专题10 书面表达 九年级下册英语期末专项训练 牛津译林版（含解析）
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专题10 书面表达 九年级下册英语期末专项训练 牛津译林版（含解析）
1．假如你是一名来自美国的游客Tony，此时正与你的中国笔友Daming, Lingling在长城游玩。你将你们刚刚拍摄的几张相片做成一张电子明信片发送给你的同学Sam，请根据相片的内容及所给提示，完成明信片的留言。
提示：
1、你可能会用到的词：the Great Wall, walk on, take photo/pictures, the present shop;
2、Sam的地址已为你写好，可根据相片内容适当发挥，字数在80-100词；
3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名或校名。
Sam Smith No.17 Field Street Los Angeles The USA
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2．上周末，小红一家参加了为期两天的“山区宿营之旅(A trip camping in the mountains)”。下面这幅图画呈现了小红一家宿营后的情景。请根据提示信息和你对图画的理解，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。
内容包括：
1. 描述图画内容；
2. 简要陈述你的看法。
注意：
1. 可以进行适当的想象；
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
（参考词汇：collecting-bags 收集袋)
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3．“研学旅行 (study tour)”就是综合实践活动。请根据以下图片提示，结合自己的经历，谈谈“研学旅行”的收获和感受。
要求: 1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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4．七中育才学校英语写作俱乐部要举行一个英语写作比赛。请你根据以下海报内容写一篇短文参赛。
要求：
1. 写作内容需包含图片中主要信息。
2. 使用适当的比较级和最高级。
3. 题目自拟。
4. 词数：100 左右。
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5．根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。
参考词汇：terminal station 终点站
6．假如你是Jenny，英语课上老师要求分享自己的暑假计划。请你根据下面图片的提示信息，向大家介绍一下你的暑假计划。
visit my grandparents in the countryside go to the beach with my family do my homework and read books
要求：（1）条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、要点全面、可适当拓展；
（2）不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）60词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
The summer holiday is coming. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we all will have a great summer holiday.
7．随着第 24 届冬季奥林匹克运动会在北京的胜利举行，中国再一次成为世界关注的焦点。为了让国外友人更好地了解中国，21 世纪英文报开辟了“Cities in China” 的专栏，鼓励广大中小学生用英文介绍中国城市。 假如你是张华，请你选择中国的一个城市，根据下列问题提示，完成一篇 100 词左右的征文。
提示：
1.Which city would you like to introduce
2. What’s the city like ( location, places of interest, local food, people…)
3. What do you think of the city
要求：
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.必须包括提示中所有信息，并适当发挥；
3.词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名等。
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．你喜欢旅行吗？学校英语报发起了以“My Summer Vacation”为题的征文活动，请你根据以下提示，介绍一次暑假旅行。用英语写一篇约100词左右的短文，内容包括：
1. 叙述旅行的情况（时间、地点、事件、同伴、交通方式等）；
2. 你的感受和收获。
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9．同学们，中考过后，你们即将告别亲爱的母校。回首三年的母校生活，学校里的很多规则 有助于你的健康成长。你能谈一谈你们学校的校规吗？你对这些校规有何看法？你对母校有 哪些合理化建议？请你以My school rules为题写一篇短文。
要求：1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2. 书写工整、规范；
3. 根据所给内容，请做适当发挥；
4. 词数80左右。文章的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My school rules
We have many rules in our school.
10．假如你是梅梅，请写一张明信片给Miss Brown。她的地址：153 Park Street, London, England。大致内容：伦敦的天气如何，经常下雨吗？昆明的天气不错，全年都很温暖。欢迎来中国昆明。50词左右，可适当发挥。
Dear Miss Brown,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Meimei Miss Brown____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite city”, using the following questions for reference.(请根据提示问题，以“我最喜欢的城市”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格)
Suggested questions:
(1)Which city do you like best
(2) Where is it
(3)Why do you like this city (Give at least two reasons)
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12．每年我们学校都会举行春秋游活动，大家收获颇多。下周班级英语课堂上将举行以 “Our school trip”为主题的英语沙龙活动，请你根据以下要点提示准备一篇110词左右的短文和同学们分享。
提示：1.谈谈你对学校旅游的理解。 2.分享一次你的学校旅游经历与感受。3.对学校旅游提出合理的建议。
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13．不论哪个时代, 哪个行业, 都会有留驻人心的英雄, 因而诗人说: “英雄儿女各千秋”。你的心中也一定有一位英雄, 他也许是阅兵场上的军人, 也许是攻克难题的科学家, 也许是一位感动大家的普通人, 亦或是你身边的守护者。请以“A Hero in My Heart”为题, 写写你心中这位英雄的故事以及他（她）对你的影响。
要求: 1. 语句通顺连贯, 条理清晰, 结构完整,书写工整；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数100左右。
A Hero in My Heart
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14．英雄是不怕困难，英勇过人，值得我们敬佩和仰慕的人。你心中的英雄是谁？请以“_______is a hero in my heart”为题，根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点：1）你心目中的英雄是谁；
2）你为什么认为他/她是英雄；
3）你从他/她身上学到了什么。
2.要求：1）补全标题，文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
2）词数100左右。
_______ is a hero in my heart
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15．“读万卷书、行万里路”，旅行是学习的最好方式之一。请以 "Travelling" 为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文，发表你的看法。
注意：
1.要点齐全，适当发挥；
2.从思维导图Sayings部分选择恰当的格言合理利用在短文中；
3.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范；
4.词数：80-100词左右;
5.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。
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16．
方志敏烈士简介：（1899年8月21日—1935年8月6日）， 江西省弋阳人，中国共产党的优秀党员，江西党组织的创始人之一，闽、浙、皖、赣革命根据地的创建者。他历任县委书记、 特委书记、省委书记、军区司令员、红十军政委、闽浙赣省苏维埃政府主席，中华苏维埃共和国中央主席团委员，党中央委员。
1934 年，红七军团和红十军团合编为北上抗日先遣队，方志敏任总司令。1935年1月27日，他不幸被俘人狱，在狱中坚贞不屈，写下了《可爱的中国》《清贫》等名著。1935年8月6日，方志敏在南昌英勇就义，时年36岁。
假如你是Daming， 昨天你刚看了电影《可爱的中国》（Cute China），深受感动。于是你想写封信告慰方志敏烈士。信中主要涉及三个方面：
1.问烈士：为什么这么多共产党员为了信仰选择牺牲而无所畏惧？(choose to die for Marxism without fear)今天你找到了答案；
2.告慰烈士：他的the Dream of Cute China 已经实现，现在的中国比他书中写的更美丽、更强大；
3.告慰烈士：作为一名中学生，你的梦想和责任。
要求：1. 信件须语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 字数80。文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：
CPC members（共产党员）；faith(信念)；comrade(同志)；feel puzzled(困惑)；to realize the great rise of the Chinese nation(实现中华民族伟大复兴)
Dear Uncle Fang,
Do you agree I call you Uncle Fang I’m Daming, a 15-year-old student. Yesterday, I saw the movie Cute China. Your story deeply touched me. So I’m writing this letter to you(Later I’ll read it to you). It’s a pity you died at a very young age, and_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Peace to your soul!
17．假如你是Alan，下面是你在网课期间写的一篇日记。请仔细阅读，然后用英语给你的爸爸妈妈写一封信。信中必须包括以下全部要点，并且适当发挥；文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
词数：80~100;短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
Sunday, March 8th, 2020 Rainy & cloudy
It has been almost a month since the online lessons started. As I stay at home all day, I finally realise it is not easy for Mum and Dad to balance work and family. I really want to help them do some cleaning and cooking, even look after five-year-old Alice. But they would rather see me study all the time and do all housework on their own. They won't listen to me and I hate to argue with them. What can I do Maybe ...I had better write a letter to tell them what I think …
(词典: balance 平衡 would rather宁愿)
写作要点:have enough time for study relax myself while looking after Alice
practise life skills...
Dear Mum and Dad,
I know you are worried about my study, so I am writing to tell you what I really think._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Love,
Alan
18．今年3月，习近平总书记来到你的家乡沙县区俞邦村考察，俞邦村成了网红打卡地。你的朋友Mike来信，计划暑假来你家乡游玩。假定你是李华，请根据来信内容写封回信。词数70左右。
Dear Li Hua,How is everything I’m very happy that the summer holidays are coming. I want to go to your hometown-Yubang village to visit you this year. Can you tell me something about your hometown What’s the weather like What delicious food can I have What should I take with me there I’m looking forward to your letter. Give my best wishes to your parents! Yours, Mike
提示词：Shaxian snacks (小吃)，wonton (馄饨)，dried salted duck (板鸭)注意事项：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；格式已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．假设你是李华，你的笔友Grace将作为交换生来中国念书，请你根据所给邮件节选部分，给她写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua,
Long time no see. How is it going
I am excited to tell you that I am going to study as an exchange student at your school soon. I have changed a lot since I saw you five years ago. What about you And how has Hangzhou changed By the way, I’d like to buy something special and local in Hangzhou for my host family as a gift when I first meet them. Do you have any suggestions
Yours,
Grace
Dear Grace,
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Yours,
Li Hua
20．假设你是Linda， 正和父母在厦门度假，天气晴朗温暖，你的朋友Eric对你去的地方很感兴趣，请根据以下提示和要求写一封短文。
提示：
1. Where are you now
2. How’s the weather there
3. What are you and your family doing
4. Are you having a good time
要求：
1. 短文必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 词数60词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Eric,
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I miss you.
Linda
参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Sam,
I’m having fun in China now and sending you this e-card. In the first photo, together with my Chinese friends Daming and Lingling, we are walking on the Great Wall which is one of the greatest wonders in the world. In the second photo, we are taking a lot of photos. The scenery here is really beautiful. In the third photo, I’m choosing presents for my family and friends in a shop. There are so many amazing hand-made things that it is difficult to make a decision. What present for you It’s a secret.
See you next week!
Tony
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按明信片的格式写。内容是以美国游客Tony的身份，把你们刚刚拍摄的几张相片做成的一张电子明信片发送给你的同学Sam，并根据相片的内容及所给提示，完成明信片的留言。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述明信片的内容；时态以现在进行时为主。要按照照片的顺序，分别介绍在每一张照片里所做的活动；最后介绍要给Sam一个惊喜。
2．例文
Last weekend, Xiao Hong’s family took a two-day trip. This picture shows what happened when they arrived in the mountains. After they arrived in the mountains, they found the scenery was beautiful, the mountains were green and the water was clear. But because so many tourists come, there is a lot of rubbish in this area. Xiao Hong thought of what she had learned recently to protect the environment, so she found some collecting-bags and sorted the garbage around her. Her parents also agreed with her and accompanied her, even the dog helped. After their cleaning up, the area became more beautiful.
This reminds us that we should pay attention to protecting the environment when we travel.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。假定你是小红，和父母去山区宿营之后发生的事情；根据图片内容描述，注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据图片的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
3．One possible version:
Without doubt, the study tour plays an important part in our school life. It makes our life meaningful and helps us be knowledgeable. I’d like to share one of the most impressive experiences.
Last term, I took part in a study tour with my classmates. We visited the history museum. The guide led us to different halls to learn about the history of CPC. Seeing the pictures of different wars, we were deeply moved. When we watched the videos about how the soldiers fought against the enemies and achieved success, we were so shocked by their strong will that we couldn’t control the tears. All of us showed our respect to our ancestors because of the peaceful life they fought for. At the end of the trip, we took a special photo.
As teenagers, we should try to learn in various ways. Only in this way can we improve in different ways.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，根据导图内容，介绍自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般过去时。写作时可分为三段式，首先开篇点题，介绍研学是学校生活中很重要的一部分，进而点出分享自己的一次研学经历；其次是具体介绍这段研学经历；最后是表达感受。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。
4．例文：
My Hometown Chengdu
My hometown Chengdu is a wonderful place located in Sichuan province, which has a long history. With rich cultural heritage, Chengdu is one of the most popular destinations for tourists in China.
There are many famous scenic spots such as Jinli, Kuanzhai Street, Tianfu Square and Chengdu Panda Base. There also stands Du Fu’s Thatched Cottage, the Temple of Zhu Geliang and some other places of historical interest. Among them, my must-go place is Kuanzhai Street. Because I can not only walk on the ancient streets but also buy something in traditional houses or stores there. I nearly go there three to four times a month. Besides, as Chengdu people are fond of eating, they have created many delicious food such as Zhong Boiled Dumplings, Dandan Noodles, Lai Tangyuan and some others. If you come here, don’t miss the must-try food, Dandan Noodles. Because the gravy of the noodles is really special and delicious. I eat Dandan Noodles almost every day. Furthermore, watching a Sichuan Opera Show will also provide you with unforgettable and precious memories. The delicate face-changing in Sichuan Opera has become a symbol of Sichuan culture. At the same time, Chengdu also has comfortable weather for people who live there. Even the weather in winter is still warmer than many other cities in China.
I love Chengdu and I hope that my hometown will get more and more beautiful!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于提纲类看图作文，根据题中海报提示内容进行写作。第一段总起全文，总的介绍成都的地理位置及总体情况。第二段分别叙述成都的必去景点、必吃小吃、成都的标志等，并适当进行拓展。第三段表达对成都的期待和祝福。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来叙述，用第一人称表达感受，用第三人称介绍成都的各个方面情况。本文主要以一般现在时为主，注意第三人称单数的正确运用。写作中要特别注意，题干要求适当涉及比较级和最高级的运用。
5．One possible version：
Tom is a kind-hearted boy. One day, he went to the museum by bus. When he got on the bus, he found a seat and sat on it. After a while the bus stopped at the next stop and an old man got on the bus. As soon as he saw him, Tom stood up and gave his seat to the man. But the man didn't accept it. Tom was worried and he came up an good idea. He told the man that he would get off the bus the next stop and the old sat on his seat. Tom stood by the man and he felt sleepy. Seeing this, the old man reminded that he was going to get off the bus. Tom felt embarrassed and he told him the truth that he would get at the terminal station. What a good boy Tom was and I think we should learn from him.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇给图画作文，描述一个小男孩Tom在公交车上给一个老爷爷让座的故事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When he……；As soon as he…….；He told the man that……；the old man reminded that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头描述了Tom上了公交车，接下来描述为他给一位老爷爷让座，假装说自己下一站就下车，最后指出要向Tom学习。此处用了got on，gave his seat to，felt sleepy，learn from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
考点：图画作文。
6．One possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. Now I am ready for my summer holiday. First, I will go with my parents to visit my grandparents in the countryside. We’ll stay outside and enjoy the fresh air. In late July, my family will go to the beach. I will go swimming and play in the water. Last, I will finish my homework and read my favourite books. Reading books always helps me relax. How exciting!
I hope we all will have a great summer holiday.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇给定材料的作文，要求介绍自己的暑假计划。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文时态为一般将来时，用第一人称来书写。写作时可分为两段式：第一段详细介绍自己的暑假计划：拜访祖父母、和家人去沙滩、做作业以及读书等；第二段提出美好的祝愿，呼应开篇。在写作时应该注意符合题意，同时注意语言的准确性和连贯性，可适当补充细节使文章连贯。
7．例文
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, Beijing is one of the greatest. It is the capital city of China. It lies in the northeast of China.
Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace.
You can also try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit. (100 words)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文；
②时态：本文时态用“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据提示内容介绍中国的一个城市，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己想要介绍的城市；
第二步，介绍这个城市的特点；
第三步，阐述自己对这个城市的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest名胜景点
②and so on等等
③be worth sth值得某物
[高分句型]
①If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square.（if条件从句）
②If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there.（if条件从句）
③I think Beijing is worth a visit.（宾语从句）
8．例文
My Summer Vacation
On the third day of summer holiday, July 10th, I flew to Shenzhen with my parents to have a relaxing summer trip. Located in the southwest of our country, Shenzhen is a beautiful coastal city. During the 7-day holiday, I enjoyed having a walk along the beach after supper or having a swim in the afternoon. The sky is blue, the air is fresh. Wherever you go, you can always see the green trees, the neat grasses and the colorful flowers. They are really wonderful. Forgetting all the burdens in my mind at school, I felt really relaxed and refreshed.
Traveling not only broadens my horizons but also opens my eyes to the world.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示，用英语介绍一次暑假旅行。内容包括：叙述旅行的情况（时间、地点、事件、同伴、交通方式等）；你的感受和收获。首先我们要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，辅以第二人称。时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主，在叙述旅行的活动经历时用一般过去时，描述景点的景色和自己的收获时用一般现在时；文章要紧扣题目要点，围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
9．My school rules
We have many rules in our school. I think most of them are good for us, but some are not so good.
Here are some good rules. We can’t be late for school. We must listen carefully to teachers in class. Mobile phones are not allowed to bring into the school. These rules are good for our study and I like them.
I think there are also a few unnecessary rules. For example, students are not allowed to wear long hair. I think girls should be allowed to wear long hair. I hope these rules can be changed.
【详解】本文谈一谈对母校校规的看法，提出一些合理性的建议。所以句子的主语应该用第一人称，句子的时态用一般现在时，所写的句子应该用一些高级词汇及句式，不要写汉语式的英语。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：be good for有益；be allowed to do sth被允许做某事；I think most of them are good for us, but some are not so good.I think there are also a few unnecessary rules.I think girls should be allowed to wear long hair. I hope these rules can be changed.用了that引导的宾语从句，是亮点句。
10．例文
Dear Miss Brown,How is the weather in London Does it often rain The weather in Kunming is fine. The sky is blue and the air is clean. It’s warm all year round. You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere. Many people come to visit Kunming every year. Welcome to Kunming, China. Yours, Meimei Miss Brown153 Park Street, London, England
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以梅梅的名义给Miss Brown写一封明信片。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称写作；时态以一般现在时为主；文章内容要包含所给提示信息：询问对方伦敦天气如何，介绍昆明天气，发出邀请。写作时要注意明信片的格式，做到无标点符号和语法错误。
11． 例文
Shanghai is my favorite city. It is the biggest city in China. Shanghai is located in the eastern part of China. The reasons why I like Shanghai best are as follows. First, it is the central city of our country. It is the center of economy, technology, industry, finance and trade. What’s more, Shanghai is also an emerging tourist city, with profound modern urban culture and many historical monuments. Tourists can enjoy shopping in Shanghai, and having local snacks as well. The night views of Shanghai is fantastic, where you can watch the beautiful lights and you can also take a ferry to visit the Huangpu River.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明自己最喜欢的城市是哪个；
第二步，介绍城市的地理位置；
第三步，具体阐述喜欢这座城市的原因，至少两点。
【亮点词汇】①finance金融
②emerging新兴的
③profound深刻的
④monument遗址
【高分句型】①Shanghai is also an emerging tourist city, with profound modern urban culture and many historical monuments. (with+短语，表示伴随)
②The night views of Shanghai is fantastic, where you can watch the beautiful lights and you can also take a ferry to visit the Huangpu River.(where引导的定语从句)
12．例文：
Our school trip
The school trip is a great chance for the students to relax themselves. And it is good for them to communicate with others.
Last weekend, I went to Beihai Park for a trip with my classmates. It was sunny and a little windy. We did many things. We walked around and took photos in the morning. We had lunch in the park. In the afternoon, we played games under the trees. Our teacher also told us some stories. They were quite interesting. At about three fifty, we went home. All of us had a good time. It was an exciting trip!
I recommend that the students go to visit the science museum next time. It is helpful for the students to learn more about the science and develop the interests in science.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目发表对学校旅游的看法，就是一次学校旅游经历与感受，并对学校旅游提出自己的建议。
2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述自己一次学校旅游经历与感受叙述完整，条理清晰。
13．A Hero in My Heart
Everybody has a hero in his or her heart. I have one in mind, too. She is my mother.
She is very kind and friendly. She is always ready to help others. Once, our neighbor had to leave for business, but her daughter had to be taken to piano lessons once a week. She asked if my mother would do this for her.My mother agreed without thinking twice. There are many other things about her helping others. The little things that my mother does for others are quite touching. She is my hero and I am proud that she is my mother.
I have learned from her that helping others is truly a wonderful thing. I hope I can follow in her footsteps.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，开头时点题，之后写事迹，最后写对自己的影响；注意突出是一个人，不要写群体或者多个人，人物身上要有闪光点。
2.写作指导：本文主要用第三人称来叙述故事内容，用第一人称抒发感想；时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述内心感受时用现在时；事件发生的起因、过程和结果等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰，突出事件人物的品质特点。
14．例文：
Mother is a hero in my heart
When people say the word "hero", what will you think of Maybe your hero is a famous singer, a movie star or a great man. But my hero is around me. She is my mother.
My mother is a wise woman and she plays different roles in my life. As a mother, she takes good care of me. As a friend, she can listen to me. As a teacher, she encourages me instead of getting angry with my poor grades. From her, I get the knowledge about dealing with my housework, relationships and study.
I love my mother forever.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，写作时注意题干中三个要点，一是说清楚你心目中的英雄是谁；二是他/她成为你英雄的原因；三是你从英雄身上学到了什么。特别留意补全标题。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来写；时态采用一般现在时为主；段落安排可以按照要点提示给出的顺序：第一段开门见山说出自己的英雄，第二段写他/她成为自己英雄的原因，发生了什么事情等，第三段表达自己对英雄的情感。
15．例文：
Travelling
Do you like travelling Have you ever heard of “Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles” In fact, travelling is a good way of studying. There are many advantages.
First, we can get an exact picture of what we have read. Seeing is believing. We can accept what it describes in a book only when we see it with our own eyes. Second, we can learn much about geography, biology and history. Third, we can create good memory for lifetime. Besides, travelling can make our life experience rich and broaden our horizon. We can learn much knowledge.
So when you have time, go on a trip.
【详解】题干解读：这篇作文要求以Travelling为题，介绍旅行的好处。题目中呈现了一个思维导图，罗列了旅行的三个好处，还提供了一些与旅行相关的俗语。学生们首先仔细观察这个思维导图，弄清楚文章的主题和结构，理清题目要求。思维导图中的内容都应包括在文章中，而且学生们还应自己再补充一个旅行的好处。
写作指导：审题可知，这篇文章应用一般现在时、第一人称叙述。写作时应注意：一是要将题目中思维导图中的内容都包括在内，并对第四个好处进行补充。题目还要求在文章中包括一句俗语，要注意该俗语与文意的关联，俗语的使用应恰当、准确。其次应注意句式的表达，选择好的句型和短语，使用基本的句子结构，穿插复合句和高级句式，并注意上下文语句的衔接，使文意连贯、流畅。
16．One Possible Version:
Dear Uncle Fang,
Do you agree I call you Uncle Fang I’m Daming, a 15-year-old student. Yesterday, I saw the movie Cute China. Your story deeply touched me. So I’m writing this letter to you(Later I’ll read it to you). It’s a pity you died at a very young age, and thousands of your comrades followed your steps too. So one question has puzzled me for a long time. That is: why so many CPC members chose to die for Marxism without fear Was it worthy Today I seem to have the answer. Because all you men had faith, all you men had the Dream of Cute China. You did all this for a new China. Today I’m proud to tell you all that the Dream of Cute China has already come true! Today’s China is among the greatest countries in the world! She is more beautiful and powerful than what you described(what she was like) in your book. As a Chinese student, I also have a Cute China Dream. That is to realize the great rise of the Chinese nation. We are sure that we can make it.
Peace to your soul!
Daming
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，写封信告慰方志敏烈士。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时综合使用三个人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要从以下几方面入手：问烈士为什么这么多共产党员为了信仰选择牺牲而无所畏惧，告慰烈士现在的中国比他书中写的更美丽、更强大以及作为一名中学生，你的梦想和责任。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
17．Dear Mum and Dad,
I know you are worried about my study, so I am writing to tell you what I really think.
There are only five online lessons every day. That means I have enough time for study. I listen quite carefully in class and teachers think I have done well. But if I keep learning all day, I will feel really tired. So I can relax myself while looking after Alice. When you have to work, I can help with housework so that you will not be so busy. It is a good way to practise life skills too. Besides, I am old and strong enough to do something I can to take care of our family.
Love,
Alan
【详解】1.题干解读： 本文是应用文作文和提纲作文。要求根据艾伦在网课期间写的一篇日记， 给爸爸妈妈写一封信，信中必须包括以下全部要点，并且适当发挥，文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名，合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯，本文主要使用第一人称，一般现在时。
2.例文点评：本文是应用文作文和提纲作文。内容切题，意思连贯，时态表达灵活准确，没有单词拼写和语法错误。一些固定短语和句型运用较为得体，使得文章更加流畅，自然。
3.高分亮点：
连词和短语：如be worried about担心，keep doing sth.一直做某事，all day整天，look after照顾，help with帮忙做……， take care of 照顾，等等。
高分句型：（1） There are only five online lessons every day. （2）That means I have enough time for study. （3）But if I keep learning all day, I will feel really tired. （4）It is a good way to practise life skills too.等等。
18．例文：
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear that you plan to visit my hometown this summer. I’d like to tell you something about my hometown — Yubang village. Yubang is a beautiful village. There are many houses with big yards. The air is fresh and life is quiet. The weather is hot and it often rains in summer. You should take an umbrella with you. You can wear a hat and a pair of sunglasses. You can’t miss the delicious snacks here, such as dumplings, dried salted ducks, wonton and so on. Remember to take a camera.
I hope you can have a wonderful time. I’m looking forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，向朋友介绍自己的家乡的一些特色、美食以及要注意的一些事项，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，符合书信格式，本文应该用第二人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
19．例文：
Dear Grace,
Glad to receive your letter. I’m fine. Now my grades are very good, that is because I am confident in my study. In class, I listen to the teacher carefully. After class, I do a good job of review. And as a student, I never hesitate to raise my hand whenever a question or a point comes to my mind. I can manage my time properly and do my homework effectively.
Besides, Hangzhou is becoming a modern city. It is one of the most famous cities in China. It’s known for the Longjing tea. In western countries, the tea trade took place in the 19th century, so Longjing tea is a wonderful gift to your host family. I think they will like it.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求根据所给邮件，给你的笔友Grace写一封回信，对自己和杭州的变化以及对Grace第一次去寄宿家庭是否带礼物提出建议，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；叙述自己和杭州的变化时，应详细具体，逻辑性要强，保证条理清晰。
20．One possible version:
Dear Eric,
How’s it going I’m on vacation in Xiamen with my parents now. It is warm and sunny here. My parents are having fun swimming in the sea, and I am walking on the sand and enjoying the sea wind. It’s really relaxing. The sea water and the sky here are beautiful and clean, so I take a lot of photos. We all have a good time. And I think it’s a good place to visit.
I miss you.
Linda
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作。写作时，需根据要点提示和要求用英语写一封信，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主,现在进行时为辅；注意书信的书写格式；在描述自己所在位置以及天气时，要用一般现在时；描述人们正在进行的活动时要用现在进行时；适当运用连词，使文章叙述连贯通顺，内容更清晰完整。
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专题10 书面表达 九年级下册英语期末专项训练 牛津译林版（含解析）
1．假如你是一名来自美国的游客Tony，此时正与你的中国笔友Daming, Lingling在长城游玩。你将你们刚刚拍摄的几张相片做成一张电子明信片发送给你的同学Sam，请根据相片的内容及所给提示，完成明信片的留言。
提示：
1、你可能会用到的词：the Great Wall, walk on, take photo/pictures, the present shop;
2、Sam的地址已为你写好，可根据相片内容适当发挥，字数在80-100词；
3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名或校名。
Sam Smith No.17 Field Street Los Angeles The USA
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2．上周末，小红一家参加了为期两天的“山区宿营之旅(A trip camping in the mountains)”。下面这幅图画呈现了小红一家宿营后的情景。请根据提示信息和你对图画的理解，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。
内容包括：
1. 描述图画内容；
2. 简要陈述你的看法。
注意：
1. 可以进行适当的想象；
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
（参考词汇：collecting-bags 收集袋)
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3．“研学旅行 (study tour)”就是综合实践活动。请根据以下图片提示，结合自己的经历，谈谈“研学旅行”的收获和感受。
要求: 1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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4．七中育才学校英语写作俱乐部要举行一个英语写作比赛。请你根据以下海报内容写一篇短文参赛。
要求：
1. 写作内容需包含图片中主要信息。
2. 使用适当的比较级和最高级。
3. 题目自拟。
4. 词数：100 左右。
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5．根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。
参考词汇：terminal station 终点站
6．假如你是Jenny，英语课上老师要求分享自己的暑假计划。请你根据下面图片的提示信息，向大家介绍一下你的暑假计划。
visit my grandparents in the countryside go to the beach with my family do my homework and read books
要求：（1）条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、要点全面、可适当拓展；
（2）不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）60词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
The summer holiday is coming. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we all will have a great summer holiday.
7．随着第 24 届冬季奥林匹克运动会在北京的胜利举行，中国再一次成为世界关注的焦点。为了让国外友人更好地了解中国，21 世纪英文报开辟了“Cities in China” 的专栏，鼓励广大中小学生用英文介绍中国城市。 假如你是张华，请你选择中国的一个城市，根据下列问题提示，完成一篇 100 词左右的征文。
提示：
1.Which city would you like to introduce
2. What’s the city like ( location, places of interest, local food, people…)
3. What do you think of the city
要求：
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.必须包括提示中所有信息，并适当发挥；
3.词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名等。
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．你喜欢旅行吗？学校英语报发起了以“My Summer Vacation”为题的征文活动，请你根据以下提示，介绍一次暑假旅行。用英语写一篇约100词左右的短文，内容包括：
1. 叙述旅行的情况（时间、地点、事件、同伴、交通方式等）；
2. 你的感受和收获。
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9．同学们，中考过后，你们即将告别亲爱的母校。回首三年的母校生活，学校里的很多规则 有助于你的健康成长。你能谈一谈你们学校的校规吗？你对这些校规有何看法？你对母校有 哪些合理化建议？请你以My school rules为题写一篇短文。
要求：1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2. 书写工整、规范；
3. 根据所给内容，请做适当发挥；
4. 词数80左右。文章的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My school rules
We have many rules in our school.
10．假如你是梅梅，请写一张明信片给Miss Brown。她的地址：153 Park Street, London, England。大致内容：伦敦的天气如何，经常下雨吗？昆明的天气不错，全年都很温暖。欢迎来中国昆明。50词左右，可适当发挥。
Dear Miss Brown,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Meimei Miss Brown____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite city”, using the following questions for reference.(请根据提示问题，以“我最喜欢的城市”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格)
Suggested questions:
(1)Which city do you like best
(2) Where is it
(3)Why do you like this city (Give at least two reasons)
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12．每年我们学校都会举行春秋游活动，大家收获颇多。下周班级英语课堂上将举行以 “Our school trip”为主题的英语沙龙活动，请你根据以下要点提示准备一篇110词左右的短文和同学们分享。
提示：1.谈谈你对学校旅游的理解。 2.分享一次你的学校旅游经历与感受。3.对学校旅游提出合理的建议。
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13．不论哪个时代, 哪个行业, 都会有留驻人心的英雄, 因而诗人说: “英雄儿女各千秋”。你的心中也一定有一位英雄, 他也许是阅兵场上的军人, 也许是攻克难题的科学家, 也许是一位感动大家的普通人, 亦或是你身边的守护者。请以“A Hero in My Heart”为题, 写写你心中这位英雄的故事以及他（她）对你的影响。
要求: 1. 语句通顺连贯, 条理清晰, 结构完整,书写工整；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数100左右。
A Hero in My Heart
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14．英雄是不怕困难，英勇过人，值得我们敬佩和仰慕的人。你心中的英雄是谁？请以“_______is a hero in my heart”为题，根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点：1）你心目中的英雄是谁；
2）你为什么认为他/她是英雄；
3）你从他/她身上学到了什么。
2.要求：1）补全标题，文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
2）词数100左右。
_______ is a hero in my heart
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15．“读万卷书、行万里路”，旅行是学习的最好方式之一。请以 "Travelling" 为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文，发表你的看法。
注意：
1.要点齐全，适当发挥；
2.从思维导图Sayings部分选择恰当的格言合理利用在短文中；
3.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范；
4.词数：80-100词左右;
5.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。
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16．
方志敏烈士简介：（1899年8月21日—1935年8月6日）， 江西省弋阳人，中国共产党的优秀党员，江西党组织的创始人之一，闽、浙、皖、赣革命根据地的创建者。他历任县委书记、 特委书记、省委书记、军区司令员、红十军政委、闽浙赣省苏维埃政府主席，中华苏维埃共和国中央主席团委员，党中央委员。
1934 年，红七军团和红十军团合编为北上抗日先遣队，方志敏任总司令。1935年1月27日，他不幸被俘人狱，在狱中坚贞不屈，写下了《可爱的中国》《清贫》等名著。1935年8月6日，方志敏在南昌英勇就义，时年36岁。
假如你是Daming， 昨天你刚看了电影《可爱的中国》（Cute China），深受感动。于是你想写封信告慰方志敏烈士。信中主要涉及三个方面：
1.问烈士：为什么这么多共产党员为了信仰选择牺牲而无所畏惧？(choose to die for Marxism without fear)今天你找到了答案；
2.告慰烈士：他的the Dream of Cute China 已经实现，现在的中国比他书中写的更美丽、更强大；
3.告慰烈士：作为一名中学生，你的梦想和责任。
要求：1. 信件须语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 字数80。文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：
CPC members（共产党员）；faith(信念)；comrade(同志)；feel puzzled(困惑)；to realize the great rise of the Chinese nation(实现中华民族伟大复兴)
Dear Uncle Fang,
Do you agree I call you Uncle Fang I’m Daming, a 15-year-old student. Yesterday, I saw the movie Cute China. Your story deeply touched me. So I’m writing this letter to you(Later I’ll read it to you). It’s a pity you died at a very young age, and_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Peace to your soul!
17．假如你是Alan，下面是你在网课期间写的一篇日记。请仔细阅读，然后用英语给你的爸爸妈妈写一封信。信中必须包括以下全部要点，并且适当发挥；文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
词数：80~100;短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
Sunday, March 8th, 2020 Rainy & cloudy
It has been almost a month since the online lessons started. As I stay at home all day, I finally realise it is not easy for Mum and Dad to balance work and family. I really want to help them do some cleaning and cooking, even look after five-year-old Alice. But they would rather see me study all the time and do all housework on their own. They won't listen to me and I hate to argue with them. What can I do Maybe ...I had better write a letter to tell them what I think …
(词典: balance 平衡 would rather宁愿)
写作要点:have enough time for study relax myself while looking after Alice
practise life skills...
Dear Mum and Dad,
I know you are worried about my study, so I am writing to tell you what I really think._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Love,
Alan
18．今年3月，习近平总书记来到你的家乡沙县区俞邦村考察，俞邦村成了网红打卡地。你的朋友Mike来信，计划暑假来你家乡游玩。假定你是李华，请根据来信内容写封回信。词数70左右。
Dear Li Hua,How is everything I’m very happy that the summer holidays are coming. I want to go to your hometown-Yubang village to visit you this year. Can you tell me something about your hometown What’s the weather like What delicious food can I have What should I take with me there I’m looking forward to your letter. Give my best wishes to your parents! Yours, Mike
提示词：Shaxian snacks (小吃)，wonton (馄饨)，dried salted duck (板鸭)注意事项：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；格式已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．假设你是李华，你的笔友Grace将作为交换生来中国念书，请你根据所给邮件节选部分，给她写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua,
Long time no see. How is it going
I am excited to tell you that I am going to study as an exchange student at your school soon. I have changed a lot since I saw you five years ago. What about you And how has Hangzhou changed By the way, I’d like to buy something special and local in Hangzhou for my host family as a gift when I first meet them. Do you have any suggestions
Yours,
Grace
Dear Grace,
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Yours,
Li Hua
20．假设你是Linda， 正和父母在厦门度假，天气晴朗温暖，你的朋友Eric对你去的地方很感兴趣，请根据以下提示和要求写一封短文。
提示：
1. Where are you now
2. How’s the weather there
3. What are you and your family doing
4. Are you having a good time
要求：
1. 短文必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 词数60词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Eric,
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I miss you.
Linda
参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Sam,
I’m having fun in China now and sending you this e-card. In the first photo, together with my Chinese friends Daming and Lingling, we are walking on the Great Wall which is one of the greatest wonders in the world. In the second photo, we are taking a lot of photos. The scenery here is really beautiful. In the third photo, I’m choosing presents for my family and friends in a shop. There are so many amazing hand-made things that it is difficult to make a decision. What present for you It’s a secret.
See you next week!
Tony
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按明信片的格式写。内容是以美国游客Tony的身份，把你们刚刚拍摄的几张相片做成的一张电子明信片发送给你的同学Sam，并根据相片的内容及所给提示，完成明信片的留言。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述明信片的内容；时态以现在进行时为主。要按照照片的顺序，分别介绍在每一张照片里所做的活动；最后介绍要给Sam一个惊喜。
2．例文
Last weekend, Xiao Hong’s family took a two-day trip. This picture shows what happened when they arrived in the mountains. After they arrived in the mountains, they found the scenery was beautiful, the mountains were green and the water was clear. But because so many tourists come, there is a lot of rubbish in this area. Xiao Hong thought of what she had learned recently to protect the environment, so she found some collecting-bags and sorted the garbage around her. Her parents also agreed with her and accompanied her, even the dog helped. After their cleaning up, the area became more beautiful.
This reminds us that we should pay attention to protecting the environment when we travel.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。假定你是小红，和父母去山区宿营之后发生的事情；根据图片内容描述，注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据图片的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
3．One possible version:
Without doubt, the study tour plays an important part in our school life. It makes our life meaningful and helps us be knowledgeable. I’d like to share one of the most impressive experiences.
Last term, I took part in a study tour with my classmates. We visited the history museum. The guide led us to different halls to learn about the history of CPC. Seeing the pictures of different wars, we were deeply moved. When we watched the videos about how the soldiers fought against the enemies and achieved success, we were so shocked by their strong will that we couldn’t control the tears. All of us showed our respect to our ancestors because of the peaceful life they fought for. At the end of the trip, we took a special photo.
As teenagers, we should try to learn in various ways. Only in this way can we improve in different ways.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，根据导图内容，介绍自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般过去时。写作时可分为三段式，首先开篇点题，介绍研学是学校生活中很重要的一部分，进而点出分享自己的一次研学经历；其次是具体介绍这段研学经历；最后是表达感受。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。
4．例文：
My Hometown Chengdu
My hometown Chengdu is a wonderful place located in Sichuan province, which has a long history. With rich cultural heritage, Chengdu is one of the most popular destinations for tourists in China.
There are many famous scenic spots such as Jinli, Kuanzhai Street, Tianfu Square and Chengdu Panda Base. There also stands Du Fu’s Thatched Cottage, the Temple of Zhu Geliang and some other places of historical interest. Among them, my must-go place is Kuanzhai Street. Because I can not only walk on the ancient streets but also buy something in traditional houses or stores there. I nearly go there three to four times a month. Besides, as Chengdu people are fond of eating, they have created many delicious food such as Zhong Boiled Dumplings, Dandan Noodles, Lai Tangyuan and some others. If you come here, don’t miss the must-try food, Dandan Noodles. Because the gravy of the noodles is really special and delicious. I eat Dandan Noodles almost every day. Furthermore, watching a Sichuan Opera Show will also provide you with unforgettable and precious memories. The delicate face-changing in Sichuan Opera has become a symbol of Sichuan culture. At the same time, Chengdu also has comfortable weather for people who live there. Even the weather in winter is still warmer than many other cities in China.
I love Chengdu and I hope that my hometown will get more and more beautiful!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于提纲类看图作文，根据题中海报提示内容进行写作。第一段总起全文，总的介绍成都的地理位置及总体情况。第二段分别叙述成都的必去景点、必吃小吃、成都的标志等，并适当进行拓展。第三段表达对成都的期待和祝福。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来叙述，用第一人称表达感受，用第三人称介绍成都的各个方面情况。本文主要以一般现在时为主，注意第三人称单数的正确运用。写作中要特别注意，题干要求适当涉及比较级和最高级的运用。
5．One possible version：
Tom is a kind-hearted boy. One day, he went to the museum by bus. When he got on the bus, he found a seat and sat on it. After a while the bus stopped at the next stop and an old man got on the bus. As soon as he saw him, Tom stood up and gave his seat to the man. But the man didn't accept it. Tom was worried and he came up an good idea. He told the man that he would get off the bus the next stop and the old sat on his seat. Tom stood by the man and he felt sleepy. Seeing this, the old man reminded that he was going to get off the bus. Tom felt embarrassed and he told him the truth that he would get at the terminal station. What a good boy Tom was and I think we should learn from him.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇给图画作文，描述一个小男孩Tom在公交车上给一个老爷爷让座的故事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When he……；As soon as he…….；He told the man that……；the old man reminded that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头描述了Tom上了公交车，接下来描述为他给一位老爷爷让座，假装说自己下一站就下车，最后指出要向Tom学习。此处用了got on，gave his seat to，felt sleepy，learn from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
考点：图画作文。
6．One possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. Now I am ready for my summer holiday. First, I will go with my parents to visit my grandparents in the countryside. We’ll stay outside and enjoy the fresh air. In late July, my family will go to the beach. I will go swimming and play in the water. Last, I will finish my homework and read my favourite books. Reading books always helps me relax. How exciting!
I hope we all will have a great summer holiday.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇给定材料的作文，要求介绍自己的暑假计划。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文时态为一般将来时，用第一人称来书写。写作时可分为两段式：第一段详细介绍自己的暑假计划：拜访祖父母、和家人去沙滩、做作业以及读书等；第二段提出美好的祝愿，呼应开篇。在写作时应该注意符合题意，同时注意语言的准确性和连贯性，可适当补充细节使文章连贯。
7．例文
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, Beijing is one of the greatest. It is the capital city of China. It lies in the northeast of China.
Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace.
You can also try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit. (100 words)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文；
②时态：本文时态用“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据提示内容介绍中国的一个城市，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己想要介绍的城市；
第二步，介绍这个城市的特点；
第三步，阐述自己对这个城市的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest名胜景点
②and so on等等
③be worth sth值得某物
[高分句型]
①If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square.（if条件从句）
②If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there.（if条件从句）
③I think Beijing is worth a visit.（宾语从句）
8．例文
My Summer Vacation
On the third day of summer holiday, July 10th, I flew to Shenzhen with my parents to have a relaxing summer trip. Located in the southwest of our country, Shenzhen is a beautiful coastal city. During the 7-day holiday, I enjoyed having a walk along the beach after supper or having a swim in the afternoon. The sky is blue, the air is fresh. Wherever you go, you can always see the green trees, the neat grasses and the colorful flowers. They are really wonderful. Forgetting all the burdens in my mind at school, I felt really relaxed and refreshed.
Traveling not only broadens my horizons but also opens my eyes to the world.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示，用英语介绍一次暑假旅行。内容包括：叙述旅行的情况（时间、地点、事件、同伴、交通方式等）；你的感受和收获。首先我们要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，辅以第二人称。时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主，在叙述旅行的活动经历时用一般过去时，描述景点的景色和自己的收获时用一般现在时；文章要紧扣题目要点，围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
9．My school rules
We have many rules in our school. I think most of them are good for us, but some are not so good.
Here are some good rules. We can’t be late for school. We must listen carefully to teachers in class. Mobile phones are not allowed to bring into the school. These rules are good for our study and I like them.
I think there are also a few unnecessary rules. For example, students are not allowed to wear long hair. I think girls should be allowed to wear long hair. I hope these rules can be changed.
【详解】本文谈一谈对母校校规的看法，提出一些合理性的建议。所以句子的主语应该用第一人称，句子的时态用一般现在时，所写的句子应该用一些高级词汇及句式，不要写汉语式的英语。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：be good for有益；be allowed to do sth被允许做某事；I think most of them are good for us, but some are not so good.I think there are also a few unnecessary rules.I think girls should be allowed to wear long hair. I hope these rules can be changed.用了that引导的宾语从句，是亮点句。
10．例文
Dear Miss Brown,How is the weather in London Does it often rain The weather in Kunming is fine. The sky is blue and the air is clean. It’s warm all year round. You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere. Many people come to visit Kunming every year. Welcome to Kunming, China. Yours, Meimei Miss Brown153 Park Street, London, England
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以梅梅的名义给Miss Brown写一封明信片。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称写作；时态以一般现在时为主；文章内容要包含所给提示信息：询问对方伦敦天气如何，介绍昆明天气，发出邀请。写作时要注意明信片的格式，做到无标点符号和语法错误。
11． 例文
Shanghai is my favorite city. It is the biggest city in China. Shanghai is located in the eastern part of China. The reasons why I like Shanghai best are as follows. First, it is the central city of our country. It is the center of economy, technology, industry, finance and trade. What’s more, Shanghai is also an emerging tourist city, with profound modern urban culture and many historical monuments. Tourists can enjoy shopping in Shanghai, and having local snacks as well. The night views of Shanghai is fantastic, where you can watch the beautiful lights and you can also take a ferry to visit the Huangpu River.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明自己最喜欢的城市是哪个；
第二步，介绍城市的地理位置；
第三步，具体阐述喜欢这座城市的原因，至少两点。
【亮点词汇】①finance金融
②emerging新兴的
③profound深刻的
④monument遗址
【高分句型】①Shanghai is also an emerging tourist city, with profound modern urban culture and many historical monuments. (with+短语，表示伴随)
②The night views of Shanghai is fantastic, where you can watch the beautiful lights and you can also take a ferry to visit the Huangpu River.(where引导的定语从句)
12．例文：
Our school trip
The school trip is a great chance for the students to relax themselves. And it is good for them to communicate with others.
Last weekend, I went to Beihai Park for a trip with my classmates. It was sunny and a little windy. We did many things. We walked around and took photos in the morning. We had lunch in the park. In the afternoon, we played games under the trees. Our teacher also told us some stories. They were quite interesting. At about three fifty, we went home. All of us had a good time. It was an exciting trip!
I recommend that the students go to visit the science museum next time. It is helpful for the students to learn more about the science and develop the interests in science.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目发表对学校旅游的看法，就是一次学校旅游经历与感受，并对学校旅游提出自己的建议。
2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述自己一次学校旅游经历与感受叙述完整，条理清晰。
13．A Hero in My Heart
Everybody has a hero in his or her heart. I have one in mind, too. She is my mother.
She is very kind and friendly. She is always ready to help others. Once, our neighbor had to leave for business, but her daughter had to be taken to piano lessons once a week. She asked if my mother would do this for her.My mother agreed without thinking twice. There are many other things about her helping others. The little things that my mother does for others are quite touching. She is my hero and I am proud that she is my mother.
I have learned from her that helping others is truly a wonderful thing. I hope I can follow in her footsteps.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，开头时点题，之后写事迹，最后写对自己的影响；注意突出是一个人，不要写群体或者多个人，人物身上要有闪光点。
2.写作指导：本文主要用第三人称来叙述故事内容，用第一人称抒发感想；时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述内心感受时用现在时；事件发生的起因、过程和结果等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰，突出事件人物的品质特点。
14．例文：
Mother is a hero in my heart
When people say the word "hero", what will you think of Maybe your hero is a famous singer, a movie star or a great man. But my hero is around me. She is my mother.
My mother is a wise woman and she plays different roles in my life. As a mother, she takes good care of me. As a friend, she can listen to me. As a teacher, she encourages me instead of getting angry with my poor grades. From her, I get the knowledge about dealing with my housework, relationships and study.
I love my mother forever.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，写作时注意题干中三个要点，一是说清楚你心目中的英雄是谁；二是他/她成为你英雄的原因；三是你从英雄身上学到了什么。特别留意补全标题。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来写；时态采用一般现在时为主；段落安排可以按照要点提示给出的顺序：第一段开门见山说出自己的英雄，第二段写他/她成为自己英雄的原因，发生了什么事情等，第三段表达自己对英雄的情感。
15．例文：
Travelling
Do you like travelling Have you ever heard of “Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles” In fact, travelling is a good way of studying. There are many advantages.
First, we can get an exact picture of what we have read. Seeing is believing. We can accept what it describes in a book only when we see it with our own eyes. Second, we can learn much about geography, biology and history. Third, we can create good memory for lifetime. Besides, travelling can make our life experience rich and broaden our horizon. We can learn much knowledge.
So when you have time, go on a trip.
【详解】题干解读：这篇作文要求以Travelling为题，介绍旅行的好处。题目中呈现了一个思维导图，罗列了旅行的三个好处，还提供了一些与旅行相关的俗语。学生们首先仔细观察这个思维导图，弄清楚文章的主题和结构，理清题目要求。思维导图中的内容都应包括在文章中，而且学生们还应自己再补充一个旅行的好处。
写作指导：审题可知，这篇文章应用一般现在时、第一人称叙述。写作时应注意：一是要将题目中思维导图中的内容都包括在内，并对第四个好处进行补充。题目还要求在文章中包括一句俗语，要注意该俗语与文意的关联，俗语的使用应恰当、准确。其次应注意句式的表达，选择好的句型和短语，使用基本的句子结构，穿插复合句和高级句式，并注意上下文语句的衔接，使文意连贯、流畅。
16．One Possible Version:
Dear Uncle Fang,
Do you agree I call you Uncle Fang I’m Daming, a 15-year-old student. Yesterday, I saw the movie Cute China. Your story deeply touched me. So I’m writing this letter to you(Later I’ll read it to you). It’s a pity you died at a very young age, and thousands of your comrades followed your steps too. So one question has puzzled me for a long time. That is: why so many CPC members chose to die for Marxism without fear Was it worthy Today I seem to have the answer. Because all you men had faith, all you men had the Dream of Cute China. You did all this for a new China. Today I’m proud to tell you all that the Dream of Cute China has already come true! Today’s China is among the greatest countries in the world! She is more beautiful and powerful than what you described(what she was like) in your book. As a Chinese student, I also have a Cute China Dream. That is to realize the great rise of the Chinese nation. We are sure that we can make it.
Peace to your soul!
Daming
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，写封信告慰方志敏烈士。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时综合使用三个人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要从以下几方面入手：问烈士为什么这么多共产党员为了信仰选择牺牲而无所畏惧，告慰烈士现在的中国比他书中写的更美丽、更强大以及作为一名中学生，你的梦想和责任。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
17．Dear Mum and Dad,
I know you are worried about my study, so I am writing to tell you what I really think.
There are only five online lessons every day. That means I have enough time for study. I listen quite carefully in class and teachers think I have done well. But if I keep learning all day, I will feel really tired. So I can relax myself while looking after Alice. When you have to work, I can help with housework so that you will not be so busy. It is a good way to practise life skills too. Besides, I am old and strong enough to do something I can to take care of our family.
Love,
Alan
【详解】1.题干解读： 本文是应用文作文和提纲作文。要求根据艾伦在网课期间写的一篇日记， 给爸爸妈妈写一封信，信中必须包括以下全部要点，并且适当发挥，文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名，合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯，本文主要使用第一人称，一般现在时。
2.例文点评：本文是应用文作文和提纲作文。内容切题，意思连贯，时态表达灵活准确，没有单词拼写和语法错误。一些固定短语和句型运用较为得体，使得文章更加流畅，自然。
3.高分亮点：
连词和短语：如be worried about担心，keep doing sth.一直做某事，all day整天，look after照顾，help with帮忙做……， take care of 照顾，等等。
高分句型：（1） There are only five online lessons every day. （2）That means I have enough time for study. （3）But if I keep learning all day, I will feel really tired. （4）It is a good way to practise life skills too.等等。
18．例文：
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear that you plan to visit my hometown this summer. I’d like to tell you something about my hometown — Yubang village. Yubang is a beautiful village. There are many houses with big yards. The air is fresh and life is quiet. The weather is hot and it often rains in summer. You should take an umbrella with you. You can wear a hat and a pair of sunglasses. You can’t miss the delicious snacks here, such as dumplings, dried salted ducks, wonton and so on. Remember to take a camera.
I hope you can have a wonderful time. I’m looking forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，向朋友介绍自己的家乡的一些特色、美食以及要注意的一些事项，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，符合书信格式，本文应该用第二人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
19．例文：
Dear Grace,
Glad to receive your letter. I’m fine. Now my grades are very good, that is because I am confident in my study. In class, I listen to the teacher carefully. After class, I do a good job of review. And as a student, I never hesitate to raise my hand whenever a question or a point comes to my mind. I can manage my time properly and do my homework effectively.
Besides, Hangzhou is becoming a modern city. It is one of the most famous cities in China. It’s known for the Longjing tea. In western countries, the tea trade took place in the 19th century, so Longjing tea is a wonderful gift to your host family. I think they will like it.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求根据所给邮件，给你的笔友Grace写一封回信，对自己和杭州的变化以及对Grace第一次去寄宿家庭是否带礼物提出建议，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；叙述自己和杭州的变化时，应详细具体，逻辑性要强，保证条理清晰。
20．One possible version:
Dear Eric,
How’s it going I’m on vacation in Xiamen with my parents now. It is warm and sunny here. My parents are having fun swimming in the sea, and I am walking on the sand and enjoying the sea wind. It’s really relaxing. The sea water and the sky here are beautiful and clean, so I take a lot of photos. We all have a good time. And I think it’s a good place to visit.
I miss you.
Linda
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作。写作时，需根据要点提示和要求用英语写一封信，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主,现在进行时为辅；注意书信的书写格式；在描述自己所在位置以及天气时，要用一般现在时；描述人们正在进行的活动时要用现在进行时；适当运用连词，使文章叙述连贯通顺，内容更清晰完整。
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