2023届内蒙古高考英语写作分类训练：建议信10篇（含解析）

建议信
1．假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Mark打算参加学校正在举办的以中国电影为主题的英语征文比赛，发邮件请你提供一些建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 给出建议；
2. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．假如你是李华，笔友Tom对于高中生活感到焦虑，写信询问你如何适应高中的生活。请根据以下内容，给Tom提出建议。
1.积极参加学校社团；2. 尽可能多交朋友；3. ……
写作要求：
1.词数：100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，你的朋友Tom来信说，近来他经常感到心烦易怒。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示安慰；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.词数10左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 来信向你倾诉他在学习中文的过程中遇到的困难，并向你寻求帮助。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示安慰 2.具体建议(至少 2 条) 3.表达祝愿
注意：1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
Dear Peter,
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5．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike打算在假期给家人做一些中国美食。他写信向你征询建议，请你给他回信。内容包括：
1.推荐一种美食；
2.说明理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack准备参加学校一年一度的越野赛，写信征求你的意见。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.表示支持；
2.对此项运动的理解；
3.给出建议。
参考词汇：cross-country running race越野赛
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
7．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David来信说他在阅读中文名著时感到很吃力，难以坚持，请你给他写封回信，劝他不要放弃。要点如下：
1.阅读中文名著的益处；
2.给出具体建议。
参考词汇：Chinese classics 中文名著
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．近年来随着中国的快速发展，越来越多的外国人想学习汉语以便更好地了解中国。假如你是李华，近日你收到了外国笔友Tom的来信，信中说他想要学习汉语，希望你给他一些建议，请你给他回信。
内容： 1.得知他要学习汉语，你感到很高兴。
2.对于如何学习汉语提出三点建议。
3.希望你的建议对他有所帮助。
注意： 1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
9．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据以下要点写回信。
1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4交中国朋友。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
10．假设你是《学生双语报》的编辑 Robert, 你收到了一个叫李芳的学生给你的信。请阅读下面这封信并给李芳写封回信, 向她提些建议。
Dear Robert,
I'm writing to ask you for some advice. I believe you can help me.
My sister Betty has been preparing to take part in a TV show called Cool Girls since last month. In order to win, she has been practicing singing and dancing every day. As a result, she can't keep up with her classmates now. What's more, she has been on a diet to keep slim, which does harm to her health. I'm very worried about her, but I don't know whether I should prevent her from taking part in such kinds of activities. Could you tell me what I should do
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Fang
注意∶词数120 左右。
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1．One possible version:
Dear Mark,
I’m so delighted to hear that you will participate in the writing competition themed on Chinese films being held by your school. As for how to write about Chinese films, I’d like to give you some suggestions.
To start with, before writing the article, you’d better look up some information from the Internet or magazines related to Chinese films. What’s more, it would be wise to focus on meaningful and recently-released films. For example, there is a popular film named My Father and Me, which consists of several different stories. Each story is short but moving.
I hope my advice can be of some help and that you can win a prize in the competition. Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Mark回复一封邮件，为他打算参加学校正在举办的以中国电影为主题的英语征文比赛提供一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→pleased
建议：suggestion→proposal
专注于：focus on→concentrate on
关于：as for→with respect to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To start with, before writing the article, you’d better look up some information from the Internet or magazines related to Chinese films.
拓展句：To start with, before writing the article, you’d better look up some information from the Internet or magazines which is related to Chinese films.
【点睛】[高分句型1] For example, there is a popular film named My Father and Me, which consists of several different stories. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope my advice can be of some help and that you can win a prize in the competition. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2．Dear Tom,
Learning that you are anxious about high school life, I am writing to give you some advice on how to get used to it.
First, I think it would be a good idea to join school clubs which helps you to keep a balance between your study and life, and promote your study efficiency. Another thing I would suggest is that you are supposed to make friends with those who share your interests, such as collecting model cars or playing an unusual instrument. In addition, why not take part in more outdoor sports activities. By doing this, you will feel much better.
I hope you’ll benefit from my advice, and wish you’ll adapt to high school life as soon as possible!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给笔友Tom就高中生活中存在的焦虑提几条建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
焦虑的：anxious→dysphoric
适应：get used to→be adapted to
参加：take part in→participate in
从……收益：benefit from→profit by
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning that you are anxious about high school life, I am writing to give you some advice on how to get used to it.
拓展句：Because I’ve learnt that you are anxious about high school life, I am writing to give you some advice on how to get used to it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, I think it would be a good idea to join school clubs which helps you to keep a balance between your study and life, and promote your study efficiency. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Another thing I would suggest is that you are supposed to make friends with those who share your interests, such as collecting model cars or playing an unusual instrument.(运用了that引导的表语从句和和who引导的限制性定语从句)
3．Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to know that you tend to be upset and annoyed these days. In fact, it’s a common phenomenon for teenagers especially before an exam, so you don’t have to worry a lot. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are some useful tips.
First of all, I suggest that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. What’s more, you’d better keep optimistic about your future. A positive attitude towards life can be helpful in cheering you up. It is also a good idea to go outdoors and play team games with your friends because physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.
Hopefully, you will find my advice helpful. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Tom写一份回信，针对Tom近来他经常感到心烦易怒的现象，表示安慰，并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
倾向于做：tend to do →have a tendency to do
事实上：in fact →as a matter of fact
建议：tips →suggestions
此外：what’s more →besides
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：First of all, I suggest that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.
拓展句：Firstly, my suggestion is that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, I suggest that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略关系代词的限制性定语从句，how引导的宾语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句，动名词作介宾。）
【高分句型2】It is also a good idea to go outdoors and play team games with your friends because physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.（运用了it作形式主语，动词不定式作主语，because引导原因状语从句，动词不定式作后置定语。）
4．Dear Peter,
Hearing that you come across many difficulties with your Chinese learning, I’m writing to express my concern and offer you some tips on how to learn it well.
Your problem is so common among foreign learners that you needn’t worry too much. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect! So it’s a good idea to practice Chinese daily. Besides, you can communicate with your Chinese teacher who knows how to study efficiently and effectively. Additionally, watching Chinese programs is a better choice, which can not only entertain you, but also improve your listening and pronunciation.
Stay focused and you will definitely make it! Wish you all the best!
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生给在中文学习过程中遇到困难并寻求帮助的英国朋友Peter回信，表达安慰并提出具体建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
遇到困难：come across difficulties→run into/meet difficulties
提供：offer→provide
建议：tip→suggestion/advice
此外：besides→in addition/furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Stay focused and you will definitely make it!
拓展句：If you stay focused ,you will definitely make it.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, you can communicate with your Chinese teacher who knows how to study efficiently and effectively. (运用了who引导的限定性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Additionally, watching Chinese programs is a better choice, which can not only entertain you, but also improve your listening and pronunciation. (运用了动名词做主语和which引导的非限定性定语从句)
5．Dear Mike,
I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to cook some Chinese food for your family during the holiday, which I think is a great idea.
Here, I’d like to recommend Peking Duck, a dish from Beijing. First of all, it is a symbol of traditional Chinese food and a must for every foreign tourist who wishes to have a taste of China. Secondly, it is manageable for you, since you have seen your mom cook turkey. The cooking process is very similar. You can download a recipe from the Internet and get all the necessary materials from Chinatown. If you still need more help, I would be delighted to provide online guidance while you are cooking.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生回信给Mike，推荐一种中国美食，并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：happy→ glad
推荐：recommend→suggest
希望做某事：wish to do sth.→ hope to do sth.
提供：provide→ offer
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here, I’d like to recommend Peking Duck, a dish from Beijing.
拓展句：Here, I’d like to recommend Peking Duck, which is a dish from Beijing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to cook some Chinese food for your family during the holiday, which I think is a great idea.（运用了that引导宾语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】First of all, it is a symbol of traditional Chinese food and a must for every foreign tourist who wishes to have a taste of China.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型3】Secondly, it is manageable for you, since you have seen your mom cook turkey.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句）
6．Dear Jack,
I am very delighted to know that you are going to take part in the cross-country running race held usually in our school. I am proud of you and admire you so much.
Long-distance running benefits us a lot. Not only can it build up our body but it can also strengthen our will. Besides, finishing the hard race will help us obtain self-confidence and motivation, which are essential qualities in our future success.
To make it, it’s necessary to train regularly and make full preparations for it. Also, there is no doubt that you should take enough nutritious food and valuable instructions from your coach.
Go for it and wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jack回信，就他准备参加学校一年一度的越野赛给出适当的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in→participate in
获得：obtain → gain/get
基本的：essential→basic
宝贵的：valuable→precious/worthwhile
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To make it, it’s necessary to train regularly and make full preparations for it.
拓展句：If you want to make it, it’s necessary to train regularly and make full preparations for it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only can it build up our body but it can also strengthen our will.（运用了not only…but also的倒装结构。）
【高分句型2】Besides, finishing the hard race will help us obtain self-confidence and motivation, which are essential qualities in our future success.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。）
7．范文
Dear Tom,
Knowing that you are having some trouble in reading the Chinese classics, I am writing to share my opinions and advice on this topic.
First and foremost, it is of great significance for a Chinese learner to read more books in the original language. By doing so, not only can you appreciate the charm of the language, but you can also broaden your views in understanding the culture and history of China. Additionally, reading Chinese novels will surely contribute to good communication and positive interaction with your Chinese classmates and friends. As for how to solve the challenges in reading the Chinese classics, I do think interest comes first and choosing books suitable to your level is equally important. Don’t lost heart, with a little patience, and you will benefit a lot from reading.
I hope what I have mentioned above can help you and please feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。因为英国笔友David来信说他在阅读中文名著时感到很吃力，现要求考生给他回信，劝他不要放弃。信件内容包括阅读中文名著的益处以及给出具体建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议：advice→ recommendation
理解：understand →comprehend
解决：solve → settle
重要的：important→ significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First and foremost, it is of great significance for a Chinese learner to read more books in the original language.
拓展句：First and foremost, it is of great significance that a Chinese learner should read more books in the original language.
【点睛】[高分句型1]By doing so, not only can you appreciate the charm of the language, but you can also broaden your views in understanding the culture and history of China. （运用了not only提前放句首引导的部分倒装结构）
[高分句型2] As for how to solve the challenges in reading the Chinese classics, I do think interest comes first and choosing books suitable to your level is equally important.（运用了“疑问词+动词不定式”结构，do对动词think进行强调）
8．Dear Tom,
I am very glad to receive your letter, in which you expressed your idea of learning Chinese, and I am very happy about it. So, I have a few suggestions for you.
First of all, you can sign up for a Chinese training class. You can gain a lot by taking Chinese lessons and practicing with your partners. Secondly, watching Chinese TV programs and reading Chinese newspapers are also beneficial. Through these you can not only learn about China’s development but also have a deep understanding of Chinese culture. Finally, making Chinese friends through social media will help you quickly integrate into a Chinese-speaking environment.
I hope my suggestions are helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国笔友Tom写封回信，对他要学汉语的想法表示鼓励，同时给与学习汉语的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
收到某人的来信：hear from sb.→receive sb’s letter
建议：advice→suggestion
报名参加：take/attend→sign up for
有用的：helpful→beneficial
认识/了解：know→learn about
融入：fit in→integrate into
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：First of all, you can sign up for a Chinese training class. You can gain a lot by taking Chinese lessons and practicing with your partners.
拓展句：First of all, you can sign up for a Chinese training class, where you can gain a lot by taking Chinese lessons and practicing with your partners.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am very glad to receive your letter, in which you expressed your idea of learning Chinese, and I am very happy about it.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope my suggestions are helpful to you.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
9．Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.
Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes.
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Peter回信，告诉他怎样学好中文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion → tip
另外：besides→ in addition
记住：remember sth. → keep sth. in mind
询问某人的建议：ask for sb.’s advice→ turn to sb. for advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句。
原句：Here are a few suggestions.
拓展句：Here are a few suggestions which will help you improve your Chinese.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. （运用了as引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
10．One possible version:
Dear Li Fang,
I'm very glad to hear from you. Now let's talk about the problem you mentioned in your letter. In my opinion, it is a good thing for students to take part in a TV show. By doing so, they can develop their abilities. However, they have to make sure that it ill not affect their studies or health. Your sister should take measures to change her lifestyle now. You can help her make a reasonable schedule which can arrange her time properly. Health is the most precious treasure we have. It's really not a good idea to sacrifice her health for beauty. As a student, she should keep in mind that studying is the most important task for her now.
Yours truly,
Robert
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生读完一个叫李芳的学生的来信后，给她回信，向她提些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提到：mention→refer to
参与：take part in→participate in
计划：schedule→plan
合适地：properly→appropriately
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In my opinion, it is a good thing for students to take part in a TV show. By doing so, they can develop their abilities.
拓展句：In my opinion, it is a good thing for students to take part in a TV show,by which they can develop their abilities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You can help her make a reasonable schedule which can arrange her time properly.（运用了which引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As a student, she should keep in mind that studying is the most important task for her now.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）