Section Ⅳ Writing——写一篇故事评论
文体感知
故事评论首先要对故事内容及主要人物进行简单的介绍。在分享故事内容的同时， 还需要介绍自己的理解、感受和看法。其基本框架为：
增分佳句
首段：介绍要评论的故事
1．I have read a nice story and I'd like to share it with you.
我读了一个很好的故事， 想把它和你分享一下。
2．Let me introduce an interesting novel.
我来介绍一部有趣的小说。
中段：介绍这个故事的主要内容、主要人物等
1．The story is mainly about a brave young man.
这个故事是关于一个勇敢的年轻人的。
2．It is the poor girl's love that cures the bad-tempered person.
是那个贫穷女孩的爱治愈了这个坏脾气的人。
3．The characters in this story are so considerate that most readers like them.
这个故事里的人物是那么善解人意， 大多数读者都喜欢他们。
4．The plots of the story are so attractive that I can't take my eyes off it.
这个故事的情节那么吸引人， 我真的移不开眼了。
5．In face of danger, they behave so bravely that they move the readers deeply.
面对困难， 他们表现得如此勇敢， 以至深深地感动了读者。
尾段：表达自己对这个故事的感受和评价
1．This is an inspiring story and I have learned a lot from it.
这是一个非常鼓舞人心的故事， 我从中学到了很多。
2．I was deeply inspired by the brave young man in this story.
我被这个故事里勇敢的年轻人深深地激励着。
3．From this story, we have learned that only by working hard can a person succeed.
从这个故事中， 我们学到的是：一个人只有努力工作才能成功。
典题演练
请根据以下要点写一篇英语故事评论。
1．沙克尔顿， 英国著名探险家， 和船员一起踏上伟大的探险之旅。途中他们被冰困住了， 大家弃船后逃到了象岛上。而沙克尔顿驾船去寻求帮助。岛上的生活非常艰苦， 但是大家凭着坚韧的毅力以及对沙克尔顿的信任活了下来；
2．在这个故事里， 船员之间真诚的关心以及沙克尔顿的乐观、坚韧都非常令人感动；
3．从这个故事中我们可以学到一个道理：无论遇到任何困难， 都不要放弃！
注意：词数80左右。
第一步 布局谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
1．伟大的沙克尔顿和船员登上了“坚忍号”轮船。
The great Shackleton and his crew __________________________．
2．不幸的是， 在途中船被冰困住， 沉入了海洋中。
Unfortunately, on the way the ship ______________________， sinking into the ocean.
3．弃船之后， 他们逃到了象岛上。
____________________________， they escaped to Elephant Island.
4．尽管遇到很多困难， 他们最后还是活了下来。
In the end they were able to survive ________________________．
5．我被他们面对困难时的坚忍和毅力激励着。
I'm inspired by ______________________________________．
6．我从这个激励人的故事中学到了重要的道理。
I ________________________________ the inspiring story.
第三步 句式升级
用非谓语动词改写第二步中的句3
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第四步 完美成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
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Section Ⅳ Writing——写一篇故事评论
典题演练
第二步
1．went aboard the ship named Endurance
2．became stuck in the ice
3．After they had abandoned the ship
4．in spite of so many difficulties
5．their endurance and perseverance in the face of difficulties
6．have learned an important lesson from
第三步
Having abandoned the ship, they escaped to Elephant Island.
第四步
Let me introduce an interesting story about a great expedition.
The great Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance. Unfortunately, on the way the ship became stuck in the ice, sinking into the ocean. Having abandoned the ship, they escaped to Elephant Island. Shackleton was so brave that he left them to look for help by himself. In the end they were able to survive in spite of so many difficulties.
I'm deeply moved by the concern and love between them and I'm also inspired by their endurance and perseverance in the face of difficulties. In a word, I have learned an important lesson from the inspiring story—whatever happens, never give up.(共12张PPT)
Section Ⅳ Writing
——写一篇故事评论
文体感知
故事评论首先要对故事内容及主要人物进行简单的介绍。在分享故事内容的同时， 还需要介绍自己的理解、感受和看法。其基本框架为：
增分佳句
首段：介绍要评论的故事
1．I have read a nice story and I'd like to share it with you.
我读了一个很好的故事， 想把它和你分享一下。
2．Let me introduce an interesting novel.
我来介绍一部有趣的小说。
中段：介绍这个故事的主要内容、主要人物等
1．The story is mainly about a brave young man.
这个故事是关于一个勇敢的年轻人的。
2．It is the poor girl's love that cures the bad-tempered person.
是那个贫穷女孩的爱治愈了这个坏脾气的人。
3．The characters in this story are so considerate that most readers like them.
这个故事里的人物是那么善解人意， 大多数读者都喜欢他们。
4．The plots of the story are so attractive that I can't take my eyes off it.
这个故事的情节那么吸引人， 我真的移不开眼了。
5．In face of danger, they behave so bravely that they move the readers deeply.
面对困难， 他们表现得如此勇敢， 以至深深地感动了读者。
尾段：表达自己对这个故事的感受和评价
1．This is an inspiring story and I have learned a lot from it.
这是一个非常鼓舞人心的故事， 我从中学到了很多。
2．I was deeply inspired by the brave young man in this story.
我被这个故事里勇敢的年轻人深深地激励着。
3．From this story, we have learned that only by working hard can a person succeed.
从这个故事中， 我们学到的是：一个人只有努力工作才能成功。
典题演练
请根据以下要点写一篇英语故事评论。
1．沙克尔顿， 英国著名探险家， 和船员一起踏上伟大的探险之旅。途中他们被冰困住了， 大家弃船后逃到了象岛上。而沙克尔顿驾船去寻求帮助。岛上的生活非常艰苦， 但是大家凭着坚韧的毅力以及对沙克尔顿的信任活了下来；
2．在这个故事里， 船员之间真诚的关心以及沙克尔顿的乐观、坚韧都非常令人感动；
3．从这个故事中我们可以学到一个道理：无论遇到任何困难， 都不要放弃！
注意：词数80左右。
第一步 布局谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
1．伟大的沙克尔顿和船员登上了“坚忍号”轮船。
The great Shackleton and his crew ____________________________．
2．不幸的是， 在途中船被冰困住， 沉入了海洋中。
Unfortunately, on the way the ship _________________， sinking into the ocean.
3．弃船之后， 他们逃到了象岛上。
_________________________， they escaped to Elephant Island.
went aboard the ship named Endurance
became stuck in the ice
After they had abandoned the ship
4．尽管遇到很多困难， 他们最后还是活了下来。
In the end they were able to survive ________________________．
5．我被他们面对困难时的坚忍和毅力激励着。
I'm inspired by __________________________________________．
6．我从这个激励人的故事中学到了重要的道理。
I _____________________________ the inspiring story.
in spite of so many difficulties
their endurance and perseverance in the face of difficulties
have learned an important lesson from
第三步 句式升级
用非谓语动词改写第二步中的句3
_________________________________________________________
Having abandoned the ship, they escaped to Elephant Island.
第四步 完美成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
Let me introduce an interesting story about a great expedition.
The great Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance. Unfortunately, on the way the ship became stuck in the ice, sinking into the ocean. Having abandoned the ship, they escaped to Elephant Island. Shackleton was so brave that he left them to look for help by himself. In the end they were able to survive in spite of so many difficulties.
I'm deeply moved by the concern and love between them and I'm also inspired by their endurance and perseverance in the face of difficulties. In a word, I have learned an important lesson from the inspiring story—whatever happens, never give up.
