专题09 书面表达 七年级下册英语期末专项训练 牛津上海版（试用本）（含解析）

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专题09 书面表达 七年级下册英语期末专项训练 牛津上海版（试用本）（含解析）
1．为了迎接2022年春节，Lucy’s Clothes Store正在大促销，请你写一则促销广告，帮助其进行宣传。
For girls:
For boys:
写作要求：
1．作文要包括图中所有物品，可适当发挥。
2．文中不得出现真实的学校名称和姓名。
3．书写工整，语句通顺，词数不少于50词。
Sale at Lucy’s Clothes Store
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2．一天，妈妈和小红到儿童商场购物，小红被眼前色彩鲜艳的衣服吸引住了，拉着妈妈的手不放，于是妈妈决定为小红买件漂亮的衣服。请根据图画编写一段购物的对话，不得少于6句。首句已给出。
Salesgirl (女销售员): What can I do for you, madam
Mother:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．某英文网站正在开展题为“A great trip”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿。所给图片及提示词语仅供选用。要求：1.请不要写出你的校名和姓名；2.短文词数不少于60个词。
A Great Trip
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4．为了迎接2022年春节，Lucy’s clothes store正在大促销。请你写一则促销广告帮助其宣传。
注意：
1.文中要包含所给的提示信息并适当发挥。
2. 词数60~70词，所给的词不计入总词数。3.要求字迹工整，语句通顺，条理清晰。4. 文中不要出现真实的学校，班级和姓名。
Lucy’s clothes store
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5．假如你是Henry，你校将要举办以“My future life”为题的英语征文比赛。请你根据下面图片提示，写一篇英语短文，畅想一下你未来的生活。
要求：1.包括图片所提示的内容，可适当发挥；
2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；
3.60词左右。
My future life
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6．双减之后，学生们在周末有了更多的属于自己的时间。请以My Weekend为题，谈一谈你现在的周末生活。
要求：1. 介绍一下你在周末不同时间的安排；简单评价一下你的周末生活。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3. 100 词左右。
My Weekend
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7．我们都有一些难忘的学校旅行，学校英语俱乐部将组织以“Our school trip”为题的征文比赛，请根据以下提示写一篇短文与同学们分享你的旅行经历。
1. What did you do in one of your school trips 2. What do you think of the school trips 3. What advice (建议) can you give to make the school trip more meaningful (有意义的)
注意事项：
1. 词数：80词左右。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
3. 文章必须包括所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Our school trip
The school trip is a great chance for us to relax ourselves. And it is good for us to talk with others.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．假设现在时五一假期的某一个早晨10:00，你正跟家人在秦岭野生动物园参观，你想给外国朋友直播你见到的场景。请参考以下表格，描述一下你所见到的动物，以及它们现在的活动情况。
Animal Descriptive Activity
tiger scary eat meat ...
panda cute sleep ...
elephant clever draw pictures ...
要求：1. 语句通顺，表达完整，内容包括提示点，可适当发挥；
2. 字迹工整，书写正确，字数70词左右。
Hello, everyone! Now it is 10:00 a.m. I’m in Xi’an Qingling Wildlife Park. There are so many animals here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．假如你是Lingling，请根据以下信息提示，用英语介绍一下你的朋友Tony的家人。
内容包括：
1. 家里有6口人，父母、爷爷、奶奶、弟弟和Tony；
2. 爸爸是经理，妈妈是老师；
3. 爸爸最喜爱的运动是足球，但他不会游泳；妈妈喜欢游泳和跳舞；爷爷和奶奶乐于帮助别人；
4. 他们一家人非常喜欢中国，家里的墙壁上有一张中国地图。
注意：
1. 词数：80词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
I have a good friend, his name is Tony.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假如你是李华，你远在北京的朋友刘涛听说滨海第三次成功的创建了“江苏省文明城市”非常开心，他想了解滨海的城市魅力。请你根据提示写一封信告诉他你的家乡滨海的情况。词数80词左右，记得秀出你漂亮的英文书写哦。
Dear Liu Tao,
I'm writing to tell you about my hometown—Binhai.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you can come and visit Binhai someday.
Best wishes
Li Hua
11．请你以“My family”为题，用英语介绍你的家庭及家庭成员。
要求：
（1）字数60词左右；
（2）书写准确、工整；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名，学校和地名。
My family
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12．当你感到生活枯燥乏味时，当你沉溺于悲伤时，当你感到眼前的一切不再新鲜时，去旅游吧！单独出发或是结伴而行，旅游总能带给你不同的体会。请你以“ I Like Traveling ”为题，写一篇短文，说一说旅行的意义。
要求：观点明确，语句通顺，逻辑清晰。不少于60个词。
提示词：world 世界；scenery 风景；top 顶部；town 城镇
I Like Traveling
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13．My Favorite Animal
近期从西双版纳一路“象”北的亚洲野生象群引起了全世界的关注。你一定也见过很多种动物，你了解他们的习性和特长吗？请以“My Favorite Animal”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的动物以及保护（protect）它们的方法。
要求：1. 紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
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14．每个人都是新时代的奋斗者、追梦人、圆梦人。请以“I Want to Be a(n)...”为题写一篇短文，介绍自己长大后想从事什么职业，以及为什么想从事这个职业。
要求: 1、逻辑清晰，表达准确，书写工整。可适当发挥；词数60左右。
2、文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
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15．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Saving electricity”, using the following questions as reference. (请根据提示问题，以“节约用电”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions:
(1) Why do we save electricity
(2) How do we save electricity
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16．假如你是来自英国的李华，请给你的英国的朋友Scott写一张明信片，向他介绍你目前在青神度假的情况。
提示：1.内容可涉及对青神的天气、观赏之地、食物、人们等的了解，以及你正在做的事情和感受等。2.可能用到的地名：中岩寺（Zhongyan Temple），中国竹艺城（China Bamboo Product City），唤鱼公园（Huanyu Park），青神竹林湿地公园（Qingshen Bamboo Wetland Park）
要求： 1.句子正确，过渡自然；2.不少于60词（给出的部分除外）。
Dear Scott,
How’s it going
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Yours,
Li Hua
17．春节是中国的传统节日，你在春节期间一定会非常愉快。假如你是刘强，请给你在美国的朋友戴维写一封介绍你过中国春节情况的信。
要求：
1.注意书信格式。
2.词数不少于50。
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18．假设你是李华，Tony是你的笔友。暑假即将来临，你打算邀请Tony来你的家乡游玩。请根据下面思维导图的提示内容，给他写一封邀请函。
1.邀请函内容需自拟，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，符合题意
2.思维导图中的提示为限定性内容；“…”部分可用1-2句话适当发挥；
3.词数在80个左右，邀请函的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4.邀请函中不得使用真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
5.邀请函必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear Tony,
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．假设你是李华，去年你和你的好朋友去参观了北京，你的英国笔友Tom想了解这次活动。请你根据以下要点，给他以写一封信介绍这次活动。
Where to go Beijing
How to arrive By plane
When to arrive At 10: 00 in the morning
What to do Visit Tian’an men Square
Eat delicious food; watch Beijing Opera
Go shopping on Wangfujing Dajie
补充一个活动
谈及自己的感受
要求：
1.必须包括所给信息，词数70左右；
2.紧扣要点，适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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20．假如你是杨林，想邀请英国的交换生Jane来你的家乡玩。请根据所给汉语提示给Jane写一封邀请信。
家乡名称 连云港（Lianyungang ）
要 点 连云港是一座美丽的海边(seaside)城市；这里空气新鲜、鸟语花香；
我住在市中心，邻居友好善良，乐于助人；
周末，我常去电影院观看电影、吃美食；
我很享受这儿的生活；它是一个居住的好地方；我希望……。
要求:
1. 不得出现真实姓名；
2. 内容必须包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
3. 注意格式，不少于80词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Jane,
How are you I’d like to invite you to my hometown—Lianyungang.
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Best wishes!
Yang Lin
参考答案：
1．例文：
Come and buy your clothes at our great sale. For girls, we have green T-shirts for 25 dollars. Red skirts are 15 dollars. Yellow hats are 5 dollars. Do you need brown shoes They are only 20 dollars. For boys, we have purple sweaters for only 18 dollars. And black trousers are only 15 e to Lucy’s Clothes Store now.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为促销广告；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图片中的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。点出大促销的事实；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从女孩子物品和男孩子物品两方面介绍产品价格；
第三步，书写结语。欢迎大家来消费。
[亮点词汇]
at one’s great sale大促销，大甩卖
[高分句型]
Come and buy your clothes at our great e to Lucy’s Clothes Store now.（两个祈使句）
2．例文
Salesgirl: What can I do for you, madam
Mother: I want a dress for my daughter. Do you have a red dress
Salesgirl: Yes, here it is.
Mother: Thanks.
Daughter: Mom, I like it very much. Can I try it on
Salesgirl: Sure.
Mother: You look very nice in the dress. How much is it
Salesgirl: It’s just 48 yuan, madam.
Mother: That’s fine. We’ll take it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是看图作文，为对话；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：表明小红与妈妈购物的图画已给出，图画显示了“小红以及妈妈与销售员的对话、小红试穿衣服、妈妈付钱买衣服给小红”的三个场景，考生应注意不要遗漏图画内容，可适当添加细节，完善对话。
[写作步骤]
① 第一步，表明妈妈想为小红买衣服的意图。以销售员的询问“有什么能帮到您”开头，引出妈妈买衣服的购物目的；
② 第二步，写明小红想试穿衣服的想法。以“小红对衣服的喜欢”来衔接“小红想试穿衣服”；
③ 第三步，妈妈询问衣服的价格，最终决定购买它。妈妈觉得该衣服适合小红，想要购买它，于是询问了销售员该衣服的价格。
[亮点词汇]
① want sth. 想要某物
② try on 试穿
[高分句型]
You look very nice in the dress.（“look+形容词+in+服装” 句型）
3．例文
A great trip
Two years ago, during the summer holiday, I went to Sanya with my parents. It was a great trip.
On the first day, early in the morning, we went to the beach to watch the sunrise. It was wonderful. After that, I swam in the sea with my dad and made some sandcastles on the beach. My mom took lots of photos for us. In the evening, we enjoyed delicious local food. Onthe following days, we travelled around the city and bought some presents for my grandparents.
I really enjoyed the trip, because I not only got close to nature and relaxed myself, but also spent more time with my parents, which helped better our relationship.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于看图作文写作，写作时按记叙文的格式来写，以“A great trip”为题，按照所给图片及提示词语进行写作。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来写，时态以一般过去时为主。写作时，说明旅行的时间、目的地、同行的人员，作为第一段；第二段根据图片提示内容依次叙述旅途中所做的事情，注意事件发生的时间的合理性，按照时间顺序来进行叙述，叙述时可增加感受的描写；第三段对旅途进行整体评价并结尾。
4．One possible version
Lucy’s clothes store
Come and buy your clothes at our great sale. For girls, we have green T-shirts for 25 dollars. Red skirts are 15 dollars. Yellow hats are 5 dollars. Do you need brown shoes They are only 20 dollars. For boys, we have purple sweaters for only 18 dollars. And black trousers are only 15 e to Lucy’s Clothes Store now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍店内的促销商品信息，包括物品以及其价格；
第二步，欢迎顾客来选购。
[亮点词汇]
at great sale 大减价
[高分句型]
Come to Lucy’s Clothes Store now.（祈使句）
5．例文
My future life
Hi, I’m Henry. I am thirteen years old. I’m going to be a doctor in the future. I will work in a children’s hospital and meet many sick children every day. I’ll be ready to help them. I will live in a big house with my family because I don’t like to live alone. I will have a robot friend at home. The robot will help me with the housework, talk and play games with me. I’m looking forward to my future life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文。根据图片和题目结合说明未来的生活。
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”。
③提示：写作题目已给出My future life，结合图片中的job, family, friend来写，适当增加细节，并突出图片中的重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。围绕“我未来的生活”来引出重点内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。结合图片“从工作、家庭、朋友”三个方面来介绍我未来的生活是怎么样的；
第三步，书写结语。表明“自己对未来生活的向往”。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to准备
②look forward to期望，期盼
[高分句型]
①I will live in a big house with my family because I don’t like to live alone. （原因状语从句）
②I will work in a children’s hospital and meet many sick children every day. （并列句）
6．例文
My Weekend
It’s really wonderful news that the policy of “double-lightening the burden” has been carried out. Our school life has changed a lot.
I used to have a lot of homework on weekends. I don’t have time to do what I want to do. Now the study pressure is reduced and the homework is reduced. We sleep more and exercise more. We have more time to do what we like. We can read books to learn more knowledge. We can also go on a trip. More importantly, we have more time to stay with our parents and live a happier life.
These changes have given students more time to develop their hobbies. They have more time to take part in outdoor activities on weekends.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我的周末”为题谈一谈周末生活。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍双减之后周末生活的改变；最后一段介绍这些改变的好处。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
7．例文
Our school trip
The school trip is a great chance for us to relax ourselves. And it is good for us to talk with others.
Last weekend, I went to Yandu Park for a trip with my classmates. It was sunny and a little windy. There we did many things and had a fantastic time. We walked around and took photos in the
morning. At noon we had a picnic in the park where we shared our food with each other. Sitting under the tree, we played games after lunch. Our teacher also told us some interesting stories about
the park. At about three fifty, we went home. It was really an exciting trip!
I advise that we should go to visit the science museum next time. It is helpful for the students to learn more about science and develop their interest in science.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“你的一次学校旅行；对那次学校旅行的感受；为了让学校旅行更有意义，你的建议”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“学校旅行对我们来说是一个放松的好机会。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“上周六我的一次学校旅行以及对今后学校旅行的建议和学校旅行的意义”重点介绍学校旅行；
第三步，书写结语。表达“这有助于学生更多地了解科学，培养他们对科学的兴趣。”
[亮点词汇]
① have a picnic野餐
② next time下次
[高分句型]
① I advise that we should go to visit the science museum next time. （that引导的宾语从句）
② It is helpful for the students to learn more about science and develop their interest in science.（it的特殊句式，It is adj for sb to do sth表示“做某事对某人来说是……的”）
8．One possible version:
Hello, everyone! Now it is 10 :00 a. m. I’m in Xi’an Qinling Wildlife Park. There are so many animals here. The tigers are so scary. They are eating meat from visitors. They are strong and dangerous. The pandas are very cute. People all like them. They eat plants, leaves, bamboo and fruits. But their favorite food is bamboo. They are kind of lazy, and they always sleep. The elephants are big and clever. They like drawing pictures. We are taking a lot of photos here.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据表格提示内容，描述一下你所见到的动物，以及它们现在的活动情况。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时和现在进行时为主；人称以第三人称为主。文章叙述时需要把所有要点都包含在内，可适当发挥使行文连贯，同时力求语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
9．例文：
I have a good friend. His name is Tony. We are in the same class. There are six people in his family. They are his grandparents, his parents, his brother and Tony. Tony’s father is a manager of a hotel. His mother is an English teacher at a school. His father likes playing football and playing table tennis, but he can’t swim. His mother likes swimming and dancing. His grandparents are helpful and they are always ready to help others. His family all love China. There is a map of China on the wall of their house.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己的朋友Tony的家庭情况，包括家庭成员，家人的工作以及每个人的爱好等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
10．例文
Dear Liu Tao,
I’m writing to tell you about my hometown—Binhai. Binhai is in the north of Jiangsu. It is near the sea. It is a beautiful city.
The people in Binhai are kind and helpful. They are always ready to help others. People usually go to Yinsha Square for shopping. There are all kinds of shops and the things are not expensive.
During the holiday, people can go to the Moon Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea and beaches there. Local people like the South Lake Park very much. They often go jogging there.
I hope you can come and visit Binhai someday.
Best wishes
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头。材料内容即正文，要全部囊括其中。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
11．One possible version:
My family
I have a happy family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, mother, my sister and I.
My father is a driver. He works hard. He leaves home early every morning and gets home late in the evening. My mother is a doctor. She works in a hospital. My sister and I are students. We are in the same school, but different grade. My sister is in Grade Three and I am in Grade Seven. We go to school on foot every day.
I have a warm family and I love it very much.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“My family”为题，写一篇关于自己家庭和家庭成员的作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时围绕主题，可适当发挥，使行文连贯，力求语句通顺，条理清晰。
12． I Like Traveling
When our life becomes dull and boring, we want to change, but have no way to do it, maybe traveling is the best way. As I fell in love with traveling, things began to change. I can travel around the world, climb mountains or visit a small town when I’m sad. And along the way, people who move on to the next journey tend to become more and more optimistic.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“ I Like Traveling ”为题，写一篇关于旅行意义的作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主。写作时重点叙述旅行给自己带来的不同体会以及旅行的意义何在。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误，条理清晰。
13． My Favorite Animal
My favorite animal is a dog. I like it very much. Because it is not only very lovely, but also very helpful. It is white and small. It lives in my brother’s home. Sometimes I take it to a park for a walk. And I give it some food. At the weekend, I’ll help it take a bath. This is my favorite animal—a beautiful and lovely dog.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“My Favorite Animal”为题，写一篇作文关于自己最喜欢的动物。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。介绍自己最喜欢的动物时，还需要介绍保护它们的方法。注意语句要通顺，无标点和语法错误。
14．例文
I Want to Be an English Teacher
I want to be an English teacher when I grow up. Firstly, I like English. I want to use it often in my daily life. Secondly, I like working with students, and enjoy being asked questions and answering them. Thirdly, I’m good at English. So I can teach my students the right ways to learn English.
Now what I should do is to study hard and get high marks in English tests, and try to practice speaking English as much as possible. I can achieve my dream of being an English teacher one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：以“I Want to Be a(n)...”为题写一篇短文，介绍自己长大后想从事什么职业，以及为什么想从事这个职业。注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：先补充完整题目。
第二步：直入主题，介绍自己长大后想从事的职业以及原因。
第三步：具体谈论自己改如何实现这个职业梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①want to be想成为
②grow up长大
③work with携手并肩
④be good at擅长
⑤as much as possible尽可能多
[高分句型]
①I want to be an English teacher when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Now what I should do is to study hard and get high marks in English tests, and try to practice speaking English as much as possible.（what I should do作主语）
15．例文
Electricity is very important in our daily life. We can’t live a happy life without it. But we have suffered the shortage of electricity in East China in the last few years, so we should save electricity.
We can save it by turning off the lights. We can also save it by not always watching TV or playing computer games. I think if everyone can save it, our world will become much brighter and more beautiful in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点给出，根据提示问题讲述“为什么要节约用电以及如何节约用电”，注意行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐明电的重要性及为什么需要节约用电；
第二步，阐述如何节约用电。
[亮点词汇]
①suffer遭受
②turn off关掉
③the shortage of……的短缺
[高分句型]
①But we have suffered the shortage of electricity in East China in the last few years, so we should save electricity.（so连接的并列句）
②I think if everyone can save it, our world will become much brighter and more beautiful in the future.（if引导条件状语从句）
16．例文
Dear Scott,
How’s it going Now, I’m in Qingshen on vacation. I’m having a great time here these days. It’s summer now, and it’s hot and rainy here. There are many places you can visit here, such as Zhongyan Temple, China Bamboo Product City and the beautiful parks. My friends and I are visiting these places these days. The people here are friendly and the food is also delicious. It’s evening now, and we are taking a walk in Huanyu Park/ Qingshen Bamboo Wetland Park. It’s really relaxing, isn’t it
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要根据题干中的提示给你朋友写一封明信片，向他介绍你目前在青神度假的情况，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，文章主要介绍当地的天气、观赏之地、食物、人等以及你正在做的事情和感受；写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
17．例文
Dear Dave,
I had a happy Spring Festival this year. Spring Festival is the Chinese New Year’s Day.
Before Spring Festival we are often very busy. We clean our houses. On the Eve of the festival the whole family get together for a big dinner. People stay up and eat New Year cakes or dumplings at midnight for good luck. On the first day of Spring Festival, the children greet their parents and get lucky money as new year gifts. Everyone is happy in China on the Spring Festival.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Liu Qiang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要是介绍自己过春节的情况，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示自己的春节过得很愉快；
第二步，具体介绍自己过春节的情况；
第三步，表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①get together团聚在一起
②stay up熬夜
[高分句型]
On the first day of Spring Festival, the children greet their parents and get lucky money as new year gifts.(and连接两个并列谓语)
18．例文：
Dear Tony,
I’m going to invite you to my hometown Wuxi this summer holiday.
Wuxi is beautiful. It’s on the Taihu Lake, in the southeast of China. The air is fresh here. You can see many trees and flowers. People here are kind. They are ready to help each other. There are many things to do. You can row a boat in Xihui Park and enjoy local food like Huntun. It tastes good.
I hope you can visit me this summer holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题说明写信的意图；
第二步，具体介绍自己家乡的位置，环境，食物以及人们的情况；
第三步，最后期待朋友能来。
[亮点词汇]
① be ready to准备
② each other互相
③ row a boat划船
[高分句型]
① I’m going to invite you to my hometown Wuxi this summer holiday.（含有be going to的一般将来时）
② There are many things to do.（there be句型）
19．例文：
Dear Tom,
Last year, my good friend and I visited Beijing by plane. We arrived in Beijing at 10:00 in the morning. We visited Tian’an men Square and the Forbidden City and so on. We watched Beijing Opera and ate Beijing roast duck. Beijing roast duck is so delicious. We also went shopping on Wangfujing Dajie. Finally, we climbed the Great Wall. The trip was very tired but happy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，写作时应先介绍什么时候怎样去的北京，然后介绍在北京做了什么，最后介绍自己的感受，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；介绍参观北京的活动时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
20．例文
Dear Jane,
How are you I’d like to invite you to my hometown—Lianyungang.
Lianyungang is a beautiful seaside city. The air here is fresh. I can hear the birds sing and smell the flowers.
I live in the centre of the city. The neighbours here are kind and friendly to each other. They are also helpful.
At weekends, I usually go to the cinema to watch films with my friends. There are different kinds of restaurants, so when you come to my city, I will take you to try some nice food.
I enjoy my life here. It is a good place to live. I hope you can come and visit my hometown soon.
Best wishes!
Yang Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的家乡地理位置以及环境；
第二步，介绍自己居住的地方以及自己经常做的事情；
第三步，向对方表达能来参观自己家乡的希望。
[亮点词汇]
① invite sb to do sth 邀请某人做某事
② be friendly to sb 对某人友好
③ kinds of 各种各样的
[高分句型]
There are different kinds of restaurants, so when you come to my city, I will take you to try some nice food.（when引导的时间状语从句）
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