Section Ⅳ Writing——文化艺术
1．写作任务
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
(1)写信目的；
(2)个人优势；
(3)能做的事情。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation._____________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
I'd appreciate it if you could consider my application.
Yours，
Li Hua
2．写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段)
(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文(书信)
主题：介绍自己的优势，申请相应岗位
(2)二定：确定时态和人称
时态：以一般现在时态为主
人称：以第一人称(Ⅰ)为主
(3)三明确：明确写作要点
写信意图——介绍自己的优势——请求通过
(4)结合要点分三个段落
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
①写信意图：be delighted to do；a Chinese painting exhibition to be held；apply for
②自己的优势：speak English fluently；communicate with；a brilliant organizer；keep...in order；related knowledge; serve the visitors
③请求通过：a sense of responsibility；a qualified volunteer; appreciate
(2)完成句子
①很高兴得知即将举办的中国画展招募志愿者。
________________ that volunteers are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held.
②当一名志愿者是我的梦想，所以我写信申请这一岗位。
________________ has been my dream, so _______________________________________．
③我能流利地说英语，所以，对我来说跟外国游客沟通很容易。
I can speak English fluently，so __________________________________________________．
④当过班长让我成为优秀的组织者。
________________________________ makes me a brilliant organizer.
⑤我的相关知识会使我更好地服务游客。
It is ________________________________ that ____________________________________．
⑥总之，我的责任感将使我成为一名合格的志愿者。
All in all，my __________________________ will make me __________________________．
4．满分作文(连句成篇)
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、要点全面的短文。
参考范文：
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，an exchange student from China during this summer vacation.
I'm delighted to learn that volunteers are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held.Being a volunteer has been my dream, so I am writing to apply for this position.The reasons are as follows：First，I can speak English fluently，so it's easy for me to communicate with foreign visitors. Second, being the monitor makes me a brilliant organizer，which will help to keep the exhibition in order.Besides, it is my related knowledge that will help me serve the visitors better.All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer.
I'd appreciate it if you could consider my application.
Yours，
Li Hua
综合点评：
范文要点齐全，语言地道，语句连贯，词数适当。作者在其中使用了地道的短语和句式来达到写作要求，例如：delighted作表语；to be held作后置定语；being the monitor作主语。还使用了一些亮点句型，例如：It is adj.＋to do；which引导的定语从句；强调句等。陈述理由时条理清晰，衔接连贯。整篇文章从表达意图到叙述优势，语篇整体语言流畅，逻辑连贯，完成了写作要求。
5．佳作背诵
(1)佳作一
假定你是星光中学的学生会主席李华。为了使学生重视汉字书写，学校决定举办一次书法作品展。请你用英语写一则通知。内容包括：
①时间和地点；
②活动内容。
注意：①词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
(2)佳作二
假定你是李华，你的美国网友Jackson在邮件中询问你最喜欢的画家。请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
①介绍你最喜欢的画家；
②陈述你的理由。
注意：①词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
③开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jackson，
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
Section Ⅳ Writing——文化艺术
3．①I'm delighted to learn ②Being a volunteer I am writing to apply for this position ③it's easy for me to communicate with foreign visitors ④Being the monitor ⑤my related knowledge will help me serve the visitors better ⑥sense of responsibility a qualified volunteer
5．(1)参考范文：
Notice
To raise the students' attention to Chinese handwriting, a calligraphy exhibition will take place on December 1st on the second floor of the dining hall. Every student is allowed to take part, whose handwriting works should be handed in to the Students' Union before November 25th. Thirty handwriting winners will be selected. On the morning of December 1st，the local artists will be invited to perform their handwriting skills, offering some advice to students on how to create excellent handwriting works. Don't miss the opportunity.
The Students' Union
(2)参考范文：
DearJackson，
I'm glad to hear that you have interest in painting. It happens that painting is my favorite. Among those great painters, I like Vincent Van Gogh best. I think he is the most outstanding impressionist whose works always leave me a large space to appreciate the beauty of art. Another reason why I like him so much is that he was a determined person although he failed many times during his creation. I can see his positive attitude and passion for life through his works.
I can't wait to know your favorite painter. Please write to me soon.
Yours，
LiHua(共15张PPT)
Section Ⅳ Writing——文化艺术
1．写作任务
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
(1)写信目的；
(2)个人优势；
(3)能做的事情。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation._____________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
I'd appreciate it if you could consider my application.
Yours，
Li Hua
2．写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段)
(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文(书信)
主题：介绍自己的优势，申请相应岗位
(2)二定：确定时态和人称
时态：以一般现在时态为主
人称：以第一人称(Ⅰ)为主
(3)三明确：明确写作要点
写信意图——介绍自己的优势——请求通过
(4)结合要点分三个段落
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
①写信意图：be delighted to do；a Chinese painting exhibition to be held；apply for
②自己的优势：speak English fluently；communicate with；a brilliant organizer；keep...in order；related knowledge; serve the visitors
③请求通过：a sense of responsibility；a qualified volunteer; appreciate
(2)完成句子
①很高兴得知即将举办的中国画展招募志愿者。
________________ that volunteers are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held.
②当一名志愿者是我的梦想，所以我写信申请这一岗位。
_____________ has been my dream, so __________________________.
③我能流利地说英语，所以，对我来说跟外国游客沟通很容易。
I can speak English fluently，so ________________________________
_________.
I'm delighted to learn
Being a volunteer
I am writing to apply for this position
it's easy for me to communicate with foreign
visitors
④当过班长让我成为优秀的组织者。
________________ makes me a brilliant organizer.
⑤我的相关知识会使我更好地服务游客。
It is ________________ that ________________________________．
⑥总之，我的责任感将使我成为一名合格的志愿者。
All in all，my _________________will make me ________________．
Being the monitor
my related knowledge
will help me serve the visitors better
sense of responsibility
a qualified volunteer
4．满分作文(连句成篇)
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、要点全面的短文。
参考范文：
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，an exchange student from China during this summer vacation.
I'm delighted to learn that volunteers are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held.Being a volunteer has been my dream, so I am writing to apply for this position.The reasons are as follows：First，I can speak English fluently，so it's easy for me to communicate with foreign visitors. Second, being the monitor makes me a brilliant organizer，which will help to keep the exhibition in order.Besides, it is my related knowledge that will help me serve the visitors better.All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer.
I'd appreciate it if you could consider my application.
Yours，
Li Hua
综合点评：
范文要点齐全，语言地道，语句连贯，词数适当。作者在其中使用了地道的短语和句式来达到写作要求，例如：delighted作表语；to be held作后置定语；being the monitor作主语。还使用了一些亮点句型，例如：It is adj.＋to do；which引导的定语从句；强调句等。陈述理由时条理清晰，衔接连贯。整篇文章从表达意图到叙述优势，语篇整体语言流畅，逻辑连贯，完成了写作要求。
5．佳作背诵
(1)佳作一
假定你是星光中学的学生会主席李华。为了使学生重视汉字书写，学校决定举办一次书法作品展。请你用英语写一则通知。内容包括：
①时间和地点；
②活动内容。
注意：①词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
参考范文：
Notice
To raise the students' attention to Chinese handwriting, a calligraphy exhibition will take place on December 1st on the second floor of the dining hall. Every student is allowed to take part, whose handwriting works should be handed in to the Students' Union before November 25th. Thirty handwriting winners will be selected. On the morning of December 1st，the local artists will be invited to perform their handwriting skills, offering some advice to students on how to create excellent handwriting works. Don't miss the opportunity.
The Students' Union
(2)佳作二
假定你是李华，你的美国网友Jackson在邮件中询问你最喜欢的画家。请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
①介绍你最喜欢的画家；
②陈述你的理由。
注意：①词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
③开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jackson，
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Jackson，
I'm glad to hear that you have interest in painting. It happens that painting is my favorite. Among those great painters, I like Vincent Van Gogh best. I think he is the most outstanding impressionist whose works always leave me a large space to appreciate the beauty of art. Another reason why I like him so much is that he was a determined person although he failed many times during his creation. I can see his positive attitude and passion for life through his works.
I can't wait to know your favorite painter. Please write to me soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
