小升初易错题专题训练：书面表达 外研版（三起） 含答案

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小升初易错题专题训练：书面表达 外研版（三起） 含答案解析
1．同学们，你们一定有过很多愉快的经历吧，请以“My Trip”为题写一篇短文。
要求：（1）.以语篇形式呈现，结构完整，层次清晰。
（2）. 书写规范，可适当发挥，不少于6句话。
Last summer, I went on a trip. I _________________________________________________
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2．书面表达
以“My Favourite Festival”向外国笔友介绍你最喜欢的中国节日。
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3．书面表达。
根据要求以My Favourite Season 为题写一篇小短文。
要求：（1）.条理清楚，语意连贯。
（2）.不少于50字
4．家是我们的避风港，但也要有一定的规则来规范大家。请以“My Family Rules”为题，根据下列提示写一写你家的家规。要求语句通顺，无拼写错误。
提示：（1）. 不能在家里大声说话；（2）. 周一至周五不能看电视；（3）. 不能在床上吃饭；（4）. 一周打扫一次房间；（5）. 周末不能起床太晚；6. 晚上不要制造噪音。
My Family Rules
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5．以My hobby 为题，介绍一下自己的爱好，不少于5句话。
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6．书面表达
假如你是Linda，今天过生日，请你用现在进行时描述一下生日派对的热闹情景吧！至少六句话。
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7．写作小练笔：你去过美丽的青岛吗？根据你所了解的情况向你的朋友介绍一下青岛吧！要求：语句通顺，至少5句话。
提示：位于中国东部，美丽的海滨城市，人口900多万，气候适宜。
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8．你也很想有一个快乐的寒假吧！假如你是Lanlan，请给你的好友Lily写一封信，告诉她你和你的家人寒假里想要做些什么吧。
要求：（1）. 注意书信的格式；（2）. 语句通顺，不少于5句话。
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9．写作，给你最好的朋友些一封信，讲一讲你上周都做了哪些事情，至少5句话。
Dear _________,
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10．假如你想要交一位笔友，现在你把自己的一些情况写一写吧(如年龄、爱好、能力等)，至少写出五句话。加油！
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11．假如你是李华，请你仔细阅读思维导图，为保护地球写一份倡议书，最少五句话。
Hello everyone!
I am a student. The Earth is our home. In the past
12．根据图片提示，充分发挥想象，写一篇关于购物的小对话，至少6句。
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13．Lucy和Lily 一起去快餐店吃午餐。请你写一段Lucy和Lily在快餐店点餐的对话吧！
Food Drinks
Hot dog $2. 25 Chicken $8. 5 Juice $3 Cola $2. 75
Hamburger $ 3. 25 Fish $6. 5 Milk $2. 25 Coffee $4. 5
要求：语句通顺，语法正确，不少于40词。
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14．书面表达。
小明家刚搬家,第一天上学,他迷路了,他正在询问去学校的路。请你根据下面图示,写一篇英语小短文,告诉小明去学校的路线。
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15．看表格，利用句型“主语＋want(s) to go to...”描述自己的家人在假期想去哪里旅游。
My father My mother My brother My sister I
Shanghai √
the West Lake √
Beijing √
the Huangshan Mountain √
Guilin √
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参考答案：
1．范文：
My Trip
Yesterday was Sunday and it was a fine day. I took a trip to the zoo. I went there by bus. I got there at 8:30 in the morning.There were many people in the zoo. Some people watched the monkeys, some watched the elephants, others watched the tigers. I saw many animals and took many photos.What a happy trip!
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称单数来介绍自己的旅行。注意文章为一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：trip旅行；fine好的； took some photos拍照；by bus乘公共汽车；in the zoo在动物园；happy高兴的
参考句型：I took...；I got...； There were...；I saw...；
2．范文:
My Favourite Festival
My favourite Festival is the Spring Festival. It’s in winter. It is the most important festival in China. In the evening before the New Year, we get together and have a big family dinner. We eat dumplings and watch TV. We wear new clothes. This is the happiest time for us, because we can get some money from our parents or grandparents.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出我最喜欢的节日。然后再阐述喜欢这个节日的原因以及在这个节日自己或人们做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：favourite 最喜欢的， Spring Festival，important重要的，get together
参考句型：My favourite Festival is…； It is…； We eat …；This is…
3．参考范文：
My favourite season
There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is my favourite season. Because we have summer vacation. I often take a trip with my parents. We can swim in the sea. Summer is hot. I can wear my shorts. I can eat ice-cream, too. I like ice-cream. What about you
【详解】写作指导：根据提示写短文，要先审清楚题目要求。本题是命题作文，要求以My favourite season为题，单词不少于50词，内容是关于季节的，要求调理清楚，语法准确，表意明确。
4．参考例文：
My Family Rules
There are a lot of rules in my family. I can't talk loudly at home. I can't watch TV from Monday to Friday. I can't eat on the bed. I must clean the room once a week. I can't get up too late on Saturdays and Sundays. I can't make noises at night.
These rules are strict, but they are good for me.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题是以My Family Rules为题，根据下列提示写一写你家的家规。时态用一般现在时，要求语句通顺，无拼写错误。
2.参考词汇及句型：
参考词汇：talk loudly说话大声，watch TV看电视，eat on the bed在床上吃饭，clean the room打扫房间，get up too late起床太晚，make noises制造噪音
参考句型：I/We can't…；I/We can…
【点睛】
5．范文：
My Hobby
I like collecting stamps. I have many stamps. Some are from the U.S. Some are from the U.K. I like the stamp with a panda on it. It is from my friend in China. The panda is very lovely. What’s your hobby
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己的爱好。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：hobby爱好，collect stamps收集邮票，panda熊猫，lovely可爱的
参考句型： I like...；I have...；Some are...；It is from...
6．范文:
Hello! I'm Linda. It's my birthday today. My friends Li Ming, Jim, Wang Ping and Lucy are at my home. They give me many presents. Now Li Ming is singing and Lucy is dancing. Wang Ping is drinking some juice. Jim and I are playing games together. My mum is cooking noodles for us. I'm having a great birthday party.
【详解】略
7．范文
Qingdao
Qingdao is a beautiful city. It is very big. It is in the east of China. It has got more than nine million people. It is not too cold in winter and not too hot in summer. It is famous for the blue sea and a bridge. The beach is very beautiful. Welcome to Qingdao.
【详解】题目解读：该题目要求以第三人称介绍美丽的青岛，包括它的位置人口和气候，文章时态为一般现在时，并满足句子数量要求。
参考句型与词汇：
参考词汇：
beautiful美丽的；in the east of在东面；is famous for以……著名；
参考句型：
It is…；It has got…；welcome to…；
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8．范文：
Dear Lily,
The winter holiday is coming. Do you have some plans for the holiday My parents and I are looking at the map of England. We want to visit the famous places in London. Mother wants to see the Hyde Park because it is very beautiful. Father wants to see the Buckingham Palace. He says it is the Queen’s home so it is fantastic. But I want to see Big Ben and Tower Bridge. My teacher tells me they are very old and famous. I can’t wait to see them.
Tell me something about your holiday.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lanlan
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求假如自己是Lanlan，给Lily写一封信，告诉她你和你的家人寒假里想要做些什么。然后再阐述想去哪，想做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：winter holiday寒假，Hyde Park海德公园，Buckingham Palace白金汉宫，Big Ben大本钟，Tower Bridge塔桥
参考句型：Do you have some plans for …； We want to …；Mother/Father wants to …；He says it is …；But I want to ...；My teacher tells me ...；
9．Dear Amy,
I’m writing to tell you something about last weekend. I had a happy weekend. In the morning, I went to a park and did morning exercises. After that, I went back home and did my homework. In the afternoon, I played basketball with my friends. In the evening, I listened to music and read a story book. What did you do last weekend
From Lily
【详解】略
10．范文：
Hello! My name is Liu Tao. I’m 12 years old. I’m from China. I can speak Chinese and English. I like dancing and painting. Can you be my pen friend
【详解】1.题干分析：该题目要求假设你想交一位笔友，写一写自己的情况，如年龄，爱好，能力等方面。如：我来自中国。我会说汉语和英语。我喜欢跳舞和画画。文章用第一人称，一般现在时态，句子数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：name名字；be from来自；can能，speak Chinese and English说中文和英语；like dancing and painting喜欢唱歌和画画；pen friend笔友；
参考句型：My name is...；I’m...years old.；I’m from...；I can speak...；I like...；Can you be my pen friend
11．范文：
The earth was very clean and beautiful. Now some parts are dirty. Like water and air. Some animals are in danger.
We have only one earth. We should work together to keep the earth clean and beautiful. For example, we should stop throwing rubbish into rivers.
【详解】题干解读：该题目要求写保护地球的倡议书。注意文章为时态的变化并符合所给图片内容。
参考词汇：clean干净的，beautiful漂亮的，water水，air空气，dirty脏的，animals动物，in danger在危险中， throw rubbish扔垃圾。
参考句型：In the past, the earth was...；Now ...；We have...；We should...
12．参考范文：
—Can I help you
—Yes, I want an ice cream.
—OK.
—How much is it
—It’s five yuan. Here you are.
—Thank you.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据图片提示，写一篇关于购物的小对话。注意对话要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：ice cream冰淇淋，five五，here you are给你
参考句型：Can I …； Yes, I want …；How much …； It’s …；
13．范文：
Cashier: Hello! Can I help you
Lucy: Yes, I want some fish. What do you want to eat, Lily
Lily: I want a hamburger.
Cashier: What do you want to drink
Lucy: A glass of juice for me.
Lily: I want a cup of coffee.
Cashier: Are those all
Lucy and Lily: Yes. How much are they
Cashier: They're seventeen dollars and twenty-five cents.
Lucy and Lily: Here you are.
Cashier: Thank you. Enjoy your meal!
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求写一段Lucy和Lily在快餐店点餐的对话。然后再根据表格内容阐述Lucy和Lily想吃的食物。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：fish鱼；hamburger汉堡包；juice果汁；coffee咖啡；seventeen dollars and twenty－five cents十七美元二十五美分；
参考句型：Yes, I want ...；I want...；How much...；They're...；
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14．Go straight on and turn right. And go to White Street. There is a toy shop on your left. Go straight on and turn left. And go to Red Street. The school is on your right. You can go now.
【详解】略
15．参考例文：
My father wants to go to Shanghai. Shanghai is very big and famous. My mother wants to go to the West Lake. There are lots of beautiful places to see. My brother wants to go to Beijing. There is the Great Wall. It's old and long. My sister wants to go to the Huangshan Mountain. I want to go to Guilin. There are lots of mountains and lakes in Guilin.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称利用句型“主语＋want(s) to go to...”描述自己的家人在假期想去哪里旅游。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：famous著名的，the West Lake西湖， the Great Wall万里长城，lots of许多， mountains山脉
参考句型： Shanghai is …； There are …；I want to …； There is …；
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