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初中英语人教版 七年级下
I’m watching TV.
Section b 2c- 3b
unit 6 写作课
通过阅读前的金字塔搭建活动,能够有逻辑地搭建写作框架。
能够思维清晰地完成写作。
通过课堂写作活动,能够回忆家庭生活,感恩家人。
学习目标
Let’s read and observe.
make - making
exercise - exercising
use - using
take - taking
write - writing
run - running
swim - swimming
shop - shopping
put - putting
sit - sitting
Can you find out the rules
直接加 ing
去e加 ing
双写加 ing
watch - watching
play - playing
listen - listening
clean - cleaning
wash - washing
Complete the story.
In the morning, when I my face and ________ my teeth, my mum __________ breakfast for us. And my dad __________ a newspaper. The sun _________ and the birds _________ happily. My family are planning to go to the park for a picnic. We _________
on foot. What a good day!
am washing
brushing
is cooking
is reading
is shining
are singing
are going
Let’s brainstorm.
Please think of an unforgettable (难忘的)day and share it with us.
My sister is reading a story.
I am studying.
My cousin is talking on the phone.
My mother is cleaning the room.
My father is making food.
My dog is sleeping.
My grandfather is watching a race.
My best friend is playing games.
Let’s draw a pyramid(金字塔).
Stepping stones help you to achieve(实现)your purpose.
purpose
Put your writing purpose (目的) here.
Let’s think about your purpose.
a normal day of my family
a day with my friends
To describe
a busy day on a festival
…
Let’s think.
Everyone is doing something in my family.
We are enjoying ourselves together.
Stepping stones
Everyone is doing something for the festival.
…
Let’s complete Jim’s letter.
Dear Bob,
Here is a picture of my family. We are all at home now. I am doing my homework. My parents _______________ in the living room. My grandfather ____________________. My sister
_________________________________.
Jim
3a
are watching TV
is reading a newspaper
is talking on the phone with her friend
Find the purpose of this letter.
The picture is to describe a day of Jim’s family.
Let’s talk.
表达文章目的的句子。
Here are/is … picture(s) …
There are … in the picture.
2) 添加文章细节的句子。:
It’s ... (busy, … festival …) today.
It’s … o’clock … in the …
Let’s talk.
3) 帮助达到写作目的句子。(stepping stones)
Sb is/are doing ...
What is/are ... doing ...
Sb is enjoying ...
Sb is having fun.
Sb is busy doing …
It’s a great day.
4) 表达喜好的句子。(stepping stones)
Who 爷爷 爸爸 妈妈 弟弟 鲍勃
What 看报纸 打扫 房子 洗碗 看故 事书 打电话
今天是星期六,现在是晚上八点。鲍勃和他的家人正在做着不同的事情。请根据下面表格中的提示内容,写一篇英语短文,描述一下鲍勃及其家人的活动情况。60词左右,可适当发挥。
What’s the structure of the article
Today is Saturday,and it is 6:00 in the evening.
Bob and his family are doing different things at home. They are doing diffrerent things .
How to write
Bob’s garandfather is …...
His father is ……
His mother is ……
His brother is
Bob is……
They are busy but happy. /……
beginning
body
ending
交代时间
总述句
详细描述
结尾
Today is Saturday,and it is 6:00 in the evening. Bob and his family are doing different things at home. They are doing diffrerent things.
Bob’s grandfather is reading a newspaper in the living room. His father is cleaning the house. His mother is washing the dishes. His brother is reading a storybook. Bob is talking on the phone.
They are busy but happy.
How to make it better
add why:and he wants to make the house clean and tidy.
add linking sentences:Who is in the kitchen She is Bob's mother.
What is Bob’s brother doing
What /how about Bob
Is Bob ... No, he is...
Let’s proofread.
Use the sentences like:
I am so lucky to have such a great family and wonderful friends.
Self-check and peer-check.
polish
Add more details:
My parents get up early only to prepare a special meal for me.
While-writing
part2
请你根据下面图表中的关键词,写一篇60词左右的英语短文,介绍一下汤姆一家正在做的事情。要求:内容必须包括所有关键词,可适当发挥;文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
正在做的事情
汤姆:听音乐
汤姆的爸爸:看报纸
汤姆的妈妈:和朋友打电话
汤姆的爷爷奶奶:看电视