2023届内蒙古高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信10篇（含解析）
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感谢信/祝贺信
1．假定你是津英中学高一学生谢飞。今年11月份你因病住院两周。在此期间，你的外国朋友 Francis 经常在线上辅导你学习英语，鼓励你积极面对生活，战胜困难。请给他写一封电子邮件表达你的感激之情，内容包括：
1.告知近况；
2.回顾帮助；
3.邀请他春节来你家。
注意：1.词数不少于 100；
2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Francis,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Xie Fei
2．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim想要了解你在疫情期间是如何欢度春节的。请你就此给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 感谢关心；
2. 介绍春节活动；
3. 表达节日感想。
注意： 1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：新冠肺炎COVID-19
Dear Jim,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，上周日你不慎在操场丢失一个书包，里面有学生证、钱包等物品。你校外教 Mr. Smith 捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 描述事情经过；
3. 再次表达感谢。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假设你是李华，你网购了一个产品，但是因为疏忽写错收件地址，快递小哥张明联系你后确认了地址。尽管不属于他的送件地区，他却利用下班时间将快件送到你手中。对此你很感激，想写封信感谢对方。写作要点如下:
1. 表示感谢；
2. 说明缘由；
3. 再次致谢。
注意:1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
5．假设你是李华，你上周刚刚参加了你校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛，并从三十名选手中脱颖而出，荣获“十佳奖”。在准备参赛期间，你的外教Mr.Craige对你提供了很多指导和帮助。现请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.获奖情况及感受； 2.回顾准备过程； 3.感谢他的帮助； 4.邀他来家做客。
注意：1．词数100词左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
提示：十佳奖：Top Ten Prize
Dear Mr. Craige,
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，于2019年3月2日搭乘某航空公司航班（Flight HZH9211）回国。到机场后，你发现遗失了行李箱。现你用英语给航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。
要点包括：
1. 陈述写信原因；
2. 描述行李箱；
3. 期待回复并表示感谢。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam，
My name is Li Hua, and I was a passenger
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Regards,
Li Hua
7．假定你是武汉某高中学生李华，你在2019武汉秋令营结识的朋友Tom了解到武汉爆发的新冠状病毒肺炎疫情，组织了德国伯乐中学中文合唱团倾情演唱中文歌《让世界充满爱》，为武汉加油。你看了这个小视频非常感动，请给他写一封英文感谢信。
要点如下：1. 表达感动和感谢。
2. 告诉他你的现状。
3. 表达信心和愿望。
4. 参考词汇 合唱团：chorus 新冠状病毒肺炎: novel corona-virus
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．假定你是校英文报的兼职编辑李华，请用英语给外教Mr Andrew写一封邮件。内容包 括:
1. 感谢他为校报提供稿件；
2. 简要评价他的稿件和工作态度；
3. 希望继续供稿；
注意：1.词数110左右；2.可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Andrew,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9．父亲节快要到了，杂志社Reader’s Digest在为父亲节的特刊征稿，征集写给父亲的感谢信。请你以李华为名按要求写封感谢信投稿。
要求：1. 词数：100左右；
2. 请在信中至少列举一个父亲关爱你的事例.
Dear Father,
I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours beloved
Li Hua
10．假设你是李明，最近参加了一期“澳大利亚冬令营”活动。共两周时间你住在Johnson 夫妇家中，他们为你提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。请写一封电子邮件感谢他们。
内容包括以下要点：
1．安全到家 2．感谢 3．感受 4．保持联系
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯；
3．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
1．Dear Francis,
How is everything going With the Spring Festival approaching, I’m writing to convey my great gratitude for your help during my two weeks in hospital.
I’ll never forget the support and comfort you gave me while I was in hospital this September. You not only helped me with my English study online but also offered valuable suggestions, which still play a significant impact on me now. In the two weeks, I was in low spirits, with lots of concerns on mind. Your timely encouragement fueled my confidence and bravery, so that I could face the challenges with a positive attitude.
Now I’m fully occupied in preparing for the entrance examination to college. Though it is hard and stressful, I still manage to strike a balance between study and life, doing sports with my classmates occasionally.
I’d like to invite you to come to my house for the Spring Festival if possible. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Xie Fei
【导语】本篇书面表达属于感谢信。要求考生写一封感谢信，感谢在住院期间，外国朋友Francis对自己的帮助和鼓励。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响：impact→influence/effect
促进，提升：fuel→build up
忙于：be occupied in→be busy in
偶然地：occasionally→by accident
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the Spring Festival approaching, I’m writing to convey my great gratitude for your help during my two weeks in hospital.
复合句：As the Spring Festival is approaching, I’m writing to convey my great gratitude for your help during my two weeks in hospital.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You not only helped me with my English study online but also offered valuable suggestions, which still play a significant impact on me now. (运用了not only...but also...连接并列结构和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Though it is hard and stressful, I still manage to strike a balance between study and life, doing sports with my classmates occasionally. (运用了though引导让步状语从句和现在分词作伴随状语)
2．Dear Jim,
How is everything going I’m writing to express my gratitude for your genuine concern and inform you of how our family celebrated the Spring Festival.
In the Spring Festival of 2021, Many people chose to spend Spring Festival in cities where they work instead of returning to their hometowns to reduce the risk of COVID-19 transmission. Instead of sitting at home and stuffing ourselves, we lived a healthy Spring Festival with relatives and friends. We went out to pay a visit to the local tourist attractions.
This year's Spring Festival was really impressive. Not only did it give us an opportunity to get together with family but also we enjoyed the scenery of our city.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写封邮件，介绍你在疫情期间是如何欢度春节的。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般现在时和现在进行时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 感谢关心；
2. 介绍春节活动；
3. 表达节日感想。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
inform sb. of sth.; choose to; instead of; pay a visit to; not only … but also …
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to express my gratitude for your genuine concern and inform you of how our family celebrated the Spring Festival.
2. In the Spring Festival of 2021, Many people chose to spend Spring Festival in cities where they work instead of returning to their hometowns to reduce the risk of COVID-19 transmission.
3. Instead of sitting at home and stuffing ourselves, we lived a healthy Spring Festival with relatives and friends.
4. We went out to pay a visit to the local tourist attractions.
5. Not only did it give us an opportunity to get together with family but also we enjoyed the scenery of our city.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] In the Spring Festival of 2021, Many people chose to spend Spring Festival in cities where they work instead of returning to their hometowns to reduce the risk of COVID-19 transmission.这句话运用了关系副词where引导的定语从句。
[高分句型2] Not only did it give us an opportunity to get together with family but also we enjoyed the scenery of our hometown.这句话运用了部分倒装结构。
3．Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 2. I’m writing to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss. I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
Please accept my cordial thanks for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封感谢信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 写信目的；
2. 描述事情经过；
3. 再次表达感谢。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
thank sb. for，leave sth. on the playground，owing to，worried，at a loss，inform that…，beyond description
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing Io thank you for returning my schoolbag.
2. Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness.
3. I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me.
4. Just as I was at a loss.
5. I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag.
6. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition （供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but （供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]
What worried me most was that I left my schoolbag with my student's ID card, wallet and some documents in it.使用了what主语从句和that引导的表语从句。
[高分句型2]
Someone told me that you have found my schoolbag which was at the school's Lost and Found 使用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的定语从句。
4．Dear Zhang Ming，
I am Li Hua, writing to convey my sincere appreciation to you for your kindness and generous help, without which I may have lost my parcel.
It was because of my carelessness that I left out a number in my address，thus making it hard for you to deliver my parcel. However, after calling me and confirming my correct address, you were so kind as to decide to send it to me after work. Actually, my apartment is located in an area which is beyond your delivery range. Therefore, I am so grateful to you for your selflessness.
Again, I can not express my appreciation too much for your kindness. Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一封感谢信，感谢自己因为疏忽写错收件地址，快递小哥张明联系你后确认了地址。尽管不属于他的送件地区，他却利用下班时间将快件送到你手中。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：提纲类作文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
要求：1. 表示感谢；
2. 说明缘由；
3. 再次致谢。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
convey；appreciation；generous；parcel；deliver；confirm；selflessness
第三步：连词成句
1. I am Li Hua, writing to convey my sincere appreciation to you for your kindness and generous help, without which I may have lost my parcel.
2. It was because of my carelessness that I left out a number in my address，thus making it hard for you to deliver my parcel.
3. However, after calling me and confirming my correct address, you were so kind as to decide to send it to me after work.
4. Actually, my apartment is located in an area which is beyond your delivery range.
5. Therefore, I am so grateful to you for your selflessness.
6. Again, I can not express my appreciation too much for your kindness.
7. Best wishes.
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“which，thus”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“convey；appreciation；generous；parcel；deliver；confirm；selflessness”以及定语从句“I am Li Hua, writing to convey my sincere appreciation to you for your kindness and generous help, without which I may have lost my parcel.”“Actually, my apartment is located in an area which is beyond your delivery range.”等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。
5．Dear Mr. Craige,
I am writing to express my thanks for your help, without which I could not have got the “Top Ten Prize” out of 30 competitors in the the l0th English Speaking Contest in our school.
The final result was totally beyond my imagination. It's thanks to your effort that I have made much more rapid progress in my spoken English. Before the contest, whenever you had free time, you would help me practice my spoken English. You communicated with me as much as possible, and corrected my pronunciation, intonation as well. What's more, you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence. Without your help I couldn't have achieved such a good result. I have benefited from this competition a lot.
All in all, I really appreciate your help. Thank you again for your advice and kind help. I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封感谢信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封感谢信：假设你是李华，你上周刚刚参加了你校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛，并从三十名选手中脱颖而出，荣获“十佳奖”。在准备参赛期间，你的外教Mr.Craige对你提供了很多指导和帮助。现请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.获奖情况及感受；2.回顾准备过程；3.感谢他的帮助；4.邀他来家做客。特别注意时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：express my thanks for your help（对你的帮助表示感谢）；beyond my imagination（超出了我的想象）；in my spoken English（用我的英语口语）；benefited from this competition a lot（从这场竞争中获益良多）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I am writing to express my thanks for your help, without which I could not have got the “Top Ten Prize” out of 30 competitors in the the l0th English Speaking Contest in our school.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句；It's thanks to your effort that I have made much more rapid progress in my spoken English.句中使用强调句型；Without your help I couldn't have achieved such a good result.句中使用虚拟语气。
6．Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, and I was a passenger on Flight HZH9211 of your airline, returning from abroad on March 2nd, 2019. Unfortunately, I found that my suitcase got lost when I arrived at the airport. I am therefore writing to asking for your help in finding my suitcase.
The suitcase is a yellow one, 80cm long, 40cm wide and 25cm thick, with my name tag on the bank. It contains many important personal files and some scientific materials. There are also some presents that I bought for my family members and friends. It will be a great disappointment to me if I can’t find it.
I would appreciate it if you could help find my lost suitcase. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给某航空公司，告知航空公司你在机场遗失了行李箱，请航空公司帮你找回。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 陈述写信原因；
2. 描述行李箱；
3. 期待回复并表示感谢。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
get lost；ask for sb.’s help；personal files；scientific materials；buy sth. for sb.；hear from sb.
第三步：连词成句
1. I found that my suitcase got lost when I arrived at the airport.
2. I am therefore writing to asking for your help in finding my suitcase.
3. It contains many important personal files and some scientific materials.
4. There are also some presents that I bought for my family members and friends.
5. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如I found that my suitcase got lost这句话中用了that引导的宾语从句，如some presents that I bought for my family members and friends这句话中用了that引导的定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如ask for sb.’s help，personal files，buy sth. for sb.，hear from sb.等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear Tom,
Words failed me when I watched the video from your school chorus. Especially when I heard "Come on, Wuhan!" , I was so deeply moved that I couldn't help replaying it again and again. I truly appreciate your love and support. Those days at the Autumn Camp are unforgettable. I often enjoy the pictures taken at the camp. Currently, I hardly go out due to the outbreak of novel coronavirus. Instead, I spend time taking online courses, watching American plays or listening to English songs. And it takes me a little time to read books that I am keen on. Can you inform me of your recent life in the next e-mail People across the country support Wuhan to the best of their ability. I'm definitely convinced that we can get through the hard times.
Looking forward to your next visit to China! May our friendship last forever!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信，表达对朋友的感谢及介绍自己的情况。。
【详解】第一步，确定作文题材是应用文，写一封回信。信的格式如下：一、对收信人称呼（题目已给出）。二、信的正文：指信的主体部分，从称呼的下一行到结束语前，第一段顶头写。三、结束语：指正文下面的结束客套话。常用Yours sincerely, Yours等。四、签名：指发信人的签名，写在结束语的下面。第二步，根据题目要求，信的主体应该包含题目要求的三个要点，1.表达感谢；2.介绍自己的近况；3.表明信心与愿望。对于第二点介绍自己的情况要增添细节，比如疫情期间自己的日常活动，自己的生活受到哪些影响。而第一点和第三点一两句带过即可。最后，第二段可以写期盼来信，表达希望友谊长存的情感。
【点睛】本篇书面表达的主体是第一段的第二个要点，介绍疫情期间自己的活动，内容丰富，语言优美。本篇范文使用了许多高级词汇或短语。诸如couldn't help；the outbreak of等。范文中一些高级句型也值得我们借鉴。如：Especially when I heard "Come on, Wuhan!" , I was so deeply moved that I couldn't help replaying it again and again.中，Especially修饰状语从句；以及“so…that…”句型。再比如I often enjoy the pictures taken at the camp.中的过去分词作后置定语，都是本文亮点。
8．Mr Andrew.
Being a part-time editor of our school newspaper, I'm writing to express our sincere thanks for the articles you contributed on behalf of our school.
Your serious attitude towards work has left us a deep impression ever since your first article arrived. It is because of your attractive articles that we have a general understanding of different cultures abroad. In addition, your articles in which we can strengthen the ability to learn English well are so excellent that we can't wait to read your next ones . Besides, your beautifully-written article are well appreciated by the students as well as the teachers.
1 would be grateful if you could deliver your contributions frequently. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇提纲类作文。按要求写一邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇电子邮件：定你是校英文报的兼职编辑李华，请用英语给外教Mr Andrew写一封邮件。内容包 括:1. 感谢他为校报提供稿件；2. 简要评价他的稿件和工作态度；3. 希望继续供稿；
第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如on behalf of代表；leave sb. a deep impression给某人留下深刻印象； have a general understanding of大体了解；can't wait to迫不及待；as well as和，也；Look forward to 期盼--等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文是一篇电子邮件。格式正确，内容符合要求，结构布局合理，文中使用高级词汇和句子。1. Being a part-time editor of our school newspaper, I'm writing to express our sincere thanks for the articles you contributed on behalf of our school.使用了现在分词短语Being a part-time editor of our school newspaper做状语。（that/which）you contributed为定语从句修饰先行词the articles.2. It is because of your attractive articles that we have a general understanding of different cultures abroad. 使用了强调句。3. your articles in which we can strengthen the ability to learn English well are so excellent that we can't wait to read your next ones .含有定语从句in which we can strengthen the ability to learn English well，以及结果状语从句so excellent that we can't wait to read your next ones。4. I would be grateful if you could deliver your contributions frequently.使用了if引导的条件状语从句。
本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
9．Dear Father，
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude to you. I may never say it out loud but I really feel lucky to have a father like you who is always there, supporting me.
When I was in middle school I was weak at English. At that time, I almost lost heart. But you encouraged me to move on. You taught me to face difficulties bravely and since that day, you studied with me together. You bought a grammar book and made a study plan for me.I know you were tired after work,but you still helped me with my homework.With the help of you, I made great progress in the following exams.
Father, it is because of you that I become confident again. So I want to say thank you to you from my deep heart.
Yours beloved
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文。按照要求写封感谢信投稿。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知：父亲节快要到了，杂志社Reader’s Digest在为父亲节的特刊征稿，征集写给父亲的感谢信。请你以李华为名按要求写封感谢信投稿。要注意以下两点：1. 词数：100左右；2. 请在信中至少列举一个父亲关爱你的事例.。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：express one’s sincere gratitude表达某人真诚的感激； be weak at在某方面弱；lost heart灰心；with the help of在某人帮助下；made great progress取得巨大进步；become confident变得自信等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，高级词汇有：如：be weak at在某方面弱；lost heart灰心；with the help of在某人帮助下等；高级句式的使用给这篇文章增色不少，如：1. I may never say it out loud but I really feel lucky to have a father like you who is always there, supporting me.运用了定语从句及现在分词作伴随状语；2. When I was in middle school I was weak at English.运用了when引导的时间状语从句。3. it is because of you that I become confident again.一句用到了强调句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Mr. and Mrs. Johnson,
I'm writing to you from my home in China.
I returned home safe and sound. When I think of the wonderful two weeks I spent in Australia, I just can't help thinking of both of you. It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my staying there such a happy and lucky experience. I've learned so much, not only English but also culture. And I really enjoyed those happy days that we spent together. Thank you very much. I'll always remember this trip as well as your kindness. I'll keep in touch and write to you later.
Please take care!
【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。要求以李明名义给Johnson 夫妇写一封电子邮件。
【详解】首先审题，这篇文章要求假设你是李明，最近参加了一期“澳大利亚冬令营”活动。共两周时间你住在Johnson 夫妇家中，他们为你提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。请写一封电子邮件感谢他们。内容包括以下要点：1．安全到家 2．感谢 3．感受 4．保持联系。
其次选用正确的时态，然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文章思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一简较好的范文。这简短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如：can't help doing，think of，not only… but also…，keep in touch。还大量使用了非谓语动词It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my staying there such a happy and lucky experience.等多种句式结构 ，增加了文章的可读性。
1．假定你是津英中学高一学生谢飞。今年11月份你因病住院两周。在此期间，你的外国朋友 Francis 经常在线上辅导你学习英语，鼓励你积极面对生活，战胜困难。请给他写一封电子邮件表达你的感激之情，内容包括：
1.告知近况；
2.回顾帮助；
3.邀请他春节来你家。
注意：1.词数不少于 100；
2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Francis,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Xie Fei
2．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim想要了解你在疫情期间是如何欢度春节的。请你就此给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 感谢关心；
2. 介绍春节活动；
3. 表达节日感想。
注意： 1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：新冠肺炎COVID-19
Dear Jim,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，上周日你不慎在操场丢失一个书包，里面有学生证、钱包等物品。你校外教 Mr. Smith 捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 描述事情经过；
3. 再次表达感谢。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．假设你是李华，你网购了一个产品，但是因为疏忽写错收件地址，快递小哥张明联系你后确认了地址。尽管不属于他的送件地区，他却利用下班时间将快件送到你手中。对此你很感激，想写封信感谢对方。写作要点如下:
1. 表示感谢；
2. 说明缘由；
3. 再次致谢。
注意:1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
5．假设你是李华，你上周刚刚参加了你校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛，并从三十名选手中脱颖而出，荣获“十佳奖”。在准备参赛期间，你的外教Mr.Craige对你提供了很多指导和帮助。现请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.获奖情况及感受； 2.回顾准备过程； 3.感谢他的帮助； 4.邀他来家做客。
注意：1．词数100词左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
提示：十佳奖：Top Ten Prize
Dear Mr. Craige,
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，于2019年3月2日搭乘某航空公司航班（Flight HZH9211）回国。到机场后，你发现遗失了行李箱。现你用英语给航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。
要点包括：
1. 陈述写信原因；
2. 描述行李箱；
3. 期待回复并表示感谢。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam，
My name is Li Hua, and I was a passenger
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Regards,
Li Hua
7．假定你是武汉某高中学生李华，你在2019武汉秋令营结识的朋友Tom了解到武汉爆发的新冠状病毒肺炎疫情，组织了德国伯乐中学中文合唱团倾情演唱中文歌《让世界充满爱》，为武汉加油。你看了这个小视频非常感动，请给他写一封英文感谢信。
要点如下：1. 表达感动和感谢。
2. 告诉他你的现状。
3. 表达信心和愿望。
4. 参考词汇 合唱团：chorus 新冠状病毒肺炎: novel corona-virus
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．假定你是校英文报的兼职编辑李华，请用英语给外教Mr Andrew写一封邮件。内容包 括:
1. 感谢他为校报提供稿件；
2. 简要评价他的稿件和工作态度；
3. 希望继续供稿；
注意：1.词数110左右；2.可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Andrew,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9．父亲节快要到了，杂志社Reader’s Digest在为父亲节的特刊征稿，征集写给父亲的感谢信。请你以李华为名按要求写封感谢信投稿。
要求：1. 词数：100左右；
2. 请在信中至少列举一个父亲关爱你的事例.
Dear Father,
I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours beloved
Li Hua
10．假设你是李明，最近参加了一期“澳大利亚冬令营”活动。共两周时间你住在Johnson 夫妇家中，他们为你提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。请写一封电子邮件感谢他们。
内容包括以下要点：
1．安全到家 2．感谢 3．感受 4．保持联系
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯；
3．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
1．Dear Francis,
How is everything going With the Spring Festival approaching, I’m writing to convey my great gratitude for your help during my two weeks in hospital.
I’ll never forget the support and comfort you gave me while I was in hospital this September. You not only helped me with my English study online but also offered valuable suggestions, which still play a significant impact on me now. In the two weeks, I was in low spirits, with lots of concerns on mind. Your timely encouragement fueled my confidence and bravery, so that I could face the challenges with a positive attitude.
Now I’m fully occupied in preparing for the entrance examination to college. Though it is hard and stressful, I still manage to strike a balance between study and life, doing sports with my classmates occasionally.
I’d like to invite you to come to my house for the Spring Festival if possible. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Xie Fei
【导语】本篇书面表达属于感谢信。要求考生写一封感谢信，感谢在住院期间，外国朋友Francis对自己的帮助和鼓励。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响：impact→influence/effect
促进，提升：fuel→build up
忙于：be occupied in→be busy in
偶然地：occasionally→by accident
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the Spring Festival approaching, I’m writing to convey my great gratitude for your help during my two weeks in hospital.
复合句：As the Spring Festival is approaching, I’m writing to convey my great gratitude for your help during my two weeks in hospital.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You not only helped me with my English study online but also offered valuable suggestions, which still play a significant impact on me now. (运用了not only...but also...连接并列结构和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Though it is hard and stressful, I still manage to strike a balance between study and life, doing sports with my classmates occasionally. (运用了though引导让步状语从句和现在分词作伴随状语)
2．Dear Jim,
How is everything going I’m writing to express my gratitude for your genuine concern and inform you of how our family celebrated the Spring Festival.
In the Spring Festival of 2021, Many people chose to spend Spring Festival in cities where they work instead of returning to their hometowns to reduce the risk of COVID-19 transmission. Instead of sitting at home and stuffing ourselves, we lived a healthy Spring Festival with relatives and friends. We went out to pay a visit to the local tourist attractions.
This year's Spring Festival was really impressive. Not only did it give us an opportunity to get together with family but also we enjoyed the scenery of our city.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写封邮件，介绍你在疫情期间是如何欢度春节的。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般现在时和现在进行时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 感谢关心；
2. 介绍春节活动；
3. 表达节日感想。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
inform sb. of sth.; choose to; instead of; pay a visit to; not only … but also …
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to express my gratitude for your genuine concern and inform you of how our family celebrated the Spring Festival.
2. In the Spring Festival of 2021, Many people chose to spend Spring Festival in cities where they work instead of returning to their hometowns to reduce the risk of COVID-19 transmission.
3. Instead of sitting at home and stuffing ourselves, we lived a healthy Spring Festival with relatives and friends.
4. We went out to pay a visit to the local tourist attractions.
5. Not only did it give us an opportunity to get together with family but also we enjoyed the scenery of our city.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] In the Spring Festival of 2021, Many people chose to spend Spring Festival in cities where they work instead of returning to their hometowns to reduce the risk of COVID-19 transmission.这句话运用了关系副词where引导的定语从句。
[高分句型2] Not only did it give us an opportunity to get together with family but also we enjoyed the scenery of our hometown.这句话运用了部分倒装结构。
3．Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 2. I’m writing to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss. I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
Please accept my cordial thanks for your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封感谢信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 写信目的；
2. 描述事情经过；
3. 再次表达感谢。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
thank sb. for，leave sth. on the playground，owing to，worried，at a loss，inform that…，beyond description
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing Io thank you for returning my schoolbag.
2. Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag on the playground owing to my carelessness.
3. I was worried because my student's ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me.
4. Just as I was at a loss.
5. I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag.
6. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition （供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but （供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]
What worried me most was that I left my schoolbag with my student's ID card, wallet and some documents in it.使用了what主语从句和that引导的表语从句。
[高分句型2]
Someone told me that you have found my schoolbag which was at the school's Lost and Found 使用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的定语从句。
4．Dear Zhang Ming，
I am Li Hua, writing to convey my sincere appreciation to you for your kindness and generous help, without which I may have lost my parcel.
It was because of my carelessness that I left out a number in my address，thus making it hard for you to deliver my parcel. However, after calling me and confirming my correct address, you were so kind as to decide to send it to me after work. Actually, my apartment is located in an area which is beyond your delivery range. Therefore, I am so grateful to you for your selflessness.
Again, I can not express my appreciation too much for your kindness. Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一封感谢信，感谢自己因为疏忽写错收件地址，快递小哥张明联系你后确认了地址。尽管不属于他的送件地区，他却利用下班时间将快件送到你手中。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：提纲类作文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
要求：1. 表示感谢；
2. 说明缘由；
3. 再次致谢。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
convey；appreciation；generous；parcel；deliver；confirm；selflessness
第三步：连词成句
1. I am Li Hua, writing to convey my sincere appreciation to you for your kindness and generous help, without which I may have lost my parcel.
2. It was because of my carelessness that I left out a number in my address，thus making it hard for you to deliver my parcel.
3. However, after calling me and confirming my correct address, you were so kind as to decide to send it to me after work.
4. Actually, my apartment is located in an area which is beyond your delivery range.
5. Therefore, I am so grateful to you for your selflessness.
6. Again, I can not express my appreciation too much for your kindness.
7. Best wishes.
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“which，thus”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“convey；appreciation；generous；parcel；deliver；confirm；selflessness”以及定语从句“I am Li Hua, writing to convey my sincere appreciation to you for your kindness and generous help, without which I may have lost my parcel.”“Actually, my apartment is located in an area which is beyond your delivery range.”等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。
5．Dear Mr. Craige,
I am writing to express my thanks for your help, without which I could not have got the “Top Ten Prize” out of 30 competitors in the the l0th English Speaking Contest in our school.
The final result was totally beyond my imagination. It's thanks to your effort that I have made much more rapid progress in my spoken English. Before the contest, whenever you had free time, you would help me practice my spoken English. You communicated with me as much as possible, and corrected my pronunciation, intonation as well. What's more, you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence. Without your help I couldn't have achieved such a good result. I have benefited from this competition a lot.
All in all, I really appreciate your help. Thank you again for your advice and kind help. I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封感谢信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封感谢信：假设你是李华，你上周刚刚参加了你校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛，并从三十名选手中脱颖而出，荣获“十佳奖”。在准备参赛期间，你的外教Mr.Craige对你提供了很多指导和帮助。现请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.获奖情况及感受；2.回顾准备过程；3.感谢他的帮助；4.邀他来家做客。特别注意时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：express my thanks for your help（对你的帮助表示感谢）；beyond my imagination（超出了我的想象）；in my spoken English（用我的英语口语）；benefited from this competition a lot（从这场竞争中获益良多）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I am writing to express my thanks for your help, without which I could not have got the “Top Ten Prize” out of 30 competitors in the the l0th English Speaking Contest in our school.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句；It's thanks to your effort that I have made much more rapid progress in my spoken English.句中使用强调句型；Without your help I couldn't have achieved such a good result.句中使用虚拟语气。
6．Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, and I was a passenger on Flight HZH9211 of your airline, returning from abroad on March 2nd, 2019. Unfortunately, I found that my suitcase got lost when I arrived at the airport. I am therefore writing to asking for your help in finding my suitcase.
The suitcase is a yellow one, 80cm long, 40cm wide and 25cm thick, with my name tag on the bank. It contains many important personal files and some scientific materials. There are also some presents that I bought for my family members and friends. It will be a great disappointment to me if I can’t find it.
I would appreciate it if you could help find my lost suitcase. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给某航空公司，告知航空公司你在机场遗失了行李箱，请航空公司帮你找回。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 陈述写信原因；
2. 描述行李箱；
3. 期待回复并表示感谢。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
get lost；ask for sb.’s help；personal files；scientific materials；buy sth. for sb.；hear from sb.
第三步：连词成句
1. I found that my suitcase got lost when I arrived at the airport.
2. I am therefore writing to asking for your help in finding my suitcase.
3. It contains many important personal files and some scientific materials.
4. There are also some presents that I bought for my family members and friends.
5. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如I found that my suitcase got lost这句话中用了that引导的宾语从句，如some presents that I bought for my family members and friends这句话中用了that引导的定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如ask for sb.’s help，personal files，buy sth. for sb.，hear from sb.等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear Tom,
Words failed me when I watched the video from your school chorus. Especially when I heard "Come on, Wuhan!" , I was so deeply moved that I couldn't help replaying it again and again. I truly appreciate your love and support. Those days at the Autumn Camp are unforgettable. I often enjoy the pictures taken at the camp. Currently, I hardly go out due to the outbreak of novel coronavirus. Instead, I spend time taking online courses, watching American plays or listening to English songs. And it takes me a little time to read books that I am keen on. Can you inform me of your recent life in the next e-mail People across the country support Wuhan to the best of their ability. I'm definitely convinced that we can get through the hard times.
Looking forward to your next visit to China! May our friendship last forever!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信，表达对朋友的感谢及介绍自己的情况。。
【详解】第一步，确定作文题材是应用文，写一封回信。信的格式如下：一、对收信人称呼（题目已给出）。二、信的正文：指信的主体部分，从称呼的下一行到结束语前，第一段顶头写。三、结束语：指正文下面的结束客套话。常用Yours sincerely, Yours等。四、签名：指发信人的签名，写在结束语的下面。第二步，根据题目要求，信的主体应该包含题目要求的三个要点，1.表达感谢；2.介绍自己的近况；3.表明信心与愿望。对于第二点介绍自己的情况要增添细节，比如疫情期间自己的日常活动，自己的生活受到哪些影响。而第一点和第三点一两句带过即可。最后，第二段可以写期盼来信，表达希望友谊长存的情感。
【点睛】本篇书面表达的主体是第一段的第二个要点，介绍疫情期间自己的活动，内容丰富，语言优美。本篇范文使用了许多高级词汇或短语。诸如couldn't help；the outbreak of等。范文中一些高级句型也值得我们借鉴。如：Especially when I heard "Come on, Wuhan!" , I was so deeply moved that I couldn't help replaying it again and again.中，Especially修饰状语从句；以及“so…that…”句型。再比如I often enjoy the pictures taken at the camp.中的过去分词作后置定语，都是本文亮点。
8．Mr Andrew.
Being a part-time editor of our school newspaper, I'm writing to express our sincere thanks for the articles you contributed on behalf of our school.
Your serious attitude towards work has left us a deep impression ever since your first article arrived. It is because of your attractive articles that we have a general understanding of different cultures abroad. In addition, your articles in which we can strengthen the ability to learn English well are so excellent that we can't wait to read your next ones . Besides, your beautifully-written article are well appreciated by the students as well as the teachers.
1 would be grateful if you could deliver your contributions frequently. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇提纲类作文。按要求写一邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇电子邮件：定你是校英文报的兼职编辑李华，请用英语给外教Mr Andrew写一封邮件。内容包 括:1. 感谢他为校报提供稿件；2. 简要评价他的稿件和工作态度；3. 希望继续供稿；
第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如on behalf of代表；leave sb. a deep impression给某人留下深刻印象； have a general understanding of大体了解；can't wait to迫不及待；as well as和，也；Look forward to 期盼--等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文是一篇电子邮件。格式正确，内容符合要求，结构布局合理，文中使用高级词汇和句子。1. Being a part-time editor of our school newspaper, I'm writing to express our sincere thanks for the articles you contributed on behalf of our school.使用了现在分词短语Being a part-time editor of our school newspaper做状语。（that/which）you contributed为定语从句修饰先行词the articles.2. It is because of your attractive articles that we have a general understanding of different cultures abroad. 使用了强调句。3. your articles in which we can strengthen the ability to learn English well are so excellent that we can't wait to read your next ones .含有定语从句in which we can strengthen the ability to learn English well，以及结果状语从句so excellent that we can't wait to read your next ones。4. I would be grateful if you could deliver your contributions frequently.使用了if引导的条件状语从句。
本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
9．Dear Father，
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude to you. I may never say it out loud but I really feel lucky to have a father like you who is always there, supporting me.
When I was in middle school I was weak at English. At that time, I almost lost heart. But you encouraged me to move on. You taught me to face difficulties bravely and since that day, you studied with me together. You bought a grammar book and made a study plan for me.I know you were tired after work,but you still helped me with my homework.With the help of you, I made great progress in the following exams.
Father, it is because of you that I become confident again. So I want to say thank you to you from my deep heart.
Yours beloved
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇提纲作文。按照要求写封感谢信投稿。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知：父亲节快要到了，杂志社Reader’s Digest在为父亲节的特刊征稿，征集写给父亲的感谢信。请你以李华为名按要求写封感谢信投稿。要注意以下两点：1. 词数：100左右；2. 请在信中至少列举一个父亲关爱你的事例.。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：express one’s sincere gratitude表达某人真诚的感激； be weak at在某方面弱；lost heart灰心；with the help of在某人帮助下；made great progress取得巨大进步；become confident变得自信等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，高级词汇有：如：be weak at在某方面弱；lost heart灰心；with the help of在某人帮助下等；高级句式的使用给这篇文章增色不少，如：1. I may never say it out loud but I really feel lucky to have a father like you who is always there, supporting me.运用了定语从句及现在分词作伴随状语；2. When I was in middle school I was weak at English.运用了when引导的时间状语从句。3. it is because of you that I become confident again.一句用到了强调句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Mr. and Mrs. Johnson,
I'm writing to you from my home in China.
I returned home safe and sound. When I think of the wonderful two weeks I spent in Australia, I just can't help thinking of both of you. It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my staying there such a happy and lucky experience. I've learned so much, not only English but also culture. And I really enjoyed those happy days that we spent together. Thank you very much. I'll always remember this trip as well as your kindness. I'll keep in touch and write to you later.
Please take care!
【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。要求以李明名义给Johnson 夫妇写一封电子邮件。
【详解】首先审题，这篇文章要求假设你是李明，最近参加了一期“澳大利亚冬令营”活动。共两周时间你住在Johnson 夫妇家中，他们为你提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。请写一封电子邮件感谢他们。内容包括以下要点：1．安全到家 2．感谢 3．感受 4．保持联系。
其次选用正确的时态，然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文章思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一简较好的范文。这简短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如：can't help doing，think of，not only… but also…，keep in touch。还大量使用了非谓语动词It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my staying there such a happy and lucky experience.等多种句式结构 ，增加了文章的可读性。