专题07书面表达 八年级下册英语期末专项训练 仁爱版（含解析）

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专题07书面表达 八年级下册英语期末专项训练
1．作文。
假设你叫王华，收到笔友徐丽的email。她向你请教如何合理安排寒假生活。请你根据下列提示用英语回复徐丽的email。
要求：1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名；2.回信需要包括所有要点，并适当发挥。3.词数不少于90词 (文章开头和结尾，不计入总词数)。
Dear Xu Li,
How time flies! I’m happy to talk about my coming winter vacation.
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I’m looking forward to your e-mail about your winter vacation.
All the best!
Wang Hua
2．请你根据下面图片提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍如何制作水果沙拉。
要求：70词左右，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
1. 2. 3. 4.
Do you like eating fruit salad And do you know how to make it If you don’t know, let me tell you.
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It’s quite simple to make fruit salad, isn’t it Now you can have a try.
3．很多父母希望孩子将时间都花在学习上，以便他们有个美好的未来。假如你是图中的学生，请根据图片用英语写一篇短文。
提示：(1)What happened when you got home
(2)How should you get along with your parents
要求：(1)对图片内容进行简单的描述；
(2)对父母的做法作出评判，并进行合理的批驳；
(3)谈谈自己的想法；
(4)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Last Friday afternoon, I got home from school.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．为了迎接新年，同学们打算在明凯家做一桌美食，好好庆祝一下。你的拿手菜是Turkey，请根据图片及表格中的提示，用英语把制作方法写在下面。
Ingredient (食材) bread, onion, turkey, meat, carrots, potatoes
Flavoring (调料) salt, pepper, gravy
Tool (工具) oven, plate, knife
要求：1. 字迹工整，语法正确；2. 不少于5句话，40词以上。
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5．假如你是一名来自美国的游客Tony，此时正与你的中国笔友Daming, Lingling在长城游玩。你将你们刚刚拍摄的几张相片做成一张电子明信片发送给你的同学Sam，请根据相片的内容及所给提示，完成明信片的留言。
提示：
1、你可能会用到的词：the Great Wall, walk on, take photo/pictures, the present shop;
2、Sam的地址已为你写好，可根据相片内容适当发挥，字数在80-100词；
3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名或校名。
Sam Smith No.17 Field Street Los Angeles The USA
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6．写作练习。
许多事物会影响我们的心情，保持好心情对我们很重要。请根据以下提示词，写一篇短文，讲述如何保持好心情，60词左右。
提示词：exercise, relax; healthy food, good sleep; talk, get help; everyday activities _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．假如你是我酷服装店（I Cool Clothes Store）的导购员，请你为你们店里的促销写一则广告。提示：1.为女孩准备的各种颜色的裙子，每件仅售49美元。2. 蓝色的裤子30美元。3.短袜3美元一双，5美元两双。
I Cool Clothes Store
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8．草长莺飞二月天，踏青春游好时节。假设你是John，上周回到了阔别已久的家乡盐城并进行了三天的游玩，在游玩过程中感叹家乡的巨大变化。请根据以下提示，写下你的旅游见闻和感受。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
1. Where did you go last week
2. What did you do and see
3. What changes have taken place there
4. How did you feel
Last week, I came back to my hometown Yancheng. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．中学生外研社杯征文比赛面向全国中学生征稿，征稿主题“My Hometown — the ________ Place in My Heart”。假设你是李华，请写一篇英语征文
内容提示：
(1)家乡的美味、特产、发展情况等；
(2)讲述家乡发展的一个小故事以及你从家乡故事中收获的感受或领悟的道理等。
写作要求：
(1)请先将横线上的词补充完整；
(2)书写规范，表达流畅；
(3)词数约100词左右。
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10．请以“Healthy Eating”为题写一篇作文。
提示:
1. 健康饮食的重要性（be important for, give us energy, build up）；
2. 良好的饮食习惯（choose the right food, have enough food, keep a balanced diet, have different kinds of foods, eat regularly）。
要求:
1. 要点齐全，语言流畅，表达清楚；
2. 书写规范，字迹清楚；
3. 80词左右。
Healthy Eating
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11．每个人都有自己喜爱的影星（actor/actress）、歌手（singer）、明星（star）等等。请以My Favorite___________为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
以下几个问题或许可以帮到你：
1. Who is him/ her
2. What do you think of him/ her
3. Why do you like him/ her
4. How did he/ she become famous
5. Do you know anything about him/ her when he/ she was young
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12．请参考以下图示，自选其中一个话题，写一篇短文。记录有关学习或旅游的难忘经历，供班级编辑一本题为“Unforgettable Experiences”的纪念册。
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或校名：
2. 词数为 80-100；
3. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。
An Unforgettable Experience
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13．充实的初中生活即将落幕，这其中有笑有泪。你校英语报发起了主题征文活动。请你选择其中一个方面，结合自己的经历，记录你三年中最幸福或最难过的时刻并分享你的感悟。
注意：（1）请补全标题，参考提示词，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数：90~110。短文首句已给出，仅供参考，不计入总词数。
The ______ Moment
Looking back at the past three years, I can still remember the ______ moment.
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14．迤逦的风光，沧桑的古迹，熏陶了我们的心灵，愉悦了我们的精神，这便是旅游。在“走遍世界”英语主题班会上，老师要求同学们用英语介绍自己的一次旅游，共同分享旅游的乐趣。包括旅行的时间、旅行的方式、旅行的范围、花费的时间和自己的愿望等。
现在，请你写一篇80—100词左右的英语发言稿。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I have been to many places, but my favourite place is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．请从下面描述心情的词中选择一个，以“I Feel These Days”为题，写一篇小短文。
要求：1. 可选词汇为：lonely, upset, happy, unhappy, angry, disappointed, excited, frightened ,worried
2. 意思连贯、通顺，词数在60—80之间。
3. 适当发挥，注意写出为什么、怎么样以及后来怎么样等。
16．假如你是李华，五一期间，你和家人一起去了杭州，请根据以下信息，向你的笔友Jack介绍一下此次旅行。
Where Hangzhou
When May Day holiday
Who Parents
How By plane
What 1. 地点介绍( the southeast of China…) 2. 活动：take photos; go boating; …
Feelings …
要求：
1. 涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，衔接连贯，书写规范；
2. 词数80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出不计入总词数。
3. 不得出现真实的班级和姓名。
Dear Jack,
How are you doing I’d like to tell you something about my travel experiences.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
17．
方志敏烈士简介：（1899年8月21日—1935年8月6日）， 江西省弋阳人，中国共产党的优秀党员，江西党组织的创始人之一，闽、浙、皖、赣革命根据地的创建者。他历任县委书记、 特委书记、省委书记、军区司令员、红十军政委、闽浙赣省苏维埃政府主席，中华苏维埃共和国中央主席团委员，党中央委员。
1934 年，红七军团和红十军团合编为北上抗日先遣队，方志敏任总司令。1935年1月27日，他不幸被俘人狱，在狱中坚贞不屈，写下了《可爱的中国》《清贫》等名著。1935年8月6日，方志敏在南昌英勇就义，时年36岁。
假如你是Daming， 昨天你刚看了电影《可爱的中国》（Cute China），深受感动。于是你想写封信告慰方志敏烈士。信中主要涉及三个方面：
1.问烈士：为什么这么多共产党员为了信仰选择牺牲而无所畏惧？(choose to die for Marxism without fear)今天你找到了答案；
2.告慰烈士：他的the Dream of Cute China 已经实现，现在的中国比他书中写的更美丽、更强大；
3.告慰烈士：作为一名中学生，你的梦想和责任。
要求：1. 信件须语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 字数80。文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：
CPC members（共产党员）；faith(信念)；comrade(同志)；feel puzzled(困惑)；to realize the great rise of the Chinese nation(实现中华民族伟大复兴)
Dear Uncle Fang,
Do you agree I call you Uncle Fang I’m Daming, a 15-year-old student. Yesterday, I saw the movie Cute China. Your story deeply touched me. So I’m writing this letter to you(Later I’ll read it to you). It’s a pity you died at a very young age, and_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Peace to your soul!
18．感恩节即将来临，在你的成长过程中，你最想感谢的是谁呢？他们过去怎样为你的成长助力？你今后打算怎么做来向他们展现一个更好的自己呢？请你给最想感谢的人写一封信。
Dear________
Thanksgiving is coming.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
19．假如你是李华，你家附近的一个公园将于7月5号举办一次美食节。你的笔友Peter非常喜欢中国食物，请你给他写一封邀请函，邀请他来参加这次美食节。
要求:
1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名。
2)词数100左右，格式已给出，不计入总词数。
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20．假如你是Teenager杂志的主编，你叫Dr. Lee最近你收到你的读者Rick的来信，向你倾诉他的苦恼，他因太过肥胖被同学们嘲笑。请你给他一些合理建议帮助他摆托烦恼。80词左右。
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参考答案：
1．Daer Xu Li,
How time flies! I’m happy to talk about your coming winter vocation.
First, doing more exercises can provide you with better health. Second, travelling can relax yourself and you can enjoy your winter holiday. Third, it is useful to take part in some social activities. It can enrich your experiences. Last but not least, you also can learn something useful at home. It will make you easier to study in the future.
I’m looking forward to your reply about your meaningful winter vocation.
All the best!
Wang Hua
【详解】试题分析：本文内容要求你写一封书信，应以一般现在时态叙事为主。文章应灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点： 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如: provide you with better health，take part in, make you easier, in the future， doing more exercises动名词词组作主语，it is useful to take part in some social activities.句型等；同时First, second, third等词的应用使文章的表达更有逻辑性、更富有条理；通篇语言流畅、内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。
考点：话题作文。
2．One possible version:
Do you like eating fruit salad And do you know how to make it If you don’t know, let me tell you.
First, buy some yogurt and some fruit you like. For example, you can buy an apple, an orange, a banana and some strawberries. Next, wash the apple and the strawberries, and peel the banana and the orange. Then, cut the fruit into pieces and put them into a bowl. Finally, pour the yogurt into the bowl and mix it up with the fruit pieces.
Make sure to mix them well.
It’s quite simple to make fruit salad, isn’t it Now you can have a try.
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求根据所给的图片提示写一篇短文，介绍如何制作水果沙拉，包括买水果、洗水果、切水果、制作沙拉等，可适当发挥。
2、本文应该用祈使句来介绍如何制作水果沙拉；介绍如何制作水果沙拉时，应详细具体，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
3．One possible version:
Last Friday afternoon, I got home from school. I wanted to help to do some housework, so I cleaned the room. When my father saw it, he said, “You needn’t do that. Do some reading.” I didn’t want to read books, so I planned to watch TV. The TV show was very interesting and it made me laugh loudly. My mum heard and she was very angry, so she said, “Don’t watch TV. You should study.” Then I came to my room. “Why ” I thought. Mum and Dad love me very much. But they don’t understand me. Maybe we should have some talks. I want to tell them that they should not only focus on my study, but also allow me to have time to help them do some housework and relax myself. These activities are good for my mind and body.
No matter what happened, communication is the best way to solve the problem with my parents.
【详解】1.题干解读：本篇书面表达属于看图写作。要求学生仔细观察图片，以图中学生的身份将这个故事表达出来。文章内容要描写出图中学生回家发生了什么事，并在故事内容的基础上对父母的做法进行评判和合理地批驳并表达自己的想法，此外还要表达自己应该如何与父母相处。
2.写作指导：写作时应注意以下几点：第一点：写作前学生应仔细观察图片，弄清故事中涉及的人物和角色，他们之间的关系以及每幅图片发生了什么。第二点：写作时应结合一般过去时和一般现在时，并按照具体情景选用合适的人称来叙述，注意格式规范，符合看图写作的语境表达。第三点：内容要包含所给的图片内容、提示和要求，并在这些基础上选用合适的词汇，短语和句型来进行串联和拓展。第四点：文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
4．例文：
First, mix some bread pieces, onions, salt and pepper together.
Next, fill the turkey with this bread mix.
Then, put the turkey in a hot oven and cook it for a few hours.
When it is ready, place the turkey on a large plate and cover it with gravy.
Finally, cut the turkey into thin pieces and eat the meat with vegetables like carrots and potatoes.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为菜谱；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏材料中的内容。
[写作步骤]
按照图片顺序逐一描述，并将方框中所给词用上即可。
[亮点词汇]
① mix A and B将A与B混合
② fill...with... 装满
③ a few少许（修饰可数名词复数）
④ cover...with...覆盖
⑤ cut...into pieces切碎
[高分句型]
When it is ready, place the turkey on a large plate and cover it with gravy.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．例文
Dear Sam,
I’m having fun in China now and sending you this e-card. In the first photo, together with my Chinese friends Daming and Lingling, we are walking on the Great Wall which is one of the greatest wonders in the world. In the second photo, we are taking a lot of photos. The scenery here is really beautiful. In the third photo, I’m choosing presents for my family and friends in a shop. There are so many amazing hand-made things that it is difficult to make a decision. What present for you It’s a secret.
See you next week!
Tony
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按明信片的格式写。内容是以美国游客Tony的身份，把你们刚刚拍摄的几张相片做成的一张电子明信片发送给你的同学Sam，并根据相片的内容及所给提示，完成明信片的留言。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述明信片的内容；时态以现在进行时为主。要按照照片的顺序，分别介绍在每一张照片里所做的活动；最后介绍要给Sam一个惊喜。
6．Many things around us can affect our moods. It’s important for us to be in a good mood. How can we keep happy First, we can exercise to relax. Second, eat healthy food instead of junk food. Third, having a good sleep can also make you healthy. Fourth, if you have trouble, talk with your teachers or parents to get help. Last, go back to everyday activities. They will make you happy again.
【详解】这篇作文是要求写一写如何保持好心情，题目中给了一些提示词，它们是exercise锻炼, relax放松; healthy food健康的食物, good sleep良好的睡眠; talk交谈, get help获得帮助; everyday activities每日活动。写作的时候需要重新整理好思路，叙述一定要有逻辑，讲明白保持好心情的方式方法，用到的短语表达有：Many things around us 我们周围的许多事物；affect our moods 影响我们的心情；be in a good mood 好心情；instead of 而不是；junk food 垃圾食品；talk with your teachers和老师交谈。总体来说写作难度不大，需要注意的是说理要清晰，总的来说这篇作文完成了既定的写做任务。
7．例文
Come and have a look at I Cool Clothes Store. For girls, we have all kinds of skirts for only 49 dollars. We have blue trousers for 30 dollars. We also have socks at a very good price - only 3 dollars one pair, 5 dollars for two e to our store now!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍服装店的产品信息。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。按照提示材料分别一一介绍店里的产品以及价格。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
8．例文：
Last week, I came back to my hometown Yancheng. My parents and I enjoyed many things. On the first day, we went to a local park to enjoy the natural beauty here. The lake was clear and the air was fresh. On the next day, we went to the theatre to enjoy an interesting play. On the last day, we went to the Foot Street to eat delicious foods. Finally, we went shopping and bought gifts for our relatives and friends.
I was shocked when I came back here. Great changes have taken place. In the past, people lived in poverty. The streets were littered with rubbish, and people went out on foot or by bus. Now people live in spacious and comfortable homes, the streets are wide and clean, and tourists are increasing.
I am really happy to see such changes and I hope to visit it again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，描述旅游行程和所见所闻；
第二步，描述家乡的变化；
第三步，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①natural beauty自然美
②buy sth for sb为某人买某物
③be littered with散落
④on foot步行
⑤by bus坐公交车
⑥spacious宽敞的
⑦take place发生
[高分句型]
I was shocked when I came back here.（when引导的时间状语从句）
9．例文
My Hometown—the Beautiful Place in my Heart
Welcome to my hometown Yantai for a visit. It is in the north of Shandong. My hometown is famous for apples. Yantai apples are famous all over the country. There are also many famous food in Yantai. If you come to travel, you will enjoy the beauty and delicious food.
My grandma told me that they were very poor in the past. She didn’t have enough food to eat. With the help of the government, Yantai gradually became richer. Now my grandma is more than 80 years old. She lives a happy life with us. I realize that only when the country is strong can we have a happy life.
This is the beautiful place in my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时首先补全标题，围绕要点提示展开描写，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡的美味、特产和发展情况；
第二步，讲述家乡发展的小故事，及自己的感受；
第三步，书写结语，再次点题。
[亮点词汇]
① be famous for因……而著名
② with the help of在……的帮助下
③ more than多于
[高分句型]
① If you come to travel, you will enjoy the beauty and delicious food.（条件状语从句）
② I realize that only when the country is strong can we have a happy life.（宾语从句+倒装句）
10．例文
Healthy Eating
Healthy eating is important for us in our daily life. Food can give us energy and help us build up our bodies. How can we have healthy eating habits
First, we should choose the right food and have enough clean food each meal. Second, it’s important for us to keep a balanced diet. Different foods help us in different ways. We should have different kinds of foods, such as fruit, vegetables, grain, eggs, milk, meat and fish. Third, we should eat regularly.
If we do like this, we’ll be strong and healthy, and we’ll do well in our study.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是介绍健康的饮食，内容按照题目中所给的信息描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第一人称展开描述。主要是介绍健康饮食的重要性以及良好的饮食习惯等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。
11．One possible version:
My Favorite Star
My favorite star is a basketball player. His name’s Yao Ming. I think he is one of the greatest basketball players in China.Why do I like him best
First, he is kind to people and always ready to help others although he is very sucessful and rich. What’s more, he is very hardworking in the NBA. His spirit has inspired me.
Because of his hard work and painstaking practice, he won the CBA Championship in 2002 and was selected by the Houston Rockets in the same year. He is the only Chinese player who became the “First pick” in the NBA draft. He made great achicevements in the NBA. I learn a lot from him. He is my idol in my heart.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇话题作写作，这篇作文主要要求学生介绍自己最喜欢的明星或演员或歌手，题目中给出了5个问题：你最喜欢的明星/演员/歌手是谁？你认为他/她怎么样？你为什么喜欢他/她？他/她是如何成名的？你了解他/她年轻时的情况吗 学生们可以从这5个问题入手，组织语言，充实写作内容，用正确的英语将其表达出来。
2.写作指导：审题可知，本文时态应用一般现在时，人称应用第三人称单数；写作时应注意将题目中的标题以及提示问题包括在内，不要遗漏要点，用简单句结构为基础来表达，可适当用一些复合句以及短语来提升文章档次，同时注意上下文的衔接，文章句子表述要通顺，流畅。
12．An Unforgettable Experience
The summer holiday has passed. I spent a happy and unforgettable summer holiday this year.
During the holiday, my family and I went to Dalian by plane for a visit. There I saw the beautiful sea, and it was really amazing. We have stayed for a week in Dalian. During my vacation, I have also spent one hour doing some reading every day. I have finished three books. Of course, I didn’t forget to do exercise. I kept running and swimming every two days.
It's really an unforgettable and meaningful trip.
【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求以An Unforgettable Experience为题描述一段自己难忘的经历。根据图示，可以选择一段难忘的学习经历或旅行经历展开叙述。
写作指导：本文选好主题后注意确定人称应该是第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时为主。进行描述时注意按图示要点展开，文章要结构分明、用词恰当。
13．One possible version:
The happiest moment
Looking back at the past three years, I can still remember the happiest moment.
It was the final exam for which I had prepared a lot that I took in Grade 8 impressed me a lot. In order to get good grades, I studied as hard as possible. Luckily, my hard work paid back. I got No.1 in the whole grade, because I had been praised by my teachers and classmates, even my parents. That must be the happiest moment in my junior school life.
Actually, I learnt a lot from the experience. The harder you work, the greater progress you will make. From now on, do your best.
【详解】1.题目解读。本文是一篇话题作文写作，主要写初中三年中最幸福或最难过的时刻，可以采用三段式结构。第一段引出话题（大部分内容已给出）；第二段写最幸福或最难过的时刻；第三段写你的感悟。
2.写作指导。本文人称采用第一人称，时态主要使用一般过去时。内容上，主要写最幸福或最难过的时刻以及你的感悟。注意写作的时候，选择一方面即可，在开头第一段点明，并补全标题。结构上，注意段与段之间的衔接，保证文章的逻辑性。
14．范文：
My trip to Dali City
I have been to many places, but my favourite place is Dali City. I took a trip to Dali City with my parents last Saturday. We went there by plane and we stayed there for four days.
When we got there, we went to Dali Old Town first. We walked around the old town and saw the old buildings. We also ate the delicious food. We wanted to spend two days there. On the third day, we went to Erhai. The natural scenery was very beautiful there. We went boating in Erhai and enjoyed the beauty of sunrise. We had a wonderful time.
Now I am very excited. I am looking forward to visiting Dali City again.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按发言稿格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头，根据汉语提示的内容写出旅游的时间、方式、范围、花费的时间和自己的愿望等。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来介绍旅游；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍旅游内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。
15．I Feel Unhappy These Days
Last Sunday, Lin Tao and I went to the gym. When we did exercise, I fell down on the ground. I got hurt so badly that we couldn’t go on exercising. So we had to go back. Because I was hurt, I couldn’t walk, and we had to take a bus. When I got off the bus, I fell down once again. Oh, my God! In the end, I had to go to the hospital. The doctor told me that I must stay in bed for three days. My classmates came to visit me, and they brought me some flowers. They also helped me with my study. Their coming pleased me, and now I am feeling much better.
【详解】本文需要通过一件事情写出自己的心情。本篇文章通过我受伤的事情描述我不高兴的心情。 因为叙述的是过去的事情，所以文章大部分用到一般过去时，用到动词过去式，例如went，did，fell，got，couldn’t，had to，told等。在叙述事件时，一些连词的使用，例如When…So…., In the end,…..使文章具有条理性和连贯性。整个事情叙述清晰，表达准确，也符合了题目要求，表达出了自己“unhappy”的心情，是一篇不错的作文。
16．例文
Dear Jack,
How are you doing I’d like to tell you something about my travel experiences.
On May Day, I went to Hangzhou with my parents. We went to Hangzhou by plane. When arriving there, we were attracted by the beauties of Hangzhou. It is believed that Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in China. It is in the southeast of China. We visited the West Lake, Zhejiang Museum and Lingyin Temple. We took many photos and went boating. We came back with happiness. That was an interesting trip.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：要求根据表格提示内容介绍自己的五一旅行，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的旅行；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“地点、时间、跟谁、交通方式、做了什么以及感受”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be attracted by被……吸引
②one of...……之一
③came back回来
[高分句型]
①When arriving there, we were attracted by the beauties of Hangzhou.（省略句）
②It is believed that Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in China.（形容词最高级结构）
17．One Possible Version:
Dear Uncle Fang,
Do you agree I call you Uncle Fang I’m Daming, a 15-year-old student. Yesterday, I saw the movie Cute China. Your story deeply touched me. So I’m writing this letter to you(Later I’ll read it to you). It’s a pity you died at a very young age, and thousands of your comrades followed your steps too. So one question has puzzled me for a long time. That is: why so many CPC members chose to die for Marxism without fear Was it worthy Today I seem to have the answer. Because all you men had faith, all you men had the Dream of Cute China. You did all this for a new China. Today I’m proud to tell you all that the Dream of Cute China has already come true! Today’s China is among the greatest countries in the world! She is more beautiful and powerful than what you described(what she was like) in your book. As a Chinese student, I also have a Cute China Dream. That is to realize the great rise of the Chinese nation. We are sure that we can make it.
Peace to your soul!
Daming
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，写封信告慰方志敏烈士。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时综合使用三个人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要从以下几方面入手：问烈士为什么这么多共产党员为了信仰选择牺牲而无所畏惧，告慰烈士现在的中国比他书中写的更美丽、更强大以及作为一名中学生，你的梦想和责任。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
18．例文：
Dear mom,
Thanksgiving Day is coming! I want to say “Thank you very much” to you.
You play an important role in my life. First of all, you spend a lot of time helping me with my study. Although you are always strict with me, I know that is because you expect me to do better. Secondly, you do a lot to bring out the best in me, such as playing soccer with me, running for an hour with me on weekends. With your help, I am much healthier and stronger than before. What’s more, when I meet some problems and feel sad, you are always ready to listen and give me a hand. In this way, I can cheer up again quickly!
I decide to try my best to help you do more housework to make you relaxed and happy from now on. In addition, I plan to study harder and keep healthy living habits, so you will be proud of me one day!
Thank you for everything you did for me, mom! I love you! Happy Thanksgiving Day!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作，写作时注意要按书信格式写。第一段首先应明确要感谢的人是谁；第二段叙述要感谢的人在生活中给了自己什么样的关怀和帮助；第三段表明自己决心努力变得更好；第四段再次向要感谢的人表达谢意和节日祝福。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来写；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述内容要按照题干所给的提示，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
19．例文
Dear Peter,
I would like to invite you to a food festival in a park near my home on July 5th. All Chinese students will cook delicious Chinese food for the food festival, such as dumplings, the Beijing Roast Duck, Chinese fried rice and so on. I am sure they will be popular. We sell the delicious food in order to raise money for a village school in Guizhou. We know from our teachers that many children in the village of Guizhou can’t go to school because their families are so poor and they have to work to earn money at a very early age. We want to make money from the food festival and give the money to them. Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邀请函写作；
时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
提示：写作主题已给出，写邀请函时注意说明时间地点，并围绕美食展开，说明目的。
[写作步骤]
第一步，发出邀请，点明主题，介绍时间地点；
第二步，具体阐述美食节的活动内容及意义和目的；
第三步，书写结语，表达“希望Peter来”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
such as例如
in order to为了
have to不得不
at a very early age在很小的年纪
raise money for为……筹款
[高分句型]
I am sure they will be popular. （宾语从句）
We know from our teachers that many children in the village of Guizhou can’t go to school because their families are so poor and they have to work to earn money at a very early age. （宾语从句+原因状语从句）
20．One possible version:
Dear Rick,
I’ve heard from you and I feel sorry about it. I totally understand how you feel when someone laugh at you. Here is my advice.
Firstly, There is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be yourself. Secondly, try to eat healthily-keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables. It can help you lose weight. Thirdly, I advise you to play sports often. You should get up early and exercise.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Dr. Lee
【详解】1、题干解读：题目假设你是Teenager杂志的主编，最近收到读者Rick的来信，他向你倾诉了他的苦恼，他因太胖被同学们嘲笑，请你给他一些合理的建议帮助他摆脱烦恼，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第二人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍建议时，应详细具体，简单明了，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
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