2023年中考英语复习作文指导（高分演练）课件（21张PPT）

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2023年中考英语作文写作指导
作文的评分标准
1. 内容丰富，要点齐全有拓展 6分
2. 表达准确，无语法错误 6分
(注意时态、人称)
3. 语句流畅，逻辑思路清晰 3分
（注意分段、书写）
来自英国的外教Emlyn第一天来到我们学校任教，假如你是学生会主席李华，请你带他游览学校并向他介绍学校情况。内容包括：
Our school
参考词汇：荔湾区 Liwan District要求:1. 80词左右; 可适当发挥；2. 发言内容合理、完整；句子及篇章结构准确、连贯；3. 不得透露真
实姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 Good morning, Emlyn. Welcome to our school. My name is Li Hua.______________________________
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（一）审题（审作文的时态和人称）
1. What tense ____________________________
2. What person ______________
（二）列要点
写作准备
一般现在时
第一、二人称
罗列精彩词汇
运用高级句型（三大从句）
罗列精彩词汇
1. 迫不及待 ________________
2. 如此...以至于 ________________________
3......的形状 ________________________
4. ......的原因是...... ____________________________
can't wait to
such...that
the reason why...is that ...
in the shape of ...
5. 友好热情 _____________________________
6. 难忘的印象 ______________________________
7. 喜欢 ________________________
8. 毫无疑问 ____________________________
friendly and welcoming
unforgettable impression
There is no doubt that...
be keen on / be fond of
9. 令人惊奇的事情 _________________________
10. 度过美好的时光 __________________________
11. 和......一起 ________________________
something amazing
have a wonderful time
together with...
运用高级句型（三大从句）
翻译以下要点：
1. 这是一所非常棒的学校，我迫不及待地想带你参观这里。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 我最喜欢的地方是我们学校的图书馆，它是半圆形的。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It is such a fantastic school that I can't wait to show you around here.
The place I like best is our school library which is in the shape of a half circle.
3. 我喜欢它的原因是，当我坐在里面的时候，我会感到很舒服。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4. 它所有的能量都来自太阳，由计算机控制。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The reason why I am fond of it is that I will feel quite comfortable when I sit inside.
All its energy,which is controlled by computer,comes from the sun.
5. 老师们和同学们都是如此友好、热情以至于他们一定会给你留下难忘的印象。
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Both teachers and classmates are so friendly and welcoming that they are sure to leave an unforgettable impression on you.
6. 如果你喜欢运动或艺术，你会被这里丰富多彩的社团活动所吸引。
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If you are keen on sports or art, you will be attracted by the corlorful club activities here.
7. 毫无疑问，我们学校非常有吸引力。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 当你开始在这里工作时，总会有一些令人惊奇的事情等着你。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
There is no doubt that our school is extremely attractive.
There is always something amazing for you when you begin working here.
9. 我真的希望你能喜欢教我们学习英语知识，并与我们一起度过美好的时光。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I really hope you will enjoy teaching us
to learn English knowledge and have a wonderful time togerther with us.
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Good morning, Emlyn. Welcome to our school. My name is Li Hua.It is such a fantastic school that I can't wait to show you around here.
The place I like best is our school library which is in the shape of a half circle.The reason why I am fond of it is that I will feel quite comfortable when I sit inside. All its energy,which is controlled by computer,comes from the sun.Both teachers and classmates are so friendly and welcoming that they are sure to leave an unforgettable impression on you.If you are keen on sports or art, you will be attracted by the corlorful club activities here.There is no doubt that our school is extremely attractive.
There is always something amazing for you when you begin working here.I really hope you will enjoy teaching us to learn English knowledge and have a wonderful time togerther with us.
Can you find out the highlights（亮点）
of this composition
【亮点点拨】
Good morning, Emlyn. Welcome to our school. My name is Li Hua.It is such a fantastic school that I can't wait to show you around here.
The place I like best is our school library which is in the shape of a half circle.The reason why I am fond of it is that I will feel quite comfortable when I sit inside. All its energy,which is controlled by computer,comes from the sun.Both teachers and classmates are so friendly and welcoming that they are sure to leave an unforgettable impression on you.If you are keen on sports or art, you will be attracted by the corlorful club activities here.There is no doubt that our school is extremely attractive.
There is always something amazing for you when you begin working here.I really hope you will enjoy teaching us to learn English knowledge and have a wonderful time togerther with us.
1. 文章结构条理清晰，上下文意思连贯，句子之间逻辑通顺一致，表达符合语法。
2.结尾总结表达希望，流畅自然。
3. 句式多样，三大从句用得很恰当，要点有拓展，语意丰富有文采。
【三大从句的运用是亮点】
Good morning, Emlyn. Welcome to our school. My name is Li Hua.It is such a fantastic school that I can't wait to show you around here.
The place I like best is our school library which is in the shape of a half circle.The reason why I am fond of it is that I will feel quite comfortable when I sit inside. All its energy,which is controlled by computer,comes from the sun.Both teachers and classmates are so friendly and welcoming that they are sure to leave an unforgettable impression on you.If you are keen on sports or art, you will be attracted by the corlorful club activities here.There is no doubt that our school is extremely attractive.
There is always something amazing for you when you begin working here.I really hope you will enjoy teaching us to learn English knowledge and have a wonderful time togerther with us.
运用结果状语从句
定语从句
条件状语从句
宾语从句
1.把握时态人称和要点
2.内容拓展有方法
3.三大从句用一用
4.高级表达闪一闪
Writing skills
重点：用好三大从句
从句类型 类别 引导词
宾语从句 that, if / whether, what, when...
定语从句 which,who,that,why,where,when
状语从句 时间 when,while,as,as soon as, unitl
条件 if, unless
原因 because,since,as
目的 so that, in order that
结果 so...that..., such... that...
让步 although, even if/though
满分作文标准
时态人称正确，要点齐全有拓展
句式多样，词汇丰富
要点表达内容贴切，语法准确
表达顺畅连贯，逻辑性强
全 Complete
顺 Logical
准 Accurate
富 Rich
书写工整美观
美 Enjoyable
CLEAR原则
Thank you for your listening!
谢谢倾听！