人教版英语八年级下册第六单元寓言故事写作指导

人教版英语八年级下册第六单元寓言故事写作指导
题型实例
请根据提示及平日积累，以“The Third Race Between the Hare and the Tortoise”为题，续写龟兔赛跑的故事（第三人称，记叙文），并谈谈你获得的启示。
要求：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The Third Race Between the Hare and the Tortoise
We all know the tortoise beat the hare in the first race.
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优秀范文
The Third Race Between the Hare and the Tortoise
We all know the tortoise beat the hare in the first race.
Then they had a second race, and the hare beat the tortoise. Yesterday they had the third race. The hare ran more quickly than the tortoise at first. Suddenly,the hare's feet hurt so badly that he had to give up the race. The tortoise found it. Then he put the hare on his back without saying a word. At last,they reached the end at the same time.
In my opinion,the tortoise is great. We should learn from the tortoise.
句型总结
①万能开头
The fairy tale about（需要写的故事名称）has plased many people over the ages.
Eg: The fairy tale about tortoise and rabbit race has plased many people over the ages.
②万能结尾
This story deeply attracted me and inspired me（启示）
Eg:This story deeply attracted me and inspired we can’t be proud.
③适用本单元作文的10个优秀句型
More......than...... 超出......的/非常
Eg:The hare ran more quickly than the tortoise at first.
So......that...... 太......以至于......
Eg:The hare's feet hurt so badly that he had to give up the race.
At last...... 在最后，相当于finally
Eg:At last,they reached the end at the same time.
In my opinion...... 表达自己的观点
Eg:In my opinion,the tortoise is great.
Continue to do sth. 继续做某事
Eg:The rabbit continued to run forward.
Fall asleep 入睡
Eg:The rabbit fell asleep under a big tree.
Try to do sth. 尽力做某事
Eg:The turtle tried its best to run forward.
Much......better 好很多，程度大得多
Eg:Rabbits run much better than turtles.
As soon as 一......就......
Eg:As soon as the rabbit stopped, the turtle followed up.
Learned from 从......学到了
Eg:I learned from this story that one cannot be proud.
④三大种启示总结
坚持不懈类（龟兔赛跑等）
Eg:We should never give up in order to succeed.
我们应该永不放弃才能成功。
善良待人类（将相和等）
We should treat others kindly in life.
我们在生活中应该友好地对待别人。
懂得变通类（郑人买履等）
Eg:No matter what we do, we should learn to be flexible.
不论做什么我们都该学会变通。
类型练习
假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友 Mike 想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件,向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下:
1.风趣幽默,深受喜爱:
2.团队合作,历险克难
3.追逐梦想,永不言弃
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:character(n.人物);overcome(u.克服)
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works,I'd like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
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参考范文
Dear Mike
Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
The book Journey to the West was written by Wu Cheng'en during the Ming dynasty. It tells a story about the Tang monk Xuanzang and his three disciples. The book is humorous and well received. In the book , the four main characters show teamwork as they overcame numerous difficulties. Finally,they attained the true Buddhist scriptures. This story tells us to chase our dreams and never give up.
You are bound to enjoy yourself while reading the novel and you can share with me your opinions whenever you like.
Yours ,
Li Hui