【查漏补缺】外研（新标准）版七年级下册英语强化训练：书面表达（含解析）
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【查漏补缺】外研（新标准）版七年级下册英语强化训练：书面表达（原卷+解析卷）
一、书面表达
1．假如你叫李磊，请根据下面提示以"My Mother's Past Life"为题介绍一下你母亲过去(童年时代)的生活。70词左右，可适当发挥。
提示:
1）母亲出生在一个小城市；
2）外祖父母是工人，他们的家在工厂附近；
3）家里只有一个客厅，两间小卧室；
4）家的附近有许多孩子，他们中的一些是母亲童年的朋友。
My Mother's Past Life
【答案】My Mother's Past Life
My mother was born in a small city. My grandparents were both workers. Their house was near the factory. Their house was small. There was only a small living room and two small bedrooms. There was no TV in the past. There were lots of children near their house. Some of them were my mother s childhood friends. My mother's life wasn't very comfortable at that time but she was still happy.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这篇作文要求根据提示，以李磊的身份，以 "My Mother's Past Life"为题介绍一下你母亲过去(童年时代)的生活。 时态用一般过去时，人称用第三人称。根据写作要点提示用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。写作中注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。
【点评】考查提纲作文。文章内容完整、充实，层次清晰，主次分明，文意连贯，表达流畅。高分亮点：短语：be born，in the past，at that time等；句型： There was only a small living room and two small bedrooms. （there be结构）； My mother's life wasn't very comfortable at that time but she was still happy. （并列句）。
2．在每个人的生活中，总会有些特别的日子。请根据所给题目 "A special
day" 写一篇英语短文，介绍你特别的一天。
要求：1）语言流畅，书写规范、卷面整洁，不少于60词；
2）文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
A
special day
【答案】A special day
It was my mother's birthday. My father and I wanted to give her a surprise.
In the morning, we went to the shop and bought a big cake. Then we went to the market and bought some food that my mother liked best. After getting home, we began to prepare for my mother's birthday. Father went into the kitchen to prepare a big meal. I went into my room to make a birthday card.
My mother was seated at the table and I showed her my present. She looked at it and smiled. My mother looked at my father and me. She was moved to tears.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇命题作文，话题为特殊的一天。写作时，短文要以一般过去时进行写作，人称代词以第一人称和第三人称为主，要确保要点齐全，句子通顺，无语法错误。
【点评】本篇文章写作要点齐全，时态和人称代词使用恰当，无语法错误，而且使用了一些亮点词汇，例如：get home到家；go into进入；look at看等；也使用了一些高端句型，例如： Then we went to the market and bought some food that my mother liked best.（that引导的定语从句）等。
3．Problems 和worries
在生活中是很正常的。请介绍一件发生在你身上的、让你担忧或焦虑的事，包括事情的经过，如何解决的，你的感想或别人的建议等。
要求：
1）语言正确，语句通顺，不低于80个词，可适当发挥。
2）不要出现真实的学校、班级和姓名。
【答案】略
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，要求介绍一件发生在你身上的、让你担忧或焦虑的事，内容主要包括事情的经过，如何解决的，自己的感想或别人的建议。根据所给材料，可知文章时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。
【点评】写作时注意恰当地运用连词、副词、固定搭配等，保持语句的通顺和上下文的连贯。可能用到的用法有：used to be；there be句型；such as；ask sb for help；how to do；be able to do sth；help sb do sth；deal with；be worried about；however等。
4．假设你的第一个笔友（penfriend）是 Lingling，请根据下面的信息提示写一篇80词左右的短文，向大家介绍一下她。(可适当发挥)
Lingling
Born Beijing; 2005
Study In the past: Beijing Primary School Now: Beijing No 4 Middle School
Character（性格） kind
Hobby Swim; draw; play the piano
Dream scientist
【答案】暂未更新
【知识点】材料作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍笔友玲玲的一些信息，注意时态是一般过去时、一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍玲玲的生日、学习情况；然后介绍性格和爱好；最后介绍梦想。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】写作时作文内容要全面，注意运用好词好句，如：be born；in the past；be kind to；like doing sth.；enjoy doing sth. be interested in；be good at；want to do；plan to do等。be going to do和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如： I'm going to practice it every day. I think I am able to achieve my dream one day. 等。连词first，next，besides，finally，and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
5．轻松愉快的暑假生活即将开始，假如你是大明，你的美国网友Mike来信询问你将如何有意义地度过一个美好的暑假。请根据下列要点提示，就你的暑假打算给他发一封不少于70个词的电子邮件。
要点:
1）坚持运动，锻炼身体；
2）看书，看名著；
3）做家务；
4）旅游观光；
5）看望好友。
注意：不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
提示短语: do sports, famous
work(名著), go sightseeing, do housework，especially (特别是)， visit
friends
Dear Mike,
How
are you I'm glad to receive your letter.
Please
write soon.
Yours,
Daming
【答案】暂未更新
【知识点】提纲作文；材料作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲类应用文写作。注意要点齐全，不能遗漏， 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 主要以第一人称和一般将来时叙述将如何有意义地度过一个美好的暑假。要点如下： 坚持运动，锻炼身体；看书，看名著；做家务；旅游观光；看望好友。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【点评】文章中可以使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。plan to do sth计划做某事；in addition另外，还有；need to do sth需要做某事。Swimming is my favourite sport in the summer. （动名词作主语）If it is not too hot, I plan to go to the beach for a week to enjoy the sun and the sea. （if引导的条件状语从句）In addition, because I have a lot of homework to do, I need to finish them by the end of the holiday. （because引导的原因状语从句）还运用了and，but , also，等使上下文衔接的更好。
6．你叫比尔，来自英国，你的朋友张华受到一个英国朋友的邀请去家中做客，她来信向你询问英国人的一些餐桌礼仪。请你根据表格的内容,给她回一封信，介绍一些应该做的事情和不应该做的事情。
Dos Don'ts
When
to come(什么时候去) 10
minutes late too
early or half an hour late
How
to greet them(如何向他们打招呼) shake
hands kiss
Eat(吃) all
the things on your plate leave
something
When
to leave(什么时候离开) one
hour after dinner too
long
Thank—you note(感谢信) the
next day
要求:1）短文要包含所给的提示信息,可适当发挥。
2）短文开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear
Zhang Hua,
I'm happy to hear from you. I'd like to tell
you something about how to be a guest in an English family.
【答案】Dear Zhang Hua,
I'm happy to hear from you. I'd like to
tell you something about how to be a guest in an English family. First, arrive
at the friend's family ten minutes late. If you come earlier, they may feel
uncomfortable. But if you come half an hour late, please say sorry to them.
Second, you can shake hands with them, and you shouldn't kiss. Third, eat up
all the food on your plate. Leaving things on your plate is impolite. Then you
should leave one hour after dinner. Don't stay too long. Last, you'd better
write a thank—you note the next day.
I'm looking forward to your letter.
Love,
Bill
【知识点】应用文写作；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲式作文。请以你比尔的名义向张华介绍英国的餐桌礼仪。礼仪内容要根据表格内容去写，礼仪内容包括赴宴的时间、如何打招呼，怎么吃，什么时候离开，回家之后别忘了写一封感谢信。等等，这是一封书信，要注意信的格式，时态使用一般现在时，人称使用第二人称。
【点评】文章按照提示内容详细介绍了英国的餐桌礼仪，没有遗漏。除了文章内容之外，短文中的词汇运用也不错。比如：be happy to do sth.高兴做某事；would like to do想要做某事；arrive at到达；say sorry to sb.向某人道歉；eat up吃光等等，除了词汇之外，句式也很丰富。比如： I'd like to tell you something about how to be a guest in an English family. 这是一个简化了的宾语从句。 If you come earlier, they may feel uncomfortable. 这是一个条件状语从句。总体上看内容详细，词汇丰富，句式多样，是一篇上乘之作。
7．假如你是Mark，请根据下面的表格信息，介绍一下你家庭成员的情况。
name now usually last
Sunday
I play
the piano do
homework take
a walk
father sit
on the chair watch
TV run
in the park
mother listen
to music clean
the house go
shopping
brother write
a letter play
games fly
a kite
注意：1）文中不可出现真实的学校和姓名；2）可根据要点适当发挥；3）词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Now
it's Sunday morning. I
【答案】 Now it's Sunday morning. I am playing the piano. But I usually do homework at home. And last Sunday I took a walk with my friends. My father is sitting on the chair and reading books. But he usually watches TV on the sofa. Last Sunday he ran in the park. My mother is listening to music. But she usually cleans the house. And I often help her. And last Sunday she went shopping with my aunt. Look, he is my brother. He is writing a letter to his best friend, Jack. But he usually plays games with Jack. And last Sunday he flew a kite in the park. I love my family.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这篇书面表达主要介绍“我”和家人现在在做什么，通常喜欢做什么以及上周六做了什么。这是篇记叙文。在写作时，需要结合所给的要点，一家人分别在什么时间做了，语言方面首先要确定时态一般过去时，第一人称，选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体；规范性方面，检查单词，标点的准确；其次要注意格式的正确；最后一定要保证次数要符合要求。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整,条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务，时态运用丰富适当，例如 I am playing the piano 现在进行时， I usually do homework at home 一般现在时， last Sunday I took a walk with my friends 一般过去时等，表现出很好的语言驾驭能力。
8．假如你生活在杭州，上个周末你的好友Peter来杭州看望你，你们一并游览了杭州。请根据下面的活动写一篇英语短文，去参加《空中英语》杂志的征文比赛。
时间 周六 周日
上午 参观了杭州博物馆，了解了杭州的历史 参观了动物园，拍照
下午 西湖划船；购物 返程
要求：①文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
②词数60-80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
③文章须包含所给的要点，可适当发挥；
④文章条理清楚，语句通顺，书写端正。
参考词汇：西湖the West Lake
My friend Peter came to visit me last weekend.
【答案】 My friend Peter came to visit me last weekend. I showed him around Hangzhou.On Saturday morning we visit the Hangzhou museum to learn about the history of Hangzhou.We saw many historic things there. In the afternoon we went to the West Lake.It is an interesting place. Every years millions of people around the world come to visit it. We went boating on the lake. And then we did some shopping. On Sunday morning we went to the zoo,we saw many different kinds of animals, and we took many photos and we return home in the afternoon.Although we were tired, we were very happy.
【知识点】材料作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文写作，句子的时态使用一般过去时，用第一人称，在写作时语句要通顺，语言要流畅。上下文的层次要清楚。在文章中不能出现语法和拼写错误。文章需要包含题目所给的内容，先解释故事背景，好友Peter来看望我，再介绍周六和周日上午以及下午分别做了什么事情，如参观博物馆西湖、和动物园，购物等，最后写一下自己的感受。
【点评】这篇短文描写了和朋友去杭州参观游玩的过程。文章的条理清楚，上下文的逻辑关系合理，文章使用了固定短语，例如last weekend，show...around...，in the afternoon，millions of，an interesting place，go boating，do some shopping，different kinds of，take photos，the West Lake，learn about 等。文章句式结构简单，很容易理解，是一篇优秀的文章。
9．请根据下表中的提示信息，以“My
Dream School”为题，写一篇短文，描述你心中的理想学校。
Campus Teachers &
classmates In class After class
large, beautiful, …… kind, friendly, …… choose, favourite subjects, …… a little homework, ……
注意： 1）表中信息仅供参考，可以根据自己的想法适当发挥；
2）不得出现真实的学校、班级和人名；
3）词数： 80左右。
My Dream School
【答案】My Dream School
Everyone has a dream school in his heart. So
do I. Today let me share something about my dream school with you.
My
dream school will be big and beautiful. Everyone will have a computer in the
classroom, so we can get information from the Internet. The teachers won't use
chalk to write. There will be special pens for them. And the teachers will be
very kind and friendly. Guess what! They will even play with us. In class, we
will be able to choose our favourite subjects. After class, we will have less homework
so we'll have more free time. Everyone is friendly and we can easily get on
well with each other.
My
dream school is so good and I'm sure my dream will come true.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇说明文写作题，题目为My Dream School，通过分析可知时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称复数和第一人称复数为主。文章可以先介绍每个人都有自己理想的学校。然后展开介绍自己心目中理想学校的样子，最后总结一下，坚信自己的理想会实现。
【点评】在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，同时注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构。造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。为了使文章更通顺完整，需要用上适当的连接词，尽力使用自己熟悉单词句式，确保正确率。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语、较高级的语言，文章可以使用的短语如：Everyone has…in his heart，share…with，get…from，get on well with, I'm sure…will come true等等，且使用了连接词and及there be句型等使文章增色不少。文章层次清楚，内容饱满，表达流畅。
10．现在有许多新的购物方式，网上购物是其中的一种。越来越多的人熟悉和喜欢网购，但是网购有利有弊。请根据下面提供的信息用英语以"Online shopping"为题写一篇短 文，描述网购的优点和缺点,并谈谈自己的看法。
优点：1）可以在任何时间购物。
2）方便比较同类产品的价格，可以省钱。
3）无论何时何地都可以收到所购物品。
缺点：1）网上付款有时不安全。
2）看不到实物，也不能试穿衣服。
要求：1）不要逐字翻译，可以自由发挥。
2）字母书写规范，卷面整洁。词数80词左右。
【答案】Online shopping
There are many new ways of shipping, and
online shopping in one of them.
Online
shopping has several advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to
shop on the Internet you only need computer and a mouse. Third, you can compare the prices of the same product and
save money. You can also receive it in anywhere in the world at any lime! But
shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Pitying over the Internet
isn't always safe. You can't see the product or try the clothes on.
I
think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go
to the shops any more, because you'll be able to buy almost anything on the
internet.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本题要求以Online shopping为题写一篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。根据要求及要点提示，短文可以从“网购的优点”、“网购的缺点”、“自己的看法”三个方面进行写作。短文提示要点较多，要注意表达的条理性。短文用一般现在时态，写作时要注意语句连贯，表达准确。
【点评】这是一篇不错的短文，从新购物方式着笔，引出“网购”。过渡自然。第二段讲述网购的优点及其缺点、最后谈论自己的看法。层次清楚，条理分明。第二段里用first, second, third等等罗列各要点，清楚明了；还运用了两个动名词短语作主语，语言简捷、精炼。最后一段用展望未来的方式表达自己的看法，方式新颖独特。
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【查漏补缺】外研（新标准）版七年级下册英语强化训练：书面表达（原卷+解析卷）
一、书面表达
1．假如你叫李磊，请根据下面提示以"My Mother's Past Life"为题介绍一下你母亲过去(童年时代)的生活。70词左右，可适当发挥。
提示:
1）母亲出生在一个小城市；
2）外祖父母是工人，他们的家在工厂附近；
3）家里只有一个客厅，两间小卧室；
4）家的附近有许多孩子，他们中的一些是母亲童年的朋友。
My Mother's Past Life
【答案】My Mother's Past Life
My mother was born in a small city. My grandparents were both workers. Their house was near the factory. Their house was small. There was only a small living room and two small bedrooms. There was no TV in the past. There were lots of children near their house. Some of them were my mother s childhood friends. My mother's life wasn't very comfortable at that time but she was still happy.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这篇作文要求根据提示，以李磊的身份，以 "My Mother's Past Life"为题介绍一下你母亲过去(童年时代)的生活。 时态用一般过去时，人称用第三人称。根据写作要点提示用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。写作中注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。
【点评】考查提纲作文。文章内容完整、充实，层次清晰，主次分明，文意连贯，表达流畅。高分亮点：短语：be born，in the past，at that time等；句型： There was only a small living room and two small bedrooms. （there be结构）； My mother's life wasn't very comfortable at that time but she was still happy. （并列句）。
2．在每个人的生活中，总会有些特别的日子。请根据所给题目 "A special
day" 写一篇英语短文，介绍你特别的一天。
要求：1）语言流畅，书写规范、卷面整洁，不少于60词；
2）文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
A
special day
【答案】A special day
It was my mother's birthday. My father and I wanted to give her a surprise.
In the morning, we went to the shop and bought a big cake. Then we went to the market and bought some food that my mother liked best. After getting home, we began to prepare for my mother's birthday. Father went into the kitchen to prepare a big meal. I went into my room to make a birthday card.
My mother was seated at the table and I showed her my present. She looked at it and smiled. My mother looked at my father and me. She was moved to tears.
【知识点】命题作文
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇命题作文，话题为特殊的一天。写作时，短文要以一般过去时进行写作，人称代词以第一人称和第三人称为主，要确保要点齐全，句子通顺，无语法错误。
【点评】本篇文章写作要点齐全，时态和人称代词使用恰当，无语法错误，而且使用了一些亮点词汇，例如：get home到家；go into进入；look at看等；也使用了一些高端句型，例如： Then we went to the market and bought some food that my mother liked best.（that引导的定语从句）等。
3．Problems 和worries
在生活中是很正常的。请介绍一件发生在你身上的、让你担忧或焦虑的事，包括事情的经过，如何解决的，你的感想或别人的建议等。
要求：
1）语言正确，语句通顺，不低于80个词，可适当发挥。
2）不要出现真实的学校、班级和姓名。
【答案】略
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，要求介绍一件发生在你身上的、让你担忧或焦虑的事，内容主要包括事情的经过，如何解决的，自己的感想或别人的建议。根据所给材料，可知文章时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。
【点评】写作时注意恰当地运用连词、副词、固定搭配等，保持语句的通顺和上下文的连贯。可能用到的用法有：used to be；there be句型；such as；ask sb for help；how to do；be able to do sth；help sb do sth；deal with；be worried about；however等。
4．假设你的第一个笔友（penfriend）是 Lingling，请根据下面的信息提示写一篇80词左右的短文，向大家介绍一下她。(可适当发挥)
Lingling
Born Beijing; 2005
Study In the past: Beijing Primary School Now: Beijing No 4 Middle School
Character（性格） kind
Hobby Swim; draw; play the piano
Dream scientist
【答案】暂未更新
【知识点】材料作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍笔友玲玲的一些信息，注意时态是一般过去时、一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍玲玲的生日、学习情况；然后介绍性格和爱好；最后介绍梦想。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】写作时作文内容要全面，注意运用好词好句，如：be born；in the past；be kind to；like doing sth.；enjoy doing sth. be interested in；be good at；want to do；plan to do等。be going to do和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如： I'm going to practice it every day. I think I am able to achieve my dream one day. 等。连词first，next，besides，finally，and的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
5．轻松愉快的暑假生活即将开始，假如你是大明，你的美国网友Mike来信询问你将如何有意义地度过一个美好的暑假。请根据下列要点提示，就你的暑假打算给他发一封不少于70个词的电子邮件。
要点:
1）坚持运动，锻炼身体；
2）看书，看名著；
3）做家务；
4）旅游观光；
5）看望好友。
注意：不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
提示短语: do sports, famous
work(名著), go sightseeing, do housework，especially (特别是)， visit
friends
Dear Mike,
How
are you I'm glad to receive your letter.
Please
write soon.
Yours,
Daming
【答案】暂未更新
【知识点】提纲作文；材料作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲类应用文写作。注意要点齐全，不能遗漏， 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 主要以第一人称和一般将来时叙述将如何有意义地度过一个美好的暑假。要点如下： 坚持运动，锻炼身体；看书，看名著；做家务；旅游观光；看望好友。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【点评】文章中可以使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。plan to do sth计划做某事；in addition另外，还有；need to do sth需要做某事。Swimming is my favourite sport in the summer. （动名词作主语）If it is not too hot, I plan to go to the beach for a week to enjoy the sun and the sea. （if引导的条件状语从句）In addition, because I have a lot of homework to do, I need to finish them by the end of the holiday. （because引导的原因状语从句）还运用了and，but , also，等使上下文衔接的更好。
6．你叫比尔，来自英国，你的朋友张华受到一个英国朋友的邀请去家中做客，她来信向你询问英国人的一些餐桌礼仪。请你根据表格的内容,给她回一封信，介绍一些应该做的事情和不应该做的事情。
Dos Don'ts
When
to come(什么时候去) 10
minutes late too
early or half an hour late
How
to greet them(如何向他们打招呼) shake
hands kiss
Eat(吃) all
the things on your plate leave
something
When
to leave(什么时候离开) one
hour after dinner too
long
Thank—you note(感谢信) the
next day
要求:1）短文要包含所给的提示信息,可适当发挥。
2）短文开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear
Zhang Hua,
I'm happy to hear from you. I'd like to tell
you something about how to be a guest in an English family.
【答案】Dear Zhang Hua,
I'm happy to hear from you. I'd like to
tell you something about how to be a guest in an English family. First, arrive
at the friend's family ten minutes late. If you come earlier, they may feel
uncomfortable. But if you come half an hour late, please say sorry to them.
Second, you can shake hands with them, and you shouldn't kiss. Third, eat up
all the food on your plate. Leaving things on your plate is impolite. Then you
should leave one hour after dinner. Don't stay too long. Last, you'd better
write a thank—you note the next day.
I'm looking forward to your letter.
Love,
Bill
【知识点】应用文写作；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲式作文。请以你比尔的名义向张华介绍英国的餐桌礼仪。礼仪内容要根据表格内容去写，礼仪内容包括赴宴的时间、如何打招呼，怎么吃，什么时候离开，回家之后别忘了写一封感谢信。等等，这是一封书信，要注意信的格式，时态使用一般现在时，人称使用第二人称。
【点评】文章按照提示内容详细介绍了英国的餐桌礼仪，没有遗漏。除了文章内容之外，短文中的词汇运用也不错。比如：be happy to do sth.高兴做某事；would like to do想要做某事；arrive at到达；say sorry to sb.向某人道歉；eat up吃光等等，除了词汇之外，句式也很丰富。比如： I'd like to tell you something about how to be a guest in an English family. 这是一个简化了的宾语从句。 If you come earlier, they may feel uncomfortable. 这是一个条件状语从句。总体上看内容详细，词汇丰富，句式多样，是一篇上乘之作。
7．假如你是Mark，请根据下面的表格信息，介绍一下你家庭成员的情况。
name now usually last
Sunday
I play
the piano do
homework take
a walk
father sit
on the chair watch
TV run
in the park
mother listen
to music clean
the house go
shopping
brother write
a letter play
games fly
a kite
注意：1）文中不可出现真实的学校和姓名；2）可根据要点适当发挥；3）词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Now
it's Sunday morning. I
【答案】 Now it's Sunday morning. I am playing the piano. But I usually do homework at home. And last Sunday I took a walk with my friends. My father is sitting on the chair and reading books. But he usually watches TV on the sofa. Last Sunday he ran in the park. My mother is listening to music. But she usually cleans the house. And I often help her. And last Sunday she went shopping with my aunt. Look, he is my brother. He is writing a letter to his best friend, Jack. But he usually plays games with Jack. And last Sunday he flew a kite in the park. I love my family.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这篇书面表达主要介绍“我”和家人现在在做什么，通常喜欢做什么以及上周六做了什么。这是篇记叙文。在写作时，需要结合所给的要点，一家人分别在什么时间做了，语言方面首先要确定时态一般过去时，第一人称，选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体；规范性方面，检查单词，标点的准确；其次要注意格式的正确；最后一定要保证次数要符合要求。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整,条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务，时态运用丰富适当，例如 I am playing the piano 现在进行时， I usually do homework at home 一般现在时， last Sunday I took a walk with my friends 一般过去时等，表现出很好的语言驾驭能力。
8．假如你生活在杭州，上个周末你的好友Peter来杭州看望你，你们一并游览了杭州。请根据下面的活动写一篇英语短文，去参加《空中英语》杂志的征文比赛。
时间 周六 周日
上午 参观了杭州博物馆，了解了杭州的历史 参观了动物园，拍照
下午 西湖划船；购物 返程
要求：①文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
②词数60-80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
③文章须包含所给的要点，可适当发挥；
④文章条理清楚，语句通顺，书写端正。
参考词汇：西湖the West Lake
My friend Peter came to visit me last weekend.
【答案】 My friend Peter came to visit me last weekend. I showed him around Hangzhou.On Saturday morning we visit the Hangzhou museum to learn about the history of Hangzhou.We saw many historic things there. In the afternoon we went to the West Lake.It is an interesting place. Every years millions of people around the world come to visit it. We went boating on the lake. And then we did some shopping. On Sunday morning we went to the zoo,we saw many different kinds of animals, and we took many photos and we return home in the afternoon.Although we were tired, we were very happy.
【知识点】材料作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文写作，句子的时态使用一般过去时，用第一人称，在写作时语句要通顺，语言要流畅。上下文的层次要清楚。在文章中不能出现语法和拼写错误。文章需要包含题目所给的内容，先解释故事背景，好友Peter来看望我，再介绍周六和周日上午以及下午分别做了什么事情，如参观博物馆西湖、和动物园，购物等，最后写一下自己的感受。
【点评】这篇短文描写了和朋友去杭州参观游玩的过程。文章的条理清楚，上下文的逻辑关系合理，文章使用了固定短语，例如last weekend，show...around...，in the afternoon，millions of，an interesting place，go boating，do some shopping，different kinds of，take photos，the West Lake，learn about 等。文章句式结构简单，很容易理解，是一篇优秀的文章。
9．请根据下表中的提示信息，以“My
Dream School”为题，写一篇短文，描述你心中的理想学校。
Campus Teachers &
classmates In class After class
large, beautiful, …… kind, friendly, …… choose, favourite subjects, …… a little homework, ……
注意： 1）表中信息仅供参考，可以根据自己的想法适当发挥；
2）不得出现真实的学校、班级和人名；
3）词数： 80左右。
My Dream School
【答案】My Dream School
Everyone has a dream school in his heart. So
do I. Today let me share something about my dream school with you.
My
dream school will be big and beautiful. Everyone will have a computer in the
classroom, so we can get information from the Internet. The teachers won't use
chalk to write. There will be special pens for them. And the teachers will be
very kind and friendly. Guess what! They will even play with us. In class, we
will be able to choose our favourite subjects. After class, we will have less homework
so we'll have more free time. Everyone is friendly and we can easily get on
well with each other.
My
dream school is so good and I'm sure my dream will come true.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇说明文写作题，题目为My Dream School，通过分析可知时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称复数和第一人称复数为主。文章可以先介绍每个人都有自己理想的学校。然后展开介绍自己心目中理想学校的样子，最后总结一下，坚信自己的理想会实现。
【点评】在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，同时注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构。造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。为了使文章更通顺完整，需要用上适当的连接词，尽力使用自己熟悉单词句式，确保正确率。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语、较高级的语言，文章可以使用的短语如：Everyone has…in his heart，share…with，get…from，get on well with, I'm sure…will come true等等，且使用了连接词and及there be句型等使文章增色不少。文章层次清楚，内容饱满，表达流畅。
10．现在有许多新的购物方式，网上购物是其中的一种。越来越多的人熟悉和喜欢网购，但是网购有利有弊。请根据下面提供的信息用英语以"Online shopping"为题写一篇短 文，描述网购的优点和缺点,并谈谈自己的看法。
优点：1）可以在任何时间购物。
2）方便比较同类产品的价格，可以省钱。
3）无论何时何地都可以收到所购物品。
缺点：1）网上付款有时不安全。
2）看不到实物，也不能试穿衣服。
要求：1）不要逐字翻译，可以自由发挥。
2）字母书写规范，卷面整洁。词数80词左右。
【答案】Online shopping
There are many new ways of shipping, and
online shopping in one of them.
Online
shopping has several advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to
shop on the Internet you only need computer and a mouse. Third, you can compare the prices of the same product and
save money. You can also receive it in anywhere in the world at any lime! But
shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Pitying over the Internet
isn't always safe. You can't see the product or try the clothes on.
I
think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go
to the shops any more, because you'll be able to buy almost anything on the
internet.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本题要求以Online shopping为题写一篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。根据要求及要点提示，短文可以从“网购的优点”、“网购的缺点”、“自己的看法”三个方面进行写作。短文提示要点较多，要注意表达的条理性。短文用一般现在时态，写作时要注意语句连贯，表达准确。
【点评】这是一篇不错的短文，从新购物方式着笔，引出“网购”。过渡自然。第二段讲述网购的优点及其缺点、最后谈论自己的看法。层次清楚，条理分明。第二段里用first, second, third等等罗列各要点，清楚明了；还运用了两个动名词短语作主语，语言简捷、精炼。最后一段用展望未来的方式表达自己的看法，方式新颖独特。
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