉尼的图片。看到了许多美丽的沙滩;带着许多帆,看起来像一艘轮船的悉尼歌剧院 (the Sydney Opera House)。
4. 花了半小时爬上了歌剧院附近的海港大桥(Harbour Bridge),感觉太棒了。
5. 澳大利亚的季节与我们的相反,最佳的旅游时间是春秋两季。
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【答案】例文
Today I took an online tour of Sydney on the website. Sydney is on the north-east coast of Australia. It is the largest city in Australia.
On the website, I saw many pictures of Sydney. We say lots of beautiful beaches there. We also saw a wonderful building called the Sydney Opera House. It looks like a ship with many sails. Near the Sydney Opera House is the famous Harbour Bridge. I spent half an hour climbing it. It is really cool.
Australian seasons are the opposite of ours. The best time to visit Australia is spring and autumn.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥。
2.写作指导:根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时态来写,要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
7.你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以旅游为主题的英文征文活动,请以“My favourite trip”为题,写一篇短文。
My favourite trip * Where did you go * What did you do there * How did you feel about your trip …
注意:1.词数:100词左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。2.句子结构准确,要点齐全,内容合理,篇章结构连贯。
3.表达中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
My favourite trip
Last summer holiday, I went to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
My favourite trip
Last summer holiday, I went to Nanjing with my parents. I had a wonderful time there.
There were lots of things to see and to do in Nanjing. The best part was visiting the Confucius Temple. We learnt a lot about Chinese history and culture there. We also took a boat trip along Qinhuai River. On the boat, we listened to Kunqu Opera. I couldn’t understand it well but it sounded beautiful!
The next day, we climbed Zijin Mountain. It was great to enjoy the natural beauty on top of the mountain. I felt tired but excited.
It was a wonderful trip. I hope I can go to Nanjing again some day.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,在写作时要承接短文开头,根据汉语提示的内容,叙述去哪里旅游,在那儿干了什么以及此次旅游的感觉。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述故事内容;时态采用一般过去时为主。描述故事时,力求描写细致,语句通顺,保证条理清晰,篇章结构连贯。
8.根据内容提示用英语写一篇短文,可适当发挥。词数:90词左右。内容提示:
1. 南京是江苏省的省会。
2. 那儿有许多风景名胜,每年吸引上百万的游人。
3. 我早就在电视上目睹了南京的秀丽景色,但我却从来没有去过那儿。
4. 下周我要去南京开会,昨晚我兴奋得无法入睡。
5. 我相信我的南京之行肯定会很愉快。
A Trip to Nanjing
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【答案】例文:
A Trip to Nanjing
Nanjing is the capital of Jiangsu Province. It is a beautiful place. There are many places of interest attracting millions of travelers. There are also many kinds of delicious food attracting tourists. I saw the scenery of Nanjing on TV. But I have never been there before. I will attend a meeting in Nanjing next week. I was too excited to sleep last night. I will visit some places after meeting and eat nice snacks there. I believe the trip to Nanjing will be great.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点进行写作,描写南京的情况,突出南京的美,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,用第一人称和第三人称相结合来写作,时态以一般现在时为主,要做到要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误。
9.假设你是阳光中学的八年级学生李华。值此暑假来临之际,你收到了远在英国的笔友Tom的来信,询问你的暑期计划。请根据以下要点提示,回信给Tom,告知他你的安排。
1. Spend 7 to 10 days travelling;
2. Spend at least a week doing voluntary work in the community;
3. While staying at home: spend at least 30 minutes exercising every day, help with housework, go over the lessons and do homework; do some reading
注意:1. 所写内容必须覆盖以上所列要点,并适当发挥,使内容充实、行文连贯;
2.文章不少于90词,开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. I’m glad to share with you my plan for the coming summer holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. I’m glad to share with you my plan for the coming summer holiday.
First of all, I will spend 7 to 10 days travelling in Sanya, Hainan Province in July. I’m going to take a plane there with my parents. I think I will have a wonderful time playing and relaxing on the beautiful beach there. Then, in August, I plan to spend at least a week doing voluntary work in the community. I can help the children with their English because I am good at English. What’s more, I can also teach kids to play soccer since I play it very well. While I am staying at home, I also have many things to do. Every day, I will spend at least 30 minutes in the morning exercising in order to keep healthy. In the afternoon, I will help my mother with housework. I will not forget to go over the lessons and do homework in the evening. On weekends, I think I will do some reading about Chinese history and culture.
I am sure I will have a wonderful and meaningful summer holiday. What about yours Do you have any plans for your holiday
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文属于书信作文写作,按书信的格式给Tom写回信,根据提示的三个要点谈谈暑假计划,包括旅行安排、志愿者活动以及在家的活动。
2. 写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称单数来写,时态采用一般将来时为主。写作时承接已写开头,接着第一部分介绍旅游安排,可包括旅游目的地、时间、出行方式以及旅游中的活动安排;第二部分介绍在社区里当志愿者的活动安排,包括活动项目具体内容;第三部分介绍在家的活动安排,可根据早、中、晚和周末等几个时段描述具体的活动。第二段总结暑假计划的意义并结尾。在各个部分表达的过程中,要巧妙运用衔接词或短语,让内容的表达更有条理性。
10.请根据下表中的要点提示,用英语写一篇文章,向你的朋友David介绍上周六你们班的苏州之行。
天气 凉爽;晴空万里
车程 大巴一个小时到达天平山
上午活动 天平山(Tianping Hill) 登山、欣赏美景、拍照……
下午活动 山塘街(Shantang Street) 品尝美食、散步、参观博物馆……
感受 很棒的一天;玩得很开心;希望……
要求:1.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名;
3.词数90词左右,短文开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear David,I’m doing fine here. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
John
【答案】例文
Dear David,
I’m doing fine here. Our class went on a trip to Suzhou last Saturday.
It was cool that day. The sun was shining in the clear blue sky. It took us about one hour to get to Tianping Hill.
We spent the whole morning in Tianping Hill. We climbed the hill and enjoyed the beautiful sights there. I also took lots of photos. I put them on my home page. Go and see for yourself.
In the afternoon, we went to Shantang Street. We enjoyed delicious food there. We walked along the street and visited museums. I also did some shopping there. I bought a silk scarf for my mother. I’m sure she will like it.
It was a great day. We all enjoyed ourselves. I hope you can go and visit there with me some day.
Yours,
John
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据所给要点提示,向David介绍上周六的苏州之行。
2.写作指导:写作时要紧扣所给的要点提示,用第一人称为主写作,时态以一般过去时为主。可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。