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Unit 7 What’s the highest mountain in the world
单元写作专项复习
人教版八年级下册
【话题分析】
本单元话题“世界上存在的事实”
描述地理和自然现象。这类主题的写作主要涉及两个方面:介绍地理知识和自然风光、谈论濒危动物与环境保护。
写作时应使用一般现在时以及形容词和副词的比较级和最高级来陈述事实、常用句型有as原级as,比较级than,(one of)the最高级in/of。最后应将文章升华至保护自然的高度。
常用句型
More and more wild animals are in great danger.
They can't find enough food.
People kill ……for their fur.
The number of cheetahs is getting smaller and smaller.
We should try our best to protect them.
The government should take it seriously.
I hope wild animals will live with humans happily one day.
【题目要求】
假如你是王涛,你想向某中学生英语报《保护野生动物》专栏投稿。请根据以下提示向大家介绍猎豹,并呼吁大家保护它们。
提示:1.猎豹(cheetah)是陆地上跑得最快的动物,时速可以超过110千米。猎豹主要分布在非洲与亚洲;
2.猎豹躯干长1~1.5米,高约70 90 厘米,体重一般是 20 80 千克;
3.由于人们滥砍滥伐导致食物减少以及人们的滥捕滥杀,猎豹濒临灭绝。
要求:1.语句通顺,包含以上所有要点; 2.80词左右。
写作分析
介绍猎豹的特点
介绍猎豹的处境
呼吁人们保护猎豹
the fastest land animal,a top speed of more than 110 kilometers per hour,...meters long, ...centimeters tall,weighs...kilos
endangered,take up,enough food,kill,getting smaller and smaller
We should try our best to...,If we do nothing...
【范文】
Cheetahs are the fastest land animals.They can run at a top speed of more than 110 kilometers per hour. Cheetahs mainly live in Africa and Asia. A cheetah's body is 1 to 1.5meters long and 70 to 90 centimeters tall. A cheetah usually weighs 20 to 80 kilos.
Now cheetahs are endangered animals. People have taken up their habitats for farming. Sometimes,they can't find enough food. People also kill too many cheetahs for their fur.
The number of cheetahs is getting smaller and smaller. We should try our best to protect them. If we do nothing, soon there will be no more cheetahs in the world!
请你以“Protect wild animals”为题写一篇英语短文,内容包括以下几个方面:
1.野生动物的生存现状;
2.人类与野生动物的关系;
3.保护野生动物的方法。
要求:1.书写规范,逻辑清晰,要点齐全;
2.词数100左右。
写作练习:
Protect wild animals
As time goes by, more and more wild animals are ingreat danger. Their living environment has changed alot. Because of the development of cities, humans need more places to live in. So there is less space for wild animals. Also, some people kill wild animals, such as golden monkeys, tigers and elephants in order to get money.
Animals are our friends, so it's necessary for us to protect wild animals. The government should take it seriously. We can build more nature parks. Also, we shouldn't cut down the forests. We should plant more trees instead. I hope wild animals will live with humans happily one day.
example:
10月4日是世界动物日,学校组织以"IWanttoBe a Volunteer of Protecting Animals'' 题英语演讲比赛。请你以李明的名义写一篇英语演讲稿来参加比赛,内容要点如下:
要求:1。词数100左右。
2.所写短文必须包括表格中的内容。
写作练习:
你的品质 善良,善待动物
你的爱好 ……(至少两点)
你的事迹 为Save China‘s Tigers筹款……(至少一点)
你的感悟 动物是人类的朋友;保护动物就是保护我们自己
你的打算 ……(至少两点)
I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Ming. I'm glad to make a speech here. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I am kind to others, and I treat animals kindly. I like playing football and the guitar. I have ever organized an activity to raise money for SaveChina's Tigers. And I always keep some homeless little animals.
Animals are our friends. We should love them. I think protecting animals is protecting ourselves.If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do moremeaningful things to protect animals. I will advise more people to love animals like me. I will try my best to make the world more united.
Thanks for listening!
example:
假设你是李华,请根据以下信息,给你的外国笔友Jeff写一封不少于80词的信,向他介绍明长城并邀请他参观。
1.它具有两千多年的历史,长约8,850千米,高约7米,宽约5米。2.它是世界上最长的城墙,也是世界上最伟大的奇观之一。
写作练习:
Dear Jeff,
How is everything going Now I'll tell you something about the Ming Great Wall.The Ming Great Wall has a history of over 2, 000 years. It is about 8, 850 kilometers long, about 7 meters high and 5 meters wide. It is the longest wall and one of the greatest wonders in the world. Now it is a symbol of China. It looks like a huge dragon. As a famous place,every year millions of tourists from all over the world come to visit it.
So I hope you can come to China to visit it when you're free. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
example:
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