专题04 书面表达 九年级下册英语期末专项训练牛津译林版（含解析）
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专题04 书面表达 九年级下册英语期末专项训练 牛津译林版（含解析）
一、看图作文
1．根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。
参考词汇：terminal station 终点站
2．“研学旅行 (study tour)”就是综合实践活动。请根据以下图片提示，结合自己的经历，谈谈“研学旅行”的收获和感受。
要求: 1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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3．请仔细观察下列图片，展开合理想象，以图中小女孩的身份写一篇日记。
要求∶
1词数∶80—10C
2.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
Saturday, June 3rd
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4．假如你是一名来自美国的游客Tony，此时正与你的中国笔友Daming, Lingling在长城游玩。你将你们刚刚拍摄的几张相片做成一张电子明信片发送给你的同学Sam，请根据相片的内容及所给提示，完成明信片的留言。
提示：
1、你可能会用到的词：the Great Wall, walk on, take photo/pictures, the present shop;
2、Sam的地址已为你写好，可根据相片内容适当发挥，字数在80-100词；
3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名或校名。
Sam Smith No.17 Field Street Los Angeles The USA
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下面的柱状图 (bar chart) 显示了不同年龄段孩子与父母谈心的情况。
Time spent in talking with parents
(平均每周花费的时间)
（年龄组）
根据上图信息，请以“Heart-to-Heart Talks with Parents”为题，用英语写一篇90词左右的短文。要求如下：
5．简要描述图中信息；
6．说明原因，如：忙于学习或工作、由于代沟 (generation gap) 而缺少共同话题……；
7．谈谈你的看法br />注意：文章的标题和开头已给出 (不计入总词数)。
Heart-to-Heart Talks with Parents
As is shown in the bar chart,
二、材料作文
8．根据下面的汉语提示，写一篇短文介绍你的家乡，70词左右，包含以下要点。
要点：1．我的家乡离徐州市不远，很美丽；
2．我家离市中心乘公交车约40分钟的路程，我家周围有许多建筑物；
3．市中心有购物商场、电影院；
4．我的家乡空气清新，家乡的人友好、善良。
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9．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于 50 词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
上周五，学校组织你们参观了北京科学馆。在那里，你们看到了许多可爱的机器人。请描述你们在那里所做的事情，并谈谈你们的切身感受。
提示词语: robot, work, guide, speak, show, around, photo, gift, learn
提示问题: ●What did you see in the Science Museum
●What did you do there
●How did you feel
At the Science Museum
Last Friday, we went to the Science Museum by bus._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假如你是李华，将参加你校“用英语讲好成都故事”的演讲比赛。请写一篇英语演讲稿，从以下几方面讲好成都故事。
注意:
1. 需全面反映图文信息；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及校名；
3. 词数：100左右。
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11．假如你是康康，今天参观完科技博物馆后感触很深。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇80词左右的日记，谈谈科技发展对我们生活的影响。
提示：1.网络方便了我们的生活；
2.机器人应用于多个行业；
3.航天技术的发展加快了人们对太空的探索。
要求：1.包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真姓名、地点和学校名称。
Saturday, Jun. 8th, 2019
Sunny
Today I visited the Science Museum and it was really interesting. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．根据图画内容和所给英文提示，以“A Trip to Beijing World Park”为题，写一篇短文介绍你上星期天和父母一起去北京世界公园的情况。
Beijing World Park many places of interest from all over the world
…, and so on
要求：1．词数80左右； 2．条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整。
A Trip to Beijing World Park
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三、话题作文
13．每年我们学校都会举行春秋游活动，大家收获颇多。下周班级英语课堂上将举行以 “Our school trip”为主题的英语沙龙活动，请你根据以下要点提示准备一篇110词左右的短文和同学们分享。
提示：1.谈谈你对学校旅游的理解。 2.分享一次你的学校旅游经历与感受。3.对学校旅游提出合理的建议。
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14．你校课堂上引进了新科技，可以把老师的语音识别成文字，还可以生成这节课的二维码，学生随时可以观看这节课。请你根据以下提示，以A New Change in Class为题，写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. Do you agree with the new change in class Why
2. What do your parents think of the new change Why
3. What do you hope to achieve in your study with the help of the new technology
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
2. 词数100左右。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A New Change in Class
A new technology is introduced into class in my school. Teachers’ voices can be turned into words. What’s more, a QR code（二维码）will be created after class for students to review the whole lesson anytime. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．Write at least 60 words about the topic “Honesty and I”. ( 以“我和诚实”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Expressions for reference （以下短语仅供参考）
keep one’s words, tell a lie, with pleasure, in return
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16．某英文报社正在举办以“ An Unforgettable Trip”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提 示，写一篇英语短文介绍一次难忘的旅游经历，向该报社投稿。
内容提示：
When and where did you go How did you go there
What did you see and do there What do you think of the trip
要求：
1. 短文条理清楚，行文连贯，内容可适当发挥；
2. 书写规范认真；
3. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
4. 词数不少于80。
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17．近年来，作为一个沿海城市，越来越多的外籍人士到温州工作和生活，他们对当地的传统节日和旅游景点都非常感兴趣。假如你的小区也居住着这样一个群体，请你以“Life in Wenzhou”为题，写一篇110词左右的英语短文，介绍温州的文化休闲生活，帮助外籍人士更快地融入温州。
参考词汇: festival, food, places of interest, wonder
Life in Wenzhou
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四、书信作文
18．假如你是李华，你三年没见的美国笔友Tony，打算春节到成都旅游，他将于2023年1月15日上午10点到达成都双流国际机场。你到时会穿着红色外套在1号出口处等他。在你给他的回信中还会包括以下内容，同时为了提升你的英语，请在信中礼貌地向他请教两条提升英语的方法。
注意：
1.词数：100左右；
2.开头已经给出，不计入总词汇之中。
3.参考词汇：成都双流国际机场 (Chengdu Shuangliu International Airport)，1 号出口处 (Exit 1)
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．假如你是李华，请你写一封信给你英国的笔友Paul，邀请他疫情之后来深圳旅游。
参考词汇：
（beat the epidemic战胜疫情；novel coronavirus新型冠状病毒）
要点：
1.问候并简单描述你的近况；
2.介绍深圳的旅游特色（吃、住、行、特色景点等）；
3.邀请Paul疫情之后来深圳旅游；
要求：
1.至少70词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯。
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Paul,
How’s everything going ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
20．4月22日是世界地球日（The World Earth Day）。假如你是英语校报的编辑李华，请你根据以下信息，在校报上给你的同学们写一封信，向大家介绍世界地球日，并倡议大家共同努力，改善我们生活的环境。
写作要点：
1. 希望全校同学都能积极地保护环境。
2. 介绍世界地球日：
（1）时间：每年的4月22日；
（2）范围：全球；
（3）目的：提高人们对环境问题的认识。
3. 请对中学生如何改善我们生活的环境提出具体建议。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear classmates,
The World Earth Day is coming.
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Let’s protect our environment together!
Yours,
Li Hua
21．假如你是李平，下周你在北京做交换生的美国笔友Peter要来哈尔滨旅游。请根据以下提示给他写一封信，并告诉他在哈尔滨旅游期间做一名绿色旅行者。
写作要点：
1欢迎他来哈尔滨。
2介绍哈尔滨的情况。
1)下周天气：白天最高气温 25℃；
2)交通方式：最好骑自行车；
3)必去的名胜：太阳岛。
3告诉他在哈尔滨旅游期间做一名绿色旅行者。
写作要求：
1不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少 80 词。
Dear Peter,
How are you ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
22．假设你的好友李华上周给你写了一封信，信中分享了他上周科学课后对于人工智能（AI）的一些观点，并表达了他对人工智能即将代替人类的担忧。请根据以下提示写一封回信，并谈谈自己的看法。
1、不必过分担忧。
2、AI会按照人的指令进行工作。
3、AI帮助我们从事危险的工作。
4、AI可以为我们节省时间和劳动力。
注意：
1.词数：80词左右
2.应覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：劳动力：labour
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss AI with you.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Mike
参考答案：
1．One possible version：
Tom is a kind-hearted boy. One day, he went to the museum by bus. When he got on the bus, he found a seat and sat on it. After a while the bus stopped at the next stop and an old man got on the bus. As soon as he saw him, Tom stood up and gave his seat to the man. But the man didn't accept it. Tom was worried and he came up an good idea. He told the man that he would get off the bus the next stop and the old sat on his seat. Tom stood by the man and he felt sleepy. Seeing this, the old man reminded that he was going to get off the bus. Tom felt embarrassed and he told him the truth that he would get at the terminal station. What a good boy Tom was and I think we should learn from him.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇给图画作文，描述一个小男孩Tom在公交车上给一个老爷爷让座的故事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When he……；As soon as he…….；He told the man that……；the old man reminded that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头描述了Tom上了公交车，接下来描述为他给一位老爷爷让座，假装说自己下一站就下车，最后指出要向Tom学习。此处用了got on，gave his seat to，felt sleepy，learn from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
考点：图画作文。
2．One possible version:
Without doubt, the study tour plays an important part in our school life. It makes our life meaningful and helps us be knowledgeable. I’d like to share one of the most impressive experiences.
Last term, I took part in a study tour with my classmates. We visited the history museum. The guide led us to different halls to learn about the history of CPC. Seeing the pictures of different wars, we were deeply moved. When we watched the videos about how the soldiers fought against the enemies and achieved success, we were so shocked by their strong will that we couldn’t control the tears. All of us showed our respect to our ancestors because of the peaceful life they fought for. At the end of the trip, we took a special photo.
As teenagers, we should try to learn in various ways. Only in this way can we improve in different ways.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，根据导图内容，介绍自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般过去时。写作时可分为三段式，首先开篇点题，介绍研学是学校生活中很重要的一部分，进而点出分享自己的一次研学经历；其次是具体介绍这段研学经历；最后是表达感受。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。
3．Saturday,June 3rd
I had a wonderful school trip today. I went to a farm which was very big. I did many interesting things there. First, I rode a horse. It was the first time I rode a horse. What an exciting experience! Next, I learned to milk a cow and feed chickens.When I was walking through the field, I saw all kinds of flowers. They were so colorful that I couldn't help taking photos of them. In the field I saw many farmers working. How hard-working they were! I talked with one of them and learnt a lot from him about farming.
I had a great time on the farm. I'm looking forward to going there again.
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求根据所给图片，展开合理想象，以图中小女孩的身份写一篇日记，要求介绍今天所发生的事情，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述图片内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；描述内容时，场景应描写细致；并且事情发生的背景、起因和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
4．例文
Dear Sam,
I’m having fun in China now and sending you this e-card. In the first photo, together with my Chinese friends Daming and Lingling, we are walking on the Great Wall which is one of the greatest wonders in the world. In the second photo, we are taking a lot of photos. The scenery here is really beautiful. In the third photo, I’m choosing presents for my family and friends in a shop. There are so many amazing hand-made things that it is difficult to make a decision. What present for you It’s a secret.
See you next week!
Tony
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按明信片的格式写。内容是以美国游客Tony的身份，把你们刚刚拍摄的几张相片做成的一张电子明信片发送给你的同学Sam，并根据相片的内容及所给提示，完成明信片的留言。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述明信片的内容；时态以现在进行时为主。要按照照片的顺序，分别介绍在每一张照片里所做的活动；最后介绍要给Sam一个惊喜。
5．age group spends as many as 6．hours per week on average, the 16- 7．age group spends only half the time.
There are two major reasons for this: both parents and children are too busy working or studying, and there aren’t many topics of common interest for them to talk about.
In my opinion, children should let their parents know more about what they are interested in. At the same time, parents should spend more time talking with their children and sharing opinions with them. Only in this way can they better understand each other
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍不同年龄段孩子与父母谈心的情况，并说明原因表达自己的观点。
【亮点说明】这篇短文三方面介绍的都较完整，并应用了大量的连接词和丰富的句式，如For example, In my opinion，Only in this way can they better understand each other等。要想在写作中能灵活运用短语和连词需要平时的积累。
考点：看图作文。.
8．One possible version:
My hometown is not far from Xuzhou. It is very beautiful. It takes about 40 minutes to go to the city centre from my home by bus. There are many buildings around my home. In the centre of the city, there are shopping malls and cinemas. The air is fresh in my hometown. People here are kind and friendly. I love my hometown.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容写一篇短文介绍自己的家乡。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍家乡的位置、周边环境、配套设施以及家乡的人等内容。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
9．例文
At the Science Museum
Last Friday, we went to the Science Museum by bus. We saw many lovely robots. They can do lots of work. They can guide us. They showed us around. They can speak English. They can take photos. We also received some small gifts from the Science Museum. I learned a lot from this visit. I want to make a better robot in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍上周学校去科学馆参观的经历。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时。先描述去那里都看到了什么，再描述自己学到的。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
10．例文：
Chengdu is a city in southwest China. It is the capital of Sichuan Province. In the past, people lived a hard life, living in small dark houses and there were narrow roads. But now, it has developed into a modern city. There are tall buildings everywhere. The roads are wide, and there are all kinds of vehicles on the streets. Almost every family has cars, and people’s living standards have improved a lot. In the past, people could only travel on foot or by bike, but now people usually drive or take the subway.
The most famous food in Sichuan is hot pot, which is also my favorite food. It is hot, and people all over the country like it very much. Especially the mandarin duck pot is loved by all people, including children and the elderly. Sichuan opera is also a special feature of Sichuan. It began in the Tang Dynasty. It has a history of about 1200 years. If you want to know more about Sichuan Opera, please watch the performance in the Grand Theater next Wednesday, with face changing and fire breathing. It’s very interesting. I hope you can watch it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括成都的过去及现在的发展，川菜以及川剧的一些情况。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍成都的地理位置；
第二步，具体介绍成都过去的情况以及现在的情况，以及川菜和川剧的情况；
第三步，最后介绍川剧的演出，希望人们去观看。
[亮点词汇]
① on foot步行
② all over the country全国
③ develop into发展成为
[高分句型]
① The most famous food in Sichuan is hot pot, which is also my favorite food.（which引导的定语从句）
② If you want to know more about Sichuan Opera, please watch the performance in the Grand Theater next Wednesday.（if引导的条件状语从句）
11．例文
Saturday, Jun. 8th, 2019
Sunny
Today I visited the Science Museum and it was really interesting. So many great technologies have come into our life and changed our life so much.
With the help of the Internet, we get plenty of information from all over the world and communicate with others easily online. What’s more, robots are used in many fields. Some do the work that is too boring or dangerous for us to do. Thanks to the space technology, our country has achieved a lot in exploring space. Maybe we could have a trip in space or spend our holiday on another planet one day.
With more technologies, I believe our life will be better and better in the future.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍科技发展对我们生活的影响，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
12．例文
A Trip to Beijing World Park
Last Sunday, my parents and I went to Beijing World Park. We took a bus there. It took us about two hours. On the way there, we enjoyed the beauty of the scenery. At half past twelve,we got there. We really enjoyed ourselves in it. We had a big lunch in Beijing World Park. We saw many places of interest in it, such as the Pyramids of Egypt, the Great Wall and the Taj Mahal, and so on.At 5 pm, we came back. We had a good time. I think Beijing World Park is the most interesting place to visit in the world.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求介绍去北京世界公园的情况，属于记叙文写作，但写作时要紧紧围绕表格和图片提示去写。在写作时应叙述清楚时间、地点和主要活动，最后还要表达一下观感。
2.写作指导：本文介绍上星期天和父母一起去北京世界公园的经过，需以第一人称进行叙述，时态采用一般过去时；写作时可以进行适当的想象，比如乘坐的交通方式和餐饮情况，行文时做到表达流畅，叙述条理，中心明确。
13．例文：
Our school trip
The school trip is a great chance for the students to relax themselves. And it is good for them to communicate with others.
Last weekend, I went to Beihai Park for a trip with my classmates. It was sunny and a little windy. We did many things. We walked around and took photos in the morning. We had lunch in the park. In the afternoon, we played games under the trees. Our teacher also told us some stories. They were quite interesting. At about three fifty, we went home. All of us had a good time. It was an exciting trip!
I recommend that the students go to visit the science museum next time. It is helpful for the students to learn more about the science and develop the interests in science.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目发表对学校旅游的看法，就是一次学校旅游经历与感受，并对学校旅游提出自己的建议。
2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述自己一次学校旅游经历与感受叙述完整，条理清晰。
14．范文：
A New Change in Class
A new technology is introduced into class in my school. Teachers’ voices can be turned into words. What’s more, a QR code（二维码）will be created after class for students to review the whole lesson anytime. I am strongly for the new change in class. It brings a lot of advantages to our students. First, students who are absent from school because of illness can study the lesson in time so that they won’t fall behind others. Second, because of the COVID-19, we may not go to school. With the help of it, we can learn from the Internet without worrying about the study. Last, it can make students interested in the class with the help of technology and science.
As for our parents, they seem to not agree with the change. Because they think most students can not listen carefully, which leads to failure in exams. They also think that watching computer screens too much can be harmful to our eyes.
I hope I can review what teachers taught in class to achieve more knowledge with the help of the new technology.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求以A New Change in Class为题，写一篇英语短文；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时；采用第一人称和第三人称口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：描述自己的观点以及原因；第二段：描述父母的观点以及原因；第三段：描述自己的希望。确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
15．It's very important for us to be honest. We should tell the truth to others. We should do the homework by ourselves. We shouldn't cheat the parents, the teachers or even ourselves. If we always tell lies, we will lose friends. Therefore, if we want to be the persons liked by others, try to be honest first. Honesty is the most beautiful thing in the world.
【详解】试题分析：本文是一篇命题作文。根据所给题目可知该用第一人称书写，主要使用一般现在时态。
【亮点说明】本文语句通顺流畅，多次使用主从复合句为文章增色不少。
考点：命题作文。
16．例文：
An unforgettable trip
I have been to many places in China, and Hainan is my favourite.
Last summer holiday, my father and I went there. We went there by plane. The sea was wonderful. The sky was blue and the sea was blue, too. First we went to swim in the sea. Then we lay on the beach and enjoyed the sun. Next we tried some seafood. It was delicious. We also took lots of photos there. It was a nice trip. I felt very relaxed. I will never forget this experience.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于话题作文，描述一次让你难忘的旅行。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
2.写作指导。本文应该用第一人称来叙述经历；时态采用一般过去时为主，叙事时要包括提示中的所有问题，保证条理清晰。要注意连词和副词的使用，以增强逻辑关系，使上下文意思连贯。
17．例文
Life in Wenzhou
Wenzhou is a city well mixed the tradition and modern.
With a long history, Wenzhou has a rich culture and delicious food and dragon boat are just a small piece of it. Here, dragon boat race is not only a way of festival celebration, but also a practice of teamwork. What's more The design of dragon boat is also a wonder of an art.
Wenzhou is also a fast-developing city. Now, it is a great place to live and visit. The government has built many parks to make the city green and wonderful. Electronic devices are widely used in our daily life. For example, we can pay on the phone almost everywhere in Wenzhou.
Hope to see you in Wenzhou!
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生以“Life in Wenzhou”为题写一篇英语短文，向外籍人士介绍温州的文化休闲生活，属于话题作文。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般现在时进行叙述。写作时应紧扣“文化休闲”这个主题，既要介绍温州本地的传统节日，也要介绍温州独具的休闲生活，最后表达自己的愿望。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
18．例文：
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you. We haven’t seen each other for three years. How is it going I have changed a lot since three years ago. You know I used to be short and heavy, but I am tall and thin now. I am more outgoing than I was three years ago. I also study harder and I get better grades now. What about you Do you have any changes
I am glad that you are going to take a trip to Chengdu during the Spring Festival. You will get to Chengdu Shuangliu International Airport at 10 a.m. on January 15th, 2023, I will meet you then at Exit 1 and I will wear a red coat.
During your visit, you will visit places of interest in Chengdu with me and taste different Sichuang food. It is really delicious. Of course, we will eat dumplings on the Spring Festival, the most important festival in China. Family will get together happily and enjoy a big meal during it.
I believe you will have a good time. By the way, can you teach me two ways to improve my English I look forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“请在信中礼貌地向他请教两条提升英语的方法”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍两人三年没见，自己的变化；
第二步，阐明对方将要来很开心，将会去机场接他，并制定了旅行计划，也向对方简单介绍春节；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的祝福，并顺便请教学好英语的方法。
[亮点词汇]
① used to 曾经
②get together团聚
③have a good time玩得开心
④by the way顺便问一下
[高分句型]
①I am more outgoing than I was three years ago. (运用形容词比较级)
②We haven’t seen each other for three years. (运用现在完成时)
19．例文：
Dear Paul,
How’s everything going In order to stop the spread of novel coronavirus, most of us are staying at home. And I have to take online classes.
Shenzhen is a modern city with many tall buildings and shopping centers. The subway is the most convenient transportation here. There is not only a lot of delicious food but also many places of interest, such as Dameisha Beach and Lianhua Mountain. When we defeat the epidemic, I sincerely hope you can give me the chance to show you around this beautiful city.
Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求以李华的身份，给英国笔友Paul写一封信，内容包括：问候及介绍你的近况，介绍深圳的旅游特色和邀请Paul疫情后来深圳旅游。
2. 写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；写作时应承接开头，紧扣提示内容进行发挥，还可在写作要点的基础上适当增加细节，以丰富文章内容和达成字数要求；写作重点可放在要点2上；写作完成后应确保文章要点齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
20．例文：
Dear classmates,
The World Earth Day is coming. It is an international day that usually falls on April 22nd every year. Its goal is to raise people’s awareness about the problems of environment.
According to this goal, there are some ways we can do to improve our living environment. First, we can plant more trees and flowers, which are pleasing to both the environment and us. Second, turn off the lights when we leave the room. It is a good way to save energy as well as money. Third, when we go to school, we can walk or ride a bike instead of taking a car to reduce exhaust gas. I hope all the students in our school will take an active part in protecting the environment.
Let’s protect our environment together!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求我们以编辑李华的身份，根据提示的写作要点在校报上给同学们写一封信，内容是向大家介绍世界地球日，并倡议大家共同努力，改善我们生活的环境。
2. 写作指导：本文内容主要是介绍地球日和提出建议，所以时态主要采用一般现在时；写作要点3作为文章的重点需进行较详细的写作，改善生活环境的建议可根据文章篇幅写3-4点即可，写作这部分时可使用连接词（如First、Second），这样使得文章层次清晰，逻辑连贯；写作要点1和2可使用1-2句话简述；最后写作完成时应保证要点齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
21．例文：
Dear Peter,
How are you Welcome to Harbin. Harbin is located in the northeast of China. It is the capital of Heilongjiang province. It is a wonderful place and attracts more and more people at home and abroad to visit, study and even live there for a long time.
The reason why Harbin is so popular is that it is not too hot in summer and there are many places of interest there. If you want to have an enjoyable journey, I suggest you go to Sun Island. Because it is a popular summer resort to visit. The weather will be cool next week and the highest temperature is about 25 degrees. So you should wear cool clothes.
The most convenient transportation is bike. Because almost the whole city has bike lanes. You can go anywhere by bike. You don’t have to consider the problem of traffic jams. Most importantly, cycling is a healthy and green way to travel. I hope you will be a green traveler during your trip in Harbin.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，向笔友Peter介绍哈尔滨的情况以及游览的建议等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来，本文应该用第二人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
22．One Possible Version:
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss AI with you. I don’t think you need to be too worried about it. AI will never completely take the place of human beings. Instead, it has more advantages than disadvantages.
First of all, AI can work by following orders of human beings. If people don’t want to do some dangerous jobs, they can use AI to keep workers safe. It will save us much time and labour to work with AI. As a result, people can free themselves form work and spend more time on what they are interested in. AI plays an important role in the fields of science and technology in China.
In my opinion, AI is a double-edged sword. Instead of worrying about its negative effects, you should learn more about how to use it properly. Do you agree I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Mike
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按书信格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头，亮出你的观点（你现在是Mike），告诉李华不必过分担忧，人工智能永远不会完全取代人类，它利大于弊；第二段叙述人工智能的优点；第三段概括，告诉李华人工智能是一把双刃剑。与其担心它的负面影响，不如多了解如何正确使用它，并结尾。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一、三人称为主来叙述，注意人称的转换，主谓一致；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时为主，注意表达的顺序，适当使用连词、介词和从句，内容包括所有提示要点，适当增加细节。需要叙述完整、连贯，语言通顺，保证条理清晰。写完以后，注意检查，确保语法、单词拼写、标点符号使用正确。
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专题04 书面表达 九年级下册英语期末专项训练 牛津译林版（含解析）
一、看图作文
1．根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。
参考词汇：terminal station 终点站
2．“研学旅行 (study tour)”就是综合实践活动。请根据以下图片提示，结合自己的经历，谈谈“研学旅行”的收获和感受。
要求: 1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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3．请仔细观察下列图片，展开合理想象，以图中小女孩的身份写一篇日记。
要求∶
1词数∶80—10C
2.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
Saturday, June 3rd
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4．假如你是一名来自美国的游客Tony，此时正与你的中国笔友Daming, Lingling在长城游玩。你将你们刚刚拍摄的几张相片做成一张电子明信片发送给你的同学Sam，请根据相片的内容及所给提示，完成明信片的留言。
提示：
1、你可能会用到的词：the Great Wall, walk on, take photo/pictures, the present shop;
2、Sam的地址已为你写好，可根据相片内容适当发挥，字数在80-100词；
3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名或校名。
Sam Smith No.17 Field Street Los Angeles The USA
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下面的柱状图 (bar chart) 显示了不同年龄段孩子与父母谈心的情况。
Time spent in talking with parents
(平均每周花费的时间)
（年龄组）
根据上图信息，请以“Heart-to-Heart Talks with Parents”为题，用英语写一篇90词左右的短文。要求如下：
5．简要描述图中信息；
6．说明原因，如：忙于学习或工作、由于代沟 (generation gap) 而缺少共同话题……；
7．谈谈你的看法br />注意：文章的标题和开头已给出 (不计入总词数)。
Heart-to-Heart Talks with Parents
As is shown in the bar chart,
二、材料作文
8．根据下面的汉语提示，写一篇短文介绍你的家乡，70词左右，包含以下要点。
要点：1．我的家乡离徐州市不远，很美丽；
2．我家离市中心乘公交车约40分钟的路程，我家周围有许多建筑物；
3．市中心有购物商场、电影院；
4．我的家乡空气清新，家乡的人友好、善良。
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9．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于 50 词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
上周五，学校组织你们参观了北京科学馆。在那里，你们看到了许多可爱的机器人。请描述你们在那里所做的事情，并谈谈你们的切身感受。
提示词语: robot, work, guide, speak, show, around, photo, gift, learn
提示问题: ●What did you see in the Science Museum
●What did you do there
●How did you feel
At the Science Museum
Last Friday, we went to the Science Museum by bus._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假如你是李华，将参加你校“用英语讲好成都故事”的演讲比赛。请写一篇英语演讲稿，从以下几方面讲好成都故事。
注意:
1. 需全面反映图文信息；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及校名；
3. 词数：100左右。
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11．假如你是康康，今天参观完科技博物馆后感触很深。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇80词左右的日记，谈谈科技发展对我们生活的影响。
提示：1.网络方便了我们的生活；
2.机器人应用于多个行业；
3.航天技术的发展加快了人们对太空的探索。
要求：1.包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真姓名、地点和学校名称。
Saturday, Jun. 8th, 2019
Sunny
Today I visited the Science Museum and it was really interesting. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．根据图画内容和所给英文提示，以“A Trip to Beijing World Park”为题，写一篇短文介绍你上星期天和父母一起去北京世界公园的情况。
Beijing World Park many places of interest from all over the world
…, and so on
要求：1．词数80左右； 2．条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整。
A Trip to Beijing World Park
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三、话题作文
13．每年我们学校都会举行春秋游活动，大家收获颇多。下周班级英语课堂上将举行以 “Our school trip”为主题的英语沙龙活动，请你根据以下要点提示准备一篇110词左右的短文和同学们分享。
提示：1.谈谈你对学校旅游的理解。 2.分享一次你的学校旅游经历与感受。3.对学校旅游提出合理的建议。
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14．你校课堂上引进了新科技，可以把老师的语音识别成文字，还可以生成这节课的二维码，学生随时可以观看这节课。请你根据以下提示，以A New Change in Class为题，写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. Do you agree with the new change in class Why
2. What do your parents think of the new change Why
3. What do you hope to achieve in your study with the help of the new technology
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
2. 词数100左右。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A New Change in Class
A new technology is introduced into class in my school. Teachers’ voices can be turned into words. What’s more, a QR code（二维码）will be created after class for students to review the whole lesson anytime. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．Write at least 60 words about the topic “Honesty and I”. ( 以“我和诚实”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Expressions for reference （以下短语仅供参考）
keep one’s words, tell a lie, with pleasure, in return
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16．某英文报社正在举办以“ An Unforgettable Trip”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提 示，写一篇英语短文介绍一次难忘的旅游经历，向该报社投稿。
内容提示：
When and where did you go How did you go there
What did you see and do there What do you think of the trip
要求：
1. 短文条理清楚，行文连贯，内容可适当发挥；
2. 书写规范认真；
3. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
4. 词数不少于80。
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17．近年来，作为一个沿海城市，越来越多的外籍人士到温州工作和生活，他们对当地的传统节日和旅游景点都非常感兴趣。假如你的小区也居住着这样一个群体，请你以“Life in Wenzhou”为题，写一篇110词左右的英语短文，介绍温州的文化休闲生活，帮助外籍人士更快地融入温州。
参考词汇: festival, food, places of interest, wonder
Life in Wenzhou
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四、书信作文
18．假如你是李华，你三年没见的美国笔友Tony，打算春节到成都旅游，他将于2023年1月15日上午10点到达成都双流国际机场。你到时会穿着红色外套在1号出口处等他。在你给他的回信中还会包括以下内容，同时为了提升你的英语，请在信中礼貌地向他请教两条提升英语的方法。
注意：
1.词数：100左右；
2.开头已经给出，不计入总词汇之中。
3.参考词汇：成都双流国际机场 (Chengdu Shuangliu International Airport)，1 号出口处 (Exit 1)
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．假如你是李华，请你写一封信给你英国的笔友Paul，邀请他疫情之后来深圳旅游。
参考词汇：
（beat the epidemic战胜疫情；novel coronavirus新型冠状病毒）
要点：
1.问候并简单描述你的近况；
2.介绍深圳的旅游特色（吃、住、行、特色景点等）；
3.邀请Paul疫情之后来深圳旅游；
要求：
1.至少70词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯。
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Paul,
How’s everything going ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
20．4月22日是世界地球日（The World Earth Day）。假如你是英语校报的编辑李华，请你根据以下信息，在校报上给你的同学们写一封信，向大家介绍世界地球日，并倡议大家共同努力，改善我们生活的环境。
写作要点：
1. 希望全校同学都能积极地保护环境。
2. 介绍世界地球日：
（1）时间：每年的4月22日；
（2）范围：全球；
（3）目的：提高人们对环境问题的认识。
3. 请对中学生如何改善我们生活的环境提出具体建议。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear classmates,
The World Earth Day is coming.
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Let’s protect our environment together!
Yours,
Li Hua
21．假如你是李平，下周你在北京做交换生的美国笔友Peter要来哈尔滨旅游。请根据以下提示给他写一封信，并告诉他在哈尔滨旅游期间做一名绿色旅行者。
写作要点：
1欢迎他来哈尔滨。
2介绍哈尔滨的情况。
1)下周天气：白天最高气温 25℃；
2)交通方式：最好骑自行车；
3)必去的名胜：太阳岛。
3告诉他在哈尔滨旅游期间做一名绿色旅行者。
写作要求：
1不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少 80 词。
Dear Peter,
How are you ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
22．假设你的好友李华上周给你写了一封信，信中分享了他上周科学课后对于人工智能（AI）的一些观点，并表达了他对人工智能即将代替人类的担忧。请根据以下提示写一封回信，并谈谈自己的看法。
1、不必过分担忧。
2、AI会按照人的指令进行工作。
3、AI帮助我们从事危险的工作。
4、AI可以为我们节省时间和劳动力。
注意：
1.词数：80词左右
2.应覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：劳动力：labour
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss AI with you.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Mike
参考答案：
1．One possible version：
Tom is a kind-hearted boy. One day, he went to the museum by bus. When he got on the bus, he found a seat and sat on it. After a while the bus stopped at the next stop and an old man got on the bus. As soon as he saw him, Tom stood up and gave his seat to the man. But the man didn't accept it. Tom was worried and he came up an good idea. He told the man that he would get off the bus the next stop and the old sat on his seat. Tom stood by the man and he felt sleepy. Seeing this, the old man reminded that he was going to get off the bus. Tom felt embarrassed and he told him the truth that he would get at the terminal station. What a good boy Tom was and I think we should learn from him.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇给图画作文，描述一个小男孩Tom在公交车上给一个老爷爷让座的故事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When he……；As soon as he…….；He told the man that……；the old man reminded that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头描述了Tom上了公交车，接下来描述为他给一位老爷爷让座，假装说自己下一站就下车，最后指出要向Tom学习。此处用了got on，gave his seat to，felt sleepy，learn from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
考点：图画作文。
2．One possible version:
Without doubt, the study tour plays an important part in our school life. It makes our life meaningful and helps us be knowledgeable. I’d like to share one of the most impressive experiences.
Last term, I took part in a study tour with my classmates. We visited the history museum. The guide led us to different halls to learn about the history of CPC. Seeing the pictures of different wars, we were deeply moved. When we watched the videos about how the soldiers fought against the enemies and achieved success, we were so shocked by their strong will that we couldn’t control the tears. All of us showed our respect to our ancestors because of the peaceful life they fought for. At the end of the trip, we took a special photo.
As teenagers, we should try to learn in various ways. Only in this way can we improve in different ways.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，根据导图内容，介绍自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般过去时。写作时可分为三段式，首先开篇点题，介绍研学是学校生活中很重要的一部分，进而点出分享自己的一次研学经历；其次是具体介绍这段研学经历；最后是表达感受。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。
3．Saturday,June 3rd
I had a wonderful school trip today. I went to a farm which was very big. I did many interesting things there. First, I rode a horse. It was the first time I rode a horse. What an exciting experience! Next, I learned to milk a cow and feed chickens.When I was walking through the field, I saw all kinds of flowers. They were so colorful that I couldn't help taking photos of them. In the field I saw many farmers working. How hard-working they were! I talked with one of them and learnt a lot from him about farming.
I had a great time on the farm. I'm looking forward to going there again.
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求根据所给图片，展开合理想象，以图中小女孩的身份写一篇日记，要求介绍今天所发生的事情，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述图片内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；描述内容时，场景应描写细致；并且事情发生的背景、起因和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
4．例文
Dear Sam,
I’m having fun in China now and sending you this e-card. In the first photo, together with my Chinese friends Daming and Lingling, we are walking on the Great Wall which is one of the greatest wonders in the world. In the second photo, we are taking a lot of photos. The scenery here is really beautiful. In the third photo, I’m choosing presents for my family and friends in a shop. There are so many amazing hand-made things that it is difficult to make a decision. What present for you It’s a secret.
See you next week!
Tony
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按明信片的格式写。内容是以美国游客Tony的身份，把你们刚刚拍摄的几张相片做成的一张电子明信片发送给你的同学Sam，并根据相片的内容及所给提示，完成明信片的留言。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述明信片的内容；时态以现在进行时为主。要按照照片的顺序，分别介绍在每一张照片里所做的活动；最后介绍要给Sam一个惊喜。
5．age group spends as many as 6．hours per week on average, the 16- 7．age group spends only half the time.
There are two major reasons for this: both parents and children are too busy working or studying, and there aren’t many topics of common interest for them to talk about.
In my opinion, children should let their parents know more about what they are interested in. At the same time, parents should spend more time talking with their children and sharing opinions with them. Only in this way can they better understand each other
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍不同年龄段孩子与父母谈心的情况，并说明原因表达自己的观点。
【亮点说明】这篇短文三方面介绍的都较完整，并应用了大量的连接词和丰富的句式，如For example, In my opinion，Only in this way can they better understand each other等。要想在写作中能灵活运用短语和连词需要平时的积累。
考点：看图作文。.
8．One possible version:
My hometown is not far from Xuzhou. It is very beautiful. It takes about 40 minutes to go to the city centre from my home by bus. There are many buildings around my home. In the centre of the city, there are shopping malls and cinemas. The air is fresh in my hometown. People here are kind and friendly. I love my hometown.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容写一篇短文介绍自己的家乡。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍家乡的位置、周边环境、配套设施以及家乡的人等内容。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
9．例文
At the Science Museum
Last Friday, we went to the Science Museum by bus. We saw many lovely robots. They can do lots of work. They can guide us. They showed us around. They can speak English. They can take photos. We also received some small gifts from the Science Museum. I learned a lot from this visit. I want to make a better robot in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍上周学校去科学馆参观的经历。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时。先描述去那里都看到了什么，再描述自己学到的。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
10．例文：
Chengdu is a city in southwest China. It is the capital of Sichuan Province. In the past, people lived a hard life, living in small dark houses and there were narrow roads. But now, it has developed into a modern city. There are tall buildings everywhere. The roads are wide, and there are all kinds of vehicles on the streets. Almost every family has cars, and people’s living standards have improved a lot. In the past, people could only travel on foot or by bike, but now people usually drive or take the subway.
The most famous food in Sichuan is hot pot, which is also my favorite food. It is hot, and people all over the country like it very much. Especially the mandarin duck pot is loved by all people, including children and the elderly. Sichuan opera is also a special feature of Sichuan. It began in the Tang Dynasty. It has a history of about 1200 years. If you want to know more about Sichuan Opera, please watch the performance in the Grand Theater next Wednesday, with face changing and fire breathing. It’s very interesting. I hope you can watch it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括成都的过去及现在的发展，川菜以及川剧的一些情况。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍成都的地理位置；
第二步，具体介绍成都过去的情况以及现在的情况，以及川菜和川剧的情况；
第三步，最后介绍川剧的演出，希望人们去观看。
[亮点词汇]
① on foot步行
② all over the country全国
③ develop into发展成为
[高分句型]
① The most famous food in Sichuan is hot pot, which is also my favorite food.（which引导的定语从句）
② If you want to know more about Sichuan Opera, please watch the performance in the Grand Theater next Wednesday.（if引导的条件状语从句）
11．例文
Saturday, Jun. 8th, 2019
Sunny
Today I visited the Science Museum and it was really interesting. So many great technologies have come into our life and changed our life so much.
With the help of the Internet, we get plenty of information from all over the world and communicate with others easily online. What’s more, robots are used in many fields. Some do the work that is too boring or dangerous for us to do. Thanks to the space technology, our country has achieved a lot in exploring space. Maybe we could have a trip in space or spend our holiday on another planet one day.
With more technologies, I believe our life will be better and better in the future.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍科技发展对我们生活的影响，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
12．例文
A Trip to Beijing World Park
Last Sunday, my parents and I went to Beijing World Park. We took a bus there. It took us about two hours. On the way there, we enjoyed the beauty of the scenery. At half past twelve,we got there. We really enjoyed ourselves in it. We had a big lunch in Beijing World Park. We saw many places of interest in it, such as the Pyramids of Egypt, the Great Wall and the Taj Mahal, and so on.At 5 pm, we came back. We had a good time. I think Beijing World Park is the most interesting place to visit in the world.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求介绍去北京世界公园的情况，属于记叙文写作，但写作时要紧紧围绕表格和图片提示去写。在写作时应叙述清楚时间、地点和主要活动，最后还要表达一下观感。
2.写作指导：本文介绍上星期天和父母一起去北京世界公园的经过，需以第一人称进行叙述，时态采用一般过去时；写作时可以进行适当的想象，比如乘坐的交通方式和餐饮情况，行文时做到表达流畅，叙述条理，中心明确。
13．例文：
Our school trip
The school trip is a great chance for the students to relax themselves. And it is good for them to communicate with others.
Last weekend, I went to Beihai Park for a trip with my classmates. It was sunny and a little windy. We did many things. We walked around and took photos in the morning. We had lunch in the park. In the afternoon, we played games under the trees. Our teacher also told us some stories. They were quite interesting. At about three fifty, we went home. All of us had a good time. It was an exciting trip!
I recommend that the students go to visit the science museum next time. It is helpful for the students to learn more about the science and develop the interests in science.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目发表对学校旅游的看法，就是一次学校旅游经历与感受，并对学校旅游提出自己的建议。
2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述自己一次学校旅游经历与感受叙述完整，条理清晰。
14．范文：
A New Change in Class
A new technology is introduced into class in my school. Teachers’ voices can be turned into words. What’s more, a QR code（二维码）will be created after class for students to review the whole lesson anytime. I am strongly for the new change in class. It brings a lot of advantages to our students. First, students who are absent from school because of illness can study the lesson in time so that they won’t fall behind others. Second, because of the COVID-19, we may not go to school. With the help of it, we can learn from the Internet without worrying about the study. Last, it can make students interested in the class with the help of technology and science.
As for our parents, they seem to not agree with the change. Because they think most students can not listen carefully, which leads to failure in exams. They also think that watching computer screens too much can be harmful to our eyes.
I hope I can review what teachers taught in class to achieve more knowledge with the help of the new technology.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求以A New Change in Class为题，写一篇英语短文；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时；采用第一人称和第三人称口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：描述自己的观点以及原因；第二段：描述父母的观点以及原因；第三段：描述自己的希望。确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
15．It's very important for us to be honest. We should tell the truth to others. We should do the homework by ourselves. We shouldn't cheat the parents, the teachers or even ourselves. If we always tell lies, we will lose friends. Therefore, if we want to be the persons liked by others, try to be honest first. Honesty is the most beautiful thing in the world.
【详解】试题分析：本文是一篇命题作文。根据所给题目可知该用第一人称书写，主要使用一般现在时态。
【亮点说明】本文语句通顺流畅，多次使用主从复合句为文章增色不少。
考点：命题作文。
16．例文：
An unforgettable trip
I have been to many places in China, and Hainan is my favourite.
Last summer holiday, my father and I went there. We went there by plane. The sea was wonderful. The sky was blue and the sea was blue, too. First we went to swim in the sea. Then we lay on the beach and enjoyed the sun. Next we tried some seafood. It was delicious. We also took lots of photos there. It was a nice trip. I felt very relaxed. I will never forget this experience.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于话题作文，描述一次让你难忘的旅行。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
2.写作指导。本文应该用第一人称来叙述经历；时态采用一般过去时为主，叙事时要包括提示中的所有问题，保证条理清晰。要注意连词和副词的使用，以增强逻辑关系，使上下文意思连贯。
17．例文
Life in Wenzhou
Wenzhou is a city well mixed the tradition and modern.
With a long history, Wenzhou has a rich culture and delicious food and dragon boat are just a small piece of it. Here, dragon boat race is not only a way of festival celebration, but also a practice of teamwork. What's more The design of dragon boat is also a wonder of an art.
Wenzhou is also a fast-developing city. Now, it is a great place to live and visit. The government has built many parks to make the city green and wonderful. Electronic devices are widely used in our daily life. For example, we can pay on the phone almost everywhere in Wenzhou.
Hope to see you in Wenzhou!
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生以“Life in Wenzhou”为题写一篇英语短文，向外籍人士介绍温州的文化休闲生活，属于话题作文。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般现在时进行叙述。写作时应紧扣“文化休闲”这个主题，既要介绍温州本地的传统节日，也要介绍温州独具的休闲生活，最后表达自己的愿望。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
18．例文：
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you. We haven’t seen each other for three years. How is it going I have changed a lot since three years ago. You know I used to be short and heavy, but I am tall and thin now. I am more outgoing than I was three years ago. I also study harder and I get better grades now. What about you Do you have any changes
I am glad that you are going to take a trip to Chengdu during the Spring Festival. You will get to Chengdu Shuangliu International Airport at 10 a.m. on January 15th, 2023, I will meet you then at Exit 1 and I will wear a red coat.
During your visit, you will visit places of interest in Chengdu with me and taste different Sichuang food. It is really delicious. Of course, we will eat dumplings on the Spring Festival, the most important festival in China. Family will get together happily and enjoy a big meal during it.
I believe you will have a good time. By the way, can you teach me two ways to improve my English I look forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“请在信中礼貌地向他请教两条提升英语的方法”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍两人三年没见，自己的变化；
第二步，阐明对方将要来很开心，将会去机场接他，并制定了旅行计划，也向对方简单介绍春节；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的祝福，并顺便请教学好英语的方法。
[亮点词汇]
① used to 曾经
②get together团聚
③have a good time玩得开心
④by the way顺便问一下
[高分句型]
①I am more outgoing than I was three years ago. (运用形容词比较级)
②We haven’t seen each other for three years. (运用现在完成时)
19．例文：
Dear Paul,
How’s everything going In order to stop the spread of novel coronavirus, most of us are staying at home. And I have to take online classes.
Shenzhen is a modern city with many tall buildings and shopping centers. The subway is the most convenient transportation here. There is not only a lot of delicious food but also many places of interest, such as Dameisha Beach and Lianhua Mountain. When we defeat the epidemic, I sincerely hope you can give me the chance to show you around this beautiful city.
Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求以李华的身份，给英国笔友Paul写一封信，内容包括：问候及介绍你的近况，介绍深圳的旅游特色和邀请Paul疫情后来深圳旅游。
2. 写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；写作时应承接开头，紧扣提示内容进行发挥，还可在写作要点的基础上适当增加细节，以丰富文章内容和达成字数要求；写作重点可放在要点2上；写作完成后应确保文章要点齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
20．例文：
Dear classmates,
The World Earth Day is coming. It is an international day that usually falls on April 22nd every year. Its goal is to raise people’s awareness about the problems of environment.
According to this goal, there are some ways we can do to improve our living environment. First, we can plant more trees and flowers, which are pleasing to both the environment and us. Second, turn off the lights when we leave the room. It is a good way to save energy as well as money. Third, when we go to school, we can walk or ride a bike instead of taking a car to reduce exhaust gas. I hope all the students in our school will take an active part in protecting the environment.
Let’s protect our environment together!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求我们以编辑李华的身份，根据提示的写作要点在校报上给同学们写一封信，内容是向大家介绍世界地球日，并倡议大家共同努力，改善我们生活的环境。
2. 写作指导：本文内容主要是介绍地球日和提出建议，所以时态主要采用一般现在时；写作要点3作为文章的重点需进行较详细的写作，改善生活环境的建议可根据文章篇幅写3-4点即可，写作这部分时可使用连接词（如First、Second），这样使得文章层次清晰，逻辑连贯；写作要点1和2可使用1-2句话简述；最后写作完成时应保证要点齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
21．例文：
Dear Peter,
How are you Welcome to Harbin. Harbin is located in the northeast of China. It is the capital of Heilongjiang province. It is a wonderful place and attracts more and more people at home and abroad to visit, study and even live there for a long time.
The reason why Harbin is so popular is that it is not too hot in summer and there are many places of interest there. If you want to have an enjoyable journey, I suggest you go to Sun Island. Because it is a popular summer resort to visit. The weather will be cool next week and the highest temperature is about 25 degrees. So you should wear cool clothes.
The most convenient transportation is bike. Because almost the whole city has bike lanes. You can go anywhere by bike. You don’t have to consider the problem of traffic jams. Most importantly, cycling is a healthy and green way to travel. I hope you will be a green traveler during your trip in Harbin.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，向笔友Peter介绍哈尔滨的情况以及游览的建议等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来，本文应该用第二人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
22．One Possible Version:
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss AI with you. I don’t think you need to be too worried about it. AI will never completely take the place of human beings. Instead, it has more advantages than disadvantages.
First of all, AI can work by following orders of human beings. If people don’t want to do some dangerous jobs, they can use AI to keep workers safe. It will save us much time and labour to work with AI. As a result, people can free themselves form work and spend more time on what they are interested in. AI plays an important role in the fields of science and technology in China.
In my opinion, AI is a double-edged sword. Instead of worrying about its negative effects, you should learn more about how to use it properly. Do you agree I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Mike
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按书信格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头，亮出你的观点（你现在是Mike），告诉李华不必过分担忧，人工智能永远不会完全取代人类，它利大于弊；第二段叙述人工智能的优点；第三段概括，告诉李华人工智能是一把双刃剑。与其担心它的负面影响，不如多了解如何正确使用它，并结尾。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一、三人称为主来叙述，注意人称的转换，主谓一致；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时为主，注意表达的顺序，适当使用连词、介词和从句，内容包括所有提示要点，适当增加细节。需要叙述完整、连贯，语言通顺，保证条理清晰。写完以后，注意检查，确保语法、单词拼写、标点符号使用正确。
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