2023年冀教版中考英语二轮复习 第三章 题型提升 第五课时 书面表达 课件 (共21张PPT)

(共21张PPT)
第五课时　书面表达
第三章　题型提升
题型透析
　　书面表达考查学生综合运用所学的英语知识进行语言表达的能力。根据新课标的要求,培养学生的写作技能和语言表达能力是英语语言教学的主要内容之一。
书面表达是一项能充分考查考生语言综合运用能力的题型,它能较全面地反映考生所掌握的语法知识、词汇知识以及遣词造句等运用英语的能力。
从2018年全国各省市中考英语试题中可以看出,书面表达在中考中占有重要地位,卷面分值一般为10~20分。因此,它对学生的英语成绩起着举足轻重的作用。在今后的中考英语试题中,书面表达在难度和分值上有继续增加的趋势。
其考查形式一般包括话题作文(其中以观点陈述类话题作文和介绍类话题作文为主要考查形式)、看图作文(看图填词、写对话或短文)和应用作文(演讲稿、电子邮件、日记、通知、发言稿、便条、贺卡、假条等)。测试内容更加生活化、时代化和人文化。
题型策略
一、写作前
1.仔细审题
考生在写作之前首先要弄清题目所说的情景、表达的要点、使用的文体、格式及行文内容等。
2.针对所给的要点提示,连词成句
甘肃中考各地市一般都会给出中英文的要点提示:①对于给出的英文提示(多为单词或短语),要列出每个要点所需的短语或句型,并适当拓展;②对于给出的中文提示,考生在列出每个要点的同时,要注意翻译的准确性;③对于未给出要点提示的题目,考生首先要确定自己的思路,知道从哪些方面着手去写。
3.草拟提纲,理清思路
在认真审题、弄清题意、明确题材、罗列要点的基础上,将已经罗列出的重点短语和句型按要点进行归类整理,列一个简单的提纲,以便下一步组织语言,形成短文。
二、写作中
1.语言规范,把握时态
(1)写作中要注意语言表达的规范性和准确性,尽量用符合英美人士表达习惯的词汇和基本句型,避免中式英语。
(2)注意英汉语法方面的差异、单词的形式变化,还要注意时态、语态的正确运用。
2.巧用连词,使行文连贯。为了使句子或段落意思连贯,表达合理准确,可以适当加入一些连接词。
3.拼写正确,书写规范,卷面整洁。
三、写作后
通读全文,检查复核。这是做好书面表达的一个不可缺少的步骤。
备考演练
A(2022·省卷)
以“being lost”为主题,根据以下提示信息写一篇80词左右的短文。
The pictures are provided to help you think about this topic.
Pay attention to the following points when you plan your composition.
·Where was Mary
·What was Mary doing
·What happened to her
·What did Mary feel when seeing her mother
The following words may help you:
·crowded with visitors
·so interested in the animals
·no one around
·turn to...
要求:
1.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现其他人名和地名等信息。
Mary went to the zoo with her mother on a lovely Sunday afternoon.The zoo was crowded with visitors.Near the gate of the zoo stood two pretty giraffes.Mary had never seen such amazing animals before.She was so interested in the animals that she looked at every small movement of them carefully.After a while,she wanted to tell her mother what she’d found about these animals.However,she noticed there was no one around.She was afraid and worried,but she remembered that her mother told her not to move when being lost.So she waited for her mother just at the gate of the zoo.Soon after,she saw her mother walking to the gate anxiously.When seeing her mother,Mary was happy and ran to her mother.
Mary went to the zoo with her mother on a lovely Sunday afternoon.The zoo was crowded with visitors.Near the gate of the zoo stood two pretty giraffes.Mary had never seen such amazing animals before.She was so interested in the animals that she looked at every small movement of them carefully.After a while,she wanted to tell her mother what she’d found about these animals.However,she noticed there was no one around.She was afraid and worried,but she remembered that her mother told her not to move when being lost.So she waited for her mother just at the gate of the zoo.Soon after,she saw her mother walking to the gate anxiously.When seeing her mother,Mary was happy and ran to her mother.
B(2022·湖南怀化)
国家提出将“劳动教育(labour education)”纳入中小学国家课程方案,请结合自身的劳动经历,谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。内容包括:
1.你对劳动教育的看法 be good for health;relax from the hard study...
2.你自身的劳动经历及感受 at home:do the dishes;sweep the floor...
at school:clean the classroom;
water flowers...
3.你对劳动教育课程的建议 offer different kinds of labour
classes;hold competitions about
labour skills...
要求:
1.文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名;
2.包含以上表格内所有信息,可适当发挥;
3.80词左右(文章开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
It’s reported that labour education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China.I think it’s necessary.Because it is good for our health.We can relax from the hard study by doing some housework.
I usually do some housework at home such as doing the dishes,sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish.At school I often clean the classroom and water flowers.I can not only keep healthy,but also develop good habits from it.
it’s necessary.Because it is good for our
health.We can relax from the hard study by doing some housework.
I usually do some housework at home such as doing the dishes,sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish.At school I often clean the classroom and water flowers.I can not only keep healthy,but also develop good habits from it.
As for how to run the course in our school,I have some ideas.The school can offer different kinds of labour classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants.What’s more,the school can also hold competitions about the labour skills to see who is the best.Such activities can make our school life more colourful and meaningful.
I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term.I believe I will do well in it.
As for how to run the course in our school,I have some ideas.The school can offer different kinds of labour classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants.What’s more,the school can also hold competitions about the labour skills to see who is the best.Such activities can make our school life more colourful and meaningful.
I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term.I believe I will do well in it.
C(2022·山东泰安)
让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动,对其成长具有重要意义,可以帮助他们学习新技能,增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至,请根据下面表格中的内容提示,以“My Volunteer Work Plan”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划,并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。
Volunteer Work
◎Help in the city library
◎Clean up the city parks
◎Hold a charity bazaar(义卖)
◎Do volunteer work in a hospital
◎Visit the old people’s home
◎...
要求:
1.可选择表格中的1—2个活动项目,也可自拟活动项目;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,词数80—100;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。
My Volunteer Work Plan
The summer holiday is coming.I am going to do some volunteer work.I will help to clean up the city parks.Of course,I will ask more people to join me.I will call up my friends and ask them to come.We will pick up the litter,the plastic bags and other waste things.I hope our city will be more beautiful.Besides,I am going to visit sick kids in hospital.I love children and enjoy getting along with them.I will sing for the kids at the city hospital to cheer them up.I hope they can be better soon.
Not only do I feel good about helping other people,but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do.All in all,I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday.
The summer holiday is coming.I am going to do some volunteer work.I will help to clean up the city parks.Of course,I will ask more people to join me.I will call up my friends and ask them to come.We will pick up the litter,the plastic bags and other waste things.I hope our city will be more beautiful.Besides,I am going to visit sick kids in hospital.I love children and enjoy getting along with them.I will sing for the kids at the city hospital to cheer them up.I hope they can be better soon.
Not only do I feel good about helping other people,but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do.All in all,I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday.
D(2022·四川南充改编)
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程,她正在考虑是否选修中文,来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给她写封回信。
要点:
1.给出你的建议;
2.谈谈学习中文的重要性;
3.结合自身经历,介绍至少2种学习中文的方法。
要求:
1.必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名;
4.词数100左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tracy,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing you have an interest in Chinese,I suggest you choose the Chinese course.With the development of China,Chinese is becoming more and more popular.Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate,but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.
Knowing you have an interest in Chinese,I suggest you
choose the Chinese course.With the development of China,Chinese is becoming more
and more popular.Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate,but also a
chance to admire Chinese culture.
As a Chinese,I have been learning Chinese for many years.I have much experience to share with you.In my opinion,there are many ways to learn Chinese.It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs.What’s more,you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese.Learning is a lifelong journey.Keep practicing every day,then it will bring something new.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
As a Chinese,I have been learning Chinese for many years.I have much experience to share with you.In my opinion,there are many ways to learn Chinese.It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs.What’s more,you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese.Learning is a lifelong journey.Keep practicing every day,then it will bring something new.
E(2022·天津改编)
假如你是李华,请你给你的美国笔友David写一封信,讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事,并谈谈感受。
1.上周五,一棵树被大风吹倒,挡住了道路;
2.王红看到后,捡起地上的树枝,又去移动树干;
3.树干太沉,她搬不动;
4.人们过来帮忙;
5.你认为……
参考词汇:被吹倒be blown down;挡住block;树枝branch;树干trunk
要求:
1.词数:80~100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear David,
How are you I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home,she saw a big tree was blown down by wind and it blocked the way.After Wang Hong saw it,she picked up the branches on the ground and then tried to move the trunk.But the trunk was so heavy that she couldn’t move it by herself.When other people saw what she was doing,they were moved by her and came to help her.Finally,they succeeded in moving the trunk away.
on Wang Hong’s way home,she saw a big tree was blown down by wind
and it blocked the way.After Wang Hong saw it,she picked up the branches on the
ground and then tried to move the trunk.But the trunk was so heavy that she couldn’t
move it by herself.When other people saw what she was doing,they were moved by
her and came to help her.Finally,they succeeded in moving the trunk away.
I think she is a very kind person.And from this story,I learn that we should offer to help when someone needs help.It not only helps others,but also makes ourselves happy.
Do you have a story to tell Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
I think she is a very kind person.And from this story,I learn that we should offer to help when someone needs help.It not only helps others,but also makes ourselves happy.