2023年北京市高三英语模拟试题选编:书面表达
1. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校交换生Jim打算今年暑假回英国,想送给他的妈妈一件具有中国特色的礼物,特发来邮件就准备什么礼物向你咨询。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1. 建议的礼物;
2. 说明选择该礼物的原因;
3. 表达祝福。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校交换生Jim打算今年暑假回英国,想送给他的妈妈一件具有中国特色的礼物,特发来邮件就准备什么礼物向你咨询。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件。内容包括:
(1)建议的礼物;
(2)说明选择该礼物的原因;
(3)表达祝福。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours, Li Hua
3. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你校将组织参观中国载人航天工程成就展,你班的英国交换生Jim对中国航天兴趣浓厚,请你写一封邮件邀请他参加,内容包括:
1.活动目的及时间安排;
2.活动内容;
3.询问对方意向。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:中国载人航天工程成就展 exhibition of achievements in China’s manned spaceflight program
Dear Jim.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim来信提及他参加了学校举办的"从地标建筑读懂一座城市"的世界城市展示活动。请你用英文给他回一封电子邮件,谈谈你的想法。内容包括:
(1)你推荐的城市及其地标建筑;
(2)推荐理由。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:地标landmark
Dear Jim,
Yours, Li Hua
5. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim来信询问你毕业后的暑期安排。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,谈谈你的打算及原因。
注意:
( 1)词数100左右;
( 2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours, Li Hua
6. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题) There are many historical sites and places in the world that give us insight and evidence of the past civilization. These sites help us learn about our ancestors, their living and culture. These sites can be called common or universal heritage(遗产) of humankind and our world heritage.
These sites from the past civilizations are for all humans. We must live in them today and also pass them on to future generations. They teach us about our past and represent the great achievements of our ancestors and make us proud. World heritage has historical, cultural and economic significance. It has exceptional value and importance for humankind from history, science and arts points of view and must be cared for.
Many UNESCO sites that stand today are under threat. There is a list of thirty sites by UNESCO that are endangered. There are many external factors responsible for damaging the world heritage, some of which are climate change, natural disasters, urbanization and unchecked tourism etc.
With the growing strength of these external factors, it is becoming more and more important to take proper measures to save and preserve these timeless achievements of humankind. There are many communities and organizations in the world which are working to protect these sites. We can work with these organizations, travel agencies, government groups and local communities. We should join them to support their cause. Another way to play our part is to shoulder travel responsibility Tourism can generate funds for the restoration of historical sites but at the same time unchecked tourism can damage them seriously.
The younger generation must preserve the identity of the people who came before them. No matter what is our reach, we should help protect them through effective means. Our every step would count and help in protecting the world heritage sites.
(1) Why can many historical sites be called world heritage?
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(2) What is Paragraph 2 mainly talking about?
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(3) Please decide which part is false in the following statement, then underline it and explain why.
Tourism can bring economic benefits which are used to restore the historical sites, so we should remove the limitations on tourism.
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(4) What can we do to shoulder our responsibilities to protect world heritage sites?(In about 40 words)
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7. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。作为你校英语戏剧社的负责人,在毕业前的活动上你将做离任发言。请你用英文写一份发言稿,内容包括:
(1)回顾开展的主要活动与收获;
(2)表达感谢及祝愿。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
8. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你最近读完了外教 Jim 推荐的一本英文书,请你用英文给Jim 写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表达感谢并分享读书收获;
(2)交流后续英文书阅读计划。
注意:
(3)词数100 左右;
(4)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours, Li Hua
9. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim听说直播购物(live-stream shopping)在中国很流行,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
(1)你是否通过直播进行过购物;
(2)你对直播购物的看法或感受。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours, Li Hua
10. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三"传统文化社"社长李华。你校国际部留学生Jim邀请你参加他们组织的 "China Day"活动并做展示。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)接受邀请并表示感谢;
(2)你展示的内容及理由。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours, Li Hua
11. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。作为你校英语戏剧社的负责人,在毕业前的活动上你将做离任发言。请你用英文写一份发言稿,内容包括:
1. 回顾开展的主要活动与收获;
2. 表达感谢及祝愿。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
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12. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。下周将有一个英国的学生代表团来你校进行为期两天的交流访问,你将作为学生代表致词。请你用英文写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
(1)表示欢迎;
(2)简要介绍主要活动安排;
(3)表达美好祝愿。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
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13. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学的学生李华。你校交换生Jim对中国的非物质文化遗产非常感兴趣,这个周末在国家博物馆将举办一场非遗文化展。请你给Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他一同前往。邮件内容包括:
(1)介绍活动;
(2)发出邀请。
注意:
(1)词数100左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
提示词:国家博物馆 National Museum of China
非物质文化遗产展览 intangible cultural heritage exhibition
Dear Jim,
Yours, Li Hua
14. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学的学生李华。你校交换生Jim对中国的非物质文化遗产非常感兴趣,这个周末在国家博物馆将举办一场非遗文化展。请你给Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他一同前往。邮件内容包括:
1.介绍活动;
2.发出邀请。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
提示词:国家博物馆 National Museum of China
非物质文化遗产展览 intangible cultural heritage exhibition
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
15. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你与交换生Jim要共同完成一篇项目学习的论文,他建议用AI完成初稿。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)委婉拒绝并说明理由;
(2)你的建议及计划。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词语:项目学习-project-based learning
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
16. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题) E-waste is a serious problem that isn't going to get better on its own. Here are some do-it-yourself tips on how to manage e-waste.
Maybe the biggest cause of our e-waste problem is the fact that we buy things that we just don't need. Next time you feel like you need a device or electronic item, stop yourself and ask if it is truly necessary. This is maybe also the easiest way we can manage e-waste. Organize your electronics. If you don't keep your connectors, DVDs, wires and gadgets organized, you won't be aware of what you have. When we buy duplicate electronics because we think we need them, we are contributing to our growing e-waste problem. "How to manage e-waste" becomes less of an issue when we keep our own houses in order.
If you do not need a piece of equipment and it is in good enough condition to be reused, donate it as soon as you can so that somebody else can use it Donations are good for us because they are a useful way to get tax deductions(减税), and a lot of times that tax deduction will be close to the value of the item had you tried to sell it. Take your electronics back to the store. Some stores offer trade- in programs, where you can drop off your old equipment in return for gift cards.
There are also places to sell electronics that might be valuable to somebody else. Just be sure to sell them right away, because they lose value very rapidly in our changing market.
If you are frequently receiving memory sticks and little gadgets, collect them into a good-e-bag. Whenever you no longer need a USB stick or a small electronic device, toss it into the bag. You might be surprised at how quickly it fill up. So be sure you are utilizing your materials and products thoughtfully. With these tips you can use DIY solutions to learn how to manage e-waste. Your house will be cleaner, you will save money and you'll be doing a good thing.
(1) What is the biggest cause of our e-waste problem
(2) How can people get tax deductions when managing e-waste
(3) Please decide which part is false in the flowing statement, then underline it and explain why.
Sell the electronics that you don't need right away because the earlier you sell them, the more gift cards you can get.
(4) Why do we need to manage our e-waste?(In about 40 words)
17. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你正在组建与英语学习相关的研究性学习小组,请你用英文给你校交换生Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
1. 介绍研究的具体内容和意义;
2. 说明邀请原因和其他相关事宜。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:研究性学习 research-based learning
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
18. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你正在组建与英语学习相关的研究性学习小组,请你用英文给你校交换生Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
(1)介绍研究的具体内容和意义;
(2)说明邀请原因和其他相关事宜。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:研究性学习 research-based learning
Dear Jim,
Yours, Li Hua
19. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim 所在的学校即将迎来百年校庆。他参与准备活动,负责向来宾介绍学校的变化,问你有什么好的建议。请你用英文给他回邮件,内容包括:
(1)表示祝贺;
(2)你的建议。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:纪念日 anniversary
Dear Jim,
__________
Yours, Li Hua
20. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国好友Jim所在的学校即将迎来百年校庆。他参与准备活动,负责向来宾介绍学校的变化,问你有什么好的建议。请你用英文给他回邮件,内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.你的建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:纪念日anniversary
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
21. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校即将举办“中医药文化”主题活动,你打算邀请交换生Jim参加。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.介绍活动;
2.邀请参加。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:中医药Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM)
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
22. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校即将举办"中医药文化"主题活动,你打算邀请交换生Jim参加。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)介绍活动;
(2)邀请参加。
提示词:Traditional Chinese Medicine(TCM)中医药
注意:
(3)词数100左右;
(4)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours, Li Hua
23. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信,得知他和朋友们骑车旅行一周的计划没有得到父母的许可,他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim 写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)表示安慰;
(2)给出建议。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours, Li Hua
24. (2023·北京市市辖区·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信,得知他和朋友们骑车旅行一周的计划没有得到父母的许可,他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表示安慰;
2.给出建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
25. (2023·北京市县·模拟题)假设你是红星中学高三(1)班学生李华。你的外国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国十二生肖感兴趣。请你给他回一封邮件介绍你的生肖,内容包括:
(1)简介中国的十二生肖;
(2)你的生肖和生肖对你的影响。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词语:十二生肖 the twelve animal signs
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
1.【答案】Dear Jim,
It's great to hear from you! ①As you want to give a gift with Chinese characteristics to your mom, I would suggest a Chinese silk scarf.
Chinese silk scarf is an excellent choice to showcase the beauty of Chinese culture. It is not only sophisticated in pattern and design, but also comfortable to wear. Besides, there are many patterns with rich cultural meanings to choose from. For instance, peony, lotus, and phoenix all represent happiness, prosperity, and good luck in Chinese culture.
② I hope this gift will impress your mom and bring her joy. Please convey my best regards and best wishes to her. Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校交换生Jim打算今年暑假回英国,想送给他的妈妈一件具有中国特色的礼物,特发来邮件就准备什么礼物向你咨询。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件。
【亮点词汇】
①建议:suggest→recommend
②表达:convey→express
③快乐:joy→happiness
④选择:choice→option
【高分句型】
① As you want to give a gift with Chinese characteristics to your mom, I would suggest a Chinese silk scarf. (运用了as引导原因状语从句)
② I hope this gift will impress your mom and bring her joy. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【结构布局】
引言:建议选丝绸的丝巾当礼物
中心:选择该礼物的原因
结尾:表达祝福
2.【答案】Dear Jim,
It's great to hear from you!As you want to give a gift with Chinese characteristics to your mom,I would suggest a Chinese silk scarf.【高分句型一】(建议的礼物)
Chinese silk scarf is an excellent choice to showcase the beauty of Chinese culture.It is not only sophisticated in pattern and design,but also comfortable to wear.Besides,there are many patterns with rich cultural meanings to choose from.For instance,peony,lotus,and phoenix all represent happiness,prosperity,and good luck in Chinese culture.(说明介绍礼物的原因)
I hope this gift will impress your mom and bring her joy.【高分句型二】Please convey my best regards and best wishes to her.Looking forward to seeing you soon!(表达祝福)
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】高分句型一:As you want to give a gift with Chinese characteristics to your mom,I would suggest a Chinese silk scarf.
翻译:既然你想给你妈妈送一件有中国特色的礼物,我建议你买一条中国丝巾。
分析:运用了as引导原因状语从句。
高分句型二:I hope this gift will impress your mom and bring her joy.
翻译:我希望这份礼物能给你妈妈留下深刻印象,带给她快乐。
分析:运用了省略that的宾语从句。
提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
3.【答案】Dear Jim,
How’s everything going To advocate the spirit of innovation and devotion, our school will organize a trip to the exhibition of achievements in China’s manned spaceflight program. Knowing you’re interested in China’s spaceflight industry, I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The activity will be held in National Museum at 8 a.m.this Sunday. First, we’ll see the models of the space station and rockets to get deeper insights into China’s spaceflight. Then we’ll enjoy various pictures and videos shot during the space missions, which will vividly show Chinese astronauts’ life in space. Besides, with instructions of volunteers, we’ll know about the glorious stories behind the spaceflight program.
Would you like to come Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给交换生Jim写一封邮件邀请他参加学校组织的中国载人航天工程成就展
4.【答案】Dear Jim,
I am glad to hear from you,and what an interesting activity!We can really tell a lot about a city from its buildings.(点明主题)
I know you are a fan of Chinese architecture,so if you haven't decided which city to pick,you may consider Beijing,with the Forbidden City as a distinctive landmark.【高分句型一】(你推荐的城市及其地标建筑)
Located in the centre of Beijing,the Forbidden City,the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties,has a history of over 600 years.【高分句型二】It has witnessed the changes of the city.Thus,it is surely a worthy landmark of Beijing and a good choice for your project.(推荐理由)
I hope my advice will be helpful.Wish you every success.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】高分句型一:I know you are a fan of Chinese architecture,so if you haven't decided which city to pick,you may consider Beijing,with the Forbidden City as a distinctive landmark.
翻译:我知道你是中国建筑的粉丝,所以如果你还没有决定选择哪个城市,你可以考虑北京,因为紫禁城是一个独特的地标。
分析:本句使用了if引导的条件状语从句。
高分句型二:Located in the centre of Beijing,the Forbidden City,the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties,has a history of over 600 years.
翻译:紫禁城位于北京市中心,是明清两代的皇宫,已有600多年的历史。
分析:本句使用了过去分词短语Located in the centre of Beijing作状语。
书信类作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
5.【答案】Dear Jim,
How is everything going?I'd like to share with you some plans for the upcoming summer vacation.(点明主题)
First,I'm going to take a trip with my parents.It's a great way to unwind and recharge after a year of hard work.Moreover,we can explore breathtaking scenery and spend quality time together during the journey.Learning some new skills is also on my agenda.【高分句型一】Passionate about programming,I'm planning to attend relevant online courses to take my programming skills to the next level,which will be beneficial for my future major.【高分句型二】(毕业后的暑期安排)
Have you got any vacation plans yet?Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】高分句型一:Learning some new skills is also on my agenda.
翻译:学习一些新技能也在我的日程上。
分析:本句使用了动名词短语Learning some new skills作主语。
高分句型二:Passionate about programming,I'm planning to attend relevant online courses to take my programming skills to the next level,which will be beneficial for my future major.
翻译:对编程充满热情,我计划参加相关的在线课程,将我的编程技能提升到一个新的水平,这将有利于我未来的专业。
分析:本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6.【答案】【小题1】
Because they help us learn about our ancestors, their living and culture./Because they give us insight and evidence of the past civilization.
【小题2】
The importance of historical sites.
【小题3】
Tourism can bring economic benefits which are used to restore the historical sites, so we should remove the limitations on tourism. According to the passage, unchecked tourism can damage them seriously.
【小题4】
We should visit world heritage sites in a responsible and sustainable way. We must follow tourism rules, including that we mustn't paint, carve or climb at will.Additionally, we can stop other tourists from behaving badly. Only when everyone takes action can we complete this great project.
【解析】1.
【文章大意】这是一篇说明文。文章主要说明了历史遗址的作用以及意义,指出许多联合国教科文组织的遗产地正面临威胁,我们应该通过有效的手段帮助保护他们。
根据第一段内容(世界上有许多历史遗迹和地方给我们提供了过去文明的洞察力和证据。这些遗址帮助我们了解我们的祖先,他们的生活和文化。这些遗址可以被称为人类的共同或普遍遗产和我们的世界遗产。)可知,许多历史遗迹可以被称为世界遗产是因为它们帮助我们了解我们的祖先,他们的生活和文化。/因为它们给了我们对过去文明的洞察和证据。故答案为Because they help us learn about our ancestors, their living and culture./Because they give us insight and evidence of the past civilization.。
2.
根据第二段内容(这些来自过去文明的遗址是给所有人类的。我们今天必须生活在它们之中,也要把它们传给后代。它们告诉我们我们的过去,代表了我们祖先的伟大成就,让我们感到自豪。世界遗产具有历史、文化和经济意义。从历史、科学和艺术的角度来看,它对人类具有特殊的价值和重要性,必须得到照顾。)可知,第二段的主旨是历史遗迹的重要性。故答案为The importance of historical sites.。
3.
根据倒数第二段中的Another way to play our part is to shoulder travel responsibility Tourism can generate funds for the restoration of historical sites but at the same time unchecked tourism can damage them seriously.(另一种发挥我们作用的方式是承担旅游责任。旅游可以为历史遗迹的修复产生资金,但同时,不受限制的旅游会严重损害它们。)可知,错误的部分是“remove the limitations on tourism”,因为不受限制的旅游会严重损害历史遗址。故答案为Tourism can bring economic benefits which are used to restore the historical sites, so we should remove the limitations on tourism. According to the passage, unchecked tourism can damage them seriously.
4.
根据“我们能做些什么来承担保护世界遗产的责任?”可回答我们应该以负责任和可持续的方式参观世界遗产。我们必须遵守旅游规则,包括不能随意画画、雕刻或攀爬。此外,我们可以阻止其他游客的不良行为。只有每个人都行动起来,我们才能完成这项伟大的工程。故答案为We should visit world heritage sites in a responsible and sustainable way. We must follow tourism rules, including that we mustn't paint, carve or climb at will.Additionally, we can stop other tourists from behaving badly. Only when everyone takes action can we complete this great project.。
7.【答案】Good morning, everyone!
①It's a great honor to deliver my last speech here as the President of English Drama Club.
Time flies over us, but leaves its shadow behind. ②Never will I forget the colorful activities during the past two years, such as the lectures on Shakespeare's plays, the course of drama appreciation and our amazing performances at the annual Art Festival. Our club not only gave us a platform to show ourselves, but also offered me a chance to witness the magic of communication and cooperation. My personal ability has been improving as well.
Today I must express my sincere gratitude to all of you. Thank you for always being there to support me. Wish our club a brighter future. Thanks again.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文为一篇应用文写作,话题为假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。作为你校英语戏剧社的负责人,在毕业前的活动上你将做离任发言。请你用英文写一份发言稿。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用,可适当添加一定的衔接词,以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①offered sb. a chance to do给某人一个机会去做
②express one's sincere gratitude to对某人表示诚挚的感谢
【高分句型】
① It's a great honor to deliver my last speech here as the President of English Drama Club. (it作形式主语句型)
②Never will I forget the colorful activities during the past two years, such as the lectures on Shakespeare's plays, the course of drama appreciation and our amazing performances at the annual Art Festival. (部分倒装)
【结构布局】
引言:表示荣幸
中心:回顾开展的主要活动与收获
结尾:表达感谢及祝愿
【拓展词汇】
①mean a great deal to sb对某人很重要
②be devoted to doing sth致力于做某事
【拓展句型】
①I'd like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and support.我想借此机会感谢您给予我的及时帮助和支持。
②On behalf of ..., I'd like to extend my sincere gratitude for your help.我仅代表……对您的帮助表示真诚的感谢。
8.【答案】Dear Jim,
Thank you for your recommendation of the English novel The Old Man and the Sea.(表达感谢)
Having finished reading,I've harvested a lot.【高分句型一】The tough man who fights against the big fish and sharks alone in the sea inspires me to brave frustrations in my life.【高分句型二】And I have learned that we should stick to our dreams no matter what hardships we may encounter.(分享读书收获)
The book unfolds a new world to me.Thus,I make a plan for further reading.English novels enlightening my mind will be included in my reading list.I intend to read one book a month.While reading,I will take down my understanding in time to gain more beyond the lines.(交流后续英文书阅读计划)
I would appreciate it if you could give me more recommendations.(感谢)
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】高分句型一:Having finished reading,I've harvested a lot.
译文:读完之后,我收获了很多。
分析:这句话使用了现在分词的完成式Having finished reading作状语。
高分句型二:The tough man who fights against the big fish and sharks alone in the sea inspires me to brave frustrations in my life.
译文:那个在海里独自与大鱼和鲨鱼搏斗的硬汉激励我勇敢面对生活中的挫折。
分析:这句话使用了who引导的定语从句。
这是一篇提纲类作文,需要写的内容已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文,一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
9.【答案】Dear Jim,
You're quite right about live-stream shopping being popular in China.I'd like to share something about it with you.(写信目的)
I often buy things through live-stream shopping.For me,purchasing products through livestreaming has already become a habit.【高分句型一】(说明自己通过直播进行过购物)Firstly,it's a more time-saving alternative than going to malls.Besides,the broadcasts enable us to communicate with the seller face-to-face,which is an advantage over only browsing the introduction pages.【高分句型二】It's just like shopping in the real stores.Third,it enables consumers to have a more intuitive and comprehensive understanding of the products.More importantly,it has also created millions of jobs and boosted E-commerce and express industry.(作者对直播购物的看法或感受)
How about your live-stream shopping in Britain?Looking forward to your reply.(盼望回复)
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】高分句型一:For me,purchasing products through livestreaming has already become a habit.
翻译:对我来说,通过直播购买产品已经成为一种习惯。
分析:本句运用了动名词作主语。
高分句型二:Besides,the broadcasts enable us to communicate with the seller face-to-face,which is an advantage over only browsing the introduction pages.
翻译:此外,广播使我们能够与卖家面对面交流,这比只浏览介绍页面有优势。
分析:本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
写作步骤:
第一步:审题,确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点,避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步:拟定提纲,创造良好的开端;叙述得体,布局谋篇;巧妙过渡,完美结尾。
第三步:遣词造句,套用句型,上下衔接,地道表达,行文成篇(注意"参考词汇"的提示作用)。
10.【答案】Dear Jim,
I'm writing with great honor to accept your invitation to your "China Day" event.Thank you so much for offering me this precious opportunity to be part of it.(接受邀请并表示感谢)
I'm thinking of presenting Chinese calligraphy.I will introduce and demonstrate the basic techniques of calligraphy,after which I would ask some audience to try writing some characters.【高分句型一】I choose this topic because it is a unique way to appreciate the beauty of Chinese characters and understand the essence of Chinese culture.What's more,I think only when the audience get involved can they truly understand the beauty of Chinese culture.【高分句型二】(你展示的内容及理由)
How do you like this idea?Tell me if you would like me to change.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】高分句型一:I will introduce and demonstrate the basic techniques of calligraphy,after which I would ask some audience to try writing some characters.
翻译:我将介绍和演示书法的基本技巧,然后请一些观众试着写一些字。
分析:本句使用了介词after+which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:What's more,I think only when the audience get involved can they truly understand the beauty of Chinese culture.
翻译:更重要的是,我认为只有观众参与进来,他们才能真正理解中国文化的美。
分析:本句使用了only+when引导的时间状语从句位于句首的部分倒装。
书信类作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
11.【答案】Good morning, everyone!
It’s a great honor to deliver my last speech here as the President of English Drama Club.
Time flies over us, but leaves its shadow behind. Never will I forget the colorful activities during the past two years, such as the lectures on Shakespeare’s plays, the course of drama appreciation and our amazing performances at the annual Art Festival. Our club not only gave us a platform to show ourselves, but also offered me a chance to witness the magic of communication and cooperation. My personal ability has been improving as well.
Today I must express my sincere gratitude to all of you. Thank you for always being there to support me. Wish our club a brighter future. Thanks again.
【解析】1.词汇积累
机会:chance→opportunity
表达:express→convey
改善:improve→promote
感激:gratitude→appreciation
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Our club not only gave us a platform to show ourselves, but also offered me a chance to witness the magic of communication and cooperation.
拓展句:Not only did our club not only give us a platform to show ourselves, but also it offered me a chance to witness the magic of communication and cooperation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Never will I forget the colorful activities during the past two years, such as the lectures on Shakespeare’s plays, the course of drama appreciation and our amazing performances at the annual Art Festival. (运用了部分倒装)
[高分句型2] It’s a great honor to deliver my last speech here as the President of English Drama Club. (运用了it作形式主语句型)
12.【答案】Dear friends,
Welcome to our school.I am Li Hua,Chairman of the Student Union.On behalf of my school,I will introduce the main arrangements for the following two days.(表示欢迎)
As scheduled,on the first day,we would like to invite you to take a tour of our campus,through which you will get a general idea of our school.【高分句型一】In the afternoon,you can take part in various activities such as paper cutting and calligraphy to experience traditional Chinese culture in person.On the second day,we will take you to the Forbidden City,a must-see attraction in Beijing,where you will be amazed at the architectural styles and treasures preserved there.【高分句型二】(简要介绍主要活动安排)
Hope you enjoy your stay here!Thank you!(表达美好祝愿)
【解析】高分句型一:As scheduled,on the first day,we would like to invite you to take a tour of our campus,through which you will get a general idea of our school.
翻译:按照计划,在第一天,我们想邀请您参观我们的校园,通过它你会有一个大致的了解我们的学校。
分析:本句运用了介词+which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:On the second day,we will take you to the Forbidden City,a must-see attraction in Beijing,where you will be amazed at the architectural styles and treasures preserved there.
翻译:第二天,我们将带您去紫禁城,这是北京必去的景点,在那里您将被那里保存的建筑风格和宝藏所惊叹。
分析:本句运用了where引导非限制性定语从句。
写作步骤:
第一步:审题,确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点,避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步:拟定提纲,创造良好的开端;叙述得体,布局谋篇;巧妙过渡,完美结尾。
第三步:遣词造句,套用句型,上下衔接,地道表达,行文成篇(注意"参考词汇"的提示作用)。
13.【答案】Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are very interested in China's intangible cultural heritage,I'm writing to invite you to visit an intangible cultural heritage exhibition in National Museum of China with me.【高分句型一】(发出邀请)
This exhibition mainly displays some of China's intangible cultural heritages,including Chinese calligraphy,Chinese paper-cutting,Chinese seal cutting and so on,which will let you see the present situation of these precious heritages and their great significance.【高分句型一】Visiting this exhibition can give you a deeper understanding of China's intangible cultural heritage.You must be amazed at the depth of Chinese culture.(介绍活动)
Would you like to come?I'm looking forward to meeting you at the exhibition.(期待接受邀请)
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】高分句型一:Knowing that you are very interested in China's intangible cultural heritage,I'm writing to invite you to visit an intangible cultural heritage exhibition in National Museum of China with me.
翻译:知道你对中国非物质文化遗产很感兴趣,我写信邀请你和我一起参加一个在中国国家博物馆举行的中国非物质文化遗产展览。
分析:本句运用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二:This exhibition mainly displays some of China's intangible cultural heritages,including Chinese calligraphy,Chinese paper-cutting,Chinese seal cutting and so on,which will let you see the present situation of these precious heritages and their great significance.
翻译:这个展览主要陈列一些中国的非物质文化遗产,包括中国书法,中国剪纸,中国篆刻等等,这些会让你看到这些珍贵遗产的现状和它们的重要性。
分析:本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
14.【答案】Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well. I am excited to tell you about the upcoming intangible cultural heritage exhibition at the National Museum of China this weekend, which I think you will be interested in.
The exhibition showcases a variety of intangible cultural heritages in China, such as Chinese calligraphy, traditional music, and folk art. Visitors can not only appreciate the beauty of these art forms but also learn about their historical and cultural significance. We can also have some hands-on activities, like making paper cuts.
I would like to invite you to join me in visiting this exhibition this weekend. It would be a great opportunity for us to explore and learn more about China's rich cultural heritage together. If you are interested, we can meet up at the museum entrance at 10 am on Saturday.
Please let me know if you can make it. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】略
15.【答案】Dear Jim,
①Thanks for your suggestion on using AI to finish the first draft of our paper. But after further consideration, I'm afraid it's not a wise idea.
Firstly, it goes against the purpose of project-based learning, which is to cultivate critical thinking and teamwork. ②Moreover, AI is unlikely to accurately present our ideas, because it hasn't "got involved in" our project.
So, I suggest we write the paper ourselves. We can start by brainstorming together to create an outline after generating some original and creative ideas. Then we can work independently on different parts, and finally work together to finalize our paper. I believe we can do a better job than AI.
Hope you can understand. Expecting our distinctive draft.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文为一篇应用文写作,话题为假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你与交换生Jim要共同完成一篇项目学习的论文,他建议用AI完成初稿。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用,可适当添加一定的衔接词,以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①generate产生,引起
②cultivate开垦,耕作
③moreover此外,而且
【高分句型】
①Thanks for your suggestion on using AI to finish the first draft of our paper. (动词的-ing形式作宾语)
②Moreover, AI is unlikely to accurately present our ideas, because it hasn't "got involved in" our project.(because引导的原因状语从句)
【结构布局】
引言:交代写信目的
中心:委婉拒绝并说明理由
结尾:你的建议及计划
【拓展词汇】
①practical实用的
②as far as sb. be concerned依某人来看
③give/offer sb. advice/tips/suggestions on sth.在某方面给某人建议
【拓展句型】
①You may as well/had better do...你不妨/最好做……
②Only in this way will you...只有用这种方式,你才能……
16.【答案】【小题1】
The biggest cause of our e-waste is that we buy things that we just don't need./It is the fact that we buy things that we just don't need.
【小题2】
People get tax deductions by making donations./Donating is a useful way to get tax deductions./Through donations./By donating.
【小题3】
Sell the electronics that you don't need right away because the earlier you sell them, the more gift cards you can get.
According to the passage, sell the electronics that you don't need right away because they lose value very rapidly in our changing market./According to the passage, because the electronics lose value very rapidly in our changing market, the earlier you sell them, the more valuable they will remain.
【小题4】
Managing our e-waste can reduce the pressure on the environment. If we don't deal with the fast-growing e-waste properly, it will pollute our environment or even affect the food chain. Plus, it can relieve the shortage of metal resources, because some metals in e-waste are reusable if they are recycled.
【解析】1.
根据第三段中的If you do not need a piece of equipment...will be close to the value of the item had you tried to sell it.(如果你不需要一件设备,而且它的状况足够好,可以重复使用,那么尽快把它捐赠出去,让其他人可以使用。捐赠对我们有好处,因为它们是获得税收减免的有效方式,而且很多时候,税收减免将接近你试图出售的物品的价值。)可知,人们通过捐款获得税收减免。故答案为eople get tax deductions by making donations./Donating is a useful way to get tax deductions./Through donations./By donating.。
2.
根据倒数第二段There are also places to sell electronics that might be valuable to somebody else. Just be sure to sell them right away, because they lose value very rapidly in our changing market.(还有一些地方出售对其他人来说可能有价值的电子产品。一定要马上把它们卖掉,因为它们在不断变化的市场中很快就会贬值。)可知,卖掉你不需要的电子产品,因为它们在我们不断变化的市场中很快就会失去价值。故错误的部分为because the earlier you sell them, the more gift cards you can get.。故答案为Sell the electronics that you don't need right away because the earlier you sell them, the more gift cards you can get.
According to the passage, sell the electronics that you don't need right away because they lose value very rapidly in our changing market./According to the passage, because the electronics lose value very rapidly in our changing market, the earlier you sell them, the more valuable they will remain.。
3.
开放题,言之有理即可,注意字数。题干:为什么我们需要管理电子垃圾?可回答:管理电子垃圾可以减少对环境的压力。如果我们不妥善处理快速增长的电子垃圾,它将污染我们的环境,甚至影响食物链。此外,它可以缓解金属资源的短缺,因为如果回收利用,电子垃圾中的一些金属是可重复使用的。故答案为Managing our e-waste can reduce the pressure on the environment. If we don't deal with the fast-growing e-waste properly, it will pollute our environment or even affect the food chain. Plus, it can relieve the shortage of metal resources, because some metals in e-waste are reusable if they are recycled.。
【思路点拨】
根据第二段中的Maybe the biggest cause of our e-waste problem is the fact that we buy things that we just don't need.(也许电子垃圾问题的最大原因是我们买了我们根本不需要的东西。)可知,电子垃圾的最大原因是我们买了我们根本不需要的东西。故答案为The biggest cause of our e-waste is that we buy things that we just don't need./It is the fact that we buy things that we just don't need.。
17.【答案】Dear Jim,
How is it going We plan to form a research-based learning group. ①I wonder whether you would like to join us.
Our topic is "A Study on the Differences between British English and American English". We mainly focus on their differences in terms of spelling, pronunciation and vocabulary. ②The aim is to make us familiar with the underlying causes and effects of the differences so that we can gain a better understanding of the English language.
I know you are a native speaker of British English and you lived in America for several years, so hopefully you can give us some guidance during the research process. Please inform me of your decision by this Friday.
Your involvement will add much joy to our group. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文为一篇应用文写作,话题为假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你正在组建与英语学习相关的研究性学习小组,请你用英文给你校交换生Jim写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用,可适当添加一定的衔接词,以使行文连贯。
【结构布局】
引言:介绍写作目的
中心:介绍研究的具体内容和意义
结尾:说明邀请原因和其他相关事宜
【高分词汇】
①focus on集中于
②in terms of依据;按照
③inform sb. of sth.通知某人某事
【高分句型】
①I wonder whether you would like to join us.(whether引导的宾语从句)
②The aim is to make us familiar with the underlying causes and effects of the differences so that we can gain a better understanding of the English language.(不定式作表语;so that引导的目的状语从句)
【拓展词汇】
①arouse one's interest激发某人的兴趣
②desire to do渴望做
③confirm one's participation确认参加
【拓展句型】
①Not only does the activity broaden my horizons, but also inspires me to work harder.这次活动不仅让我大开眼界而且激励我更努力的学习。
②Not only does the activity arouse students' interest in reading, but it also cultivates students' love for knowledge.活动不仅激发了学生的阅读兴趣,而且培养了学生对知识的热爱。
18.【答案】Dear Jim,
How is it going?We plan to form a research-based learning group.I wonder whether you would like to join us.【高分句型一】
Our topic is "A Study on the Differences between British English and American English".We mainly focus on their differences in terms of spelling,pronunciation and vocabulary.The aim is to make us familiar with the underlying causes and effects of the differences so that we can gain a better understanding of the English language.【高分句型二】
I know you are a native speaker of British English and you lived in America for several years,so hopefully you can give us some guidance during the research process.Please inform me of your decision by this Friday.
Your involvement will add much joy to our group.Looking forward to your reply.(期盼)
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】高分句型一:I wonder whether you would like to join us.
翻译:我想知道你是否愿意加入我们。
分析:本句运用了whether引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二:The aim is to make us familiar with the underlying causes and effects of the differences so that we can gain a better understanding of the English language.
翻译:目的是让我们熟悉差异的潜在原因和影响,以便我们能够更好地理解英语。
分析:本句运用了不定式作表语以及so that引导的目的状语从句。
写作步骤:
第一步:审题,确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点,避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步:拟定提纲,创造良好的开端;叙述得体,布局谋篇;巧妙过渡,完美结尾。
第三步:遣词造句,套用句型,上下衔接,地道表达,行文成篇(注意"参考词汇"的提示作用)。
19.【答案】Dear Jim,
Congratulations on your school's upcoming centennial anniversary!It's a remarkable achievement and a testament to the school's commitment to education.(表示祝贺)
As for your request for suggestions on how to introduce the school's changes to guests,I would recommend highlighting the school's technological advancements.You could showcase the school's state-of-the-art facilities,such as the computer labs and interactive whiteboards,and how they have enhanced the learning experience for students. 【高分句型一】Additionally,you could also mention the school's efforts in promoting diversity and inclusivity,such as the establishment of cultural clubs and the implementation of anti-bullying policies.(你的建议)
I hope these suggestions are helpful,and I wish you all the best for a successful anniversary celebration.【高分句型二】(希望)
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】高分句型一:You could showcase the school's state-of-the-art facilities,such as the computer labs and interactive whiteboards,and how they have enhanced the learning experience for students.
译文:你可以展示学校最先进的设施,如计算机实验室和互动白板,以及它们如何增强学生的学习体验。
分析:这句话使用了how引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二:I hope these suggestions are helpful,and I wish you all the best for a successful anniversary celebration.
译文:我希望这些建议能有所帮助,并祝你们周年庆祝活动顺利进行。
分析:这句话使用了hope后面是省略that的宾语从句。
这是一篇提纲类作文,需要写的内容已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文,一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
20.【答案】Dear Jim,
Congratulations on your school's upcoming centennial anniversary! It's a remarkable achievement and a testament to the school's commitment to education.
As for your request for suggestions on how to introduce the school's changes to guests, I would recommend highlighting the school's technological advancements. ①You could showcase the school's state-of-the-art facilities, such as the computer labs and interactive whiteboards, and how they have enhanced the learning experience for students. Additionally, you could also mention the school's efforts in promoting diversity and inclusivity, such as the establishment of cultural clubs and the implementation of anti-bullying policies.
②I hope these suggestions are helpful, and I wish you all the best for a successful anniversary celebration.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文写作,话题为你的英国好友Jim所在的学校即将迎来百年校庆。他参与准备活动,负责向来宾介绍学校的变化,问你有什么好的建议。请你用英文给他回邮件。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用,可适当添加一定的衔接词,以使行文连贯。
【结构布局】
引言:表示祝贺
中心:你的建议
结尾:表达期望
【高分词汇】
①congratulations on祝贺
②highlight 突出,强调
【高分句型】
①You could showcase the school's state-of-the-art facilities, such as the computer labs and interactive whiteboards, and how they have enhanced the learning experience for students.(how引导的宾语从句)
②I hope these suggestions are helpful, and I wish you all the best for a successful anniversary celebration.(省略that引导的宾语从句)
【拓展词汇】
① as far as sb. be concerned依某人来看
②give/offer sb. advice/tips/suggestions on sth.在某方面给某人建议
③be of some help to对……有所帮助
【拓展句型】
①You have asked me for my advice about ..., and I will try to make some conductive suggestions.对于你来信问我关于……的事,现提供几条建议。
②You may as well/had better do ...你不妨/最好做……
21.【答案】Dear Jim,
①Extremely thrilled to know that you are fascinated by traditional Chinese medicine, I am writing to invite you to participate in an activity themed traditional Chinese medicine culture, which is to be held in the school hall, this Saturday afternoon.
Traditional Chinese medicine has been passed down for thousands of years. With an extensive and profound culture, it is the treasure of Chinese civilization. The activity is intended to provide you with some basic knowledge of medical theory, diagnostic methods, prescriptions and cures concerning traditional Chinese medicine. ②Present at the activity, you will also be exposed to some wide-spread stories praising the experienced and notable doctors in ancient China.
This is surely a good chance for you to know more ways of preserving good health and to have a deeper insight into traditional Chinese medicine. Looking forward to you showing up.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文写作,话题为假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校即将举办“中医药文化”主题活动,你打算邀请交换生Jim参加。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用,可适当添加一定的衔接词,以使行文连贯。
【结构布局】
引言:介绍写作目的
中心:介绍活动
结尾:邀请参加
【亮点词汇】
①be fascinated by着迷于……
②participate in参加
【高分句型】
①Extremely thrilled to know that you are fascinated by traditional Chinese medicine, I am writing to invite you to participate in an activity themed traditional Chinese medicine culture, which is to be held in the school hall, this Saturday afternoon.(形容词作状语;which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Present at the activity, you will also be exposed to some wide-spread stories praising the experienced and notable doctors in ancient China.(形容词作状语)
【拓展词汇】
①out-of-class课外的
②make use of/take advantage of利用
【拓展句型】
①Not only does the activity broaden my horizons, but also inspires me to work harder.这次活动不仅让我大开眼界,而且激励我更努力的学习。
②Aimed at promoting/improving/providing..., the activity is to be held/was held...致力于促进/改善/提供……,活动将于/已于……举行。
22.【答案】Dear Jim,
I'm writing to invite you to join our school's upcoming event themed "Traditional Chinese Medicine Culture".
【高分句型一】Our school will be holding the event from 2 pm to 5 pm next Friday in the school lecture hall.During the event,experts will share the history of TCM and its use in modern healthcare.We can even have a chance to sample some traditional Chinese medical treatments,like herbal medicine and cupping.Sounds interesting,isn't it?(活动介绍)
I'm convinced that this event will be as informative as it is fun. 【高分句型二】Would you like to come?I really hope you could make it to the event and appropriate the magic of TCM with us.(邀请参加)
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】高分句型一:I'm writing to invite you to join our school's upcoming event themed "Traditional Chinese Medicine Culture".
译文:我写信邀请您参加我们学校即将举办的以"中医文化"为主题的活动。
分析:这句话使用了过去分词短语themed "Traditional Chinese Medicine Culture"作定语。
高分句型二:I'm convinced that this event will be as informative as it is fun.
译文:我相信这次活动既有趣又有内涵。
分析:这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句。
这是一篇提纲类作文,需要写的内容已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文,一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
23.【答案】Dear Jim,
I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble with your parents because your parents didn't agree to your riding plan.Don't worry.This is a common problem for every family.So I'm writing to give you some advice.(表示安慰)
I think a face-to-face talk with your parents might be a good start.Then it's better to promise that you'll be devoted to your studies and improve your academic performance.【高分句型一】Meanwhile,you should patiently explain the safety of this plan to your parents to avoid their worries about you.【高分句型二】(给出建议)
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.(表达祝福)
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】高分句型一:Then it's better to promise that you'll be devoted to your studies and improve your academic performance.
翻译:那么最好保证你会全身心投入到你的学习中,提高你的学习成绩。
分析:本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二:Meanwhile,you should patiently explain the safety of this plan to your parents to avoid their worries about you.
翻译:同时,你应该耐心地向你的父母解释这个计划的安全性,以避免他们对你的担忧。
分析:本句使用了不定式to your parents to avoid their worries about you作目的状语。
书信类作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
24.【答案】Dear Jim,
I'm sorry to hear that you didn't get your parents' permission to go on a week-long bike trip with your friends. You're upset and I'd like to give you some comfort and advice.
①As far as I'm concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good conversation with your parents, which is beneficial to your relationship. ②Besides, there is no need for you to be disappointed about this because your parents just want to protect you from potentially dangerous situation.
I hope you will get better in no time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
这是一篇应用文写作,话题为假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信,得知他和朋友们骑车旅行一周的计划没有得到父母的许可,他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim写一封回信。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用,可适当添加一定的衔接词,以使行文连贯。
【结构布局】
引言:表示安慰
中心:给出建议
结尾:表达期望
【高分词汇】
①permission同意,许可
②as far as I'm concerned就我而言
③protect...from...保护……不受……
【高分句型】
①As far as I'm concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good conversation with your parents, which is beneficial to your relationship. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Besides, there is no need for you to be disappointed about this because your parents just want to protect you from potentially dangerous situation. (because引导的原因状语从句)
【拓展词汇】
①as far as sb. be concerned依某人来看
②give/offer sb. advice/tips/suggestions on sth.在某方面给某人建议
③be of some help to对……有所帮助
【拓展句型】
① I firmly believe, with your effort, you can manage to get over/overcome these difficulties.我坚信,通过您的努力,您会成功克服这些困难的。
②You have asked me for my advice about..., and I will try to make some conductive suggestions.对于你来信问我关于……的事,现提供几条建议。
25.【答案】Dear Jim,
①I'm glad to know that you're interested in Chinese culture, especially 12 Chinese zodiac signs.
②As you know, 12 Chinese zodiac represent twelve different animals, each year one animal. These twelve animals play a significant role in Chinese culture and are often used in various forms of art, festivals, and even in daily life. They are often associated with certain characteristics and are believed to influence the personalities and fortunes of people born in their corresponding years.
In the Chinese zodiac, I'm a monkey. I am outgoing, lively, good with people, and have many friends. What's more, I am also resourceful, forward-looking, and competitive. What's the most important is that I have a good heart to others.
I hope my introduction is helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文为一篇应用文写作,话题为假设你是红星中学高三(1)班学生李华。你的外国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国十二生肖感兴趣。请你给他回一封邮件介绍你的生肖。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用,可适当添加一定的衔接词,以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①as you know如你所知
②be associated with和……联系在一起
【高分句型】
①I'm glad to know that you're interested in Chinese culture, especially 12 Chinese zodiac signs. (that引导的宾语从句)
②As you know, 12 Chinese zodiac represent twelve different animals, each year one animal.(as引导的定语从句)
【结构布局】
引言:简介中国的十二生肖
中心:你的生肖和生肖对你的影响
结尾:表达期望
【拓展词汇】
①date from/date back to追溯到
②in honor of纪念
③stand for象征
【拓展句型】
①As is known, ..., a symbol of traditional Chinese culture/one of the most popular forms of Chinese art, is still attached great importance to in modern China. 众所周知,……,中国传统文化的象征/中国最流行的艺术形式之一,在现代中国仍然受到重视。
②In addition/Besides/Additionally, typical of Chinese culture, ... conveys a unique meaning of... 除此之外,典型的中国文化,……传达……的独特意义。
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