10 单元话题满分写作（名校真题）-2022-2023年八年级英语下期期末高频考点专练（牛津译林版）（带答案解析）

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2022-2023年八年级英语下期期末高频考点专练（牛津译林版）
11 单元话题满分写作（名校真题）
1．（2022春·江苏苏州·八年级苏州高新区第二中学校考期末）近期你参加了学校组织的题为“What can we do for our city”主题演讲比赛，请根据以下材料写一篇英文演讲稿。
在学校学习时 1.走路或骑车上学，代替家长用小轿车接送
2.尽可能多地再利用使用过的书本
3. ……
在日常生活中 1.购物时使用布袋子(cloth bag)，不使用塑料袋
2.节约用水，保护水源
3.垃圾分类，循环利用
4. ……
要求：
1）必须包括表格中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
2）词数：100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
What can we do for our city
Dear teachers and students,
The topic of my speech is “What can we do for our city ” As we all know, to make the environment of our city better, it’s our duty to do something.
As students, we can do something to help.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In our daily life, we can do more. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If we take action, I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
2．（2022春·江苏苏州·八年级苏州高新区实验初级中学校考期末）在八年级即将结束之际，八（1）班将举行一次主题班会，要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请为Simon准备一份100字左右的英语演讲稿，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。具体内容如下：
过去 现在
学习 做作业粗心，功课不好 认真听讲，对课程越来越喜欢了
业余生活 大部分业余时间听音乐，玩游戏 现在用来阅读，因为……
礼仪 乱扔垃圾，在公共场所大声喧哗 通过做……来保护环境，有礼貌……
展望未来 ……
Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and achieved much in some ways.
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Thanks for your listening!
3．（2021春·山东济南·八年级统考期末）假定你是来自八年级一班的学生李华，上周日你班同学到希望儿童福利院（the Hope Children’s Home）开展志愿者活动。请你为校英语报写一篇约100词报道，内容包括：
1. 时间、地点、参与者;
2. 具体活动内容：捐赠物品、举行派对、教孩子们读书……（至少三项）;
3. 简要评论活动的意义（可适当增加细节, 使行文连贯）。
Volunteering in the Hope Children’s Home
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4．（2022春·江苏南京·八年级统考期末）假设你是Wendy, 本周你们班将以“How to go green”为题举行一次演讲比赛, 请你根据表格中的提示内容, 用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要求：
1) 要点完整, 可适当发挥, 使句子通顺、连贯。
2) 正确使用时态, 语法正确, 书写整洁。
3) 90词左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
How to go green
Our environment is changing for the worse, so it’s time for us to go green.
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That’s all. Thanks a lot for your attention!
5．（2022春·广东·八年级统考期末） 根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
旅游已经成为我们生活的一个重要内容。每年假期，越来越多的人走出家门，外出旅游。但与此同时，我们更应该注意自己的言行举止，做到文明出游。请你就此写一篇短文，号召全体同学文明出行。
内容包括：
1. 列举生活中你所见到的不文明出游的例子；
2. 针对文明出游提出建议（至少两点）；
3. 呼吁大家文明出游。
作文要求：
A．不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；
B．语句连贯，词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2021春·湖北武汉·八年级统考期末）中国共产党历经沧桑迎来百年华诞。上周五张华的学校开展了一次“红色印迹”的研学活动，同学们深受教育。张华想用英文发一条朋友圈宣传本次活动，现在请你帮他拟定文字部分。
要点如下：
1. 学校集合乘车前往博物馆；
2. 观看纪录片重温英雄故事；
3. 唱红歌表达缅怀敬仰之情；
4. 活动结束后分享心得体会；
5. 请补充一至两点相关内容。
提示词汇： documentary纪录片； red songs红歌； respect敬意；
表达要求：书写整洁、整齐、清晰；表达自然流畅；词数80左右。
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7．（2022春·湖南常德·八年级统考期末）假如你是Tom的好友，请根据以下信息写一篇有关他的短文，内容要点如下：
(1) 他18岁，来自美国，一直对中国文化很感兴趣，梦想有一天能环游中国；
(2) 他曾经来过武汉并待了很长时间，参观了很多名胜，品尝了各种美食；
(3) 他听了一场现场音乐会，还尝试了流行的共享单车；
(4) 他以前从来没去过湖北博物馆，所以今年暑假，他计划去著名的湖北博物馆；
(5) 对他的博物馆之行补充一至两点看法。
注意：
(1) 内容连贯，不要逐词逐句翻译；
(2) 60~80词左右。
参考词汇 culture 文化 shared bikes 共享单车 live 现场的
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8．（2021春·湖北武汉·八年级统考期末）请根据下面的中文提示写一篇关于 Sally的短文
1、 Sally喜欢读书，已经读了几百本书；
2、她也喜欢旅游，去过北京两次。
3、去年暑假她和父母去了 Singapore，喜欢那儿的美食；
4、她有很多玩具，计划下周日进行庭院销售；
5、请你帮她出出主意，告诉她如何使用销售得来的钱。
要求：不要逐字逐词翻译，60~80词。
提示词：旅游v. travel 庭院销售 have yard sale 玩具n. toy
短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Sally is an English girl. She lives in my neighborhood.
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9．（2021春·广西贺州·八年级统考期末）某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请你根据以下提示，以“The changes in my hometown”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
过去：生活贫困，房屋破旧；污染严重，垃圾遍地；交通不便，游客很少。
现在：环境：山更绿了，水更清了，天更蓝了；
生活：住房宽敞明亮，许多人有了自己的汽车。
旅游：每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客。
要求： 1.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.词数：80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
3.文中不能出现真实的人名。
参考词汇：house房屋 ；convenient便利的； pollution污染；mountain山 ；future未来
The changes in my hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small, and people lived a poor life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．（2021春·江西赣州·八年级统考期末）读万卷书，行万里路。旅游可以使我们开阔眼界。请根据以下要点和要求，用英文写一篇短文，叙述一下你去参观某地的经历和感受。
写作要点：
1. Where did you go Whom did you go with
2. What did you do there
3. What do you think of the place
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 如以自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名；
3. 词数80左右。
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11．（2021春·河南郑州·八年级统考期末）请根据下面的提示，以“Saving the animals”为题写一篇80—100词的英语短文，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
1.人类活动：乱砍滥发树木和猎杀动物；
2.导致的后果：动物生存环境越来越差，动物也越来越少，有的甚至濒临灭绝；
3.请你提出至少两条比较合理的建议。
Saving the animals
As time goes by, there are fewer and fewer forests.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．（2021春·北京海淀·八年级统考期末）旅行能让我们感受到自然的魅力、历史的悠远和文化的传承。
每个人在旅行中都有很多的收获和不同的体会。某英文网站正在开展主题为“An Unforgettable Place I Have Been to”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你去过的一个难忘的地方，你在那里做了什么，以及它难忘的原因。
提示词语：enjoy, taste, beauty, culture, special
提示问题：● What is the unforgettable place you have been to
● What did you do there
●Why is it unforgettable
Many people enjoy travelling a lot. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．（2022春·黑龙江大庆·八年级统考期末）当前我国政府正致力于建设“节约型”社会，倡导节约，抵制浪费。作为学生我们也能做些力所能及的事情，如步行或骑自行车上学；随手关水、断电；减少物品的使用和废旧物品的回收再利用等。请根据要求和提示完成主题为How to Save的海报，号召更多的人加入“节约”的行动中来。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要求：（1）80-90词左右；
（2）文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
提示：tap（水龙头）
Our government is aiming to build an “economized society”.
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In a word, I think we should keep in mind that no matter what a small effort we can make, it does make a difference.
14．（2022春·江苏常州·八年级统考期末）水是生命之源，然而水资源短缺已经成为一个严重的问题，我们应该提倡保护水资源。请以“Water is precious(水是珍贵的)”为题，围绕以下三个问题写一篇80词左右的文章，呼吁全社会保护水资源。
1. Why is water very important in our life
2. What are the causes of the water shortage (缺乏)？
3. How can we protect our water resources
要求：
1.条理清楚，语言流畅，语法正确，书写工整。
2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥。
Water is precious
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15．（2021春·云南丽江·八年级统考期末）提示：读万卷书，行万里路。旅行能够帮助我们丰富知识，增长阅历。你一定有过很棒的旅行经历吧？请以“A Wonderful Travel Experience”为题写一篇英语短文，分享你的一次很棒的旅行经历。
要求：（1）语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60；
（2）文中不得使用真实姓名，校名。
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16．（2022春·河南濮阳·八年级统考期末）行路多者见识广。旅行让我们增长见识，感受人生百态。请你根据要点与提示用英文以“旅行”为主题写一篇短文。
内容：1）分享旅行中的一个故事；
2）谈谈你的感想。
要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
2)词数100词左右。
提示词语： visit, lose, worried, help
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17．（2022春·山东青岛·八年级统考期末）旅行能让我们感受到自然的魅力、历史的积淀和文化的传承。每个人在旅行中都有很多的收获和不同的体会。某个英文网站正在开展主题为“An Unforgettable Place I Have Been to”的征文活动，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你去过的一个难忘的地方，你在那里做了什么，以及它难忘的原因。（80词左右）
提示问题：
●What is the unforgettable place you have been to
●What did you do there
●Why is it unforgettable
An Unforgettable Place I Have Been to
I have ben to many places these years. An unforgettable place I have been to is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18．（2021春·辽宁沈阳·八年级统考期末）假定你是李华，参加英语周报组织的主题为“The city in the past and present”的征文比赛，请结合以下图片。
1.沈阳的过去；2.沈阳的现在；3.你的感受。
注意：1.词数80—100，开头已为你写好，计入总词数；2.可以活当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Great changes have taken place in Shenyang city.
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19．（2021春·黑龙江哈尔滨·八年级校考期末）假如你是Tony，上个星期日参加了一次学校组织的志愿者献爱心活动。请根据以下信息给你的好朋友Mike 写一封电子邮件，记录当天的活动，并希望他下一次也能一起参加这样的活动。
写作要点：
1. 表达你当一名志愿者的心情。
2. 关于活动：
①时间：上个星期日
②地点： The nursing home/The old people’s home(敬老院)
③活动内容：给老人们读报纸、散步、聊天、打扫卫生等。
3. 说说参加此次活动的感受。
写作要求：
(1)不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
(2)可以适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
(3)字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
(4)至少80词。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________


Yours,
Tony
20．（2021春·山东菏泽·八年级统考期末）假如你是李萍，你和你父母正在西安游玩。你的外国网友琳达(Linda)对此很感兴趣，请根据下面提示给琳达回复一封80词左右的电子邮件。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。可适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
提示词：Terracotta Warriors (兵马俑)；Great Wild Goose Pagoda (大雁塔)；Qinling Mountains(秦岭)； Xi’an meat burger(西安肉夹馍)；cold noodles(凉皮)
Dear Linda,
I’ve heard that you’re really interested in my trip to Xi’an. Now let me tell
you something about it.
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Yours,
Li Ping
参考答案：
1． What can we do for our city
Dear teachers and students,
The topic of my speech is “What can we do for our city ” As we all know, to make the environment of our city better, it’s our duty to do something.
As students, we can do something to help. First of all, we should walk or ride to school when we study at school, instead of parents picking us up in cars. Second, we should reuse used books as much as possible. Finally, we must not waste food.
In our daily life, we can do more. First, we use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we shop. Second, we must save water and protect water resources. Third, we need to sort and recycle waste.
If we take action, I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。根据表格提示信息，以“What can we do for our city”为主题，写一篇作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称。叙述要点时，可使用first，second，third，finally等过渡词连接，使文章通畅。最后检查作文，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
2．例文：
Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and achieved much in some ways. First, I used to be careless with my study and was bad at my lessons. But now I listen carefully in class. I am more and more interested in all my lessons.
Second, I spent most of my free time listening to music and playing computer games. But now I try to spend my free time reading because it can open up my eyes and make me relaxed.
Third, in the past I often dropped litter everywhere and shouted loudly in public places. Now, I can behave politely. I always recycle the waste to protect the environment.
I believe I will be better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿，谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。根据表格提示，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2.写作指导：本文用到的一般过去时态和一般现在时态，人称用第一人称。分别从学习；生活；礼仪方面介绍了自己过去和现在的不同，并展望未来，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意连词的使用。全文要点明确，结构严谨，语法运用准确，上下文注意连接的流畅度。
3．例文
Volunteering in the Hope Children’s Home
Last Sunday, some students from Class l, Grade 8 went to the Hope Children’s Home for voluntary work.
When they arrived, they gave away some valuable things including books, toys and clothes. Then they held a party, playing games, singing and dancing together, which made the children feel less lonely. Later some taught the older how to read. Others told stories to the younger. They all got a strong feeling of satisfaction when they saw the look of joy on the children’s faces.
Volunteering is really meaningful. Not only does it enrich students’ life experiences, but it also helps the people in trouble. Therefore, why not consider volunteering in your free time
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，围绕“上周日的志愿者活动”展开叙述，结合提纲，分别介绍活动的时间、地点、参与者以及活动内容和意义，不能有要点的遗漏。
2.写作指导：本文主要使用第三人称来叙述；针对“上周日的志愿活动”，要用一般过去时描述。要求能够准确使用语法以及一定的词汇、短语和句型，清楚连贯地表达思想，保证条理清晰。
4．例文：
How to go green
Our environment is changing for the worse, so it’s time for us to go green.
First of all, we should save energy. We can take shorter showers and reuse water if possible. We should not forget to turn off the power when our TV or computer is not in use. Also, in order to reduce pollution. We should choose public transport to reduce harmful gas. We can take our own bags when shopping instead of using plastic bags. Moreover, it’s very important for us to develop a green lifestyle. We should do more exercise and watch less TV.
In my opinion, we should try our best to protect the environment. Follow these small steps and you can make a big difference to the earth.
That’s all. Thanks a lot for your attention.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“How to go green”为题，结合提示内容写一篇演讲稿。可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。应该承接开头叙述，第一段说我们的环境正在变得越来越糟，所以我们应该环保；第二段针对问题提出具体的建议；第三段讲遵循这些建议就能给地球带来很大的改变；最后一段表达感谢。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
5．例文
Nowadays, traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest. Some make noises in public places. Others throw rubbish and write or draw everywhere.
As a middle school student, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors. First of all, remember to throw rubbish into dustbins and don't write or draw on the relics. Secondly, don’t make noises in public places. We’d better follow guides and obey rules. What’s more, we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions.
In a word, it’s our duty to behave politely while traveling.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇材料作文，根据所给提示写一篇短文，号召同学们文明旅游。
2.写作指导：时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称和第三人称；写作时，可分为三段式；首先列出不文明出游的现象；然后针对文明旅游提出建议，写这段时可以用一些连接词如 First of all, Secondly, What’s more等以及表建议的句型；最后是呼吁大家文明旅游。注意无标点、拼写和语法错误。
6．例文
The 100th birthday of the Party is coming. We had a school trip to celebrate it last Friday. All the students gathered at school and then we went to the museum by bus. We had some meaningful activities there. What impressed me most was a documentary on the Party history. It reminded us what the great heroes did for our great country. We also sang some red songs to express our respect for the heroes. While singing, we felt quite excited and proud. At last, everyone of us shared our feelings with classmates in class. What an unforgettable trip! Happy birthday, the great Party!!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，内容是根据所给的材料，帮助张华发一条朋友圈，介绍他的“红色印迹”的研学活动情况。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；首先介绍中国共产党的百年华诞；接着介绍前往博物馆的方式；详细地介绍在博物馆里的活动；最后介绍活动结束后分享心得体会。
7．例文：
I have a good friend, his name is Tom. He is 18 years old and from America. He has always been interested in Chinese culture and dreams of traveling around China one day. He has ever come to Wuhan and stayed for a long time. He visited many places of interest and tasted all kinds of delicious food. He attended a live concert and tried out popular shared bikes. He has never been to Hubei Museum before, so this summer vacation, he plans to go to the famous Hubei Museum. I think it will be wonderful for him to visit the museum. At the museum, he will see many famous exhibits, such as paintings, porcelain, jade articles and so on. He will learn a lot about Chinese culture.
【详解】1.题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们根据题目中给出的信息，介绍自己的好朋友Tom的情况。题目中列出了有关Tom的五条信息，学生们应用正确的英语将这些信息表达出来，其中第五条信息要求学生们对Tom的博物馆之行提出一到两点看法。这里需要学生们自己发挥想象力，将内容补充完整，如你可以给Tom介绍一下湖北博物馆的特色、著名的展品等。
2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第三人称叙述，根据表达需要使用正确的时态，如第二条和第三条信息，应以一般过去时态为主。写作时应注意将题目中的要点都包括在文章中，不要遗漏，补充的信息应合情合理，并与文章整体内容协调。注意英语句式结构的特点，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句及其他句式，提升作文档次。
8．例文：
Sally is an English girl. She lives in my neighborhood.
Sally enjoys reading and has read hundreds of books. What’s more, she also likes travelling around many places, and she has been to Beijing twice. Last summer, she went to Singapore with her parents. She likes the foods there very much.
She has a lot of toys and plans to have a yard sale next Sunday. I suggested that she can divide the money into two parts, save one part and use it when she needs it, and donate the other part to children in poor areas. I think it is very meaningful. She also agrees with my idea. What would you do if you were her
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求依据提示内容介绍Sally，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为来介绍，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可以分为三段，第一段已经给出；第二段可以介绍她的爱好以及和去年暑假和父母旅行；第三段可以从庭院销售方面进行介绍。注意语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
9．参考范文：
The changes in my hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small, and people lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers are clearer and the sky is bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to our city.
I’m sure it will get richer and more beautiful in the future. I love my hometown.
【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，写作时应承接短文开头，然后分别从环境、生活、旅游介绍过去和现在的变化，最后介绍自己对家乡的感情，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述内容；时态综合采用一般过去时和一般现在时；介绍家乡的变化时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
10．例文：
Have you ever been to Ganzhou Do you think it’s a lively and beautiful city to visit
Last winter, I went there with my parents. We visited lots of interesting places such as the Old City Wall of the Song Dynasty and the City Museum. The Old City Wall of Song Dynasty is so old that it can make us learn more about history. Also, we enjoyed different kinds of delicious food and some of them have a long history.
Ganzhou is really a wonderful place in China. Its people are friendly and hard-working. If you want to take a holiday and relax yourself, you can go there.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求根据写作要点写一篇80词左右的短文，叙述你去参观某地的经历和感受。
2. 写作指导：本文时态主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时；写作时可根据要点提示的顺序进行写作，紧扣提示内容进行发挥；写作完成时应确保文章内容齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文的表达习惯。
11．例文
Saving the animals
As time goes by, there are fewer and fewer forests. The reason is that people cut down too many trees and hunt too many animals. As a result, the animals are becoming fewer and fewer, too. Some animals are even dying out. So we should do something to stop these activities of human beings which are destroying the earth.
In my opinion, we should protect the forests and save the animals. First, the government should make laws to forbid people to cut down trees or hunt the animals. Second, we should make people realize the importance of protecting the animals.
To save the animals means to save the earth and ourselves.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。在写作时应根据汉语提示，说明人类活动的现状和导致的后果，并提出至少两条合理化的建议。
2. 写作指导：本文应该用第三和第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言精炼，内容完整，行文连贯，保证条例清晰。
12．例文
Many people enjoy travelling a lot. The same goes for me. But the one place I cannot forget is Hangzhou, as my visit there has been truly unforgettable.
During my stay in Hangzhou, I spent a large amount of time walking by the West Lake, enjoying the magnificent scenery as well as the quiet grace of nature. Impressed by the breathtaking view, I also took a boat trip on the lake, where the boatman introduced me to the glorious history of the ancient city. Before leaving, I went to visit some famous temples to experience the cultural atmosphere.
I think Hangzhou is truly an unforgettable place. A combination of history and modern, Hangzhou is a place where human and nature comes to a wonderful balance and exists in perfect harmony. I cannot help but feel that my soul has been purified after my stay there, and it’s hard to think of a better place to seek for inner peace than Hangzhou.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我去过的一个难忘的地方”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段描述自己在杭州的所见所闻；最后一段发表自己对这次经历的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
13．例文
Our government is aiming to build an “economized society”. I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve the goal. As students, we still can do something to help.
First, don’t waste things. We’d better go to school on foot or ride a bike instead of taking a car or a bus. Second, turn off lights as soon as we leave the classroom. Remember to turn off the tap at once after washing our hands. Third, use things as long as possible. Don’t use a paper cup or a paper bag. It’s better to use a china cup or a lunch box. Finally, collect what can be recycled in your classroom or in your neighbourhood and sell them.
In a word, I think we should keep in mind that no matter what a small effort we can make, it does make a difference.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“如何节约”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称采用第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段就如何节约这个话题提出建议；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
14．One possible version:
Water is precious
As we all know, water is very important in our life. A person can’t live if he doesn’t drink water for more than 7 days. However, some people didn’t realize the importance of it. They usually keep the water running after using it or throw dirty things into the rivers, lakes or seas.
In fact, we must do something to stop it from getting worse if we live on the Earth. Firstly, turn off the tap after using it. Secondly, keep the water clean by not throwing anything dirty. Thirdly, reusing the water is also needed. To sum up, water is important to all of us. Let’s try our best to save it.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。所写具体内容已通过提问的形式给出，主题内容应围绕“水资源缺乏原因”和“如何保护水资源”二个方面展开。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
15．参考范文：
A Wonderful Travel Experience
Last winter, I went to Thailand with my parents. It was so wonderful that I would never forget it.
In winter, it is often cold in my hometown, but in Thailand it is warm and even a little hot. When we got there, we only needed to wear cool clothes. We went to the fruit market and ate all kinds of delicious fruits. We also had some seafood. It was not only delicious but also very cheap. In the evening, we went for a walk on the beach. The sand was so soft and the sea wind was so cool. I will never forget the comfortable feeling.
It was a really wonderful travel experience. I hope to visit Thailand again.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，介绍自己的一段旅行经历，可以介绍行程，也可以介绍感受。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称书写，时态以一般过去时为主。可分为三段，第一段介绍哪次旅行更难忘、第二段介绍具体行程、第三段介绍自己的感受，并总结。注意要点齐全，单词拼写无误。
16．One possible version:
Three years ago, I went to Yunnan with my parents. One day when we visited Lijiang Ancient Town, I lost my way and couldn’t find my parents. I felt worried and had no idea what to do. Just then a young lady came up and lent her mobile phone to me. With her help, I contacted my parents finally.
From this experience, I’ve learned that a small act of kindness means a lot to strangers. I’d like to pass it on to people in need in my life.
【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“旅行”为主题分享旅行中的一个故事。
写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主，用一般过去时描述旅行中故事，谈感想时，可以要用现在时态。写作时，要围绕主题合理发挥，描述故事时，要叙述完整，谈感想时要围绕主题。保证条理清晰、语句通顺、意思连贯，确保单词拼写和语法标点使用正确。
17．[例文]
An Unforgettable Place I Have Been to
I have ben to many places these years. An unforgettable place I have been to is Guangzhou.
Last year, I went to Guangzhou in the summer vacation. When we got there, we started to hang out on the street. The first thing was to find something to eat. There were so many delicious snacks. It is hard for us to choose what to eat, so we planned to eat as much as we can. After we finishing eating, we went to go shopping. Guangzhou is famous the foreign trade and its clothes are fashionable and cheap. At last, we bought many clothes.
This trip is so unforgettable to me because Guangzhou is the paradise of food and shopping. We really enjoyed ourselves during the trip.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题为话题作文，要求以“An Unforgettable Place I Have Been to”为题写一篇关于最难忘的地方的短文。文章思路按照三个问题提示展开即可。
2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态应根据具体语境选用现在时或过去时。文章主要内容大致分三点，先点出去过的令你难忘的地方，然后叙述你在那里做过的事，最后解释为什么那个地方最令你难忘。文章应做到层次分明，思路清晰，不要出现单词拼写、语法时态方面的错误。
18．例文
The city in the past and present
Great changes have taken place in Shenyang city. In the past, because the factory discharged a lot of waste gas. People had to walk or ride bikes to work in the narrow streets. However, many modern tall buildings are springing up all over our city. The river becomes so clean that more and more people like to take a walk along the river. People can drive cars in wide streets or take fast undergrounds or train to work. There are no more factories discharging waste gas.
Our city has become much better than it used to be and I hope people in the city will live a happier life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“The city in the past and present”为题根据图片所示内容进行写作，分析图中的变化，描述沈阳的过去和现在，可以适当增加细节。。
2.写作指导：本文应该采用第三人称来写作；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时相结合；第一段描述沈阳过去和现在的具体情景，第二段写出自己的展望。描述沈阳的过去和现在时要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
19．例文：
Dear Mike,
Is everything all right Last Sunday, I participated in a volunteer love activity organized by the school. It is very meaningful. I feel very happy.
Let me tell you what we did last Sunday. As soon as we volunteers arrived at the nursing home, they warmly welcomed us. We brought some flowers and fruit to the old people. We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. After we read the newspaper and took a walk, we sat together and chatted and wished them the best. When we were leaving, the old people were very excited. They thanked us for our kindness.
I think it is our duty to take care of the old and respect them. If you have a chance to come to China, I hope you can join us.
Yours,
Tony
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求给好友写一封电子邮件，描述自己去敬老院当志愿者的经历，题干给出了提示，写作时注意包含全部要点。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般过去时为主，以第一人称进行写作。开头引出主题，中间描述具体活动内容，结尾表达感想和期待。注意时态的变化，力求无语法和标点错误。
20．One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I’ve heard that you’re really interested in my trip to Xi’an. Now let me tell you something about it. Xi’an lies in the center of Shaanxi Province. It’s about 9,983 square kilometers in size. It has a history of more than 3,100 years. I went there with my parents three days ago. So far, we have visited the Terracotta Warriors, Great Wild Goose Pagoda as well as Qinling Mountains. What’s more, the food here is very delicious. We’ve tasted a lot of food and my favorites are Xi’an meat burgers and cold noodles. We have a good time here. When you travel in China, remember to visit Xi’an.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据所给提示，给琳达写一封电子邮件，介绍自己和父母的西安之旅。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主；介绍西安和西安之旅时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
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