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Writing——建议信
一、常用词汇
1.jog v.& n.慢跑
2.break n.破裂;中间休息;间断;短假
3.refresh vt.使恢复;使振作
4.teenager n.青少年
5.strengthen vt.增强
6.work out/take exercise锻炼
7.energy n.精力
8.playground n.操场
9.after-school activity课外活动
10.make full use of充分利用
二、常用句式
1.I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset about your fat body.
听到你为你的肥胖体型而烦恼,我感到很遗憾。
2.I’d like to suggest that you stick to taking some exercise every day.
我建议你每天坚持锻炼一下。
3.In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned, you had better take part in some
after-school activities.
在我看来/就我而言,你最好参加一些课外活动。
4.Why not do/Why don’t you do...
为什么你不……呢?
5.Cheer up!Your troubles will soon be over.
振作起来!你的麻烦很快就会过去的。
6.I hope you will find my suggestions/tips/proposals/advice very useful/helpful.
我希望你会发现我的建议非常有用/有帮助。
假如你是李华,你的好朋友Peter最近身体很弱,想参加一些运动,但是不知道做什么运动好。写信来征求你的建议,请你根据下面提示给他写一封信,建议他去打乒乓球。
1.乒乓球不仅是一种运动而且还是一项艺术;
2.打乒乓球时,我们需要判断球的方向,并用力把它打回去;
3.打乒乓球时,你还会发现球快速运动,运动员的动作也很美;
4.我认为打乒乓球能使我们强身健体。
注意:1.可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯、通顺;
2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you are weak because of lack of exercise.
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
?第一步 审题谋篇
体裁 建议信
主题 建议打乒乓球
人称 以第一、二人称为主
时态 主要为一般现在时
谋篇 1.写信的目的
2.对乒乓球运动的介绍以及此运动的益处。
3.希望建议被考虑和采纳。
?第二步 要点翻译
1.乒乓球不仅是一种运动而且还是一项艺术,因为它是需要力气和技巧的。
Table tennis is a sport and an art,because it needs _____________________.
2.打乒乓球时,我们需要判断球的方向,并用力把它打回去。
__________________________,we should__________________________,
and hit it back with great strength.
judge the direction of the ball
strength and skill
When we play table tennis
3.一场比赛过后,你会感到很累,但是这会增强你的心肺功能。
After one game you ______________________________, but it can make
your heart and lungs grow stronger.
4.打乒乓球时,你还会发现球快速运动,运动员的动作也很美。
In the game,you can often find the ball _____________________,and the
players’ _______________________________.
will be very tired
moving quickly
movements very beautiful
?第三步 词句升级
1.用not only...but also和定语从句升级要点1
Table tennis is ________________________________, because it is a game _______________________________.
2.把要点2中的状语从句升级为省略句
____________________________,we should judge the direction of the ball,and hit it back with great strength.
not only a sport but also an art
that needs strength and skill
When playing table tennis
?第四步 连句成篇
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you are weak because of lack of exercise. I recommend you to play table tennis.
Table tennis is not only a sport but also an art,because it is a game that needs strength and skill.When playing table tennis,we should judge the direction of the ball, and hit it back with great strength.So after one game you will be very tired,but it can make your heart and lungs grow stronger.In the game,you can often find the ball moving quickly,and the players’ movements very beautiful.
I think playing table tennis can build up our bodies.Hope you will join me in playing table tennis.
Yours,
Li Hua
Thanks!
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