外研版（2019）选择性必修 第三册Unit 3 War and peace Writing课件(共16张PPT)

(共16张PPT)
Unit 3　War and peace
Writing
描写一位英雄人物属于记叙文的范畴,它以写人、记事为主,以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。
一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分,即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短的评论。时态的选择要视情况而定,若写人物的过去就用过去时态,若写人物的现在就用现在时态。
感知文体常识
(一)增色词汇
1. optimistic adj.乐观的
2. energetic adj.有活力的
3. be determined to do sth.下定决心做某事
4. make contributions to...为……做出贡献
5. set an example to sb.为某人树立榜样
6. be remembered as...作为……而被铭记
7. fill one’s heart with 让人心中充满……
牢记写作素材
(二)精彩句型
1.人物的总体介绍
①He has fair hair and blue eyes.
他有金色的头发和蓝色的眼睛。
②Abraham Lincoln,the son of a poor family,was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809.
亚伯拉罕·林肯,一个贫苦家庭的儿子,于1809年2月12日生于肯塔基州。
③She is an ordinary-looking girl,but her kindness and consideration impress me most.
她是一个普普通通的女孩,但她的善良和体贴使我印象深刻。
④He is a good-looking,kind-hearted man.
他是一个俊朗且好心肠的人。
⑤Qi Jiguang was a Chinese military general and national hero during the Ming Dynasty.
戚继光是明朝的一位将军和民族英雄。
⑥He was best remembered for his courage and leadership in the fight against Japanese pirates along the east coast of China.
戚继光最值得纪念的是他在中国东海岸抗击日本海盗的勇气和领导能力。
2.介绍人物的成就或取得的成绩
①He went to college,during which he showed great interest in folk music.
他上了大学,在大学期间他对民间音乐表现出极大的兴趣。
②When he was still a boy,he showed great interest in literature.
当他还是个男孩的时候,他对文学表现出极大的兴趣。
③He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers.
他/她擅长英语口语,更擅长使用电脑。
3.介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价
①We regard him as our model.
我们把他作为我们的榜样。
②The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.
人们把他作为一个鼓舞人心的领袖而开始爱他。
③Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.
雷锋因他的共产主义精神而受到称赞。
④To commemorate Qi Jiguang’s victory against the pirates,the cakes were named guang bing.
为了纪念戚继光战胜海盗的胜利,这些蛋糕被命名为光饼。
【写作要求】
请写一篇短文简要介绍雷锋。主要内容如下:
雷锋出生在湖南省望城县。他的一生很短暂,只有22年,但他作为一名解放军战士,努力工作,乐于助人,一生做好事无数,被视为英雄、人们的楷模。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 记叙文
人称 第三人称为主
时态 一般过去时为主
话题 介绍雷锋
框架 第一段 简要介绍雷锋;
第二段 讲述雷锋的生平事迹;
第三段 对雷锋进行简短的评论。
示例写作步骤
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
①孤儿 　　　　　
②无数的 　　　　　
③乐于助人 　　　　　　　　　　　
④被认为是 　　　　　　　　　　　
orphan　
countless　
be ready to help others　
be regarded as
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①雷锋1940年12月18日生于湖南望城县。
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②他于1962年8月15日去世。
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③他7岁就成了孤儿。
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④他的一生很短暂,只有22年。
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Lei Feng was born on December 18,1940 in Wangcheng county,Hunan.
He died on August 15,1962.
He was orphaned at 7 years old.
He lived a short life of only 22 years.
⑤作为一名人民解放军战士,他工作努力,总是乐于助人。
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⑥在他短暂的一生中,他做了无数好事,一直被认为是每个公民的英雄和榜样。
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⑦雷锋是中国人民解放军战士的榜样。
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As a soldier in the People’s Liberation Army,he worked hard and was always ready to help others.
He did countless good deeds in his short life and has been regarded all the time as a hero and model for every citizen.
Lei Feng was an example of the soldiers of the People’s Liberation Army in China.
(2)句式升级
⑧用并列句连接句①和句②。
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⑨用让步状语从句连接句④和句⑤。
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Lei Feng was born on December 18,1940 in Wangcheng county,Hunan and died on August 15,1962.
Although he lived a short life of only 22 years,as a soldier in the People’s Liberation Army,he worked hard and was always ready to help others.
【妙笔成篇】
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Lei Feng was born on December 18,1940 in Wangcheng county,Hunan and died on August 15,1962.
He was orphaned at 7 years old.Although he lived a short life of only 22 years,as a soldier in the People’s Liberation Army,he worked hard and was always ready to help others.He did countless good deeds in his short life and has been regarded all the time as a hero and model for every citizen.
In a word,Lei Feng was an example of the soldiers of the People’s Liberation Army in China.
针对训练
1.董存瑞,抗战英雄,1929年生于河北省。
2.1947年3月加入中国共产党。
3.1948年5月25日,他的连队承担了炸毁一座桥上敌人碉堡的任务,董存瑞在这次任务中英勇牺牲。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dong Cunrui born in Hebei Province,in 1929 joined the Communist Party of China in March 1947.
On May 25,1948,the company Dong Cunrui served in shouldered the task of blowing up an enemy fort on a bridge.The troops tried several times but failed.Then Dong came out boldly,carrying an explosive package and rushed towards the bridge.He lifted the explosive package by the left hand and pulled the fuse by the right hand without hesitation.Although sacrificing his 19-year-old life,he opened a way for the troops.
That’s why I say Dong Cunrui is a real hero in my mind.
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