牛津上海版试用本2023年上海小升初英语真题专项训练-书面表达（含解析）
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2023年上海小升初英语真题专项训练-书面表达 含答案解析（牛津上海版试用本）
写作。以"Winter Holidays"为题写一篇短文，不少于60个单词。
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2．Write(说说你某一天的课程安排，说说上的课，喜欢的课及理由等。3种及以上句型，不少于45个单词，先把题目补充完整。)
My timetable for _______
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3．书面表达。请以“火”为题写不少于40个词的短文
Is fire important Why
What can we do with fire
If house catches fire, what must we do
Fire
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4．以“My favourite movie”为题介绍一下自己最喜欢的电影，要求用不少于8句话、三种句型完成。
My favourite movie
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5．你有自己的房间吗？漂亮吗？以My Bedroom为题，介绍你的房间，不少于45个词。
My Bedroom
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6．以“—次……之行”为题，写—篇不少于50个词的短文。
Suggested questions:
①Where have you been
②Have you taken any photos
③What are you doing in the photo
④Do you enjoy your visit
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7．____ Museum
I want to visit ____ Museum because it is ____.
It is ____. (Where is the museum )
I get there by / on ____.
I can see ____ there.
I like the museum.
8．根据图片与表格写一篇短文，要求用不少于8句话，三种句型完成。
At that time How old were they How were they
Tony four short and naughty
father thirty-one strong
mother twenty-six thin and young
sister two small and cute
This is a photo... They ... years ago. At that time, ...
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9．Writing. (写话。)
Question 1:Where do you often go in your spare time
Question 2:What can you see there
Question 3: What can you learn there
根据以上3个问题，写一篇短文，要求用不少于8句话、三种句型完成。
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10．书面表达
What would you like for breakfast
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11．以“My good friend”为题写—篇短文，不少于50个单词
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12．以“On the Open Day”为题写给父母亲写一封信，不少于6句。
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13．Think and write(以“Healthy children” 为题写一篇不少于40个字的短文，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，至少用三种句型）
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_____ _____ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ _____20
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14．书面表达。
以“I live in Shanghai”为题，写—篇不少于60个单词的短文
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15．书面表达
以“我想成为……”为题，写一篇不少于50个词的短文。
Suggested questions:
①What would you like to be
②Why
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参考答案：
1．Winter Holidays
I went to Kunming with my family for Winter Holidays. Kunming is a very beautiful city, I think. The sky is blue and the air is clean. You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere. The weather there is great. It′s never too hot or too cold all the year round, so people always call it "Spring City".
Kunming is surrounded by beautiful scenery. And one of the most famous views is "The Stone Forest". It is really scenic.
We just stayed in Kunming for six days, but I felt very happy, and I like Kunming very much.
【详解】这是一篇以“Winter Holidays”为题目的作文，短文主要以第一人称，描述作者寒假旅游去昆明参观，本文主要是用一般过去时和一般现在时，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】考查写作题，写时注意时态，人称和数的变化，注意段落之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句子多样化，适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
2．范文：
My timetable for today
Hello! I’m Ben. This is my timetable for today. There are six classes a day. I have four classes in the morning. They are English, Math, PE and Art. I like PE. Because I can run and jump. In the afternoon, I have Music and Chinese. Music is my favourite subject. Because I like singing.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求介绍自己今天的课程安排。然后再阐述今天上的课和喜欢的课及理由。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：timetable课程表；today今天；six classes六节课；English英；Math数学；PE体育；Art美术；like喜欢；run and jump跑和跳；Music音乐；Chinese语文；favourite最喜欢的； subject学科；singing唱歌；
参考句型：Hello! I’m...；This is...；There are...；I have...；They are...； I like...；Because I can...； Music is...；Because I like...；
3．范文：
Fire
Fire is useful. We can use it to cook food and boil water. We can also use it to keep warm. It is important in our life. At some time, it's dangerous. It can burn our houses and kill people. So we must be careful with it. We should tell the children not to play with fire. When there is fire, we should call 119 immediately and run away fast. We mustn't pack our things, otherwise the fire will kill us.
【详解】略
4．范文
My favourite movie is Harry Potter. When he was only one year old, his parents died because they wanted to protect Harry. Harry grows up at his uncle’s home and his brother often beat him before he entered the magic school. I think Harry is very brave and clever. He is a real hero of all of us. He is never afraid of the danger. He just believes what he sees and does.
I think Harry Potter is a very good movie. Maybe you should have a look by yourselves sometime.
【详解】以“My favourite movie”为题介绍一下自己最喜欢的电影，要求用不少于8句话、三种句型完成。
2. 参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇： boy男孩，parents父母，grows up长大，brave勇敢。
参考句型：When he was…； I think…； He is…；Maybe you should…。
5．范文：
Look! This is my bedroom, it’s my favourite room. It faces southeast. Every morning there is a lot of sunshine in my room. Look at that furniture, it’s a big pink bed. There are some dolls on my bed. They are my best friends. There is a desk beside the window. I usually do my homework here. There are some beautiful flowers on the desk. There are also some pictures on the wall. I like my bedroom.
【详解】1. 题干分析：该题目要求用第一人称写自己的卧室，可详细写出卧室的布局，家具，装饰等，注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词数量要求，确保书写规范。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：favourite最喜欢的，furniture家具，bed床，window窗户，desk书桌
参考句型：This is...；It's...；There is...；There are...；I usually...
6．范文：
A trip to Xiamen
I visited my hometown Xiamen this weekend. The famous tourist attraction Gu Lang Yu is now much more crowded than before.It is still fun to see the western-style buildings and to take go on the cruise. However, it now feels different because it is full of people. I liked visiting my grandparents. They cooked good meals for us. We took many photos with my grandparents. We enjoyed ourselves.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇以“ A trip to Xiamen”为题目的作文，结合提示句子完成这篇短文，短文主要以第一人称，描述作者一次旅行，本文主要是用一般过去时，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系并且关注词数要求。
2.参考词汇和句型：
参考单词：hometown家乡，famous著名的，tourist attraction旅游景点，crowded拥挤的，take photos拍照，enjoy享受
参考句型：I visited…；It is still fun to see…；They cooked…；We enjoyed…
【点睛】考查写作题，写时注意时态，人称，数的变化，注意句子之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句子多样化，使句子间的衔接自然流畅.
7．Art; Art; interesting; next to the library; bike; many photos
【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求介绍一个博物馆。可以写一写博物馆的名称、位置、怎样去那、可以看到的物品等。注意文章为一般现在时态，单词数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：Art Museum艺术博物馆；interesting有趣的；by bike骑自行车；many photos许多照片；
参考句型：I want to…；It is…；I get there…；I can see…；
8．范文：
This is a photo of Tony’s family. They were happy several years ago. At that time, Tony was four years old. I hear that he was short and naughty at that time. His father was thirty-one years old. He was strong. Look at the thin and young lady. She is Tony’s mother. At that time, she was twenty-six. The small and cute girl is Tony’s little sister. She was two years old at that time.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称介绍几年前托尼及他的家人情况。然后再阐述爸爸，妈妈，托尼及妹妹年龄，外貌性格等。注意文章为一般过去时态并要求符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：several years ago几年前，naughty淘气的，strong强壮的，cute可爱的
参考句型：This is a photo... ；They ... years ago；At that time, ... ；I hear that…； His father / mother was…
9．范文：
I have many hobbies. In my spare time, I often read novels, and sometimes I watch films in the cinema. But my favourite hobby is playing computer. I also chat on Internet with my e-friends after finishing my homework. I like to communicate with my friend on QQ. They are friendly and outgoing too. Some of them are from different cities, I like to know their way of life.
Hobbies make me happy and I learn much from my hobbies.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍空闲时干什么。具体阐述空闲时爱好是什么，从中学到什么等等，注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：In my spare time 空闲时间，watch films看电影，play football踢足球，every week每周，chat on Internet网上聊天，
参考句型：I have…；I often…；Sometimes, I also…；
10．范文：
We have three meals a day.Breakfast is very important for us.For breakfast,we often have bread and milk.Sometimes we have some soup with tomatoes.And we also have some rice noodles with pork and eggs. Sometimes we change the food.
【详解】本文是根据提示进行写作，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语表达出来即可。短文用第一人称，一般现在时；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。
从以下几个方面进行写作：
（1）先介绍一日有三餐。three meals a day.
（2）具体介绍早餐的吃的东西。bread and milk，soup, some rice noodles等。
（3）表达观点。change the food。
11．My good friend
Li Ping is my good friend. He lives in Beijing. He likes drawing very much. He goes to school from Monday to Friday. He is busy on Sunday because he must learn drawing from a teacher. He always plays basketball with his classmates on Saturday. He is good at his lessons. He lives a happy life.
【详解】这是一篇以“My good friend”为题目的作文，短文主要以第三人称，描述作者的好朋友爱好和日常生活，本文主要是用一般现在时，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
【点评】考查写作题，写时注意时态，人称，数的变化，注意句子之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句子多样化，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
12．Dear Mum and Dad,
Please come to the Open Day at my school on June 20. We will show you around our beautiful school first. Then you will visit our English Club. After that, you'll listen to the school choir in the hall. Finally, you will meet the teachers in the library. You'll have cakes and tea there.
It will start at 2：00 p. m. Please come on time.
Yours,
Mary
【详解】这是一篇以“On the Open Day”为题目的给父母亲写一封信，信主要以第二人称，描述作者学校开放日的活动，本文主要是用一般将来时，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
【点评】考查写作题，写时注意时态，人称和数的变化，注意句子之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句子多样化，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
13．略
【详解】略
14．I live in Shanghai
I live in Shanghai. Several years ago most people went to work or school by bike or by bus. Then there are more underground trains. People started to take underground trains because they are faster. If people were in a hurry, they can take a taxi. Now, more and more people have their own cars. They travel in Shanghai by driving their own cars.
【详解】这是一篇以“ I live in Shanghai”为题目的作文，描述作者喜欢上海过去和现在的样子，本文主要是用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
【点评】考查写作题，写时注意时态，人称，数的变化，注意句子之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句子多样化，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
15． I want to be …
I'm Tony. I'm fifteen years old. I would like to be a policeman when I grow up. My uncle is a policeman. He often tells me some stories about policemen. I think it is an exciting job. Of course it is a dangerous job. But I'd like to make our city a safe place.
【详解】命题作文
这是一篇以“I want to be …”为题目的作文，结合提示句子完成这篇短文，短文主要以第一人称，描述作者将来想做的职业，本文主要是用一般现在时，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
考查写作题，写时注意时态，人称，数的变化，注意句子之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句子多样化，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
写作。以"Winter Holidays"为题写一篇短文，不少于60个单词。
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2．Write(说说你某一天的课程安排，说说上的课，喜欢的课及理由等。3种及以上句型，不少于45个单词，先把题目补充完整。)
My timetable for _______
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3．书面表达。请以“火”为题写不少于40个词的短文
Is fire important Why
What can we do with fire
If house catches fire, what must we do
Fire
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4．以“My favourite movie”为题介绍一下自己最喜欢的电影，要求用不少于8句话、三种句型完成。
My favourite movie
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5．你有自己的房间吗？漂亮吗？以My Bedroom为题，介绍你的房间，不少于45个词。
My Bedroom
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6．以“—次……之行”为题，写—篇不少于50个词的短文。
Suggested questions:
①Where have you been
②Have you taken any photos
③What are you doing in the photo
④Do you enjoy your visit
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7．____ Museum
I want to visit ____ Museum because it is ____.
It is ____. (Where is the museum )
I get there by / on ____.
I can see ____ there.
I like the museum.
8．根据图片与表格写一篇短文，要求用不少于8句话，三种句型完成。
At that time How old were they How were they
Tony four short and naughty
father thirty-one strong
mother twenty-six thin and young
sister two small and cute
This is a photo... They ... years ago. At that time, ...
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9．Writing. (写话。)
Question 1:Where do you often go in your spare time
Question 2:What can you see there
Question 3: What can you learn there
根据以上3个问题，写一篇短文，要求用不少于8句话、三种句型完成。
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10．书面表达
What would you like for breakfast
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11．以“My good friend”为题写—篇短文，不少于50个单词
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12．以“On the Open Day”为题写给父母亲写一封信，不少于6句。
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13．Think and write(以“Healthy children” 为题写一篇不少于40个字的短文，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，至少用三种句型）
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_____ _____ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ _____10
_____ _____ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ _____20
_____ _____ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ _____30
_____ _____ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ _____40
_____ _____ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ _____50
14．书面表达。
以“I live in Shanghai”为题，写—篇不少于60个单词的短文
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15．书面表达
以“我想成为……”为题，写一篇不少于50个词的短文。
Suggested questions:
①What would you like to be
②Why
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参考答案：
1．Winter Holidays
I went to Kunming with my family for Winter Holidays. Kunming is a very beautiful city, I think. The sky is blue and the air is clean. You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere. The weather there is great. It′s never too hot or too cold all the year round, so people always call it "Spring City".
Kunming is surrounded by beautiful scenery. And one of the most famous views is "The Stone Forest". It is really scenic.
We just stayed in Kunming for six days, but I felt very happy, and I like Kunming very much.
【详解】这是一篇以“Winter Holidays”为题目的作文，短文主要以第一人称，描述作者寒假旅游去昆明参观，本文主要是用一般过去时和一般现在时，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】考查写作题，写时注意时态，人称和数的变化，注意段落之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句子多样化，适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
2．范文：
My timetable for today
Hello! I’m Ben. This is my timetable for today. There are six classes a day. I have four classes in the morning. They are English, Math, PE and Art. I like PE. Because I can run and jump. In the afternoon, I have Music and Chinese. Music is my favourite subject. Because I like singing.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求介绍自己今天的课程安排。然后再阐述今天上的课和喜欢的课及理由。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：timetable课程表；today今天；six classes六节课；English英；Math数学；PE体育；Art美术；like喜欢；run and jump跑和跳；Music音乐；Chinese语文；favourite最喜欢的； subject学科；singing唱歌；
参考句型：Hello! I’m...；This is...；There are...；I have...；They are...； I like...；Because I can...； Music is...；Because I like...；
3．范文：
Fire
Fire is useful. We can use it to cook food and boil water. We can also use it to keep warm. It is important in our life. At some time, it's dangerous. It can burn our houses and kill people. So we must be careful with it. We should tell the children not to play with fire. When there is fire, we should call 119 immediately and run away fast. We mustn't pack our things, otherwise the fire will kill us.
【详解】略
4．范文
My favourite movie is Harry Potter. When he was only one year old, his parents died because they wanted to protect Harry. Harry grows up at his uncle’s home and his brother often beat him before he entered the magic school. I think Harry is very brave and clever. He is a real hero of all of us. He is never afraid of the danger. He just believes what he sees and does.
I think Harry Potter is a very good movie. Maybe you should have a look by yourselves sometime.
【详解】以“My favourite movie”为题介绍一下自己最喜欢的电影，要求用不少于8句话、三种句型完成。
2. 参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇： boy男孩，parents父母，grows up长大，brave勇敢。
参考句型：When he was…； I think…； He is…；Maybe you should…。
5．范文：
Look! This is my bedroom, it’s my favourite room. It faces southeast. Every morning there is a lot of sunshine in my room. Look at that furniture, it’s a big pink bed. There are some dolls on my bed. They are my best friends. There is a desk beside the window. I usually do my homework here. There are some beautiful flowers on the desk. There are also some pictures on the wall. I like my bedroom.
【详解】1. 题干分析：该题目要求用第一人称写自己的卧室，可详细写出卧室的布局，家具，装饰等，注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词数量要求，确保书写规范。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：favourite最喜欢的，furniture家具，bed床，window窗户，desk书桌
参考句型：This is...；It's...；There is...；There are...；I usually...
6．范文：
A trip to Xiamen
I visited my hometown Xiamen this weekend. The famous tourist attraction Gu Lang Yu is now much more crowded than before.It is still fun to see the western-style buildings and to take go on the cruise. However, it now feels different because it is full of people. I liked visiting my grandparents. They cooked good meals for us. We took many photos with my grandparents. We enjoyed ourselves.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇以“ A trip to Xiamen”为题目的作文，结合提示句子完成这篇短文，短文主要以第一人称，描述作者一次旅行，本文主要是用一般过去时，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系并且关注词数要求。
2.参考词汇和句型：
参考单词：hometown家乡，famous著名的，tourist attraction旅游景点，crowded拥挤的，take photos拍照，enjoy享受
参考句型：I visited…；It is still fun to see…；They cooked…；We enjoyed…
【点睛】考查写作题，写时注意时态，人称，数的变化，注意句子之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句子多样化，使句子间的衔接自然流畅.
7．Art; Art; interesting; next to the library; bike; many photos
【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求介绍一个博物馆。可以写一写博物馆的名称、位置、怎样去那、可以看到的物品等。注意文章为一般现在时态，单词数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：Art Museum艺术博物馆；interesting有趣的；by bike骑自行车；many photos许多照片；
参考句型：I want to…；It is…；I get there…；I can see…；
8．范文：
This is a photo of Tony’s family. They were happy several years ago. At that time, Tony was four years old. I hear that he was short and naughty at that time. His father was thirty-one years old. He was strong. Look at the thin and young lady. She is Tony’s mother. At that time, she was twenty-six. The small and cute girl is Tony’s little sister. She was two years old at that time.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称介绍几年前托尼及他的家人情况。然后再阐述爸爸，妈妈，托尼及妹妹年龄，外貌性格等。注意文章为一般过去时态并要求符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：several years ago几年前，naughty淘气的，strong强壮的，cute可爱的
参考句型：This is a photo... ；They ... years ago；At that time, ... ；I hear that…； His father / mother was…
9．范文：
I have many hobbies. In my spare time, I often read novels, and sometimes I watch films in the cinema. But my favourite hobby is playing computer. I also chat on Internet with my e-friends after finishing my homework. I like to communicate with my friend on QQ. They are friendly and outgoing too. Some of them are from different cities, I like to know their way of life.
Hobbies make me happy and I learn much from my hobbies.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍空闲时干什么。具体阐述空闲时爱好是什么，从中学到什么等等，注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：In my spare time 空闲时间，watch films看电影，play football踢足球，every week每周，chat on Internet网上聊天，
参考句型：I have…；I often…；Sometimes, I also…；
10．范文：
We have three meals a day.Breakfast is very important for us.For breakfast,we often have bread and milk.Sometimes we have some soup with tomatoes.And we also have some rice noodles with pork and eggs. Sometimes we change the food.
【详解】本文是根据提示进行写作，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语表达出来即可。短文用第一人称，一般现在时；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。
从以下几个方面进行写作：
（1）先介绍一日有三餐。three meals a day.
（2）具体介绍早餐的吃的东西。bread and milk，soup, some rice noodles等。
（3）表达观点。change the food。
11．My good friend
Li Ping is my good friend. He lives in Beijing. He likes drawing very much. He goes to school from Monday to Friday. He is busy on Sunday because he must learn drawing from a teacher. He always plays basketball with his classmates on Saturday. He is good at his lessons. He lives a happy life.
【详解】这是一篇以“My good friend”为题目的作文，短文主要以第三人称，描述作者的好朋友爱好和日常生活，本文主要是用一般现在时，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
【点评】考查写作题，写时注意时态，人称，数的变化，注意句子之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句子多样化，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
12．Dear Mum and Dad,
Please come to the Open Day at my school on June 20. We will show you around our beautiful school first. Then you will visit our English Club. After that, you'll listen to the school choir in the hall. Finally, you will meet the teachers in the library. You'll have cakes and tea there.
It will start at 2：00 p. m. Please come on time.
Yours,
Mary
【详解】这是一篇以“On the Open Day”为题目的给父母亲写一封信，信主要以第二人称，描述作者学校开放日的活动，本文主要是用一般将来时，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
【点评】考查写作题，写时注意时态，人称和数的变化，注意句子之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句子多样化，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
13．略
【详解】略
14．I live in Shanghai
I live in Shanghai. Several years ago most people went to work or school by bike or by bus. Then there are more underground trains. People started to take underground trains because they are faster. If people were in a hurry, they can take a taxi. Now, more and more people have their own cars. They travel in Shanghai by driving their own cars.
【详解】这是一篇以“ I live in Shanghai”为题目的作文，描述作者喜欢上海过去和现在的样子，本文主要是用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
【点评】考查写作题，写时注意时态，人称，数的变化，注意句子之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句子多样化，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
15． I want to be …
I'm Tony. I'm fifteen years old. I would like to be a policeman when I grow up. My uncle is a policeman. He often tells me some stories about policemen. I think it is an exciting job. Of course it is a dangerous job. But I'd like to make our city a safe place.
【详解】命题作文
这是一篇以“I want to be …”为题目的作文，结合提示句子完成这篇短文，短文主要以第一人称，描述作者将来想做的职业，本文主要是用一般现在时，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。
考查写作题，写时注意时态，人称，数的变化，注意句子之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句子多样化，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
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