2023届内蒙古高考英语写作分类训练：应用文10篇（含解析）
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应用文
1．假定你是某学校的学生会主席李华，你校即将举行100周年校庆活动（100th School Anniversary），请你作为学生代表进行发言。请你写一篇发言稿，要点如下：
1. 表达祝福；
2. 收获与成长；
3. 你的祝愿。
注意：写作词数应为100左右。
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2．高中生活即将结束，你校高三年级将举行题为“What I Have Learned in Senior High School”的英语沙龙活动，请你结合自身经历写一篇文字稿准备交流。内容包括：
1.学习、做人及其他方面的收获;
2.高中生活的体会等。
注意：
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
What I Have Learned in Senior High School
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3．你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以 “How to improve our self-control”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 自控力的重要性；
2. 怎样提高自控力。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How to improve our self-control
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4．假设你是李华。你校英语校刊正在举办“E-books or Paper Books”的征文，请你用英语谈一下你对此的看法。短文应包含以下要点：
1)电子书的优势；
2)纸质书的优势；
3)谈谈你的看法。
注意：1)词数：不少于100；
2)可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．假如你所在的戏剧社（drama club）在全市高中戏剧大赛中荣获一等奖。现请你写一篇获奖感言。
要点：1. 参加戏剧社的好处；
2. 你们的准备情况；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：
1. 短文必须包括以上所有要点，并适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：100字左右。开头已给出，该部分不计入总词数。
I’m so excited that our drama club won the first prize in this competition.
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6．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友David看到了你所在城市的推介宣传片，很想了解你们现在的生活，请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.感谢他的关注;
2.介绍近年来城市的变化;
3.邀请他适时来访。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．假如你是李华，来自阳光中学，你校乒乓球队应邀去澳大利亚一所中学参加中学生乒乓球友谊赛。请你给举办学校联系人Mr. Williams写一封邮件询问相关事宜，要点如下：
1.接受邀请，表示感谢；
2.询问食宿、交通及比赛日程等方面的安排；
3.提出相关建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Williams,
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8．假如你是李华，你班就同学们在英语学习中遇到的问题举行了一次英语学习的线下论坛。请你用英语写一篇报道，并向你校英语报投稿。内容包括：
1.活动时间和地点；
2.活动内容：班级同学英语学习中遇到的最大的问题以及相应的建议；
3.活动感受及意义。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：offline forum（线下论坛）
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9．假设你校将举办一场题为“如何健康生活”的英语演讲比赛，你报名参加了此次比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，包含以下要点：
1.保持健康的重要性;
保持健康的方法;
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．假定你是李华，你校要举行一次英语演讲比赛，话题是“畅想未来生活”。假设你已报名，请你用英语写一份演讲稿准备参加比赛。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头已为你写好。
Hello, everyone! I am glad to be able to give a talk about the future life and study here.
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1．One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
As we approach our school’s 100th Anniversary, I am honored to address you on behalf of the Students Union. It is with great sincerity that I express our appreciation for our school that has provided us with a wealth of knowledge and opportunities.
High school is not only a time for academic learning, but also a crucial period of personal growth and development. Throughout the years here, we have gained invaluable experiences and met individuals who have shaped us into the people we are today. Our school has been instrumental in facilitating our journeys towards adulthood. We have had the privilege of being taught by remarkable educators who have served as our biggest inspirations and mentors. These teachers have instilled in us a passion for learning and a desire to succeed in all aspects of our lives.
As we celebrate this momentous occasion, let us extend our best wishes to our esteemed school. May our school continue to flourish and provide future generations with the same opportunities we have had. Here’s to a fruitful future for our school!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生为学校100周年校庆活动准备发言稿，表达对学校的祝福，分享自己的收获与成长，并送出祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
代表：on behalf of→as a representative of, as a spokesperson of, in the name of
表达：express→convey, articulate, utter, voice
提供：provide→offer, give
关键的：crucial→essential, significant, vital
收获：gain→obtain, attain, achieve, acquire
2. 句式拓展
句型转换
原句：High school is not only a time for academic learning, but also a crucial period of personal growth and development.
拓展句：Not only is high school a time for academic learning, but it is also a crucial period of personal growth and development.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is with great sincerity that I express our appreciation for our school that has provided us with a wealth of knowledge and opportunities.（运用了it is… that…强调句型、that引导限制性定语从句修饰先行词our school）
【高分句型2】Throughout the years here, we have gained invaluable experiences and met individuals who have shaped us into the people we are today.（运用了who引导限制性定语从句修饰先行词individuals）
2．范文
Personally, my senior high school life is challenging but fulfilling. When I first stepped into senior high school, I found the courses were much more difficult than before. No matter how hard I worked, I still couldn’t do well in them, which frustrated me greatly. Fortunately, the learning strategies introduced by my teachers helped me work more effectively. Besides, I participated in the City English Speech Contest and won first prize. Via this experience, I have learned that perseverance and passion matter a lot to a successful winner. Meanwhile, I have gained everlasting friendship, which supports me through highs and lows, thus inspiring me to be a real guy, completely confident and secure in my personality.
In conclusion, it is in this dynamic school that I have led a fruitful life and I will cherish the memory forever.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。高中生活即将结束，你校高三年级将举行题为“What I Have Learned in Senior High School”的英语沙龙活动，请你结合自身经历写一篇文字稿准备交流。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：contest→competition
使沮丧：frustrate→upset
鼓舞：inspire→encourage
同时：meanwhile→at the same time
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Besides, I participated in the City English Speech Contest and won first prize. Via this experience, I have learned that perseverance and passion matter a lot to a successful winner.
拓展句：Besides, I participated in the City English Speech Contest and won first prize, through which I have learned that perseverance and passion matter a lot to a successful winner.
【点睛】[高分句型1] No matter how hard I worked, I still couldn’t do well in them, which frustrated me greatly. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In conclusion, it is in this dynamic school that I have led a fruitful life and I will cherish the memory forever. (运用了强调句)
3． How to improve our self-control
Hello, everyone. Today I want to talk about how to improve our self-control. As the ability to control ourselves, self-control shows its importance in all aspects of our life. If a student has self-control, it means he has a good learning habit and a stable emotion, which is beneficial to his study and social relationship. Then how can we improve our self-control
First, we should start to understand who we are. To control our behavior, we should know what kind of person we are. Second, set appropriate goals. Find out what we want to get in the future, and then set goals to achieve it and stick to our goals. Third, instead of being controlled by emotions, learn to live with them positively, and then we will find that our mental power is stronger.
As long as we can follow what is said above, I believe that we all will be a more self-controlled person!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿，就自控力和重要性以及如何提高自控力发表自己的看法。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
重要性：importance→significance
有帮助的：beneficial→helpful
弄明白：find out→figure out
2.句式拓展
不定式表目的改为目的状语从句
原句：To control our behavior, we should know what kind of person we are.
拓展句：We should know what kind of person we are in order that we can control our behavior.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If a student has self-control, it means he has a good learning habit and a stable emotion, which is beneficial to his study and social relationship.（使用了If引导条件状语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句，means后为省略了that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Find out what we want to get in the future, and then set goals to achieve it and stick to our goals.（运用了祈使句和what引导宾语从句）
4．One possible version:
There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between e-books or paper books.
Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books, one of which is its cheapness. Most e-books are much cheaper compared with paper books. Besides, they take up little space compared with paper books. Others don’t agree with them. They argue that reading from screens for a long time does too much harm to eyes, while comfortableness that paper books bring to readers always matters most to them.
However, as a student without too much pocket money, I prefer to read e-books. What’s more, my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time. Therefore I would rather choose e-books at the cost of reading comfortableness.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华。你校英语校刊正在举办“E-books or Paper Books”的征文，请你用英语谈一下你对此的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
另外：besides→moreover
重要：matter→count
然而：however→nevertheless
另外：what’s more→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：However, as a student without too much pocket money, I prefer to read e-books.
拓展句：However, as a student who has too much pocket money, I prefer to read e-books.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books, one of which is its cheapness.(运用了that引导的同位语从句和“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】They argue that reading from screens for a long time does too much harm to eyes, while comfortableness that paper books bring to readers always matters most to them.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和that引导的定语从句)
5．One possible version:
I’m so excited that our drama club won the first prize in this competition.
Participating in this club helps us to learn more about drama, and develop our self-confidence and cultural qualities as well. On the other hand, thanks to the club, I have known many friends who share the same interest with me. There we communicate and learn from each other. In addition, before the competition we kept on practicing for a long time. Luckily, our efforts paid off, which is beyond our expectation, to be honest.
Finally, I’d like to express my thanks to all of our teachers who directed us, friends who helped us, and partners who worked hard. Without you, we couldn’t have made such a great achievement. Thank you so much, again.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就所在的戏剧社在全市高中戏剧大赛中荣获一等奖写一篇获奖感言。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→take part in
此外：in addition→additionally
幸运地：luckily→fortunately
表达：express→show
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Without you, we couldn’t have made such a great achievement.
拓展句：If it hadn’t been for your help, we couldn’t have made such a great achievement.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On the other hand, thanks to the club, I have known many friends who share the same interest with me.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】Luckily, our efforts paid off, which is beyond our expectation, to be honest.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
6．Dear David,
I’d like to express my appreciation to you for your concern about my city.
Tremendous changes have taken place in my city over the past few years. Old streets are widened, which greatly eases traffic jams. Varieties of flowers and trees are also planted along the roads. Additionally, there are more parks for people to take a walk and exercise regularly. Not only do they beautify the city but also improve the quality of people’s life. More importantly, with the advanced technology, people can enjoy all the comfort and convenience of the city, adding a great deal to people’s happiness.
You can’t imagine the city taking on a completely fresh look. I really love it and hope you can pay a visit someday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给大卫写信感谢他对于你所在城市的关注，介绍近年来城市的变化和邀请他适时来访。
【详解】1.词汇积累
巨大的：tremendous→ great
提升：improve→ promote
另外：additionally→ in addition
各种各样的：varieties of→ various
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, there are more parks for people to take a walk and exercise regularly.
拓展句：Additionally, there are more parks which people can use to take a walk and exercise regularly.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Old streets are widened, which greatly eases traffic jams.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I really love it and hope you can pay a visit someday.（运用了省略that的宾语从句作动词hope的宾语）
7．Dear Mr. Williams,
I am Li Hua, a student from Sunshine Middle School. We are delighted to accept the invitation to play a friendly table tennis match, which will no doubts strengthen our friendship. I am writing to know more about the arrangements.
Since it is the first time for us to go to Australia, we’d like to know the details about the accommodations so that we can make some preparations in advance. We prefer to live in host families to experience local culture. Besides, is it possible for you to pick us up at the airport after our arrival Also, I would appreciate it if we could work out a proper schedule for both sides.
Thank you for all your help and look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给澳大利亚举办中学生乒乓球友谊赛的学校联系人Mr. Williams写一封邮件询问相关事宜。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
比赛： match→competition
无疑：no doubts→undoubtedly
此外：besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We prefer to live in host families to experience local culture.
拓展句：We prefer to live in host families so that we can experience local culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We are delighted to accept the invitation to play a friendly table tennis match, which will no doubts strengthen our friendship.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Since it is the first time for us to go to Australia, we’d like to know the details about the accommodations so that we can make some preparations in advance.（运用了Since引导的原因状语从句和so that引导的目的状语从句）
8．On December 27th, an offline forum about problems with English learning was held in our class. Students all took an active part, sharing their problems and solutions with others.
The biggest problem in our class is speaking. When speaking with native speakers, many students often care too much about their pronunciation to express themselves well enough. After the discussion, some advice came up. First, listening to English radio programs or Podcast regularly helps correct pronunciation and thus build up confidence. What’s more, it’s also a good idea to chat with native speakers of English online.
The offline forum has proved to be beneficial, offering us an opportunity to reflect on English learning and find out amazing ways to learn English. We are all looking forward to the next one.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就你班就同学们在英语学习中遇到的问题举行了一次英语学习的线下论坛用英语写一篇报道，并向你校英语报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice →suggestion
此外： what’s more → besides
机会：opportunity →chance
方法：way→ approach
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The offline forum has proved to be beneficial, offering us an opportunity to reflect on English learning and find out amazing ways to learn English.
拓展句：The offline forum has proved to be beneficial, which offers us an opportunity to reflect on English learning and find out amazing ways to learn English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Students all took an active part, sharing their problems and solutions with others.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】First, listening to English radio programs or Podcast regularly helps correct pronunciation and thus build up confidence.（运用了动名词作主语）
9．Honorable judges and dear fellow students, good morning!
It’s a great pleasure for me to stand here and talk about “How to live a healthy life”. As the saying goes, “Health is wealth”. Keeping healthy has a positive effect on every aspect of our lives. But how can we stay healthy Here are some useful tips.
Firstly, one of the best ways to improve our health is to do regular exercise. Being physically active not only strengthens our bones and muscles, reduces our stress, but also boosts our willpower. Moreover, it is important to eat well. We need to keep a balanced diet and eat foods which contain various nutrients. Last but not least, enough sleep is also essential for good health. It allows our body and mind to recharge, leaving us refreshed when we wake up.
If we pay more attention to the tips above, we will lead a healthier life. Thank you very much for your attention!
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生以“如何健康生活”为题，写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：pleasure→delight
建议：tip→suggestion
另外：moreover→furthermore
包含：contain→include
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, one of the best ways to improve our health is to do regular exercise.
拓展句：Firstly, one of the best ways which improve our health is to do regular exercise.
【点睛】[高分句型1]We need to keep a balanced diet and eat foods which contain various nutrients.(which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]If we pay more attention to the tips above, we will lead a healthier life.(if引导的条件状语从句)
10．
Hello, everyone! I am glad to be able to give a talk about the future life and study here.
I am wondering what life will hold in store for me in two years. As a student of science, I will be studying in my dream university—Suzhou University, where I will be equipped with more systematic professional knowledge. Besides, I want to be a social volunteer, which will not only help me integrate theory with practice and convert capability from knowledge, but also give me insights into life. Apart from my study, more of my hobbies can be developed during my spare time, such as marathon, painting, and programming.
I am confident that I will have an enjoyable, precious and colorful college life. In the end, I hope everyone will be admitted into the dream college with full preparation. That’s all. Thank you for your patient listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“畅想未来生活”这一话题写一篇演讲稿，谈一下未来的学习和生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
理论联系实际：integrate theory with practice → combine theory with practice
此外：besides → additionally
最后：in the end → at last
令人愉快的：enjoyable → delightful
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Besides, I want to be a social volunteer, which will not only help me integrate theory with practice and convert capability from knowledge, but also give me insights into life.
拓展句：Additionally, I want to participate in volunteering, by which I can integrate theory with practice and convert capability from knowledge, as well as gaining insights into life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am wondering what life will hold in store for me in two yearsr.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】As a student of science, I will be studying in my dream university—Suzhou University, where I will be equipped with more systematic professional knowledge.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
1．假定你是某学校的学生会主席李华，你校即将举行100周年校庆活动（100th School Anniversary），请你作为学生代表进行发言。请你写一篇发言稿，要点如下：
1. 表达祝福；
2. 收获与成长；
3. 你的祝愿。
注意：写作词数应为100左右。
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2．高中生活即将结束，你校高三年级将举行题为“What I Have Learned in Senior High School”的英语沙龙活动，请你结合自身经历写一篇文字稿准备交流。内容包括：
1.学习、做人及其他方面的收获;
2.高中生活的体会等。
注意：
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
What I Have Learned in Senior High School
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3．你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以 “How to improve our self-control”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 自控力的重要性；
2. 怎样提高自控力。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How to improve our self-control
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4．假设你是李华。你校英语校刊正在举办“E-books or Paper Books”的征文，请你用英语谈一下你对此的看法。短文应包含以下要点：
1)电子书的优势；
2)纸质书的优势；
3)谈谈你的看法。
注意：1)词数：不少于100；
2)可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．假如你所在的戏剧社（drama club）在全市高中戏剧大赛中荣获一等奖。现请你写一篇获奖感言。
要点：1. 参加戏剧社的好处；
2. 你们的准备情况；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：
1. 短文必须包括以上所有要点，并适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：100字左右。开头已给出，该部分不计入总词数。
I’m so excited that our drama club won the first prize in this competition.
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6．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友David看到了你所在城市的推介宣传片，很想了解你们现在的生活，请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.感谢他的关注;
2.介绍近年来城市的变化;
3.邀请他适时来访。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．假如你是李华，来自阳光中学，你校乒乓球队应邀去澳大利亚一所中学参加中学生乒乓球友谊赛。请你给举办学校联系人Mr. Williams写一封邮件询问相关事宜，要点如下：
1.接受邀请，表示感谢；
2.询问食宿、交通及比赛日程等方面的安排；
3.提出相关建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Williams,
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8．假如你是李华，你班就同学们在英语学习中遇到的问题举行了一次英语学习的线下论坛。请你用英语写一篇报道，并向你校英语报投稿。内容包括：
1.活动时间和地点；
2.活动内容：班级同学英语学习中遇到的最大的问题以及相应的建议；
3.活动感受及意义。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：offline forum（线下论坛）
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9．假设你校将举办一场题为“如何健康生活”的英语演讲比赛，你报名参加了此次比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，包含以下要点：
1.保持健康的重要性;
保持健康的方法;
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．假定你是李华，你校要举行一次英语演讲比赛，话题是“畅想未来生活”。假设你已报名，请你用英语写一份演讲稿准备参加比赛。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头已为你写好。
Hello, everyone! I am glad to be able to give a talk about the future life and study here.
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1．One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
As we approach our school’s 100th Anniversary, I am honored to address you on behalf of the Students Union. It is with great sincerity that I express our appreciation for our school that has provided us with a wealth of knowledge and opportunities.
High school is not only a time for academic learning, but also a crucial period of personal growth and development. Throughout the years here, we have gained invaluable experiences and met individuals who have shaped us into the people we are today. Our school has been instrumental in facilitating our journeys towards adulthood. We have had the privilege of being taught by remarkable educators who have served as our biggest inspirations and mentors. These teachers have instilled in us a passion for learning and a desire to succeed in all aspects of our lives.
As we celebrate this momentous occasion, let us extend our best wishes to our esteemed school. May our school continue to flourish and provide future generations with the same opportunities we have had. Here’s to a fruitful future for our school!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生为学校100周年校庆活动准备发言稿，表达对学校的祝福，分享自己的收获与成长，并送出祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
代表：on behalf of→as a representative of, as a spokesperson of, in the name of
表达：express→convey, articulate, utter, voice
提供：provide→offer, give
关键的：crucial→essential, significant, vital
收获：gain→obtain, attain, achieve, acquire
2. 句式拓展
句型转换
原句：High school is not only a time for academic learning, but also a crucial period of personal growth and development.
拓展句：Not only is high school a time for academic learning, but it is also a crucial period of personal growth and development.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is with great sincerity that I express our appreciation for our school that has provided us with a wealth of knowledge and opportunities.（运用了it is… that…强调句型、that引导限制性定语从句修饰先行词our school）
【高分句型2】Throughout the years here, we have gained invaluable experiences and met individuals who have shaped us into the people we are today.（运用了who引导限制性定语从句修饰先行词individuals）
2．范文
Personally, my senior high school life is challenging but fulfilling. When I first stepped into senior high school, I found the courses were much more difficult than before. No matter how hard I worked, I still couldn’t do well in them, which frustrated me greatly. Fortunately, the learning strategies introduced by my teachers helped me work more effectively. Besides, I participated in the City English Speech Contest and won first prize. Via this experience, I have learned that perseverance and passion matter a lot to a successful winner. Meanwhile, I have gained everlasting friendship, which supports me through highs and lows, thus inspiring me to be a real guy, completely confident and secure in my personality.
In conclusion, it is in this dynamic school that I have led a fruitful life and I will cherish the memory forever.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。高中生活即将结束，你校高三年级将举行题为“What I Have Learned in Senior High School”的英语沙龙活动，请你结合自身经历写一篇文字稿准备交流。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：contest→competition
使沮丧：frustrate→upset
鼓舞：inspire→encourage
同时：meanwhile→at the same time
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Besides, I participated in the City English Speech Contest and won first prize. Via this experience, I have learned that perseverance and passion matter a lot to a successful winner.
拓展句：Besides, I participated in the City English Speech Contest and won first prize, through which I have learned that perseverance and passion matter a lot to a successful winner.
【点睛】[高分句型1] No matter how hard I worked, I still couldn’t do well in them, which frustrated me greatly. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In conclusion, it is in this dynamic school that I have led a fruitful life and I will cherish the memory forever. (运用了强调句)
3． How to improve our self-control
Hello, everyone. Today I want to talk about how to improve our self-control. As the ability to control ourselves, self-control shows its importance in all aspects of our life. If a student has self-control, it means he has a good learning habit and a stable emotion, which is beneficial to his study and social relationship. Then how can we improve our self-control
First, we should start to understand who we are. To control our behavior, we should know what kind of person we are. Second, set appropriate goals. Find out what we want to get in the future, and then set goals to achieve it and stick to our goals. Third, instead of being controlled by emotions, learn to live with them positively, and then we will find that our mental power is stronger.
As long as we can follow what is said above, I believe that we all will be a more self-controlled person!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿，就自控力和重要性以及如何提高自控力发表自己的看法。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
重要性：importance→significance
有帮助的：beneficial→helpful
弄明白：find out→figure out
2.句式拓展
不定式表目的改为目的状语从句
原句：To control our behavior, we should know what kind of person we are.
拓展句：We should know what kind of person we are in order that we can control our behavior.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If a student has self-control, it means he has a good learning habit and a stable emotion, which is beneficial to his study and social relationship.（使用了If引导条件状语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句，means后为省略了that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Find out what we want to get in the future, and then set goals to achieve it and stick to our goals.（运用了祈使句和what引导宾语从句）
4．One possible version:
There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between e-books or paper books.
Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books, one of which is its cheapness. Most e-books are much cheaper compared with paper books. Besides, they take up little space compared with paper books. Others don’t agree with them. They argue that reading from screens for a long time does too much harm to eyes, while comfortableness that paper books bring to readers always matters most to them.
However, as a student without too much pocket money, I prefer to read e-books. What’s more, my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time. Therefore I would rather choose e-books at the cost of reading comfortableness.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华。你校英语校刊正在举办“E-books or Paper Books”的征文，请你用英语谈一下你对此的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
另外：besides→moreover
重要：matter→count
然而：however→nevertheless
另外：what’s more→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：However, as a student without too much pocket money, I prefer to read e-books.
拓展句：However, as a student who has too much pocket money, I prefer to read e-books.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books, one of which is its cheapness.(运用了that引导的同位语从句和“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】They argue that reading from screens for a long time does too much harm to eyes, while comfortableness that paper books bring to readers always matters most to them.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和that引导的定语从句)
5．One possible version:
I’m so excited that our drama club won the first prize in this competition.
Participating in this club helps us to learn more about drama, and develop our self-confidence and cultural qualities as well. On the other hand, thanks to the club, I have known many friends who share the same interest with me. There we communicate and learn from each other. In addition, before the competition we kept on practicing for a long time. Luckily, our efforts paid off, which is beyond our expectation, to be honest.
Finally, I’d like to express my thanks to all of our teachers who directed us, friends who helped us, and partners who worked hard. Without you, we couldn’t have made such a great achievement. Thank you so much, again.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就所在的戏剧社在全市高中戏剧大赛中荣获一等奖写一篇获奖感言。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→take part in
此外：in addition→additionally
幸运地：luckily→fortunately
表达：express→show
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Without you, we couldn’t have made such a great achievement.
拓展句：If it hadn’t been for your help, we couldn’t have made such a great achievement.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On the other hand, thanks to the club, I have known many friends who share the same interest with me.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】Luckily, our efforts paid off, which is beyond our expectation, to be honest.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
6．Dear David,
I’d like to express my appreciation to you for your concern about my city.
Tremendous changes have taken place in my city over the past few years. Old streets are widened, which greatly eases traffic jams. Varieties of flowers and trees are also planted along the roads. Additionally, there are more parks for people to take a walk and exercise regularly. Not only do they beautify the city but also improve the quality of people’s life. More importantly, with the advanced technology, people can enjoy all the comfort and convenience of the city, adding a great deal to people’s happiness.
You can’t imagine the city taking on a completely fresh look. I really love it and hope you can pay a visit someday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给大卫写信感谢他对于你所在城市的关注，介绍近年来城市的变化和邀请他适时来访。
【详解】1.词汇积累
巨大的：tremendous→ great
提升：improve→ promote
另外：additionally→ in addition
各种各样的：varieties of→ various
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, there are more parks for people to take a walk and exercise regularly.
拓展句：Additionally, there are more parks which people can use to take a walk and exercise regularly.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Old streets are widened, which greatly eases traffic jams.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I really love it and hope you can pay a visit someday.（运用了省略that的宾语从句作动词hope的宾语）
7．Dear Mr. Williams,
I am Li Hua, a student from Sunshine Middle School. We are delighted to accept the invitation to play a friendly table tennis match, which will no doubts strengthen our friendship. I am writing to know more about the arrangements.
Since it is the first time for us to go to Australia, we’d like to know the details about the accommodations so that we can make some preparations in advance. We prefer to live in host families to experience local culture. Besides, is it possible for you to pick us up at the airport after our arrival Also, I would appreciate it if we could work out a proper schedule for both sides.
Thank you for all your help and look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给澳大利亚举办中学生乒乓球友谊赛的学校联系人Mr. Williams写一封邮件询问相关事宜。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
比赛： match→competition
无疑：no doubts→undoubtedly
此外：besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We prefer to live in host families to experience local culture.
拓展句：We prefer to live in host families so that we can experience local culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We are delighted to accept the invitation to play a friendly table tennis match, which will no doubts strengthen our friendship.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Since it is the first time for us to go to Australia, we’d like to know the details about the accommodations so that we can make some preparations in advance.（运用了Since引导的原因状语从句和so that引导的目的状语从句）
8．On December 27th, an offline forum about problems with English learning was held in our class. Students all took an active part, sharing their problems and solutions with others.
The biggest problem in our class is speaking. When speaking with native speakers, many students often care too much about their pronunciation to express themselves well enough. After the discussion, some advice came up. First, listening to English radio programs or Podcast regularly helps correct pronunciation and thus build up confidence. What’s more, it’s also a good idea to chat with native speakers of English online.
The offline forum has proved to be beneficial, offering us an opportunity to reflect on English learning and find out amazing ways to learn English. We are all looking forward to the next one.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就你班就同学们在英语学习中遇到的问题举行了一次英语学习的线下论坛用英语写一篇报道，并向你校英语报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice →suggestion
此外： what’s more → besides
机会：opportunity →chance
方法：way→ approach
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The offline forum has proved to be beneficial, offering us an opportunity to reflect on English learning and find out amazing ways to learn English.
拓展句：The offline forum has proved to be beneficial, which offers us an opportunity to reflect on English learning and find out amazing ways to learn English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Students all took an active part, sharing their problems and solutions with others.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】First, listening to English radio programs or Podcast regularly helps correct pronunciation and thus build up confidence.（运用了动名词作主语）
9．Honorable judges and dear fellow students, good morning!
It’s a great pleasure for me to stand here and talk about “How to live a healthy life”. As the saying goes, “Health is wealth”. Keeping healthy has a positive effect on every aspect of our lives. But how can we stay healthy Here are some useful tips.
Firstly, one of the best ways to improve our health is to do regular exercise. Being physically active not only strengthens our bones and muscles, reduces our stress, but also boosts our willpower. Moreover, it is important to eat well. We need to keep a balanced diet and eat foods which contain various nutrients. Last but not least, enough sleep is also essential for good health. It allows our body and mind to recharge, leaving us refreshed when we wake up.
If we pay more attention to the tips above, we will lead a healthier life. Thank you very much for your attention!
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生以“如何健康生活”为题，写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：pleasure→delight
建议：tip→suggestion
另外：moreover→furthermore
包含：contain→include
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, one of the best ways to improve our health is to do regular exercise.
拓展句：Firstly, one of the best ways which improve our health is to do regular exercise.
【点睛】[高分句型1]We need to keep a balanced diet and eat foods which contain various nutrients.(which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]If we pay more attention to the tips above, we will lead a healthier life.(if引导的条件状语从句)
10．
Hello, everyone! I am glad to be able to give a talk about the future life and study here.
I am wondering what life will hold in store for me in two years. As a student of science, I will be studying in my dream university—Suzhou University, where I will be equipped with more systematic professional knowledge. Besides, I want to be a social volunteer, which will not only help me integrate theory with practice and convert capability from knowledge, but also give me insights into life. Apart from my study, more of my hobbies can be developed during my spare time, such as marathon, painting, and programming.
I am confident that I will have an enjoyable, precious and colorful college life. In the end, I hope everyone will be admitted into the dream college with full preparation. That’s all. Thank you for your patient listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“畅想未来生活”这一话题写一篇演讲稿，谈一下未来的学习和生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
理论联系实际：integrate theory with practice → combine theory with practice
此外：besides → additionally
最后：in the end → at last
令人愉快的：enjoyable → delightful
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Besides, I want to be a social volunteer, which will not only help me integrate theory with practice and convert capability from knowledge, but also give me insights into life.
拓展句：Additionally, I want to participate in volunteering, by which I can integrate theory with practice and convert capability from knowledge, as well as gaining insights into life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am wondering what life will hold in store for me in two yearsr.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】As a student of science, I will be studying in my dream university—Suzhou University, where I will be equipped with more systematic professional knowledge.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）