专题10书面表达八年级下册英语期末专项训练牛津译林版（含解析）
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专题10 书面表达 八年级下册英语期末专项训练 牛津译林版（含解析）
一、看图作文
1．根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫梅梅，最近和英国笔友Kate通过邮件讨论“有烦恼向谁说”的话题，她想了解你关于这一话题的情况。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
提示词语：understand, same / different, tell, love, help
Kate’s questions:
Dear Kate,
I’m glad to hear from you.___________________________________________
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Yours,
Meimei
2．七中育才学校英语写作俱乐部要举行一个英语写作比赛。请你根据以下海报内容写一篇短文参赛。
要求：
1. 写作内容需包含图片中主要信息。
2. 使用适当的比较级和最高级。
3. 题目自拟。
4. 词数：100 左右。
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3．阅读是同学们未来参与社会应具备的关键能力，无论你喜欢哪种阅读方式，它都能让你增长知识，开阔眼界。最近，某出版社在两万人中，针对人们喜欢的阅读方式做了一项调查，下图是相关的统计结果，其中包括电子阅读和纸质阅读的人数。
请你用两段话写一篇短文：第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容，第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 首句已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it.
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4．根据所给要求，写一篇80词左右的短文。下图是某校对八年级100名学生寒假活动的调查结果。请简要说明图表内容，并结合自身情况，谈谈该如何过一个充实又有意义的寒假。
要求：(1)词数不少于80词； (2)不得出现真实校名和人名。
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5．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Lisa来信说她最近正在学习汉语，在学习过程中遇到"程门立雪"（ Cheng Men Li Xue）这一成语，不解其意，请你根据下面图片提示，用英语给她回信，简要叙述这个成语故事，并谈谈自己的理解和感悟。
要求：
1．语言规范，语句通顺，可适当发挥；
2．字数：100词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计人总词数。
可能用到的词： idiom成语； during the Northern Song Dynasty北宋时期；Cheng Yi程颐； have a nap小憩； disturb打扰； moved感动的； respect尊敬
Dear Lisa,
I'm glad to hear from you．___________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、材料作文
6．盐城有许多历史和文化的旅游景点，如淮剧小镇（Huai Opera Town）、海盐博物馆（Sea Salt Museum）等。假知你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter想了解盐城。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个能了解盐城历史和文化的景点，告诉他在这个景点可以看到什么或者做些什么，以及他需要做什么准备。
提示问题∶
1. Which place do you advise Peter to visit
2. What can he see or do there
3. What preparations does Peter need to do
注意∶
1. 要点齐全，适当发挥，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
2. 词数 90词左右（已给出的自荐信开头不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关学生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
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7．“五一”将至，我校英语校刊正向全校师生征集来稿，主题为“如何度过一个充实的五一假期”。请你根据以下要点提示与要求，以“My plans for the May Day holiday”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
on the first day 待在家里努力学习；完成作业；复习功课等。
in the following three days 和父母去北京，参观长城、天安门广场(Tian’anmen Square)、故宫(the Palace Museum)，品尝北京烤鸭（taste Beijing Roast Duck），购物等。
on the last day 看望祖父母，帮忙干家务等。
要点提示：
要求：
不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
语句连贯，词数80个词左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My plans for the May Day holiday
The May Day holiday is coming.
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8．同学们，寒假即将来临。请根据提示，写一篇文章介绍你的寒假计划。
Life 1. diet 2. lifestyle
Study 1. reading 2. homework... 3. …learn more about...
Activities 1. play...2. go shopping... 3. have a family party...
Feelings ...
要求：1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，适当发挥；
2. 文章80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等；
5. 可用一般现在时，也可用一般将来时，但只用一种时态。
Winter holiday is coming. I’m glad to tell you my plan for the winter holiday.
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9．良好的生活习惯，对于保持健康很重要，比如：按时吃饭、多吃蔬果、多参加户外运动、多与同学交往、不熬夜等等。请以How To Keep Healthy为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的做法和看法，在英语课上交流。词数70左右(不含已给开头句子)。
注意事项：1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
How To Keep Healthy
Good habits are very important for our health. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．根据下面表格提示，写一篇短文介绍一下你的弟弟麦克。
外表 中等身高、圆脸、大眼睛、短发牛肉面和饺子 踢足球、听音乐
最喜欢的食物
爱好
上周日活动 上午 和朋友踢足球
下午 和父母去海滩
晚上 看了一场电影
要求:语法正确，语句通顺，60词左右。
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三、话题作文
11．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
自律，即自我约束，是自我提升的一种途径，有助于我们成长，促使我们不断前行。
某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。
提示词语：self-disciplined（自律的），plan，goal，habit，improve
提示问题：What did you do to be self-disciplined
What benefits have you got from doing so
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．书面表达
著名作家 Francis曾经说过:“读书使人充实”。阅读对我们的成长有着举足轻重的作用。请你根据下面的信息，以“ Reading makes a full man”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，给出你对阅读的看法和计划。
Why to read to get knowledge, open the mind, learn a foreign language……
What to read textbooks, newspapers, magazines, storybooks……
Your plans reading at least…books in the coming holiday
Reading makes a full man
13．人生的每一次经历都是一种学习和提升。2020年至今新冠肺炎在全球蔓延，我们见证了生命的悲欢离合、见证了齐心协力、见证了希望，这些都带给我们许多思考和启发。以请以“I have learned________”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2.文中不得使用真实的姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
I have learned________
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14．地球上水资源非常丰富，但可供我们用的淡水资源却极度贫乏。水是生命之源，动物、植物、人类都离不开水，地球上就没有生命存在。我们必须节约每一滴水。节约用水是每个人的职责。
请根据以上提示，以How to Save the Water为题写一篇短文。不少于80词。
How to Save the Water
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15．请你以“My trip to _____________”为题，根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文，记叙你的一次旅行。
提示：1. Where did you go
2. What did you do there
3. How did you feel about the trip
要求：1. 在题目横线上填入你的旅行地点。如Beijing，Jinan，Qingdao等；
2. 不少于60词。
My trip to _____________
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四、书信作文
16．假设你是李华，你的好朋友Mary想来上海游玩。请用英语给她写一封信，介绍一下上海的天气。
提示：1. 春天有时冷，有时温暖；
2. 夏天很热，最高温度能达到40℃以上；
3. 秋天的天气很好，既不冷，也不热；
4. 冬天不是很冷，并且很少下雪。
要求：1. 内容要包括以上提示，可适当发挥；
2. 70词左右。
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17．书面表达。
假如你叫李平,你想应聘某旅行社的兼职英语导游,请根据提示写一份自荐信。
要点提示:
1.对这份工作很感兴趣。
2.从六月三日到八月三十一日有空。
3.学习英语五年多了。曾经去过英国旅行,并在那里待了两个月。能用英语与人交谈。
4.和老师、同学相处得很好。
5.对城市里的名胜古迹了解很多。
要求:
1.不要逐句翻译。
2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.词数80左右。
参考词汇: English native speakers (以英语为母语的人); travel agent (旅行社)
Dear Sir or Madam,
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ping
18．假如你是李明，请根据下面的内容提示，给你的笔友戴维（David）写一封信，向他倾诉你的烦恼。
内容提示: 你现在很担心昨天的英语考试。因为昨天早晨你睡过头，考试迟到了。又因为时间紧张，做题过程中犯了不少错误，更糟糕的是没能完全理解书面表达的主题，所以你担心自己不能通过这次考试。
词数要求: 80～100，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
We had an English exam yesterday.
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Now I’m very afraid I couldn’t pass the exam. I’m really upset.
Yours，
Li Mng
19．孔子云：“三人行必有我师焉。”你的英国笔友Jack不明白这句话的意思，写信向你咨询。假如你是李华，请你向Jack解释这句话的含义。
内容提示：1. 用自己的一个实际经历说明这句话的含义；
2. 这句话给你的启示。
写作要求：1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your letter. I’m very glad to tell you about the Chinese saying “Among any three people walking, I will find something to learn for sure.” _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Li Hua
20．假如你是李华，你收到了好友Tom的一封来信。他在信中向你倾诉了在新学校没有朋友的烦恼。请你用英语给Tom写封回信，给他提供一些交友建议，并表达美好祝愿。
A letter to Tom 1.分享：分享美食、书籍……分享有趣的事2.互助：乐于帮助他人，遇上困难向他人寻求帮助 3.信任：不说别人的坏话，能保守秘密
祝愿：……
注意：1.词数在80﹣100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数；
2.回信须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear from you. You told me that you haven’t made a friend in the new school. I hope the following advice can help you.
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All the best,
Li
参考答案：
1．Possible version:
Dear Kate,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know most students will go to their classmates or friends when they are in trouble, because they can talk with each other and understand each other easily. But I’m different from them. If I’m in trouble, I’ll tell my parents or my teachers because they are older than my classmates or friends, so they have richer experiences. What’s more, they love me all the time and I know they are always ready to help me out.
In my opinion, everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So it’s a good idea to ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help.
Yours,
Meimei
【详解】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用到条件状语从句（从句：一般现在时；主句：一般将来时）比较多，所以在写作时，要注意时态的的变化。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: hear from；be in trouble；be different from；So it’s a good idea to ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
考点：图表作文。
2．例文：
My Hometown Chengdu
My hometown Chengdu is a wonderful place located in Sichuan province, which has a long history. With rich cultural heritage, Chengdu is one of the most popular destinations for tourists in China.
There are many famous scenic spots such as Jinli, Kuanzhai Street, Tianfu Square and Chengdu Panda Base. There also stands Du Fu’s Thatched Cottage, the Temple of Zhu Geliang and some other places of historical interest. Among them, my must-go place is Kuanzhai Street. Because I can not only walk on the ancient streets but also buy something in traditional houses or stores there. I nearly go there three to four times a month. Besides, as Chengdu people are fond of eating, they have created many delicious food such as Zhong Boiled Dumplings, Dandan Noodles, Lai Tangyuan and some others. If you come here, don’t miss the must-try food, Dandan Noodles. Because the gravy of the noodles is really special and delicious. I eat Dandan Noodles almost every day. Furthermore, watching a Sichuan Opera Show will also provide you with unforgettable and precious memories. The delicate face-changing in Sichuan Opera has become a symbol of Sichuan culture. At the same time, Chengdu also has comfortable weather for people who live there. Even the weather in winter is still warmer than many other cities in China.
I love Chengdu and I hope that my hometown will get more and more beautiful!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于提纲类看图作文，根据题中海报提示内容进行写作。第一段总起全文，总的介绍成都的地理位置及总体情况。第二段分别叙述成都的必去景点、必吃小吃、成都的标志等，并适当进行拓展。第三段表达对成都的期待和祝福。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来叙述，用第一人称表达感受，用第三人称介绍成都的各个方面情况。本文主要以一般现在时为主，注意第三人称单数的正确运用。写作中要特别注意，题干要求适当涉及比较级和最高级的运用。
3．例文
Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it.
60% of the people like to read on mobile phones or e-readers, while only 38.4% choose to read paper books. So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. However, whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes.
As for me, I am still used to reading paper books. Whenever I open a paper book, the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid. Just because of this, I got into the habit of reading. So when I read paper books now, they always bring me the old feelings. On the other hand, compared with the electronic devices, reading paper books is good for eyes. So you see, I believe e-books won’t take the place of paper books in my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生要注意要点中的“从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式”来谈谈这种阅读方式的好处，这是本篇写作的重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明图表内容；
第二步，从图表中选出一项自己喜欢的阅读方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① more and more 越来越多
② increase 增长
③ as for 关于，至于
④ remind sb. of 使某人想起……
⑤ compared with 与……相比较
[高分句型]
① So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books.（prefer to do sth. rather than do sth. 宁愿做某事而不愿做某事）
② whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes. （whatever引导的让步状语从句）
4．例文
A school did a survey among 100 students about their activities for winter holidays. Here are the results.
16 percent of the students learned a new skill, such as cooking, tidying the room and so on. They think these basic skills can help them develop their independence. 22 percent of the students helped their family like doing housework. Their parents felt happy to see their children’s changes. 62 percent of the students played for fun such as watching TV, travelling and so on. As for me, I did community volunteer work during the winter holiday. How can we spend a meaningful holiday
First, we should learn some basic skills. Second, we should keep exercising to stay healthy. Last but not least, we can take up some hobbies. So you can live a meaningful and enjoyable holiday.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示材料介绍学生们的寒假活动以及如何度过一个有意义的寒假，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍学生们的寒假活动以及自己的寒假活动；
第三步，介绍如何度过一个有意义的寒假；
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②as for至于
③take up开始从事
[高分句型]
① Here are the results.（倒装句）
② Second, we should keep exercising to stay healthy （动词不定式作目的状语）
5．Dear Lisa,
I'm glad to hear from you. I am very happy that you have great interest in learning Chinese. Let me tell you the story about the idiom Cheng Men Li Xue.
It is a story during the Northern Song Dynasty. There was a student called Yangshi. He had a confused problem. He wanted to ask famous teacher Cheng Yi. When he arrived his house, the teacher was having a nap. So the page boy asked Yangshi to visit the teacher another time. But Yangshi refused. Suddenly it started snowing. The page boy asked him to come in and wait in the house since it was very cold. However, Yangshi stood in front of the gate. Even later it snowed heavily. After the teacher finished all the things, Yangshi still stood in the snow. Then the teacher asked him, “Why not come another day How silly you are!”. Yangshi said, “I have learned something from you, I can't disturb you, and I must show my respect for you”. Finally, Cheng Yi was moved by Yangshi's action and taught him a lot.
It shows us that we should show our respect to our teachers. Hope it will help you to understand.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】这是一篇看图作文，要求我们根据图示给自己的英国笔友Lisa写信，给她解释“程门立雪”这个成语的含义。写作前，应仔细观察图片，弄清楚图片中发生的事情，然后用英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇文章的主要内容应包括：首先引入Lisa学习中遇到的问题，点明写这封信的目的；然后重点是解释该成语的含义，根据图片提示进行表达；最后谈一谈自己对这个成语的理解和感悟。短文中开头和结尾部分应使用一般现在时态；主体部分用一般过去时，注意谓语动词的正确形式，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化。写作时应注意：首先应将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在内，包括题目中给出的提示词，在写作时应用上。注意分清结构和层次，叙述应清晰、有条理。其次应注意英语的表达问题，在词序以及表达上英语与汉语有很多不同的地方，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从整句话的结构出发，选择适当的句型、词汇和短语进行表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句以及复合句，为提升作文档次，可使用被动语态、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使上下文意连贯，表达自然、流畅。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Lisa写信解释了“程门立雪”这一成语的含义。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容丰富，结构清晰。短文分成三段，每一段的中心都很明确：第一段点明Lisa在学习中遇到的问题和自己写信的目的；第二段是主体段，介绍了该成语背后的故事；第三段简单谈论了自己对这个成语的理解。层次分明、叙述清晰、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，符合表达需要。用词准确，语言得体；句式结构完整，以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、状语从句、宾语从句等复合句句式以及非谓语动词等结构，调整了文章节奏。短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如I am very happy that you have great interest in learning Chinese.、When he arrived his house, the teacher was having a nap.、The page boy asked him to come in and wait in the house since it was very cold.、After the teacher finished all the things, Yangshi still stood in the snow.、Yangshi said, “I have learned something from you, I can't disturb you, and I must show my respect for you”.、It shows us that we should show our respect to our teachers等等。
6．例文：
Dear Peter,
How is everything going You told me that you want to know more about Yancheng. I think that a museum is a good place for someone to know the history of a city. Now let me tell you about Sea Salt Museum in Yancheng.
In the museum, you can see a lot of cultural relics. All kinds of salt lie on the plates. There you can know the history of “salt culture”, which is also the history of Yancheng. And there you can also know the process about making salt in the museum by looking through the statues, display panels and sandboxes. Of course, you can also ask for a guide to tell you more about the museum.
Before going to the museum, you can log in its website to have a better understanding about the museum and plan your routine.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，形式是一封邮件，要求介绍盐城的景点，以帮助笔友了解盐城的历史和文化；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意围绕提示来展开，并注意适当补充和发挥，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意行文逻辑和连贯性，并注意邮件的格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，要介绍海盐博物馆；
第二步，具体介绍可以在博物馆看到和了解的事情，需要围绕盐城的历史和文化来展开；
第三步，结尾告诉可以需要做的准备。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of大量的
②cultural relics文物
③all kinds of各种各样的
④look through浏览
[高分句型]
①You told me that you want to know more about Yancheng.（宾语从句）
②And there you can also know the process about making salt in the museum by looking through the statues, display panels and sandboxes.（介词短语作后置定语和方式状语）
7．例文
My plans for the May Day holiday
The May Day holiday is coming. Here are my plans for it.
On the first day, I’m going to stay at home and work very hard. I plan to finish my homework first and then go over lessons. In the following three days, my parents and I are going on a trip to Beijing. We are going to visit the Great Wall and take some nice photos. Then we are going to Tian’anmen Square and the Palace Museum. We are also going to taste Beijing Roast Duck and do some shopping. I think it is going to be a fantastic trip. On the last day, I am going to visit my grandparents and help them do housework.They are sure to be happy.
The May Day holiday is a great time to do something meaningful. I’m looking forward to its coming.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，要求介绍自己的五一假期计划
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主
③提示：题目要求根据提示要点提示介绍自己的五一假期计划，写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，开门见山，引出主题。（原文已给出）
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍自己的五一假期计划。
第三步，最后表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①go over复习
②go on a trip to到……的旅行
③do some shopping购物
[高分句型]
①On the first day, I’m going to stay at home and work very hard.（用be going to句型表示计划）
②I think it is going to be a fantastic trip.（省略that的宾语从句）
8．例文
Winter holiday is coming. I’m glad to tell you my plan for the winter holiday.
First, I will get up at 8:00 in the morning. Then I will eat healthy food and do a lot of exercise every day. Second, as a student, I will remember to do some reading and do some homework every day. I’m also going to learn more about protecting the Earth on the Internet or in the library. Finally, I will go out to play football with my friends. It’ll be good for our health. When the Spring Festival comes, I will go shopping with my parents. We will have a big family dinner and celebrate the Spring Festival together.
I think I will have a busy and happy winter holiday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求包含提供的所有信息，注意时态。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，引出下文；
第二步，具体从生活，学习，活动几个方面介绍自己的寒假计划；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①remember to do sth记得要做某事
②be good for对……有好处
③do a lot of exercise 做大量锻炼
[高分句型]
①When the Spring Festival comes, I will go shopping with my parents. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think I will have a busy and happy winter holiday. (I think后跟宾语从句)
9．A possible version
How To Keep Healthy
Good habits are very important for our health. First, get up early and go to bed early. Don’t stay up late into night. It’s bad for us. Second, do more exercise. Exercising can keep us active all day. It can build us up. Third, eat more vegetables and fruit. Don’t have too much fast food. Fourth, drink more water instead of juice. Coke can make us fat and we should say no to it.
All of these suggestions are good for our health. If we follow them, we’ll have a healthy life.
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：本文时态是一般现在时；
③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：从四点去谈论如何保持健康，早睡早起、做锻炼、多吃蔬菜和水果以及多喝水；
第二步：总结以上四点建议。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late熬夜
②be bad for对……有害
③build up强身健体
④instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①Exercising can keep us active all day. （动名词作主语）
②Third, eat more vegetables and fruit.（祈使句）
③If we follow them, we’ll have a healthy life.（if条件从句）
10．I have a brother, his name is Mike. He is of medium height. He has a round face and two big eyes with short hair. Beef noodles and dumplings are his favorite. He likes playing football and listening to music. He thinks they are relaxing.
Last Sunday morning, he played football with his friends. In the afternoon, he went to the beach with our parents. They played volleyball there. In the evening, he went to the cinema. The movie was interesting.
All in all, he had a good time on that day.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍一下你的弟弟麦克。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍你的弟弟麦克的性格、喜好以及他上周日的活动；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
11．参考范文：
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school. And I could not only respect all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the tasks, I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early. In the society, I spared no effort to improve myself all the time.
In a word, I have benefited a lot from being self-disciplined. First of all, I have had many good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been to high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。要求以“自律”为题，根据提示内容叙述并进行适当拓展。
2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称写作，综合运用一般现在时和一般过去时。在写作时第一段写为了增强自律意识，做过什么；第二段详述这样做带来的好处。写作时注意语句通顺、语法正确、语意完整。
12．Reading makes a full man
Reading is very important in our life. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our mind but also make us cleverer. Besides, reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English.
Textbooks, newspapers, magazines, storybooks and other kinds of reading materials can help us know more about the outside world and help us grow into excellent persons.
I’m planning to read at least two books in the coming holiday. And I’ll spend more time reading every day during my senior high school. Reading makes a full man! Let’s start reading now.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于命题作文，写出对阅读的看法和计划，第一段写为什么读书；第二段是读什么书；第三段是你的计划是什么。
2.例文点评：文中给出要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in our life；get knowledge through reading.；not only…but also…
句型：reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English.;
I’m planning to read at least two books in the coming holiday.用到了现在进行时。
13．例文
I have learned a life lesson
In 2020, COVID-19 spread in China and around the world. I have seen many things and they taught me an unforgettable life lesson.
There were many other medical workers who worked selflessly under masks and protective clothes. When we were enjoying the Spring Festival holiday at home, they gave up the time with their families and returned to work. They fought against the disease and gave us confidence. From them, I learned to be brave and confident. What’s more, I also learned we should work together. Don’t complain. What we have to do is to protect ourselves and prepare for tomorrow.
Winter is coming. Can spring be far behind
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“我学到的一堂生活课”为题，写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段讲述自己在疫情期间的所见所感；最后一段发表自己的希望和期待。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
14．例文：
How to Save the Water
Everyone knows water is very important. Without water, human activities would be impossible. Without water, rivers have been polluted because of more and more factories. People usually dump water into rivers, there is less and less clean water for people to use.
We should take action to protect water. First, we can let people know the importance of protecting water resources. We can also prevent factories and people from throwing rubbish into rivers. What’s more, we should save water such as turning off the taps in time in our daily lives.
Only if everyone takes action, we can surely solve the big water problem.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。根据以上提示，以“How to Save the Water”为题写一篇不少于80词的短文。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来叙述故事内容，时态采用一般现在时为主；写作时可以分段进行描述，第一段写为什么要节约用水；第二段写需要怎么做，采取什么行动；最后一段则号召大家从自我做起，保护水源；写作时要有逻辑性。文章整体要通顺连贯，无语法和标点错误。
15．例文：
My trip to Beijing
I went to Beijing by train with my family last summer vacation.
I visited many famous places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace museum and the Bird’s Nest. I took a lot of photos with my camera. I met some foreigners and I talked with them in English. I ate Beijing roast duck, it was very delicious.
I felt a little tired but I was very happy.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。要求根据英文提示和要求写一篇英语短文，叙述自己的一次旅行经历，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来叙述；时态上在叙述经历时用一般过去时。写作时可适当使用一些副词和连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，结构清晰，表达具有条理性。
16．例文
Dear Mary,
I’m glad that you will come to Shanghai. Now let me tell you the weather here.
In spring, the weather is changeable. Sometimes it’s cold, and sometimes it’s warm. In summer, it becomes very hot. The highest temperature can be over 40℃. The autumn in Shanghai is very nice. It’s neither cold nor hot. The winter in Shanghai isn’t very cold. It seldom snows. But most of the children here look forward to a white Christmas.
That’s the weather of Shanghai. I look forward to seeing you in Shanghai.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，看门见山，交代写作目的——介绍上海的天气；
第二步，具体介绍上海一年的天气；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己对Mary到来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①neither...nor...既不……也不……
[高分句型]
①I’m glad that you will come to Shanghai.（宾语从句）
17．Dear Sir or Madam,
I learn that you need a part-time English tour guide. I am interested in the job. I will be free from June 3 to August 31. I have studied English for more than five years. I have been to England and I have stayed there for two months. I can talk with English native speakers. And I always get along well with my teachers and classmates. Also I know a lot about many places of interest in our city. If I get the chance to work for your travel agent, I am sure I will be an excellent tour guide. I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】根据内容提示可知，本篇作文主要包括三个方面的内容，首先表达自己的工作意向，然后指出自己的空闲时间，接着表达自己对于做这份工作的优势。时态为一般现在时及一般将来时。本文首先开篇点题I learn that you need a part-time English tour guide. I am interested in the job.指出自己的意愿，然后说出自己的空闲时间，接着列举出自己的优势所在，I have studied English…., I always get along well with my teachers and classmates.等最后表达出自己的决心和希望If I get the chance to work for your travel agent, I am sure I will……整篇文章思路清晰，词语运用正确，并且also….and….if….等连词的使用，使文章也不乏连贯性。
18．例文：
Dear David,
We had an English exam yesterday. Now I feel very worried because I don’t think I did well in it.
First, I arrived late for the exam because I overslept in the morning. When I got to the classroom, the exam had been on for half an hour. So I hurried to do the exam. After the exam I realized that I had made a lot of mistakes in it. Terribly, I was unable to fully understand the writing part.
Now I’m very afraid I couldn’t pass the exam. I’m really upset.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以李明的身份给笔友戴维（David）写一封信，向他倾诉自己的烦恼的原因。注意，写作时要根据题目所给的内容提示。
2.写作指导：因为文中是对过去事情的叙述，故时态上以一般过去时为主。根据内容提示，把自己的烦恼的原因倾诉给笔友（David），另外，为了句子连贯、上下文联系紧密，可适当发挥，增加些副词。
19．例文：
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your letter. I’m very glad to tell you about the Chinese saying “Among any three people walking, I will find something to learn for sure.” Each of us has advantages, so we can learn from the people around us. My best friend Lily is such a “teacher” who teaches me a lot.
Last week, I had difficulty solving a math problem. She explained it to me again and again until I understood. She is very patient. She is also very careful. She thinks that details determine success or failure and always reminds me to do self-examination. She always plans what needs to be done ahead of time. She sets a good example for me and helps me to make a good plan.
With such a teacher by my side, I’m getting better and better.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文要求以李华的名义，给Jack写一篇短文，根据自己的经历向他解释“三人行必有我师焉”的含义。
2. 写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称进行写作；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；文章分为三段式：第一段承接所给句子，阐述“三人行必有我师焉”的含义，点题。第二段举例说明Lily是自己的朋友也是“老师”。第三段总结全文。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误，要正确使用好两种时态。
20．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear from you. You told me that you haven’t made a friend in the new school. I hope the following advice can help you.
First of all, we should know how to share. We can share delicious food, books and interesting things with others. Sharing can give us pleasure. Second, we should be helpful. When we are in trouble, we should help each other. We should be willing to help others and seek help from others in case of difficulties. Finally, we can’t say bad words about others so that we can get well on each other. We should keep secrets.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
All the best,
Li
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。向Tom提出一些交友的建议。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段提出三条建议；最后一点表达祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，做到无语法和标点错误。
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专题10 书面表达 八年级下册英语期末专项训练 牛津译林版（含解析）
一、看图作文
1．根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫梅梅，最近和英国笔友Kate通过邮件讨论“有烦恼向谁说”的话题，她想了解你关于这一话题的情况。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
提示词语：understand, same / different, tell, love, help
Kate’s questions:
Dear Kate,
I’m glad to hear from you.___________________________________________
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Yours,
Meimei
2．七中育才学校英语写作俱乐部要举行一个英语写作比赛。请你根据以下海报内容写一篇短文参赛。
要求：
1. 写作内容需包含图片中主要信息。
2. 使用适当的比较级和最高级。
3. 题目自拟。
4. 词数：100 左右。
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3．阅读是同学们未来参与社会应具备的关键能力，无论你喜欢哪种阅读方式，它都能让你增长知识，开阔眼界。最近，某出版社在两万人中，针对人们喜欢的阅读方式做了一项调查，下图是相关的统计结果，其中包括电子阅读和纸质阅读的人数。
请你用两段话写一篇短文：第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容，第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 首句已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it.
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4．根据所给要求，写一篇80词左右的短文。下图是某校对八年级100名学生寒假活动的调查结果。请简要说明图表内容，并结合自身情况，谈谈该如何过一个充实又有意义的寒假。
要求：(1)词数不少于80词； (2)不得出现真实校名和人名。
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5．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Lisa来信说她最近正在学习汉语，在学习过程中遇到"程门立雪"（ Cheng Men Li Xue）这一成语，不解其意，请你根据下面图片提示，用英语给她回信，简要叙述这个成语故事，并谈谈自己的理解和感悟。
要求：
1．语言规范，语句通顺，可适当发挥；
2．字数：100词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计人总词数。
可能用到的词： idiom成语； during the Northern Song Dynasty北宋时期；Cheng Yi程颐； have a nap小憩； disturb打扰； moved感动的； respect尊敬
Dear Lisa,
I'm glad to hear from you．___________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、材料作文
6．盐城有许多历史和文化的旅游景点，如淮剧小镇（Huai Opera Town）、海盐博物馆（Sea Salt Museum）等。假知你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter想了解盐城。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个能了解盐城历史和文化的景点，告诉他在这个景点可以看到什么或者做些什么，以及他需要做什么准备。
提示问题∶
1. Which place do you advise Peter to visit
2. What can he see or do there
3. What preparations does Peter need to do
注意∶
1. 要点齐全，适当发挥，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
2. 词数 90词左右（已给出的自荐信开头不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关学生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
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7．“五一”将至，我校英语校刊正向全校师生征集来稿，主题为“如何度过一个充实的五一假期”。请你根据以下要点提示与要求，以“My plans for the May Day holiday”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
on the first day 待在家里努力学习；完成作业；复习功课等。
in the following three days 和父母去北京，参观长城、天安门广场(Tian’anmen Square)、故宫(the Palace Museum)，品尝北京烤鸭（taste Beijing Roast Duck），购物等。
on the last day 看望祖父母，帮忙干家务等。
要点提示：
要求：
不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
语句连贯，词数80个词左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My plans for the May Day holiday
The May Day holiday is coming.
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8．同学们，寒假即将来临。请根据提示，写一篇文章介绍你的寒假计划。
Life 1. diet 2. lifestyle
Study 1. reading 2. homework... 3. …learn more about...
Activities 1. play...2. go shopping... 3. have a family party...
Feelings ...
要求：1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，适当发挥；
2. 文章80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等；
5. 可用一般现在时，也可用一般将来时，但只用一种时态。
Winter holiday is coming. I’m glad to tell you my plan for the winter holiday.
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9．良好的生活习惯，对于保持健康很重要，比如：按时吃饭、多吃蔬果、多参加户外运动、多与同学交往、不熬夜等等。请以How To Keep Healthy为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的做法和看法，在英语课上交流。词数70左右(不含已给开头句子)。
注意事项：1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
How To Keep Healthy
Good habits are very important for our health. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．根据下面表格提示，写一篇短文介绍一下你的弟弟麦克。
外表 中等身高、圆脸、大眼睛、短发牛肉面和饺子 踢足球、听音乐
最喜欢的食物
爱好
上周日活动 上午 和朋友踢足球
下午 和父母去海滩
晚上 看了一场电影
要求:语法正确，语句通顺，60词左右。
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三、话题作文
11．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
自律，即自我约束，是自我提升的一种途径，有助于我们成长，促使我们不断前行。
某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。
提示词语：self-disciplined（自律的），plan，goal，habit，improve
提示问题：What did you do to be self-disciplined
What benefits have you got from doing so
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．书面表达
著名作家 Francis曾经说过:“读书使人充实”。阅读对我们的成长有着举足轻重的作用。请你根据下面的信息，以“ Reading makes a full man”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，给出你对阅读的看法和计划。
Why to read to get knowledge, open the mind, learn a foreign language……
What to read textbooks, newspapers, magazines, storybooks……
Your plans reading at least…books in the coming holiday
Reading makes a full man
13．人生的每一次经历都是一种学习和提升。2020年至今新冠肺炎在全球蔓延，我们见证了生命的悲欢离合、见证了齐心协力、见证了希望，这些都带给我们许多思考和启发。以请以“I have learned________”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2.文中不得使用真实的姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
I have learned________
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14．地球上水资源非常丰富，但可供我们用的淡水资源却极度贫乏。水是生命之源，动物、植物、人类都离不开水，地球上就没有生命存在。我们必须节约每一滴水。节约用水是每个人的职责。
请根据以上提示，以How to Save the Water为题写一篇短文。不少于80词。
How to Save the Water
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15．请你以“My trip to _____________”为题，根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文，记叙你的一次旅行。
提示：1. Where did you go
2. What did you do there
3. How did you feel about the trip
要求：1. 在题目横线上填入你的旅行地点。如Beijing，Jinan，Qingdao等；
2. 不少于60词。
My trip to _____________
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四、书信作文
16．假设你是李华，你的好朋友Mary想来上海游玩。请用英语给她写一封信，介绍一下上海的天气。
提示：1. 春天有时冷，有时温暖；
2. 夏天很热，最高温度能达到40℃以上；
3. 秋天的天气很好，既不冷，也不热；
4. 冬天不是很冷，并且很少下雪。
要求：1. 内容要包括以上提示，可适当发挥；
2. 70词左右。
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17．书面表达。
假如你叫李平,你想应聘某旅行社的兼职英语导游,请根据提示写一份自荐信。
要点提示:
1.对这份工作很感兴趣。
2.从六月三日到八月三十一日有空。
3.学习英语五年多了。曾经去过英国旅行,并在那里待了两个月。能用英语与人交谈。
4.和老师、同学相处得很好。
5.对城市里的名胜古迹了解很多。
要求:
1.不要逐句翻译。
2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.词数80左右。
参考词汇: English native speakers (以英语为母语的人); travel agent (旅行社)
Dear Sir or Madam,
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ping
18．假如你是李明，请根据下面的内容提示，给你的笔友戴维（David）写一封信，向他倾诉你的烦恼。
内容提示: 你现在很担心昨天的英语考试。因为昨天早晨你睡过头，考试迟到了。又因为时间紧张，做题过程中犯了不少错误，更糟糕的是没能完全理解书面表达的主题，所以你担心自己不能通过这次考试。
词数要求: 80～100，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
We had an English exam yesterday.
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Now I’m very afraid I couldn’t pass the exam. I’m really upset.
Yours，
Li Mng
19．孔子云：“三人行必有我师焉。”你的英国笔友Jack不明白这句话的意思，写信向你咨询。假如你是李华，请你向Jack解释这句话的含义。
内容提示：1. 用自己的一个实际经历说明这句话的含义；
2. 这句话给你的启示。
写作要求：1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your letter. I’m very glad to tell you about the Chinese saying “Among any three people walking, I will find something to learn for sure.” _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Li Hua
20．假如你是李华，你收到了好友Tom的一封来信。他在信中向你倾诉了在新学校没有朋友的烦恼。请你用英语给Tom写封回信，给他提供一些交友建议，并表达美好祝愿。
A letter to Tom 1.分享：分享美食、书籍……分享有趣的事2.互助：乐于帮助他人，遇上困难向他人寻求帮助 3.信任：不说别人的坏话，能保守秘密
祝愿：……
注意：1.词数在80﹣100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数；
2.回信须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear from you. You told me that you haven’t made a friend in the new school. I hope the following advice can help you.
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All the best,
Li
参考答案：
1．Possible version:
Dear Kate,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know most students will go to their classmates or friends when they are in trouble, because they can talk with each other and understand each other easily. But I’m different from them. If I’m in trouble, I’ll tell my parents or my teachers because they are older than my classmates or friends, so they have richer experiences. What’s more, they love me all the time and I know they are always ready to help me out.
In my opinion, everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So it’s a good idea to ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help.
Yours,
Meimei
【详解】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用到条件状语从句（从句：一般现在时；主句：一般将来时）比较多，所以在写作时，要注意时态的的变化。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: hear from；be in trouble；be different from；So it’s a good idea to ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
考点：图表作文。
2．例文：
My Hometown Chengdu
My hometown Chengdu is a wonderful place located in Sichuan province, which has a long history. With rich cultural heritage, Chengdu is one of the most popular destinations for tourists in China.
There are many famous scenic spots such as Jinli, Kuanzhai Street, Tianfu Square and Chengdu Panda Base. There also stands Du Fu’s Thatched Cottage, the Temple of Zhu Geliang and some other places of historical interest. Among them, my must-go place is Kuanzhai Street. Because I can not only walk on the ancient streets but also buy something in traditional houses or stores there. I nearly go there three to four times a month. Besides, as Chengdu people are fond of eating, they have created many delicious food such as Zhong Boiled Dumplings, Dandan Noodles, Lai Tangyuan and some others. If you come here, don’t miss the must-try food, Dandan Noodles. Because the gravy of the noodles is really special and delicious. I eat Dandan Noodles almost every day. Furthermore, watching a Sichuan Opera Show will also provide you with unforgettable and precious memories. The delicate face-changing in Sichuan Opera has become a symbol of Sichuan culture. At the same time, Chengdu also has comfortable weather for people who live there. Even the weather in winter is still warmer than many other cities in China.
I love Chengdu and I hope that my hometown will get more and more beautiful!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于提纲类看图作文，根据题中海报提示内容进行写作。第一段总起全文，总的介绍成都的地理位置及总体情况。第二段分别叙述成都的必去景点、必吃小吃、成都的标志等，并适当进行拓展。第三段表达对成都的期待和祝福。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来叙述，用第一人称表达感受，用第三人称介绍成都的各个方面情况。本文主要以一般现在时为主，注意第三人称单数的正确运用。写作中要特别注意，题干要求适当涉及比较级和最高级的运用。
3．例文
Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it.
60% of the people like to read on mobile phones or e-readers, while only 38.4% choose to read paper books. So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. However, whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes.
As for me, I am still used to reading paper books. Whenever I open a paper book, the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid. Just because of this, I got into the habit of reading. So when I read paper books now, they always bring me the old feelings. On the other hand, compared with the electronic devices, reading paper books is good for eyes. So you see, I believe e-books won’t take the place of paper books in my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生要注意要点中的“从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式”来谈谈这种阅读方式的好处，这是本篇写作的重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明图表内容；
第二步，从图表中选出一项自己喜欢的阅读方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① more and more 越来越多
② increase 增长
③ as for 关于，至于
④ remind sb. of 使某人想起……
⑤ compared with 与……相比较
[高分句型]
① So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books.（prefer to do sth. rather than do sth. 宁愿做某事而不愿做某事）
② whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes. （whatever引导的让步状语从句）
4．例文
A school did a survey among 100 students about their activities for winter holidays. Here are the results.
16 percent of the students learned a new skill, such as cooking, tidying the room and so on. They think these basic skills can help them develop their independence. 22 percent of the students helped their family like doing housework. Their parents felt happy to see their children’s changes. 62 percent of the students played for fun such as watching TV, travelling and so on. As for me, I did community volunteer work during the winter holiday. How can we spend a meaningful holiday
First, we should learn some basic skills. Second, we should keep exercising to stay healthy. Last but not least, we can take up some hobbies. So you can live a meaningful and enjoyable holiday.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示材料介绍学生们的寒假活动以及如何度过一个有意义的寒假，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍学生们的寒假活动以及自己的寒假活动；
第三步，介绍如何度过一个有意义的寒假；
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②as for至于
③take up开始从事
[高分句型]
① Here are the results.（倒装句）
② Second, we should keep exercising to stay healthy （动词不定式作目的状语）
5．Dear Lisa,
I'm glad to hear from you. I am very happy that you have great interest in learning Chinese. Let me tell you the story about the idiom Cheng Men Li Xue.
It is a story during the Northern Song Dynasty. There was a student called Yangshi. He had a confused problem. He wanted to ask famous teacher Cheng Yi. When he arrived his house, the teacher was having a nap. So the page boy asked Yangshi to visit the teacher another time. But Yangshi refused. Suddenly it started snowing. The page boy asked him to come in and wait in the house since it was very cold. However, Yangshi stood in front of the gate. Even later it snowed heavily. After the teacher finished all the things, Yangshi still stood in the snow. Then the teacher asked him, “Why not come another day How silly you are!”. Yangshi said, “I have learned something from you, I can't disturb you, and I must show my respect for you”. Finally, Cheng Yi was moved by Yangshi's action and taught him a lot.
It shows us that we should show our respect to our teachers. Hope it will help you to understand.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】这是一篇看图作文，要求我们根据图示给自己的英国笔友Lisa写信，给她解释“程门立雪”这个成语的含义。写作前，应仔细观察图片，弄清楚图片中发生的事情，然后用英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇文章的主要内容应包括：首先引入Lisa学习中遇到的问题，点明写这封信的目的；然后重点是解释该成语的含义，根据图片提示进行表达；最后谈一谈自己对这个成语的理解和感悟。短文中开头和结尾部分应使用一般现在时态；主体部分用一般过去时，注意谓语动词的正确形式，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化。写作时应注意：首先应将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在内，包括题目中给出的提示词，在写作时应用上。注意分清结构和层次，叙述应清晰、有条理。其次应注意英语的表达问题，在词序以及表达上英语与汉语有很多不同的地方，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从整句话的结构出发，选择适当的句型、词汇和短语进行表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句以及复合句，为提升作文档次，可使用被动语态、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使上下文意连贯，表达自然、流畅。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Lisa写信解释了“程门立雪”这一成语的含义。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容丰富，结构清晰。短文分成三段，每一段的中心都很明确：第一段点明Lisa在学习中遇到的问题和自己写信的目的；第二段是主体段，介绍了该成语背后的故事；第三段简单谈论了自己对这个成语的理解。层次分明、叙述清晰、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，符合表达需要。用词准确，语言得体；句式结构完整，以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、状语从句、宾语从句等复合句句式以及非谓语动词等结构，调整了文章节奏。短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如I am very happy that you have great interest in learning Chinese.、When he arrived his house, the teacher was having a nap.、The page boy asked him to come in and wait in the house since it was very cold.、After the teacher finished all the things, Yangshi still stood in the snow.、Yangshi said, “I have learned something from you, I can't disturb you, and I must show my respect for you”.、It shows us that we should show our respect to our teachers等等。
6．例文：
Dear Peter,
How is everything going You told me that you want to know more about Yancheng. I think that a museum is a good place for someone to know the history of a city. Now let me tell you about Sea Salt Museum in Yancheng.
In the museum, you can see a lot of cultural relics. All kinds of salt lie on the plates. There you can know the history of “salt culture”, which is also the history of Yancheng. And there you can also know the process about making salt in the museum by looking through the statues, display panels and sandboxes. Of course, you can also ask for a guide to tell you more about the museum.
Before going to the museum, you can log in its website to have a better understanding about the museum and plan your routine.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，形式是一封邮件，要求介绍盐城的景点，以帮助笔友了解盐城的历史和文化；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意围绕提示来展开，并注意适当补充和发挥，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意行文逻辑和连贯性，并注意邮件的格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，要介绍海盐博物馆；
第二步，具体介绍可以在博物馆看到和了解的事情，需要围绕盐城的历史和文化来展开；
第三步，结尾告诉可以需要做的准备。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of大量的
②cultural relics文物
③all kinds of各种各样的
④look through浏览
[高分句型]
①You told me that you want to know more about Yancheng.（宾语从句）
②And there you can also know the process about making salt in the museum by looking through the statues, display panels and sandboxes.（介词短语作后置定语和方式状语）
7．例文
My plans for the May Day holiday
The May Day holiday is coming. Here are my plans for it.
On the first day, I’m going to stay at home and work very hard. I plan to finish my homework first and then go over lessons. In the following three days, my parents and I are going on a trip to Beijing. We are going to visit the Great Wall and take some nice photos. Then we are going to Tian’anmen Square and the Palace Museum. We are also going to taste Beijing Roast Duck and do some shopping. I think it is going to be a fantastic trip. On the last day, I am going to visit my grandparents and help them do housework.They are sure to be happy.
The May Day holiday is a great time to do something meaningful. I’m looking forward to its coming.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，要求介绍自己的五一假期计划
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主
③提示：题目要求根据提示要点提示介绍自己的五一假期计划，写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，开门见山，引出主题。（原文已给出）
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍自己的五一假期计划。
第三步，最后表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①go over复习
②go on a trip to到……的旅行
③do some shopping购物
[高分句型]
①On the first day, I’m going to stay at home and work very hard.（用be going to句型表示计划）
②I think it is going to be a fantastic trip.（省略that的宾语从句）
8．例文
Winter holiday is coming. I’m glad to tell you my plan for the winter holiday.
First, I will get up at 8:00 in the morning. Then I will eat healthy food and do a lot of exercise every day. Second, as a student, I will remember to do some reading and do some homework every day. I’m also going to learn more about protecting the Earth on the Internet or in the library. Finally, I will go out to play football with my friends. It’ll be good for our health. When the Spring Festival comes, I will go shopping with my parents. We will have a big family dinner and celebrate the Spring Festival together.
I think I will have a busy and happy winter holiday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求包含提供的所有信息，注意时态。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，引出下文；
第二步，具体从生活，学习，活动几个方面介绍自己的寒假计划；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①remember to do sth记得要做某事
②be good for对……有好处
③do a lot of exercise 做大量锻炼
[高分句型]
①When the Spring Festival comes, I will go shopping with my parents. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think I will have a busy and happy winter holiday. (I think后跟宾语从句)
9．A possible version
How To Keep Healthy
Good habits are very important for our health. First, get up early and go to bed early. Don’t stay up late into night. It’s bad for us. Second, do more exercise. Exercising can keep us active all day. It can build us up. Third, eat more vegetables and fruit. Don’t have too much fast food. Fourth, drink more water instead of juice. Coke can make us fat and we should say no to it.
All of these suggestions are good for our health. If we follow them, we’ll have a healthy life.
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：本文时态是一般现在时；
③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：从四点去谈论如何保持健康，早睡早起、做锻炼、多吃蔬菜和水果以及多喝水；
第二步：总结以上四点建议。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late熬夜
②be bad for对……有害
③build up强身健体
④instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①Exercising can keep us active all day. （动名词作主语）
②Third, eat more vegetables and fruit.（祈使句）
③If we follow them, we’ll have a healthy life.（if条件从句）
10．I have a brother, his name is Mike. He is of medium height. He has a round face and two big eyes with short hair. Beef noodles and dumplings are his favorite. He likes playing football and listening to music. He thinks they are relaxing.
Last Sunday morning, he played football with his friends. In the afternoon, he went to the beach with our parents. They played volleyball there. In the evening, he went to the cinema. The movie was interesting.
All in all, he had a good time on that day.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍一下你的弟弟麦克。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍你的弟弟麦克的性格、喜好以及他上周日的活动；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
11．参考范文：
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school. And I could not only respect all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the tasks, I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early. In the society, I spared no effort to improve myself all the time.
In a word, I have benefited a lot from being self-disciplined. First of all, I have had many good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been to high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。要求以“自律”为题，根据提示内容叙述并进行适当拓展。
2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称写作，综合运用一般现在时和一般过去时。在写作时第一段写为了增强自律意识，做过什么；第二段详述这样做带来的好处。写作时注意语句通顺、语法正确、语意完整。
12．Reading makes a full man
Reading is very important in our life. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our mind but also make us cleverer. Besides, reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English.
Textbooks, newspapers, magazines, storybooks and other kinds of reading materials can help us know more about the outside world and help us grow into excellent persons.
I’m planning to read at least two books in the coming holiday. And I’ll spend more time reading every day during my senior high school. Reading makes a full man! Let’s start reading now.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于命题作文，写出对阅读的看法和计划，第一段写为什么读书；第二段是读什么书；第三段是你的计划是什么。
2.例文点评：文中给出要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in our life；get knowledge through reading.；not only…but also…
句型：reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English.;
I’m planning to read at least two books in the coming holiday.用到了现在进行时。
13．例文
I have learned a life lesson
In 2020, COVID-19 spread in China and around the world. I have seen many things and they taught me an unforgettable life lesson.
There were many other medical workers who worked selflessly under masks and protective clothes. When we were enjoying the Spring Festival holiday at home, they gave up the time with their families and returned to work. They fought against the disease and gave us confidence. From them, I learned to be brave and confident. What’s more, I also learned we should work together. Don’t complain. What we have to do is to protect ourselves and prepare for tomorrow.
Winter is coming. Can spring be far behind
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“我学到的一堂生活课”为题，写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段讲述自己在疫情期间的所见所感；最后一段发表自己的希望和期待。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
14．例文：
How to Save the Water
Everyone knows water is very important. Without water, human activities would be impossible. Without water, rivers have been polluted because of more and more factories. People usually dump water into rivers, there is less and less clean water for people to use.
We should take action to protect water. First, we can let people know the importance of protecting water resources. We can also prevent factories and people from throwing rubbish into rivers. What’s more, we should save water such as turning off the taps in time in our daily lives.
Only if everyone takes action, we can surely solve the big water problem.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。根据以上提示，以“How to Save the Water”为题写一篇不少于80词的短文。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来叙述故事内容，时态采用一般现在时为主；写作时可以分段进行描述，第一段写为什么要节约用水；第二段写需要怎么做，采取什么行动；最后一段则号召大家从自我做起，保护水源；写作时要有逻辑性。文章整体要通顺连贯，无语法和标点错误。
15．例文：
My trip to Beijing
I went to Beijing by train with my family last summer vacation.
I visited many famous places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace museum and the Bird’s Nest. I took a lot of photos with my camera. I met some foreigners and I talked with them in English. I ate Beijing roast duck, it was very delicious.
I felt a little tired but I was very happy.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。要求根据英文提示和要求写一篇英语短文，叙述自己的一次旅行经历，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来叙述；时态上在叙述经历时用一般过去时。写作时可适当使用一些副词和连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，结构清晰，表达具有条理性。
16．例文
Dear Mary,
I’m glad that you will come to Shanghai. Now let me tell you the weather here.
In spring, the weather is changeable. Sometimes it’s cold, and sometimes it’s warm. In summer, it becomes very hot. The highest temperature can be over 40℃. The autumn in Shanghai is very nice. It’s neither cold nor hot. The winter in Shanghai isn’t very cold. It seldom snows. But most of the children here look forward to a white Christmas.
That’s the weather of Shanghai. I look forward to seeing you in Shanghai.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，看门见山，交代写作目的——介绍上海的天气；
第二步，具体介绍上海一年的天气；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己对Mary到来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①neither...nor...既不……也不……
[高分句型]
①I’m glad that you will come to Shanghai.（宾语从句）
17．Dear Sir or Madam,
I learn that you need a part-time English tour guide. I am interested in the job. I will be free from June 3 to August 31. I have studied English for more than five years. I have been to England and I have stayed there for two months. I can talk with English native speakers. And I always get along well with my teachers and classmates. Also I know a lot about many places of interest in our city. If I get the chance to work for your travel agent, I am sure I will be an excellent tour guide. I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】根据内容提示可知，本篇作文主要包括三个方面的内容，首先表达自己的工作意向，然后指出自己的空闲时间，接着表达自己对于做这份工作的优势。时态为一般现在时及一般将来时。本文首先开篇点题I learn that you need a part-time English tour guide. I am interested in the job.指出自己的意愿，然后说出自己的空闲时间，接着列举出自己的优势所在，I have studied English…., I always get along well with my teachers and classmates.等最后表达出自己的决心和希望If I get the chance to work for your travel agent, I am sure I will……整篇文章思路清晰，词语运用正确，并且also….and….if….等连词的使用，使文章也不乏连贯性。
18．例文：
Dear David,
We had an English exam yesterday. Now I feel very worried because I don’t think I did well in it.
First, I arrived late for the exam because I overslept in the morning. When I got to the classroom, the exam had been on for half an hour. So I hurried to do the exam. After the exam I realized that I had made a lot of mistakes in it. Terribly, I was unable to fully understand the writing part.
Now I’m very afraid I couldn’t pass the exam. I’m really upset.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以李明的身份给笔友戴维（David）写一封信，向他倾诉自己的烦恼的原因。注意，写作时要根据题目所给的内容提示。
2.写作指导：因为文中是对过去事情的叙述，故时态上以一般过去时为主。根据内容提示，把自己的烦恼的原因倾诉给笔友（David），另外，为了句子连贯、上下文联系紧密，可适当发挥，增加些副词。
19．例文：
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your letter. I’m very glad to tell you about the Chinese saying “Among any three people walking, I will find something to learn for sure.” Each of us has advantages, so we can learn from the people around us. My best friend Lily is such a “teacher” who teaches me a lot.
Last week, I had difficulty solving a math problem. She explained it to me again and again until I understood. She is very patient. She is also very careful. She thinks that details determine success or failure and always reminds me to do self-examination. She always plans what needs to be done ahead of time. She sets a good example for me and helps me to make a good plan.
With such a teacher by my side, I’m getting better and better.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文要求以李华的名义，给Jack写一篇短文，根据自己的经历向他解释“三人行必有我师焉”的含义。
2. 写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称进行写作；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；文章分为三段式：第一段承接所给句子，阐述“三人行必有我师焉”的含义，点题。第二段举例说明Lily是自己的朋友也是“老师”。第三段总结全文。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误，要正确使用好两种时态。
20．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear from you. You told me that you haven’t made a friend in the new school. I hope the following advice can help you.
First of all, we should know how to share. We can share delicious food, books and interesting things with others. Sharing can give us pleasure. Second, we should be helpful. When we are in trouble, we should help each other. We should be willing to help others and seek help from others in case of difficulties. Finally, we can’t say bad words about others so that we can get well on each other. We should keep secrets.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
All the best,
Li
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。向Tom提出一些交友的建议。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段提出三条建议；最后一点表达祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，做到无语法和标点错误。
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