2023届黑龙江高考英语写作分类训练：应用文10篇（含解析）
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1．假如你是李华，刚刚进入高中，就已经开始了紧张而更加丰富的学习生活，认识了一些新同学和新老师，请给你初中时的好朋友王凯写一封电子邮件，介绍一些你目前的学习及生活的情况。
要点提示：
1.自从我们上次见面已经很长时间了；
2.我们班里有56名学生，其中大部分来自农村；
3.班主任杨老师的课非常有趣，给我们留下了深刻的印象；
4.每天下午，我们有很多精彩的课外活动。
注意：词数80词左右，可适当增加相关内容，使文章连贯；
文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
参考词汇：班主任 head teacher
Dear Wang Kai,
It’s a long time since we met last time. How are you
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，对自己的英语学习感到很苦恼，你感到生词难记，而且你的英语听力又差。请你给伦敦好友Eric写一封电子邮件，希望得到他的帮助。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假如你是李华，打算在一个英语论坛发布帖子介绍你最喜欢的一位明星，内容包括：
1. 人物介绍
2. 喜欢他/她的原因
3. 对人物的评价
要求：1. 词数100词左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
可以借助下列句型成文：
1. When it comes to my favourite star,............comes to my mind.
2. It is generally believed that......
3. What impress me most is his/her......
4. In my opinion,......
My favourite star is
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4．围绕“冒险经历”主题，请同学们写一篇日记。
1．内容包括：时间、地点、人物、详细活动的描述；2．表达感受
2．注意： 1）注意审题，切勿偏题。
2）在符合语言逻辑的基础上，可以适当发挥想象力。
3）词数100左右；开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Sunday, June 6, sunny
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5．假定你是李华，你校将举办校园英语广播员竞选活动，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿参加竞选，内容包括：
1．自身优势；
2．对工作的规划与设想。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：广播员broadcaster
6．假设你是李华，你因故不能参加外教史密斯先生于本周日举行的英语学习讲座。请你给他写封邮件，向他请假并说明原因。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。
Dear Mr Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．我市正在开展全国文明城市创建活动，假定你是我市学校的学生会主席，请你以学生会的名义用英文写一封倡议书，向全校同学发出做文明市民的倡议,内容包括：
1.倡议目的 2.倡议内容(如注意个人文明、马路文明,环境卫生等)。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：全国文明城市 National Civilized City
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8．假定你是李华，暑假期间，你参加了WWF举办的为期一周的野生动物保护夏令营。请你写一篇日记分享这段有意义的经历。
1.活动的时间、地点及内容；
2.你对野生动物保护的看法和感悟。
注意：短文词数80字左右。
参考词汇：夏令营：summer camp
Sunday, 8 August, Sunny
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9．你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以“对我影响最深的人”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 影响“我”的原因；
3. 评价。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
The Person Who Influences Me Most
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10．假设你是晨光中学的李津。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议，探讨如何利用网络学习英语，请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿：
（1）介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的（至少写出两点）；
（2）简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法；
（3）请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
注意：词数100左右。
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1．Dear Wang Kai,
It's a long time since we met last time. How are you
I'm writing to tell you something about my new school life. Now I'm in Class 9, Senior Grade l. There are 55 students in our class, most of whom come from the countryside. They are friendly and work hard. Mr. Yang is our head teacher, who teaches us physics. He is very strict with us and his classes are so interesting that we are impressed with them. Our teachers often use a computer in the classroom when we are having classes, which makes our classes more lively. Every afternoon we have many kinds of wonderful after-class activities. And I'm a member of our school football team.
How do you like your new school Are you satisfied with your new school life
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，刚刚进入高中，就已经开始了紧张而更加丰富的学习生活，认识了一些新同学和新老师，请给你初中时的好朋友王凯写一封电子邮件，介绍一些你目前的学习及生活的情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
来自：be from→come from
上课：take classes→have classes
各种各样的：various→many kinds of
满意：be content with→be satisfied with
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Mr. Yang is our head teacher, who teaches us physics. He is very strict with us and his classes are so interesting that we are impressed with them.
拓展句：Mr. Yang is our head teacher, who teaches us physics, who is very strict with us and his classes are so interesting that we are impressed with them.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There are 55 students in our class, most of whom come from the countryside. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Our teachers often use a computer in the classroom when we are having classes, which makes our classes more lively. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
2．Dear Eric,
I’m writing the letter to ask for your help with my English study.
Recently I have met two problems. One is memorizing new words. There are too many new words and expressions for me to memorize. Even though I memorized some of them, I would forget them after a few days. The other is listening. I don’t know how to catch the important information from the texts and can’t understand what the speakers are saying. Those two problems make me upset. Would you like to give me some advice on how to deal with them
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给伦敦好友Eric写一封电子邮件，向他寻求一些学习英语的建议和帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
记忆，记住：memorize→remember
理解，领悟：understand→comprehend
消极的：upset→sad
处理：deal with→do with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There are too many new words and expressions for me to memorize.
拓展句：There are too many new words and expressions that I should memorize.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Even though I memorized some of them, I would forget them after a few days.(运用了Even though引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】I don’t know how to catch the important information from the texts and can’t understand what the speakers are saying. (运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句)
3．My favourite star is Zhao Benshan, who is a Chinese comedian, actor, producer and director. When it comes to my favourite star, Zhao Benshan comes to my mind.
He achieved nationwide fame in the 1990s. It is generally believed that he is one of the best comedians in China. What impresses me most is his particular way of walking when he was acting the role of “Da Huyou” on the stage.
In my opinion, the power of Zhao’s works is not only in the acting, but also in the stories and characters created by him. He has indeed brought laughter and pleasure to our everyday life.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文。要求考生介绍最喜欢的一位明星，介绍人物，说明喜欢他/她的原因并对其进行评价。
【详解】1.词汇积累
获得：achieve→gain
观点：opinion→view
确实：indeed→really
快乐：pleasure→happiness
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In my opinion, the power of Zhao’s works is not only in the acting, but also in the stories and characters created by him.
拓展句：In my opinion, the power of Zhao’s works is not only in the acting, but also in the stories and characters that were created by him.
【点睛】【高分句型1】My favourite star is Zhao Benshan, who is a Chinese comedian, actor, producer and director.（运用了who引导非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】What impresses me most is his particular way of walking when he was acting the role of “Da Huyou” on the stage.（运用了what引导主语从句，when引导时间状语从句）
4．Sunday, June 6, sunny
One day, I went to Adventure Island with my mother, brother, and aunt. Wow, There were so many people that we couldn't squeeze in. I couldn’t wait to go swimming. Immediately I ran to the sea and started swimming. I also played with my brother. I swam farther and farther without realizing that the shore had already been left behind. Suddenly, a big wave came hitting me under the water. Fortunately, my brother grasped me, Otherwise I would definitely have drowned. Then we went to the boat for a while. We rowed twice, and it was really fun! Finally we got tired and went home happily. Really happy today.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生围绕“冒险经历”主题，写一篇日记。
【详解】1.词汇积累
意识到：realize→recognize
突然：suddenly→all of a sudden
抓住：grasp→grab
一定：definitely→certainly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then we went to the boat for a while. We rowed twice, and it was really fun!
拓展句：Then we went to the boat for a while, where we rowed twice, and it was really fun!
【点睛】[高分句型1]There were so many people that we couldn't squeeze in.（运用了so…that…的结果状语从句）
[高分句型2]I swam farther and farther without realizing that the shore had already been left behind.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
5．Good morning, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I’m much honored to have this opportunity to run for the English broadcaster of the school radio station.
I am highly qualified for this position for the following reasons. First, I have a good command of English and can speak English quite fluently. Besides, I worked as an English broadcaster, which undoubtedly helped me gain rich experience. If elected, I will spare no efforts to do every task well, improve the quality of programs and show the charm of English. For example, I will try to organize activities related to English, such as English lectures, English parties, etc. Meanwhile, English debates and contests will attract a large of students, too.
Please vote for me. Your support will be greatly appreciated. Thanks.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿参加学校举办的校园英语广播员竞选活动，内容包括：自身优势、对工作的规划与设想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：opportunity→chance
首先：First→To start with
任务：task→assignment
例子：example→instance
2.句式拓展
句式变化
原句：If elected, I will spare no efforts to do every task well, improve the quality of programs and show the charm of English.
拓展句：If elected, I will spare no efforts to do every task well and improve the quality of programs, showing the charm of English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, I worked as an English broadcaster, which undoubtedly helped me gain rich experience.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 For example, I will try to organize activities related to English, such as English lectures, English parties, etc.（运用了过去分词短语related to作后置定语）
6．Dear Mr Smith,
I'm sorry to tell you I can't attend your lecture on English learning this Sunday.
I was informed yesterday that I was chosen to take part in the National English Speech Contest for Middle School Students. As the first contest is scheduled to be held in Beijing this Sunday, I'll have to go there and won't be back until next Monday, making it impossible for me to attend your lecture. As for your lecture, I'll ask my friend to take notes which I can refer to when I return.
I'm sorry again for not being able to attend your lecture.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生对因故不能参加外教史密斯先生于本周日举行的英语学习讲座。向其写封邮件，向他请假并说明原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：attend→take part in
选择：choose→select
竞赛：contest→competition
不可能实现的：impossible→unfeasible
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I'm sorry to tell you I can't attend your lecture on English learning this Sunday.
提升句：I'm sorry for not being able to attend your lecture on English learning this Sunday.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I was informed yesterday that I was chosen to take part in the National English Speech Contest for Middle School Students. （运用了宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
As the first contest is scheduled to be held in Beijing this Sunday, I'll have to go there and won't be back until next Monday, making it impossible for me to attend your lecture. （运用了现在分词作状语）
7．Dear fellow students,
As you all know, our government is trying to make our city a National Civilized City. We hope we can help to achieve this goal.
First of all, we should mind our language and be civilized speakers. Always remember to say “Please” and “Thanks" and don't talk or laugh loudly in public. When seeing people in trouble, we might as well lend them a helping hand. In addition, be civilized pedestrians. We must obey traffic rules and never cross the streets when the traffic lights are red.Keeping our environment nice and clean is also advisable,which means we shouldn't litter or spit in public places.Only by starting with the little things around us can we make a big difference to our city image.
Let's take action now and make joint efforts to make our city more civilized.
Students' Union
【分析】本文是应用文。要求考生以学生会的名义用英文写一封倡议书，向全校同学发出做文明市民的倡议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
实现：achieve→come through
注意：mind→pay attention to
记住：remember→keep in mind
给某人帮忙：lend sb. a helping hand→give sb. a hand
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We hope we can help to achieve this goal.
拓展句：We hope we can help to achieve this goal, which in turn will do many benefits to us all.
【点睛】[高级句型1]
Keeping our environment nice and clean is also advisable,which means we shouldn't litter or spit in public places.（运用了动名词短语作主语）
[高级句型2]
Only by starting with the little things around us can we make a big difference to our city image.（运用了部分倒装）
8．范文：
Sunday, 8 August, Sunny
This summer holiday, instead of staying with my family, I, together with 30 other students, went to Yunan and took part in the Wildlife Protection Summer Camp held by WWF.
We spent one week in the wild rainforests learning about endangered animals from wildlife professionals. We observed how different species of monkeys adapted themselves to their natural habitats. Plus, various activities to help protect them have been organized, such as picking up plastics, removing nets and traps and putting up posters. We were amazed by the tireless efforts that the locals were making.
The camp not only raised our environmental awareness, but also deepened our understanding of wildlife protection. Only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature can we enjoy a better future together.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇日记，分享参加了WWF举办的为期一周的野生动物保护夏令营这段有意义的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
同……一起：together with →along with
参加：take part in →participate in
另外：Plus → In addition
惊讶的：amazed → astonished
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We spent one week in the wild rainforests learning about endangered animals from wildlife professionals.
拓展句：We spent one week in the wild rainforests learning about endangered animals knowledge which was given from wildlife professionals.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We were amazed by the tireless efforts that the locals were making. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature can we enjoy a better future together. (运用了部分倒装结构)
9．The Person Who Influences Me Most
Everyone has his own idol. There is also one in my mind. She is Helen Keller, who influences me most.
I came across a book entitled Three Days to See by Helen Keller five years ago. I learned from the book that she was stricken blind and deaf but she didn’t bow to destiny. Instead, she tried to live life to the full. With the help of a teacher called Sullivan, she overcame her disabilities and earned a Bachelor of Arts degree. She even helped other people with a disability as a social activist. She devoted herself to raising funds for the American Foundation for the Blind. What she says and does has a great influence on me.
In a word, I can’t appreciate her enough. Whenever I encounter difficulties, her spirit will encourage me and help me cheer up. It is Helen Keller who has made me what I am today.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一个影响自己最深的人，并给出原因和评价。
【详解】1.词汇积累
遇到：come across → run into/meet up with
屈从，低头：bow to → give in to/lower one’s head to
奉献：devote oneself to → commit oneself to
总之：in a word → to sum up
2.句式拓展
原句：She even helped other people with a disability as a social activist. She devoted herself to raising funds for the American Foundation for the Blind.
拓展句：She not only helped other people with a disability as a social activist, but also devoted herself to raising funds for the American Foundation for the Blind.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I came across a book entitled Three Days to See by Helen Keller five years ago.（运用了过去分词作后置定语）
【高分句型2】I learned from the book that she was stricken blind and deaf but she didn’t bow to destiny.（运用了that引导的同位语从句以及动词短语）
【高分句型3】In a word, I can’t appreciate her enough（运用了can’t…enough句式）
【高分句型4】It is Helen Keller who has made me what I am today.（运用了强调句）
10．Good morning, dear friends. Here I'd like to talk about how I learn English online.
Firstly, I learn English by reading books or news and watching films on the Internet. Additionally, the Internet enables me to communicate with native speakers using video calling and online forums, which improves my oral and written English.
Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners. However, not everything online is right so we should learn to identify the wrong information. Finally, I sincerely hope you can share your experience of learning English online.
Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的，简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法，并请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
另外：additionally→moreover
本地的：native→local
识别：identify→recognize
真诚地：sincerely→genuinely
2．句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, I learn English by reading books or news and watching films on the Internet.
拓展句：Firstly, I learn English by reading books or news and watching films that can be found on the Internet.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Here I'd like to talk about how I learn English online.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Additionally, the Internet enables me to communicate with native speakers using video calling and online forums, which improves my oral and written English.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
1．假如你是李华，刚刚进入高中，就已经开始了紧张而更加丰富的学习生活，认识了一些新同学和新老师，请给你初中时的好朋友王凯写一封电子邮件，介绍一些你目前的学习及生活的情况。
要点提示：
1.自从我们上次见面已经很长时间了；
2.我们班里有56名学生，其中大部分来自农村；
3.班主任杨老师的课非常有趣，给我们留下了深刻的印象；
4.每天下午，我们有很多精彩的课外活动。
注意：词数80词左右，可适当增加相关内容，使文章连贯；
文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
参考词汇：班主任 head teacher
Dear Wang Kai,
It’s a long time since we met last time. How are you
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，对自己的英语学习感到很苦恼，你感到生词难记，而且你的英语听力又差。请你给伦敦好友Eric写一封电子邮件，希望得到他的帮助。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假如你是李华，打算在一个英语论坛发布帖子介绍你最喜欢的一位明星，内容包括：
1. 人物介绍
2. 喜欢他/她的原因
3. 对人物的评价
要求：1. 词数100词左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
可以借助下列句型成文：
1. When it comes to my favourite star,............comes to my mind.
2. It is generally believed that......
3. What impress me most is his/her......
4. In my opinion,......
My favourite star is
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4．围绕“冒险经历”主题，请同学们写一篇日记。
1．内容包括：时间、地点、人物、详细活动的描述；2．表达感受
2．注意： 1）注意审题，切勿偏题。
2）在符合语言逻辑的基础上，可以适当发挥想象力。
3）词数100左右；开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Sunday, June 6, sunny
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5．假定你是李华，你校将举办校园英语广播员竞选活动，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿参加竞选，内容包括：
1．自身优势；
2．对工作的规划与设想。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：广播员broadcaster
6．假设你是李华，你因故不能参加外教史密斯先生于本周日举行的英语学习讲座。请你给他写封邮件，向他请假并说明原因。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。
Dear Mr Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．我市正在开展全国文明城市创建活动，假定你是我市学校的学生会主席，请你以学生会的名义用英文写一封倡议书，向全校同学发出做文明市民的倡议,内容包括：
1.倡议目的 2.倡议内容(如注意个人文明、马路文明,环境卫生等)。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：全国文明城市 National Civilized City
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8．假定你是李华，暑假期间，你参加了WWF举办的为期一周的野生动物保护夏令营。请你写一篇日记分享这段有意义的经历。
1.活动的时间、地点及内容；
2.你对野生动物保护的看法和感悟。
注意：短文词数80字左右。
参考词汇：夏令营：summer camp
Sunday, 8 August, Sunny
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9．你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以“对我影响最深的人”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 影响“我”的原因；
3. 评价。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
The Person Who Influences Me Most
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10．假设你是晨光中学的李津。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议，探讨如何利用网络学习英语，请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿：
（1）介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的（至少写出两点）；
（2）简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法；
（3）请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
注意：词数100左右。
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1．Dear Wang Kai,
It's a long time since we met last time. How are you
I'm writing to tell you something about my new school life. Now I'm in Class 9, Senior Grade l. There are 55 students in our class, most of whom come from the countryside. They are friendly and work hard. Mr. Yang is our head teacher, who teaches us physics. He is very strict with us and his classes are so interesting that we are impressed with them. Our teachers often use a computer in the classroom when we are having classes, which makes our classes more lively. Every afternoon we have many kinds of wonderful after-class activities. And I'm a member of our school football team.
How do you like your new school Are you satisfied with your new school life
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，刚刚进入高中，就已经开始了紧张而更加丰富的学习生活，认识了一些新同学和新老师，请给你初中时的好朋友王凯写一封电子邮件，介绍一些你目前的学习及生活的情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
来自：be from→come from
上课：take classes→have classes
各种各样的：various→many kinds of
满意：be content with→be satisfied with
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Mr. Yang is our head teacher, who teaches us physics. He is very strict with us and his classes are so interesting that we are impressed with them.
拓展句：Mr. Yang is our head teacher, who teaches us physics, who is very strict with us and his classes are so interesting that we are impressed with them.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There are 55 students in our class, most of whom come from the countryside. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Our teachers often use a computer in the classroom when we are having classes, which makes our classes more lively. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
2．Dear Eric,
I’m writing the letter to ask for your help with my English study.
Recently I have met two problems. One is memorizing new words. There are too many new words and expressions for me to memorize. Even though I memorized some of them, I would forget them after a few days. The other is listening. I don’t know how to catch the important information from the texts and can’t understand what the speakers are saying. Those two problems make me upset. Would you like to give me some advice on how to deal with them
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给伦敦好友Eric写一封电子邮件，向他寻求一些学习英语的建议和帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
记忆，记住：memorize→remember
理解，领悟：understand→comprehend
消极的：upset→sad
处理：deal with→do with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There are too many new words and expressions for me to memorize.
拓展句：There are too many new words and expressions that I should memorize.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Even though I memorized some of them, I would forget them after a few days.(运用了Even though引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】I don’t know how to catch the important information from the texts and can’t understand what the speakers are saying. (运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句)
3．My favourite star is Zhao Benshan, who is a Chinese comedian, actor, producer and director. When it comes to my favourite star, Zhao Benshan comes to my mind.
He achieved nationwide fame in the 1990s. It is generally believed that he is one of the best comedians in China. What impresses me most is his particular way of walking when he was acting the role of “Da Huyou” on the stage.
In my opinion, the power of Zhao’s works is not only in the acting, but also in the stories and characters created by him. He has indeed brought laughter and pleasure to our everyday life.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文。要求考生介绍最喜欢的一位明星，介绍人物，说明喜欢他/她的原因并对其进行评价。
【详解】1.词汇积累
获得：achieve→gain
观点：opinion→view
确实：indeed→really
快乐：pleasure→happiness
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In my opinion, the power of Zhao’s works is not only in the acting, but also in the stories and characters created by him.
拓展句：In my opinion, the power of Zhao’s works is not only in the acting, but also in the stories and characters that were created by him.
【点睛】【高分句型1】My favourite star is Zhao Benshan, who is a Chinese comedian, actor, producer and director.（运用了who引导非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】What impresses me most is his particular way of walking when he was acting the role of “Da Huyou” on the stage.（运用了what引导主语从句，when引导时间状语从句）
4．Sunday, June 6, sunny
One day, I went to Adventure Island with my mother, brother, and aunt. Wow, There were so many people that we couldn't squeeze in. I couldn’t wait to go swimming. Immediately I ran to the sea and started swimming. I also played with my brother. I swam farther and farther without realizing that the shore had already been left behind. Suddenly, a big wave came hitting me under the water. Fortunately, my brother grasped me, Otherwise I would definitely have drowned. Then we went to the boat for a while. We rowed twice, and it was really fun! Finally we got tired and went home happily. Really happy today.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生围绕“冒险经历”主题，写一篇日记。
【详解】1.词汇积累
意识到：realize→recognize
突然：suddenly→all of a sudden
抓住：grasp→grab
一定：definitely→certainly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then we went to the boat for a while. We rowed twice, and it was really fun!
拓展句：Then we went to the boat for a while, where we rowed twice, and it was really fun!
【点睛】[高分句型1]There were so many people that we couldn't squeeze in.（运用了so…that…的结果状语从句）
[高分句型2]I swam farther and farther without realizing that the shore had already been left behind.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
5．Good morning, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I’m much honored to have this opportunity to run for the English broadcaster of the school radio station.
I am highly qualified for this position for the following reasons. First, I have a good command of English and can speak English quite fluently. Besides, I worked as an English broadcaster, which undoubtedly helped me gain rich experience. If elected, I will spare no efforts to do every task well, improve the quality of programs and show the charm of English. For example, I will try to organize activities related to English, such as English lectures, English parties, etc. Meanwhile, English debates and contests will attract a large of students, too.
Please vote for me. Your support will be greatly appreciated. Thanks.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿参加学校举办的校园英语广播员竞选活动，内容包括：自身优势、对工作的规划与设想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：opportunity→chance
首先：First→To start with
任务：task→assignment
例子：example→instance
2.句式拓展
句式变化
原句：If elected, I will spare no efforts to do every task well, improve the quality of programs and show the charm of English.
拓展句：If elected, I will spare no efforts to do every task well and improve the quality of programs, showing the charm of English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, I worked as an English broadcaster, which undoubtedly helped me gain rich experience.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 For example, I will try to organize activities related to English, such as English lectures, English parties, etc.（运用了过去分词短语related to作后置定语）
6．Dear Mr Smith,
I'm sorry to tell you I can't attend your lecture on English learning this Sunday.
I was informed yesterday that I was chosen to take part in the National English Speech Contest for Middle School Students. As the first contest is scheduled to be held in Beijing this Sunday, I'll have to go there and won't be back until next Monday, making it impossible for me to attend your lecture. As for your lecture, I'll ask my friend to take notes which I can refer to when I return.
I'm sorry again for not being able to attend your lecture.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生对因故不能参加外教史密斯先生于本周日举行的英语学习讲座。向其写封邮件，向他请假并说明原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：attend→take part in
选择：choose→select
竞赛：contest→competition
不可能实现的：impossible→unfeasible
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I'm sorry to tell you I can't attend your lecture on English learning this Sunday.
提升句：I'm sorry for not being able to attend your lecture on English learning this Sunday.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I was informed yesterday that I was chosen to take part in the National English Speech Contest for Middle School Students. （运用了宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
As the first contest is scheduled to be held in Beijing this Sunday, I'll have to go there and won't be back until next Monday, making it impossible for me to attend your lecture. （运用了现在分词作状语）
7．Dear fellow students,
As you all know, our government is trying to make our city a National Civilized City. We hope we can help to achieve this goal.
First of all, we should mind our language and be civilized speakers. Always remember to say “Please” and “Thanks" and don't talk or laugh loudly in public. When seeing people in trouble, we might as well lend them a helping hand. In addition, be civilized pedestrians. We must obey traffic rules and never cross the streets when the traffic lights are red.Keeping our environment nice and clean is also advisable,which means we shouldn't litter or spit in public places.Only by starting with the little things around us can we make a big difference to our city image.
Let's take action now and make joint efforts to make our city more civilized.
Students' Union
【分析】本文是应用文。要求考生以学生会的名义用英文写一封倡议书，向全校同学发出做文明市民的倡议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
实现：achieve→come through
注意：mind→pay attention to
记住：remember→keep in mind
给某人帮忙：lend sb. a helping hand→give sb. a hand
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We hope we can help to achieve this goal.
拓展句：We hope we can help to achieve this goal, which in turn will do many benefits to us all.
【点睛】[高级句型1]
Keeping our environment nice and clean is also advisable,which means we shouldn't litter or spit in public places.（运用了动名词短语作主语）
[高级句型2]
Only by starting with the little things around us can we make a big difference to our city image.（运用了部分倒装）
8．范文：
Sunday, 8 August, Sunny
This summer holiday, instead of staying with my family, I, together with 30 other students, went to Yunan and took part in the Wildlife Protection Summer Camp held by WWF.
We spent one week in the wild rainforests learning about endangered animals from wildlife professionals. We observed how different species of monkeys adapted themselves to their natural habitats. Plus, various activities to help protect them have been organized, such as picking up plastics, removing nets and traps and putting up posters. We were amazed by the tireless efforts that the locals were making.
The camp not only raised our environmental awareness, but also deepened our understanding of wildlife protection. Only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature can we enjoy a better future together.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇日记，分享参加了WWF举办的为期一周的野生动物保护夏令营这段有意义的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
同……一起：together with →along with
参加：take part in →participate in
另外：Plus → In addition
惊讶的：amazed → astonished
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We spent one week in the wild rainforests learning about endangered animals from wildlife professionals.
拓展句：We spent one week in the wild rainforests learning about endangered animals knowledge which was given from wildlife professionals.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We were amazed by the tireless efforts that the locals were making. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature can we enjoy a better future together. (运用了部分倒装结构)
9．The Person Who Influences Me Most
Everyone has his own idol. There is also one in my mind. She is Helen Keller, who influences me most.
I came across a book entitled Three Days to See by Helen Keller five years ago. I learned from the book that she was stricken blind and deaf but she didn’t bow to destiny. Instead, she tried to live life to the full. With the help of a teacher called Sullivan, she overcame her disabilities and earned a Bachelor of Arts degree. She even helped other people with a disability as a social activist. She devoted herself to raising funds for the American Foundation for the Blind. What she says and does has a great influence on me.
In a word, I can’t appreciate her enough. Whenever I encounter difficulties, her spirit will encourage me and help me cheer up. It is Helen Keller who has made me what I am today.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一个影响自己最深的人，并给出原因和评价。
【详解】1.词汇积累
遇到：come across → run into/meet up with
屈从，低头：bow to → give in to/lower one’s head to
奉献：devote oneself to → commit oneself to
总之：in a word → to sum up
2.句式拓展
原句：She even helped other people with a disability as a social activist. She devoted herself to raising funds for the American Foundation for the Blind.
拓展句：She not only helped other people with a disability as a social activist, but also devoted herself to raising funds for the American Foundation for the Blind.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I came across a book entitled Three Days to See by Helen Keller five years ago.（运用了过去分词作后置定语）
【高分句型2】I learned from the book that she was stricken blind and deaf but she didn’t bow to destiny.（运用了that引导的同位语从句以及动词短语）
【高分句型3】In a word, I can’t appreciate her enough（运用了can’t…enough句式）
【高分句型4】It is Helen Keller who has made me what I am today.（运用了强调句）
10．Good morning, dear friends. Here I'd like to talk about how I learn English online.
Firstly, I learn English by reading books or news and watching films on the Internet. Additionally, the Internet enables me to communicate with native speakers using video calling and online forums, which improves my oral and written English.
Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners. However, not everything online is right so we should learn to identify the wrong information. Finally, I sincerely hope you can share your experience of learning English online.
Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的，简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法，并请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
另外：additionally→moreover
本地的：native→local
识别：identify→recognize
真诚地：sincerely→genuinely
2．句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, I learn English by reading books or news and watching films on the Internet.
拓展句：Firstly, I learn English by reading books or news and watching films that can be found on the Internet.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Here I'd like to talk about how I learn English online.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Additionally, the Internet enables me to communicate with native speakers using video calling and online forums, which improves my oral and written English.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）