人教版（2019）必修 第三册Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations Writing课件(共13张PPT)

(共13张PPT)
Writing a festival experience
Unit 1
Festivals and Celebrations
How to write a narrative essay
Thinking:
该类作文以叙述事件为主，要通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把记叙文的六要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等交代清楚。其基本框架结构为：
1.开头——交代清楚事件的背景。
2.主体——主要叙述事件的发生、经过及结果。
3.结尾——呼应标题，发表感想、愿望等。
Step 1 Lead in
假如你是李华，请根据下面五幅图画写一篇100词左右的短文介绍庆祝春节的经过。
Step 2 Practise
一、审题
1.确定文体：本文为叙事类记叙文
2.确定人称：本文的主要人称为第一人称
3.时态：以一般过去时为主
二、构思
第一段：总评活动的感受；
第二段：介绍具体的节日活动；
第三段：表达自己的希望或愿望。
步骤一：审题构思——分析透彻是关键
1.充满乐趣 _______________
2.沉浸在……_______________
3.欣赏___________
4.燃放；引爆__________
5.庆祝___________
6.盼望_____________
full of fun
be drowned in
admire
set off
celebrate
look forward to
步骤二：精挑细选——核心词汇想周全
根据要求完成下列练习
1．我们聚集在一起，吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐。(完成句子)
We all _______________ and had a big dinner.
2．然后，春节联欢晚会开始了。(完成句子)
Then _____________________ began.
3．据报道春晚相当精彩。(一句多译)
①_________________________________________________
②_________________________________________________
gathered around
the Spring Festival Gala
It was reported that the Spring Festival Gala was wonderful.
The Spring Festival Gala was reported to be wonderful.
步骤三：遣词造句——由词扩句雏形现
4．许多明星都在舞台上露面，他们给我们带来了如此多的乐趣以至于我们都沉浸其中，欣赏他们的表演。(完成句子)
Many stars ___________________, bringing us so much pleasure that we were all drowned in admiring their performances.
5．午夜时分，我们燃放鞭炮庆祝新年的到来。(完成句子)
The midnight saw us ____________________ to celebrate the beginning of a new year.
6. 黎明时，我们盛装打扮，挨家挨户的拜年。(完成句子)
At dawn, we all __________ and paid a visit door to door.
setting off the fireworks
dressed up
turned up on the stage
7．用现在分词短语作伴随状语改写句1
______________________________________________
8．用全部倒装句改写句2
______________________________________________
9．用as引导的非限制性定语从句改写句3
______________________________________________
We all gathered around having a big dinner.
Then began the Spring Festival Gala.
As was reported, the Spring Festival Gala was wonderful.
步骤四：斟酌打磨——句式升级造亮点
The Spring Festival was really full of fun.
First, we all gathered around having a big dinner. Then began the Spring Festival Gala. Just as was reported, it was wonderful. Many stars turned up on the stage, bringing us so much pleasure that we were all drowned in admiring their performances. The midnight saw us setting off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. Then we ate dumplings. At dawn, we all dressed up and paid a visit door to door.
We all hope we will have a good luck in the following new year and we are all looking forward to realizing our all dreams.
步骤五：连句成文——逻辑衔接连成篇
Write a narrative essay, using the above five steps.
Step 3 Exercise
(2020 天津市静海一中高一12月学生学业能力调研)
假设你是李华，你的英国朋友John想了解中国的春节，请你给他写一封电子邮件介绍这一节日。
Dear John,
My classmates and I really enjoy your excellent teaching, but _______
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【参考答案】
It gives me great pleasure to introduce to you the traditional Chinese festival—the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar, it marked the beginning of the New Year. As is known to all, the Spring Festival plays an important role in Chinese traditional culture. With the development of society, people begin to realize that it is not only a festival, but also a precious treasure. As the Spring Festival approaches, families begin to sweep their houses, prepare delicious food, paste Spring Festival couplets and so on. On New Year’s eve, families get together to have a family reunion dinner and set off fireworks. What makes children excited is that they can get lucky money from their parents and grandparents, which means good luck for the coming year If possible, I look forward to your coming with us to celebrate a happy Spring Festival this year.
After class, try to write a narrative essay.
Step 4 Homework
Thank you!