2023年高考英语写作分类训练：应用文（含解析）
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1．假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校正在开展“创建美丽校园”的活动。请你用英语写一封倡议书。要点包括：
1. 创建美丽校园的重要性；
2. 指出校园内的不文明现象；
3. 你的态度。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
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2．假定你是李华，上周你校举办了主题为“Live Lightly &. Give Generously”的活动。请你为校英文报写一篇英语新闻稿，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1.活动的时间、地点;
2.主要活动安排;
3.学生们的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Live Lightly & Give Generously
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3．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter正在一家孔子学院学习汉语和中国文化，得知中国人很重视家风传承。他在给你的电子邮件中提到很想了解你的家风以及家风对你的影响。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：家风：family spirits 强调……重要性：stress the importance of... 对……有持续影响：have a lasting influence on... 优秀品质：good qualities
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4．你校组织以“the future smart life”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下列要点展开畅想写一篇英文演讲稿。
1.家庭方面;
2.学习方面。
注意:1?写作词数应为80左右;
2?请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everybody! It’s an honor to speak here.
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Thank you!
5．假定你是李华，你校英文报刊本期讨论的话题是如何有效利用时间。请以“How to Manage Our Time Wisely”为题，撰写一篇短文投稿。主要内容包括：
1.时间的重要性；
2.如何有效利用时间。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假设你是李华，作为交换生在英国伦敦学习，你从网上看到某乡村小学招聘3名暑期兼职美术教师，你很感兴趣。请你写一封信给组织者Mr. Smith，内容包括：
1. 获知消息；
2. 询问：申请资格、学校情况、是否提供住宿；
3. 表示感谢，期盼回复。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．根据下列提示要点，以“The Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇短文。
提示：
1. 人人都想保持健康。
2. 饮食要健康：多吃水果、蔬菜，因为它们富含纤维素（fiber）和维生素（vitamins）；少吃黄油奶酪、咖啡和巧克力，因为它们含糖和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪使你迅速变胖。
3. 有良好的生活习惯：定期锻炼，充足的睡眠，不要过度劳累，不抽烟等等。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The Ways to Keep Healthy
Everyone hopes to be in good health. But how Here are some ways to keep health.
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8．假定你是李华，你的外籍好友 Jenny 邀请你周末一起去参观博物馆，但你因故不能接受邀请。请你给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.感谢邀请；
2.表达歉意并解释原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数应为80词左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jenny,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9．你班英语课将开展主题为“Cook a meal for my family”的课前演讲，请你介绍一次做饭经历，内容包括：
1. 饭菜名称；
2. 制作过程；
3. 你的感悟。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Cook a meal for my family
Dear fellow classmates,
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10．假定你是李华，你的朋友卡塔尔小王子来信，希望了解中国的春节。请你回信介绍春节。内容包括：
1. 春节的意义；
2. 春节的习俗；
3. 邀请他明年来中国过春节。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Prince Muhammad,
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Yours,
Li Hua
1．Dear fellow students,
I’m writing to call on everyone to take an active part in building a beautiful campus. As we know, we spend most of our time on campus. An attractive campus can make our learning pleasant and as a result improve our grades. However, some students can be seen running on the lawn, picking flowers or kicking young trees on purpose. Some even throw rubbish everywhere. Their deeds have already done great harm to our school environment and it’s time we did something to change the situation. I think everyone is responsible for the beauty of our campus. Let’s take action now!
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生对学校正在开展的“创建美丽校园”活动写一封倡议书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
号召：call on→appeal
建立：build→set up
令人满意的：pleasant→satisfying
因此：as a result→consequently
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：An attractive campus can make our learning pleasant and as a result improve our grades.
拓展句：An attractive campus can make our learning pleasant, which as a result can improve our grades.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we know, we spend most of our time on campus.（由As引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I think everyone is responsible for the beauty of our campus.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）
2．One possible version:
Live Lightly & Give Generously
Our school held a meaningful activity last week, whose theme was “Live Lightly &. Give Generously”. The event took place on Friday on the playground.
The main activities of the event included a charity auction, where students could donate items to sell and have the money donated to a local charity organization, and a sharing session, where students shared their experiences and insights on how to live a simple yet meaningful life.
This experience has taught us that we don’t need a lot to be happy, and giving to others can be the key to fulfillment.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生为校英文报写一篇英语新闻稿，报道学校举办的主题为“Live Lightly &. Give Generously”的活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发生：take place→come about
捐赠：donate→give away
高兴的：happy→delighted
有意义的：meaningful→significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The event took place on Friday on the playground.
拓展句：The event took place on Friday on the playground, which all the students and teachers will take part in.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Our school held a meaningful activity last week, whose theme was “Live Lightly &. Give Generously”.(运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
This experience has taught us that we don’t need a lot to be happy, and giving to others can be the key to fulfillment.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
3．Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know you are learning Chinese language and culture. In your last letter, you said you wanted to know something about my family spirits. Here I’m writing to share something about my family spirits with you.
There are many good qualities that have been passed from generation to generation in my family. My parents always lay emphasis on the importance of honesty, bravery and diligence and they set good examples for me and my brother.
My family spirits have a lasting influence on me. Brought up in a friendly atmosphere, I never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties. Thanks to these good qualities, I have made great achievements in my study and life.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Peter回一封电子邮件，告知他你家家风以及家风对你的影响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad → delighted
强调：lay emphasis on → put stress on
影响：influence → effect
偶遇：meet with → come across
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here I’m writing to share something about my family spirits with you.
拓展句：Here I’m writing to share something about my family spirits with you, which I think can help you learn the traditional Chinese culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There are many good qualities that have been passed from generation to generation in my family. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Brought up in a friendly atmosphere, I never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties. (运用了过去分词短语作状语和even though引导的让步状语从句)
4．Good morning, everybody! It’s an honor to speak here. Today, I’d like to talk about the smart future life, which is all about using technology to make our lives more convenient and secure; our study more engaging and effective.
Imagine a world where your home is fully automated, and you can control everything with just a few taps on your smartphone. Your home, equipped with sensors, will detect your presence and adjust the lights, temperature and music to your preference. So will your security system. Apart from smart homes, education will also benefit from technology as students will have access to interactive learning tools. For example, virtual reality technology will allow you to explore new worlds and concepts, making learning more fun and exciting.
In conclusion, the smart future life will bring countless benefits to society. We must embrace it and prepare ourselves for the challenges and opportunities it’ll bring.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生就“the future smart life”为题，写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
完全地：fully→completely/absolutely
除了：apart from→in addition to/expect for
总之：in conclusion→in brief/in short/in a word
调节：adjust→make an adjustment to
2.句式拓展：
原句：In conclusion, the smart future life will bring countless benefits to society. We must embrace it and prepare ourselves for the challenges and opportunities it’ll bring.
拓展句：In conclusion, the smart future life will bring countless benefits to society, because of which we must embrace it and prepare ourselves for the challenges and opportunities it’ll bring.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Imagine a world where your home is fully automated, and you can control everything with just a few taps on your smartphone. (运用了where引导定语从句。)
【高分句型2】
For example, virtual reality technology will allow you to explore new worlds and concepts, making learning more fun and exciting.(运用了现在分词作状语。)
5．How to Manage Our Time Wisely
Time is the most precious gift for every human being. Therefore, we must manage it wisely. However, time management does not come naturally, and it needs learning and practising.
Firstly, having a schedule is of great importance. Living with a schedule will help us spread out lives in days, months and years. Additionally, spend the time between study and life in a balanced way. Study should go first for us but time for interesting activities like sports will do good to us to keep moving. Finally, being disciplined is the base of the time management, without which all would be in vain.
In short, all of us should make use of our time effectively because every minute counts.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“How to Manage Our Time Wisely”为题，撰写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
需要：need→require/call for
很重要：be of great importance→be very important
此外：additionally→in addition
简而言之：in short→in a word
2.句式拓展
用as引导的原因状语从句合并句子
原句：Time is the most precious gift for every human being. Therefore, we must manage it wisely.
拓展句：As time is the most precious gift for every human being, we must manage it wisely.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Finally, being disciplined is the base of the time management, without which all would be in vain.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】In short, all of us should make use of our time effectively because every minute counts.（运用了because引导原因状语从句）
6．One possible version:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student studying in London. Learning that you want three part-time art teachers, I’m writing to ask for some detailed information.
Firstly, would you like to tell me the requirements for the applicants so that I can know whether I’m qualified for it. Secondly, could you please give me a brief introduction of the school Besides, I’d like to know whether the school can provide accommodation for part-time teachers.
I’d appreciate it if you could provide me with the information. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Mr. Smith写一封信，咨询某乡村小学招聘3名暑期兼职美术教师的具体情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
应聘者：applicant→candidate
此外：besides → what’s more/in addition
感激：appreciate it→be grateful
合格：be qualified for→have the qualification for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, could you please give me a brief introduction of the school
拓展句：Secondly, is it possible that you can give me a brief introduction of the school
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you want three part-time art teachers, I’m writing to ask for some detailed information.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】Firstly, would you like to tell me the requirements for the applicants so that I can know whether I’m qualified for it.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句和whether引导的宾语从句）
7．参考范文
The Ways to Keep Healthy
Everyone hopes to be in good health. But how Here are some ways to keep health.
First, you need a healthy diet. It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins. Don’t eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat, like butter, cheese, coffee and chocolate. Fat and sugar make people put on weight easily.
Second, good living habits are very important. You should do regular exercise to build up your body. Besides, enough rest is necessary for your health. You need 8 hours’ sleep a night and don’t work too hard. Smoking is a bad habit, so never smoke.
In a word, healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生以“The Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇短文，介绍如何保持健康。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：first→ first of all
增加体重：put on weight→ gain weight
此外：besides → what’s more/in addition
重要的：important → significant/essential
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You should do regular exercise to build up your body.
拓展句：If you want to build up your body, you should do regular exercise.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Don’t eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat, like butter, cheese, coffee and chocolate.（运用了which引导的定语从句）
8．Dear Jenny,
Thank you very much for inviting me to visit the museum with you this weekend. It sounds like a great plan and I appreciate your kindness. But unfortunately I won’t be able to join you this time because I have to rehearse an English drama with my classmates. I feel sorry for letting you down and hope you can understand my situation.
However, I’d love to have the opportunity to visit the museum with you another time. Maybe we can arrange another date that suits both of us.
Thank you again for your kind invitation, and I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的道歉信。要求考生给外籍好友 Jenny写封道歉信，表示自己因故不能接受她的邀请——周末一起去参观博物馆。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great→ wonderful
不幸地：unfortunately→ unluckily
使……失望：let down → disappoint
机会：opportunity→ chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：However, I’d love to have the opportunity to visit the museum with you another time.
拓展句：However, I’d love it if I can have the opportunity to visit the museum with you another time.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But unfortunately I won’t be able to join you this time because I have to rehearse an English drama with my classmates.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Maybe we can arrange another date that suits both of us.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
9．范文1
Dear fellow classmates,
Inspired by what we have learned, I cooked Gong Bao Chicken for my family last week and here I’d like to share my recipe/cooking process.
First, with all the ingredients prepared, I heated the oil and added the chilies, stirring them for 30 seconds. Once the flavors were brought out, I dropped the seasoned chicken and cooked it through. Finally some peanuts and carrots were added, which gave the cuisine much nutrition. All my family were full of praise for the cuisine.
It is from this experience that I feel that we are supposed to shoulder responsibility at home, as well as enjoy the pleasure of labor.
That’s all. Thank you!
范文2
Dear fellow classmates,
Inspired by what we have learned, I cooked noodles for my family last week and here I’d like to share my recipe/cooking process.
First, I prepared water. Once the water was boiling, I put noodles in carefully. To add nutrition to the meal, I dropped some beaten egg and green vegetables. With the right amount of salt and oil added, the meal was ready. All my family were full of praise for my noodles.
It is from this experience that I feel that we are supposed to shoulder responsibility at home, as well as enjoy the pleasure of labor.
That’s all. Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。你班英语课将开展主题为“Cook a meal for my family”的课前演讲，请你介绍一次做饭经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
赞美：praise→complement
应该：be supposed to→should
快乐：pleasure→joy
最后：finally→eventually
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, with all the ingredients prepared, I heated the oil and added the chilies, stirring them for 30 seconds.
拓展句：First, after all the ingredients were prepared, I heated the oil and added the chilies, stirring them for 30 seconds.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Inspired by what we have learned, I cooked Gong Bao Chicken for my family last week and here I’d like to share my recipe/cooking process. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] First, with all the ingredients prepared, I heated the oil and added the chilies, stirring them for 30 seconds. (运用了with的复合结构以及现在分词作状语)
10．Dear Prince Muhammad,
I’m very glad to introduce the Spring Festival to you. The Spring Festival is the most important festival for the Chinese people and is when all family members get together, just like Christmas in the West. Many customs such as sweeping the dust, pasting spring festival couplets, setting off fireworks, watching Spring Festival Gala and staying up, accompany the Spring Festival. For children, the best part is receiving lucky money from old generations. Why don’t you come to China and spend the next Spring Festival with us
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友卡塔尔小王子回信介绍春节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
重要的：important→significant
燃放：set off→let off
为什么不做某事呢？：Why don’t you do sth →Why not do sth
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Many customs such as sweeping the dust, pasting spring festival couplets, setting off fireworks, watching Spring Festival Gala and staying up, accompany the Spring Festival.
拓展句：Many customs which include sweeping the dust, pasting spring festival couplets, setting off fireworks, watching Spring Festival Gala and staying up, accompany the Spring Festival.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The Spring Festival is the most important festival for the Chinese people and is when all family members get together, just like Christmas in the West.（运用了when引导的表语从句）
【高分句型2】Why don’t you come to China and spent the next Spring Festival with us （运用了表达建议的固定句型）
1．假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校正在开展“创建美丽校园”的活动。请你用英语写一封倡议书。要点包括：
1. 创建美丽校园的重要性；
2. 指出校园内的不文明现象；
3. 你的态度。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
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2．假定你是李华，上周你校举办了主题为“Live Lightly &. Give Generously”的活动。请你为校英文报写一篇英语新闻稿，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1.活动的时间、地点;
2.主要活动安排;
3.学生们的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Live Lightly & Give Generously
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3．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter正在一家孔子学院学习汉语和中国文化，得知中国人很重视家风传承。他在给你的电子邮件中提到很想了解你的家风以及家风对你的影响。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：家风：family spirits 强调……重要性：stress the importance of... 对……有持续影响：have a lasting influence on... 优秀品质：good qualities
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4．你校组织以“the future smart life”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下列要点展开畅想写一篇英文演讲稿。
1.家庭方面;
2.学习方面。
注意:1?写作词数应为80左右;
2?请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everybody! It’s an honor to speak here.
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Thank you!
5．假定你是李华，你校英文报刊本期讨论的话题是如何有效利用时间。请以“How to Manage Our Time Wisely”为题，撰写一篇短文投稿。主要内容包括：
1.时间的重要性；
2.如何有效利用时间。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假设你是李华，作为交换生在英国伦敦学习，你从网上看到某乡村小学招聘3名暑期兼职美术教师，你很感兴趣。请你写一封信给组织者Mr. Smith，内容包括：
1. 获知消息；
2. 询问：申请资格、学校情况、是否提供住宿；
3. 表示感谢，期盼回复。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．根据下列提示要点，以“The Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇短文。
提示：
1. 人人都想保持健康。
2. 饮食要健康：多吃水果、蔬菜，因为它们富含纤维素（fiber）和维生素（vitamins）；少吃黄油奶酪、咖啡和巧克力，因为它们含糖和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪使你迅速变胖。
3. 有良好的生活习惯：定期锻炼，充足的睡眠，不要过度劳累，不抽烟等等。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The Ways to Keep Healthy
Everyone hopes to be in good health. But how Here are some ways to keep health.
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8．假定你是李华，你的外籍好友 Jenny 邀请你周末一起去参观博物馆，但你因故不能接受邀请。请你给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.感谢邀请；
2.表达歉意并解释原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数应为80词左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jenny,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9．你班英语课将开展主题为“Cook a meal for my family”的课前演讲，请你介绍一次做饭经历，内容包括：
1. 饭菜名称；
2. 制作过程；
3. 你的感悟。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Cook a meal for my family
Dear fellow classmates,
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10．假定你是李华，你的朋友卡塔尔小王子来信，希望了解中国的春节。请你回信介绍春节。内容包括：
1. 春节的意义；
2. 春节的习俗；
3. 邀请他明年来中国过春节。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Prince Muhammad,
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Yours,
Li Hua
1．Dear fellow students,
I’m writing to call on everyone to take an active part in building a beautiful campus. As we know, we spend most of our time on campus. An attractive campus can make our learning pleasant and as a result improve our grades. However, some students can be seen running on the lawn, picking flowers or kicking young trees on purpose. Some even throw rubbish everywhere. Their deeds have already done great harm to our school environment and it’s time we did something to change the situation. I think everyone is responsible for the beauty of our campus. Let’s take action now!
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生对学校正在开展的“创建美丽校园”活动写一封倡议书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
号召：call on→appeal
建立：build→set up
令人满意的：pleasant→satisfying
因此：as a result→consequently
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：An attractive campus can make our learning pleasant and as a result improve our grades.
拓展句：An attractive campus can make our learning pleasant, which as a result can improve our grades.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we know, we spend most of our time on campus.（由As引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I think everyone is responsible for the beauty of our campus.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）
2．One possible version:
Live Lightly & Give Generously
Our school held a meaningful activity last week, whose theme was “Live Lightly &. Give Generously”. The event took place on Friday on the playground.
The main activities of the event included a charity auction, where students could donate items to sell and have the money donated to a local charity organization, and a sharing session, where students shared their experiences and insights on how to live a simple yet meaningful life.
This experience has taught us that we don’t need a lot to be happy, and giving to others can be the key to fulfillment.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生为校英文报写一篇英语新闻稿，报道学校举办的主题为“Live Lightly &. Give Generously”的活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发生：take place→come about
捐赠：donate→give away
高兴的：happy→delighted
有意义的：meaningful→significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The event took place on Friday on the playground.
拓展句：The event took place on Friday on the playground, which all the students and teachers will take part in.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Our school held a meaningful activity last week, whose theme was “Live Lightly &. Give Generously”.(运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
This experience has taught us that we don’t need a lot to be happy, and giving to others can be the key to fulfillment.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
3．Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know you are learning Chinese language and culture. In your last letter, you said you wanted to know something about my family spirits. Here I’m writing to share something about my family spirits with you.
There are many good qualities that have been passed from generation to generation in my family. My parents always lay emphasis on the importance of honesty, bravery and diligence and they set good examples for me and my brother.
My family spirits have a lasting influence on me. Brought up in a friendly atmosphere, I never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties. Thanks to these good qualities, I have made great achievements in my study and life.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Peter回一封电子邮件，告知他你家家风以及家风对你的影响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad → delighted
强调：lay emphasis on → put stress on
影响：influence → effect
偶遇：meet with → come across
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here I’m writing to share something about my family spirits with you.
拓展句：Here I’m writing to share something about my family spirits with you, which I think can help you learn the traditional Chinese culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There are many good qualities that have been passed from generation to generation in my family. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Brought up in a friendly atmosphere, I never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties. (运用了过去分词短语作状语和even though引导的让步状语从句)
4．Good morning, everybody! It’s an honor to speak here. Today, I’d like to talk about the smart future life, which is all about using technology to make our lives more convenient and secure; our study more engaging and effective.
Imagine a world where your home is fully automated, and you can control everything with just a few taps on your smartphone. Your home, equipped with sensors, will detect your presence and adjust the lights, temperature and music to your preference. So will your security system. Apart from smart homes, education will also benefit from technology as students will have access to interactive learning tools. For example, virtual reality technology will allow you to explore new worlds and concepts, making learning more fun and exciting.
In conclusion, the smart future life will bring countless benefits to society. We must embrace it and prepare ourselves for the challenges and opportunities it’ll bring.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生就“the future smart life”为题，写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
完全地：fully→completely/absolutely
除了：apart from→in addition to/expect for
总之：in conclusion→in brief/in short/in a word
调节：adjust→make an adjustment to
2.句式拓展：
原句：In conclusion, the smart future life will bring countless benefits to society. We must embrace it and prepare ourselves for the challenges and opportunities it’ll bring.
拓展句：In conclusion, the smart future life will bring countless benefits to society, because of which we must embrace it and prepare ourselves for the challenges and opportunities it’ll bring.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Imagine a world where your home is fully automated, and you can control everything with just a few taps on your smartphone. (运用了where引导定语从句。)
【高分句型2】
For example, virtual reality technology will allow you to explore new worlds and concepts, making learning more fun and exciting.(运用了现在分词作状语。)
5．How to Manage Our Time Wisely
Time is the most precious gift for every human being. Therefore, we must manage it wisely. However, time management does not come naturally, and it needs learning and practising.
Firstly, having a schedule is of great importance. Living with a schedule will help us spread out lives in days, months and years. Additionally, spend the time between study and life in a balanced way. Study should go first for us but time for interesting activities like sports will do good to us to keep moving. Finally, being disciplined is the base of the time management, without which all would be in vain.
In short, all of us should make use of our time effectively because every minute counts.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“How to Manage Our Time Wisely”为题，撰写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
需要：need→require/call for
很重要：be of great importance→be very important
此外：additionally→in addition
简而言之：in short→in a word
2.句式拓展
用as引导的原因状语从句合并句子
原句：Time is the most precious gift for every human being. Therefore, we must manage it wisely.
拓展句：As time is the most precious gift for every human being, we must manage it wisely.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Finally, being disciplined is the base of the time management, without which all would be in vain.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】In short, all of us should make use of our time effectively because every minute counts.（运用了because引导原因状语从句）
6．One possible version:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student studying in London. Learning that you want three part-time art teachers, I’m writing to ask for some detailed information.
Firstly, would you like to tell me the requirements for the applicants so that I can know whether I’m qualified for it. Secondly, could you please give me a brief introduction of the school Besides, I’d like to know whether the school can provide accommodation for part-time teachers.
I’d appreciate it if you could provide me with the information. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Mr. Smith写一封信，咨询某乡村小学招聘3名暑期兼职美术教师的具体情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
应聘者：applicant→candidate
此外：besides → what’s more/in addition
感激：appreciate it→be grateful
合格：be qualified for→have the qualification for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, could you please give me a brief introduction of the school
拓展句：Secondly, is it possible that you can give me a brief introduction of the school
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you want three part-time art teachers, I’m writing to ask for some detailed information.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】Firstly, would you like to tell me the requirements for the applicants so that I can know whether I’m qualified for it.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句和whether引导的宾语从句）
7．参考范文
The Ways to Keep Healthy
Everyone hopes to be in good health. But how Here are some ways to keep health.
First, you need a healthy diet. It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins. Don’t eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat, like butter, cheese, coffee and chocolate. Fat and sugar make people put on weight easily.
Second, good living habits are very important. You should do regular exercise to build up your body. Besides, enough rest is necessary for your health. You need 8 hours’ sleep a night and don’t work too hard. Smoking is a bad habit, so never smoke.
In a word, healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生以“The Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇短文，介绍如何保持健康。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：first→ first of all
增加体重：put on weight→ gain weight
此外：besides → what’s more/in addition
重要的：important → significant/essential
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You should do regular exercise to build up your body.
拓展句：If you want to build up your body, you should do regular exercise.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Don’t eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat, like butter, cheese, coffee and chocolate.（运用了which引导的定语从句）
8．Dear Jenny,
Thank you very much for inviting me to visit the museum with you this weekend. It sounds like a great plan and I appreciate your kindness. But unfortunately I won’t be able to join you this time because I have to rehearse an English drama with my classmates. I feel sorry for letting you down and hope you can understand my situation.
However, I’d love to have the opportunity to visit the museum with you another time. Maybe we can arrange another date that suits both of us.
Thank you again for your kind invitation, and I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的道歉信。要求考生给外籍好友 Jenny写封道歉信，表示自己因故不能接受她的邀请——周末一起去参观博物馆。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great→ wonderful
不幸地：unfortunately→ unluckily
使……失望：let down → disappoint
机会：opportunity→ chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：However, I’d love to have the opportunity to visit the museum with you another time.
拓展句：However, I’d love it if I can have the opportunity to visit the museum with you another time.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But unfortunately I won’t be able to join you this time because I have to rehearse an English drama with my classmates.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Maybe we can arrange another date that suits both of us.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
9．范文1
Dear fellow classmates,
Inspired by what we have learned, I cooked Gong Bao Chicken for my family last week and here I’d like to share my recipe/cooking process.
First, with all the ingredients prepared, I heated the oil and added the chilies, stirring them for 30 seconds. Once the flavors were brought out, I dropped the seasoned chicken and cooked it through. Finally some peanuts and carrots were added, which gave the cuisine much nutrition. All my family were full of praise for the cuisine.
It is from this experience that I feel that we are supposed to shoulder responsibility at home, as well as enjoy the pleasure of labor.
That’s all. Thank you!
范文2
Dear fellow classmates,
Inspired by what we have learned, I cooked noodles for my family last week and here I’d like to share my recipe/cooking process.
First, I prepared water. Once the water was boiling, I put noodles in carefully. To add nutrition to the meal, I dropped some beaten egg and green vegetables. With the right amount of salt and oil added, the meal was ready. All my family were full of praise for my noodles.
It is from this experience that I feel that we are supposed to shoulder responsibility at home, as well as enjoy the pleasure of labor.
That’s all. Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。你班英语课将开展主题为“Cook a meal for my family”的课前演讲，请你介绍一次做饭经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
赞美：praise→complement
应该：be supposed to→should
快乐：pleasure→joy
最后：finally→eventually
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, with all the ingredients prepared, I heated the oil and added the chilies, stirring them for 30 seconds.
拓展句：First, after all the ingredients were prepared, I heated the oil and added the chilies, stirring them for 30 seconds.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Inspired by what we have learned, I cooked Gong Bao Chicken for my family last week and here I’d like to share my recipe/cooking process. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] First, with all the ingredients prepared, I heated the oil and added the chilies, stirring them for 30 seconds. (运用了with的复合结构以及现在分词作状语)
10．Dear Prince Muhammad,
I’m very glad to introduce the Spring Festival to you. The Spring Festival is the most important festival for the Chinese people and is when all family members get together, just like Christmas in the West. Many customs such as sweeping the dust, pasting spring festival couplets, setting off fireworks, watching Spring Festival Gala and staying up, accompany the Spring Festival. For children, the best part is receiving lucky money from old generations. Why don’t you come to China and spend the next Spring Festival with us
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友卡塔尔小王子回信介绍春节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
重要的：important→significant
燃放：set off→let off
为什么不做某事呢？：Why don’t you do sth →Why not do sth
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Many customs such as sweeping the dust, pasting spring festival couplets, setting off fireworks, watching Spring Festival Gala and staying up, accompany the Spring Festival.
拓展句：Many customs which include sweeping the dust, pasting spring festival couplets, setting off fireworks, watching Spring Festival Gala and staying up, accompany the Spring Festival.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The Spring Festival is the most important festival for the Chinese people and is when all family members get together, just like Christmas in the West.（运用了when引导的表语从句）
【高分句型2】Why don’t you come to China and spent the next Spring Festival with us （运用了表达建议的固定句型）