2023年高考英语写作分类训练：推荐信（含解析）
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推荐信
1．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友David准备来中国度假，发邮件向你询问体验中国"红色文化"旅游的情况．请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1．推荐地点：安徽西部的金寨县；
2．推荐理由：风景秀丽、红色文化资源丰富；
3．体验内容：参观博物馆、了解革命历史等等．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：红色文化The Chinese "Red Culture"
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2．第二节 书面表达
国外某网站举办新一轮网上讨论活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。
内容包括：
1．自我简介
2．写信目的
3．话题：我们应该感恩（thankful）
4．推荐的理由
5．预祝活动成功
注意：词数120左右。
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3．假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Leslie请你为他推荐一部中国经典小说(英文版)。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括:
1. 推荐《西游记》;
2. 被认为是十六世纪明代吴承恩所著;
3. 中国四大名著之一;
4. 讲述玄奘师徒四人去西天取经的经历及磨难。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:《西游记》The Journey to the West;佛经Buddhist sutras
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4．假如你是光明中学学生会主席李华，根据学校安排，你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师Peter推荐一名学生助手。请根据所给提示给Peter写封推荐信。
1.欢迎Peter的到来；
2.推荐田蕊做学生助手；
3.田蕊的基本情况（18岁，高三等）；
4.田蕊的特点与特长（电脑技能；沟通能力；英语水平等）。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾部分已经写好。
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union._______________________________________________________
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Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
5．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Edward 正在学习汉语，希望你推荐一个适合他的学习汉语 的网站。请你根据以下内容，给他回复邮件。
推荐网站：www.
网站内容：
1. 中文情景对话，中国风俗，中国电影，中文歌曲、成语和唐诗等；
2. 有在线老师答疑解惑。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯；
3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Edward,
I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. ______________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假设大庆电视台打算开办“All-around Daqing” 的英文节目，节目编辑助理John就该节目向广大中学生征求意见。假如你是学生李华，请根据以下内容给John写一封信：
1. 该节目应当介绍当地的历史、教育、饮食文化、著名景点；
2. 播出时间应安排在每周六晚上，方便学生看；
3. 希望学生们有机会参与主持该节目。
提示词：主持：host
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I’ve learned that you’re going to set up an English program All-around Daqing for middle school students.___________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．随着习近平主席及其夫人对英国的正式访问，当地的人们对中国产生了浓厚的兴趣。你的英国笔友Peter想让你向他推荐一个能够很好了解中国的途径。请根据下列信息，给Peter写一封推荐信，介绍一个“阅读中国（Reading about China）”的读书活动。
内容要点：
1. 英国115家书店展销43000余册中国图书（英文版）
2. 书籍内容：中国传统文化，旅游，城市，著名人物等
3. 活动时间：为期3周（10月20日开始）
词数：100词左右
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假设你叫李华，你的英国朋友CROWN 写信说他打算学习汉语，让你帮他推荐一本汉语词典，请你根据以下提示给他回信。
1. 推荐《现代汉语学习词典》，商务印书馆出版（定价68元）
2.推荐理由：外观设计精美; 大字号，方便查阅：词例丰富实用，适合初级学习者
3.希望对方满意。
写作要求：1.词数100字。2. 开头已写好，不计入总词数。 3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
参考词汇：商务印书馆 The Commercial Press 《现代汉语学习词典》Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary 词例，词条 entry
Dear Crown,
I’m so glad to learn that you are going to study Chinese
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Yours
Li Hua
9．学校的各个学生社团 (associations) 正在纳新。面对众多的选择，你的朋友王林没了主意，写信向你求助。假如你是李越，你认为可以考虑参加篮球协会(the Basketball Association)或者英语俱乐部(the English Club)。请你用英语给王林写一封100词左右的信，推荐这两个社团，并分别说明推荐理由。
注意：信的开头和结尾已给出（不计入词数）。
Dear Wang Lin,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
10．假如你是李明，是正在美国一所高中学习的交换生。近日你在学校网站上看到学校篮球体育俱乐部要招收一名成员的消息。要求如下：
1. 爱好并擅长篮球；2. 英语流利；3. 有一定的比赛经历。
请根据以上要点给俱乐部负责人Mr. Brown写封信，表达你想加入该俱乐部的愿望。
注意：1. 词数：100词左右
2. 行文连贯，不可逐字翻译。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am learning English painting in our school as an exchange student from China. Recently I read from a notice on our school website that ______________________________________________________________________
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Yours
Li Ming
1．Dear David，
I am glad to hear that you are going to China for a holiday． Knowing you are interested in "Red Culture" tourism in China， I would like to introduce something about it．【高分句型一】（点明主题）
To begin with， Jinzhai County， western Anhui Province is the first recommended location because of its beautiful scenery and rich red cultural resources． This is not only an important source of the Chinese revolution， but also an important source of the people's army． （推荐地点以及推荐理由）During the Chinese "Red Culture" ， you can visit some museums，where you can understand revolutionary history and be encouraged by their devotion to our country．【高分句型二】（体验内容）
Looking forward to your coming and it is certain that you won't regret for the trip．（期盼到来）
Best wishes．
Yours，
LiHua．
【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，外国朋友David准备来中国度假，发邮件询问体验中国"红色文化"旅游的情况。根据提示回复，介绍所推荐的"红色文化"旅游景点安徽金寨县的具体情况。本文要点均已给出，总体难度不大。
【详解】第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一封电子邮件，要求考生给David写邮件，介绍所推荐的"红色文化"旅游景点安徽金寨县的具体情况。文章以一般现在时和第三人称为主。
第2步：组织要点。1.推荐地点：安徽西部的金寨县；2.推荐理由：风景秀丽、红色文化资源丰富；3.体验内容：参观博物馆、了解革命历史等等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为be interested in "Red Culture" tourism 、beautiful scenery、an important source of the Chinese revolution、visit some museums、understand revolutionary history等。写作时注意电子邮件的格式和惯用语。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇和短语结构，如recommend、revolution、devotion to 等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如分词做状语Knowing you are interested in "Red Culture" tourism in China….；定语从句you can visit some museums，where you can understand revolutionary history and be encouraged by their devotion to our country.同时文章还运用了一些串联成分，如to begin with等，这些串联词让各个要点更紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。
2．Hello！I'm Li hua ，a student from Xin hua High school. I often visit your website . I saw your website conducts the new round online discussion activity. I'm writing to strongly recommend the topic of the activity，which I think should be “being thankful”. We should be thankful because we get too much from the society. We should be thankful to our parents ，our friends，our teachers and even people all around us. In addition，if everyone is thankful for everything around us，the world will become more friendly and peaceful. The world will have a brighter future.
OK，I have to stop here now .I hope the activity will be a success！
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，国外某网站举办新一轮网上讨论活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。
内容包括：
1．自我简介
2．写信目的
3．话题：我们应该感恩（thankful）
4．推荐的理由
5．预祝活动成功。
第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为两段。第一段，自我简介；写信目的；话题：我们应该感恩（thankful）；推荐的理由。第二段，预祝活动成功。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: recommend， be thankful to，friendly and peaceful，a success，have a brighter future。
第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句 I'm writing to strongly recommend the topic of the activity，which I think should be “being thankful”. if 引导的条件状语从句 In addition，if everyone is thankful for everything around us，the world will become more friendly and peaceful。
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:First of all , In addition, Finally。
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: which引导的非限制性定语从句 I'm writing to strongly recommend the topic of the activity，which I think should be “being thankful”. if 引导的条件状语从句 In addition，if everyone is thankful for everything around us，the world will become more friendly and peaceful。
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
3．Dear Leslie,
How are you Upon your request, I’m writing to recommend a great Chinese storybook—The Journey to the West.
It’s a Chinese novel published in the 16th century during the Ming dynasty and is thought to have been written by Wu Cheng’en. It’s one of the four great classical novels of Chinese literature. The novel is about the legendary adventures of the Tang dynasty Buddhist monk Xuanzang and his three followers who traveled to the “Western Regions”, that is, Central Asia and India, to obtain Buddhist sutras and returned after much suffering.
You will find the English version on Amazon. com or other websites selling books. I’m sure you’ll be interested in it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邮件。主要向你的朋友推荐一部中国经典小说(英文版)《西游记》。文章已给出了详细的内容，只要把以上的四点内容稍加扩展，再用适当的连词，灵活地运用各种句式连句成文即可。书写时要规范清晰，保持卷面整洁美观。
亮点分析：本文要点完整，结构合理，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。文章以简单句为主，运用了非谓语动词作定语（非谓语published in the 16th century during the Ming dynasty作定语，修饰名词a Chinese novel。句式相对较为灵活。文章中运用了常用句式运用了upon (doing ) sth…(一….就)（ Upon your request, I’m writing to recommend a great Chinese storybook）和常用句式sth. is thought to have done…（大家认为……）文章中还运用一些复句。如定语从句（his three followers who traveled to the “Western Regions”）和名词从句：I’m sure you’ll be interested in it.
4．Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union. It’s great to hear that you are coming to teach in our school next semester. I was asked to write to you to recommend Tian Rui, a Senior 3 student of 18, to be your assistant.
Tian Rui’s performance in the school years is outstanding. She is a diligent girl, who use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. What’s more, she is one of the top ten students in our school, and her spoken English is extremely excellent. I’m sure that she can be helpful in your work and life in China. Therefore, I here recommend her to you with all my heart.
If you have any questions about it, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【详解】这是一封推荐信。根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态。内容包括：一自我介绍，欢迎对方的到来；二推荐田蕊做学生助手，介绍她的基本情况和优势；三如果有问题，对方可以联系；四盼着对方的到来。
亮点句子：
It’s great to hear that you are coming to teach in our school next semester.句子中，it作形式主语，代指动词不定式to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester；that引导宾语从句you are going to teaching in our school next semester.很高兴听说你下学期要来我们学校任教。
She is a diligent girl, who use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others.句子中who引导非限定性定语从句，代指先行词a diligent girl；has a gift for 表示“有做某事的天赋”，communicating with表示“和…交流”。她是一个聪明的女孩，她的电脑技术熟练，天生有良好的沟通能力。
点睛：写作中，要注意抓住提示的信息，并注意进行适当发挥。表达中要注意确定句子的时态和语态，注意句式结构的正确和变化多样，适当运用短语、并列句、复合句、介词短语和副词等，以使文章饱满。
5．Dear Edward,
I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I’d like to recommend www. to you.
I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I’d like to recommend www. to you. It’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.
Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. Through these courses, you will have a good understanding of the Chinese language as well as its culture. Besides, it will help you learn Chinese in interesting and effective ways. Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies. More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. And all this is free of charge.
I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.
Wish you a happy learning time!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，推荐网站：www.网站内容：
1.中文情景对话，中国风俗，中国电影，中国歌曲、成语和唐诗等；2.有老师在线答疑解惑。第二，写作以第三人称为主，一、二人称兼有。第三，时态为一般现在时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段，你给他推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站。推荐网站：www.。第二段，网站内容：1、中文情景对话，中国风俗，中国电影，中国歌曲、成语和唐诗等。2.有老师在线答疑解惑。第三段，表达希望。第四段，良好祝愿。其中第二段为重点段落。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语：recommend ，a variety of，Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs，interesting and effective，sing Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies， free of charge，attractive and helpful.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子:It’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese. there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Firstly, Besides, More importantly.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【亮点说明】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式如:It’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese. there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help. I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. 高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次。整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
6．Dear John,
I’ve learned that you’re going to set up an English program All-around Daqing for middle school students. So I’m writing to make some suggestions.
Firstly, the program should cover the topics like the history and education of Daqing. Secondly, it will be very interesting if the program is to cover the famous scenic spots of Daqing. Thirdly, I think local food []is a must, for food is born out of culture. And I hope the program will be broadcast on Saturday evenings, when we students are free to watch it. Last but not least, I’d suggest that students be given some chances to host the program.
If you could take my suggestions into consideration, I would be more than happy and thankful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】试题分析：假设大庆电视台打算开办“All-around Daqing” 的英文节目，节目编辑助理John就该节目向广大中学生征求意见。假如你是学生李华，请根据以下内容给John写一封信：1. 该节目应当介绍当地的历史、教育、饮食文化、著名景点；2. 播出时间应安排在每周六晚上，方便学生看；3. 希望学生们有机会参与主持该节目。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
【亮点说明】书信格式正确，采用三段式，文章结构严谨，布局合理，层次分明，句中使用高级词汇和高级句式。I’ve learned that you’re going to set up an English program All-around Daqing for middle school students.运用宾语从句；it will be very interesting if the program is to cover the famous scenic spots of Daqing.条件状语从句恰到好处；I think local food []is a must, for food is born out of culture. for在此表示“原因”，引导并列句；I hope the program will be broadcast on Saturday evenings, when we students are free to watch it.一般将来时态的被动语态和when引导的定语从句完美结合；I’d suggest that students be given some chances to host the program.宾语从句里面用虚拟语气；If you could take my suggestions into consideration, I would be more than happy and thankful. if引导的非真实条件句，堪称经典；另外，Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Last but not least,的使用显得文章有章法，为文章增色。
考点：考查书信式话题作文
7．Dear Peter,
Since you are longing to acquire a good knowledge of China, I eagerly recommend to you a campaign named “Reading about China”.
In Britain, with the arrival of Chairman Xi Jinping, 115 book stores exhibit 43000 books about China, involving many subjects. Not only can you read about Chinese traditional culture and historical civilization, but also some big modern cities, places of interest and biographies of famous people are introduced.
The campaign is due to last three weeks from Oct. 20th, during which you are bound to enjoy amazing reading about China. I hope my recommendation will benefit you and help you learn more about China.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；随着习近平主席及其夫人对英国的正式访问，当地的人们对中国产生了浓厚的兴趣。你的英国笔友Peter想让你向他推荐一个能够很好了解中国的途径。请根据下列信息，给Peter写一封推荐信，介绍一个“阅读中国（Reading about China）”的读书活动。内容要点： 1. 英国115家书店展销43000余册中国图书（英文版）；2. 书籍内容：中国传统文化，旅游，城市，著名人物等；3. 活动时间：为期3周（10月20日开始）。人称使用第三人称。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：be longing to do sth.(渴望做某事)，recommend (推荐)，exhibit (展出)，Chinese traditional culture and historical civilization (中国传统文化和历史文明)，places of interest (名胜古迹)，famous people(著名人物)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如原因状语从句Since you are longing to acquire a good knowledge of China, I eagerly recommend to you a campaign named “Reading about China”. Not only…but also…结构及倒装Not only can you read about Chinese traditional culture and historical civilization, but also some big modern cities, places of interest and biographies of famous people are introduced.定语从句The campaign is due to last three weeks from Oct. 20th, during which you are bound to enjoy amazing reading about China.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear Crown,
I’m so glad to learn that you are going to study Chinese. First of all, I will recommend you the Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary, which is published by The Commercial Press. Because it is intended for Chinese learning beginners and it will suit you fine. Its beautiful design in big letters makes it convenient for you to look up the words. More importantly, the entries are abundant and practical. Last but not the least, it is cheap at a price of 68 RMB. I hope the Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary will meet your need and be of great help to you.
Best wishes!
【详解】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于书信写作，根据提示信息和要求来写作。写作时注意以下几点：1. 仔细阅读题目中提供的有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2. 要依据提示信息，按照一定逻辑关系来写。写信件时要注意有条理地表达。3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言整体应该用一般现在时，根据情况有一般将来时。4. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，首先介绍了推荐书籍，然后说明了推荐理由，最后希望对方满意。文章还而且使用了多种句式和结构，比如First of all，More importantly，Last but not the least等插入语，使文章内容更具有层次感，语言流畅。另外，句式多样化，在Because it is intended for Chinese learning beginners and it will suit you fine. Its beautiful design in big letters makes it convenient for you to look up the words.和Iit is cheap at a price of 68 RMB.中用it做形式主语防止整句头重脚轻； First of all, I will recommend you the Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary, which is published by The Commercial Press.是定语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语intended for，look up，meet your need，be of great help等，使文章行文更加流畅。这篇书信条理清晰，感情真挚。
考点：考查书信写作
9．Dear Wang Lin,
I’m very pleased to hear from you. In your letter, you asked me for my advice on how to choose a proper association in your school. Thanks for trusting me and here are my suggestions for you.
I think it will be wise of you to join the Basketball Association since you love playing basketball so much. Not only can it satisfy your interest and give relaxation from heavy school work, it can also promote your friendship with your new companions. Besides, the English club is also a wonderful choice. Apart from improving your English study, the colorful activities will provide you with a platform to develop your communication skills, which are very important for your future success.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. And I believe you can showcase your talents and enrich your school life in various activities.
Yours sincerely,
LiYue
【详解】试题分析：学校的各个学生社团 (associations) 正在纳新。面对众多的选择，你的朋友王林没了主意，写信向你求助。假如你是李越，你认为可以考虑参加篮球协会(the Basketball Association)或者英语俱乐部(the English Club)。请你用英语给王林写一封100词左右的信，推荐这两个社团，并分别说明推荐理由。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
注意：信的开头和结尾已给出（不计入词数）。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信，采用三段式，格式正确，结构严谨，语句通顺，文中使用高级句子。you asked me for my advice on how to choose a proper association in your school.疑问词加动词不定式作宾语；I think it will be wise of you to join the Basketball Association since you love playing basketball so much.宾语从句和原因状语从句完美结合；Not only can it satisfy your interest and give relaxation from heavy school work, it can also promote your friendship with your new companions. Not only---引起的部分倒装；the colorful activities will provide you with a platform to develop your communication skills, which are very important for your future success. 非限制性定语从句用在句中；另外，Besides, Apart from improving，provide you with的运用为文章增色添彩。
考点：考查书信式话题作文
10．Dear Mr. Brown,
I am learning English painting in our school as an exchange student from China. Recently I read from a notice on our school website that the sports club is looking for a basketball player. I believe that I am just the right person you are looking for. First of all, I love basketball and I am very good at playing basketball. Secondly, I have no problem talking with others in English. More importantly, I took part in many basketball games in my school in China. I am sure that I can make our basketball club stronger and more powerful if I became a member of it.
I am eagerly looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】本文是一篇求职信件，主要讲述关于请求进入篮球部而写的一封信。审题，是非常重要的工作，往往作文的好坏在于学生对题目的掌握程度。就本题而言，首先掌握题目的主要内容，想要加入篮球队而写一封请求信；其次就是掌握题目的小要求，如本题中给我们罗列出的—爱好、英语能力、比赛经历这三个要点，也就给我们罗列出了题目的大致思路，要求学生从这几点入手，推荐自己。最后，在词汇的使用和句子的使用，避免错误。这类文章属于开放性的文章，但是，如果题目有小要求，就要根据题目所给要求进行逐点解释，避免偏题，离题。同时在字数上，要适当的控制。
1．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友David准备来中国度假，发邮件向你询问体验中国"红色文化"旅游的情况．请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1．推荐地点：安徽西部的金寨县；
2．推荐理由：风景秀丽、红色文化资源丰富；
3．体验内容：参观博物馆、了解革命历史等等．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：红色文化The Chinese "Red Culture"
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2．第二节 书面表达
国外某网站举办新一轮网上讨论活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。
内容包括：
1．自我简介
2．写信目的
3．话题：我们应该感恩（thankful）
4．推荐的理由
5．预祝活动成功
注意：词数120左右。
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3．假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Leslie请你为他推荐一部中国经典小说(英文版)。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括:
1. 推荐《西游记》;
2. 被认为是十六世纪明代吴承恩所著;
3. 中国四大名著之一;
4. 讲述玄奘师徒四人去西天取经的经历及磨难。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:《西游记》The Journey to the West;佛经Buddhist sutras
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4．假如你是光明中学学生会主席李华，根据学校安排，你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师Peter推荐一名学生助手。请根据所给提示给Peter写封推荐信。
1.欢迎Peter的到来；
2.推荐田蕊做学生助手；
3.田蕊的基本情况（18岁，高三等）；
4.田蕊的特点与特长（电脑技能；沟通能力；英语水平等）。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾部分已经写好。
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union._______________________________________________________
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Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
5．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Edward 正在学习汉语，希望你推荐一个适合他的学习汉语 的网站。请你根据以下内容，给他回复邮件。
推荐网站：www.
网站内容：
1. 中文情景对话，中国风俗，中国电影，中文歌曲、成语和唐诗等；
2. 有在线老师答疑解惑。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯；
3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Edward,
I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. ______________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假设大庆电视台打算开办“All-around Daqing” 的英文节目，节目编辑助理John就该节目向广大中学生征求意见。假如你是学生李华，请根据以下内容给John写一封信：
1. 该节目应当介绍当地的历史、教育、饮食文化、著名景点；
2. 播出时间应安排在每周六晚上，方便学生看；
3. 希望学生们有机会参与主持该节目。
提示词：主持：host
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I’ve learned that you’re going to set up an English program All-around Daqing for middle school students.___________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．随着习近平主席及其夫人对英国的正式访问，当地的人们对中国产生了浓厚的兴趣。你的英国笔友Peter想让你向他推荐一个能够很好了解中国的途径。请根据下列信息，给Peter写一封推荐信，介绍一个“阅读中国（Reading about China）”的读书活动。
内容要点：
1. 英国115家书店展销43000余册中国图书（英文版）
2. 书籍内容：中国传统文化，旅游，城市，著名人物等
3. 活动时间：为期3周（10月20日开始）
词数：100词左右
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假设你叫李华，你的英国朋友CROWN 写信说他打算学习汉语，让你帮他推荐一本汉语词典，请你根据以下提示给他回信。
1. 推荐《现代汉语学习词典》，商务印书馆出版（定价68元）
2.推荐理由：外观设计精美; 大字号，方便查阅：词例丰富实用，适合初级学习者
3.希望对方满意。
写作要求：1.词数100字。2. 开头已写好，不计入总词数。 3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
参考词汇：商务印书馆 The Commercial Press 《现代汉语学习词典》Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary 词例，词条 entry
Dear Crown,
I’m so glad to learn that you are going to study Chinese
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Yours
Li Hua
9．学校的各个学生社团 (associations) 正在纳新。面对众多的选择，你的朋友王林没了主意，写信向你求助。假如你是李越，你认为可以考虑参加篮球协会(the Basketball Association)或者英语俱乐部(the English Club)。请你用英语给王林写一封100词左右的信，推荐这两个社团，并分别说明推荐理由。
注意：信的开头和结尾已给出（不计入词数）。
Dear Wang Lin,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
10．假如你是李明，是正在美国一所高中学习的交换生。近日你在学校网站上看到学校篮球体育俱乐部要招收一名成员的消息。要求如下：
1. 爱好并擅长篮球；2. 英语流利；3. 有一定的比赛经历。
请根据以上要点给俱乐部负责人Mr. Brown写封信，表达你想加入该俱乐部的愿望。
注意：1. 词数：100词左右
2. 行文连贯，不可逐字翻译。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am learning English painting in our school as an exchange student from China. Recently I read from a notice on our school website that ______________________________________________________________________
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Li Ming
1．Dear David，
I am glad to hear that you are going to China for a holiday． Knowing you are interested in "Red Culture" tourism in China， I would like to introduce something about it．【高分句型一】（点明主题）
To begin with， Jinzhai County， western Anhui Province is the first recommended location because of its beautiful scenery and rich red cultural resources． This is not only an important source of the Chinese revolution， but also an important source of the people's army． （推荐地点以及推荐理由）During the Chinese "Red Culture" ， you can visit some museums，where you can understand revolutionary history and be encouraged by their devotion to our country．【高分句型二】（体验内容）
Looking forward to your coming and it is certain that you won't regret for the trip．（期盼到来）
Best wishes．
Yours，
LiHua．
【分析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，外国朋友David准备来中国度假，发邮件询问体验中国"红色文化"旅游的情况。根据提示回复，介绍所推荐的"红色文化"旅游景点安徽金寨县的具体情况。本文要点均已给出，总体难度不大。
【详解】第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一封电子邮件，要求考生给David写邮件，介绍所推荐的"红色文化"旅游景点安徽金寨县的具体情况。文章以一般现在时和第三人称为主。
第2步：组织要点。1.推荐地点：安徽西部的金寨县；2.推荐理由：风景秀丽、红色文化资源丰富；3.体验内容：参观博物馆、了解革命历史等等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为be interested in "Red Culture" tourism 、beautiful scenery、an important source of the Chinese revolution、visit some museums、understand revolutionary history等。写作时注意电子邮件的格式和惯用语。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇和短语结构，如recommend、revolution、devotion to 等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如分词做状语Knowing you are interested in "Red Culture" tourism in China….；定语从句you can visit some museums，where you can understand revolutionary history and be encouraged by their devotion to our country.同时文章还运用了一些串联成分，如to begin with等，这些串联词让各个要点更紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。
2．Hello！I'm Li hua ，a student from Xin hua High school. I often visit your website . I saw your website conducts the new round online discussion activity. I'm writing to strongly recommend the topic of the activity，which I think should be “being thankful”. We should be thankful because we get too much from the society. We should be thankful to our parents ，our friends，our teachers and even people all around us. In addition，if everyone is thankful for everything around us，the world will become more friendly and peaceful. The world will have a brighter future.
OK，I have to stop here now .I hope the activity will be a success！
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，国外某网站举办新一轮网上讨论活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。
内容包括：
1．自我简介
2．写信目的
3．话题：我们应该感恩（thankful）
4．推荐的理由
5．预祝活动成功。
第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为两段。第一段，自我简介；写信目的；话题：我们应该感恩（thankful）；推荐的理由。第二段，预祝活动成功。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: recommend， be thankful to，friendly and peaceful，a success，have a brighter future。
第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句 I'm writing to strongly recommend the topic of the activity，which I think should be “being thankful”. if 引导的条件状语从句 In addition，if everyone is thankful for everything around us，the world will become more friendly and peaceful。
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:First of all , In addition, Finally。
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: which引导的非限制性定语从句 I'm writing to strongly recommend the topic of the activity，which I think should be “being thankful”. if 引导的条件状语从句 In addition，if everyone is thankful for everything around us，the world will become more friendly and peaceful。
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
3．Dear Leslie,
How are you Upon your request, I’m writing to recommend a great Chinese storybook—The Journey to the West.
It’s a Chinese novel published in the 16th century during the Ming dynasty and is thought to have been written by Wu Cheng’en. It’s one of the four great classical novels of Chinese literature. The novel is about the legendary adventures of the Tang dynasty Buddhist monk Xuanzang and his three followers who traveled to the “Western Regions”, that is, Central Asia and India, to obtain Buddhist sutras and returned after much suffering.
You will find the English version on Amazon. com or other websites selling books. I’m sure you’ll be interested in it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邮件。主要向你的朋友推荐一部中国经典小说(英文版)《西游记》。文章已给出了详细的内容，只要把以上的四点内容稍加扩展，再用适当的连词，灵活地运用各种句式连句成文即可。书写时要规范清晰，保持卷面整洁美观。
亮点分析：本文要点完整，结构合理，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。文章以简单句为主，运用了非谓语动词作定语（非谓语published in the 16th century during the Ming dynasty作定语，修饰名词a Chinese novel。句式相对较为灵活。文章中运用了常用句式运用了upon (doing ) sth…(一….就)（ Upon your request, I’m writing to recommend a great Chinese storybook）和常用句式sth. is thought to have done…（大家认为……）文章中还运用一些复句。如定语从句（his three followers who traveled to the “Western Regions”）和名词从句：I’m sure you’ll be interested in it.
4．Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union. It’s great to hear that you are coming to teach in our school next semester. I was asked to write to you to recommend Tian Rui, a Senior 3 student of 18, to be your assistant.
Tian Rui’s performance in the school years is outstanding. She is a diligent girl, who use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. What’s more, she is one of the top ten students in our school, and her spoken English is extremely excellent. I’m sure that she can be helpful in your work and life in China. Therefore, I here recommend her to you with all my heart.
If you have any questions about it, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【详解】这是一封推荐信。根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态。内容包括：一自我介绍，欢迎对方的到来；二推荐田蕊做学生助手，介绍她的基本情况和优势；三如果有问题，对方可以联系；四盼着对方的到来。
亮点句子：
It’s great to hear that you are coming to teach in our school next semester.句子中，it作形式主语，代指动词不定式to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester；that引导宾语从句you are going to teaching in our school next semester.很高兴听说你下学期要来我们学校任教。
She is a diligent girl, who use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others.句子中who引导非限定性定语从句，代指先行词a diligent girl；has a gift for 表示“有做某事的天赋”，communicating with表示“和…交流”。她是一个聪明的女孩，她的电脑技术熟练，天生有良好的沟通能力。
点睛：写作中，要注意抓住提示的信息，并注意进行适当发挥。表达中要注意确定句子的时态和语态，注意句式结构的正确和变化多样，适当运用短语、并列句、复合句、介词短语和副词等，以使文章饱满。
5．Dear Edward,
I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I’d like to recommend www. to you.
I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I’d like to recommend www. to you. It’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.
Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. Through these courses, you will have a good understanding of the Chinese language as well as its culture. Besides, it will help you learn Chinese in interesting and effective ways. Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies. More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. And all this is free of charge.
I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.
Wish you a happy learning time!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，推荐网站：www.网站内容：
1.中文情景对话，中国风俗，中国电影，中国歌曲、成语和唐诗等；2.有老师在线答疑解惑。第二，写作以第三人称为主，一、二人称兼有。第三，时态为一般现在时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段，你给他推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站。推荐网站：www.。第二段，网站内容：1、中文情景对话，中国风俗，中国电影，中国歌曲、成语和唐诗等。2.有老师在线答疑解惑。第三段，表达希望。第四段，良好祝愿。其中第二段为重点段落。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语：recommend ，a variety of，Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs，interesting and effective，sing Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies， free of charge，attractive and helpful.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子:It’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese. there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Firstly, Besides, More importantly.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【亮点说明】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式如:It’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese. there are teachers online to whom you can turn for help. I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. 高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次。整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
6．Dear John,
I’ve learned that you’re going to set up an English program All-around Daqing for middle school students. So I’m writing to make some suggestions.
Firstly, the program should cover the topics like the history and education of Daqing. Secondly, it will be very interesting if the program is to cover the famous scenic spots of Daqing. Thirdly, I think local food []is a must, for food is born out of culture. And I hope the program will be broadcast on Saturday evenings, when we students are free to watch it. Last but not least, I’d suggest that students be given some chances to host the program.
If you could take my suggestions into consideration, I would be more than happy and thankful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】试题分析：假设大庆电视台打算开办“All-around Daqing” 的英文节目，节目编辑助理John就该节目向广大中学生征求意见。假如你是学生李华，请根据以下内容给John写一封信：1. 该节目应当介绍当地的历史、教育、饮食文化、著名景点；2. 播出时间应安排在每周六晚上，方便学生看；3. 希望学生们有机会参与主持该节目。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
【亮点说明】书信格式正确，采用三段式，文章结构严谨，布局合理，层次分明，句中使用高级词汇和高级句式。I’ve learned that you’re going to set up an English program All-around Daqing for middle school students.运用宾语从句；it will be very interesting if the program is to cover the famous scenic spots of Daqing.条件状语从句恰到好处；I think local food []is a must, for food is born out of culture. for在此表示“原因”，引导并列句；I hope the program will be broadcast on Saturday evenings, when we students are free to watch it.一般将来时态的被动语态和when引导的定语从句完美结合；I’d suggest that students be given some chances to host the program.宾语从句里面用虚拟语气；If you could take my suggestions into consideration, I would be more than happy and thankful. if引导的非真实条件句，堪称经典；另外，Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Last but not least,的使用显得文章有章法，为文章增色。
考点：考查书信式话题作文
7．Dear Peter,
Since you are longing to acquire a good knowledge of China, I eagerly recommend to you a campaign named “Reading about China”.
In Britain, with the arrival of Chairman Xi Jinping, 115 book stores exhibit 43000 books about China, involving many subjects. Not only can you read about Chinese traditional culture and historical civilization, but also some big modern cities, places of interest and biographies of famous people are introduced.
The campaign is due to last three weeks from Oct. 20th, during which you are bound to enjoy amazing reading about China. I hope my recommendation will benefit you and help you learn more about China.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；随着习近平主席及其夫人对英国的正式访问，当地的人们对中国产生了浓厚的兴趣。你的英国笔友Peter想让你向他推荐一个能够很好了解中国的途径。请根据下列信息，给Peter写一封推荐信，介绍一个“阅读中国（Reading about China）”的读书活动。内容要点： 1. 英国115家书店展销43000余册中国图书（英文版）；2. 书籍内容：中国传统文化，旅游，城市，著名人物等；3. 活动时间：为期3周（10月20日开始）。人称使用第三人称。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：be longing to do sth.(渴望做某事)，recommend (推荐)，exhibit (展出)，Chinese traditional culture and historical civilization (中国传统文化和历史文明)，places of interest (名胜古迹)，famous people(著名人物)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如原因状语从句Since you are longing to acquire a good knowledge of China, I eagerly recommend to you a campaign named “Reading about China”. Not only…but also…结构及倒装Not only can you read about Chinese traditional culture and historical civilization, but also some big modern cities, places of interest and biographies of famous people are introduced.定语从句The campaign is due to last three weeks from Oct. 20th, during which you are bound to enjoy amazing reading about China.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear Crown,
I’m so glad to learn that you are going to study Chinese. First of all, I will recommend you the Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary, which is published by The Commercial Press. Because it is intended for Chinese learning beginners and it will suit you fine. Its beautiful design in big letters makes it convenient for you to look up the words. More importantly, the entries are abundant and practical. Last but not the least, it is cheap at a price of 68 RMB. I hope the Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary will meet your need and be of great help to you.
Best wishes!
【详解】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于书信写作，根据提示信息和要求来写作。写作时注意以下几点：1. 仔细阅读题目中提供的有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2. 要依据提示信息，按照一定逻辑关系来写。写信件时要注意有条理地表达。3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言整体应该用一般现在时，根据情况有一般将来时。4. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，首先介绍了推荐书籍，然后说明了推荐理由，最后希望对方满意。文章还而且使用了多种句式和结构，比如First of all，More importantly，Last but not the least等插入语，使文章内容更具有层次感，语言流畅。另外，句式多样化，在Because it is intended for Chinese learning beginners and it will suit you fine. Its beautiful design in big letters makes it convenient for you to look up the words.和Iit is cheap at a price of 68 RMB.中用it做形式主语防止整句头重脚轻； First of all, I will recommend you the Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary, which is published by The Commercial Press.是定语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语intended for，look up，meet your need，be of great help等，使文章行文更加流畅。这篇书信条理清晰，感情真挚。
考点：考查书信写作
9．Dear Wang Lin,
I’m very pleased to hear from you. In your letter, you asked me for my advice on how to choose a proper association in your school. Thanks for trusting me and here are my suggestions for you.
I think it will be wise of you to join the Basketball Association since you love playing basketball so much. Not only can it satisfy your interest and give relaxation from heavy school work, it can also promote your friendship with your new companions. Besides, the English club is also a wonderful choice. Apart from improving your English study, the colorful activities will provide you with a platform to develop your communication skills, which are very important for your future success.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. And I believe you can showcase your talents and enrich your school life in various activities.
Yours sincerely,
LiYue
【详解】试题分析：学校的各个学生社团 (associations) 正在纳新。面对众多的选择，你的朋友王林没了主意，写信向你求助。假如你是李越，你认为可以考虑参加篮球协会(the Basketball Association)或者英语俱乐部(the English Club)。请你用英语给王林写一封100词左右的信，推荐这两个社团，并分别说明推荐理由。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
注意：信的开头和结尾已给出（不计入词数）。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信，采用三段式，格式正确，结构严谨，语句通顺，文中使用高级句子。you asked me for my advice on how to choose a proper association in your school.疑问词加动词不定式作宾语；I think it will be wise of you to join the Basketball Association since you love playing basketball so much.宾语从句和原因状语从句完美结合；Not only can it satisfy your interest and give relaxation from heavy school work, it can also promote your friendship with your new companions. Not only---引起的部分倒装；the colorful activities will provide you with a platform to develop your communication skills, which are very important for your future success. 非限制性定语从句用在句中；另外，Besides, Apart from improving，provide you with的运用为文章增色添彩。
考点：考查书信式话题作文
10．Dear Mr. Brown,
I am learning English painting in our school as an exchange student from China. Recently I read from a notice on our school website that the sports club is looking for a basketball player. I believe that I am just the right person you are looking for. First of all, I love basketball and I am very good at playing basketball. Secondly, I have no problem talking with others in English. More importantly, I took part in many basketball games in my school in China. I am sure that I can make our basketball club stronger and more powerful if I became a member of it.
I am eagerly looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】本文是一篇求职信件，主要讲述关于请求进入篮球部而写的一封信。审题，是非常重要的工作，往往作文的好坏在于学生对题目的掌握程度。就本题而言，首先掌握题目的主要内容，想要加入篮球队而写一封请求信；其次就是掌握题目的小要求，如本题中给我们罗列出的—爱好、英语能力、比赛经历这三个要点，也就给我们罗列出了题目的大致思路，要求学生从这几点入手，推荐自己。最后，在词汇的使用和句子的使用，避免错误。这类文章属于开放性的文章，但是，如果题目有小要求，就要根据题目所给要求进行逐点解释，避免偏题，离题。同时在字数上，要适当的控制。