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Section Ⅳ Writing——诗歌评论
1．写作任务
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Andy将要参加中文诗歌朗诵比赛(recitation contest)，发邮件向你询问下面这首诗歌的含义。请你回复邮件，介绍该诗的主要内容、表达的思想感情和写作手法。
游子吟
(唐)孟郊
慈母手中线，游子身上衣。
临行密密缝，意恐迟迟归。
谁言寸草心，报得三春晖。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Andy，
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
2．写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段)
(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文——书信
主题：就诗歌《游子吟》的主要内容等进行介绍
(2)二定：确定时态和人称
时态：以一般现在时态为主
人称：以第三人称为主
(3)三明确：明确写作要点
①介绍写作背景——英国朋友Andy将要参加中文诗歌朗诵比赛，引出主题；
②介绍唐诗《游子吟》的主要内容、表达的思想感情和写作手法；
③希望能得到对方的回复。
(4)四分段
结合要点分为三个段落。
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
①参加__________________
②中文诗歌朗诵比赛_________________________
③唐朝__________________
④描写一个场景__________________
⑤做衣服__________________
⑥母亲对孩子深深的爱________________________
⑦使从事于；使忙碌于__________________
⑧集中精力于；全神贯注于__________________
⑨在某种程度上__________________
⑩盼望，期待__________________
take part in
a Chinese poetry recitation contest
Tang Dynasty
describe a scene
make clothes
a mother's deep love for her child
be occupied in
concentrate on
in a way
look forward to
(2)完成句子
①听说你要参加中文诗歌朗诵比赛，因此我写信给你提供一些关于这首诗的信息。
a．I know that you are going to _____________________________________， so I'm writing to ____________________________ about the poem to be presented.(so引导因果关系的并列句)
b._____________you are going to take part in a Chinese poetry recitation contest，I'm writing to offer you some information about the poem to be presented.(现在分词短语作状语)
②这首诗是唐代著名诗人孟郊写的，主要描述了一个场景，母亲正全身心忙着为她即将离开家的孩子做衣服。(be occupied in)
____________________in the Tang Dynasty，Meng Jiao，this poem mainly describes a scene __________________________ making clothes for her child who is about to leave home.(过去分词短语作状语；定语从句)
take part in a Chinese poetry recitation contest
offer you some information
Knowing that
Written by a famous poet
where a mother is fully occupied in
③通过对这一特定时刻的关注，作者将母亲的爱比作温暖无私的太阳，生动地表达了母亲对孩子深深的爱。 (concentrate on; show deep love for)
______________________________，the author vividly implies a mother's deep love for her child by comparing it to the warm and selfless sun.(by＋动名词短语作状语)
④以上就是我对这首广为流传的经典作品的了解，希望对你有所帮助。(know about; in a way)
All the above is _____________________________，which I hope will help you in a way.(表语从句；定语从句)
By concentrating on this specific moment
what I know about the widely-read classic
4．满分作文(连句成篇)
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、要点全面的短文。
参考范文：
Dear Andy，
Knowing that you are going to take part in a Chinese poetry recitation contest, I'm writing to offer you some information about the poem to be presented.
Written by a famous poet in the Tang Dynasty, Meng Jiao, this poem mainly describes a scene where a mother is fully occupied in making clothes for her child who is about to leave home. By concentrating on this specific moment, the author vividly implies a mother's deep love for her child by comparing it to the warm and selfless sun.
All the above is what I know about the widely-read classic, which I hope will help you in a way. Looking forward to your good news!
Yours，
Li Hua
5．佳作背诵
(1)佳作一
假定你是李华，给你的美国笔友Paul写一封电子邮件，请他介绍有关英语诗歌方面的知识、写作技巧，尤其是有关韵律(rhythm)和诗歌朗读方面的注意事项。并请他帮忙修改附件(attachment)中你自己写的英文诗歌。
注意：①词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Paul，
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Paul，
How are you I'm writing to ask you for help. Recently in my English class, I've learned some English poems. They interest me so much that I'm eager to know more about them. Could you introduce me some more forms of English poetry Do you have some reading and writing techniques for beginners like me In particular, I want to know something about the rhythm of English poetry and what I should pay attention to when reading aloud.
The attachment is about some poems I wrote. Could you please help me polish them I will be very grateful for your help.
Yours，
Li Hua
(2)佳作二
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter计划来北京大学学习中文。他对中国古代诗歌特别感兴趣，发电子邮件向你询问中国古代诗歌的特点。请你写一篇80词左右的邮件，向他介绍一下中国古代诗歌的特点。
内容要点：
①特别注意诗情画意；
②擅长色彩和色调的搭配；
③善于创造情景交融的意境；
④善于处理动与静、形与神、小与大的对立关系。
参考词汇：poetic and pictorial splendor诗情画意；harmonious mood情景交融的意境；dynamic and static动与静
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you will come to China for further study in Peking University.___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you will come to China for further study in Peking University. When it comes to ancient Chinese poetry, what I'd like to say is that there are so many characteristics in it.
It's clear that poetic and pictorial splendor is especially paid attention to in ancient Chinese poetry. Ancient poets were good at creating a harmonious mood and matching colour and tone. In addition, they were skillfully good at dealing with the opposite relationships between dynamic and static, shape and spirit, the small and the large, which attract many a reader to the poetry's beauty.
Only by personal experiences can we master the spirit of ancient Chinese poetry.
Yours，
Li HuaSection Ⅳ Writing——诗歌评论
1．写作任务
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Andy将要参加中文诗歌朗诵比赛(recitation contest)，发邮件向你询问下面这首诗歌的含义。请你回复邮件，介绍该诗的主要内容、表达的思想感情和写作手法。
游子吟
(唐)孟郊
慈母手中线，游子身上衣。
临行密密缝，意恐迟迟归。
谁言寸草心，报得三春晖。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Andy，
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
2．写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段)
(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文——书信
主题：就诗歌《游子吟》的主要内容等进行介绍
(2)二定：确定时态和人称
时态：以一般现在时态为主
人称：以第三人称为主
(3)三明确：明确写作要点
①介绍写作背景——英国朋友Andy将要参加中文诗歌朗诵比赛，引出主题；
②介绍唐诗《游子吟》的主要内容、表达的思想感情和写作手法；
③希望能得到对方的回复。
(4)四分段
结合要点分为三个段落。
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
①参加__________________
②中文诗歌朗诵比赛__________________
③唐朝__________________
④描写一个场景__________________
⑤做衣服__________________
⑥母亲对孩子深深的爱__________________
⑦使从事于；使忙碌于__________________
⑧集中精力于；全神贯注于__________________
⑨在某种程度上__________________
⑩盼望，期待__________________
(2)完成句子
①听说你要参加中文诗歌朗诵比赛，因此我写信给你提供一些关于这首诗的信息。
a．I know that you are going to ________________________， so I'm writing to ____________________________ about the poem to be presented.(so引导因果关系的并列句)
b.______________________________ you are going to take part in a Chinese poetry recitation contest，I'm writing to offer you some information about the poem to be presented.(现在分词短语作状语)
②这首诗是唐代著名诗人孟郊写的，主要描述了一个场景，母亲正全身心忙着为她即将离开家的孩子做衣服。(be occupied in)
____________________________ in the Tang Dynasty，Meng Jiao，this poem mainly describes a scene __________________ making clothes for her child who is about to leave home.(过去分词短语作状语；定语从句)
③通过对这一特定时刻的关注，作者将母亲的爱比作温暖无私的太阳，生动地表达了母亲对孩子深深的爱。 (concentrate on; show deep love for)
____________________________，the author vividly implies a mother's deep love for her child by comparing it to the warm and selfless sun.(by＋动名词短语作状语)
④以上就是我对这首广为流传的经典作品的了解，希望对你有所帮助。(know about; in a way)
All the above is ____________________________，which I hope will help you in a way.(表语从句；定语从句)
4．满分作文(连句成篇)
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、要点全面的短文。
参考范文：
Dear Andy，
Knowing that you are going to take part in a Chinese poetry recitation contest, I'm writing to offer you some information about the poem to be presented.
Written by a famous poet in the Tang Dynasty, Meng Jiao, this poem mainly describes a scene where a mother is fully occupied in making clothes for her child who is about to leave home. By concentrating on this specific moment, the author vividly implies a mother's deep love for her child by comparing it to the warm and selfless sun.
All the above is what I know about the widely-read classic, which I hope will help you in a way. Looking forward to your good news!
Yours，
Li Hua
5．佳作背诵
(1)佳作一
假定你是李华，给你的美国笔友Paul写一封电子邮件，请他介绍有关英语诗歌方面的知识、写作技巧，尤其是有关韵律(rhythm)和诗歌朗读方面的注意事项。并请他帮忙修改附件(attachment)中你自己写的英文诗歌。
注意：①词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Paul，
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
(2)佳作二
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter计划来北京大学学习中文。他对中国古代诗歌特别感兴趣，发电子邮件向你询问中国古代诗歌的特点。请你写一篇80词左右的邮件，向他介绍一下中国古代诗歌的特点。
内容要点：
①特别注意诗情画意；
②擅长色彩和色调的搭配；
③善于创造情景交融的意境；
④善于处理动与静、形与神、小与大的对立关系。
参考词汇：poetic and pictorial splendor诗情画意；harmonious mood情景交融的意境；dynamic and static动与静
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you will come to China for further study in Peking University.___________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
Section Ⅳ Writing——诗歌评论
3．(1)①take part in ②a Chinese poetry recitation contest ③Tang Dynasty ④describe a scene ⑤make clothes ⑥a mother's deep love for her child ⑦be occupied in ⑧concentrate on ⑨in a way ⑩look forward to
(2)①a.take part in a Chinese poetry recitation contest offer you some information b．Knowing that ②Written by a famous poet where a mother is fully occupied in ③By concentrating on this specific moment ④what I know about the widely-read classic
5．(1)参考范文：
DearPaul，
How are you I'm writing to ask you for help. Recently in my English class, I've learned some English poems. They interest me so much that I'm eager to know more about them. Could you introduce me some more forms of English poetry Do you have some reading and writing techniques for beginners like me In particular, I want to know something about the rhythm of English poetry and what I should pay attention to when reading aloud.
The attachment is about some poems I wrote. Could you please help me polish them I will be very grateful for your help.
Yours，
LiHua
(2)参考范文：
DearPeter，
I'mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoChinaforfurtherstudyinPekingUniversity. When it comes to ancient Chinese poetry, what I'd like to say is that there are so many characteristics in it.
It's clear that poetic and pictorial splendor is especially paid attention to in ancient Chinese poetry. Ancient poets were good at creating a harmonious mood and matching colour and tone. In addition, they were skillfully good at dealing with the opposite relationships between dynamic and static, shape and spirit, the small and the large, which attract many a reader to the poetry's beauty.
Only by personal experiences can we master the spirit of ancient Chinese poetry.
Yours，
LiHua
