小升初易错题特训：书面表达-小学英语六年级下册人教新起点版（含答案）

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小升初易错题特训：书面表达-小学英语六年级下册人教新起点版
1．Everyone has many good friends. What about you Do you have any good friends Who is your good friend How is he or she like Are you the same or different
请以“My good friend”为题，写一篇不少于8句话的短文，介绍你的好朋友，并跟你自己做一下比较。
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2．请你根据下表陈慧的个人信息，以“My Friend Chen Hui”为题写一篇英语短文介绍一下陈慧的基本情况。不少于 50 个单词。
姓名 陈慧 喜欢科目 English and art
年龄 11 学校 Yucai Primary School
外貌 tall and thin 爱好 Dancing, drawing pictures
上学方式 on foot 理想职业 teacher
I have a friend. Her name is Chen Hui. ________________________________________
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3．以“My future school”为题，设想你心中未来学校的样子，可借助下列思维导图来完成。
My future school
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4．以“My holiday”为题描述你的假期。
参考词汇：go to…, by plane/ bus/bike, visit, take some photos, have a good holiday
以上A、B两篇小作文，请你选择一篇来写。要求结构完整、语句流畅，字体工整，不少于50词。
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5．每个人都有自己的梦想，请以“Dreams”为题，谈谈你的梦想，可着重围绕以下三个方面。
提示：(1). What do you want to be in the future (doctor, teacher, fireman, farmer...)
(2). Why (I want to be a/an... because...)
(3). What should you do to make your dreams come true (To make my dream come true, first, I will ... Then, ... Next, ... Finally, ... )
要求：(1).短文内容须包括所给的问题要点，也可以适当发挥想象。
(2).语句通顺，条理清楚，语法正确,拼写无误，书写美观。
(3).不少于60个字(不包括已给出部分)。
Dreams
Everybody has a dream. For me, I want to be _______________________________________________________________________________________
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6．请以“My old school”为题写一篇英语小作文，向大家介绍一下5年前你们的学校。不少于6句话。
提示词： years ago small old no computer/music room
only one playground classroom
My old school
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7．每个人都有自己最熟悉和最喜欢的人，以“My...”为题写一个你最熟悉和喜欢的人。
要求：(1). 不少于60词。
(2). 不得出现真实人名。
(3). 先把题目补充完整。
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8．请根据以下提示内容，为你即将到来的周末做个合理的计划吧！50词左右。
My weekend plan
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9．以My Favourite Festival为题，写一篇小作文 。
要求：描述清楚，语句通顺，表达准确，字迹工整。不少于5句话。
My Favourite Festival
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10．春天来了，世间万物复苏。周日，老师带我们去郊区植树。请以“trees”为题，写一篇植树带来的好处的作文。
要求：(1) 语句连贯，语法正确；
(2) 不少于六句话。
参考词汇：look after (照顾). Tree planting Day (植树节). Useful (有用的，有益的). keep (保持). make (使得). air (空气). clean and fresh (干净又清新). protect the environment (保护环境). planting trees (植树)
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11．以“A famous person”为题写一篇短文，介绍一位你熟悉或者崇拜的名人，不少于40个单词。
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12．（任选一个题目，写不少于5个句子）
题目(1)：请以“A bad day”为题，用英语写出自己糟糕的一天。
题目2：请以“A lucky day”为题，用英语写出自己幸运的一天。
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13．请以How can we study well 为主题写作，要求不少于6句话、35个单词。
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14．假如你是Wu Binbin，暑假即将来临，请根据提示词，写一篇短文介绍Wu Binbin的暑假计划，也可以自由发挥想象。（不少于50个词）
提示词：
时间：summer holiday
地点：go to Dalian
人物：Wu Binbin, parents
出行方式：by plane
计划做的事：go to the beach, go swimming, row a boat, go to the zoo, eat some good food, buy some gifts.
My summer holiday plan
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15．中国有很多名胜古迹，你都到过哪里呢？你最喜欢的是什么地方，想一想写下来吧。
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参考答案：
1．参考例文：
My good friend
I have a good friend. Her name is Sarah. She is 2 years older than me. She is 13 years old. I’m 1.5 metres tall. She is taller than me. She is 1.62 metres. And she is heavier than me. She is 45 kilograms and I’m 42 kilograms. She likes reading and going hiking. I like swimming. We often read books and go swimming on the weekend together. Sometimes we go hiking with our friends.
We are different in many ways, but we are good friends.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My good friend”为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述好朋友是谁，你和朋友的不同。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：older更大的，taller更高的，heavier更重的，kilogram公斤，go hiking去远足，read books看书，go swimming去游泳，on the weekend在周末
参考句型：I have …； Her name is …；She is …； She likes …；We often ...；Sometimes we ...；
2．范文：
My Friend Chen Hui
I have a friend. Her name is Chen Hui. She is eleven years old. She is tall and thin. She studies in Yucai Primary School. She often goes to school on foot. She likes English and art. She likes dancing and drawing pictures. She wants to be a teacher in the future.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My Friend Chen Hui”为题写一篇英语短文。然后再阐述年龄，外貌，在哪个学校，上学的交通方式，喜欢的科目，爱好和理想职业。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：eleven11，tall and thin又高又瘦，study学习，Yucai Primary School育才小学，go to school去上学，draw pictures画画，in the future在将来
参考句型：She is …； She often …；She likes …；She wants to be …；
3．范文：
My future school
In the future, I would like to see many changes in our school. We will study online at home. Students will not carry their books. All our books will be on a small computer. Our classrooms will be under the sea. Teachers will be our friends. We will have a picnic every month.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己未来的学校。然后再阐述自己心中未来学校的样子，包括老师，学生，教室等。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：in the future在未来，online网上，computer电脑，have a picnic野餐
参考句型：In the future, I would like...；We will...；Students/Teachers will...
4．范文：
My holiday
This holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. Beijing is the capital city of our country. I went to Beijing by plane. I visited the Palace Museum, the Great Wall and Tiananmen Square. Tiananmen Square is very large. The Great Wall is very long. The Palace Museum is very beautiful. I took many photos. I had a good holiday.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求用第一人称叙述自己的假期生活，可以包括去哪里游玩，乘坐什么交通工具，是否过得愉快等。注意使用一般现在时态和过去时态相结合，并符合字数要求。
2.参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：parents父母，capital city首都城市，by plane乘飞机，the Palace Museum故宫，the Great Wall长城，Tiananmen Square天安门广场，large大的，beautiful漂亮的
参考句型：I went to...；...is the capital of...；...is beautiful；I visited...；I had...
5．范文：
Everybody has a dream. For me, I want to be a dentist. Because many children don’t care about their teeth. I want to help them.
To make my dream come true, first, I will study hard. Then, I will read many books. Next, I should be healthy and strong. I will do more sport. I will eat many healthy food and have a healthy diet. I will be happy to help people.
I believe(相信)my dream will come true.
【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求介绍自己的梦想。可以写一写将来想要做什么工作，想要做这种工作的原因，怎样做才能叫自己的梦想实现等。注意文章为一般将来时态，单词数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：dentist牙医；because因为；care about关注；help帮助；study hard努力学习；read books读书；healthy and strong健康强壮的；eat healthy food吃健康的食物；come true实现；
参考句型：Because...；Then I will…；Next I will…；
6．范文：
My old school
My old school was small. There was only one small building. We didn’t have a music room. There was no gym in my old school five years ago. But we had a big playground. And we often played games on it. I love my old school.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍五年前自己的学校，包括学校的历史、建筑和设施等。注意文章为一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：small小的，old古老的，computer计算机，music room音乐教室，playground操场，classroom教室
参考句型：My old school was …； There was …；But we had …； We often …；I love…
7．范文：
My Idol
My idol is my father. My father is a good man. He is tall and strong.
He is very smart. He is my teacher at home. Dad can cook. He gets up early every morning and cooks delicious breakfast for me and my mother.
My father is a good son. He loves my grandparents very much. He often sees my grandparents with us.
In his factory, he works hard. On holidays, he also goes to the factory.
I love my father. He is my idol.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My...”为题写一个你最熟悉和喜欢的人。然后再阐述是谁，会做的事情及在生活中的角色。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：idol偶像，strong强壮的，smart聪明的，delicious美味的，breakfast早饭，grandparents祖父母，factory工厂
参考句型：My idol is …； He is …；He …；
8．例文
My weekend plan
I’m going to have a nice weekend! I will take a trip with my friends on Sunday morning. We are going to Fulong Lake. It’s far from our home. We will go there by bus. We are going to bring some snacks for lunch. We will go boating and take a walk there. We will have a good weekend.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目是根据提示内容，以My weekend plan为题，写一写你即将到来的周末的计划，写清楚计划做的事情，时态是一般将来时，要求：语句通顺，50词左右。
2. 参考词汇及参考句型：
参考词汇：take a trip旅行，Sunday morning星期天早上，by bus乘坐公共汽车，go boating去划船，take a walk散步
参考句型：I am going to…；I / We will…；We are going to…
9．范文：
My Favourite Festival
Among the four seasons, I like summer best. There are three main reasons for it. First, although summer is hot, I can do many things that I like. In summer, I can eat watermelons and ice cream. And I can go swimming with my friends in our school’s swimming pool. It’s really fun. Second, in summer, I can wear my beautiful dresses and skirts every day. Third, we will have our summer holidays for almost two months. We can go travelling with our parents. These are the reasons why I like summer.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己喜欢的季节。然后再阐述喜欢该季节的原因以及在该季节可以做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：favourite最喜欢，season季节，summer夏天，although尽管，watermelons西瓜，beautiful漂亮的，go travelling去旅行
参考句型：My favourite season is …； I like … ；I can …； I often …；We will...；We can...
10．范文：
Trees
Trees are our good friends. Trees are useful in our life. Look, trees can help us to do many things. Trees can keep us cool in the summer. Trees can make our hometown and our school more beautiful. Trees can keep the air clean and fresh. Trees can help us to keep the Earth green and clean.
Planting trees is good for us.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题要求以“trees”为题，写一篇关于植树的作文，包括植树的好处，注意语句连贯，语法正确；不少于六句话。
2. 参考词汇和参考句型：
参考词汇：look after 照顾，Tree planting Day植树节，useful有用的，keep保持，make使得，air空气，clean and fresh干净又清新，protect the environment保护环境，planting trees植树
参考句型：Trees are...；Trees can...；Planting trees is...
11．范文：
A famous person
Dr Sun Yatsen was a very famous person in Chinese history. He was born in Guangdonge. He tried to change China and free the Chinese people. He loved the Chinese people and the Chinese people love him very much. Today many streets, schools and parks named after him. He is my hero.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“A famous person”为题写一篇短文，可以介绍他/她的职业，生平事迹等。注意文章时态并要符合单词数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：famous person著名的人，Chinese history中国历史，change China改变中国，free the Chinese people解放中国人民，hero英雄
参考句型：Dr Sun Yatsen was…；He was born…；He tried to…；He loved…；He is…
12．例文
A bad day
Yesterday is a bad day for me. First, I got up late. Next I missed the bus, so I was late for school. Then I forgot my homework. My teacher was angry with me. What a bad day! I hope tomorrow is a good day.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目是以“A bad day”为题是描写自己糟糕的一天，写清楚发生的事情，时态是一般过去时。要求：语句通顺，不少于5个句子。
2.参考词汇及参考句型：
参考词汇：a bad day糟糕的一天，get up late起床迟，miss the bus错过公交车，late for school上学迟到，forget忘记，angry生气的
参考句型：I had…；I missed…；It was…
13．范文：
How can we study well
I think we must have a good way to study well. At first, we should listen to the teacher carefully in class. Then we must do our homework on time. If we have questions, we should ask the teachers for help. We should also learn from our friends.
【详解】1. 题目解读：这是个命题作文，该题目要求叫用第一人称和一般现在时介绍我们怎样才能学好的方法，句子和单词要符合要求。
2. 参考单词及句型：
参考单词：a good way一种好的方式，at first首先，listen to听，carefully认真地，in class在课上，do homework做作业，ask for help请求帮忙
参考句型：
We should...；We should also...；We must...；
14．范文：
My summer holiday plan
My summer holiday is coming. I will go to Dalian with my parents. We will go there by plane. We will go to the beach. We are going swimming and we will row a boat in the river. Then we are going to the zoo to see the animals. We will also eat some good food in the restaurant. I am going to buy some gifts for my good friend. I think we will have a good time.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My summer holiday plan”为题写一篇作文。可以写一写暑假即将来临的计划和打算，如：与父母出去旅游，可以描写旅行的地点，交通方式，天气，打算做的的事情等。注意文章为一般将来时态，单词数量要符合要求。
2. 参考单词及句型：
参考单词：
go to the beach去海滩, go swimming去游泳, row a boat划船, go to the zoo去动物园, eat some good food吃一些好吃的, buy some gifts买一些礼物
参考句型：
I will...；We are going to...；We will also...；I think we will...；
15．范文:
The Great Wall
China has a long history. There are many interesting places. I have visited many places, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and Tian’anmen Square. I like the Great Wall best. It has a long history. The Great Wall has a history of more than 2000 years. It’s very long. It’s great. I love the Great Wall.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称叙述自己到过我国哪些名胜古迹，如长城，故宫，和天安门广场等等，然后阐述最喜欢的地方长城。文章是一般现在时，符合字数要求。
2. 参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：long长的，history历史，interesting places有趣的地方，the Great Wall长城，the Palace Museum故宫，Tian’anmen Square天安门广场，more than超过
参考句型：There are...；I have visited...；I like...；It has...；It’s...
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