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Unit 10 I’ve had this bike for three years.
人教新目标版 八年级下
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
1.熟练掌握有关现在完成时的用法，并学会运用它来描述自己童年时喜爱的物品。
2.学会借助3a的写作提纲梳理写作框架，运用本单元含有写作完成时的核心句式，模仿语篇描述自己童年时喜爱的物品。
3.单元话题拓展：写一篇关于家乡近年来的发展和变化的文章。
4.通过过去和现在的对比，更加珍惜和热爱生活。
Warming-up
What is the video about
It’s about memories from childhood.
How were your childhood memories Do you still have your favorite thing from childhood
Lead-in
Look at the picture and answer the questions.
How long have you had this ______
I've had it for/since ____________.
Who gave it to you
.
This is my favorite ...
I have had it for / since ...
... gave it to me when I was ...
Talk about these things.
Think about your favorite thing from childhood which you still have. For example, it can be a toy or a book. Then take notes using the questions.
3a
1. How long have you had it
2. How did you get it Did someone give it to you Who
3. Why do you like it so much Why is it special
4. Can you say anything more about it
Name What How long Who gave you Why you like More information
Do a survey!
Sample answers:
(It is a teddy bear.)
I have had it since I was a baby.
My grandmother made it for me.
I slept with it every night after I got it.
I can’t sleep without it, so I bring it along with me if I have to spend a night away from home.
My favorite thing from childhood is _______. I’ve had it for / since ______. ______ gave it to me.
Para.1: Introduce your favourite thing.
simple present tense
present perfect tense
simple past tense
Facts
Write three paragraphs about your favorite thing. Use your notes in 3a to help you.
3b
I like ____ so much because ____. It’s special to me because _____. I think ____.
Para.2: Talk about why it is special.
simple present tense
Opinions
Write three paragraphs about your favorite thing. Use your notes in 3a to help you.
3b
Para.3: Write about a story or memories.
______ has given me many memories. I remember when ______.
Past experiences or memories
present perfect tense
simple past tense
Write three paragraphs about your favorite thing. Use your notes in 3a to help you.
3b
Let’s know about the topic.
话题概述
本单元主要围绕 “生活环境”这一话题谈论私人物品的来历、持有的时间及喜欢的原因等；或者谈论家乡近年来的发展和变化。体裁以记叙文为主，多使用第一人称，时态以现在完成时和一般现在时为主。
Try to make an outline.
My favorite thing from childhood
Beginning
Main body
Ending
Introduce your favorite thing.
Talk about why it is special.
Write about a story / memories
and show your feelings about it.
Make an outline.
话题作文一
How to write the each part of the passage
1) Elicit the topic. (what / how long)
2) Elicit the topic. (who)
My favorite thing from childhood is ... /
The thing I like most from childhood is ...
I've had it for / since ...
I got it from ... /
... gave it to me as a present on ...
Beginning: Introduce your favorite thing.
How to write the each part of the passage
Main body: Talk about why it is special.
① I like ... so much because ...
It's special to me because ...
I think ...
② In fact, I like ... so much because ... It has special
meaning to me because it makes me ...
Reasons:
How to write the each part of the passage
① ... has given me many memories. I remember when ...
② ... can always bring back many memories. I remember when ...
③ ... has left many soft and sweet memories in my
heart. I remember when ...
Ending: Write about a story / memories and show your feelings about it.
One possible version
My favorite thing from childhood is my teddy bear. I've had it since I was five years old. My grandmother gave it to me on my tenth birthday. (P1)
I like the teddy bear so much because it's dressed in my favorite color. It's special to me because my grandmother made it for me. I think I will keep it forever to remind me of my grandmother. (P2)
The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young and I was scared at night because I didn't like the dark, I held my teddy bear to feel safe. (P3)
Introduce your favorite thing.
Talk about why it is special.
Write about memories.
校英语报此次征文的主题是“家乡的变化”，请你根据下面的提示，介绍你家乡的变化来投稿。提示：
1.What did your hometown look like in the past years
2.What does your hometown look like now
3.What do you think of these changes
要求：1.语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
话题作文二
审人称
审时态
审体裁
写作前：三审
1.描述各方面家乡的过去（建筑物人等）
the change of hometown
家乡的变化
总写：
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
分写：
It used to be a/an...place.
它过去是个…地方。
2.描述家乡的现在
Now things have changed a lot. 现在事情发生了很大变化。
展望家乡的未来
总写：
I hope my hometown will be …
How to write
One possible version
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
In the past, there weren't so many tall buildings in the city, and the buildings were old. But now, many new and tall buildings have been built. In my memory, there was only one small park in the city. Now I can find big and beautiful parks in different areas of the city. The roads were dirty and narrow in the past, but now they have become clean and wide.
I think such developments are good, and I hope the future of my hometown will be better and better.
Peer-editing
Exchange your articles, evaluate it and then help each other correct them.交换文章，先做出评价然后互相帮助修改。
Key points Check
Correct grammar/spelling
Good Structure
Good sentences
Connection words
Beautiful writing
1. Complete the sentences using for or since.
1. I haven’t been to a museum _________________
2. I haven’t written a letter ____________________
3. I haven’t ridden a bike _____________________
4. I haven’t seen a movie ______________________
5. I haven’t played computer games _____________
for two years.
since two years ago.
for a long time.
since last year.
for two months.
2. Complete the conversation.
A: Hey Eric, you enjoyed your time in Beijing so far
B: Yes, it been great! Everyone is so friendly.
A: How long you been in China now
B: Oh, I here about two years now.
have
has
have
have been
for
A: Wow, that means you haven’t back to the
US for two years
B: No, I been back twice moving to
China. you been to the US before, Li Juan
A: Yes, I went there once when I 10 years old,
but I not been back then.
been
have
since
Have
was
have
since
Revision
Writing
现在完成时态
介绍生活环境变化
体裁：说明文
时态：一般过去时，一般现在时，现在完成时
人称：第三人称
To write about things full of memories
Summary
Things
book, magazine, toy bear, toy lion, toy tiger, bread maker, sweater, dress, hat, scarf, board games
Talk about possessions
A: How long have you had that bike over there
B: I’ve had it for three years.
A: How long has his son owned the train and railway set
B: He’s owned it since his fourth birthday.
Living environment
Talk about hometown
The concert hall has been around for at least 20 years.
Perhaps large hospitals and new roads have appeared.
Children have learned to read and count at my old primary school since the mid-20th century.
Places
museum, primary school, bridge, zoo, park, hill, library, river
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