四川高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信10篇（含解析）
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邀请信
1．假定你是李华，在感恩节来临之际受你校英语广播站的邀请发表演讲，请以“Being Grateful to Our Parents”为题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 介绍演讲主题；
2. 说明感恩原因；
3. 号召大家用实际行动感恩父母。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Being Grateful to Our Parents
Boys and girls,
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2．假定你是李华，想邀请外教Sam一起参观中国国画（Chinese painting）展。请给他写封信，内容包括：
1、展览时间、地点；
2、展览内容；
3、期盼回复。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假设你是李华，你班同学打算本周日骑行去游览长城。请你写一封电子邮件邀请你们的外教布鲁斯一同前往。要点包括：
1. 出发时间及地点；
2. 出行方式及需要携带的物品；
3. 希望得到回复。
注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Bruce,
Our class are going to visit the Great Wall this Sunday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，圣诞节前夕因病住院未能如期赴约去你的澳大利亚朋友 Jackson家做客：他将于近期来中国参加“汉语桥”比赛，适逢中国春节期间，你 打算邀请他来你家。请给他写e-mail,要点如下：
1. 对前次爽约致歉；
2. 邀请他来你家做客：
3. 盼回复以便作安排。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jackson,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，你校交换生Jake得知学校最近将举行一次茶文化节，发邮件向你询问有关信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 活动时间和地点；
2. 活动安排；
3. 发出邀请。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jake,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack发来邮件，想了解中国茶文化常识。现在请你给他回封 邮件，内容包括：
1. 中国茶文化简介（四千多年历史，饮茶是一种休闲方式）；
2. 饮茶的好处；
3. 邀请他来中国体验茶文化。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，校学生会主席。学生会计划举办“中国传统美食节”的活动，请你给外教Mary写封邮件，邀请她参加。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 活动：学习制作、共同品尝美食等。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．假定你是李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“ What to learn in senior high school ”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请你为此准备一份发言稿，内容包括：
1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚，友善；
3.学会其他：考生自拟。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结尾已为你写好。
Good morning，everyone！It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
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Thank you!
9．学校英语社团即将举办一年一度的中国诗词翻译大赛。假定你是社团主席李华,请你写一个活动通知,内容包括:
1. 介绍比赛安排;
2. 参加比赛的好处;
3. 欢迎所有学生参加。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Date: June 21,2020
Notice
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The English Club
10．假定你是李华，学校每年传统的“英语话剧比赛”因新冠疫情 (Coronavirus epidemic) 改为下周六在线举行，请你写邮件邀请外教Mike在线担任评委，内容包括：
1. 比赛的安排；
2. 比赛的意义；
3. 邀请及感谢。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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1．Boys and girls,
Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua. It's my great honour to be here and deliver my speech.
The topic of my speech is "Being Grateful to Our Parents".
First and foremost, there is no denying that it is our parents who give us lives, spare no effort to look after us and bring us up. In addition, in order to make us live better, so diligent are they that they keep on working all day long. Most importantly, when we get into trouble and are in desperate need of help, they will always support us and encourage us with constant care and love.
So it is high time that we should show our gratitude to them and put it into action. Wish they could always be happy and healthy! Many thanks for your attention.
【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类写作，要求写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，在感恩节来临之际受你校英语广播站的邀请发表演讲，请以“Being Grateful to Our Parents”为题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1. 介绍演讲主题；2. 说明感恩原因；3. 号召大家用实际行动感恩父母。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：deliver speech (发表演讲)；be grateful to sb.(感激某人)；first and foremost(首先)；there is no denying that…(不可否认……)；spare no effort to(不遗余力……)；look after(照顾)；bring up(抚养)；in addition (另外)；in order to(为了)；get into trouble(陷入麻烦)；in desperate need of(迫切需要……)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如First and foremost, there is no denying that it is our parents who give us lives, spare no effort to look after us and bring us up.运用了同位语从句和强调句；Most importantly, when we get into trouble and are in desperate need of help, they will always support us and encourage us with constant care and love.运用时间状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear Sam,
I'm writing to invite you to visit a Chinese Famous Paintings Exhibition, where you can enjoy Chinese culture as you always wish.
The exhibition will be held in our school creative arts centre from 9 am to 5 pm next Friday. Some famous Chinese paintings, such as Racing Horse, Cabbage and so on, will be exhibited there. It will be a feast. Meanwhile, you'll also find some well-known painters painting on the spot. I'm sure that it can leave a wonderful impression on you.
I'd appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，想邀请外教Sam一起参观中国国画（Chinese painting）展。请给他写封信，内容包括：1、展览时间、地点；2、展览内容；3、期盼回复。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：invite sb. to do sth.(邀请某人做某事)；Chinese painting(中国国画)；exhibition(展览)；creative arts centre(创意艺术中心)；such as(例如)；feast(感官盛宴)；meanwhile(同时)；well-known(著名的)；on the spot(在现场)；impression(印象)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I'm writing to invite you to visit a Chinese Famous Paintings Exhibition, where you can enjoy Chinese culture as you always wish.运用非限制性定语从句；I'm sure that it can leave a wonderful impression on you.运用宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Bruce,
Our class are going to visit the Great Wall this Sunday. We'd like to invite you to go with us.
You know, spring is the best time of the year to visit the Great Wall as the weather gets warmer and the trees begin to turn green. So we'll surely get a good view from the Great Wall.
We're setting off from our school at eight in the morning. Then we'll go there by bike. We'd better take some food and water with us. Moreover, plastic bags are necessary as we need put the rubbish into them. In addition, please take your camera to take photos. If you can come, please let us know.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一封电子邮件，邀请你们的外教布鲁斯本周日和你们一起骑行去游览长城。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：三部分：第一部分向外教发出邀请，引出主题；第二部分介绍出发时间、地点、出行方式及需要携带的物品；第三部分表达希望得到回复。
要求：1. 介绍出发时间及地点；
2. 介绍出行方式及需要携带的物品；
3. 表达希望得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）
would like to do sth. (想要做某事); surely (无疑，一定); set off (出发); take sth. with sb. (某人随身携带某物); plastic bags (塑料袋); necessary (必要的); rubbish (垃圾); camera (照相机); take photos (拍照); look forward to (期待，盼望)
第三步：连词成句
1. We'd like to invite you to go with us.
2. So we'll surely get a good view from the Great Wall.
3. We're setting off from our school at eight in the morning.
4. We'd better take some food and water with us.
5. Plastic bags are necessary as we need put the rubbish into them.
6. Please take your camera to take photos.
7. Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then; finally; in the end; at last
2. 表并列补充关系：What’s more; besides; moreover(本篇文章使用过); furthermore; in addition(本篇文章使用过); additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…
3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…; some…, while others…
4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so(本篇文章使用过); since; thus; therefore; as a result; why
5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。
Plastic bags are necessary.本句用来介绍需要携带的物品。可以使用原因状语从句，进一步介绍为什么要带塑料袋。润色修改为：Plastic bags are necessary as we need put the rubbish into them.
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：Plastic bags are necessary as we need put the rubbish into them.，这句话为as引导的原因状语从句；其次，使用了一些固定短语，如：set off; take photos; look forward to等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇，如surely; necessary; rubbish; camera等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear Jackson,
How’s it going Thank you for inviting me but I’m awfully sorry that I failed to go to enjoy the “hot” Christmas with your family. I had been in hospital for several days when I received your invitation.
Now I’m happy to know you’ve gained the important chance to participate in the Chinese Bridge Competition in China. How wonderful it is! It’s just during the Chinese Spring Festival. I sincerely invite you to my family to spend the great festival, which is sure to leave a deep and unforgettable impression on you.
Looking forward to your reply so that I can make some detailed arrangements for your coming.
Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇书信类提纲作文。
【详解】根据题目要求，要求以李华的身份，对圣诞节前夕因病住院未能如期赴约去你的澳大利亚朋友 Jackson家做客致歉，另外得知他将于近期来中国参加“汉语桥”比赛，适逢中国春节期间，打算邀请他来你家，给他写e-mail。根据文章内容，文章正文可分为三大段：第一段对前次爽约致歉；第二段提出邀请，请他来你家做客；第三段盼回复以便作安排。本文主要时态应为现在时态，注意主谓一致和句段之间的自然衔接。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：Now I’m happy to know you’ve gained the important chance to participate in the Chinese Bridge Competition in China. 使用了宾语从句；I sincerely invite you to my family to spend the great festival, which is sure to leave a deep and unforgettable impression on you.使用了非限制性定语从句；Looking forward to your reply so that I can make some detailed arrangements for your coming.该句中用so that引导目的状语从句，等等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear Jake,
Since you wrote to ask me about the Tea Culture Festival to be held in our school, I would like to invite you to join.
The festival is scheduled for July 16 to 18, when various activities will be arranged in our school hall and playground. With the aim to help us better understand tea culture and thus develop a deeper love for our hometown, the festival will include plays based on stories about tea and famous figures.
I do believe that this is a good opportunity for you to explore more of Chinese tea culture. I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你校交换生Jake得知学校最近将举行一次茶文化节，发邮件向你询问有关信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1. 活动时间和地点；2. 活动安排；3. 发出邀请。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be interested in (对……感兴趣)；be fascinated by (对……着迷)；be scheduled for (定于)；various (各种各样的)；famous figures (名人)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Since you wrote to ask me about the Tea Culture Festival to be held in our school, I would like to invite you to join.运用了原因状语从句；I do believe that this is a good opportunity for you to explore more of Chinese tea culture.运用宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. And now I’m very happy to share something about Chinese tea culture in reply to your last e-mail.
Chinese tea culture started about 4,000 years ago and drinking tea gradually became an amazing way to relax. In China, people drink tea almost everywhere and in most of their spare time. Some Chinese believe that tea benefits people’s health a lot. Drinking a cup of tea makes people relaxed and refreshed. Others treat guests or friends to tea drinking in social communication.
Probably, you’ve got a general picture of tea culture after my introduction. Then, how about coming to China to experience it yourself Maybe, you will fall in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Jack回信介绍中国茶文化。
【详解】第一步：审题。
体裁：邮件应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。
要点：1 中国茶文化简介
2 饮茶的好处
3 邀请他来中国体验茶文化
结构布局：
第一段，听到Jack想了解中国茶文化常识，写信和他分享。
第二段，1 介绍中国茶文化：4000多年历史，饮茶是一种休闲方式。
2 饮茶的好处：对身体健康有益，而且可以放松心情。
第三段，邀请Jack来中国体验茶文化。
第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）
如：abundant，originate from，regard as，leisure，insist, benefit from, relax oneself, get rid of，make an experience等
第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用，如非谓语动词，复合句，注意拼写和时态问题）
如：Hearing that you are intended to know something about Chinese tea culture, I am writing to share it with you.等
第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);
3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第五步：润色修改。
【点睛】本文内容完整，要点齐全，语言规范，词数适当，段落分布合理。作者在文中使用了宾语从句和非谓语动词结构，如“Some Chinese believe that tea benefits people’s health a lot.”使用了宾语从句，“drinking tea gradually became an amazing way to relax.”使用了动名词作主语，这使得文章句式更加灵活多变，为文章的表达增添色彩。
7．Dear Mary,
I’d like to invite you to join us for the Chinese Traditional Food activity on behalf of the Student Union.
The activity will be held from 9:00 am to 3:00 pm next Saturday in the square of our school. We have invited some people to show us how to make dumplings, Zongzi, spring rolls and other Chinese traditional food, and you have the chance to make the food with our own hands! After that, we will enjoy the delicious food together. I know you are fond of Chinese food, so this will surely be a unique experience for you1
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邀请信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封去邀请信：假定你是李华，校学生会主席。学生会计划举办“中国传统美食节”的活动，请你给外教Mary写封邮件，邀请她参加。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；2. 活动：学习制作、共同品尝美食等。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：on behalf of, hold, how to make dumplings, Chinese traditional food, have a chance, enjoy the delicious food together, be fond of , a unique experience, look forward to等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。The activity will be held from 9:00 am to 3:00 pm next Saturday in the square of our school.句中使用一般将来时态的被动语态；We have invited some people to show us how to make dumplings, Zongzi, spring rolls and other Chinese traditional food, and you have the chance to make the food with our own hands!句中使用了疑问词+不定式结构和并列句。
8．Good morning，everyone！It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school .
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly，we should learn to learn efficiently. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what have been taught after class. In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school，we should respect teachers and be friendly with classmates.Finally，we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
With your great efforts, I am sure that you will enjoy a colorful life here.
Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一份发言稿，背景是母校为高一学生准备了主题为“ What to learn in senior high school ”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚，友善；
3.学会其他：考生自拟。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
challenging; efficiently; develop a good habit; be of great importance; benefit; preview; get involved in; review; get along well with; be friendly with; take part in; outdoor activities; be helpful to; build up; enrich; colorful.
第三步：连词成句
In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging.
We should learn to learn efficiently.
Developing a good habit is also of importance.
It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what have been taught after class.
We should learn how to get along well with others.
In school，we should respect teachers and be friendly with classmates.
We should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently.
They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
With your great efforts, I am sure that you will enjoy a colorful life here.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者使用了复合句，比如It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what have been taught after class.这句话运用了what引导的宾语从句以及it作形式主语。此外Developing a good habit is also of importance.使用了动名词作主语。范文里还使用了一些较好的词组，如be of importance, get involved in, get along well with, be friendly with, build up one’s body等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Date：June 21,2020
Notice
The annual translation competition on Chinese poetry is going to be held online from June 28 to 30 by our school’s English Club. Any student who would like to participate needs to email the translation to tranlslation-2020@, and attach a no-longer-than-3-minute video of performing the translation in a specially designed scene related to the poem. Then based on ten professional judges’ decision，there will be a first-prize winner, two second-prize and five third-prize. The awards are more than wonderful and appealing，such as Kindles and gift cards of Xinhua Bookstore.
All of you, including the overseas students, are welcome to join in the activity. Not only can the experience help you to gain a deeper understanding of Chinese culture and history, but it also gives you an opportunity to show how well you master both Chinese and English. So what are you waiting for Just begin your translation.
The English Club
【分析】本篇作文属于应用文，要求对学校即将举办的中国诗词翻译大赛写一个活动通知。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
写作要求：1. 介绍比赛安排;
2. 参加比赛的好处;
3. 欢迎所有学生参加。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
participate；be based on；be welcome to; not only…but also…
第三步：连词成句
Any student who would like to participate needs to email the translation to tranlslation-2020@.
Then based on ten professional judges’ decision, there will be a first-prize winner，two second-prize and five third-prize.
All of you, including the overseas students, are welcome to join in the activity.
Not only can the experience help you to gain a deeper understanding of Chinese culture and history，but it also gives you an opportunity to show how well you master both Chinese and English.
在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 文章的结构顺序：介绍比赛安排；参加比赛的好处；对大家发出邀请。
2.表并列补充关系：then; not only…but also…; such as
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰
第五步：修改润色
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了不少高级句型，比如who引导的定语从句：Any student who would like to participate needs to email the translation to tranlslation-2020@，and attach a no-longer-than-3-minute video of performing the translation in a specially designed scene related to the poem.此外，合理的使用非谓语也让文章增色不少，比如Then based on ten professional judges’ decision, there will be a first-prize winner, two second-prize and five third-prize. The awards are more than wonderful and appealing, such as Kindles and gift cards of Xinhua Bookstore. 文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Mike,
I’m writing to invite you to join us in the traditional English drama contest, which will be held online because of Coronavirus epidemic.
As scheduled, the contest will begin at 8 am in the Art Hall next Saturday, which will last for three hours. We have conducted several activities including some English dramas given by students and teachers. Furthermore, some short plays will also be included. I believe the contest will not only bring much fun to us, but also arouse our awareness in learning English. In addition, you are expected to act as the online judge. We’ll be extremely grateful if you could manage to come.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请外教Mike在线担任评委。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应主要为一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明写信目的
2.告知相关情况
1）比赛安排。（arrangements）
2）比赛的意义。（meaning）
3) 邀请及感谢。（invitation and appreciation）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
invite; join…in; as scheduled; including; not only…but also…; act as; grateful; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to invite you to join us in the traditional English drama contest
2. As scheduled, the contest will begin at 8 am in the Art Hall next Saturday
3. We have conducted several activities including some English dramas given by students and teachers.
4. I believe the contest will not only bring much fun to us, but also arouse our awareness in learning English.
5. you are expected to act as the online judge
6. We’ll be extremely grateful if you could manage to come.
7. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I’m writing to invite you to join us in the traditional English drama contest, which will be held online because of Coronavirus epidemic.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；也使用了一些固定词组，如join…in; not only…but also…; act as等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
1．假定你是李华，在感恩节来临之际受你校英语广播站的邀请发表演讲，请以“Being Grateful to Our Parents”为题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 介绍演讲主题；
2. 说明感恩原因；
3. 号召大家用实际行动感恩父母。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Being Grateful to Our Parents
Boys and girls,
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2．假定你是李华，想邀请外教Sam一起参观中国国画（Chinese painting）展。请给他写封信，内容包括：
1、展览时间、地点；
2、展览内容；
3、期盼回复。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假设你是李华，你班同学打算本周日骑行去游览长城。请你写一封电子邮件邀请你们的外教布鲁斯一同前往。要点包括：
1. 出发时间及地点；
2. 出行方式及需要携带的物品；
3. 希望得到回复。
注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Bruce,
Our class are going to visit the Great Wall this Sunday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，圣诞节前夕因病住院未能如期赴约去你的澳大利亚朋友 Jackson家做客：他将于近期来中国参加“汉语桥”比赛，适逢中国春节期间，你 打算邀请他来你家。请给他写e-mail,要点如下：
1. 对前次爽约致歉；
2. 邀请他来你家做客：
3. 盼回复以便作安排。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jackson,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，你校交换生Jake得知学校最近将举行一次茶文化节，发邮件向你询问有关信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 活动时间和地点；
2. 活动安排；
3. 发出邀请。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jake,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack发来邮件，想了解中国茶文化常识。现在请你给他回封 邮件，内容包括：
1. 中国茶文化简介（四千多年历史，饮茶是一种休闲方式）；
2. 饮茶的好处；
3. 邀请他来中国体验茶文化。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，校学生会主席。学生会计划举办“中国传统美食节”的活动，请你给外教Mary写封邮件，邀请她参加。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 活动：学习制作、共同品尝美食等。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．假定你是李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“ What to learn in senior high school ”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请你为此准备一份发言稿，内容包括：
1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚，友善；
3.学会其他：考生自拟。
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结尾已为你写好。
Good morning，everyone！It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
9．学校英语社团即将举办一年一度的中国诗词翻译大赛。假定你是社团主席李华,请你写一个活动通知,内容包括:
1. 介绍比赛安排;
2. 参加比赛的好处;
3. 欢迎所有学生参加。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Date: June 21,2020
Notice
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The English Club
10．假定你是李华，学校每年传统的“英语话剧比赛”因新冠疫情 (Coronavirus epidemic) 改为下周六在线举行，请你写邮件邀请外教Mike在线担任评委，内容包括：
1. 比赛的安排；
2. 比赛的意义；
3. 邀请及感谢。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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1．Boys and girls,
Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua. It's my great honour to be here and deliver my speech.
The topic of my speech is "Being Grateful to Our Parents".
First and foremost, there is no denying that it is our parents who give us lives, spare no effort to look after us and bring us up. In addition, in order to make us live better, so diligent are they that they keep on working all day long. Most importantly, when we get into trouble and are in desperate need of help, they will always support us and encourage us with constant care and love.
So it is high time that we should show our gratitude to them and put it into action. Wish they could always be happy and healthy! Many thanks for your attention.
【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类写作，要求写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，在感恩节来临之际受你校英语广播站的邀请发表演讲，请以“Being Grateful to Our Parents”为题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1. 介绍演讲主题；2. 说明感恩原因；3. 号召大家用实际行动感恩父母。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：deliver speech (发表演讲)；be grateful to sb.(感激某人)；first and foremost(首先)；there is no denying that…(不可否认……)；spare no effort to(不遗余力……)；look after(照顾)；bring up(抚养)；in addition (另外)；in order to(为了)；get into trouble(陷入麻烦)；in desperate need of(迫切需要……)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如First and foremost, there is no denying that it is our parents who give us lives, spare no effort to look after us and bring us up.运用了同位语从句和强调句；Most importantly, when we get into trouble and are in desperate need of help, they will always support us and encourage us with constant care and love.运用时间状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear Sam,
I'm writing to invite you to visit a Chinese Famous Paintings Exhibition, where you can enjoy Chinese culture as you always wish.
The exhibition will be held in our school creative arts centre from 9 am to 5 pm next Friday. Some famous Chinese paintings, such as Racing Horse, Cabbage and so on, will be exhibited there. It will be a feast. Meanwhile, you'll also find some well-known painters painting on the spot. I'm sure that it can leave a wonderful impression on you.
I'd appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，想邀请外教Sam一起参观中国国画（Chinese painting）展。请给他写封信，内容包括：1、展览时间、地点；2、展览内容；3、期盼回复。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：invite sb. to do sth.(邀请某人做某事)；Chinese painting(中国国画)；exhibition(展览)；creative arts centre(创意艺术中心)；such as(例如)；feast(感官盛宴)；meanwhile(同时)；well-known(著名的)；on the spot(在现场)；impression(印象)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I'm writing to invite you to visit a Chinese Famous Paintings Exhibition, where you can enjoy Chinese culture as you always wish.运用非限制性定语从句；I'm sure that it can leave a wonderful impression on you.运用宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Bruce,
Our class are going to visit the Great Wall this Sunday. We'd like to invite you to go with us.
You know, spring is the best time of the year to visit the Great Wall as the weather gets warmer and the trees begin to turn green. So we'll surely get a good view from the Great Wall.
We're setting off from our school at eight in the morning. Then we'll go there by bike. We'd better take some food and water with us. Moreover, plastic bags are necessary as we need put the rubbish into them. In addition, please take your camera to take photos. If you can come, please let us know.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一封电子邮件，邀请你们的外教布鲁斯本周日和你们一起骑行去游览长城。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：三部分：第一部分向外教发出邀请，引出主题；第二部分介绍出发时间、地点、出行方式及需要携带的物品；第三部分表达希望得到回复。
要求：1. 介绍出发时间及地点；
2. 介绍出行方式及需要携带的物品；
3. 表达希望得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）
would like to do sth. (想要做某事); surely (无疑，一定); set off (出发); take sth. with sb. (某人随身携带某物); plastic bags (塑料袋); necessary (必要的); rubbish (垃圾); camera (照相机); take photos (拍照); look forward to (期待，盼望)
第三步：连词成句
1. We'd like to invite you to go with us.
2. So we'll surely get a good view from the Great Wall.
3. We're setting off from our school at eight in the morning.
4. We'd better take some food and water with us.
5. Plastic bags are necessary as we need put the rubbish into them.
6. Please take your camera to take photos.
7. Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then; finally; in the end; at last
2. 表并列补充关系：What’s more; besides; moreover(本篇文章使用过); furthermore; in addition(本篇文章使用过); additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…
3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…; some…, while others…
4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so(本篇文章使用过); since; thus; therefore; as a result; why
5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。
Plastic bags are necessary.本句用来介绍需要携带的物品。可以使用原因状语从句，进一步介绍为什么要带塑料袋。润色修改为：Plastic bags are necessary as we need put the rubbish into them.
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：Plastic bags are necessary as we need put the rubbish into them.，这句话为as引导的原因状语从句；其次，使用了一些固定短语，如：set off; take photos; look forward to等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇，如surely; necessary; rubbish; camera等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear Jackson,
How’s it going Thank you for inviting me but I’m awfully sorry that I failed to go to enjoy the “hot” Christmas with your family. I had been in hospital for several days when I received your invitation.
Now I’m happy to know you’ve gained the important chance to participate in the Chinese Bridge Competition in China. How wonderful it is! It’s just during the Chinese Spring Festival. I sincerely invite you to my family to spend the great festival, which is sure to leave a deep and unforgettable impression on you.
Looking forward to your reply so that I can make some detailed arrangements for your coming.
Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇书信类提纲作文。
【详解】根据题目要求，要求以李华的身份，对圣诞节前夕因病住院未能如期赴约去你的澳大利亚朋友 Jackson家做客致歉，另外得知他将于近期来中国参加“汉语桥”比赛，适逢中国春节期间，打算邀请他来你家，给他写e-mail。根据文章内容，文章正文可分为三大段：第一段对前次爽约致歉；第二段提出邀请，请他来你家做客；第三段盼回复以便作安排。本文主要时态应为现在时态，注意主谓一致和句段之间的自然衔接。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：Now I’m happy to know you’ve gained the important chance to participate in the Chinese Bridge Competition in China. 使用了宾语从句；I sincerely invite you to my family to spend the great festival, which is sure to leave a deep and unforgettable impression on you.使用了非限制性定语从句；Looking forward to your reply so that I can make some detailed arrangements for your coming.该句中用so that引导目的状语从句，等等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear Jake,
Since you wrote to ask me about the Tea Culture Festival to be held in our school, I would like to invite you to join.
The festival is scheduled for July 16 to 18, when various activities will be arranged in our school hall and playground. With the aim to help us better understand tea culture and thus develop a deeper love for our hometown, the festival will include plays based on stories about tea and famous figures.
I do believe that this is a good opportunity for you to explore more of Chinese tea culture. I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你校交换生Jake得知学校最近将举行一次茶文化节，发邮件向你询问有关信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1. 活动时间和地点；2. 活动安排；3. 发出邀请。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be interested in (对……感兴趣)；be fascinated by (对……着迷)；be scheduled for (定于)；various (各种各样的)；famous figures (名人)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Since you wrote to ask me about the Tea Culture Festival to be held in our school, I would like to invite you to join.运用了原因状语从句；I do believe that this is a good opportunity for you to explore more of Chinese tea culture.运用宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. And now I’m very happy to share something about Chinese tea culture in reply to your last e-mail.
Chinese tea culture started about 4,000 years ago and drinking tea gradually became an amazing way to relax. In China, people drink tea almost everywhere and in most of their spare time. Some Chinese believe that tea benefits people’s health a lot. Drinking a cup of tea makes people relaxed and refreshed. Others treat guests or friends to tea drinking in social communication.
Probably, you’ve got a general picture of tea culture after my introduction. Then, how about coming to China to experience it yourself Maybe, you will fall in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Jack回信介绍中国茶文化。
【详解】第一步：审题。
体裁：邮件应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。
要点：1 中国茶文化简介
2 饮茶的好处
3 邀请他来中国体验茶文化
结构布局：
第一段，听到Jack想了解中国茶文化常识，写信和他分享。
第二段，1 介绍中国茶文化：4000多年历史，饮茶是一种休闲方式。
2 饮茶的好处：对身体健康有益，而且可以放松心情。
第三段，邀请Jack来中国体验茶文化。
第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）
如：abundant，originate from，regard as，leisure，insist, benefit from, relax oneself, get rid of，make an experience等
第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用，如非谓语动词，复合句，注意拼写和时态问题）
如：Hearing that you are intended to know something about Chinese tea culture, I am writing to share it with you.等
第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);
3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第五步：润色修改。
【点睛】本文内容完整，要点齐全，语言规范，词数适当，段落分布合理。作者在文中使用了宾语从句和非谓语动词结构，如“Some Chinese believe that tea benefits people’s health a lot.”使用了宾语从句，“drinking tea gradually became an amazing way to relax.”使用了动名词作主语，这使得文章句式更加灵活多变，为文章的表达增添色彩。
7．Dear Mary,
I’d like to invite you to join us for the Chinese Traditional Food activity on behalf of the Student Union.
The activity will be held from 9:00 am to 3:00 pm next Saturday in the square of our school. We have invited some people to show us how to make dumplings, Zongzi, spring rolls and other Chinese traditional food, and you have the chance to make the food with our own hands! After that, we will enjoy the delicious food together. I know you are fond of Chinese food, so this will surely be a unique experience for you1
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邀请信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封去邀请信：假定你是李华，校学生会主席。学生会计划举办“中国传统美食节”的活动，请你给外教Mary写封邮件，邀请她参加。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；2. 活动：学习制作、共同品尝美食等。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：on behalf of, hold, how to make dumplings, Chinese traditional food, have a chance, enjoy the delicious food together, be fond of , a unique experience, look forward to等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。The activity will be held from 9:00 am to 3:00 pm next Saturday in the square of our school.句中使用一般将来时态的被动语态；We have invited some people to show us how to make dumplings, Zongzi, spring rolls and other Chinese traditional food, and you have the chance to make the food with our own hands!句中使用了疑问词+不定式结构和并列句。
8．Good morning，everyone！It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school .
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly，we should learn to learn efficiently. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what have been taught after class. In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school，we should respect teachers and be friendly with classmates.Finally，we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
With your great efforts, I am sure that you will enjoy a colorful life here.
Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一份发言稿，背景是母校为高一学生准备了主题为“ What to learn in senior high school ”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚，友善；
3.学会其他：考生自拟。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
challenging; efficiently; develop a good habit; be of great importance; benefit; preview; get involved in; review; get along well with; be friendly with; take part in; outdoor activities; be helpful to; build up; enrich; colorful.
第三步：连词成句
In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging.
We should learn to learn efficiently.
Developing a good habit is also of importance.
It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what have been taught after class.
We should learn how to get along well with others.
In school，we should respect teachers and be friendly with classmates.
We should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently.
They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
With your great efforts, I am sure that you will enjoy a colorful life here.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者使用了复合句，比如It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what have been taught after class.这句话运用了what引导的宾语从句以及it作形式主语。此外Developing a good habit is also of importance.使用了动名词作主语。范文里还使用了一些较好的词组，如be of importance, get involved in, get along well with, be friendly with, build up one’s body等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Date：June 21,2020
Notice
The annual translation competition on Chinese poetry is going to be held online from June 28 to 30 by our school’s English Club. Any student who would like to participate needs to email the translation to tranlslation-2020@, and attach a no-longer-than-3-minute video of performing the translation in a specially designed scene related to the poem. Then based on ten professional judges’ decision，there will be a first-prize winner, two second-prize and five third-prize. The awards are more than wonderful and appealing，such as Kindles and gift cards of Xinhua Bookstore.
All of you, including the overseas students, are welcome to join in the activity. Not only can the experience help you to gain a deeper understanding of Chinese culture and history, but it also gives you an opportunity to show how well you master both Chinese and English. So what are you waiting for Just begin your translation.
The English Club
【分析】本篇作文属于应用文，要求对学校即将举办的中国诗词翻译大赛写一个活动通知。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
写作要求：1. 介绍比赛安排;
2. 参加比赛的好处;
3. 欢迎所有学生参加。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
participate；be based on；be welcome to; not only…but also…
第三步：连词成句
Any student who would like to participate needs to email the translation to tranlslation-2020@.
Then based on ten professional judges’ decision, there will be a first-prize winner，two second-prize and five third-prize.
All of you, including the overseas students, are welcome to join in the activity.
Not only can the experience help you to gain a deeper understanding of Chinese culture and history，but it also gives you an opportunity to show how well you master both Chinese and English.
在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 文章的结构顺序：介绍比赛安排；参加比赛的好处；对大家发出邀请。
2.表并列补充关系：then; not only…but also…; such as
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰
第五步：修改润色
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了不少高级句型，比如who引导的定语从句：Any student who would like to participate needs to email the translation to tranlslation-2020@，and attach a no-longer-than-3-minute video of performing the translation in a specially designed scene related to the poem.此外，合理的使用非谓语也让文章增色不少，比如Then based on ten professional judges’ decision, there will be a first-prize winner, two second-prize and five third-prize. The awards are more than wonderful and appealing, such as Kindles and gift cards of Xinhua Bookstore. 文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Mike,
I’m writing to invite you to join us in the traditional English drama contest, which will be held online because of Coronavirus epidemic.
As scheduled, the contest will begin at 8 am in the Art Hall next Saturday, which will last for three hours. We have conducted several activities including some English dramas given by students and teachers. Furthermore, some short plays will also be included. I believe the contest will not only bring much fun to us, but also arouse our awareness in learning English. In addition, you are expected to act as the online judge. We’ll be extremely grateful if you could manage to come.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请外教Mike在线担任评委。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应主要为一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明写信目的
2.告知相关情况
1）比赛安排。（arrangements）
2）比赛的意义。（meaning）
3) 邀请及感谢。（invitation and appreciation）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
invite; join…in; as scheduled; including; not only…but also…; act as; grateful; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to invite you to join us in the traditional English drama contest
2. As scheduled, the contest will begin at 8 am in the Art Hall next Saturday
3. We have conducted several activities including some English dramas given by students and teachers.
4. I believe the contest will not only bring much fun to us, but also arouse our awareness in learning English.
5. you are expected to act as the online judge
6. We’ll be extremely grateful if you could manage to come.
7. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I’m writing to invite you to join us in the traditional English drama contest, which will be held online because of Coronavirus epidemic.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；也使用了一些固定词组，如join…in; not only…but also…; act as等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。