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Changes
Unit 4 Writing
Time is always moving and as time moves,things change.
Things change from the past to present and will change into the future.
People change，too.
Do you remember what your childhood was like
随着年龄的增长、时间的推移， 人们的相貌、性格、兴趣爱好可能会发生变化，人们的行为习惯、生活环境也会发生些许变化。本单元的话题就是谈论变化,运用目标语言(如used to等 )描述自己生活中的一些变化情况。
该话题常见的命题方式是要求学生根据文字提示、表格提示和图片提示等归纳、整理，写出条理清晰的短文，描述人物或事物的今昔变化。
Vocabulary Collections
Environment
Habits
Personality
Hobbies
Appearance
About changes.
Appearance
fat /thin
strong
slim(苗条的)
short / medium height/tall
描述人的体型特点：
be + 描述人的体型的形容词
mouth
nose
ear
eyes
head
描述人的五官：
have/has + 五官
Appearance
Appearance
straight hair
long hair
blond hair
curly hair
short hair
black hair
描述人的发型：
have/has + 发型
描述戴眼镜的人：
wear + glasses
描述戴帽子的人：
wear + hat
描述穿什么颜色衣服的人：
sb. + in + 颜色
Appearance
句子积累
1. My brother used to __________ very short, but now he ______ pretty tall.
2. Meimei used to __________ long straight hair, but now she _______ short curly hair.
3. Peiling used to _________ jeans, but now she ________skirts.
4. He is used to ____________ glasses.
5.The boy who _________ a red hat is my cousin.
6.The woman who _______ green is my teacher.
7. He ________ a big nose/ a small mouth / a round face / big eye.
be
is
have
has
wear
wears
wearing
wears
in
has
句子升格
1. My sister has a round face. She has bright eyes and a small mouth.
2. He has brown hair.He wears a pair of glasses.
3.He used to be thin.He is big and strong now.
用and连接
2.He has brown hair and wears a pair of glasses.
用with连接
1.My sister has a round face with bright eyes and a small mouth.
用感叹句升格
3.He used to be thin，but look how big and strong he is now!
Personality
外向的 ________________ 有创造力的 ____________________ 漂亮的___________________
善良的_________________ 积极的____________________ 自信的____________________
勇敢的__________________ 聪明的_________________________ 真诚的____________________
幽默的___________________ 勤奋的____________________ 有才能的____________________
懒惰的______________
贪婪的_______________
吝啬的_________________
愚蠢的_______________
自私的_______________
不诚实的_______________
严格的______________
安静的______________
孤独的______________
独立的_______________
outgoing
creative
pretty
kind
active
confident
brave
smart / clever
honest
humorous
hard-working
talented
lazy
greedy
mean
silly
selfish
dishonest
strict
quiet
lonely
independent
句子积累
1. Chen Bin used to be really shy. He was always ______ (沉默) in class. He wasn't _________ (积极)at all. He was never b_________ enough to ask questions. Now he has changed a lot. He becomes more o__________ What's more, he is very _________ (幽默). He often makes people laugh and happy.
2. She is always _______(善良的) to everyone around her.
3. My father is always _________(耐心的) with me, he tells me whatever he knows.
4. We Chinese are very _________ (友好的) ，so you can make many friends.
silent
active
rave
utgoing
humorous
nice
patient
friendly
句子扩写
I’m shy so it’s not easy for me to make friends.
2. She is used to be quiet.
3. My friend Lily is kind.
4. He is a brave boy.
1. I’m shy.
She is used to be quiet. She was always silent in class.
My friend Lily is kind and she often helps others
He is such a brave boy that he often asks questions actively in class
扩写句子：扩写具体表现。
Hobbies
reading
music
painting
fishing
playing games
playing sports
I like/enjoy/
am interested in ....
句子扩写
1. Mary likes music.
2. My cousin likes reading.
3.I enjoy playing sports.
Mary likes music.She can sing and dance.
My cousin likes reading.He always goes to the library on weekends.
I enjoy playing sports and I play basketball with many other boys on weekends.
Habbit
go to bed early
watch TV
help mother do housework
spend much time with parents
stay out late
go to school on foot
have a science class
be late for school
play basketball after class
listen to the teachers carefully
At school
At home
句子积累
可以在句子使用used to do ,be used to doing或often，always等频率副词表示习惯。
At school
1. 我过去常常走路去上学。
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2. 我们总是在星期三的时候有科学课。
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3. 他总是习惯上学迟到。
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4. 他们经常放学后打篮球。
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5. 他过去从不上课认真听课。
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I used to go to school on foot.
We always have a science class on Wednesdays.
He is used to being late for school.
They usually play basketball after class.
He never used to listen to the teachers carefully.
1. 他总是很早就睡觉了。
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2. 我的父母总是看电视看到晚上10点。
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3. 他总是在家帮助妈妈做家务。
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4. 她过去总是花很多时间和父母在一起。
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5. 他从不熬夜。
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He always goes to bed early.
My parents is used to watching TV until 10:00 P.M.
He often helps mother do housework.
She used to spend much time with parents.
He never stays up late.
Environment
The houses were very old.
The river was very dirty.
The traffic was not convenient.
There are tall buildings.
The cars are seen everywhere.
句子升格
可以用“...used to ..., but now”把两个句子连接成一个句子。
1. The houses used to be very old, but now there are tall buildings.
2. The river used to be very dirty, but now it is clean.
3. The traffic didn’t used to be convenient, but now the cars are seen
everywhere.
Sample Writing
The types of wiriting.
请你按照下面表格的提示，写一篇题为“Changes in My Hometown”的英语短文,开头已给出。
内容要点 过 去 旧房子 现 在 高楼
河水肮脏 河水清澈
步行、骑自行车上班 乘公交车、开小汽车上班
要求：1.以今昔整体对比的方式写一篇短文；
2.或者以单项对比的方式写一篇短文；
3.词数：80词左右（包括已经写出的单词）。
转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化？本周英语老师给你们布置了一篇题为“My changes”的英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。
要求：
1.写你三个方面的变化；
2．紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；
3．90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
The change of environmet.
The change of people.
关于“变化”的写作形式有两种，一是过去与现在整体对比，也就是先说明过去的总体情况，再说明现在的总体情况；
二是单项对比，也就是先说明过去的房子是什么样子的，而现在的房子是什么样子的，按照不同的比较项目逐一列举。
谈论过去的时态： 一般过去时，使用used to更好
谈论现在的时态：一般现在时，使用be used to doing，always，often等
审题
1. 审主题：______.
2. 审体裁：________.
3. 审人称：_______.
4. 审时态：_______.
5. 审要点 ：_______.
家乡的变化
说明文
可采用整体对比写作手法
第一，第三人称
一般过去时，一般现在时
根据提示，过去与现在的对比
范文演练 1
①
①
①
审要点
内容要点 过 去 旧房子 现 在 高楼
河水肮脏 河水清澈
步行、骑自行车上班 乘公交车、开小汽车上班
In the past
Now
old houses
The river was dirty.
went to work by bikes or on foot
tall buildings
The river is clean.
go to work by bus or by car
列提纲
Para 2
Para 1
Para 3
Changes in my hometown
My hometown has changed a lot in the last few years.
I am happy to see that my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.
讲主题
讲改变
讲感受，
讲憧憬
可采用整体对比写作手法
In the past,
1. old houses
2. The river was dirty.
3. went to work by bikes or on foot
Now,
1. tall buildings
2. The river is clean.
3. go to work by bus or by car
写好句
提升前
点拨
提升后
old houses
1.加主谓；
2. 可以用there be 句型
There were a lot of old houses.
The river was dirty.
1.使用used to；
2. 扩句子，增加具体表现
The river used to be very dirty. It always smelled bad.
went to work by bikes or on foot.
1.加主语，改时态；
2.使用句型”It is + adj.+for sb.+ to do sth.”
It is uneasy for people to go to work by bikes or on foot.
写好句
提升前
点拨
提升后
tall buildings
1.加主谓；
2. 使用比较级，与过去对比
There are more tall buildings here than before.
The river is clean.
1.扩充句子，增加具体表现；
2. 使用“so...that...”
The river is so clean that people can swim in it.
go to work by bus or by car.
1.加主语；
2.改变句式
People take buses or drive their own cars to work.
Tips:
1.主谓不能缺，时态要注意；
2.注意写作的顺序，做到顺序得当，主次分明。
3.在作文中使用多种句式，篇幅不宜过长。
补细节，丰富语言
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My hometown has changed a lot in the last few years.
Changes in My Hometown
In the past,there were a lot of old houses. The river used to
be very dirty. It always smelled bad.It is uneasy for people to go to
work by bikes or on foot. Now,There are more tall buildings
here than before.The river is so clean that people can swim in it.
People take buses or drive their own cars to work.
I am happy to see that my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.
把now换成句子：But now things are different. 使过渡更加自然。
在最后一个要点前，加上：What’s more,使内容更加丰满。
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My hometown has changed a lot in the last few years.
Changes in My Hometown
In the past,there were a lot of old houses. The river used to
be very dirty. It always smelled bad.It is uneasy for people to go to
work by bikes or on foot.
so clean that people can swim in it.
People take buses or drive their own cars to work.
I am happy to see that my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.
But now things are different.
What’s more,
成篇章
There are more tall buildings here than before.The river is
审题
1. 审主题：______.
2. 审体裁：________.
3. 审人称：_______.
4. 审时态：_______.
5. 审要点 ：_______.
个人的变化
说明文
可采用单项对比写作手法
第一，第三人称
一般过去时，一般现在时
根据提示，个人关于三个方面的变化
范文演练 2
转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化？本周英语老师给你们布置了一篇题为“My changes”的英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。
要求：
1.写你三个方面的变化；
2.紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；
3．80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
审要点
三个方面的变化
Appearance
Personality
Hobbies
In the past
Now
had straight hair
was short
have curly hair
am tall
wear glasses
was shy and quiet
is outgoing
reading
play sports
列提纲
Para 2
Para 1
Para 3
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot
These are my changes.What about yours
讲主题
讲改变
讲感受，
讲憧憬
可采用单项对比写作手法
In the past: had straight hair, was
short
Now: have curly hair,am tall, wear
glasses
In the past: was shy and quiet
Now: am outgoing
In the past: reading
Now: play sports
写好句
可采用单项对比写作手法
In the past:
had straight hair, was short
Now:
have curly hair,
am tall,
wear glasses
1. 用“...used to..., but now..”进行对比
2. 增主语，注意时态
3. 用and连接句子
I had straight hair in the past, but now I have curly hair.
I used to be short,but now I am tall and wear glasses.
写好句
可采用单项对比写作手法
In the past:
was shy and quiet
Now:
am outgoing
1. 用“...used to..., but now..”进行对比
2. 增主语，注意时态
3. 扩充句子，增加具体内容。
I used to be shy and quiet. I was afraid of speaking in front of class.
But now I am more outgoing than before. I can give a speech in public. I also make many friends.
写好句
可采用单项对比写作手法
In the past:
reading
Now:
play sports
1. 用“...used to..., but now..”进行对比
2. 增主语，注意时态
3. 扩充句子，增加具体内容。
I used to enjoy reading . I always went to the library to spend my time on weekends.
But now I am interested in playing sports. I join the soccer club, I always play soccer with my friends after class.I think it is good for my mind and body.
补连词，使文章连贯
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My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot
These are my changes.What about yours
I had straight hair in the past, but now I have curly hair.
I used to be short,but now I am tall and wear glasses.I used to be
shy and quiet. I was afraid of speaking in front of class. But now
I am more outgoing than before. I can give a speech in pubic.
the library to spend my time on weekends.But now I am interested
I also make many friends. I used to enjoy reading . I always went to
in playing sports. I join the soccer club, I always play soccer with my friends after class.I think it is good for my mind and body.
1.在第一个变化前，加上First
2.在第二个变化前，加上Second
3.此处加上What’s more
4.在第三个变化前，加上Thirdly
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My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot
These are my changes.What about yours
I had straight hair in the past, but now I have curly hair.
I used to be short,but now I am tall and wear glasses.
I used to be shy and quiet. I was afraid of speaking in front of class.
But now I am more outgoing than before. I can give a speech in pubic.
reading. I always went to the libray to spend my time on weekends.
I also make many friends.
But now I am interested in playing sports. I join the soccer club, I always play soccer with my friends after class.I think it is good for my mind and body.
First,
Second,
What’s more,
Thirdly,
成篇章
I used to enjoy
真题演练
假如你是李东，在这几年中，你的生活的各个方面都发生了一些变化。请根据下面表格的内容提示写一篇短文，谈谈你过去与现在的生活发生的这些变化。
（1）短文词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥；
（2）使用本单元所学的used to句型完成作文。
过去 现在
外表 矮；瘦 高；强壮
性格 安静；害羞 外向；活跃
生活习惯 每天锻炼半小时 每天锻炼一小时
业余爱好 在家看小说 下棋；踢足球
万能模板
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
讲主题
讲变化
讲感受
My life has changed a lot.
描述以前的样子: was years ago.
used to .
描述现在的样子: Now, is becoming .
Many have been .
I think will be better and better and will be more and more .
Para 1
Para 3
Changes
Para 2
列提纲
讲变化
写好句
1.增主谓，注意时态；
2.使用and，with连接句子；
3.扩充句子，增加具体表现；
4.使用连接词。
审题
1. 审主题：______.
2. 审体裁：_____.
3. 审人称：_______.
4. 审时态：_______.
5. 审要点 ：_____.
真题演练
讲主题
讲感受
1. 整体对比法
2.单项对比法
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