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Section Ⅳ Writing——写一篇诗歌评论
文体感知
诗歌评论就是对诗歌进行分析和评论。这必须建立在很好地把握原诗主旨的基础之上， 而非罗列原诗的诗句。一首好的诗歌， 自然有其动人之处。行文时可侧重于诗中最打动你的某一方面来抒发自己的感想。其基本架构为：
增分佳句
首段：介绍诗歌的作者情况
1．The author loved nature and often wandered in the field.
这位作者喜欢大自然， 经常在田野中漫步。
2．Here is a poem entitled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen, which enjoys great popularity among readers.
这首诗的题目是《悯农》， 作者是李绅， 这首诗很受读者欢迎。
中段：介绍诗歌的内容以及主题等
1．The poem is about a farmer who is working in the field.
这首诗是关于一个在田地里劳作的农民的。
2．We can learn an important lesson from the poem.
我们能从这首诗中学到一个重要的道理。
尾段：表达自己的感想
1．I'm deeply moved by the love shown in the poem.
我被这首诗中展示的爱深深感动了。
2．I will be encouraged by the poem when getting into trouble.
当我遇到困难时， 这首诗会鼓励我。
典题演练
请根据下面的要求写一篇关于唐诗《悯农》的评论。
Sympathy on the Farmers
—Li Shen from Tang Dynasty
At noon, a farmer is weeding,
Down the field, sweat is dropping.
Who knows rice on a dish,
Every grain is full of moiling
注意：词数80左右。
第一步 布局谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
1．这首题为《悯农》的诗是李绅写的。
________________________________ “Sympathy on the Farmers”．
2．李绅很受中国读者的欢迎。
Li Shen ____________________________．
3．夏日正午时刻， 外面天气炎热；一位农民依然在田地里除草。
It is so hot outside at this summer noon time.The farmer ____________________．
Here is a poem by Li Shen and it is titled
is very popular with Chinese readers
is still weeding in the fields
4．他全身湿透， 汗水不断地掉在庄稼生长的土地上。
He is wet all over and the sweat __________________________．The crops grow there.
5．我认为对今天的年轻一代来说， 理解这首诗歌并珍惜每一粒粮食是很重要的。
I think ________________________________________________ the poem and treasure every grain.
is frequently falling into the soil
it's very important for the young generation today to understand
第三步 句式升级
1．用过去分词作后置定语以及定语从句合并升级第二步中的句1和句2
___________________________________________________________________________.
2．用as引导的倒装句改写第二步中的句3
__________________________________________________________.
Here is a poem titled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen who/that is very popular
with Chinese readers
Hot as it is outside at this summer noon time, the farmer is still weeding in the fields
3．用with复合结构和where 引导的定语从句改写第二步中的句4
___________________________________________________________.
4．用“it is of＋抽象名词＋主语从句”结构改写第二步中的句5
_________________________________________________________________________________.
He is wet all over with the sweat frequently falling into the soil, where the crops grow
I think it's of great importance that the young generation today should understand the
poem and treasure every grain
第四步 完美成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Here is a poem titled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen who/that is very
popular with Chinese readers.
It goes like this: Hot as it is outside at this summer noon time, the farmer is
still weeding in the fields. He is wet all over with the sweat frequently falling
into the soil, where the crops grow. But who knows exactly all our foods, the delicious
dishes on our table, come from the hard work of the farmers
The reason why Li Shen wrote this poem is to remind people of the importance of the
farmers' hard work. I think it's of great importance that the young generation today
should understand the poem and treasure every grain.Section Ⅳ Writing——写一篇诗歌评论
文体感知
诗歌评论就是对诗歌进行分析和评论。这必须建立在很好地把握原诗主旨的基础之上， 而非罗列原诗的诗句。一首好的诗歌， 自然有其动人之处。行文时可侧重于诗中最打动你的某一方面来抒发自己的感想。其基本架构为：
增分佳句
首段：介绍诗歌的作者情况
1．The author loved nature and often wandered in the field.
这位作者喜欢大自然， 经常在田野中漫步。
2．Here is a poem entitled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen, which enjoys great popularity among readers.
这首诗的题目是《悯农》， 作者是李绅， 这首诗很受读者欢迎。
中段：介绍诗歌的内容以及主题等
1．The poem is about a farmer who is working in the field.
这首诗是关于一个在田地里劳作的农民的。
2．We can learn an important lesson from the poem.
我们能从这首诗中学到一个重要的道理。
尾段：表达自己的感想
1．I'm deeply moved by the love shown in the poem.
我被这首诗中展示的爱深深感动了。
2．I will be encouraged by the poem when getting into trouble.
当我遇到困难时， 这首诗会鼓励我。
典题演练
请根据下面的要求写一篇关于唐诗《悯农》的评论。
Sympathy on the Farmers
—Li Shen from Tang Dynasty
At noon, a farmer is weeding,
Down the field, sweat is dropping.
Who knows rice on a dish,
Every grain is full of moiling
注意：词数80左右。
第一步 布局谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
1．这首题为《悯农》的诗是李绅写的。
______________________________________ “Sympathy on the Farmers”．
2．李绅很受中国读者的欢迎。
Li Shen __________________________________．
3．夏日正午时刻， 外面天气炎热；一位农民依然在田地里除草。
It is so hot outside at this summer noon time.The farmer ____________________________．
4．他全身湿透， 汗水不断地掉在庄稼生长的土地上。
He is wet all over and the sweat ________________________________________．The crops grow there.
5．我认为对今天的年轻一代来说， 理解这首诗歌并珍惜每一粒粮食是很重要的。
I think __________________________________________________________ the poem and treasure every grain.
第三步 句式升级
1．用过去分词作后置定语以及定语从句合并升级第二步中的句1和句2
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.
2．用as引导的倒装句改写第二步中的句3
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.
3．用with复合结构和where 引导的定语从句改写第二步中的句4
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.
4．用“it is of＋抽象名词＋主语从句”结构改写第二步中的句5
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.
第四步 完美成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Section Ⅳ Writing——写一篇诗歌评论
典题演练
第二步
1．Here is a poem by Li Shen and it is titled
2．is very popular with Chinese readers
3．is still weeding in the fields
4．is frequently falling into the soil
5．it's very important for the young generation today to understand
第三步
1．Here is a poem titled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen who/that is very popular with Chinese readers
2．Hot as it is outside at this summer noon time, the farmer is still weeding in the fields
3．He is wet all over with the sweat frequently falling into the soil, where the crops grow
4．I think it's of great importance that the young generation today should understand the poem and treasure every grain
第四步
Here is a poem titled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen who/that is very popular with Chinese readers.
It goes like this: Hot as it is outside at this summer noon time, the farmer is still weeding in the fields. He is wet all over with the sweat frequently falling into the soil, where the crops grow. But who knows exactly all our foods, the delicious dishes on our table, come from the hard work of the farmers
The reason why Li Shen wrote this poem is to remind people of the importance of the farmers' hard work. I think it's of great importance that the young generation today should understand the poem and treasure every grain.
