山东省菏泽市东明县2021-2023年中考英语三模试题分类汇编：书面表达（含解析）

山东省菏泽市东明县
2021-2023年中考英语三模试题分类汇编
书面表达
2023年山东省菏泽市东明县 中考三模英语试题
七、书面表达（20分）
“双减”政策实施以来，在学生中引起热议。在口语课上，你班准备就“不赞成孩子上学科类课外班”举行一次主题班会。请你写一篇短文给出自己的理由及建议，为此主题班会活动做准备。
要求：1.包括以下导图要点；2.字数不低于100；3.不得出现自己真实姓名和学校。
Some parents believe that children should go to after-school classes. I don't really agree with them. Firstly,
2022年山东省菏泽市东明县 中考三模英语试题
七、书面表达（20分）
56．自新冠病毒(C0VID-19)在全世界传播蔓延以来，健康成了一个重要的话题。请你以“How to keep healthy”为题写一篇短文，说说你的看法和建议。
要点：(1)我们应该多吃水果和蔬菜；
(2)我们应该锻炼身体，保证睡眠；
(3)出门必须戴口罩(mask)，回家勤洗手。
要求：(1)参考要点内容，可适当发挥不抗辩。
(2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
(3)文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
(4)词数：不少于80词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。
How to keep healthy
As we all know, health is the most important thing in our lives, especially with the COVID-19 spreading.
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2021年山东省菏泽市东明县 中考三模英语试题
七、书面表达（20分）
76．我们都知道美国登山运动员Aron Ralston自断手臂，继续攀登的故事，他的故事令人感动，激励人心，在我们身边，一定也有那么一些人和事，他们或许平凡，或许渺小，但却总能鼓舞我们，催人奋进。
请以“The Person Encouraging Me”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。
基本情况 年龄、职业、外貌……
品质特征 勇敢、善良、勤奋……（任选）
具体事例 ……
对你的影响 ……
要求：
1.任选一项品质特征，并用具体事例加以阐述。
2.文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和地名。
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答案：
2023年山东省菏泽市东明县 中考三模英语试题
51．参考范文
Some parents believe that children should go to after-school classes. I don’t really agree with them.
Firstly, I think many parents push their children too hard. So the children will have too much pressure to get better grades. Secondly, when children spend too much of their time studying in school and taking after-school classes, they hardly have time to play. And they will develop health problems. Also if children take after-school classes, they won’t have time to apply what they learned in class. What’s more, it will not be good for their development. As we all know, all work no play makes Jack a dull boy.
In my opinion, parents should let their children decide for themselves if they need to take after-school classes. The important thing is that they should try their best to help keep their children’s mind and body healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点给出自己不赞成孩子上学科类课外班的原因，并给出自己的建议，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，表述自己不赞成孩子上学科类课外班；
第二步，讲述不赞成的原因；
第三步，表达自己的观点及建议。
[亮点词汇]
①get better grades取得更好的成绩
②be good for对……有好处
③in one’s opinion在某人看来
④try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①when children spend too much of their time studying in school and taking after-school classes, they hardly have time to play.（when引导时间状语从句）
②Also if children take after-school classes, they won’t have time to apply what they learned in class.（if引导条件状语从句）
2022年山东省菏泽市东明县 中考三模英语试题
56．例文
How to keep healthy
As we all know, health is the most important thing in our lives, especially with the COVID-19 spreading.
First of all, we should eat more fruits and vegetables to ensure a balanced nutrition. Only in this way can we improve our physical strength.
Secondly, we should take more exercise and do more mit to at least three hours of exercise a week. At the same time, you should pay attention to sleep, sleep a full 8 hours a day.
Finally, it is necessary to wear masks when we go out and wash our hands frequently.
I hope we all stay healthy and safe.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以“How to keep healthy”为题介绍如何在疫情的情况下保持健康，添加适当细节，使文章内容更加丰富。
［写作步骤］
第一步，点题说明文章主题是介绍如何保持健康；
第二步，按照题目所给内容介绍保持健康的方法；
第三步，提出自己的希望，希望所有人都保持健康和安全。
［亮点词汇］
①at least至少
②At the same time同时
③pay attention to注意
［高分句型］
①Finally, it is necessary to wear masks when we go out and wash our hands frequently.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语，由when引导的时间状语从句）
②Commit to at least three hours of exercise a week.（祈使句）
③Only in this way can we improve our physical strength.（倒装句）
2021年山东省菏泽市东明县 中考三模英语试题
76．例文：
The Person Encouraging Me
My friend Dave encourages me a lot in many ways. Now let me tell you something about him.
Dave comes from America. He lives with his parents in China. Now he is in the same school as me. He has a round face and wears a pair of glasses. He is helpful and warm-hearted. He is willing to help people in trouble. He often helps his classmates with the homework. He goes to the old people’s home and help do the housework there on weekends. He also visits the children’s hospital to cheer the sick kids up. He reads stories and sings songs for them.
He is creative and organized. For example, he can create a TV programme and organize the class activities. He likes to discuss with classmates and come up with new ideas.
Dave encourages me a lot. He shows me how to be kind and helpful.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述对自己有鼓励作用的人的基本情况，介绍他的品质特征，讲述他的优秀事迹以及对自己的影响。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主，讲述对自己有鼓励作用的人的优秀事迹以及对自己的影响，要叙述完整，条理清晰。