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建议信
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。
建议信写作注意事项
建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,不是投诉信。观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。
定义:
体裁:
时态:
人称:
语气:
注意!!!
委婉,禁用must、have to 等表达
一般情况下为一般现在时
第一、二人称为主
信件
建议信结构
三个段落
para 1 写信背景+写作目的(表示安慰)
para 2 提出建议及理由
para3 表达希望+期待回复
过渡词:
Firstly…Secondly …what’s more/In addition…
at last/last but not least
First(ly),first of all,to begin\start with,first and foremost
Second(ly), what's more, moreover, furthermore
in addition ,besides(sth), apart from....
Third(ly)\ last but not (the) least \lastly\at length
左顶格,严格写成Dear ***,
空四个字母
右顶格,严格写成 Yours,
***
2)I’m writing to tell you how to......
开头
I know that you don't know how to… here are some
suggestions......
1)I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in….Here are my advice.
句式升级:
3).Here are some tips on how to…….
结尾
表示建议的句式
1) Why not...
2) I recommend that...
3) As far as I’m concerned, it would be wise of you to do sth.
4) It would be a good idea if you could…
5) If I were you, I would…
表示原因的句式(具体,可操作性,有用)
1) In this way, you can...
2) You could..., so that...
3) You could...,which is beneficial to...
4) The reason why I suggested so is that...
5) It would be a good idea to ... For example,
II. 作文写作
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Anna最近来中国某中学交换学习,她来信告诉你她不知道如何跟新同学相处。请你给她回一封信,内容包括:
(1)写信目的 (2)具体建议及理由 (3)表达个人期待
注意:词数80左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
审题:
1.体裁: 2.人称: 3.时态:
4.三段内容:Para. 1: _______+写信目的; Para. 2:建议+_______;
Para 3:_______
5.将所有要点标注在题干上;
6.所写建议、理由要具体,建议和理由之间要有衔接(建议的句式用上:It 作形式主语;recommend that...);
7.使用恰当的过渡词/衔接词。
8.自查是否有拼写错误,语法错误,是否句式单一,都以I 或You 开头。
邀请信
邀请信
定义:邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信。
对朋友、熟人的邀请
对地位较高、有威望的人的邀请
进行简单的打招呼
进行自我介绍
态度礼貌
诚恳
I’m ***, a student of Jing Ying High School /
I’m ***,chairman of the Students’ Union of Senior Grade 1.
How is everything going
How are you
写作
目的
开头段
(2-3行)
写作
背景
I’m writing to invite you to…
I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in…
I wonder if you can come…
Welcome to join us and I like to tell you some details about…
It is my honor to invite you to...
Here are some details.
There will be various activities.
写作目的
写作背景
Learning that…
Knowing that…
To…, I’m scheduled to…
To relax myself and experience the ancient culture, I’m scheduled to
Learning you are interested in Chinese culture, I invite you to…
计划
活动自身的好处和意义
受邀者本身的意愿
邀请的理由
we’re planning to…
we are expected to …
we are to…
be going to do
…is scheduled at+时间
景点:
…is well worth a visit. The architecture is unique to China, and it is for this reason that the tourists are attracted there.
文化:
It will help you have a better understanding of …
It has become an important medium to… (introduce and spread traditional Chinese art and culture)
中间段
总述
1.This trip will provide a platform where you can get a taste of local culture and Chinese food.
2.Feast your eyes on the beautiful sights.
衔接词:
时间过渡词
after reaching your destination, then, at noon, when it comes to, after that, meanwhile, later, in the meantime
列举顺序词
besides, then, for one thing, for another thing, in addition, by the way, what’s more, in addition to , Additionally
段尾(呼应主题,两行)常用语:
1)I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.
如果你能接受我的邀请,我将很感激。
2)We are sincerely looking forward to your coming with great
pleasure.
我们真诚地希望你能来。
3)Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come to…
如果你能来,请给我回信。
4)We would be greatly delighted if you could take the invitation into
consideration.
如果你能考虑一下邀请,我们将非常高兴。
假如你是李华,你打算国庆节期间去北京旅游。请你给来自英国的交换生Terry发邮件邀请他与你同游。内容主要包括:
1) 邀请Terry与你同游 2)你的旅游计划 3)邀请理由
注意:1)词数100词左右 2)可以上当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
1.打草稿:
一审:体裁:________人称:___________ 时态:____________
二定:
结构:第一段:问候(或自我介绍)+写作目的:_____________
第二段:介绍旅行计划(如:时间/地点/交通/活动安排等)和
___________
第三段:_________________并尽快回复
邀请信
邀请理由
希望接受邀请
第一/二人称
一般将来时/一般现在时
国庆节同游北京
Dear Terry,
How is everything going With the vacation drawing near, I'm planning to go on a 2-day trip to Beijing by train during the October holiday. Hearing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I'm writing this letter to invite you to join me.
Here are some details as scheduled. We are going to arrive in Beijing on October 1st. After reaching the destination, we will visit the Forbidden City where the buildings are well-built and the roads are well-paved. It is for this reason that many tourists are attracted here every year. On the second day, we will go on a walking tour along the Great Wall, which is also a must for tourists to visit. It will be very exhausting so I recommend you bring a pair of comfortable shoes. In the evening, I'm going to treat you with the Peking Roast Duck, a famous local snack. I believe you will love it very much through this trip and you will have a better understanding of Beijing.
I am sure that your presence will add to pleasure. // I would feel honored if you can come and would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come
Yours,
Li hua
问候(或自我介绍)+写作目的
介绍旅行计划+邀请理由
希望接受邀请+尽快回复
感谢信
感谢信适用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复,信件不宜过长,只需写明感谢他人的理由,信文要感情真挚,措辞得体。
感谢信是什么?
感谢信结构
构思
para1:
para2:
para3:
再次阐述谢意+祝愿(邀请游玩/其他)
问候+写信背景+表达感谢之情和原因(简要);
过渡句+细述并赞赏对方给予的帮助及影响;
灵活把握时态:感谢信的正文中的时态灵活多变。
·在提到对方曾经所给予的帮助时,应用过去时态;
·在提到对方的帮助所产生的影响时,可以使用现在完成时态;
·在涉及到现状时,应用一般现在时;
·在表达祝愿或希望时,使用一般将来时态。
首段:
1.I am writing these few lines to express my heartfelt(衷心的)/endless gratitude to you for your help.
2.I’m eagerly writing to express/extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
3.Words fail to convey my endless appreciation to you in this letter, as you've done so much for me.
尾段:
1.Thanks again for what you have done for me. May you be blessed in everything you do.
2. Thanks again for your generous help. All the best wished to you.
佳句
中间段的帮助具体可操作
1. 学习:You helped me practice my oral/speaking English by correcting my pronunciation and grammar.
2.生活:You offered delicious food and comfortable accommodation for me.
3.心情:At one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me feel down.You treat me with Pizza and encouraged me/cheered me up/ lit me up with your own experience.
中间段的赞赏/感激表达多样
原句:Because of your continuous encouragement, I have made so much progress in English.
多种表达:
1.Thanks to your continuous encouragement, I have made so much progress in English.
2.sth 做主语:Your continuous encouragement helped me make so much progress in English.
3.强调句:It was because of your continuous encouragement that I have made so much progress in English.
4.双重否定:But for/Without your continuous encouragement, I wouldn’t have made so much progress in English.
假定你是李华,刚刚获得你校举办的英语演讲比赛第一名。请你给你的外教Mr.Smith 写一封邮件,感谢他在你准备讲演稿的过程中对你的帮助。内容要点包括:
1.表示感谢; 2.回顾Mr.Smith对你的帮助; 3.表达祝愿。
审题:1.人称____________________________
2.时态:____________________________
3.三段内容:
Para1:自我介绍+写作目的___________________________
Para2:回顾从哪些方面给予帮助_____________________
Para3:________________________+祝愿
一,二人称
现在+过去+将来等
感谢Mr. Smith在准备演讲稿的帮助
演讲稿的润色,我的口语,情绪
再次致谢
中间段的帮助具体可操作
符合题意
1. correct my pronunciation and spelling
2.polish(润色) my speech draft(草稿)
3.recommend me some wonderful English speech videos to follow/imitate
4.teach me some useful English speech skills
5.encourage me continously/ with great patience/continous encouragement
衔接词:
when it comes to, in…, besides, then,
for one thing, for another thing,
in addition, by the way, what’s more,
in addition to , Additionally