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专题09 写作表达满分范文20篇（最新名校好题）（教师版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite city”, using the following questions for reference.(请根据提示问题，以“我最喜欢的城市”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格)
Suggested questions:
(1)Which city do you like best
(2) Where is it
(3)Why do you like this city (Give at least two reasons)
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【答案】 例文
Shanghai is my favorite city. It is the biggest city in China. Shanghai is located in the eastern part of China. The reasons why I like Shanghai best are as follows. First, it is the central city of our country. It is the center of economy, technology, industry, finance and trade. What’s more, Shanghai is also an emerging tourist city, with profound modern urban culture and many historical monuments. Tourists can enjoy shopping in Shanghai, and having local snacks as well. The night views of Shanghai is fantastic, where you can watch the beautiful lights and you can also take a ferry to visit the Huangpu River.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明自己最喜欢的城市是哪个；
第二步，介绍城市的地理位置；
第三步，具体阐述喜欢这座城市的原因，至少两点。
【亮点词汇】①finance金融
②emerging新兴的
③profound深刻的
④monument遗址
【高分句型】①Shanghai is also an emerging tourist city, with profound modern urban culture and many historical monuments. (with+短语，表示伴随)
②The night views of Shanghai is fantastic, where you can watch the beautiful lights and you can also take a ferry to visit the Huangpu River.(where引导的定语从句)
2．Write at least 50 words on the topic “A Small Change I made”
在你的生活中，你有做出过什么样的小改变吗？是什么原因促使你做出了这样的改变？这个小改变又给你带来了怎样的影响呢？请以“我做出的一个小改变”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短语，标点符号不占格。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following sentence patterns are for reference only （以下句型仅供参考）：
It is/was … for me…
It/Doing sth. makes my life…
I decided to…
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【答案】例文：
A Small Change I made
I didn’t like sports, so running was very difficult for me. I decided to change this bad habit. I start running every morning. Slowly, I’m very good at running. Now I like playing basketball very much. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. Doing sports makes us very healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示以“A Small Change I made”为题，写一篇作文介绍你的小改变。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的小改变；
第二步，具体阐述是什么原因促使你做出了这样的改变；
第三步，介绍这个小改变给你带来了怎样的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth决定做某事
②be good at擅长
③like doing sth喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. （if引导的条件状语从句）
②Doing sports makes us very healthy.（动名词作主语）
3．Wasfia Nazreen does a great job as a mountaineer. She has overcome a lot of difficulties and she has also done something special. Many people in your life have done quite well in their jobs as well. Please write about one of them with the topic “A good ______ (complete the topic with a job)”. What is his or her job How does he or she do the job What can you learn from him/her There need to be at least 60 words in your article.
上一篇文章中介绍的人物Wasfia Nazreen是一名出色的登山者，她克服种种困难登上七大洲的最高峰并且在那里转呼啦圈，以此鼓励自己国家的妇女儿童。你肯定也认识或者知道不少工作干得非常出色的人，请你以“一个好_______(用某一职业名称将标题补充完整)”为题，例如：“一个好医生、一个好老师、一个好警察……”，写一篇不少于60词的文章，写一写其中的一位。他/她做什么工作，他/她做得怎么样？你从他/她身上可以学到什么？
A good ________
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【答案】范文：
A good teacher
I won’t forget my English teacher. His name is Zhang Lei. He is forty years old. He is very handsome. He likes his job very much. He is friendly to his students. His classes are always interesting. We all like English. He always helps us. He treats all of us as his own children. We should learn from our English teacher’s love for his own job. We all like our English teacher very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：标题要补充完整，要求包含提示的所有内容，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍此人的个人信息以及工作；
第二步，介绍他/她的工作做得怎么样；
第三步，介绍你从他/她身上学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to sb对某人友好
②treats all of us as his own children把我们都当自己的孩子看待
③learn from向……学习
[高分句型]
①We should learn from our English teacher’s love for his own job.（含有情态动词的句型）
4．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My _________’s job”. (以“我______的职业”为 题，写 篇不少于60词的短 ，标点符号不占格。
在疫情期间，我们居家学习， 进社区，对于身边的 有了更多的了解，也许这个 是你的爸爸妈妈、也许是你的亲戚，还也许是你的邻居……结合你 身，谈谈他的职业以及你 可以从他的身上学到什么呢？
(注意：短 中不得出现考 真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，也不得抄袭本试卷中的 章，否则不予评分。
My _________’s job
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【答案】例文：
My father’s job
My father is a nice man. He is an owner of a factory which produces many things. He is good at designing. He works very hard. I love him very much because he is friendly to me and he is patient with me. Sometimes, I can help him to do something in his factory. My father is always on business trips because he has his business everywhere. So it takes up much of his time.
Therefore, he doesn’t have any time to play with me but I don’t blame him for that. I often spend a lot of my time on the computer and learn much knowledge about designing from my father. And I will try to study hard like my father.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文，写人的记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括爸爸的工作情况以及从爸爸身上学到的东西等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍父亲的职业；
第二步，介绍父亲的品质以及工作中的表现；
第三步，最后是叙述自己从父亲身上学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
① be good at擅长于
② be friendly to对……友好
③ take up占据
[高分句型]
① I love him very much because he is friendly to me and he is patient with me.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② He is an owner of a factory which produces many things.（which引导的定语从句）
5．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My neighbour” (以“我的邻居”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于60个，要求内容连贯，语句通顺，标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions: （以下问题仅供参考）
1. Who is your neighbour
2. What does he/she do
3. What does he/she usually do at work
4. What do you think of him/her
(注意：文中不得出现任何人名、校名等个人信息，否则不与给分。)
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【答案】例文：
My neighbour, Uncle Wang, is a teacher. He teaches P. E in No. 8 Middle School. It is one of the key schools in Shanghai. He has taught there for 4 years. His teaching is highly appreciated and he is loved by all his students. He often tells his students to pay attention to their health. Sometimes he plays football with them after school. In summer, he always takes them to the swimming pool. He’s a good teacher.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，要求介绍人物；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生在介绍人物时应详细具体，不可遗漏提示信息，可适当增加细节，但文中不得出现任何人名、校名等个人信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，指出“我”的邻居是何人；
第二步，按照提示信息，从职业和工作情况等方面详细介绍邻居；
第三步，总结全文，对邻居进行简单评价。
[亮点词汇]
① highly很；非常
② tell sb. to do sth.告诉某人做某事
③ pay attention to注意
④ take sb. to…带某人到……
[高分句型]
① It is one of the key schools in Shanghai. （“one of+可数名词复数”句型）
② He has taught there for 4 years.（现在完成时）
③ His teaching is highly appreciated and he is loved by all his students.（被动语态）
6．The Shanghai Disney started last year. Write a travel guide with at least 50 words to introduce some interesting places in Shanghai Disney.（写一篇至少50个词的旅游指南，介绍上海迪士尼的名胜，标点符号不占格。）
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【答案】参考例文
A travel guide about Shanghai Disney
Shanghai Disney is an interesting and fun place for people of all ages to visit. It lies in Pudong New Area of the city. It is the first Disney theme park in China.
There are six interesting areas in the park. Beside many exciting rides in the park, you can visit the tallest Disney Castle, the Enchanted Storybook Castle. You can also meet all the Disney princesses and take photos with them. At the entrance, there is the Garden of the Twelve Friends.
Shanghai Disney has something for everyone. Why not come here this holiday
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于话题作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章的话题已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍上海迪士尼乐园的地点位置和特点；
第二步，介绍上海迪士尼乐园中的特色景点，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，邀请读者前来游玩并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①people of all ages所有年龄层的人
②take photos with和……一起拍照
③at the entrance在入口处
[高分句型]
①Shanghai Disney is an interesting and fun place for people of all ages to visit.（动词不定式作定语）
二、材料作文
7．Write at least 50 words on the topic “My Birthday Party”. (以“我的生日聚会”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a reference. ( 以下内容仅供参考)
1. When did you have your birthday party？
2. Who did you invite
3. What did you do at your birthday party
4. How did you feel on that day
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【答案】例文：
My Birthday Party
Last Sunday was my 13th birthday. I invited a lot of my friends to my birthday party. They bought a very big cake for me. I made a wish and blew the candles. We sang “Happy Birthday” song together and shared the cake. After that, some of us danced happily, some of us played interesting games. We all enjoyed ourselves.
What a nice birthday party!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括生日派对的具体时间以及举行的一些活动等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍生日派对举行的具体时间以及多少岁生日；
第二步，具体介绍在生日派对上都做什么了；
第三步，最后总结生日派对很好。
[亮点词汇]
① a lot of很多
② buy sth for sb为某人买某物
③ make a wish许愿
[高分句型]
① We sang “Happy Birthday” song together and shared the cake.（and连接的并列句）
8．Write at least 50 words on the topic “How to Keep Healthy”. （请以“怎样保持健康”为题写一篇不少于50词的短文。）
Suggested questions:
Do you think health is very important
What should you do if you want to stay healthy
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【答案】 As we all know, health is very important to everybody. Without health, we can’t study or work well. But do you know how to stay healthy Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, we should keep a good mood. Keeping a good mood can make us healthy and wealthy. Secondly, we should have enough sleep every day. Don’t stay up late at night and get up early in the morning. Thirdly, we should develop a good eating habit. We should eat more fresh fruits and green vegetables, less meat and no junk food. Last but not least, doing sports every day is necessary to stay healthy.
I hope everybody can stay healthy and be happy everyday.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，要求对如何保持健康提出自己的观点和建议；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：题目中已经给出写作提示，需要围绕提示进行写作，具体内容可以适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题指出健康的重要性，并提出如何保持健康，引出下文；
第二步：对如何保持健康，有条理地提出自己的建议；
第三步：最后进行简单的总结。
[亮点词汇]
① as we know 众所周知
② keep a good mood 保持好的心情
③ stay up late 熬夜
④ develop a good eating habit 培养一个好的饮食习惯
[高分句型]
① Firstly…Secondly…Thirdly…Last but not least…（这些顺序词的使用使文章层次鲜明，条理清晰）
② Keeping a good mood can make us healthy and wealthy.（用动名词形式作主语）
9．Write at least 50 words on the topic “A model student in my class”. The following questions may help you. （以身边的一个模范学生为题，写一篇不少于50字的作文。下面问题可以作为参考。文中不能出现真实姓名）
● Who do you think is a model student in your class
● What does he or she look like
● What does he or she usually do
● What can we learn from him or her
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【答案】例文
A model student in my class
I have a good friend in my class. His name is Li Lei. I think he is a model student. Li Lei is a kind boy. He is tall and thin. He likes helping others. He often helps me with my English. He also plays sports a lot. Now my English is better than before. Also, Li Lei often picks up litter, rides bike to school and plants trees and so on. He says it is our duty to protect our world. I think friends should be similar. I decide to be a person like Li Lei. I will help others and protect our environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据题目中的提示介绍身边的一个模范学生。不要遗漏题目中的要点，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍模范生是谁，以及外貌特征；
第二步，介绍这位模范生通常做什么；
第三步，谈谈可以从这位模范生身上学到什么。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing喜欢做某事
②help sb with sth在某方面帮助某人
③pick up捡起
④decide to do sth决定做某事
[高分句型]
①I think he is a model Student.（省略that的宾语从句）
10．Write at least 60 words on the topic “A model student around me” (以“我身边一位模范生”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。)
(注意：作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions:(以下内容仅供参考)
Who is a model student around you
Why is he/she a model student (Give at least two reasons)
What can you learn from him/her
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【答案】例文
A model student around me
In my view, everyone in my class is very good, but Mary is the model student. She works very hard and always gets high marks. Although she is busy with her studies, she often gives classmates a hand when they meet difficulties. How friendly she is! From her, I know that being hard-working is really important to us. What’s more, I should also be friendly to the people around me.
In brief, being a friendly and hard-working student is not easy, but I will make every effort to study hard and try to be a model student like her.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点介绍身边的模范生，要求内容适切，意思连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍身边的模范生是谁；
第二步，说明他/她是模范生的原因；
第三步，表达自己从他/她身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to sb对某人友好
②be busy with忙于……
③make every effort to do尽一切努力做
[高分句型]
①Although she is busy with her studies, she often gives classmates a hand when they meet difficulties.（although引导让步状语从句，when引导时间状语从句）
②How friendly she is!（how引导感叹句）
③From her, I know that being hard-working is really important to us.（that引导宾语从句）
11．Write at least 60 words on the topic “________ is important ”.(以“________是重要的”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文。）
Suggested questions:
1. What do you think is important
2. Why do you think so ( list at least two reasons)
注意：
文中不得出现人名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
Exercise is important
Everyone in the world wants to live happily. Exercise is indispensable to a happy life. There is a famous saying: “life lies in exercise.” So I think exercise is important.
Exercise helps to improve our mood. When you do exercise, you move a lot and you have to be more positive, which helps you become optimistic. Exercise will make your life full of all kinds of contents and make your life more colourful. Moreover, exercise will help you get rid of your inertia. If you insist on exercise, you will never be a lazy person.
Therefore, exercise is important. Let’s get up and exercise.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要求根据提示问题，列出至少两点原因说明你的观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍锻炼是重要的；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍锻炼的好处和重要性；
第三步，总结并呼吁大家一起来做锻炼。
[亮点词汇]
① indispensable 不可或缺的
② Positive 积极乐观的
③ get rid of 摆脱
[高分句型]
If you insist on exercise, you will never be a lazy person.（条件状语从句）
12．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Love from My...”, using the following questions for reference.(请根据提示问题，以“来自我的……的爱”为题，写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions:
(1)Who do you get love from
(2)How does he/she love you
(3)What will you do in return(作为回报)
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【答案】例文：
Love from my parents
As we all know, our parents love us very much. So are parents! Here I’d like to share my experiences with you about how my parents love me.
When I was a child, every morning when I got up, breakfast was prepared for me. My mother always varied the diets to give the nutrition I needed. I think that is the main reason why I am so strong and healthy! Thank you, mum, I love you! My father also loves me a lot! I remember every time I failed an exam, he would encourage me not to lose heart. Dad, I love you as well!
In a word, both my parents love me deeply. I am also grateful to them! I think words can’t express how much I love them! I will work hard to realize my dream, which I think will make them happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：先补充完整题目，然后根据材料中给出的问题来介绍，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：先补充完整题目，表明写作意图，写父母的爱。
第二步：以叙事的方式具体阐述他们是怎么爱你的。
第三步：书写结语。总结并表达自己会做什么作为回报。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb与某人分享某物
②prepare for为……做准备
③encourage sb (not) to do sth鼓励某人（不）做某事
④as well也
⑤be grateful to对某人心存感激
[高分句型]
①Here I’d like to share my experiences with you about how my parents love me.（how引导的宾语从句）
②When I was a child, every morning when I got up, breakfast was prepared for me.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③I will work hard to realize my dream, which I think will make them happy.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
13．Write at least 50 words about the topic “I want to be a(an)…”(就“我想成为一名…”为题，写一篇至少50个单词的短文。)
Suggested questions:
1.What do you want to be in the future
2.Why do you want to do this job
3.What should you do now to make your dream come true
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【答案】例文：
I want to be a teacher
I want to be a teacher in the future, because I like children and I would like to teach children a lot of things. I want to tell stories to them and I also want to sing and dance with them. So I must study hard now. I will read many books and do a lot of exercises. I hope my dream can come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏问题中涉及的要点，以“I want to be a(an) ...”为题写短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全标题，可选择自己感兴趣的职业来填写，如teacher，nurse，policeman等；
第二步，正文具体介绍想要成为什么人，为什么项做这份工作及打算为此做些什么。
[亮点词汇]
①want to be 想要成为
②in the future 在将来
③tell stories 讲故事
④come true 实现
[高分句型]
①I want to be a teacher in the future, because I like children and I would like to teach children a lot of things.（because引导原因状语从句；and连接表等同关系的并列句）
②I hope my dream can come true.（省略that的宾语从句）
14．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite place in my school” according to the questions. （按照下列所给问题，以“学校里我最喜欢的地方”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
必须包含下列要点：
What’s your favourite place in your school, the classroom, the library, the playground or somewhere else Why
When and how do you usually spend your time there
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【答案】参考例文
My favorite place in school
My favorite place in school is the reading room. It is very big and bright. There are a lot of useful books, newspapers and magazines there.
I like reading books and magazines there because they not only provide me with much knowledge, but also help me learn a lot about what is happening around the world. Sometimes I even feel I can have a talk with the people in the books.
I can also relax myself in the peaceful environment there. When I feel tired and unhappy, the reading room is the best place to go to.
For me, reading room is the place I like best.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章标题以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，需要适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，说明最喜欢的是学校里的哪个地方；
第二步，简要介绍这个地方的特点，再结合具体事例说明自己在何时以及如何使用这个地方；
第三步，表达对这个地方的喜爱并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①provide sb with sth给某人提供某物
②have a talk with sb与某人对话/谈话
③relax oneself放松自己
④not only…but also不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I like reading books and magazines there because they not only provide me with much knowledge, but also help me learn a lot about what is happening around the world.（because引导原因状语从句；what引导宾语从句）
②Sometimes I even feel I can have a talk with the people in the books.（省略引导词that的表语从句）
③When I feel tired and unhappy, the reading room is the best place to go to.（when引导时间状语从句；动词不定式作定语）
15．Write at least 60 words on the topic “A trip to…”(以“A trip to…”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)
1. Where did you travel in the past How did you go there Who did you travel with
2. What did you do and see there What do you think of the trip
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【答案】例文
A trip to the Farm
Last Sunday my parents and I went to the farm. We went there by bus. It took us fifty minutes to get there. When we got there, we saw many animals and strawberries.
The farmer showed us around the farm. He taught me how to milk the cow. With his help, I learnt to milk the cow. After that, I rode the horse. In the afternoon, I went fishing and picked some strawberries. How happy we were!
All in all, we had a good time there. I wanted to go there again.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态一般过去时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏“提示信息”中以前你去旅游的地方，怎样去的，和谁去的以及你在旅行中看到和你对旅行的看法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“上周六我父母和我去了农场。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“去农场乘坐的交通工具；在农场所看到的事物和所做的事情；我对旅行的感触”几方面重点介绍我的农场旅行的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我想要再去那里。”的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① by bus乘公共汽车
② show sb around带某人参观
[高分句型]
① When we got there, we saw many animals and strawberries.（when当……时候，引导时间状语从句。）
② How happy we were!（感叹句：How +形容词+主语+谓语动词！）
16．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A Model Student” 以 “一位模范生” 为题，必须参考下列问题，写至少60 词短文，要求意思明确， 内容连贯，标点符号不占格子。
Suggested questions:
(1) Who do you think is a model student
(2) Why do you think so
(3) What can you learn from him/her
考生注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分，若必须出现姓名请以Mary或Tom等英文名代替。
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【答案】例文：
A Model Student
I think Mary is a model student in our class. Here are the reasons why I think so.
First, she is really a helpful and kind girl. She would help everyone when we have trouble in not only study but also life. She is always patient and warm-hearted. She is clever as well because she can always find a way to solve the problem. We all admire her. Second, she is hard-working. She gets up at five every morning and then runs and dances. She listens to teachers carefully and takes notes in class and finishes doing homework well after school. She practices the piano and singing every day.
What an excellent girl! I will try my best to study and make myself as perfect as her.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“What can you learn from him/her ”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己认为谁是模范生；
第二步，具体阐述自己这么认为的理由；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己能从对方学到什么。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also不但……而且
②listen to teachers carefully认真听课
③do one’s best to do sth.尽最大努力做某事
④as...as像……一样
[高分句型]
①Here are the reasons why I think so. (why引导的定语从句)
②She is clever as well because she can always find a way to solve the problem. (because引导的原因状语从句)
17．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My school life”, using the following questions for reference.(请根据提示问题，以“My school life”为题，写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions:
(1) Do you love your school
(2) What do you do at school
(3) What changes would you like to see in your school
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【答案】例文
My School Life
My school life is not so enjoyable. I have to do a lot of homework every day. So I have no time to take part in more activities and have trips to other places. Although I have computer lessons every week, two students have to share a computer. I hope that everyone in my class can have a computer at school. It would be necessary and convenient for every student to have a computer at school. We can chat with each other online and write to each other by e-mail and we will become good friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：本文要点提示中给出了三个问题，考生需注意三个问题都要回答，可以适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过回答第一个问题“我的学校生活没有那么愉快”开头，以引出下文重点内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。通过“做家庭作业、上电脑课”两方面具体阐述第二个问题；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望每个人都能有一台电脑以方便交友”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in参加
② chat with sb.与某人聊天
[高分句型]
① Although I have computer lessons every week, two students have to share a computer. （although引导的让步状语从句）
② It would be necessary and convenient for every student to have a computer at school. （it作形式主语的句型）
三、书信作文
18．世界动物保护协会(World Animal Protection)最近要招募志愿者。假如你是Tom，你想要加入志愿者团队，请写一封不少于60字的申请信，陈述你申请成为志愿者的原因。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Dear Chairperson,
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Yours,
Tom
【答案】例文
Dear Chairperson,
I want to be a volunteer. There are some reasons. Firstly, I am kind to animals. I love animals very much. Secondly, I want to help some homeless animals. I want to give them not only water but also food. Thirdly, if I become a volunteer, I will call on more people to join us. I promise to take care of animals well. I am looking forward to becoming a volunteer of the World Animal Protection.
Yours,
Tom
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：本文要求写一封申请信，申请加入加入志愿者团队，并陈述你申请成为志愿者的原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己想成为志愿者；
第二步，具体阐述自己申请成为志愿者的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①want to be想成为
②be kind to对……友好
③promise to do承诺做某事
④look forward to doing期望做
[高分句型]
①Thirdly, if I become a volunteer, I will call on more people to join us.（if引导的条件状语从句）
19．Suppose your friend Ben is going to travel in Shanghai next week. Please design a travel plan and write a letter to tell him about it.Write at least 50 words.(假设你的朋友Ben要来你上海旅游，请你为他设计一份旅行计划书并写信告知他。不少于50个单词）
Suggested expressions:
interesting places; It takes ... to do; I hope ...
Dear Ben,
I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai,
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【答案】例文：
Dear Ben,
I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai, I will meet you at the airport. Then I will show you around the Bund of Shanghai. You will see many famous buildings here. Of course, I will also take you to taste our local food. I will also show you around the museum. You can visit many historical relics here. I will also show you around Central Street. You can shop here. I’m sure you will have a great time. I look forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求为你即将来上海旅游的朋友设计一份旅行计划书，计划应详细具体，注意不少于50词。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用简单问候，引出下文的旅行安排；
第二步，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①show sb around带某人四处看看
②have a great time玩得高兴
③look forward to期望
[高分句型]
I’m sure you will have a great time.（宾语从句）
20．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点不占格）
假设你是Alice，你想领养上文的Sunday Special，请给收容所写一份信，说明你为什么想收养它，收养之后你会如何照顾它。
Reference phrases
feed him 3—4 times every day give him a bowl of water to drink
give him a blanket play with him
Dear officers,
I read Sunday Special’s letter and my heart was touched. I would like to adopt the puppy. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Alice
【答案】例文
Dear officers,
I read Sunday Special’s letter and my heart was touched. I would like to adopt the puppy.
When I was a little child, we kept a lovely pet dog in our family. I know how to look after a puppy and I really want to give the poor animal a warm home.
After I take him home, first of all, I will give him a blanket and make a comfortable bed for him to sleep on. Secondly, I will feed him 3 to 4 times a day. Of course, I will never forget to give him a bowl of water to drink. Thirdly, I will also prepare some toys for him to play with. When I get home from school, I will play with him.
I’m sure I can take good care of him and he will be very happy to be one of our family members.
Yours truly,
Alice
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封申请信，属于书信作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“你为什么想收养它”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接书信开头，引出话题；
第二步，先说明想收养小狗的原因，再按照要点提示说明你收养它后会如何照顾它，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表示能照顾好小狗并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②prepare sth for sb为某人准备某物
③take good care of照顾好……
[高分句型]
①When I was a little child, we kept a lovely pet dog in our family.（when引导时间状语从句）
②After I take him home, first of all, I will give him a blanket and make a comfortable bed for him to sleep on.（after引导时间状语从句）
③I’m sure I can take good care of him and he will be very happy to be one of our family members.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
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专题09 写作表达满分范文20篇（最新名校好题）（学生版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite city”, using the following questions for reference.(请根据提示问题，以“我最喜欢的城市”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格)
Suggested questions:
(1)Which city do you like best
(2) Where is it
(3)Why do you like this city (Give at least two reasons)
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2．Write at least 50 words on the topic “A Small Change I made”
在你的生活中，你有做出过什么样的小改变吗？是什么原因促使你做出了这样的改变？这个小改变又给你带来了怎样的影响呢？请以“我做出的一个小改变”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短语，标点符号不占格。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following sentence patterns are for reference only （以下句型仅供参考）：
It is/was … for me…
It/Doing sth. makes my life…
I decided to…
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3．Wasfia Nazreen does a great job as a mountaineer. She has overcome a lot of difficulties and she has also done something special. Many people in your life have done quite well in their jobs as well. Please write about one of them with the topic “A good ______ (complete the topic with a job)”. What is his or her job How does he or she do the job What can you learn from him/her There need to be at least 60 words in your article.
上一篇文章中介绍的人物Wasfia Nazreen是一名出色的登山者，她克服种种困难登上七大洲的最高峰并且在那里转呼啦圈，以此鼓励自己国家的妇女儿童。你肯定也认识或者知道不少工作干得非常出色的人，请你以“一个好_______(用某一职业名称将标题补充完整)”为题，例如：“一个好医生、一个好老师、一个好警察……”，写一篇不少于60词的文章，写一写其中的一位。他/她做什么工作，他/她做得怎么样？你从他/她身上可以学到什么？
A good ________
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4．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My _________’s job”. (以“我______的职业”为 题，写 篇不少于60词的短 ，标点符号不占格。
在疫情期间，我们居家学习， 进社区，对于身边的 有了更多的了解，也许这个 是你的爸爸妈妈、也许是你的亲戚，还也许是你的邻居……结合你 身，谈谈他的职业以及你 可以从他的身上学到什么呢？
(注意：短 中不得出现考 真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，也不得抄袭本试卷中的 章，否则不予评分。
My _________’s job
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5．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My neighbour” (以“我的邻居”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于60个，要求内容连贯，语句通顺，标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions: （以下问题仅供参考）
1. Who is your neighbour
2. What does he/she do
3. What does he/she usually do at work
4. What do you think of him/her
(注意：文中不得出现任何人名、校名等个人信息，否则不与给分。)
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6．The Shanghai Disney started last year. Write a travel guide with at least 50 words to introduce some interesting places in Shanghai Disney.（写一篇至少50个词的旅游指南，介绍上海迪士尼的名胜，标点符号不占格。）
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二、材料作文
7．Write at least 50 words on the topic “My Birthday Party”. (以“我的生日聚会”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a reference. ( 以下内容仅供参考)
1. When did you have your birthday party？
2. Who did you invite
3. What did you do at your birthday party
4. How did you feel on that day
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8．Write at least 50 words on the topic “How to Keep Healthy”. （请以“怎样保持健康”为题写一篇不少于50词的短文。）
Suggested questions:
Do you think health is very important
What should you do if you want to stay healthy
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9．Write at least 50 words on the topic “A model student in my class”. The following questions may help you. （以身边的一个模范学生为题，写一篇不少于50字的作文。下面问题可以作为参考。文中不能出现真实姓名）
● Who do you think is a model student in your class
● What does he or she look like
● What does he or she usually do
● What can we learn from him or her
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10．Write at least 60 words on the topic “A model student around me” (以“我身边一位模范生”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。)
(注意：作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions:(以下内容仅供参考)
Who is a model student around you
Why is he/she a model student (Give at least two reasons)
What can you learn from him/her
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11．Write at least 60 words on the topic “________ is important ”.(以“________是重要的”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文。）
Suggested questions:
1. What do you think is important
2. Why do you think so ( list at least two reasons)
注意：
文中不得出现人名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分。
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12．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Love from My...”, using the following questions for reference.(请根据提示问题，以“来自我的……的爱”为题，写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions:
(1)Who do you get love from
(2)How does he/she love you
(3)What will you do in return(作为回报)
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13．Write at least 50 words about the topic “I want to be a(an)…”(就“我想成为一名…”为题，写一篇至少50个单词的短文。)
Suggested questions:
1.What do you want to be in the future
2.Why do you want to do this job
3.What should you do now to make your dream come true
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14．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite place in my school” according to the questions. （按照下列所给问题，以“学校里我最喜欢的地方”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
必须包含下列要点：
What’s your favourite place in your school, the classroom, the library, the playground or somewhere else Why
When and how do you usually spend your time there
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15．Write at least 60 words on the topic “A trip to…”(以“A trip to…”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)
1. Where did you travel in the past How did you go there Who did you travel with
2. What did you do and see there What do you think of the trip
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16．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A Model Student” 以 “一位模范生” 为题，必须参考下列问题，写至少60 词短文，要求意思明确， 内容连贯，标点符号不占格子。
Suggested questions:
(1) Who do you think is a model student
(2) Why do you think so
(3) What can you learn from him/her
考生注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分，若必须出现姓名请以Mary或Tom等英文名代替。
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17．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My school life”, using the following questions for reference.(请根据提示问题，以“My school life”为题，写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions:
(1) Do you love your school
(2) What do you do at school
(3) What changes would you like to see in your school
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三、书信作文
18．世界动物保护协会(World Animal Protection)最近要招募志愿者。假如你是Tom，你想要加入志愿者团队，请写一封不少于60字的申请信，陈述你申请成为志愿者的原因。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Dear Chairperson,
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Yours,
Tom
19．Suppose your friend Ben is going to travel in Shanghai next week. Please design a travel plan and write a letter to tell him about it.Write at least 50 words.(假设你的朋友Ben要来你上海旅游，请你为他设计一份旅行计划书并写信告知他。不少于50个单词）
Suggested expressions:
interesting places; It takes ... to do; I hope ...
Dear Ben,
I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai,
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20．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点不占格）
假设你是Alice，你想领养上文的Sunday Special，请给收容所写一份信，说明你为什么想收养它，收养之后你会如何照顾它。
Reference phrases
feed him 3—4 times every day give him a bowl of water to drink
give him a blanket play with him
Dear officers,
I read Sunday Special’s letter and my heart was touched. I would like to adopt the puppy. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Alice
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