人教版（2019）选择性必修 第一册Unit 4 Body Language Writing课件(共17张PPT)

(共17张PPT)
Unit 4　Body Language
Writing
说明文写作要点
说明文是阐述事物的特征、本质、性能、结构、用途或科学原理的一种文体。说明文的写作应该注意以下事项：??
1.语言简明扼要，通俗易懂，避免夸张华丽的辞藻，要把真实的一面展现在读者面前。
2.说明时一定要把握一个中心主题。说明文中细枝末节较多，但不能喧宾夺主。
3.说明的次序非常重要。合理的次序会使文章条理清楚，脉络明晰。因此，练习时可以尝试不同的次序进行写作，找出最合理的一种。
4.由于说明文写实性较强，有时难免会让人感到枯燥。因此，可以适当使用一些比喻、拟人等修辞手段，来增加文章的色彩。
Step 1 Lead in
Step 1 Lead in
基本框架结构
一般分为三部分：
开头——交代清楚要说明的事物。
主体——针对事物，全方位展开说明，介绍细节。
结尾——总结。
根据提示，写一篇100词左右的短文。
人们通常用口头语言交流，但在日常生活中，人们也会广泛地使用身体语言。你认为身体语言重要吗？日常生活中你会使用它与其他人进行交流吗？写一篇有关身体语言的短文，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1. 纵观人类历史，人们通常使用身体语言交流，身体语言像口头语言一样重要；
2. 当你的朋友伤心的时候，一个微笑或许比语言更有用；
3. 在嘈杂的环境下，使用身体语言交流会更加容易。
People usually communicate with others by spoken language. However, body language is widely used in our daily life. __________________________
Step 2 Practise
【写作思路】
（1）一审：明确写作体裁和主题
体裁：说明文 主题：介绍“微笑”
（2）二定：确定人称和时态
人称：第二、三人称 时态：主要使用一般现在时
（3）三明确：写作要点
1. 身体语言一样重要 2. 微笑很有力量；肢体语言的优势 3. 小结
（4）四分段：根据要点，本文可分为三段
一、导引；二、主题；三、总结
步骤一：审题构思——分析透彻是关键
一、审题
确定文体：本文为说明文
确定人称：本文的主要人称为第二、三人称
时态：以一般现在时为主
二、构思
第一段：引出说明对象：微笑
第二段：说明具体内容
第三段：总结
【写作步骤】
步骤二：精挑细选——核心词汇想周全
1. 和……交流___________________________________
2. 一种……形式___________________________________
3. 对……微笑___________________________________
4. 显然___________________________________
5.使某人振作起来___________________________________
6.比……好___________________________________
7. 总之___________________________________
comunicate with
a form of…
smile to…
be obvious
cheer sb. up
be better than…
in a word/in conclusion
步骤三：遣词造句——由词扩句雏形现
1.人们使用身体语言与其他人进行谈话。
People _________________ by body language.
2.微笑是一种重要的身体语言。
Smile is ___________________ body language.
3.当你遇到你朋友的时候，你可以对他/她微笑。
You may ________ your friend when you meet him or her.
4. 很显然，好久以来，人们也常常使用身体语言来和别人交流。
__________, for a long time, people have been using body language to communicate with others.
talk with others
an important form of
smile to
Obviously
5. 当你发现你的朋友不高兴的时候，你可以给他一个微笑让他振作起来。
When you find your friend is sad, you can give him a smile to _____________.
6. 在那个时候，微笑很好。
________________ the smile is very good.
7. 当你处在噪音中时， 你无法用语言使别人理解你。
When you are surrounded by noises, you cannot ________________________ by words.
8. 总之，身体语言和口头语言一样重要。
_________________, body language and spoken language are _______________.
cheer him up
make others understand you
At that moment
All in all/In a word
equally important
步骤四：斟酌打磨——句式升级造亮点
1．使用情态动词改写句一，使其更高级。
_________________________________________________________
2．用副词改写句二，并完善句意。
________________________________________________________
3．使用情态动词改写句三，使句意更流畅。
________________________________________________________
_______________
Everyone must have used body language to communicate with others.
Smiles are really one of the most important forms of body language.
You must have smiled to your friend when you meet him or her again
after a long time.
4. 用it作形式主语改写第四句，并完善句子。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5. 用高级词汇“沮丧的” 改写第五句。
______________________________________________________________________________
6. 用形容词的比较级完善句六。
___________________________________________________
It is obvious that throughout the history of mankind, people have been using body language to communicate with others frequently.
When you find your friend is depressed, you can give him a smile to cheer him or her up.
At that moment the smile is better than any words.
7. 用非谓语结构改写第七句。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.用as well as结构改写第八句。
______________________________________________________
When surrounded by noises, you cannot make yourself understood by words but you can use gestures to express your ideas clearly.
In conclusion, body language is as important as spoken language.
步骤五：连句成文——逻辑衔接连成篇
People usually communicate with others by spoken language. However, body language is widely used in our daily life. Everyone has definitely used body language to communicate with others. Smiles are really one of the most important forms of body language.
You must have smiled to your friend when you meet him or her again after a long time. And it is obvious that throughout the history of mankind, people have been using body language to communicate with others frequently. For example, when you find your friend is depressed, you give him a smile to cheer him or her up and at that moment the smile is better than any words. What’s more, when surrounded by noises, you cannot make yourself understood by words but you can use gestures to express your ideas clearly.
In conclusion, body language is as important as spoken language.
Step 3 Exercise
请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文介绍肢体语言“eye contact”。
要点：
1.人们更愿意相信直视他们的眼睛的人说的话；
2. 讲话时看着别人的眼睛会让你看起来很自信；
3. 讲话时看着别人的眼睛是尊重的标志。
注意:
1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数80左右。
【参考范文】
Eye contact is a form of body language, which is not only important but also necessary in communication.
To begin with, people prefer to believe the words of pople who look them in the eye. In addition, you will look very confident if you look others in the eye while talking. People listening to you will take what you say more seriously. Finally, making eye contact while talking with others is a sign of respect.
In a word, making eye contact when communicating with others is of great significance, which should be paid great attention to.
Step 4 Homework
After class, write out the passage and memorize it.
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