期末复习作文重点话题好词好句范文+课件（98张PPT）2022-2023学年牛津深圳版英语七年级下册

(共98张PPT)
七下作文评讲
1. 审题：定时态、人称
英语作文高分步骤
2. 圈要点、防遗漏。要点是给分的重要标准。为防止遗漏要点，建议同学们在草稿纸上列出各个要点。
3. 写提纲：为写作做好准备。根据作文要点，将句型、关键词写出，形成提纲。
4. 写全文：
1）开门见山，紧扣主题 。
2）语言正确，句型多样。
3）过渡自然，表达无误。
4）书写工整，字数达标。
Writing Checklist 写作要求
Handwriting书写
Structure结构
Logic逻辑
Sentences 句型
Words词汇
Grammar 语法
…
Tidy and beautiful 书写工整，无涂改
3-4 paragraphs 分段、空格
Conjunctions 连接词
Different sentence structures 句型多样
Rich word choices 词汇丰富、准确
None or few grammar mistakes
没有或很少语法错误（动词三单、时态；名词单复数等）
Spelling拼写、punctuation标点…
话题：人物描写
【写作指导】
本次书面表达要求同学们根据内容提示对人物进行描述，介绍自己最好的朋友。写作时主要介绍人物的年龄、外貌、爱好、梦想等。时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。写作完成之后，要通读全文，检查语法是否正确、要点是否齐全。
标题、开头（已给出）：
My best friend
Hello, everyone. Today I want to talk about my best friend.
第二段（逐个写作文要点：外貌、最喜欢的食物、爱好、梦想）：
基本信息：姓名、年龄。
His/her name is xxx. He/She is xx years old.
逐个写作文要点：外貌、最喜欢的食物、爱好、梦想：
外貌：他又瘦又高，有着一头黑色短发。他经常戴着一副眼镜。
He is tall and thin with short black hair.
He often wears glasses.
逐个写作文要点：外貌、最喜欢的食物、爱好、梦想：
喜欢的食物：他最喜欢的食物是汉堡、牛肉和面条。
His favourite food is hamburgers, beef and noodles.
逐个写作文要点：外貌、最喜欢的食物、爱好、梦想：
爱好：在空闲时间，他喜欢弹钢琴、打篮球。
In his free time, he enjoys playing the piano and playing basketball.
逐个写作文要点：外貌、最喜欢的食物、爱好、梦想：
梦想：他最喜欢的科目是体育。他想要将来成为一名体育老师。
His favourite subject is P.E. He wants to be a P.E. teacher in the future.
补充内容：为什么喜欢这个朋友；细节（用课文原句）：
I like him because he is very humorous. He often makes me laugh.
我喜欢他的原因是他非常幽默。他经常逗我笑。
此外，他经常鼓励我、给我支持。我希望我们能永远是朋友。
What’s more, he often encourages me and gives me support. I hope we will always remain friends.
The reason why I like him is that he is very humorous. He often makes me laugh.
My best friend
Hello, everyone. Today I want to talk about my best friend. His name is Rockie.
Rockie is 14 years old. He is tall and thin with short black hair. He often wears glasses. His favourite food is hamburgers, beef and noodles.
In his free time, he enjoys playing the piano and playing basketball. His favorite subject is P.E. and he wants to be a P.E. teacher in the future. The reason why I like him is that he is very humorous. He often makes me laugh. What’s more, he often encourages me and gives me support. I hope we will always remain friends.
That’s all. Thank you.
Ta叫…
又高又瘦
有着黑色短发
他中等身高
她经常戴眼镜
她最喜欢的食物是…
在她有空时
喜欢弹钢琴
最喜欢的科目
她将来想要成为一名作家
我喜欢她的原因是…
勤勉的
幽默的
His/Her name is…
tall and thin
with short black hair
He is of medium height.
He often wears a pair of glasses.
Her favourite food is…
In her free time, …
like/love/enjoy/be fond of playing the piano
favourite subject
She wants to be a writer in the future.
The reason why I like her is that…
hard-working
humorous
耐心的
乐于助人的
她经常讲笑话逗我笑
她总是鼓励我、给我支持。
我希望我们永远是朋友
patient
helpful
She often tells me jokes to make me laugh.
She always encourages me and gives me support.
I hope that we will always remain friends.
话题：旅游、介绍某地
【写作指导】
本次书面表达要求描写一个自己想去的地方。写作前，先要围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，注意不要遗漏内容。写作时要确定句子的人称、时态，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
开头（已给出一部分，可补充）：
The place I’d like to visit is Paris, France.
第二段（写出表格中其他要点）：
It is not only a famous city, but also a fashion center.
I’d like to visit Paris. The reasons are as follows(如下). 原因如下。
首先，巴黎充满了浪漫和自由。(romance and freedom)
First of all, Paris is full of romance and freedom.
它是一个有着悠久历史的城市。(a long history)
It is a city with a long history.
此外，那里有多种多样的文化习俗。(cultures and customs)
What’s more, there are different kinds of cultures and customs.
在巴黎，你能随时随地看到打扮漂亮的人。(beautiful clothes)
In Paris, you can see people in beautiful clothes anytime and anywhere.
众所周知，巴黎有很多名胜古迹。(place of interest) 比如，人们可以去游览埃菲尔铁塔、卢浮宫。巴黎还因塞纳河而闻名。
We all know that there are many famous places of interest in Paris. For example, people can visit the Eiffel Tower and the Louvre Museum. Paris is also famous for the Seine.
【自己补充内容】
More importantly, I hear that people in Paris are friendly and passionate.
更重要的是，我听说巴黎的人们都友好热情。
第二段（写出表格中所有内容）：
第三段（结尾1-2句，表达期待/邀请）：
我等不及要去巴黎玩了！
I can’t wait to visit Paris!
巴黎有适合每个人的东西，为什么不今年就去法国玩呢？
Paris has something for everyone, so why not visit Paris this year
不但…而且
原因如下
充满…
多种多样的
随时随地
名胜古迹
因…闻名
更重要的是
热情、友好
等不及去做某事
为什么不做某事呢？
not only… but also
The reasons are as follows.
be full of
different kinds of
anytime and anywhere
famous places of interest
be famous for
More importantly,
passionate, friendly
can’t wait to do…
Why not do…
【范文二】
The place I’d like to visit most is Paris, France. As we all know (众所周知), Paris is a very famous city with a long history. It always makes us think of (想到) romance and freedom.
As the capital of France, Paris has many places of interest for visitors to see. I can learn about (了解) different cultures and customs there and open up my eyes to the outside world(开拓眼界). I’d like to see the Eiffel Tower, the Louvre Museum and the Seine.
Paris is also one of the most famous fashion cities in the world. We can buy beautiful clothes if we have enough money.
假设你是李明，你的笔友Peter对中国很感兴趣，请你根据以下要点给他写信，简单介绍我们的国家（80词左右）。
提示：
中国的地理位置。
地大物博，名胜古迹，如北京长城、杭州西湖等。
中国的各色美食。
中国的节日。
【写作指导】
书写格式为信件。
时态应为一般现在时。
1. 分段 2. 每段内容（要点）3. 补充细节（80词）
好词好句：
中国位于世界的东方。
中国是一个有着悠久历史的国家。
因其名胜古迹而著名，例如北京长城、杭州西湖。
如果你喜欢自然美景的话，你会爱上中国。
China lies in the east of the world.
China is a country with a long history
If you love natural beauty, you will love China.
It’s well-known for its places of interest, such as the Great Wall in Beijing and the West Lake in Hangzhou.
好词好句：
中国有各种各样的美食，比如烤鸭、火锅。
和朋友一起吃火锅是很棒的。（it is adj. to do…）
人们在中国还庆祝许多不同的节日。
There are all kinds of delicious food in China, such as the Beijing Roast Duck and hot pot.
It is wonderful to eat hot pot with our friends.
People in China also celebrate many different festivals.
好词好句：
比如，在春节期间，人们聚在一起吃大餐、看春晚。
孩子们能收到许多红包。他们多么高兴啊！
For example, during the Spring Festival, people get together to have a big meal and watch the Spring Festival Gala.
Children can receive a lot of red packets. How happy they are!
7. 中国有每个人想要的东西，所以为什么不今年就来游览中国呢？
China has something for everyone, so why not visit China this year
特别提醒：
1. 灵活化用课文原句
2. 用自己会写的短语、句子来表达要点【主要意思表达清楚即可，不必逐字翻译】
3. 牢记课内词汇、课文，多积累课外字词。
4. 注意格式（信件/邮件）
开头：我听说你对中国很感兴趣，现在让我来给你介绍一下中国吧。
I hear that you are very interested in China. Now let me introduce China to you.
Dear Peter,
I hear that(我听说) you are very interested (对…非常感兴趣) in China. Now let me (让我) introduce China to you (给你介绍中国).
China lies/is located in the east of the world. It is a country with a long history, and it’s well-known for (因…闻名) its famous places of interest, such as the Great Wall in Beijing and the West Lake in Hangzhou. If you love natural beauty, you will love China.
What’s more, there are all kinds of (各种各样的)delicious food in China, such as the Beijing Roast Duck and hot pot. It is wonderful to eat hot pot with our friends. People in China also celebrate many different festivals. For example (例如), during the Spring Festival, people get together (聚在一起) to have a big meal (吃大餐) and watch the Spring Festival Gala (看春晚). Children can receive a lot of red packets (收很多红包). How happy they are!
China has something for everyone, so why not visit China this year
我听说
对…非常感兴趣
让我给你介绍中国
位于…东方
因…闻名
例如
如果你…你就会
此外
各种各样的
聚在一起
吃大餐
看春晚
I hear that…
be very interested in…
Let me introduce China to you.
lie in the east of/be located in the east of
be famous/well-known for
such as/for example
If you…, you will…
What’s more = Besides = In addition
all kinds of
get together
have a big meal
watch the Spring Festival Gala
收很多红包
为什么不…
receive a lot of red packets
why not…
话题：描写喜爱的动物
动物是人类忠实的好朋友，它们活泼可爱，给人们带来无限欢乐。请你以“My Favourite Animal”为题，写一篇60词左右的英文短文介绍自己最喜爱的动物。内容包括：
你最喜爱的动物是什么？
它长什么样子？
你和它之间发生的故事。
注意事项：
认真审题
确定分段和每段内容
拟草稿：句型、短语、单词；补充细节
结尾
开头（可以翻译作文介绍里的原句）：
众所周知，动物是人类忠实的好朋友。/ 它们活泼可爱，给人们带来许多欢乐。/ 我最喜爱的动物是狗。
As we all know, animals are people’s loyal friends. They are lively and cute, and they can bring much joy/fun to people. My favourite animals are dogs.
第二段（描写我最喜爱的动物和我们之间的故事）：
我有一只叫欢欢的狗。/ 它很小但很漂亮。/ 它很勇敢，总是尽全力保护我。
I have a dog named/called Huanhuan. It’s small but beautiful. It is very brave and he always tries his best to protect me.
第二段（描写我最喜爱的动物和我们之间的故事）：
有一天，我从楼梯上摔下去了。/ 我受伤如此严重，不能自己站起来。/ 欢欢大声吠叫。/ 最后我妈妈来了，帮我摆脱了困境。
One day, I fell down from the stairs. I was hurt so badly that I couldn’t get up myself. Huanhuan saw this and barked loudly. Finally, my mother arrived and helped me out of the trouble.
结尾（描写我对它的感情）：
在我看来，欢欢是世界上最好的狗。我希望我们能永远在一起！
In my opinion, Huanhuan is the best dog in the world. I hope that we will be together forever!
My favourite animal
As we all know (众所周知), animals are people’s loyal friends. They are lively and cute, and they can bring much joy/fun to people (给人们带来很多欢乐). My favourite animals are dogs.
I have a dog named/called (叫做) Huanhuan. It’s small but beautiful. It is very brave and he always tries his best to protect me (尽力保护我). One day, I fell down from (从…摔下) the stairs. I was hurt (受伤) so badly that (如此严重以致于) I couldn’t stand up myself (自己站起来). Huanhuan saw this and barked loudly (大声吠叫). Finally, my mother arrived and helped me out of the trouble (帮我脱离困境).
In my opinion (在我看来), Huanhuan is the best dog in the world. I hope that (我希望) we will be together forever (永远在一起)!
众所周知
忠诚的
活泼的
叫做
勇敢的
如此…以致于…
自己站起来
最终
到达
帮我摆脱困境
在我看来
我希望…
永远在一起
As we all know
loyal
lively
called/named
brave
so…that…
stand up myself
finally/in the end/at last
arrive
help me out of the trouble
in my opinion
I hope that…
be together forever
话题：关于保护树木/环境
请你根据下面的内容提示，以“Trees Are Very Helpful to Us”为题，写一篇60词左右的关于树木的短文。
提示：
树的作用（如吸收有害气体，清洁空气…）
树在日常生活中的用途（如做成书桌、椅子…）
……（至少补充一点）
注意事项：
认真审题
分段、确定每段内容
拟草稿：句型、短语、单词；补充细节。多用课文原句。
要有结尾
开头（可用课文原句）：
众所周知，树在我们的日常生活中很重要。它们能在很多方面帮助我们。
As we all know, trees are really important in our daily lives. They can help us in many ways.
第二段（要点1、2、3）：
首先，树能让空气保持凉爽干净。
它们能吸收有害气体，生成供我们呼吸的氧气。
They can take in harmful gases and produce oxygen for us to breathe.
First of all, trees can keep the air cool and clean.
第二段（要点1、2、3）：
此外，我们日常生活中的很多东西都来自树。
What’s more, many of the things in our daily lives come from trees.
比如，我们的书桌和椅子是由木头制成的。
For example, our desks and chairs are made of wood.
事实上，我们从树上得到更多。我们从它们那里获得水果和油。茶也来自树的叶子。
In fact, we get a lot more from trees. We get fruit and oil from them. Tea also comes from the leaves of trees.
结尾（扣题：再次强调树的重要性）：
All in all/In conclusion, trees are truly helpful to us.
总之，树对我们真的很有用。
如果我们不想要一个没有树木的世界的话，我们最好尽力保护树木。
让我们从现在开始行动吧！
If we don’t want a world without trees, we’d better try our best to protect trees.
Let’s take action from now on!
Trees are very helpful to us
As we all know (众所周知), trees are really important in our daily lives. They can help us in many ways (在很多方面).
First of all (首先), trees can keep the air cool and clean. They can take in harmful gases (有害气体) and produce oxygen (生成氧气) for us to breathe. What’s more (此外), many of the things in our daily lives come from trees. For example, our desks and chairs are made of wood (由木头制成). In fact (事实上), we get a lot more (更多). from trees. We get fruit and oil from them. Tea also comes from the leaves of trees.
All in all/In conclusion (总之), trees are truly (真正地) helpful to us. If we don’t want a world without trees, we had better (我们最好) try our best to (尽力去) protect trees. Small steps can make a big difference. Let’s take action (采取行动) from now on (从现在开始)!
众所周知
在我们的日常生活中
在很多方面
首先
有害气体
生成氧气
此外
事实上
总之
我们最好
尽力去做
让我们从现在开始采取行动吧！
小举动能有大成就
As we all know
In our daily lives
in many ways
First of all
harmful gases
produce oxygen
What’s more
In fact
All in all = In conclusion
We had better do…
try our best to do…
Let’s take action from now on!
Small steps can make a big difference.
话题：关于保护树木/环境
开头（第一段）：已给出
第二段（按顺序描述表格内容）：
May最喜欢的俱乐部是…
她认为树对人类很重要，但却越来越少。
我们应尽力拯救它们。
She thinks that trees are important to people, but there are fewer and fewer trees now.
May’s favourite club is Saving Trees Club.
We should try our best to save them.
第二段（按顺序描述表格内容）：
例如，多种树是一个好主意。
此外，我们最好双面用纸。
What’s more, we had better write on both sides of paper.
For example, planting more trees is a good idea.
第三段（按顺序描述表格内容）：
Jane最喜欢的俱乐部是…
她认为，动物是人类的朋友，但现在却处于危险之中。因此，我们应该保护它们。
In her opinion, animals are friends to people, but now they are in danger. Therefore, we should protect them.
Jane likes the Helping Animals Club best.
第三段（按顺序描述表格内容）：
我们可以少吃肉，这样不但可以保持健康，还可以保护动物(not only…but also…)。
We can eat less meat. This can not only help us keep healthy, but also protect animals.
最后一段（总结、号召）：
总之，树和动物对人类来说都很重要。
让我们从现在开始行动起来吧！
All in all/In conclusion, trees and animals are of great importance to people.
Let’s take action from now on!
May and Jane come from Green Middle School. They are talking about their favourite clubs.
May’s favourite club is Saving Trees Club. She thinks that (她认为) trees are important to people, but there are fewer and fewer (越来越少) trees now. We should try our best to (尽力) save them. For example, planting more trees is a good idea (种更多树是个好主意). What’s more, we had better (最好) write on both sides of paper (双面用纸).
Jane likes the Helping Animals Club best. In her opinion (她认为), animals are friends to people, but now they are in danger. Therefore (因此), we should protect them. We can eat less meat. This can not only help us keep healthy (保持健康), but also protect animals (不但…而且…).
All in all/In conclusion (总之), trees and animals are of great importance to (对…很重要) people. Let’s take action (采取行动) from now on (从现在开始)!
最喜欢
她认为
越来越少
尽力
种更多树是个好主意
我们最好双面用纸
处于危险中
因此
不但…而且…
对…来说很重要
让我们从现在开始采取行动吧！
favourite…is…/like…best
She thinks that…/In her opinion
fewer and fewer
try one’s best to do
Planting more trees is a good idea.
We had better write on both sides of paper.
be in danger
Therefore
not only…but also…
be important to = be of great importance to
Let’s take action from now on!
话题：关于保护/节约用水
【写作指导】
本次书面表达要求同学们根据要点提示对如何节约水资源进行探讨，表达保护水资源的观点。写作时主要介绍水的重要性，目前存在的问题以及解决措施等。时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。写作完成后，要通读全文，检查语法是否正确、要点是否齐全。
第一段（第一句已给出，补充：水的重要性、目前的问题。）：
Water is really important to us. …
We can’t live without water.
The amount of fresh water is becoming less and less because people are polluting and wasting it.
没有水我们无法生存。(without)
淡水正在变得越来越少，因为人们在浪费和污染它。
我们应该做些什么来保护水呢？
What should we do to protect water
第二段（阐述节约用水的措施：至少3条并举例）：
First of all, we should stop wasting water in our daily lives.
When we brush our teeth, We should turn off the tap. We can also use the used water to water plants.
首先，我们应该在日常生活中停止浪费水。(stop doing)
当我们刷牙时，要关掉水龙头。我们还可以用用过的水浇植物。
其次，我们最好停止污染水。
Secondly, we had better stop polluting the water.
第二段（阐述节约用水的措施：至少3条；注意补充细节）：
For example, we mustn’t throw rubbish into rivers or lakes.
What’s more, it is a good idea to ask factories to stop pouring waste water into rivers or lakes.
例如，我们绝对不能往河里或湖里扔垃圾。 (throw…into)
其次，要求工厂不要往河里或湖里倒废水是个好主意。(it is a good idea to…pour…into)
第三段（结尾：再次强调、号召行动）：
As a famous saying goes, lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets.
As we all know, water is like liquid gold.
正如一句名言所说，绿水青山就是金山银山。 (…saying…)
众所周知，水就像是液体黄金。(liquid gold)
作为年轻学生，让我们一起立刻采取行动来保护和节约用水吧。(let’s…)
As young students, let’s take action to protect and save water at once!
Save water
Water is really important to us. We can’t live without water. The amount of fresh water is becoming less and less because people are polluting and wasting it. What should we do to protect water
First of all, we should stop wasting water in our daily lives. When we brush our teeth, we should turn off the tap. We can also use the used water to water plants. Secondly, we had better stop polluting the water. For example, we mustn’t throw rubbish into rivers or lakes. What’s more, it is a good idea to ask factories to stop pouring waste water into rivers or lakes.
As a famous saying goes, lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets. As young students, let’s take action to protect and save water at once!
我们没有水不能生存
越来越少
污染、浪费水
我们该做什么来保护水？
首先
停止浪费水
在我们日常生活中
刷牙
关掉水龙头
我们也可以…
用用过的水浇花
例如
禁止扔垃圾到河里
We can’t live without water.
less and less
pollute and waste water
What should we do to protect water
First of all
stop wasting water
in our daily lives
brush our teeth
turn off the tap
We can also…
use used water to water flowers
For example
We mustn’t throw rubbish into rivers
此外
要求…做某事
停止倒废水到河里
做某事是个好注意
正如一句名言所说
绿水青山就是金山银山
7. 水就像液体黄金
8. 让我们立刻采取行动吧！
What’s more
ask…to do…
stop pouring waste water into rivers
It is a good idea to do…
Just as a famous saying goes,
Lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets.
Water is like liquid gold.
Let’s take action from now on!
作文话题：阐述水的重要性
第一段（开门见山/1-2句）：
水对于所有生物来说都非常重要。
水在我们的日常生活中发挥着重要作用。
Water is very important to all living things.
Water is of great importance to all living things.
It plays a key role in our daily lives.
第二段（按作文要点写句子。用连接词）：
首先，我们每天都要喝水。
其次，水还可以用来做很多事情，比如洗衣服、做饭、洗澡等。
First of all, we all need to drink water every day.
Secondly, water can be used to do many things, such as washing clothes, making meals, taking a shower and so on.
第二段（按作文要点写句子。用连接词）：
虽然地球的四分之三都是水，但是人类只能喝淡水，而且这些水很容易被污染。
Although water covers three quarters of the Earth, people can only drink a small quantity of fresh water, and it is easily polluted.
第三段（结尾：再次强调、号召）：
水很宝贵，就像液体黄金一样。因此，我们要尽我们所能去节约用水。让我们从现在开始就采取行动吧！
Water is valuable like liquid gold. Therefore, we should do our best to save water. Let’s take action from now on!
The importance of Water
Water is of great importance to all living things. It plays a key role in our daily lives.
First of all, we all need to (需要) drink water every day. Secondly, water can be used to (被用来) do many things, such as washing clothes, making meals (做饭), taking a shower (洗澡) and so on. Although (虽然) water covers three quarters of (四分之三) the Earth, people can only drink a small quantity of (少量的) fresh water, and it is easily polluted (容易被污染).
Water is valuable like liquid gold (液体黄金). Therefore (因此), we should do our best to save water. Let’s take action from now on!
需要去做…
被用来
洗澡
虽然
四分之三
少量的
容易被污染
液体黄金
因此
让我们从现在开始采取行动吧！
need to do
be used to do
take a shower
although
three quarters of
a small quantity of
be easily polluted
liquid gold
therefore
Let’s take action from now on!
话题：关于安全用电
常见错误：
1. 句子不完整。主语+谓语+其他。分清分句与主句。
use rice cooker must keep the outside of the pot dry
2. 标点符号用错。
连接词后用逗号，开头字母小写。引用名言不用双引号。
3. 跑题！安全用电不是节约用电。save electricity
4. 人称不一致。you, your; we, our
常见错误：
5. 一句一段，数字1、2、3。
用连接词：首先、其次、然后、最后
6. 固定用法、语法错误。
don’t do; should/must/mustn’t do…
Let’s take action to do… can also
7. 主谓不一致。
主语单数，动词也是单数。electricity are
Using Electricity Safely
There is no doubt (毫无疑问) that electricity plays an important role (扮演重要角色) in our daily life. Electrical appliances can make our life more convenient (更方便). However, if people don’t know how to use electricity safely, they may start a fire and get hurt (受伤). Here are (以下是) some safety tips (安全提示).
First of all (首先), make sure (确保) your hands are dry before you switch on or off the electrical appliances. Secondly (其次), when you are using a rice cooker, it is always a good idea to (做…是个好主意) keep the outside of the pot dry. What’s more (此外), if the wire is damaged (被破坏), you shouldn’t turn on the electrical appliance in case (以防) you get hurt.
All in all (总之), it is of great importance for us to (对我们来说做…是很重要的) use electricity safely. Always remember that safety comes first (安全第一).
毫无疑问
扮演重要角色
使我们的生活更方便
引起火灾
受伤
以下是
安全提示
首先
其次
此外
确保
做…是个好主意
以防你受伤
There is no doubt that…
play an important role in
make our life more convenient
start a fire
get hurt
Here are/The following …
safety tips
first of all/in the first place
Secondly
What’s more/In addition
make sure
It is always a good idea to do…
in case you get hurt
14. 总之
15. 对我们来说做…是很重要的
16. 安全第一
All in all/In conclusion
It is of great importance for us to do…
Safety comes first.
话题：关于爱好、事业
第一段（已给出）：
Recently(最近), we did a survey(调查) in our class in order to(为了) learn about(了解) students’ ideal(理想的) jobs. Here’s(以下是) a report(报告) about my group members’ ideas.
第二段（小组同学的理想职业和原因）：
1. Mary的理想职业是时装设计师。因为她痴迷于漂亮衣服，并且她擅长绘画。
2. Kate想要长大后成为一个园艺工。原因是她喜欢植物。她想让城市更美。
Mary’s ideal job is a fashion designer. Because she is crazy about beautiful clothes and she is good at drawing.
Kate wants to be a gardener when she grows up. The reason is that she likes plants. She wants to make cities more beautiful.
第二段（小组同学的理想职业和原因）：
3. 至于Mike，他梦想成为一名作家，因为他愿意与别人分享精彩故事。
4. Tom说他想将来做一名厨师因为他喜欢做饭。他觉得为别人煮健康美味的食物是很棒的。
As for Mike, he dreams of becoming a writer because he is willing to share amazing stories with others.
Tom said he wants to be a cook in the future because he enjoys cooking. He thinks that it is excellent to cook healthy and delicious food for others.
第二段（小组同学的理想职业和原因）：
5. 至于我，我希望成为一名钢琴家。我5岁时爱上了弹钢琴。从那之后我弹钢琴已经快10年了。
As for me, I hope that I can be a pianist. I fell in love with playing the piano when I was 5 years old, and I have been playing the piano for about 10 years since then.
第三段（总结、鼓励）：
不同的人有不同的爱好和梦想。在我看来，如果我们努力奋斗，永不放弃，我们就能实现梦想。
Different people have different hobbies and dreams. In my opinion, we will make our dreams come true if we work hard and never give up.
正如一句名言所说，有志者、事竟成。
Just as a famous saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.
范文：
Recently(最近), we did a survey(调查) in our class in order to(为了) learn about(了解) students’ ideal(理想的) jobs. Here’s(以下是) a report(报告) about my group members’ ideas.
Mary’s ideal job is a fashion designer. Because she is crazy about (痴迷于) beautiful clothes and she is good at (擅长) drawing. Kate wants to be a gardener when she grows up (长大后). The reason is that (原因是) she likes plants. She wants to make cities more beautiful. As for (至于) Mike, he dreams of becoming (梦想成为) a writer because he is willing to (愿意) share amazing stories with (与…分享) others. Tom said he wants to be a cook in the future because he enjoys cooking. He thinks that it is excellent to cook healthy and delicious food for others. As for me, I hope that (我希望) I can be a pianist. I fell in love with (爱上) playing the piano when I was 5 years old, and I have been playing the piano for about 10 years since then (从那之后).
Different people have different hobbies and dreams. In my opinion (在我看来), we will make our dreams come true (实现梦想) if we work hard and never give up (永不放弃). Just as a famous saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way (有志者事竟成).
痴迷于
擅长做
当我长大后
原因是
至于我
梦想成为
愿意去做
与其他人分享
我希望
爱上
从那之后
在我看来
实现梦想
be crazy about
be good at doing
When I grow up
The reason is that…
As for me,
dream of being…
be willing to do…
share… with others
I hope that…
fall in love with
since then
In my opinion,
make sb’s dream come true
14. 永不放弃
15. 正如一句名言所说
16. 有志者事竟成
never give up
Just as a famous saying goes,
Where there is a will, there is a way.