福建高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信（含答案）
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感谢信/祝贺信
1．假定你是李华，英国网友David来信分享他在学校乒乓球比赛中夺得金牌的喜讯，请你给他写封回信。内容包括：
1. 表达祝贺；2. 邀请他来中国参加乒乓球冬令营。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，你有一位准备来华留学的美国网友Harry，刚刚通过汉语水平考试七级。请写信向他表示祝贺。内容要点包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 赞扬Harry的刻苦精神；
3. 欢迎和期待。
注意：
1. 词数应为80左右；
2. 参考词汇：水平考试七级 HSK 7 test
Dear Harry,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，你收到了英国朋友Mike寄来的英文诗歌选集。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示感谢;
2.回赠礼物;
3.你的祝愿。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假定你是李华，刚从新西兰的Williams College游学归来。请你代表中国交换生给该校校长Mr. Declan写封信。内容包括：
1.感谢接待；
2.谈谈收获；
3.邀请来访。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．假如你是李华。在你们学校任教一年的新西兰外教Mr. Smith即将结束教学任务启程回国。作为班长，你代表同学们在班级的欢送会上致欢送辞，并赠送礼物冰墩墩(Bing Dwen Dwen)，内容包括：
1. 感谢Mr. Smith的付出；
2. 选择礼物的理由；
3. 对他的美好祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假定你是李华，读完外教Mr. Brown推荐的一些英文小说后，你的收获很大。请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.你的收获；
3.希望得到进一步指导。
注意：1.词数 80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．假定你是李华，上周日你不慎在阅览室丢失了一个书包，里面有一些重要物品。你校外教 Mr. Smith 捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的； 2. 描述事情的经过； 3. 再次表达感谢。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．假定你是李华，你校美国籍外教Miss Allen上周末邀请你到她的住处参加了一次聚会活动。请你给她写封邮件致谢。邮件内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.赞赏主人（聚会活动，厨艺等）；
3.询问：寒假是否回国，以便春节期间邀请她到你家做客。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Miss Allen,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，你校英语报要征集一封感谢信，以致敬奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒第一线的医务人员。请你根据以下要点写一封信。
1. 表达谢意；
2.个人感受；
3.表达信心。
参考词汇：冠状病毒 the COVID-19 一线 front line
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear medical workers,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华。你在生日之际收到了已经回国的交换生James寄来的生日礼物。请你写一封邮件。内容包括：
1.表示感谢；2.回顾过去；3.希望相见。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答；
3,邮件开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear James,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
1．Dear David,
Knowing that you won the gold medal in the table tennis match in your school, I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations.
In order to win the glory for your team, you practiced hard to prepare for the competition. Now, all your efforts and devotion paid off when you came first. I am really proud of you. There will be a table tennis winter camp in the coming holiday in my city. I would be glad if you could come to join me in the camp.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国网友David写封信，对他赢得了学校乒乓球比赛的金牌表达祝贺，并邀请他来中国参加乒乓球冬令营。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表示祝贺：offer congratulations→show congratulations
比赛：competition→contest
高兴的：glad→delighted
为……感到骄傲：be proud of→take pride in
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：In order to win the glory for your team, you practiced hard to prepare for the competition.
拓展句：With the aim of winning the glory for your team, you practiced hard to prepare for the competition.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you won the gold medal in the table tennis match in your school, I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations. (运用了现在分词作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I would be glad if you could come to join me in the camp. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
2．One possible version
Dear Harry,
I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your passing the HSK 7 test before coming to China. I feel incredibly proud of your remarkable academic achievements.
From my perspective, you are one of the most diligent students I’ve ever known. The past years have witnessed your devotion, persistent efforts and eventually your rapid progress in Chinese learning. Therefore,I firmly believe this fulfillment is a reward that you richly deserve.
I am sure that the certificate you have won is the first of many honors that you will attain in the years to come. I will be looking forward to your arrival soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国网友Harry写封信，对他通过汉语水平考试七级表示祝贺，赞扬他的刻苦精神，欢迎他来中国留学。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：offer→provide
勤奋的：diligent→industrious
因此：therefore→hence
肯定的：sure→certain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your passing the HSK 7 test before coming to China.
拓展句：I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your passing the HSK 7 test before you come to China.
【点睛】[高分句型1] From my perspective, you are one of the most diligent students I’ve ever known. (运用了that/who引导的限制性定语从句，省略了关系代词that/who)
[高分句型2] I am sure that the certificate you have won is the first of many honors that you will attain in the years to come.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
3．Dear Mike,
I’ m glad to receive the book A Collection of English Poems. Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.
I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, especially Beijing opera, and therefore I will send a Beijing opera facial makeup to you. Different types of facial makeup are based on certain personality, temperament or some special types of figures for the use of certain colors. I hope you will like the facial makeup.
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇作文属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Mike一封邮件，感谢他寄来的英文诗歌选集。其信件内容包括表示感谢、回赠礼物以及你的祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴：glad→ delighted
不同的：different→various
喜欢： like→be fond of
亲自地：in person→personally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m glad to receive the book A Collection of English Poems.
拓展句： I’m glad that I have received the book A Collection of English Poems.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.（运用了as引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope you will like the facial makeup.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
4．Dear Mr. Declan,
I’m writing on behalf of all the exchange students to express our gratitude for your hospitality and generosity during our stay in New Zealand.
What impressed us deeply were the delicious local cuisine and the comfortable accommodation well prepared for us. Also, the activities you arranged not only got every one of us involved in learning, but built a cultural bridge between us, for which we were really grateful.
Thanks again for all your efforts and we sincerely hope you can come to China and visit us in the near future!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达为应用文。要求学生代表中国交换生给新西兰的Williams College的校长写一封信，感谢他的接待，谈谈自己的收获并邀请他来访。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
代表：on behalf of→represent
表达：express→convey
美味的：delicious →tasty
感激：gratitude→appreciation/thankfulness
2.句式拓展：
原句：I’m writing on behalf of all the exchange students to express our gratitude for your hospitality and generosity during our stay in New Zealand.
拓展句：Representing all the exchange student, I’m writing to express our gratitude for your hospitality and generosity during our stay in New Zealand.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
What impressed us deeply were the delicious local cuisine and the comfortable accommodation well prepared for us.（运用了what引导主语从句。）
【高分句型2】
Also, the activities you arranged not only got every one of us involved in learning, but built a cultural bridge between us, for which we were really grateful.（运用了介词+which引导非限制性定语从句。）
5．Dear Mr. Smith,
On behalf of our classmates, I’m here to convey our heartfelt thanks to you.
Looking back on the past year, we’ll never forget the help you offered us. It was under your professional guidance that we have made such rapid progress in English. To express our sincere gratitude to you, we have carefully chosen a present for you — Bing Dwen Dwen, the mascot of the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics. It stands for joy, strength and willpower and that’s also our sincere wish to you.
Wish you a pleasant journey home and enjoy your life back in New Zealand!
(98 words)
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给写一封感谢信，感谢即将回国的外教。
【详解】1.词汇积累
传达：show→convey
快的：quick→rapid
代表：represent→stand for
快乐的：happy→pleasant
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：It stands for joy, strength and willpower and that’s also our sincere wish to you.
拓展句：It stands for joy, strength and willpower, which is also our sincere wish to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Looking back on the past year, we’ll never forget the help you offered us.(非谓语动词作状语)
[高分句型2]It was under your professional guidance that we have made such rapid progress in English.(强调句)
6．Dear Mr. Brown,
I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to you for recommending me some English novels.
The recommended novels, whose languages are beautiful and plain to read, have brought me many unexpected benefits. Having finished reading them, I have built a larger vocabulary, which, in turn, has improved my writing skills. Besides, these English novels open me up to new experiences and perspectives, offering me new information about cultures and societies that I never knew before.
Please accept my thanks once again. I really hope you can provide me with some more guidance on reading English novels.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，感谢他给你推荐的一些英文小说，使你获得很大收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①推荐：recommend→ commend
②好处：benefits → advantages
③提供：offer → provide
④感谢：thanks→ gratitude
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to you for recommending me some English novels.
拓展句：I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to you because you recommended me some English novels.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The recommended novels, whose languages are beautiful and plain to read, have brought me many unexpected benefits.(运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Having finished reading them, I have built a larger vocabulary, which, in turn, has improved my writing skills. (运用了现在分词的完成时态，which引导非限制性定语从句)
7．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 2. I’m writing to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag in the reading-room owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
Please accept my cordial thanks for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写一封信，感谢他把你丢失在阅览室的书包上交给学校。
【详解】1.词汇积累
归还：give...back→return
由于：due to→owing to
通知，告知：tell→inform
诚恳的：sincere→cordial
2.句型拓展
变强调句
原句：Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag in the reading-room owing to my carelessness.
拓展句：Last Sunday, it was owing to my carelessness that I left my schoolbag in the reading-room.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I was worried because my student ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag.（运用了强调句，as引导的时间状语从句和that引导的宾语从句）
8．Dear Miss Allen,
I’m writing to thank you for the party you held in your flat last week.
All your guests agreed that the activities were well-arranged and interesting. It was very considerate of you to prepare such a nice dinner from which I learned more about western food culture. Especially, the chocolate cake you made was so inviting that I loved it very much.
By the way, are you going back to the USA for the winter break If not, you and your friends are welcome to my home to experience the upcoming Chinese Spring Festival.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教写封邮件致谢，感谢外教的款待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢你：thank you→express/convey/extend my thanks to you
一致认为：agree→acknowledge
更了解：learn more about→have a better idea of
诱人的：inviting→appealing/tempting
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All your guests agreed that the activities were well-arranged and interesting.
拓展句：That the activities were well-arranged and interesting was what all your guests agreed.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was very considerate of you to prepare such a nice dinner from which I learned more about western food culture. (运用了介词+which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Especially, the chocolate cake you made was so inviting that I loved it very much. (运用了so…that引导的结果状语从句)
9．Dear medical workers,
On behalf of my school, I'd like to express my sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and really sacrifice in the battle against the COVID-19.
Since the outbreak, you have worked on the front line for several months, desperately rescuing people from all walks of life, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection. But for your devoted care and selfless contribution, the situation wouldn't have been controlled in such a short time. It is you who build up our confidence and undoubtedly deserve our admiration.
Words fail to express our thanks for your irreplaceable dedication and I hold the firm belief that with our joint efforts China will make a quick recovery.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给勇敢对抗疫情的医护工作者写一封感谢信，对他们的辛勤付出表达感激之情，并发表个人对疫情防控的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：appreciation→gratitude
增强：strengthen→build up
缺乏：lack→shortage
共同的：common→joint
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：But for your devoted care and selfless contribution, the situation wouldn't have been controlled in such a short time.
拓展句：But for your devoted care and selfless contribution, the situation wouldn't have been controlled in such a short time, which paves the way for our normal routine and quick economic recovery.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is you who build up our confidence and undoubtedly deserve our admiration. (运用了强调句)
[高分句型2] But for your devoted care and selfless contribution, the situation wouldn't have been controlled in such a short time. (运用了虚拟语气)
10．Dear James,
How are you doing Thank you for the birthday gift you bought for me. I like it very much. Actually, the moment I opened the package, it made me smile. How considerate you are!
To be honest, it made me think of the time we spent together. During the past two years, we have had so many happy memories. We played together and studied together. And with your help, my oral English was greatly improved. I really hope to see you again.
Thanks again and looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生James写一封邮件，表达对他寄来生日礼物的感谢以及回顾过去和希望相见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
实际上：in fact→actually
打开：disclose→open
体贴的：thoughtful→considerate
在某人的帮助下：with the help of sb.→with one’s help
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Thank you for the birthday gift you bought for me. I like it very much.
拓展句：Thank you for the birthday gift you bought for me, which I like very much.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thank you for the birthday gift you bought for me. (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Actually, the moment I opened the package, it made me smile. (运用了the moment引导时间状语从句)
1．假定你是李华，英国网友David来信分享他在学校乒乓球比赛中夺得金牌的喜讯，请你给他写封回信。内容包括：
1. 表达祝贺；2. 邀请他来中国参加乒乓球冬令营。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，你有一位准备来华留学的美国网友Harry，刚刚通过汉语水平考试七级。请写信向他表示祝贺。内容要点包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 赞扬Harry的刻苦精神；
3. 欢迎和期待。
注意：
1. 词数应为80左右；
2. 参考词汇：水平考试七级 HSK 7 test
Dear Harry,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，你收到了英国朋友Mike寄来的英文诗歌选集。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示感谢;
2.回赠礼物;
3.你的祝愿。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假定你是李华，刚从新西兰的Williams College游学归来。请你代表中国交换生给该校校长Mr. Declan写封信。内容包括：
1.感谢接待；
2.谈谈收获；
3.邀请来访。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．假如你是李华。在你们学校任教一年的新西兰外教Mr. Smith即将结束教学任务启程回国。作为班长，你代表同学们在班级的欢送会上致欢送辞，并赠送礼物冰墩墩(Bing Dwen Dwen)，内容包括：
1. 感谢Mr. Smith的付出；
2. 选择礼物的理由；
3. 对他的美好祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假定你是李华，读完外教Mr. Brown推荐的一些英文小说后，你的收获很大。请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.你的收获；
3.希望得到进一步指导。
注意：1.词数 80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．假定你是李华，上周日你不慎在阅览室丢失了一个书包，里面有一些重要物品。你校外教 Mr. Smith 捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的； 2. 描述事情的经过； 3. 再次表达感谢。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．假定你是李华，你校美国籍外教Miss Allen上周末邀请你到她的住处参加了一次聚会活动。请你给她写封邮件致谢。邮件内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.赞赏主人（聚会活动，厨艺等）；
3.询问：寒假是否回国，以便春节期间邀请她到你家做客。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Miss Allen,
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Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，你校英语报要征集一封感谢信，以致敬奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒第一线的医务人员。请你根据以下要点写一封信。
1. 表达谢意；
2.个人感受；
3.表达信心。
参考词汇：冠状病毒 the COVID-19 一线 front line
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear medical workers,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华。你在生日之际收到了已经回国的交换生James寄来的生日礼物。请你写一封邮件。内容包括：
1.表示感谢；2.回顾过去；3.希望相见。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答；
3,邮件开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hua
1．Dear David,
Knowing that you won the gold medal in the table tennis match in your school, I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations.
In order to win the glory for your team, you practiced hard to prepare for the competition. Now, all your efforts and devotion paid off when you came first. I am really proud of you. There will be a table tennis winter camp in the coming holiday in my city. I would be glad if you could come to join me in the camp.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国网友David写封信，对他赢得了学校乒乓球比赛的金牌表达祝贺，并邀请他来中国参加乒乓球冬令营。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表示祝贺：offer congratulations→show congratulations
比赛：competition→contest
高兴的：glad→delighted
为……感到骄傲：be proud of→take pride in
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：In order to win the glory for your team, you practiced hard to prepare for the competition.
拓展句：With the aim of winning the glory for your team, you practiced hard to prepare for the competition.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you won the gold medal in the table tennis match in your school, I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations. (运用了现在分词作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I would be glad if you could come to join me in the camp. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
2．One possible version
Dear Harry,
I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your passing the HSK 7 test before coming to China. I feel incredibly proud of your remarkable academic achievements.
From my perspective, you are one of the most diligent students I’ve ever known. The past years have witnessed your devotion, persistent efforts and eventually your rapid progress in Chinese learning. Therefore,I firmly believe this fulfillment is a reward that you richly deserve.
I am sure that the certificate you have won is the first of many honors that you will attain in the years to come. I will be looking forward to your arrival soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国网友Harry写封信，对他通过汉语水平考试七级表示祝贺，赞扬他的刻苦精神，欢迎他来中国留学。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：offer→provide
勤奋的：diligent→industrious
因此：therefore→hence
肯定的：sure→certain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your passing the HSK 7 test before coming to China.
拓展句：I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your passing the HSK 7 test before you come to China.
【点睛】[高分句型1] From my perspective, you are one of the most diligent students I’ve ever known. (运用了that/who引导的限制性定语从句，省略了关系代词that/who)
[高分句型2] I am sure that the certificate you have won is the first of many honors that you will attain in the years to come.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
3．Dear Mike,
I’ m glad to receive the book A Collection of English Poems. Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.
I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, especially Beijing opera, and therefore I will send a Beijing opera facial makeup to you. Different types of facial makeup are based on certain personality, temperament or some special types of figures for the use of certain colors. I hope you will like the facial makeup.
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇作文属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Mike一封邮件，感谢他寄来的英文诗歌选集。其信件内容包括表示感谢、回赠礼物以及你的祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴：glad→ delighted
不同的：different→various
喜欢： like→be fond of
亲自地：in person→personally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m glad to receive the book A Collection of English Poems.
拓展句： I’m glad that I have received the book A Collection of English Poems.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.（运用了as引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope you will like the facial makeup.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
4．Dear Mr. Declan,
I’m writing on behalf of all the exchange students to express our gratitude for your hospitality and generosity during our stay in New Zealand.
What impressed us deeply were the delicious local cuisine and the comfortable accommodation well prepared for us. Also, the activities you arranged not only got every one of us involved in learning, but built a cultural bridge between us, for which we were really grateful.
Thanks again for all your efforts and we sincerely hope you can come to China and visit us in the near future!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达为应用文。要求学生代表中国交换生给新西兰的Williams College的校长写一封信，感谢他的接待，谈谈自己的收获并邀请他来访。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
代表：on behalf of→represent
表达：express→convey
美味的：delicious →tasty
感激：gratitude→appreciation/thankfulness
2.句式拓展：
原句：I’m writing on behalf of all the exchange students to express our gratitude for your hospitality and generosity during our stay in New Zealand.
拓展句：Representing all the exchange student, I’m writing to express our gratitude for your hospitality and generosity during our stay in New Zealand.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
What impressed us deeply were the delicious local cuisine and the comfortable accommodation well prepared for us.（运用了what引导主语从句。）
【高分句型2】
Also, the activities you arranged not only got every one of us involved in learning, but built a cultural bridge between us, for which we were really grateful.（运用了介词+which引导非限制性定语从句。）
5．Dear Mr. Smith,
On behalf of our classmates, I’m here to convey our heartfelt thanks to you.
Looking back on the past year, we’ll never forget the help you offered us. It was under your professional guidance that we have made such rapid progress in English. To express our sincere gratitude to you, we have carefully chosen a present for you — Bing Dwen Dwen, the mascot of the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics. It stands for joy, strength and willpower and that’s also our sincere wish to you.
Wish you a pleasant journey home and enjoy your life back in New Zealand!
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【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给写一封感谢信，感谢即将回国的外教。
【详解】1.词汇积累
传达：show→convey
快的：quick→rapid
代表：represent→stand for
快乐的：happy→pleasant
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：It stands for joy, strength and willpower and that’s also our sincere wish to you.
拓展句：It stands for joy, strength and willpower, which is also our sincere wish to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Looking back on the past year, we’ll never forget the help you offered us.(非谓语动词作状语)
[高分句型2]It was under your professional guidance that we have made such rapid progress in English.(强调句)
6．Dear Mr. Brown,
I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to you for recommending me some English novels.
The recommended novels, whose languages are beautiful and plain to read, have brought me many unexpected benefits. Having finished reading them, I have built a larger vocabulary, which, in turn, has improved my writing skills. Besides, these English novels open me up to new experiences and perspectives, offering me new information about cultures and societies that I never knew before.
Please accept my thanks once again. I really hope you can provide me with some more guidance on reading English novels.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，感谢他给你推荐的一些英文小说，使你获得很大收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①推荐：recommend→ commend
②好处：benefits → advantages
③提供：offer → provide
④感谢：thanks→ gratitude
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to you for recommending me some English novels.
拓展句：I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to you because you recommended me some English novels.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The recommended novels, whose languages are beautiful and plain to read, have brought me many unexpected benefits.(运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Having finished reading them, I have built a larger vocabulary, which, in turn, has improved my writing skills. (运用了现在分词的完成时态，which引导非限制性定语从句)
7．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 2. I’m writing to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag in the reading-room owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
Please accept my cordial thanks for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写一封信，感谢他把你丢失在阅览室的书包上交给学校。
【详解】1.词汇积累
归还：give...back→return
由于：due to→owing to
通知，告知：tell→inform
诚恳的：sincere→cordial
2.句型拓展
变强调句
原句：Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag in the reading-room owing to my carelessness.
拓展句：Last Sunday, it was owing to my carelessness that I left my schoolbag in the reading-room.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I was worried because my student ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag.（运用了强调句，as引导的时间状语从句和that引导的宾语从句）
8．Dear Miss Allen,
I’m writing to thank you for the party you held in your flat last week.
All your guests agreed that the activities were well-arranged and interesting. It was very considerate of you to prepare such a nice dinner from which I learned more about western food culture. Especially, the chocolate cake you made was so inviting that I loved it very much.
By the way, are you going back to the USA for the winter break If not, you and your friends are welcome to my home to experience the upcoming Chinese Spring Festival.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教写封邮件致谢，感谢外教的款待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢你：thank you→express/convey/extend my thanks to you
一致认为：agree→acknowledge
更了解：learn more about→have a better idea of
诱人的：inviting→appealing/tempting
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All your guests agreed that the activities were well-arranged and interesting.
拓展句：That the activities were well-arranged and interesting was what all your guests agreed.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was very considerate of you to prepare such a nice dinner from which I learned more about western food culture. (运用了介词+which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Especially, the chocolate cake you made was so inviting that I loved it very much. (运用了so…that引导的结果状语从句)
9．Dear medical workers,
On behalf of my school, I'd like to express my sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and really sacrifice in the battle against the COVID-19.
Since the outbreak, you have worked on the front line for several months, desperately rescuing people from all walks of life, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection. But for your devoted care and selfless contribution, the situation wouldn't have been controlled in such a short time. It is you who build up our confidence and undoubtedly deserve our admiration.
Words fail to express our thanks for your irreplaceable dedication and I hold the firm belief that with our joint efforts China will make a quick recovery.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给勇敢对抗疫情的医护工作者写一封感谢信，对他们的辛勤付出表达感激之情，并发表个人对疫情防控的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：appreciation→gratitude
增强：strengthen→build up
缺乏：lack→shortage
共同的：common→joint
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：But for your devoted care and selfless contribution, the situation wouldn't have been controlled in such a short time.
拓展句：But for your devoted care and selfless contribution, the situation wouldn't have been controlled in such a short time, which paves the way for our normal routine and quick economic recovery.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is you who build up our confidence and undoubtedly deserve our admiration. (运用了强调句)
[高分句型2] But for your devoted care and selfless contribution, the situation wouldn't have been controlled in such a short time. (运用了虚拟语气)
10．Dear James,
How are you doing Thank you for the birthday gift you bought for me. I like it very much. Actually, the moment I opened the package, it made me smile. How considerate you are!
To be honest, it made me think of the time we spent together. During the past two years, we have had so many happy memories. We played together and studied together. And with your help, my oral English was greatly improved. I really hope to see you again.
Thanks again and looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生James写一封邮件，表达对他寄来生日礼物的感谢以及回顾过去和希望相见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
实际上：in fact→actually
打开：disclose→open
体贴的：thoughtful→considerate
在某人的帮助下：with the help of sb.→with one’s help
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Thank you for the birthday gift you bought for me. I like it very much.
拓展句：Thank you for the birthday gift you bought for me, which I like very much.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thank you for the birthday gift you bought for me. (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Actually, the moment I opened the package, it made me smile. (运用了the moment引导时间状语从句)