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专题09 话题满分范文20篇（最新名校期末精选）（教师版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．（2022春·上海松江·八年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite city”（请以“我最喜欢的城市”为题，写一篇不少于 60词的短文，内容切题，语句连贯，标点符号不占格）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Suggested questions：
1）Which city is your favourite city
2）What makes it your favourite city (Give at least 2 reasons)
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【答案】参考范文：
My favourite city
My favourite city is Dalian. It’s in the northeast of China. Now the population of Dalian is more than six million. Dalian is on the coast and it’s especially famous for its sea food. Of course, Dalian is a good place to have a holiday. There, the weather is fine. It’s not hot in summer and not cold in winter. And it has got many interesting places, such as Laohutan Ocean Park, Bangchui Island and Dalian Modern Museum.
Dalian is a beautiful city, and I like it best.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍我最喜欢的城市。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍我最喜欢的城市是什么，以及什么让它成为你最喜欢的城市；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
2．（2022·上海金山·八年级校联考期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My most unforgettable day”. （以“我最难忘的一天”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。）
Suggested questions:
1. What happened that day
2. Why do you think it was unforgettable
（注意：1. 请将作文写在答题纸上。2. 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
My most unforgettable day
When people ask me what day you always remember in your life, I can answer the question quickly. It was March 12th, 2022.
Our teacher Mr. Zhu led us to a park near the school. We went there to take part in voluntary labor. We got there at 9 a.m. Mr. Zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working. Group One was responsible to plant trees and water flowers. Group Two were busy collecting litter left by the tourists. I was in Group Three. We went to the children’s playground and cleaned all the equipment there. We worked very hard.
After a day’s work, I felt tired but very happy because l offered my service. I will never forget the day in my memory.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求以“My most unforgettable day”为题，结合提示问题进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图介绍自己最难忘的是哪一天；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“那天发生了什么以及你为什么认为它难忘”两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①lead sb to...带某人去……
②divide...into...把……分成……
③be busy doing忙于做某事
[高分句型]
①When people ask me what day you always remember in your life, I can answer the question quickly.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②After a day’s work, I felt tired but very happy because I offered my service.（because引导的原因状语从句）
3．（2022·上海杨浦·八年级上海同济大学附属存志学校名校校考）Based on your own experience, write at least 80 words on the given situation “This time I was brave”. 以“这次我很勇敢”为题，根据自身的经历写一篇不少于80词的短文，标点符号不占格。
(注意：
1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、学校等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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【答案】例文
This time I was brave
In our daily life, we have various fears preventing us from moving forward. And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident.
I used to be afraid of speaking in public. I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd. Then, in Grade 9, a speech contest was held in my school. With my teacher’s encouragement, I entered for it and made full preparations for it. Luckily, I finished it smoothly. To my surprise, I won the second prize. This time I was brave. Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public.
Don’t let the fear take you. Just step forward and you will find you can do it!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应介绍自身的一段经历，注意细节的描写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体点名克服困难，会让我们更自信，作为开头；
第二步，介绍具体的事情；
第三步，以鼓励作为结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more confident 越来越自信
②be afraid of 害怕
[高分句型]
①Don’t let the fear take you.（祈使句）
②Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public.（现在完成时）
4．（2022·上海普陀·八年级统考期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “The hero in my heart” (以“我心中的英雄”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
提示：每个人在成长的过程中总会遇见一些对你产生深远影响的人，他/她是“你心中的英雄”。请你用一件具体事例来讲述你心中的英雄激励你的故事。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文：
The Hero in My Heart
Yuan Longping is a hero in my heart.
He was born in 1930 and died at the age of 91. Mr. Yuan spent nearly 60 years doing research on better rice in order to make people in the world have enough food. And he was successful! He was honored as Father of Hybrid Rice.
I think Mr. Yuan was a great man. He was so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much. I will never forget him.
As a student, I have decided not to waste any food from now on. Also, I’ll study harder than before so that I can master more knowledge and skills. When I grow up, I’ll work hard for our country like him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：本文话题已给出，介绍心目中的英雄，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题引出自己心目中的英雄；
第二步，详细介绍其基本情况并介绍他都做了什么事；
第三步，写你为什么崇拜他；
第四步，写你从他身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①at the age of在……岁
②in order to为了
③be honored as被授予
④study harder更努力地学习
[高分句型]
①I think Mr.Yuan was a great man.（宾语从句）
②He was so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）
③I’ll study harder than before so that I can master more knowledge and skills. （so that引导的目的状语从句）
5．（2022·上海浦东新·八年级上海市实验学校名校校考）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A busy Day at School”.（以”学校里忙碌的一天”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点）
1. What do you do at school every day
2. Why do you think it is a busy day
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【答案】例文
I am a middle school student. I am very busy every day. Let me tell you about my busy day at school.
I often go to school at 6:30, and get to school at 6:45. We often begin our classes at 7:00. We have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. After class we often have sports on the playground. Sometimes, I do some cleaning at 5:00 in the classroom in the afternoon. I often go home at 5:55 after school.
After supper, I must go to school. At school, I have to finish so much homework that I get home at 8:30 in the evening. I am very tired, but I must go over my lessons. It is really a busy day for me because I put my heart and soul into study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中你认为这是忙碌的一天的原因，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题。表明自己每天都很忙碌；
第二步，具体介绍自己白天做的事情；
第三步，介绍自己晚饭后要做的事情，并阐明这是忙碌的一天的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①have sports进行体育锻炼
②do cleaning做清洁，打扫卫生
③so...that...太……以致于……
④go over复习
[高分句型]
①At school, I have to finish so much homework that I get home at 8:30 in the evening.（that引导的结果状语从句）
②It is really a busy day for me because I put my heart and soul into study.（because引导的原因状语从句）
6．（2022春·上海浦东新·八年级名校校考）The Earth Day is coming on April 22nd. What do you think of the environment on our Earth Please write at least 60 words on the topic “How to protect our Mother Earth”.（以“如何保护我们的地球母亲”为题，根据英文提示写一篇不少于60个单词的短文）
Suggested questions:
1. What do you think of the environment on our Earth
2. What can you do to protect our Mother Earth
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【答案】例文
How to protect our Mother Earth
In the last few years, we have been faced with serious environmental problems, such as global warming, air pollution and energy shortage. I think it is time for us to take action to protect our Mother Earth.
First of all, we should form the habit of saving food from now on. Besides, we’d better travel by bus or by bike to protect the environment. What’s more, it is a good idea to recycle waste. It can help us make better use of the limited resource.
We only have one Earth. Let’t do something helpful before it is too late!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中你能做什么来保护我们的地球，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题。介绍我们的地球面临着严重的环境问题；
第二步，具体阐述我们能做什么来保护我们的地球；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家现在就行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①be faced with面临，面对
②such as比如
③first of all首先
④from now on从现在起
⑤what’s more除此之外还
⑥make use of利用
[高分句型]
①I think it is time for us to take action to protect our Mother Earth.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Let’t do something helpful before it is too late!（祈使句；before引导的时间状语从句）
7．（2022·上海浦东新·八年级校联考期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “… brings me happiness” (以“… brings me happiness”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格)
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【答案】例文：
Reading brings me happiness
My life is full of happiness because of reading. It brings me a lot of knowledge as well as plenty of improvement. Besides, reading can reduce my time on watching TV and playing computer games. I can spend more time on my subjects. What’s more, reading is also extremely necessary in my study life, with which I can make great progress. All in all, reading has brought me so much happiness that I can hardly stop reading. I strongly recommend you to read more books and get more useful information.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇话题写作，这个题目要求我们将标题补充完整，并围绕“……带给我快乐”这个主题结合自身经历写一篇不少于60字的短文。
2.写作指导：写作时应注意以下几点：第一点：写作时应用一般现在时、第一人称来叙述。注意格式规范，符合语境表达。第二点：内容上写作者需要结合自身经历来谈谈给自己带来快乐的是什么、如何带给自己快乐以及自己的想法。第三点：文章要选用合适的连词、短语和句型来进行串联和拓展，如besides；as well as；what’s more；all in all等。第四点：文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
8．（2022·上海闵行·八年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to say thanks to my …（以 “我想对……说声 “谢谢”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Use the following points as a reference.
* Who do you want to say thanks to
* Why do you want to say thanks to him or her (Give at least two reasons: 至少 2 条理由)
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【答案】范文：
I want to say thanks to my friend
Today, I want to say thanks to my best friend Tina. She is a lovely girl with big eyes. She’s always friendly to everyone. Also, she enjoys reading in her free time. One day, I cried sadly because I found it difficult to learn English well. When Tina saw that, she started to help me with my English after class. With her help, I am good at English now. Thank you, my dear friend.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应根据英语提示的内容，叙述你想对谁说感谢以及你想感谢他/她的理由，至少说出两条。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时，在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，并且故事发生的背景、起因、过程和结果等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
9．（2022春·上海·八年级统考期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about “Electricity in our daily life”.（以“电和我们的日常生活”为题写一篇不少于 60 词的短文）
Use the following points as a reference.（以下内容仅供参考）
1. What roles does electricity play in our daily life
2. What should we do to use electricity properly
Electricity in our daily life
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【答案】范文
Electricity in our daily life
Electricity is a major kind of power we use a lot in our daily life. At home we use it for the lights, TVs, air conditioning and so on. And in factories, electricity makes the large machines work so that there are so many different sorts of products in the market. Therefore, electricity gives us a more colorful life and helps the society develop. If there is no electricity, we can’t watch TV, play computer games or use mobile phones. So, we should save electricity. We should turn off the lights when we leave the room.
In a word, everyone should play a part in saving electricity.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意按照所给问题的提示作答，不要遗漏要点；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明电力与人类的关系，并具体阐述电力在生活中的作用；
第二步，书写结语，提醒大家节约用电。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②turn off关掉，关闭
③play a part in在……中起作用
[高分句型]
①Electricity is a major kind of power we use a lot in our daily life.（省略引导词的定语从句）
②If there is no electricity, we can’t watch TV, play computer games or use mobile phones.（if引导条件状语从句）
10．（2022春·上海青浦·八年级统考期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A/An ________ moment of learning online”.（请以“线上学习……一刻”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
在这次居家线上学习期间，一定有很多难忘的时刻，它们可能是有趣的，可能是艰难的，也有可能是感动的……请根据你的经历，选取一个瞬间，谈谈你的体验和感受。
（注意：在答题纸上将题目补充完整。）
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【答案】例文：
An unforgettable moment of learning online
I still remember the experience of learning online early this year. On February 10, I sat in front of the computer and began to take the first online class. Although I had done a lot of preparation, I was still in a hurry and nervous. There was a big difference between online class and lessons in real classroom. When my teacher asked a question, I was eager to type the answer on the screen. However, I was not proficient, when I find the corresponding letter on the keyboard, the teacher started to ask another question. I was busy looking through the textbook and screen, taking notes, and typing. How busy and anxious I was! After the class finished, I was so tired. If I were in school, I would be more relaxed and interact with teacher directly.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述自己线上学习一次经历。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述自己线上学习的经历，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
二、材料作文
11．（2022·上海徐汇·八年级上海市徐汇中学名校校考）Write a passage of at least 60 words about “An unforgettable experience”(以“一次难忘的经历”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文).
Suggested points:
1. When and where did the story happen
2. What happened and how did you deal with it
3. What have you learned from it
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【答案】例文
Last summer I had an unforgettable experience that I climbed Mount Huang with my dad. I felt excited because it was the first time for me to climb a mountain.
At first, I hiked so quicky that my dad couldn’t follow me up. But after a while, I was too tired to go on. I wanted to give up because it seemed impossible for me to reach the top of the mountain. Just then, my dad said, “No pain, no gain. You should not give up, or you’ll never succeed.” He encouraged me a lot. I stood up and rush towards my goal. Finally, I made it! I was really amazed!
The unforgettable experience taught me a lesson that I would never succeed if I give up easily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的难忘经历是去了哪里，引出下文的介绍；
第二步，讲述自己的难忘经历；
第三步，介绍从这次经历收获了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①too…to 太……而不能……
②give up 放弃
[高分句型]
① Last summer I had an unforgettable experience that I climbed Mount Huang with my dad（that引导定语从句）
②I felt excited because it was the first time for me to climb a mountain.（because引导原因状语从句）
12．（2022·上海·八年级期末）通过几年的英语学习，你一定积累了许多学习英语的经验，请把你的学习经验和大家分享一下，谈谈你对英语学习的建议。
内容提示： 1. 通过英文歌曲等学习英语
2. 尽可能地多说，不要害怕犯错误
3. 多读英文杂志和报纸
4. 背诵一些好的文章
可能用到的词汇：as…as possible 尽可能；recite 背诵； passage 文章，章节
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
2.词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
How to Learn English Well
English is widely used in the world. It is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions.
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【答案】例文
How to Learn English Well
English is widely used in the world. It is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions.
First, we can learn it by listening to English songs and watching English films. We can learn some new words. Second, we can speak it as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. We also can learn from these mistakes. Third, read more English magazines and newspapers. It can improve our reading skills. Last but not least, recite some good passages in English. We can use these good sentences to write compositions.
I think these suggestions can help you.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍学习英语的方法。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段结合自己的经验以及提示材料，介绍学习英语的方法；最后一段希望建议能有帮助。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
13．（2022春·上海徐汇·八年级上海市第四中学校考阶段练习）Water and our life
Suggested points:
1. Why is water important in our life
2. What can we do to help save water in our life
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【答案】例文
Water and our life
Water is important and necessary in our life. Without food, we may be able to live for several weeks, but without water, we will die in a few days. Every day, water is used in many different ways to keep us alive and comfortable. However, we are short of clean and fresh water and that’s why we should do our best to save water. We have to cut down water pollution and keep “water saving” in mind all the time.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“水和我们的生活”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。从水的重要性以及如何节约用水这两方面描述。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
14．（2022·上海浦东新·八年级上海民办华二浦东实验学校校考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A different ________”（以“与众不同的 ________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
提示：生活是多姿多彩的，在你心目中一定觉得许许多多的人或物与众不同。请你选择一样，向你的伙伴们介绍一下。要求先进行总体描述，再说说你认为其与众不同的理由。
The following questions are for reference only.
以下问题仅供参考。
Who/What do you want to introduce to your partners
What is he/she/it like
Why do you think he/she/it is different from others (Give at least 2 reasons.)
注意：
1.在答题纸上将题目补充完整。
2.注意适当使用形容词。
3.短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
A different teacher
There are many different people or things in my mind. But my English teacher Mr. Li is very different. He is very friendly to us and always answers our questions patiently.
I remembered there was a sport meeting when I was in Grade 8. He asked me to take part in running race. I told him that I didn’t run fast, so I couldn’t participate in it. The teacher told me that if I wanted to get success, I must try to do it first. After listening to his words, I tried my best to exercise after school. With his encouragement and my persistence, I gained the third prize. What’s more, he is like a friend to me. When I have some trouble, he will give me some useful advice.
I feel very happy to have such a good teacher.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据题干中的提示介绍一个与众不同的人或物，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，表示对自己来说英语老师是与众不同的；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体阐述他是什么样子的以及为什么他是与众不同的；
第三步，书写结语。表达“很高兴有这样一位老师”。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对……友好；
②take part in参加
[高分句型]
①I remembered there was a sport meeting when I was in Grade 8.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②The teacher told me that if I wanted to get success, I must try to do it first.（that引导的宾语从句以及if引导的条件状语从句）
15．（2022·上海普陀·八年级校联考期末）Write a short passage at least 60 words about the topic “The person I admire is_______” (以“我所钦佩的人是___________”为题写一篇不少于60字的短文)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Writing suggestions:
1. Whom do you admire (someone who is famous or ordinary people around you)
2. Why do you admire him/her
3. What can you learn from him/her
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【答案】例文
The person I admire most
The most admirable person of mine is my dearest mother. She is an ordinary woman—not very beautiful and a little heavy. But she is very kind and enthusiastic. Although she didn’t receive high education, she knows a lot and often teaches me the essence of life. She always tells me “honesty is the best policy” and “no pain, no gain”. My mother loves me and tries to give me a comfortable environment to study and live in. She also understands me and treats me as a friend. From my mother, I have learnt to be an optimistic person with a strong mind. I love my mother. Although she is ordinary, she is the person I admire most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首句点题，说明最钦佩的人是妈妈；
第二步，具体阐述钦佩妈妈的原因；
第三步，最后讲述从妈妈身上学到的以及表达对妈妈喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①honesty is the best policy诚实为上策
②try to do sth尽量去做某事
③give sb sth给某人某物
[高分句型]
①Although she didn’t receive high education, she knows a lot and often teaches me the essence of life.（although引导让步状语从句）
②From my mother, I have learnt to be an optimistic person with a strong mind.（with复合结构）
16．（2022·上海奉贤·八年级校联考期中）Everyone has some challenges in his life. How can you deal with challenges when you face them Think about one of the challenges you have faced and write at least 60 words about the topic “facing challenges”.（每个人的生活中会遇到各种挑战，想一想当你面对挑战时，你是如何应对的。联系一次你的相关经历，以“面对挑战”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。以下问题可供参考。）
1. What was your challenge
2. How did you feel when you faced the challenge
3. How did you deal with the challenge
4. What did you learn from the experience
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【答案】例：
Facing challenges
Life is filled with challenges. In my study, I always meet with new challenges.
When I was in grade eight, I used to fail my final math exams. This was a serious problem because math is a very important subject. However, I did not quit. I listened to the teacher carefully in class. I also did as many exercises as I could. Besides, I turned to my teacher and classmates for help. In the end, after several months’ hard work, I passed the final exam.
Looking back on this, I realize that whatever challenges I am faced with, if I can spare no efforts and never give up, I will get them over. What’s more, those challenges make me who I am.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点以问题的方式给出，考生应注意不要遗漏；适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明写作主题“生活充满挑战”；
第二步，阐述具体写作内容。从挑战的内容、面对挑战的感受、解决措施三方面阐述面对挑战的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，总结面对挑战学习到的经验。
[亮点词汇]
①be filled with 充满
②as…as sb. could 尽可能……
③turn to sb. for help 向某人求助
④spare no efforts 不遗余力
[高分句型]
①When I was in grade eight, I used to fail my final math exams.(used to)
②Looking back on this, I realize that whatever challenges I am faced with, if I can spare no efforts and never give up, I will get them over.(动名词作主语；if引导的条件状语从句)
17．（2022春·上海嘉定·八年级名校校考）Write at least 60 words on the given topic (根据以下话题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
There are a lot of useful resources in our life. Please choose one and write at least 60 words about the topic “The importance of ____________”
(我们的生活中有许多有用的资源，请选取一种以“____________ 的重要性”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions:
Why is the thing important
What can we do with it
What can we do to protect it
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【答案】例文
The importance of saving water
It is widely accepted that the role of water cannot be replaced by any other thing in our daily life, but few people are aware that the fresh water is reducing sharply. So, what should we do
As far as I am concerned, we should use water twice or more. For example, we can use water after cleaning the rice to water the plants. Furthermore, turn off the tap whenever we stop using it. Last but not least, polluted water should be dealt with in time to keep the river clean because we cannot live without water.
From what has been discussed above, we should pay close attention to daily water. Let’s act now to save water.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作时需要围绕题干提出的问题展开，并可适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，并引出要保护的资源；
第二步，详细介绍采取的措施；
第三步，最后进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
① as far as I am concerned就我而言
② turn off关闭
③ last but not least最后
[高分句型]
① It is widely accepted that the role of water cannot be replaced by any other thing in our daily life, but few people are aware that the fresh water is reducing sharply.（it作形式主语）
②Furthermore, turn off the tap whenever we stop using it. （whenever引导的时间状语从句）
18．（2022春·上海长宁·八年级名校校考）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Use electricity safely”. （你发现你身边的亲朋好友经常有不安全用电的行为，有很大的危险隐患。请以“安全用电”为题写一篇 60—120 词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a guide: （写作必须包含以下内容）
1. How do some people use electricity
2. Why should we use electricity safely
3. What’s your suggestion on using electricity safely
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【答案】例文
Use electricity safely
Using electricity safely is a very important topic in our daily lives.
First, ensure any electrical items are approved standard when purchasing and keep them correctly maintained. Second, unplug electrical items that are not in regular use and
ensure that you unplug and switch off electrical items when you are away from the house for any length of time . Third, don’t use any electrical items in the bathroom unless specifically
designed for use there, such as shavers and electric toothbrushes. But when you use them, make sure not to get them wet and avoid plugging and unplugging with wet hands. The last, always turn
the electrics off at the mains if carrying out any electrical repairs and only attempt repairs if you know what you are doing.
We should use electricity carefully because items left plugged in can be a fire risk and waste energy if left on standby.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“应该如何用电；安全用电的原因以及安全用电的建议”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“安全用电是我们日常生活中非常重要的话题。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“如何安全用电以及安全用电的建议”重点介绍安全用电的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我们应该谨慎用电，因为插上电源的物品如果处于待机状态，则可能会引发火灾，并浪费能源。”
[亮点词汇]
① switch off关上
② make sure not to do sth确保不做某事
[高分句型]
① Third, don’t use any electrical items in the bathroom unless specifically designed for use there, such as shavers and electric toothbrushes.（don’t...祈使句的否定形式，表劝告）
② We should use electricity carefully because items left plugged in can be a fire risk and waste energy if left on standby.（because引导的原因状语从句，if引导的条件状语从句）
19．（2022·上海奉贤·八年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favorite ________”（以“我最喜欢________”为题，可以是人，电影、书籍或是食物等，把你喜欢的美好事物分享给身边的人并说说你喜欢的理由，写不少于60个字的作文。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】
My favorite person
My favorite person is my teacher, Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-old woman. But she is tall and thin with long straight hair. And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all know she is always ready to help others. In a word, I love Ms. Wang.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中喜欢的美好事物以及喜欢的理由的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山直接介绍最喜欢的人是王老师。
第二步，具体阐述喜欢王老师的理由。
第三步，书写结束语。表达“爱王老师”的想法，首尾呼应。
[亮点词汇]
① be strict with对……严格
② in a word总之
③ be always ready to help others乐于助人
④ in trouble处于困难中
[高分句型]
① We all know she is always ready to help others.（know后是省略了that的宾语从句）
② When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③ But she is tall and thin with long straight hair.（with表伴随）
20．（2022春·上海长宁·八年级上海市新泾中学校考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A wonderful place I'd like to introduce”.
（以“我想要介绍的一个好地方”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
（注意: 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following points are only for reference:
① 简要描述你想要介绍的这个地方；
② 以1-2个理由说明你为何要介绍这个好地方。
【答案】例文:
A wonderful place I'd like to introduce
I would like to introduce the Great Wall to you. It is one of the greatest wonders of the world, which attracts a lot of visitors every year. Besides, it has a long history of about 2,700 years. Just like a long dragon, it winds up and down across deserts, grasslands, mountains and plateaus, stretching approximately 21,196 kilometers from east to west of China. If you go to the Great Wall, you can feel the wisdom and courage of the Chinese.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要按应用文格式写。在写作时开头引出我想要介绍长城；接下来表达我想要介绍长城的原因；最后介绍去长城参观，会感受到中国人的智慧和勇敢。
2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一、三人称来介绍长城；时态采用一般现在时，介绍长城的历史，长度，跨过的地形。文中叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：would like to，introduce sth to sb，a long history of，up and down，from…to…。
句型：定语从句which attracts a lot of visitors every year；条件状语从句If you go to the Great Wall。
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专题09 话题满分范文20篇（最新名校期末精选）（学生版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．（2022春·上海松江·八年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite city”（请以“我最喜欢的城市”为题，写一篇不少于 60词的短文，内容切题，语句连贯，标点符号不占格）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Suggested questions：
1）Which city is your favourite city
2）What makes it your favourite city (Give at least 2 reasons)
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2．（2022·上海金山·八年级校联考期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My most unforgettable day”. （以“我最难忘的一天”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。）
Suggested questions:
1. What happened that day
2. Why do you think it was unforgettable
（注意：1. 请将作文写在答题纸上。2. 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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3．（2022·上海杨浦·八年级上海同济大学附属存志学校名校校考）Based on your own experience, write at least 80 words on the given situation “This time I was brave”. 以“这次我很勇敢”为题，根据自身的经历写一篇不少于80词的短文，标点符号不占格。
(注意：
1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、学校等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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4．（2022·上海普陀·八年级统考期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “The hero in my heart” (以“我心中的英雄”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
提示：每个人在成长的过程中总会遇见一些对你产生深远影响的人，他/她是“你心中的英雄”。请你用一件具体事例来讲述你心中的英雄激励你的故事。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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5．（2022·上海浦东新·八年级上海市实验学校名校校考）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A busy Day at School”.（以”学校里忙碌的一天”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点）
1. What do you do at school every day
2. Why do you think it is a busy day
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6．（2022春·上海浦东新·八年级名校校考）The Earth Day is coming on April 22nd. What do you think of the environment on our Earth Please write at least 60 words on the topic “How to protect our Mother Earth”.（以“如何保护我们的地球母亲”为题，根据英文提示写一篇不少于60个单词的短文）
Suggested questions:
1. What do you think of the environment on our Earth
2. What can you do to protect our Mother Earth
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7．（2022·上海浦东新·八年级校联考期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “… brings me happiness” (以“… brings me happiness”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格)
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8．（2022·上海闵行·八年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to say thanks to my …（以 “我想对……说声 “谢谢”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Use the following points as a reference.
* Who do you want to say thanks to
* Why do you want to say thanks to him or her (Give at least two reasons: 至少 2 条理由)
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9．（2022春·上海·八年级统考期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about “Electricity in our daily life”.（以“电和我们的日常生活”为题写一篇不少于 60 词的短文）
Use the following points as a reference.（以下内容仅供参考）
1. What roles does electricity play in our daily life
2. What should we do to use electricity properly
Electricity in our daily life
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10．（2022春·上海青浦·八年级统考期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A/An ________ moment of learning online”.（请以“线上学习……一刻”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
在这次居家线上学习期间，一定有很多难忘的时刻，它们可能是有趣的，可能是艰难的，也有可能是感动的……请根据你的经历，选取一个瞬间，谈谈你的体验和感受。
（注意：在答题纸上将题目补充完整。）
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二、材料作文
11．（2022·上海徐汇·八年级上海市徐汇中学名校校考）Write a passage of at least 60 words about “An unforgettable experience”(以“一次难忘的经历”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文).
Suggested points:
1. When and where did the story happen
2. What happened and how did you deal with it
3. What have you learned from it
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12．（2022·上海·八年级期末）通过几年的英语学习，你一定积累了许多学习英语的经验，请把你的学习经验和大家分享一下，谈谈你对英语学习的建议。
内容提示： 1. 通过英文歌曲等学习英语
2. 尽可能地多说，不要害怕犯错误
3. 多读英文杂志和报纸
4. 背诵一些好的文章
可能用到的词汇：as…as possible 尽可能；recite 背诵； passage 文章，章节
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
2.词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
How to Learn English Well
English is widely used in the world. It is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions.
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13．（2022春·上海徐汇·八年级上海市第四中学校考阶段练习）Water and our life
Suggested points:
1. Why is water important in our life
2. What can we do to help save water in our life
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14．（2022·上海浦东新·八年级上海民办华二浦东实验学校校考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A different ________”（以“与众不同的 ________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
提示：生活是多姿多彩的，在你心目中一定觉得许许多多的人或物与众不同。请你选择一样，向你的伙伴们介绍一下。要求先进行总体描述，再说说你认为其与众不同的理由。
The following questions are for reference only.
以下问题仅供参考。
Who/What do you want to introduce to your partners
What is he/she/it like
Why do you think he/she/it is different from others (Give at least 2 reasons.)
注意：
1.在答题纸上将题目补充完整。
2.注意适当使用形容词。
3.短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
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15．（2022·上海普陀·八年级校联考期末）Write a short passage at least 60 words about the topic “The person I admire is_______” (以“我所钦佩的人是___________”为题写一篇不少于60字的短文)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Writing suggestions:
1. Whom do you admire (someone who is famous or ordinary people around you)
2. Why do you admire him/her
3. What can you learn from him/her
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16．（2022·上海奉贤·八年级校联考期中）Everyone has some challenges in his life. How can you deal with challenges when you face them Think about one of the challenges you have faced and write at least 60 words about the topic “facing challenges”.（每个人的生活中会遇到各种挑战，想一想当你面对挑战时，你是如何应对的。联系一次你的相关经历，以“面对挑战”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。以下问题可供参考。）
1. What was your challenge
2. How did you feel when you faced the challenge
3. How did you deal with the challenge
4. What did you learn from the experience
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17．（2022春·上海嘉定·八年级名校校考）Write at least 60 words on the given topic (根据以下话题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
There are a lot of useful resources in our life. Please choose one and write at least 60 words about the topic “The importance of ____________”
(我们的生活中有许多有用的资源，请选取一种以“____________ 的重要性”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions:
Why is the thing important
What can we do with it
What can we do to protect it
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18．（2022春·上海长宁·八年级名校校考）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Use electricity safely”. （你发现你身边的亲朋好友经常有不安全用电的行为，有很大的危险隐患。请以“安全用电”为题写一篇 60—120 词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a guide: （写作必须包含以下内容）
1. How do some people use electricity
2. Why should we use electricity safely
3. What’s your suggestion on using electricity safely
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19．（2022·上海奉贤·八年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favorite ________”（以“我最喜欢________”为题，可以是人，电影、书籍或是食物等，把你喜欢的美好事物分享给身边的人并说说你喜欢的理由，写不少于60个字的作文。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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20．（2022春·上海长宁·八年级上海市新泾中学校考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A wonderful place I'd like to introduce”.
（以“我想要介绍的一个好地方”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
（注意: 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following points are only for reference:
① 简要描述你想要介绍的这个地方；
② 以1-2个理由说明你为何要介绍这个好地方。
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