备战2023年高考英语考点微专题(全国通用)考向26 短文改错(含解析)

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考向26 短文改错
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真题典例
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Passage1
(2022年全国甲卷)My father often took me to his hospital when I was off my school. He showed me how his medical instruments was used. I felt so closely to him. However, after I went to high school, somehow I become distant from him. I was unwilling talk with him and often disobeyed his rule of not stay out with my friends too late. The disagreement was too sharp that neither he nor I knew what to settle it. One day, he talked with me or hoped to mend our relations. With the efforts made by all sides, we began to understand each other better.
【答案】1.去掉my2.was→were3.closely→close4.become→became5.talk前面加to
6.stay→staying7.too→so8.what→how9.or→and10.all→both
【解析】】本文是一篇记叙文,介绍了作者在成长过程中和父亲之间关系的变化及处理分歧的过程。
【详解】1.考查短语。句意:当我不上学时,我的爸爸经常带我去他的医院。off school为固定短语,表示“不在上学时”,school前面不加任何限定词。故将my去掉。
2.考查主谓一致。句意:他向我展示他的医疗器械是如何使用的。主语instruments为复数形式,全文为一般过去时,be动词用复数形式were。故将was改为were。
3.考查形容词。句意:我对他感觉如此亲近。felt为系动词,后面用形容词作表语,表示“亲近的”,closely为副词,此处用close。故将closely改为close。
4.考查动词时态。句意:然而,在我上了高中之后,不知怎么的,我开始疏远他。全文用一般过去时,动词become应改为过去式became。故将become改为became。
5.考查短语。句意:我不愿意和他交谈,经常违反他让我不要在外面待到很晚的规定。be willing to do意思为:愿意做,为固定短语。故在talk前面加to。
6.考查非谓语动词。句意同上。of为介词,后面的动词stay用动名词形式staying作宾语。故将stay改为staying。
7.考查状语从句。句意:这分歧如此尖锐,以至于他和我都不知道如何解决它。固定句型“so…that…”译为“如此……以至于……”引导结果状语从句。故将too改为so。
8.考查副词。句意同上。此处为“疑问副词+不定式”结构来做动词knew的宾语。结合句意,此处表达“如何解决它”,settle it为动宾关系,此处缺少方式状语,用how。故将what改为how。
9.考查并列连词。句意:一天,他和我交谈,并且希望修补我们的关系。根据语境,“talked with me”与“hoped to mend our relations”为顺承、递进关系,用and连接。故将or改为and。
10.考查限定词。句意:在两方的努力下,我们开始更好地理解对方。结合语境可知,此处表示作者和父亲双方,用both修饰sides,表示两方,all用于三者及以上。故将all改为both。
Passage2
(2022年全国乙卷)We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. A doctor tells me people who lives the longest are dancers and cyclists. Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise. Whether you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution. Just see how cars have been taken over our cities. They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives in danger. And there were traffic jams, too. Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.
【答案】1. greatly → great 2. lives → live 3. 在because后加of4. Whether → If 或Whether → When
5. they → you6. cause → causing7. 去掉have后的been8. what → which9. were → are10. bicycle → bicycles
【解析】这是一篇议论文。作者表述了骑自行车这项运动可以带来的好处。
【详解】1.考查形容词。句意: 我们都知道骑自行车是一项很好的运动。需用形容词作定语修饰名词exercise。故将greatly改为great。
2.考查主谓一致。句意:医生告诉我,寿命最长的人是舞蹈家和骑自行车的人。people是集合名词,谓语动词用复数。故将lives改为live。
3.考查介词。句意:也许是因为新鲜空气、流畅的运动和锻炼的结合。because表示“因为”,后面接从句,短语because of表示“因为”,后面接名词、代词、动名词等作宾语,the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise是名词短语。故在because后加of。
4.考查状语从句连接词。句意:当你骑自行车的时候你是不用汽油的。由句意可知,该句阐述的是一个事实,需用if或when引导;位于句首,注意首字母大写。故将Whether改为If或改为When。
5.考查代词。句意:所以你不会制造出二氧化碳,也不会造成空气污染。根据前一句中的人称you可知,这里假设“你”骑自行车,前后人称应保持一致。故将they改为you。
6.考查非谓语动词。句意:所以你不会制造出二氧化碳,也不会造成空气污染。本句时态为现在进行时,连词and连接两个并列的现在分词,构成进行时。故将cause改为causing。
7.考查语态。句意:看看汽车是如何占领我们的城市的。主语cars与动词take over之间是主谓关系,应用主动语态。故去掉have后的been。
8.考查定语从句关系词。句意:它们经常高速行驶,这可能会危及我们的生命。分析句子结构可知,逗号后是非限制性定语从句,先行词为前面的一句话,在从句中做主语,应用which 引导。故将what改为which。
9.考查时态。句意:还有交通堵塞。根据上下文时态可知,本句应用一般现在时。故将were改为are。
10.考查名词。句意:如果用自行车代替汽车,我们的城市将变得更好。bicycle为可数名词,由句中的cars和句意可知,此处应用复数形式。故将bicycle改为bicycles。
Passage3
(2021年全国甲卷)Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are:Who will you go in times of trouble Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates because they're of the same age and can understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help. Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others. They kept very much to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust mostly.
【答案】1.are→is2.go后加to3.friend→friends4.删除turn后的out5.little→few
6.our→their7.talk→talking8.kept→keep9.where→when/whenever10.mostly→most
【解析】这是一篇说明文。文章介绍了关于学生在碰到问题后的解决方式的问卷调查结果。
1.考查主谓一致。句意:其中的一个问题是:你遇到麻烦时会去找谁?one of the +名词复数,意为“……之一”,为单数含义,所以其后的系动词应用单数。结合句意,此处指问卷调查中的一个问题,所以为客观事实,时态用一般现在时。故are改为is。
2.考查固定结构。句意同上。短语go to sb.“求助于某人”相当于短语turn to sb. for help。故go后加to。
3.考查名词复数。句意:许多同学说他们会和他们的朋友说或同学讲,因为他们是同龄人,能彼此理解。friend“朋友”为可数名词,结合句中their,所以此处要用复数。故friend改为friends。
4.考查固定短语。句意:一些说他们会向他们的父母或老师求助。固定短语turn to sb. for help,意为“向某人求助”,所以此处删除介词out。故删除turn后的out。
5.考查代词。句意:只有一些人选择自己解决问题。结合上文“Many students say...”及“Some will turn...”可知,此处指一些学生。student为可数名词,应用a few代指。a little通常代指不可数名词。故little改为few。
6.考查代词。句意同上。短语on one’s own,意为“独自”,结合句意可知,此处指学生们独自完成,所以要用代词their。故our改为their。
7.考查非谓语动词。句意:他们的答案也表明他们不喜欢和其他人说。固定短语dislike doing sth.,意为“不喜欢做某事”,doing为动名词作宾语。故talk改为talking。
8.考查时态。句意:他们很自闭。结合前文可知,文章的时态用一般现在时。所以此处的kept改为keep。故kept改为keep。
9.考查连词。句意:在我看来,当我们有麻烦时(无论什么时候我们有麻烦时),我们应该从我们最相信的人们那里寻求帮助。分析可知,本句为含有状语从句的复合句。主句为we should seek help...,从句表示的含义为无论什么时候我们有麻烦或者当我们有麻烦时,所以应用when/whenever引导。故where改为when/whenever。
10.考查副词。句意同上。副词mostly,意为“大多数”;most意为“最”,此处指最相信的人,指程度。故mostly改为most。
Passage4
(2021年全国乙卷)I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What’s most, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. That’s our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!
【答案】1. dish→dishes2. tidying→tidy3. whatever→whenever4. doing前加from5. was→is
6. 去掉are7. most→more8. mentally→mental9. our→my10. hopes→hope
【解析】
【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者对于做家务这件事的看法以及做家务会带来的好处。
1. 考查名词单复数。句意:饭后我总是帮助父母洗碗。固定短语“do the dishes”译为“洗餐具”。故将dish改为dishes。
2. 考查动词。句意:我也给院子里的花浇水,必要时打扫我自己的卧室。分析句子结构以及并列连词and可知,此处tidy up是并列谓语。根据上文的“water the flowers”可知,句子要使用一般现在时。主语第一人称I,谓语动词用原型。故将tidying改为tidy。
3. 考查连词。句意:我也给院子里的花浇水,必要时打扫我自己的卧室。根据句意可知,此处表达“有必要时我也会打扫自己的卧室”,所以用whenever(无论何时)引导让步状语从句。故将whatever改为whenever。
4. 考查介词。句意:在我看来,学生可以从做家务中受益很多。固定短语“benefit......from...... ”译为“从……中获益”。故在doing前加from。
5. 考查时态。句意:首先,做家务有助于我们成为一个负责任的人。根据全文时态可知,本文陈述客观事实需要用一般现在时。主语doing housework为单数,谓语也用单数。故将was改为is。
6. 考查动词。句意:同时,这也给了我们的父母更多的时间去做他们喜欢的事情,改善了家庭关系。根据句意可知,此处表达“去做他们喜欢的事情”,动词like译为“喜欢”满足句意;所以动词like前的系动词are多余。故删去are。
7. 考查固定搭配。句意:此外,做家务可以是一种从学习中获得精神放松的方式。固定短语“what’s more”译为“此外”。故将most改为more。
8. 考查形容词。句意:同时,这也给了我们的父母更多的时间去做他们喜欢的事情,改善了家庭关系。修饰名词relaxation(放松)需要用形容词。故将mentally改为mental。
9. 考查人称代词。句意:这是我对家务的看法。根据全文内容以及句意可知,此处表达“这是我对家务的看法”。故将our改为my。
10. 考查祈使句。句意:希望这能激发更多关于这个话题的思考!分析句子结构可知,此处为祈使句,所以动词hope需要用动词原形。故将hopes改为hope。
Passage5
(2020·新课标Ⅰ)Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove, I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out as I had wished.
【答案】
【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者做西红柿炒鸡蛋的过程。
1.考查形容词。句意:今天我自己尝试做一道简单的菜。根据名词dish可知,此处应用形容词作定语,故将simply改为simple。
2.考查非谓语动词。句意:我喜欢吃西红柿炒鸡蛋。动词fry与tomatoes之间是动宾关系,所以此处应用过去分词作定语,故将frying改为fried。
3.考查情态动词用法。句意:并且我认为它一定很简单。must是情态动词,后接动词原形,to多余,故将to去掉。
4.考查非谓语动词。句意:我妈妈告诉我如何准备这道菜。分析句子可知,“how+不定式”作told的宾语,to是不定式符号,后应接动词原形,故将preparing改为prepare。
5.考查连词。句意:首先我把西红柿切成块,并把它们放在一边。I cut the tomatoes into pieces与put them aside之间是并列关系,应使用and连接,故将but改为and。
6.考查名词复数。句意:下一步我把鸡蛋打到一个碗里,然后用筷子快速搅拌。chopstick是可数名词,意为“筷子”,通常以复数形式出现,故将chopstick改为chopsticks。
7.考查介词。句意:之后我把油倒进一个平底锅,然后开火。根据I poured oil into a pan及常识可知,把油倒进锅里后应是打开炉子,所以此处应使用短语turn on,故将off改为n。
8.考查连词。句意:我耐心等待,直到油烧热。此处是指“直到”油烧热,应使用until/till引导时间状语从句,故将unless改为until/till。
9.考查冠词。句意:然后我把西红柿和打好的鸡蛋一起放进平底锅。此处特指上文提到的pan,所以其前应加定冠词the,故在pan前the。
10.考查代词。句意:“不是那样。”我的妈妈尽力阻止我,但是失败了。根据上文可知,是作者一个人做菜,此处指妈妈尽力阻止“我”,应使用第一人称单数的宾格,故将us改为me。
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经典变式练
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※基础练
Passage1
Last Saturday witnessed an impressive marathon race what nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher in our school. 45 students selecting from every class took an part in the competition. The route, measures about five kilometers, were from our school gate to the Science Museum Square. All the runners tried our best to finish the task, the classmates along the way giving them necessarily help, as well as encouragement. At last every winner managed to reach the finishing line receiving cheers from all the direction. This activity was highly spoken by the public, because not only did it provided a chance for us to exercise, but also made us more united.
Passage2
My father is the man I respect most. Strict as he may be, but he never fails to show his care and considerate. Once I broke a neighbor window. Seeing nobody around, I ran away immediately. When Dad came home, he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what has happened. I could only tell him a truth. Instead of scold, he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize for our neighbor. I learned this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health but he also teaches me when to be a good person. How luckily I am to have such a good father!
Passage3
I will never forget my experience of hiking on the Mount Tai. Before the trip, I think it a piece of cake get to the top of the mountain. However, after reached the middle of it, I was started to feel tired. I was thirsty and my foots were so painful. Although I faced so a great difficulty, I was determined to finish a trip as I was fully convinced what nothing is impossible. So I must move on! Eventual, I reached the top of the mountain. How happy I was but how a beautiful view I could enjoy on the mountain!
Passage4
I’ve been in Russia for two month. This is the first time that I had been away from my family for such a long time. Under the help of Katia, a roommate of mine, I soon get used to live without my parents around. Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We become friends shortly after we met each other. Although her English is a little hardly to understand, but we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about my own family. We’re both surprised that Chinese culture and Russian culture are so different. Now, we are planning a small party for the next Sunday. There, Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been to China several times. I just can’t wait.
Passage5
On World Environment Day,aiming to raise students’ aware of protecting the environment, my classmates and I start the program "Pick Up the Pearl" in our school. At noon, we broadcasted our requirements over the loudspeaker, call on students to take steps protect the environment. Afterwards, we went to classrooms to teach about the students how to classify rubbish. Meanwhile, when we saw litter there, we put them into the rubbish bin, reminding the students to keep the classrooms cleanly. It is through this activity which we realize small things can make the big difference. We should do something for a much good world.
◎提升练
Passage6
Our school organized a one-day trip to a small farm on last Sunday and we enjoyed us and learned a lot. It was at 9 am when we reached the farm on the school bus. Upon arrive, we were warmly welcomed by the kind farm owner and his wife. We were divide into several groups, and then picked fruit, watered vegetables but tasted delicious fruit and vegetables. Moreover, couple told us about how they started the farm while worked, which impressed us a lot. This outdoor activity were beneficial to us. Not only did it get us close to nature than before, but also taught us the value of hard work.
Passage7
The other day, I discover I couldn’t move my right arm and fingers after sleeping through a flight. Having diagnosed me with neural injury, the doctor suggested I try acupuncture (针灸). So I followed his advices and began my treatment. Dozens tiny needles were inserted across my arm and fingers. I dared not move, because even a small change of position could cause a acute pain. Two weeks went by after I could eat a meal with chopsticks and it took a month for my arm and fingers to return back to their normal functions. I was very amazing at how magic these needles were. That I had always considered old-fashioned and useless turned out to be of great use. I hope acupuncture, with its help I recovered, will continue to bring health to other .
Passage8
Learning to ride a bike is so a memorable thing that I not only master it but also understand the love of my father’s. When I was a kid, I envied the friends who could ride a adult bike. Considering the distance of her home to school after I attended junior school, my father decided to teach me ride bikes during the summer vacation. At first, my father told me the key point to ride a bike, and hold me to make the bike firmly and then I rode it. Though I was afraid, I felt safely with my father around me. A few hours later, I could ride it under my father’s help. I was so happy, but my father was covering with sweat. I never fell off the bike under his protection. Watching my sweating father, I was too moved to tears.
Passage9
Dear Tony,
I am glad that you are keen on Chinese idioms. Chinese idioms, mainly consist of four or more Chinese characters, have been appealing to those absorbed in Chinese. As matter of fact, they were an indispensable part of Chinese culture. The benefits of learning it can be listed as following.
First, with a great many of Chinese idioms widely used in our daily life, having a good knowledge of them contribute to better understanding both spoken and written Chinese. Second, they usually possess vivid and profound meanings, making which people try to convey more convincing.
As far as I am concern, I have a preference for the stories behind some Chinese idioms. Not only are they particular interesting, but they also tend to teach some wisdom. I sincerely hope you can learn them well.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage10
I have a much younger brother who is a two-years old boy. Last week, my mother was busy clean the house and asked me to take care of her. I agreed without the second thought, because I assumed it would be very easy, but later it was turned out quite difficult. My brother was causing trouble all the time. As he was too young to left alone, I needed to focus my attention to him constantly. Once he was out of sight, something terribly might happen the next moment. While my mother finished, I felt relieved. Now I understand being a mother of two is not easy work as I thought.
¤真题练
Passage1
(2020·新课标Ⅱ)Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.
Passage2
(2020·新课标Ⅲ)My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill.
But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.
Passage3
(2019·全国卷I)I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
Passage4
(2019·全国卷II)Since I was a kid, I`ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
Passage5
(2019·全国卷III)I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
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1.1.what→which / that2.selecting→selected3.删掉an4.measures→measuring或在measures前面加which
5.were→was 6.our→their7.necessarily→necessary8.direction→directions9.在by前加of10.provided→provide
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章描述了班级同学参加学校举办的马拉松比赛的事。
【详解】1.考查定语从句。句意:上星期六,我们学校见证了一场令人印象深刻的马拉松比赛,几乎吸引了我们学校每个学生和老师的注意。分析句子结构可知,从句“nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher in our school” 在句中修饰前面的名词marathon race,且从句中缺少主语,这是一个定语从句,先行词为物,应用which或that引导。故将what改为which或that。
2.考查非谓语动词。句意:从每个班一共选出了45名学生参加了比赛。分析句子结构可知,句中已有谓语动词took part in,select只能作非谓语,其逻辑主语为students,二者之间为被动关系,故此处应用过去分词形式。故将selecting改为selected。
3.考查固定结构。句意:从每个班一共选出了45名学生参加了比赛。Take part in为固定结构,表示“参加、参与”,不需要加冠词。故把不定冠词an删掉。
4.考查定语从句或非谓语动词。句意:这条路线从我们的校门到科学博物馆广场,长约5公里。分析句子结构可知,此处有两个谓语,一个为measures,一个为系动词were。此处可把前面的measures变为非谓语动词measuring,也可在measures前面加关系代词which,构成非限制性定语从句。故将measures改为measuring或在measures前面加which。
5.考查主谓一致。句意:这条路线从我们的校门到科学博物馆广场,长约5公里。分析句子结构可知,本句主语为the route,单数形式,故谓语也需用单数形式,故将were改为was。
6.考查人称代词。句意:所有的参赛者都竭尽全力完成任务,沿途的同学给予了他们必要的帮助和鼓励。try one’s best为固定搭配,表示“尽全力”。此处主语为all the runners,第三人称 复数,故中间的one’s应用其对应代词their。故将our改为their。
7.考查形容词。句意:所有的参赛者都竭尽全力完成任务,沿途的同学给予了他们必要的帮助和鼓励。此处necessarily实际上修饰的是后面的名词help,作定语,应用形容词形式。故将necessarily改为necessary。
8.考查名词。句意:最后,每个获胜者都成功地到达了终点线,得到了来自四面八方的欢呼。all后面一般接可数名词复数或不可数名词,direction为可数名词,应用复数形式。故将direction改为directions。
9.考查固定搭配。句意:这次活动受到了公众的高度评价,因为它不仅为我们提供了锻炼的机会,而且使我们更加团结。be highly spoken of为固定结构,表示“受到高度评价”。故在by前加介词of。
10.考查动词。句意:这次活动受到了公众的高度评价,因为它不仅为我们提供了锻炼的机会,而且使我们更加团结。助动词did后面接动词原形,故将provided改为provide。
2.1. 删除but 2. considerate→consideration 3. neighbor→neighbor's 4. has→had 5. a→the
6. scold→scolding 7. for→to 8. 在 learn后加from 9. when→how 10. luckily→lucky
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。作者通过他打破邻居家窗户父亲让道歉这件小事,明白了他父亲不仅关心他的健康,还教会他如何做一个好人。文章最后作者感叹非常幸运有这么好的父亲。
【小题1】考查状语从句。句意:尽管他很严厉,但他无时无刻不表现出他的关心和体贴。“ Strict as he may be”是as引导的让步状语从句,but多余。故将but删除。
【小题2】考查名词。句意:他无时无刻不表现出他的关心和体贴。句中and连接两个并列的名词作show的宾语,且前有形容词性物主代词his,所以应用名词。故将considerate改为consideration。
【小题3】考查名词所有格。句意:有一次我打破了邻居的窗户。此处指的是邻居的窗户,邻居与窗户构成所属关系,所以应该用所有格。故将neighbor改为neighbor's。
【小题4】考查时态。句意:当爸爸回家时,他注意到我的不安,问我发生了什么事。我的事情发生在父亲问之前,再结合上下文可知此从句应该用过去完成时。故将has改为had。
【小题5】考查冠词。句意:我只能告诉他事实真相。此处特指上文打破邻居窗户这件事情,所以应该用定冠词。故将a改为the。
【小题6】考查非谓语动词。句意:他没有责骂,而是称赞我的诚实,然后鼓励我向邻居道歉。instead of后接名词或动名词做宾语。故将scold改为scolding。
【小题7】考查介词。句意:他没有责骂,而是称赞我的诚实,然后鼓励我向邻居道歉。apologize to sb意为“给……赔不是,向……道歉”。故将for改为to。
【小题8】考查动词短语。句意:从这件事我认识到,爸爸不仅关心我的健康,还教会我如何成为一个好人。根据句意我是从这件事情中认识到的,learn from 意为“认识到,意识到,从……中吸取教训”复合句意。故在learn后加from.
【小题9】考查特殊疑问词。句意:从这件事我认识到,爸爸不仅关心我的健康,还教会我如何成为一个好人。根据句意可知爸爸还教会我如何成为好人而不是什么时候成为好人。故将when改为how。
【小题10】考查形容词。句意:我多么幸运有这么好的父亲!此句为感叹句,根据句子结构分析可知how所修饰的成分是am的表语,所以应该用形容词。故将luckily改为lucky。
3.1.think→thought2.get前加to3.reached→reaching4.去掉I was started 中的was5.foots→feet
6.so→such7.finish a trip 中的a→the8.what→that9.Eventual→Eventually10.but→and
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者徒步泰山的经历,虽然过程痛苦,但爬上山顶后,作者觉得一切都是值得的。
【详解】1.考查时态。句意:在这次出行之前,我认为抵达山顶是一件容易的事。描述过去发生的事情此处应为一般过去时。故think改为thought。
2.考查非谓语动词。句意:在这次出行之前,我认为抵达山顶是一件容易的事。此句中的it作为形式宾语,真正的宾语应该是不定式to get to the top of the mountain,故在get 前加 to。
3.考查介词。句意:然而,走到一半后,我开始觉得累了。介词的后面接名词或动词-ing形式作宾语,故将reached 改为其动名词形式reaching。故reached 改为 reaching。
4.考查语态。句意:然而,走到一半后,我开始觉得累了。谓语动词start与主语I 为主动关系,故去掉was。故去掉I was started 中的was。
5.考查名词的数。句意:我很渴,脚很痛。foot为可数名词,此处要表达的是双脚,而脚的复数形式为feet。故foots改为feet。
6.考查副词。句意:虽然我面临着如此大的困难,但我决心完成一次旅行,因为我完全相信没有什么是不可能的。so和such都表程度,so后接形容词,such 后接名词,此后是名词a great difficulty。故so改为such。
7.考查冠词。句意:虽然我面临着如此大的困难,但我决心完成一次旅行,因为我完全相信没有什么是不可能的。此处应为特指此次爬泰山的经历。故finish a trip中的a改为the。
8.考查宾语从句。句意:虽然我面临着如此大的困难,但我决心完成一次旅行,因为我完全相信没有什么是不可能的。此处为宾语从句,从句nothing is impossible成分和句意都完整,故用连接词that。故what改为that。
9.考查副词。句意:最终,我到达了山顶。修饰后文整个句子应用副词eventually,作状语。故Eventual 改为 Eventually。
10.考查并列连词。句意:我是多么高兴啊,在山上我可以欣赏到多么美丽的景色啊!本句前后为并列关系而非转折。故but 改为 and。
4.1. month→months2. had→have3. Under→With4. live→living5. are→is
6. become→became7. hardly→hard8.删除but9. my→our10. who→whom
【导语】这是一篇记叙文,文章讲述作者去俄罗斯,在室友Katia的帮助下很快适应了那里的生活。
【详解】1.考查名词复数。句意:我已经在俄罗斯待了两个月了。month是可数名词,由two可知应用复数。故将month改为months。
2.考查固定句型的时态。句意:这是我第一次离开家人这么长时间。It/This is the first/second time that sb. have/has done sth.某人第一/二次做某事,固定句型,此处应用现在完成时,主语是I,助动词用have。故将had改为have。
3.考查介词。句意:在我的室友Katia的帮助下,我很快就习惯了没有父母在身边的生活。with the help of sb在某人的帮助下,固定短语。故将Under改为With。
4.考查动名词。句意:在我的室友Katia的帮助下,我很快就习惯了没有父母在身边的生活。get used to doing sth习惯于做某事,to是介词,后面用动名词作宾语,故将live改为living。
5.考查主谓一致。句意:Katia像许多其他俄罗斯女孩一样,很好很活泼。句子描述事实,用一般现在时,且句子的主语是Katia,表示单数意义,be动词应用is。故将are改为is。
6.考查一般过去时。句意:我们认识不久就成了朋友。根据时间状语从句“after we met each other”可知,此处应用一般过去时,become的过去式是became。故将become改为became。
7.考查形容词。句意:虽然她的英语有点难懂,但我们喜欢聊天,我们通常谈论很多关于我们自己的家庭。hardly“几乎不”是副词,根据句意,此处指“有点难以理解”,故用形容词hard“困难的”。故将hardly改为hard。
8.考查连词。句意:虽然她的英语有点难懂,但我们喜欢聊天,我们通常谈论很多关于我们自己的家庭。although表示“虽然,尽管”,引导让步状语从句,主句不再用连词,故不和but连用。故删除but。
9.考查代词。句意:虽然她的英语有点难懂,但我们喜欢聊天,我们通常谈论很多关于我们自己的家庭。结合句意可知,此处指“我们经常谈论我们各自的家人”,主语是we,故用形容词性物主代词our。故将my改为our。
10.考查定语从句。句意:在那里,Katia会把我介绍给她的一些朋友,其中一个朋友去过中国好几次。此处是“介词+关系词”引导的非限制性定语从句,先行词是her friends,指人,关系词在从句中作介词of的宾语,应用关系代词whom。故将who改为whom。
5.1.aware→awareness;2.start→started;3.call→calling;4.在protect前面加to;5.去掉about;6.them→it;7.cleanly→clean;8.which→that;9.the→a;10.good→better。
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了在世界环境日这一天作者和同学们采取实际行动去保护环境经历。
【详解】1.考查名词。句意:在世界环境日,为了提高学生的环保意识,我和同学们在我们学校启动了“捡珍珠”活动。aware是形容词,而raise需要名词作宾语,故将aware改为awareness。
2.考查时态。句意:世界环境日,为了提高学生的环保意识,我和同学们在我们学校启动了“捡珍珠”活动。由下一句中的broadcasted可知,文章用一般过去时描述,本句中的start应该使用一般过去时,故将start改为started。
3.考查现在分词。句意:中午,我们通过扩音器广播了我们的要求,呼吁学生采取措施保护环境。call作为非谓语动词使用,它与句子主语we构成主动关系,因此使用现在分词作状语,故将call改为calling。
4.考查固定短语。句意:中午,我们通过扩音器广播了我们的要求,呼吁学生采取措施保护环境。 固定短语take steps to do:采取措施做某事, 用不定式作目的状语,故在protect前面加to。
5.考查固定用法。句意:之后,我们去教室教学生如何分类垃圾。teach sb sth:教某人某事,teach后接双宾语,故去掉about。
6.考查代词。句意:同时,当我们看到那里有垃圾时,我们将它放入垃圾箱,提醒学生保持教室清洁。指代不可数名词litter,应该使用人称代词it,故将them改为it。
7.考查固定用法。句意:同时,当我们看到那里有垃圾时,我们将它放入垃圾箱,提醒学生保持教室清洁。“keep+宾语+宾语补足语(形容词)”表示“使……保持某种状态”,用形容词作宾语补足语,故将cleanly改为clean。
8.考查强调句。句意:正是通过这项活动,我们意识到小事可以带来大不同。本句中含有强调句型 It is(was)…that…,被强调的是“through this activity”,故将which改为that。
9.考查冠词。句意:正是通过这项活动,我们意识到小事可以带来大不同。固定短语make a difference:有作用,有影响,形容词big是以辅音音素开头的单词,因此a不变, 故将the改为a。
10.考查比较级。句意:我们应该为一个更美好的世界做一些事情。much修饰形容词比较级,根据句意的需要可知,此处为比较意义,表示“更好的”,故将good改为better。
◎提升练
6.1. 去掉on2. us→ourselves3. when→that4. arrive→arrival/arriving5. divide→divided
6. but→and7.在couple前面加the8. worked→working9. were→was10. close→closer
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了学校组织的农场一日游,学生们在接近大自然的过程中收获颇丰。
【详解】1.考查时间状语。句意:上周日,我们学校组织了一次小农场一日游,我们玩得很开心,学到了很多东西。“last+时间名词”作状语时,last前不需加介词,故将on去掉。
2.考查反身代词。句意:上周日,我们学校组织了一次小农场一日游,我们玩得很开心,学到了很多东西。enjoy的主语和宾语为同一个目标,因此宾语使用反身代词ourselves,故将us改为ourselves。
3.考查强调句。句意:早上九点,我们坐校车到了农场。此处考查强调句式:It is/was +强调部分+that/who…,强调时间状语“at 9 am”,需用that,故将when改为that。
4.考查名词或动名词。句意:一到农场,亲切的农场主和他的妻子就热情地欢迎我们。upon后加名词或动名词作宾语,表示“一……就……”,arrive的名词是arrival,其动名词是arriving,故将arrive改为arrival/arriving。
5.考查被动语态。句意:我们被分成几组,然后采摘水果,给蔬菜浇水,品尝美味的果蔬。主语We和谓语动词divide是被动关系,此处为一般过去时的被动语态,被动语态的核心结构为“be done”,故将divide改为divided。
6.考查并列连词。句意:我们被分成几组,然后采摘水果,给蔬菜浇水,品尝美味的果蔬。此处的一系列动作应为顺承关系而非转折关系,故将but改为and。
7.考查定冠词。句意:此外,这对夫妇还向我们讲述了他们是如何在工作时开办农场的,这让我们印象深刻。couple在句子中是可数名词,且此处couple特指上文提到的农场主人及其妻子,为特指意义,用定冠词the,故在couple前面加the。
8.考查状语从句的省略。句意:此外,这对夫妇还向我们讲述了他们是如何在工作时开办农场的,这让我们印象深刻。此句中涉及到状语从句的省略,当从句主语与主句主语一致并含有be动词时,可将从句中的主语与be动词省略掉,此处完整的从句为:while they were working,省略了“they were”,故将worked改为working。
9.考查时态和主谓一致。句意:这种户外活动对我们有益。主语activity为单数意义,全文时态为一般过去时为主,故将were改为was。
10.考查比较级。句意:它不仅让我们比以前更接近大自然,还教给我们努力工作的价值。根据后面的than可知,此处应用副词比较级closer,故将close改为closer。
7.1.discover→ discovered2.advices→ advice3.Dozens 后加of4. a 改成an5.after→ before
6.删除back7.amazing→ amazed8.That→ What9.its→ whose10.other→ others
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是作者在睡觉之后神经损伤,经过针灸后身体得以恢复的经历。
【详解】1.考查时态。句意:有一天,我发现我不能移动我的右胳膊和手指。根据前文“the other day”可知,本篇讲述的是过去发生的事情,时态应用一般过去时。discover改为discovered。
2.考查名词。句意:所以我听从了他的建议,并且开始了我的治疗。advice为不可数名词,没有复数的变化。故将advices改为advice。
3.考查固定搭配。句意:很多根细小的针扎入了我的胳膊和手指。dozens of为固定搭配,翻译为:很多。故在dozens后面加of.
4.考查冠词。句意:因为即使是微小的体位变化也会引起剧烈的疼痛。句子中acute是元音音素开头的单词,此处表示泛指需用不定冠词an。故将a改为an。
5.考查连词。句意:两个星期过去了,我才能用筷子吃饭。根据句意,在我能够用筷子吃饭之前已经过去了两个星期。原句先后顺序颠倒,故将after改为before。
6.考查副词。句意:我的手臂和手指花了一个月的时间才恢复正常功能。句中return本身已表示“返回,恢复”,不与back连用,back使用重复。故将back删除。
7.考查形容词。句意:我对这些针的魔力感到惊讶。根据句子结构,句中的主语是I,应该使用amazed作表语,amazing修饰物,故将amazing改为amazed。
8.考查主语从句。句意:我一直认为过时和无用的东西,原来是非常有用的。我希望针灸,通过它的帮助我恢复,将继续带来健康的其他人。通过句子结构可以判断,此处“what I had always considered old-fashioned and useless ”是放在turned out前的主语从句,在主语从句中had considered后面缺少宾语即我认为的事情。故把that改为what。
9.考查定语从句。句意:同上。根据句子结构分析,此处应该是非限制定语从句。根据句意是在针灸的帮助之下,此处应该使用whose引导定语从句代替先行词acupuncture的所有格形式,在从句中作定语。故将its改为whose。
10.考查代词。句意:同上。根据bring health to可知,后面缺少宾语,other只能做定语。同时根据句意可知,针灸把健康带给其他人。故将other改为others。
8.1. so→such2. father’s→father3. a→an4. her→my5. ride→to ride
6. hold→held7. safely→safe8. under→without9. covering→covered10. too→去掉too
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述父亲教我骑自行车的故事。
【详解】1. 考查结果状语从句。句意:学习骑自行车是一件令人难忘的事情,我不仅掌握了它,而且理解了我的父亲的爱。根据句子结构及句意可知,此处需使用such修饰名词thing,引导结果状语从句,“such…that…”意为“如此以至于…”。故将so改为such。
2. 考查名词。句意:学习骑自行车是一件令人难忘的事情,我不仅掌握了它,而且理解了我的父亲的爱。根据句意及句子结构可知,此处the love of father表示“父亲的爱”,因此不需要再使用所有格形式。故将father’s 改为father。
3. 考查冠词。句意:当我还是个孩子的时候,我很羡慕那些能骑成人自行车的朋友。因为adult为以元音开头,因此需使用冠词an。故将a改为an。
4. 考查物主代词。句意:考虑到我上初中后家到学校的距离,我的父亲决定在暑假教我骑自行车。根据句意及语境可知,此处表示“我家”到学校的距离,故将her改为my。
5. 考查非谓语动词。句意:考虑到我上初中后家到学校的距离,我的父亲决定在暑假教我骑自行车。根据短语“teach sb. to do sth.”意为“教某人做某事”可知,需要使用不定式作宾补。故将ride改为to ride。
6. 考查动词时态。句意:起初,我的父亲告诉我骑自行车的重点,然后稳稳地扶着我,于是我开始骑。根据全文语境可知,本文是回忆小时候的故事,因此时态为一般过去时,故将hold改为held。
7. 考查形容词。句意:虽然我很害怕,但有父亲在身边,我感到很安全。根据句子结构分析可知,此处需要形容词作feel的表语。故将safely改为safe。
8. 考查介词。句意:几个小时后,我不用爸爸帮忙也能骑了。根据句子可知,此处自己能够骑车了,因此需要使用介词without表示不需要父亲的帮助也能骑车。故将under改为without。
9. 考查动词的被动语态。句意:我很高兴,但我的父亲满身是汗。根据句子主语father与cover是被动关系可知,此处需要使用被动语态,故将covering改为covered。
10. 考查被动语态。句意:看着满头大汗的父亲,我感动得热泪盈眶。根据句意及主语I与动词move是被动关系,表示“感动得热泪盈眶”,而不是表示“too...to”。可知,此处不需要使用副词too。故将too去掉。
9.1. consist→consisting2. matter前加a3. were→are4. it→them5. following→follows
6. 去掉many后的of7. contribute→contributes8. which→what9. concern→concerned10. particular→particularly
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。文章中作者给朋友介绍了中国成语及其特点。
【详解】1. 考查非谓语动词。句意:汉语成语,主要由四个或四个以上的汉字组成,一直吸引着那些学习汉语的人。根据句子结构分析可知,consist为非谓语动词作状语,因逻辑主语Chinese idioms与consist是主动关系,因此需要使用现在分词的形式。故将consist改为consisting。
2. 考查冠词。句意:事实上,它们是中国文化不可或缺的一部分。固定搭配“As a matter of fact”意为“实际上”,matter的发音以辅音音素开头,故用a,故在matter前加a。
3. 考查时态。句意:事实上,它们是中国文化不可或缺的一部分。根据语篇语境可知,本文是描述中国成语,属于一般事实,需要使用一般现在时。故将were改为are。
4. 考查代词。句意:学习它们的好处可以罗列如下。根据上文“Chinese idioms(中国成语)”可知,此处代词代指的是复数名词Chinese idioms,因此代词需要使用them,故将it改为them。
5. 考查副词短语。句意:学习它们的好处可以罗列如下。根据短语“as follows”意为“如下所述”,故将following改为follows。
6. 考查形容词短语。句意:很多成语在日常生活中被广泛应用。a great many意为“大量的”,直接修饰名词,不需要使用介词of,故将of删除。
7. 考查主谓一致。句意:对它们的了解有助于更好地理解汉语的口语和书面语。根据句子结构分析可知,此处主语“having a good knowledge of them(掌握成语)”为单数概念,因此谓语动词需使用第三人称单数形式。故将contribute改为contributes。
8. 考查宾语从句。句意:其次,它们通常具有生动而丰富的含义,使人们试图传达的内容更有说服力。根据句子结构分析可知,此句为连词引导从句作make的宾语,从句中缺少宾语,且指代事物,因此需要使用连词what,故将which改为what。
9. 考查形容词。句意:就我而言,我更喜欢一些中国成语背后的故事。根据句子结构分析可知,am后需要使用形容词作表语,as far as I am concerned“就我而言”。故将concern改为concerned。
10. 考查副词。句意:它们不仅特别有趣,而且往往传递智慧。根据句子结构分析可知,此处需使用副词修饰形容词interesting。故将particular改为particularly。
10.1. two-years→two-year2. clean→cleaning3. her→him4. the→a5去掉turned前的was
6. left前添加be7. to→on8. terribly→terrible9. While→When10. not→no
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者帮助妈妈照顾年幼弟弟的故事。
【详解】1. 考查形容词。句意:我有一个弟弟,他是一个两岁的男孩。此处复合形容词,作定语,修饰名词boy,复合形容词中的名词只能用原形。故将two-years改为two-year。
2. 考查非谓语动词。句意:上周,我妈妈忙着打扫房子,让我照顾他。固定短语be busy doing“忙于做……”。故将clean改为cleaning。
3. 考查代词。句意:上周,我妈妈忙着打扫房子,让我照顾他。根据boy可知,此处使用代词him代指男孩boy。故将her改为him。
4. 考查冠词。句意:我毫不犹豫地同意了,因为我原以为会很容易,但后来事实证明非常困难。固定搭配without a second thought“不假思索,毫不犹豫”。故将the改为a。
5. 考查动词语态。句意:我毫不犹豫地同意了,因为我原以为会很容易,但后来事实证明非常困难。turn out是不及物动词,没有被动语态。故去掉turned前的was。
6. 考查非谓语动词。句意:因为他太年轻了,不能一个人呆着,我需要不断地把注意力集中在他身上。固定搭配too...to...“太……以至于不能……”,主语he与leave是被动关系,应用不定式的被动形式,故left前添加be。
7. 考查介词。句意:我需要一直把注意力放在他身上。固定短语focus attention on“将注意放到……上”。故将to改为on。
8. 考查形容词。句意:一旦他消失,可怕的事情可能马上就会发生。此处修饰不定代词something,应用形容词。故将terribly改为terrible。
9. 考查连接词。句意:妈妈忙完家务活后,我松了一口气。finish是非持续性动词,应用when引导时间状语从句。故将While改为When。
10. 考查否定词。句意:现在我明白了,做两个孩子的母亲并不像我想象的那么容易。此处否定词修饰的是名词work,应用no。故将not改为no。
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Passage1
1.what→which2.come后加to3.surely→sure4.start→started5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation7.such→so8.去掉on9.yours→your / you10.sooner→soon
【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章作者给他的朋友回信。很高兴听说他的朋友在学功夫,也很期待能和他一起学习中国功夫。1.考查非限制性定语从句。句意:谢谢你的来信,你的信真正让我开心。分析句子,逗号后的从句为非限制性定语从句,修饰先行词your letter,关系词在从句中作主语,指物,that不能引导非限制性定语从句。故将what改为which.
2. 考查固定搭配。句意:我很高兴知道你来中国在我家乡的一所学校学习功夫。分析句子,此处come为不及物动词,后接宾语是需加相应介词。come to 译为“来到”是故定短语。故在come 和China之间加to。
3. 考查形容词。句意:我相信你会玩得很开心的。分析句子,此处be动词am后面需用形容词作表语。故将surely改为sure。
4.考查时态。句意:事实上,我七岁时就开始学功夫了。分析句子,此处动词start讲述的是7岁的时候,动词应该用过去时。故将start改为started。
5.考查连词。句意:但我早就不练习了。分析句子,此处前句提到“我7岁开始学功夫”,后句提到“很久没有练习了”。此处前后应是转折关系。故将for改为but / yet。
6.考查不可数名词。句意:幸运的是,两周后我就要回家过暑假。分析句子,vacation译为“假期”是个不可数名词,后面不可加s表示复数。Summer vacation 译为“暑期”是固定搭配。故将vacations改为vacation。
7.考查副词。句意:然后我就可以抽出时间重新学习它,这样我们就可以每天一起练习。分析句子,此处应表示“以便;所以”。故将such改为so.
8.考查介词。句意:我们就可以每天一起练习。介词on后接的是具体时间。every day 译为“每一天”,前不能用有任何介词修饰。故on多余,应去掉。
9.考查代词。句意:祝你在中国学习功夫好运。分析句子,best luck of you 译为“祝你好运”是固定短语。故将your改为you。/句中的yours为名词性物主代词,不可修饰后面的动名词。故将yours改为your。
10.考查固定短语。句意:希望尽快见到你。See you soon 译为“希望尽快见到你”,是固定短语。此处不需用比较级。故将sooner改为soon。
Passage2
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲了作者的妈妈坚持让全家人吃健康食物,确保每个人身体好。一开始,家人有些排斥。在母亲的坚持下,我充满感激地接受了母亲的好意。第一处:考查固定短语。句意:我的妈妈真的关心我们家庭里每个人的健康。be concerned with关心,该短语是固定短语,所以concerning改成concerned。
第二处:考查名词单复数。句意同上。family当“家庭”讲时,是集合名词,这里表示“我们一个家庭”,所以用单数,families改成family。
第三处:考查固定短语。句意:为了确保我们所有人身体好,她为我们制定了特殊的计划。 make sure确保,该短语是固定短语,所以surely改成sure。
第四处:考查简单句。句意同上。这是一个简单句,前面in order to…作目状语,不用连词and,所以去掉and。
第五处:考查冠词。句意:例如:每天早晨,我的父亲不得不喝一碗鸡蛋汤,然而,我不得不吃一个苹果。泛指“一碗鸡蛋汤”,bowl以辅音音素开头,用不定冠词a,所以the改成a。
第六处:考查时态。根据时间状语every morning,可知这里表示经常或反复发生的事情,用一般现在时,主语为I,谓语动词要用原形。所以had改成have。
第七处:考查主谓一致。句意:我爸爸不喜欢汤,我也不喜欢苹果。表示经常或反复发生的事情,用一般现在时。主语my dad是第三人称单数,谓语动词用单数,所以don’t改成doesn’t。
第八处:考查固定句型。句意:我告诉我妈妈,如果我们被迫吃东西,我们可能会生病。be forced to do sth.被迫做某事,所以forced 后面加to。
第九处:考查代词。句意:但是她坚持让我们吃健康的食物。文中指“我的妈妈”,是女性,所以he改成she。
第十处:考查定语从句。句意:出于对妈妈好意的理解,我满怀感激地吃着妈妈提供的所有食物。这里含有一个定语从句,先行词是all the food,关系词在从句中作主语,指物,可用that或which,先行词被all所修饰,只能使用that,不能使用which,且what不能引导定语从句,所以what改成that。
Passage3
I became in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me almost hit me.
I stopped the ball and kicked it back to the playground. To everyone’s , the ball went into the net. All the football on the playground cheered loudly, that I had a talent for football. From on, I started to play football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
【语篇解读】这是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了由于一次偶然的经历,自己喜欢上了踢足球。从此成了一名优秀球员。
第一处:【解析】考查形容词用法。“interest(使感兴趣;使关注)”的形容词有interesting(使人感兴趣的)常修饰物;与interested(表现出兴趣的)常修饰人。本句的意思为:多亏一个偶然的事件,我对踢足球产生了兴趣。主语是I,故将interesting改为interested。
第二处:【解析】考查定语从句。先行词one afternoon表示时间在定语从句中作状语,所以关系词使用when。故将where改为when。
第三处:【解析】考查冠词。名词football为可数名词,前边需要有限定词。这里football第一次出现,故在football前加a。
第四处:【解析】考查连词。句意:突然一个足球落在我前边并且差点打到我。“足球落下来”与“打到我”两个动作是顺承关系,不是转折关系。故将but改为and。
第五处:【解析】考查副词。“hard(努力地;费力地)”与“hardly(几乎不;几乎没有)”都为副词,但是词义不同。本句意思为:我挡住足球,并使劲地将它踢回操场。故将hardly改为hard。
第六处:【解析】考查固定搭配。“to one’s + 名词”在句中表示结果,“to one’s surprise”意思为“使某人惊讶的是…”。故将surprising改为surprise。
第七处:【解析】考查名词的数。“player(运动员)”为可数名词,所以all(所有的)后需要用player的复数形式。故将player改为players。
第八处:【解析】考查现在分词。本句句意:操场上所有的足球运动员大声欢呼,说我有足球天赋。句中谓语动词为cheered,say在这里作伴随状语。与主语players是主动关系,故将say改为saying。
第九处:【解析】考查固定搭配。句意:从那时开始,我放学后跟同学一起踢足球。且“from now on(从现在开始)”后边句子应该表示从现在开始所发生动作或存在的情况,不能用一般过去时。此处后面是一般过去时,表示“从那时起”是from then on,故将now改为then。
第十处:【解析】考查固定搭配。“踢足球”的英语表达为“play football”,中间不能加冠词或者代词。故将my去掉。
Passage4
Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so . Then, when I was in the grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal decided to be a doctor. were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was at the fact that a sick person could feel much better after seeing a doctor. And the other that I wanted to help people in need.
【语篇解读】这是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了从小到大自己的职业梦想随着求学经历不断改变的过程。
第一处:【解析】考查名词的数。“job(工作;职业)”为可数名词,用different(不同的)修饰时意思为不同种类的工作,应该用名词的复数形式。故将job改为jobs。
第二处:【解析】考查形容词的用法。句中的“looked(看起来…样)”为系动词,系动词后需用形容词作表语。故将coolly改为cool。
第三处:【解析】考查序数词。年级、班级是按数字顺序排列的,所以“在几年级”中的数词需要用序数词。故将five改为fifth。
第四处:【解析】考查副词。句意:在五年级的时候,因为我非常喜欢我的英语老师,所以我想变成一名老师。“so much”在句中一般表达肯定意思,可与that连用表示“如此…以至于”。而“too much”表太多,一般与to搭配,表达否定意思“太…以至于不能…”。本句话表达肯定意思,非常so much 或very much,故将too改为very/so。
第五处:【解析】考查介词。“在高中”需要用介词in或者at,故在high school前加in/at。
第六处:【解析】考查连词。句意:在高中学化学的时候,我重新考虑了自己的目标并决定变成一名医生。 “重新考虑”与“决定变成一名医生”之间是顺承关系,不是选择关系。故将or改为and。
第七处:【解析】考查there be句型。句意:有两个原因可以解释这个决定。句中的they在前边句中找不到指代关系,且后边句子中的one与the other是对这两个原因的解释。故将they改为there。
第八处:【解析】考查形容词用法。“amaze(使惊奇;使惊愕)”形容词形式有amazed(大为惊奇)与amazing(令人大为惊奇的)。本句话中主语为I,句意:病人看完医生就会感觉好很多,对此我感到惊奇,而不是我令别人惊奇。故将amazing改为amazed。
第九处:【解析】考查形容词比较级。句中better为well(健康;身体好)的比较级形式,多音节的形容词或副词构成比较级用more 加形容词或副词,即more不能与berrer连用。故将more去掉。
第十处:【解析】考查一般过去时。本篇文章使用的全是一般过去时,且与最后一句并列的“one was that…”用的也是一般过去时,所以最后一句话时态应为一般过去时。讲述当时做决定时的原因。故将is改为was。Passage5
I’ve had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an cafe but a very special one. I want my cafehave a special theme such as "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy in the historical environment is created for them. If I succeed in one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different . Each of my cafes will have a different theme and unique style.
【详解】
第一处:【解析】考查不定式的用法。不定式做表语,to后用动词原形。故把 opens改为 open。
第二处:【解析】考查动词的时态。短文的主体时态都是现代时。故把 required改为 requires。
第三处:【解析】考查形容词的用法。修饰名词cafe,应用形容词。ordinarily 是副词。故把 ordinarily改为 ordinary。
第四处:【解析】考查动词的固定搭配。want sb to do sth“ 想要某人做某事”。故在have前加to。
第五处:【解析】考查介词的用法。such as和like都是用来举例子,重复了。故把like删除。
第六处:【解析】考查代词的用法。customers是句子的主语,故把 yourselves改为 themselves。
第七处:【解析】考查定语从句。先行词environment 在从句中做主语,指物,关系代词用that/which。故 把what改为that/which。
第八处:【解析】考查动词的固定搭配。succeed in doing something“成功的做了某事”。故把manage 改为managing。
第九处:【解析】考查名词的用法。many different后跟可数名词的复数形式。故把city改为cities。
第十处:【解析】考查冠词的用法。an用在元音音素前,a用在辅音因素前。unique是以辅音音素开头的单词,前用a。故把an改为a。