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Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum
人教新目标版 八年级下
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
1.通过复习词汇和句型,为写作做好基础知识储备。
2.尝试运用一些含有现在完成时的句子描述自己的家乡或祖国的著名景点。
3.通过本单元系统学习,写作应用,让学生对自己的家乡和祖国的名胜古迹有更深入的了解,培养学生的爱国情操。
Warming-up
What should we think about if we want to travel Beijing
Traveling
places to visit
weather
......
Location and size
population
Things to eat
history
Aspects of Traveling
Brainstorm
History: more than 3,000 years
When we talk about the history of Beijing, we can use the sentences:
Beijing has a long history of more than 3,000 years.
Beijing is a place /city with over 3,000 years .
Beijing was established(建立) over 3,000 years ago.
北京市简称“京”，古称燕京、北平，是中华人民共和国首都、直辖市、国家中心城市、超大城市，国务院批复确定的中国政治中心、文化中心、国际交往中心、科技创新中心， 中国历史文化名城和古都之一。
Location and size:(16,410 km2 )
When we talk about the location of Beijing, we can use the sentences:
Beijing lies /is/stands ….
Beijing is located….
When we talk about the size of Beijing, we can use the sentences:
Beijing is _____________ in size.
Beijing has an area of ________________.
北京市地处中国北部、华北平原北部，东与天津市毗连，其余均与河北省相邻。北京市下辖16个区，总面积16410.54平方千米。
21,900,000
Population:
When we talk about the population of Beijing, we can use
the sentences:
The population of Beijing is very large/ big.
There are … people living in the city.
Beijing has a population of ….
2022年末，北京市常住人口2184.3万人。其中，城镇人口1912.8万人，常住外来人口825.1万人。
Weather: freezing cold in winter/ very hot in summer
The best time to Beijing is _______or ________.
It’s neither ________ nor ________.
When we talk about the weather in Beijing, we can use
the sentences:
北京市的气候为暖温带半湿润半干旱季风气候，夏季高温多雨，冬季寒冷干燥，春、秋短促。
Food:
Beijing Duck
noodles with
bean paste(炸酱面)
Lüdagun
(驴打滚)
Bingtanghulu
When we talk about delicious food in Beijing, we can use the sentences:
There are quite a lot of delicious food in the city, such as…
It is the favorite among the locals.(当地人)
The local people prefer salty and fresh, so the food here tastes salty.
places to visit
When we talk about places of interest in Beijing, we can use the sentences:
There are quite a lot of interests, such as…
… is famous for ….
--- is one of the most- visited places in our city.
--- is well worth visiting.
He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.
Make a list of facts about your hometown or a place you have been to. Think about these topics.
3a
Size and location: _______________________________
Population: ____________________________________
Weather: ______________________________________
History: _______________________________________
Places to visit: __________________________________
Things to eat: ___________________________________
n. 地点；位置
Size and location: ________________
Population: _____________________
Weather: _______________________
History: ________________________
Places to visit: ___________________
Things to eat: ___________________
north of China
more than 20 million
not too cold or hot
the capital of China
the Palace Museum
Beijing Duck
Beijing
Write an article to advertise your hometown or a place you have been to.
3b
Have you ever tried/seen/been ...
If you ..., you will/can …
You should …
One great thing about ... is ....
What does “advertise” mean
体裁：说明文
时态：以一般现在时为主
人称：第二人称和第三人称
介绍一个地方时，通常是从概况(包括位置、面积、历史、人口和天气)、景点和美食这几个方面介绍，这是通过语义相关联的方式来实现全文连贯。要注意语气委婉，内容合理，行文流畅、完整。
Writing Instructions
Outline.
Beijing- A Place You Will Never Forget!
History
Part 1 is about an introduction
to Beijing.
size
location
population
Part 2 is about food/specials.
Part 3 is about places of interest.
Part 4 is about weather.
Draft
Have you ever been to…
History
Beijing- A Place You Will Never Forget!
Beijing has a long history of more than 3,000 years.
Beijing is a place /city with over 3,000 years .
Beijing was established(建立) over 3,000 years ago.
Location and size(16,410 km2 )
Beijing lies /is/stands ….
Beijing is located….
Population: 21,900,000
Beijing is _____________ in size.
Beijing has an area of ________________.
There are … people living in the city.
Beijing has a population of ….
Draft
Beijing- A Place You Will Never Forget!
Part 2 is about food/specials.
Have you ever tried…
There are quite a lot of delicious food in the city, such as…
It is the favorite among the locals.(当地人)
The local people prefer salty and fresh, so the food here
tastes salty.
Beijing Duck
noodles with
bean paste(炸酱面)
Lüdagun
(驴打滚)
Bingtanghulu
Draft
Beijing- A Place You Will Never Forget!
Part 3 is about places of interest.
There are quite a lot of interests, such as…
… is famous for ….
--- is one of the most- visited places in the city.
--- is well worth visiting.
If you …, you will/ can…
Draft
Beijing- A Place You Will Never Forget!
Part 4 is about weather.
One great thing about Beijing is that the temperature is ….
The best time to Beijing is _______or ________.
It’s neither ________ nor ________.
Write.
Beijing- A Place You Will Never Forget!
Have you ever been to Beijing
the capital of China
Beijing (3,000 years)
in the north of China
16,410 km2
21,900,000
There are quite a lot of delicious
food in the city, such as…
It is the favorite among the locals.
Have you tried Beijing food
There are quite a lot of
interests, such as…
--- is one of the most- visited
places in the city.
If you…, you will/ can…
--- is well worth visiting.
One great thing about Beijing
is that the temperature is ….
The best time to Beijing is _______
or ________.It’s neither ________
nor ________.
作文讲评
①篇章方面：布局是否完整？逻辑是否合理？要点是否
齐全/丰富？
②句子方面：主谓是否一致？时态、语态是否正确？连
词使用是否正确？句式是否多样？是否用
到好词、好句？
③词语方面：代词的主格、宾格等形式使用是否正确？
名词单复数是否准确？动词搭配、动词的
形式等是否正确？形容词、副词的使用是
否达意，与修饰的对象是否相符？
④细节方面：单词拼写、标点符号、大小写等是否正确？
I’ve been to Sydney. It is a good place to take a holiday.
Sydney is on the east coast of Australia. It’s about 12,367.7 km2 in size. It is a young country with over 200 years’ history and a population of about five million. Sydney has four seasons. Its coldest month is usually July. Its warmest month is usually January so it’s the best time to visit it.
Sample writing:
There’re many interesting places to visit such as the Sydney Opera House and Bondi Beach. Sydney is also a good place to eat delicious food. There, you can find food from around the world. And you can try lots of good seafood.
If you like traveling, you should go there. You can try new foods and have lots of fun.
1
Think about the things below and write an answer for each one.
1. One thing that you have collected before:
_____________________________________________
2. One invention that you have found to be very useful:
______________________________________________
Toys.
The cellphone.
What have you collected before？
What invention have you found to be very useful？
3. One unbelievable or unusual thing that you’ve seen or heard recently:
____________________________________________
4. One way that you’ve used to encourage a friend in the past:
_____________________________________________
5. One peaceful and quiet place that you’ve been to recently:
_____________________________________________
Having conversations.
A library.
Artificial Intelligence（AI）.
What unbelievable or unusual thing have you seen or heard recently
What way have you used to encourage a friend in the past
What peaceful and quiet place have you been to recently
Complete the conversation.
A：Hey, John. ________ are you doing this weekend
B：Not much, Mark. I don’t really have any plans yet.
A：________ you ever been to the space museum？
B：________, I have. I ________ there last month.
A：Oh, how ________ it
B：It was great. I ________ been there many times.
What
Have
Yes
was
have
went
2
A：I see. I ________ never ________ there.
B：Well, let’s go this weekend then. I don’t ________ going
again. I think there’s something new there. I ________
not see it last time.
A：Perfect!
have
mind
been
did
3
Complete the chart.
Have you ever been to a/an… How many times What did you see/do there
home for old people
farm
amusement park
家乡在每个人的心中都是美好的, 请以My hometown为题, 写一篇80个词左右的文章描写和颂扬家乡美。
内容包括：
1. 家乡的基本情况（如地理位置, 美食, 天气等）；
2. 介绍家乡一处有趣的名胜；
3. 抒发你对家乡的感情，邀请大家到你家乡做客。
要求：结构紧凑，句子连贯，内容包含所提供的信息，可适当发挥。
Homework
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