2023年中考英语作文讲解与预测（含解析）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中考作文分类讲解
类别 要求
人物说明文 人物说明文一般包括人物的出生年月、主要经历、事迹成就、影响和评价等。首先要全面了解这个人，然后根据需要选取写作素材，简明扼要而突出重点地去介绍，力求真实准确，恰如其分。人物介绍一般都是从外形到性格，或从一般经历到创造性的贡献，在最后常有结论性的评语。
事物、事理说明类 事物、事理说明文用来说明事物、阐明事理。它通过对具体事物的解说，或对抽象事理的阐释，使人们对事物的形态、构造、性质、种类、成因、功能、关系或对事物的概念、特点、来源、演变、异同等有所认识，从而获得相关知识。它的主要特点是具有说明性、知识性、科学性和实用性。常用的说明方法有：列数字、下定义、作比较、举例子、作诠释等。题型设置以介绍某一事物为主，旨在考查学生对事物表述的陈述句的掌握和对事物特点的把握能力，主要采用一般现在时态。
方式、方法说明类 在中考书面表达题目中，方式、方法类的说明文占据相当大的比例，这类说明文题目中通常有＂how to＂。这类说明文主要是介绍为达到什么目的应怎样做，说明方法常采用举例子、分类别、作比较、下定义、引资料等方式。这类文章旨在考查学生说明方式方法的能力，主要以一般现在时态为主。
说明文是中考书面表达题目中常见的写作形式。在初中阶段，说明文主要要求学生将活动、人物、地点等要素进行清楚地描述，考察学生的观察能力和将图表或所给提示词转化为完整文字信息的能力。
要写出一篇合乎要求的说明文，应注意以下几点：
一审: 要想做到文章切题、要点齐全，审题至关重要。下笔之前要将所给的材料看清楚，读懂材料所要表达的内容或情景。
二定: 一定要点，根据所给材料要点，定出中心句。注意适当发挥，避免逐字逐句翻译。二定方法，常用的说明方法有举例法、过程分析法、分类法、因果分析法、比较法、细节法等。要根据说明的对象、目的来选择最佳说明方法。
三理: 理顺各中心句之间的关系，排列好各中心句的顺序。说明文常用的结构安排顺序有以下三种：时间顺序、空间顺序和逻辑顺序。合理的次序会使文章条理清楚，脉络明晰。
四查: 查写作要点，查段落层次，查时态语态，查用词、拼写、标点等。通过检查，可以避免一些不必要的错误，使文章趋于完美。
常用表达
常用连接词：
1. 表示建议：should, had better do, suggest, advice, …is a good way…
2. 表示步骤：first of all, at last, and then, after that…
3. 表示计划：plan, prepare, for/ to do, be going to, will…
常用句式：
1. With the rapidly growing popularity of… 随着……的快速普及……
2. It is quite clear that…十分清楚的是……
3. There are some reasons for …关于……有以下理由。
4. A recent survey suggest that…最近的一项调查显示……
5. All we can do is to …我们所能做的就是……
【写作模板】
（1）
___________(事物)is/lies （地理位置）. It has/ is __________ （特征）. There are many places of interest here, for example, __________（景点介绍）. There are also many __________（人们的活动、风俗等）.I hope/ think __________（看法和感受）.
（2）
The table below shows that__________（说明问题或现象）. __________（数据）percent __________（现象一）. __________（数据）percent（现象二）. __________（数据）percent__________（现象三）.In my opinion____________(自己的观点和感受).
【真题再现】
典例一【2021 四川乐山市】
研学旅行是通过集体旅行来开展学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动, 深受学生的喜爱。为此, 请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文, 介绍学校开展的研学活动并发表看法。内容包括:
1. 学习采茶、手工制作, 休验生活；
2.观察动、植物, 亲近自然；
3. 参观名胜古迹、博物馆, 了解历史文化；
4. 观看有意义的影视, 感受国家变化。
注意: 1. 词数80词左右；开头已给出, 不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节, 使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
4. 参考词汇: meaningful adj. 有意义的
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
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【优秀范文】
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
Firstly, we went to pick tea in person and made things by hand to experience life. Secondly, we got close to nature and I learnt more knowledge by watching many plants and animals. Then, after we visited museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply. Finally, we saw some meaningful movies and felt the great changes of our country.
In my opinion, the study trip is very helpful for us and we will be able to have more chances to take part in these kinds of activities.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点，写出自己学校的游学经历，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
典例二【2021 四川乐山市中考】
初中生活已近尾声，同学们即将步入高一级学校。请你仔细阅读下表中的内容和所给提示，从下面两所学校中选择一所你喜欢的学校，并根据该校信息写一篇短文。
NamesItems(条目) Purple School Orange School
Schools public, a long history private, well-known
Teachers hard-working young and active
Students less homework colorful activities
提示：(1) Which school would you like to go to
(2) Why do you choose it
注意：1. 短文须包括表格中你所选学校的全部信息和提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
I would like to go to_______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【优秀范文】
I would like to go to Orange School.
I like Orange School better because it is a private school and it is well-known in our city. There are a lot of new and modern teaching facilities. We can have access to the most advanced equipment and experience the best teaching effects. What’s more, the teachers in Orange School are young and active. I think it is important and helpful for us to develop a good relationship with teachers. And it is good for our study. Last but not least, students there have colorful activities and I hope the school life will be wonderful there.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，选择一所喜欢的学校进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍学校的特点、学校老师和学生的情况等。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
典例三【2021 陕西中考】
人们常说：“服务他人，快乐自己。”你准备利用即将到来的暑假去社区做一些服务工作。请根据以下表格提示内容，给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文， 介绍你的计划。
Places Activities
Community center help the old, sing songs, tell stories, …
Community hospital( s) handout the leaflets（宣传册）on COVID-19, …
Community park(s) pick up rubbish, water flowers, …
… …
要求：
1. 参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70 词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
As we all know, “Serving others can bring us happiness.” Summer holiday is coming, I’ll ________________
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I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday this summer.
【优秀范文】
As we all know, “Serving others can bring us happiness.” Summer holiday is coming. I’ll do some service in my community to make it better. First, I’ll go to our community center to help and cheer up the old people. For example, I can sing songs or tell them some interesting stories. Second, I’m going to hand out the leaflets on COVID-19 at our community hospital or other places. Next, I’m also planning to pick up and sort rubbish with my friends in our community park. What’s more, I’ll help the kids with their lessons and look after them as well.
I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday this summer.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假计划。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时。根据所给的提示要点，介绍自己暑假即将要进行的一些社区服务工作。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
典例四【2021 湖北武汉市中考】
孔子学院(Confucius Institute)夏令营在汉招募志者。假如你是李华请用英文写自荐信。
内容要点如下：
1.性格外向，喜欢交朋友
2.能用英语讲中国故事和与人沟通；
3.了解中国历史和文化，会唱楚剧；
4.爱好广泛，擅长乒乓球；
5.补充两点有关信息或想法。
注意：
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2.词数：60-80；
3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： Chu opera楚剧 culture文化 ping-pong乒乓球
Dear sir/madam,
I am Li Hua from Wuhan. May I have the honor to work as a volunteer at Confucius Institute ____________
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【优秀范文】
Dear sir/madam,
I am Li Hua from Wuhan. May I have the honor to work as a volunteer at Confucius Institute I’m good at Chinese and English. Chinese history and culture are my favorites. It’s easy for me to communicate and tell Chinese stories in both languages. I’ve got many hobbies, such as playing ping-pong and singing Chu opera. I’m healthy, hard-working and like to try new things. I’m outgoing. I love to meet different people and make friends with them. In my eyes, volunteer work is a good opportunity to learn something new.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，写一封自荐信。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文要介绍自己的性格、语言能力、兴趣爱好以及想做志愿者的目的。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
典例四【2021 黑龙江中考】
为了迎接全国爱牙日，你们学校下周要举行“爱牙周”活动，号召学生们保护牙齿。请你根据以下表格内容，以“Good Habits, Strong Teeth”为题，写一篇海报文稿，宣传本次活动。
周二 在报告厅听取牙齿保护的报告。
周三 召开班会。内容包括：演讲、观看保护牙齿的图片或视频、设计传单……分享保护牙齿的方法。
周六 去商场和公园发放传单，号召全民养成爱牙的好习惯。
提示词∶
lecture hall（报告厅） design（设计） leaflet（传单）
要求∶
1. 根据表格内容，适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数不得少于 80 词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）
请在答题卡上把你的作文写在相对应的题号后的指定区域内
Good Habits, Strong Teeth
For the coming “Tooth Care Week”, our school will have some activities to tell students_________________
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Let’s protect our teeth and enjoy life!
【优秀范文】
Good Habits, Strong Teeth
For the coming “Tooth Care Week”, our school will have some activities to tell students how important it is to protect teeth. On Monday, we’ll listen to a report on tooth care in the school lecture hall. Then on Wednesday, we plan to have a class meeting. Students will give speeches, watch videos or pictures about how to take good care of teeth. After that, each class is required to design a leaflet, telling people to brush teeth often, eat less sugar and see the dentists on time. On Saturday, we are going to hand out these leaflets at parks or stores. We hope more and more people will develop good habits to have healthy and strong teeth.
Let’s protect our teeth and enjoy life!
【详解】
1.题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据表格，写一篇宣传文稿，分别介绍周二、周三和周六的活动。开头结尾已给出，完善正文部分，正文可直接呈一段。注意条理清晰。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。需正确使用时间介词和时态，多使用从句和比较级。
【预测一】
假如你是中学生李平，曾经在你们班学习的交换生Peter看了你发布的朋友圈，他对你们班上周举行的主题班会很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信，向他介绍班会的情况并和他交流一下中学生如何才能实现自己的理想。
写作要点：
1.班会的主题：我的理想
2.介绍你和几名同学的理想：
（1）赵勇：想成为一名勇敢的警察；
（2）张红：想做一名志愿者；
（3）你：想成为一名优秀的医生。
3.说说中学生如何才能实现（realize）自己的理想（ideal）。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear peter,
I'm writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week._____________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文，介绍班会的情况，班会的主题是谈论理想，通过分析可知，除了短文开头介绍上周班会情况，我们应该使用一般过去时态，其他内容可以使用一般现在时和一般将来时，注意谓语动词要随着时态和人称的变化而改变。
【参考范文】
Dear peter,
I'm writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. The theme of it was “My Ideal”. Our monitor hosted the meeting. During it, all of us took an active part in the discussion and shared our opinions with each other.
Zhao Yong is going to be a brave policeman. He hopes to help people in danger. Zhang Hong wants to be a volunteer, she will help people in need especially the disabled and the homeless. My dream is to be an excellent doctor, I think it’s a meaningful job, because I can save people’s lives and help them out of danger.
To realize our ideals, I have some opinions. Firstly, we must try to work harder from now on and learn as much knowledge as possible. Secondly, we should believe ourselves, because confidence is the key to success. Besides, it’s also important to find out how successfully people did it so that we can learn from them.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【预测二】
假如你叫李华，你们学校刚刚开学，正在开展 “Happy Month”活动，请你以 “Learn to BeHappy”为题，给学校英语广播站写一篇广播稿，号召同学们返校后快乐生活。
内容包括:
1.新冠疫情使学校延迟开学;
2.通过上网课学习语文、数学和英语等课程;
3.“Happy, Month”活动和你的心情:
4.如何快乐生活(至少2点)。
写作要求:
1.结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰;
2.文中不得出现任何真实的人名和学校名称等信息；
3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：新型冠状病毒COVID—19
Learn to Be Happy
Good morning, everyone! We’re very happy to be back to school._______________________________
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I hope all of us can live happily in this school. Thank you for your listening!
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，假如你是李华，学校刚刚开学，正在开展 “Happy Month”活动，要求你以 “Learn to Be Happy”为题，题干内容提示，给学校英语广播站写一篇广播稿，号召同学们返校后快乐生活。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Learn to Be Happy
Good morning ,everyone! I'm very happy to be back to school.
To prevent the Corid-19, our school has delayed (put off) the opening of this term. But we didn't stop studying. Our school gave us online courses such as Chinese, Math, English and so on. We were very happy. Now our school is carrying out the plan“happy Month”. How to be happy First, I think we should have life aims ,with life aims, we can live a happy and meaningful life. Then, we must keep healthy. What’s more, we should be ready to help others.
I hope all of us can live happily in this school. Thank you for your listening!
【预测三】
仔细观察图片描述，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
1.2.3.4.5.
提示词：mask（口罩）；keep a certain distance（保持一定距离）
要求：1. 话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数：80-100之间。
3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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【写作思路】
本题属于图画作文。要求观察图片，展开合理想象来写一篇作文。观察图片及提示词可知这里是五条关于预防新型冠状病毒肺炎的建议。写作时要紧扣图片内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
Novel coronavirus is spreading around the world and many countries are fighting against it. We should do something to avoid it.
Here is my advice for everyone. Firstly, if we have to go out, we must wear masks to protect ourselves. Secondly, we should always wash hands to keep germs away. Thirdly, we need to open the windows very often to let the fresh air in. Fouthly, we should take our temperature often and if we have a fever we should go to the doctor in time. Finally, keeping a certain distance with others is also very important.
【预测四】
假如你应邀参加一个国际读书会，并将分享自己读过的一本好书。请根据下列表格中的要点，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你要分享的书。
Key points（要点） Words and expressions for reference（参考词汇）
What the name is The Old Man and the Sea …
Who wrote it Ernest Hemingway, America …
What it is about Fisherman,Fight against fish and nature …
Why I like it Meaningful, never give upWell-known sentence: ＂Man is not made for defeat（失败）.＂, … Interesting, helpful, …Well-known sentence: …
注意：（1）可选择使用所给的书名及内容，也可另选书籍；
（2）短文内容可适当增加；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（4）词数：80~100；
（5）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea. ___________________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇给出材料作文。要求介绍自己读过的《老人与海》这本书。主要从书名、作者、内容、喜欢书的原因（即从中学到了什么）几个方面叙述。适当地介绍文中的名句。在运用语言时，不要拘泥于一种形式，注意一个意思可以有多种表达形式。遇到想不起来的词或句型时，可以找同义词、近义词或同义句来代替，这样可以节省时间。在写作时，尽量用自己有把握的方法来表达，用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词句，文章要以叙述清楚为主，避免大量词句堆积以至冗长，尽量少用没有十分把握的＂大词＂或比较复杂的语法结构和句型。
【参考范文】
The book I’d like to share with you is The Old and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home. On the way back, he has to fight against the fish, and the sea as well.
What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties. I still remember the well-known from the book: Man is not made for defeat. This tells us that nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart.
【预测五】
下周一些英国学生将来你校交流学习，他们想了解你校各个俱乐部的情况。假定你是林涛，是学校绿色星球俱乐部的负责人，请你根据你们俱乐部的海报内容，用英语写一篇发言稿来作介绍。
注意:
1.词数90左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.文中须包括所有要点，每个要点可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺；
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇: workshop n. 工作坊
Welcome to our school. I’m Lin Tao. I’m glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you.
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Let’s work together for a green planet. Thank you!
【写作思路】
本题为材料作文，要求就所给提示介绍学校的绿色星球俱乐部，写一篇发言稿。文章时态用现在时，人称用第一人称。
【参考范文】
Welcome to our school. I’m Lin Tao. I’m glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you.
All our club members meet every Friday afternoon to do something meaningful.
We have DIY workshops. Here, old clothes can be made into handbags. It’s also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks.
Working as volunteers is our task as well. We hand out leaflets and tell people the importance of living a green life. Sometimes, we teach people how to separate waste in communities and help clean up parks and streets. Besides, we look after flowers and trees in our school.
Let’s work together for a green planet. Thank you!
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